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#1651 Posted: 21:31:56 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
i'm online. i'll write if i can. i have alot of hw.
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#1652 Posted: 21:43:49 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Blackfang led Nightflight to what they had found. he led her inside the volcano. they went into a small, dark, warm room. there was a round black stone sitting on a rock. Nightflight walked up to it.
"well done Blackfang! you have found what i've been looking for!" she grined evily. he walked up beside her. "i am glad you are pleased. now, is there anything else you want?" "not at the moment. right now, i just want this!" she said. "leave me!" she ordered. then he left her alone. :meanwhile: Fireflgiht got a wierd feeling. she felt that she was needed somewhere. then suddenly, she was telelported to a very dark place. she looked around confused. "where am i? how did i get here?" she asked. "you were brought here....." said the myserious male voice. "to where? who are you? why did you bring me here?" "i need your help........Nightflight has found something....that she wasn't suppose to find.....it was my job.....to protect it....." "protect what?" ".........the egg........." he said. :meanwhile: Nightflight looked at the black stone. it then started to move around, and cracks appeared on it. she smiled evily. "yes! its hatching!" she said.
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#1653 Posted: 21:45:31 30/01/2009
Oh no
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#1654 Posted: 21:46:55 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
just wait and see what happens next........
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#1655 Posted: 22:11:20 30/01/2009
Drooooooooooooooooools
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#1656 Posted: 22:22:55 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
the egg started to hatch, as Nightflight watched it. the egg was black, with red markings on it. it moved around more, and more cracks appeared on it.
:meanwhile: "what?! your meant to protect an egg?! is it yours?" Fireflight asked. "no.......it is only my job to protect it.......i am not related to it......." "oh......why is it your job to protect it?" "because..........the dragon inside.........is of great power.........." "what kind of power?" "the likes of which no one has ever seen!" :meanwhile: Nightflight watched the egg carefully. more and more cracks appeared. then a dark red horn poked its way out. more cracks appeared, and the egg hatched. it reaveled a small male black and dark red dragon. his horns, tail, claws, belly and wings were dark red. the rest of him was solid black. Nightfliht smiled at the hatchling. he looked up at her, with firey red eyes. "hello little one" she said. he looked up at her confused. "you not mama" he said. "no, i am your mother. i just look diffrent from you" she said. the baby dragon shoke his head. "no. i not know you. you a stranger" he said. then he ran away from her.
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deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#1657 Posted: 22:26:46 30/01/2009
Ou yeee
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#1658 Posted: 22:29:21 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah. hes pretty smart. he knew she wasn't his mom. most baby dragons would have thought she was thier mom, but not him...
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#1659 Posted: 22:31:45 30/01/2009
What is yours favorite colour?
Red?? :?
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#1660 Posted: 22:34:54 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
blue and black.
F: dark red.
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#1661 Posted: 22:38:02 30/01/2009
I see.. that explain things very fell........
Continue
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#1662 Posted: 22:44:36 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
the baby dragon ran out of the mountain. he wasn't paying attention to where he was going and accidently ran into Blackfang. Blackfang glared at him, and growled.
"what are you doing running into me, you litte runt?!" he growled. the baby dragon looked angerly at him. "get out of my or i'll use my powers on you!!" he growled back. Blackfang laughed. "you must be a really stupid kid if you think you can beat me!! you just hatched!! what can you do?!!" "this!!" he growled. then his eyes turned to fire, and Blackfang was covered in flames. he yelled in pain as he burned to death. the dragon held his head up proudly. then he started running as fast as he could. he started to flap his wings. then, he started to fly. he took to the air, and flew away from the island.
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#1663 Posted: 22:48:09 30/01/2009
You kill one of your character so fast that my mouth stay open loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time.
MORER
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#1664 Posted: 22:50:07 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah. Blackfang shouldn't have made him mad!
