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She does? *iz gone for 2 days*

No...I think it was Skyqueen who played the original Glaceon.....but I could be wrong

Why is my gem count so weird? X3

Introduction Page

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Introductory page. Now we get to meet the Eeveelutions.

So yes, I've decided that the main root for the comic is going to be Ally. She seems to be the best: she's always been there, knows the most about what she's doing, and plays an important role in the Eeveelutions RP. Find a better candidate and I'll eat my non-existent hat!

PS: For a first time drawing a Pikachu/Raichu, I think it turned out pretty good!

Woah for a first time drawing a Raichu that's pretty epic.

D'aww, Losi so cuute! <3 Very nice beginning. I like it. The eyes on the Pikachu on the first panel look weird. I can't find the pupil or anything so she looks....er....possessed?

The colors just got messed up. It was meant to be darker in the center, but somehow they got reversed and the darker color ended up on the outside. No idea how.
And she's not a Pikachu, she's Ally! Don't be mean. D=

Er...okayokay! Ally. X3 Great start. What's the scene of her touching Losi's forehead. What's that supposed to mean? The erasing memories thingy?

She says she erased their memories, and she's touching her forehead, and to the right side of that panel everything fades to black. That's memory being erased. It's easier to see if you look closely at what she says.

His.

Ahh. But....I thought she left Losi....

His what?

.... So? How does that affect her ability to erase his memory? =\

his forehead. Not her forehead. Losi is not a girl.

Losi: ...

Well....if she didn't have time for Losi, what good would erasing his memory do? Erase the other eeveelutions' memories cause they've escaped. They don't need to remember. But for Losi he hasn't and so they're just going to do more horrible stuff on him.

Losi: Ugh....don't talk about it...please.

Slip of the type.

She erased all their memories, so that they wouldn't remember the pain. That's what I like to think. For the real reason, ask cynd. She knows why. All I can say is that she erased his memory, like it or not. It's not that she wanted to leave him behind, it's that those were her orders. Besides, you don't seem to mind. Buffed him up for you.
In all honesty, shut up Losi. I'm not in the mood for your crap right now. I will discuss your and everyone else's history as much as I want to.

True. Very true. I don't mind. Eh,

Losi: Meh.

Yeah ...
*glares irritably at Losi* I'm not happy with you ...

Wow, I went for a three hour long walk today with my father. I found myself ranting a lot about to Eeveelutions for two and a half of those hours. I did a lot of talking ... and eventually we got to what I don't like about the whole thing ... That probably had the longest of all the topics about it. Lasted a half hour at least ...

Wow. Nice. I'm sad. My youth leader that's been working for the church for like....15 years is going away. She was so nice.

Losi: For being obstinately stubborn and being my demented twisted self?

Aww. That's sad.

Most of my frustration focused on Losi ... *glares at Losi*

So it's going to be my first time in Mexico this summer without her. She usually does all the planning and stuff.

Losi: Understandable. Everyone hates me.

Mexico, you say?

Proof why I hate you: you never do anything about it. You just sit there and whine. >.>

Indeed. Every summer my youth group goes down to Mexico to help out with poor parts and stuff. It's fun.

Losi: I'm trying okay!

Ally erased Losi's memory last after she found out that he destroyed Silverlight.Didn't I say that happened?Akulion's death wasn't that long ago,y'know.It was a bit before Losi destroyed Silverlight.Yeah,that was how it was,really.She didn't want him to Break.Eh,you'll find out what happened soon,I hope.I want to get the full story out before the RP ends.And actually,Losi WAS crying when she erased his memory! Wow,it's like you knew,CL!I think I'll have Darkfire gather up all eight after something...Happens.You'll see,you'll see.Here we go!The events that will change things!Time to get to work!And yes,Ally didn't want to leave Losi there.She erased his memories so that he couldn't Break.Powerful Pokemon have the great danger of Breaking,got it?Everything happens for a reason.If you have any questions,ask me.
CL,I loved the first page! It was so AWESOME!Can't wait to see what happens next!

Ohh, okay.

Ah, okay.
No. You're not.

Yeah, that's it! I didn't actually know, though ... X3
Working on the next page~

Yaay next page!

Losi: ...meh fine.

Oh yay,I can't wait! I don't want you to push yourself,though,so don't!And yet I still can't wait!

^Agreed. I like that last panel of Ally. Very well designed.

Thank you guys~

Uhhh, Reshiram? I don't know, they're not really my strong point ...

I know what a Reshiram looks like, it's just that I'm not good at drawing them. =\

AWsome!I know about it too cuz Cynd tells me bout it lots.

That was cool,heh....I was trying to identify each one of the shadows for the eeveelutions.....Eve is obvious,and I saw Jake....but then my mind when kerplooey and I couldnt identify any more.... but it was cool~

@Bluefur: Thanks~

@Rio: It goes Eve (bouncing along with gray eyes), Aquarius (taking the lead with blue eyes), Flare (running all serious-like, red eyes), Liko (right beside Flare with the brown eyes), Moon (up closer with the darker red eyes), Sun (jumping over Jake and Liko, with the red gem and purple eyes), and Jake (trotting along with orange eyes).

Page 01

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So, that's how I imagined Moon's paw marking. A red half moon with a red star over it with some gold swirly things around it ... idk, don't ask why.

Cool! I like it! Great job with this page. Though, I imagine Ally should be less.....cat-like I guess and more.....idk, chubby? Mouse-like? Whatever... The pink blob on the back of her paws looks out of place. That lightning bolt shaped tail should probably be smaller. It looks way big.

Great job with Moon! The fur and markings make a really dazzling effect and you did good with his anatomy especially on the second panel. Ally's eyes look better now. I like it. Cool dialogue I love how this is developing too. Very good.

Nice. Do they all have a marking on their paws?