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#1665 Posted: 22:55:07 30/01/2009
PIIP
Mad dragon warning, Mad dragon warning. Pleas wear helmet and kevlars. Be ready for anything MORE
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#1666 Posted: 23:03:42 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
the baby dragon flew far, but he was getting tired. it was his first time flying, and he couldn't fly too far on his little wings. then he heard something behind him. he looked back to see Nightflight flying after him. she was flying very fast, and would soon catch up to him. he tried to fly faster, but he was tired, and couldn't keep flying for much longer. Nightflight reached out a claw to grab him. he looked worried for a moment. Nightflight almost had him. then suddenly, he disappeared. Nightflight looked confused. he then reappeared back at the island shore. he wondered how that happened. Nightflight looked back at the island, and saw him there. then she started to fly back towards him. he tried flying, but his wings were soare. so, he ran away insted. Nightflight landed on the island and ran after him. he kept running away from her. then he ran into someone else. he looked up to see who it was. he then saw a large dark red drsgoness.
"we don't have much time!" she said. "come with me! hurry!!" she said. then she grabbed him, and disappeared. nightflight got there just a moment too late. she roared with anger. "I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS FIREFLIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she roared.
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#1667 Posted: 23:06:08 30/01/2009
NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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#1668 Posted: 23:10:30 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks.
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#1669 Posted: 23:11:16 30/01/2009
Anything for story
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#1670 Posted: 23:31:13 30/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Nightflight went back inside the volcano. she called her wolves inside. they all sat down in front of her, waiting for thier orders. she looked at them.
"gather everyone under my rule! find the one that excaped my grasp! don't rest untill you find the dragon! don't return without him! do whatever it takes to get him back! now go!!" she ordered. she nodded thier heads in agreement, and then they left. :meanwhile" Fireflight took the baby dragon to where she was. "ok, i brought him here...." she said, as she put him down on the ground. he sat there, looking around. "where am i?" he asked. "everywhere......nowhere........you really don't want to know......" said the voice. "who........who are you?" he asked. "thats what i want to know!" she said. "i.......am your portector........" he said from behind him. the baby dragon turned around. then he saw a large black and dark grey male dragon come out of the shadows. "my protector? i don't understand......" he said. then the dragon walked up to him. "and, its hard to explain......it would probally hurt your little head if i told you...." "who are you?" Fireflight asked, looking at him. "my name is Xenoz. i was given two eggs to protect........excpet i haven't done my job very well........" "two eggs? then....wheres the other one?" she asked. Xenoz sighed. "......unfortunately.......i lost that one as well.........its a red egg, with orange markings........" he said. then he looked at the baby dragon. "that egg......is your brother or sister........" "what? i have a brother or sister? where are they?" "i.......don't know.......the eggs were.....taken from me.......and i haven't located the other egg yet......." "who took them?" Fireflight asked. "Blackdoom did............" "Blackdoom?! but hes..........one of the Triad........" "i know.............they were.......brougt back.......when Nightflight returned......they came........and stole the eggs........." "does this mean i'm an orphan?" asked the baby dragon. "unfortunately yes........your parents were killed when your mother layed the eggs........it was my job to protect you.........but i failed......." "well, not enitirely.....hes here..." she said. "i know......but its only a matter of time......before they find the other egg...." "then we need to stop them" "i wish it were tht easy little one......but they are quite powerful.....you can't stop them alone......" "but i killed some wolf today..." "yes, but he was a simle animal......these are powerful dragons...." "i'd hate to interupt here but.......the kid needs a name...." she said "he already has one........his name is.........Hellfire....." "Hellfire....." said the baby dragon.
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#1671 Posted: 01:40:59 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
a grey wolf walked up to Nightflight. he put something down in front of her.
"what is the meaning of this?" she asked. "we thought you might want this...." he said. "really?" she asked. she looked at it. it was a red stone with orange markings. "Greyclaw, tell me something, what makes you think i want this? when i speicifically asked for the male dragon!!" she growled. "i'm sorry! we could not find him! we thought.....you would like this!" "you fool!! i wanted the dragon!! not some stupid rock!! get back out there, and look again!! and this time, don't come back without the dragon!!" she roared. "yes my queen!" he said. then he ran off. then she looked at it once more. then she realized something....this was something she wanted....it was the sibling of the male dragon. she smiled an evil grin. "my plan just might work after all!" she grined evily.
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#1672 Posted: 03:28:33 31/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Nightflight looked down at the egg. it started to move around, and cracks appeared on it. Nightflight grined evily, as she watched it begin to hatch.
:meanwhile: "we need to stop Nightflight from getting the other egg!" said Hellfire. "i'm afraid we're too late young one......" said Xenoz. "shes found it....." said Fireflight. "what?! then we need to get it back!" said Hellfire. "no. young dragon, you are not quite strong enough to face her alone..." he said. "i don't care!! i'm not letting her corrupt my sibling!!" "Hellfire.....shes a very powerful dragon.....you shouldn't go alone..." she said. "i'm saving my sibling, and you can't stop me!!" he growled. Xenoz took a few steps towards him. "now, Hellfire, calm down. we need to think about this logically....don't do this..." "just try and stop me old man!!!" he roared. then his eyes turned to fire, and then Xenoz was covered in flames. then Hellfire disappeared. Fireflight used her powers to put out the flames. "are you ok?!" she asked. "yes, i think so. another minture there......and i might have burned to death!" he said.
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#1673 Posted: 10:03:35 31/01/2009
Great
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#1674 Posted: 21:40:09 02/02/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks. i'll write more today.
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#1675 Posted: 21:45:44 02/02/2009
OK, i read it. "goes on future, comes back"
HYYYYYYYYYYYYPEEEEEEEEEEEEEER
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#1676 Posted: 21:50:07 02/02/2009 | Topic Creator
yep. your hyper. i'll write more now.
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#1677 Posted: 21:54:15 02/02/2009
ayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
"Freak out" blöb, blöb, blöb, blöb, blöb, blöb, blöb, blöb, blöb, BLÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖÖ
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#1678 Posted: 21:59:05 02/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Hellfire appeared in a dark room. he looked around, and saw a red egg with orange markings. he walked up tp it. he looked down at the egg, and smiled.
"hello little brother or sister!" he said. then the egg moved around, as if it was excited that he was there. he started to pick up the egg. "don't touch that egg!" snarled a female voice behind him. he turned around, and saw Nightflight glaring at him. "oh, its just you. what do you want?!" he growled. "i want the egg. your not leaving!" "i'm taking the egg, and your not stopping me!" he growled. "who says your leaving at all? your both satying here!" she growled. "not if i can help it!!" he growled angerly. then his eyes turned to fire, as she went up in flames. he then grabbed the egg, and disappeared. Nightflight used her powers to put the flames out. she looked as if she didn't even feel the fire. "i'll get my revenge sooner or later! then, they'll all suffer!!" she growled. "of coarse they will, Nightflight. we'll both make them suffer!" snarled a male voice behind her. "i know, Blackdoom" she said as she turned around to see a large male black dragon. "you and the other Triad members have returned. we will get our revenge!!" she growled.
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deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#1679 Posted: 22:04:58 02/02/2009
*Wordless*
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#1680 Posted: 22:07:45 02/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i'll write more soon.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#1681 Posted: 22:56:35 02/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Hellfire appeared at a river in a forrest. he layed the egg down gently on a rock. it moved around, and cracked, as it began to hatch. Hellfire smiled as he watched his sibling about to hatch. an ornage horn poked through the egg. then another horn. soon the egg burst open, and a dark red and ornage female was sitting there. she was red, with orange horns, tail, belly, and claws; she had red eyes. she looked at Hellfire, and smiled.
"hey!" he said. "i'm your brother!" "brother!" she said excitedly. "now......lets see.......we need a name.......how about......Sunfire...?" "Sunfire!" she said excitedly. "i guess thats a yes then!" he said, smiling.
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#1682 Posted: 23:26:43 02/02/2009
Good
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#1683 Posted: 23:29:08 02/02/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks. i'll write more soon.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#1684 Posted: 09:39:18 03/02/2009
Me:"what you waiting for?"
D88, Crysdell, Cherry, Pearl and Sheldi:"We want more, We want more, We want more, we want more....................................."
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#1685 Posted: 21:12:07 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ok, ok. i'll write more today.
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#1686 Posted: 21:30:17 03/02/2009
D88, Crysdell, Cherry, Pearl and Sheldi:"Hurray, hurray, hurray, hurray, hurray......................."
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#1687 Posted: 21:38:21 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Fireflight appeared behind Hellfire and Sunfire.
"you two need to come with me! we need to leave before Nightflight gets here!" she said. they looked at her. "i'm not going anywhere with you!" he growled. "me neither!" she said. "then why don't you come with me!" said a female voice. Fireflight looked at her. she growled when she saw her. "back off Nightflight!!" she growled. "whats the matter sis? not happy to see me?!" "no, i'm not! now, leave before i kill you!!" she growled. Nightflight laughed. "if you could kill me you would have done so already, we both know that!" she chuckled. then, while they wern't paying attention, Hellfire grabbed Sunfire, and disappeared. :meanwhile: "do you know where we're going?" Blackpearl asked Thunderhead, as they walked through a forrest. "i know exactly where i'm----------" he said, then he walked into a tree. "-----going" he said. Blackpearl laughed. "yeah, of coarse you do!" she laughed.
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deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#1688 Posted: 21:43:28 03/02/2009
MOREEEEEEEEEEEE
Droolind
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#1689 Posted: 21:45:40 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i'll write more soon.
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#1690 Posted: 22:35:02 03/02/2009
write something!
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#1691 Posted: 22:40:14 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ok, i will. its like all you people can say is, "more!"
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#1692 Posted: 22:46:05 03/02/2009
umm..... please put more events/dialogue/acton/story/ whatever else into the topis of this story which people are asking for: "more" LOL
Hows that?
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#1693 Posted: 22:53:38 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
good. i'll write more now.
Blackpearl and Thunderhead walked around in the forrest. "your lost, arn't you?" she asked. "no, i know exactly where i am" he said. then he ran into another tree. she laughed. "then how come you keep running into trees?!" she laughed. "it just my luck!" "you need some luck?" "no, i have plenty of it, its all bad, but i have some" he said. she laughed. then he saw a cave. "ah ha!" he said, running up to the cave. she followed him. "what did you find this time? a rock to run into?" she laughed. "very funny!" he said sarcastically. then he saw a large ice sculpture there. "what the heck?! there shouldn't be ice in here!" he said. then he looked closer at it. "oh my gosh......!" he said surprised.
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#1694 Posted: 22:57:29 03/02/2009
Please, presh your computer buttons and create next wonderfull part on your fingers, please?
This text will replave=More
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#1695 Posted: 23:00:05 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ok, ok. if you love my story that much, i'll write more soon.
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#1696 Posted: 23:13:40 03/02/2009
dun du da!
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#1697 Posted: 23:19:09 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
i'll write more soon...
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#1698 Posted: 23:30:42 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
ignore this post.
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#1699 Posted: 23:31:04 03/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Thunderhead looked at the ice. he saw a dragon trapped inside!
"i don't belive it.........!" he said. "stand back! i'm breaking the ice!" said Blackpearl. then Thunderhead stepped back. then she lowered her head, ran towards the ice, and used her horns to break it. the ice broek, and the dragon was free. it was a teen male ice dragon. he looked at them. "hey! thanks for that!" he said. they looked confused at him. "who are you?!" asked Thunderhead. "my name is Frostbolt. nice to meet you!" he said. "i'm Blackpearl, this is my friend Thunderhead. what happened to you?" "hehe.....i was forzen...." "we guessed that much genious, we mean, how'd it happen?" "i was frozen a long time ago......i think its been.........500 years....." "500 years?!" they both asked. "what happened?!" asked Thunderhead. "i'd rather not talk about it...." he said. then he walked out ot the cave. (a little FYI, Frostobolt is really Ice Bane's character)
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#1700 Posted: 23:32:19 03/02/2009
dats right! ............ sorry about that lol
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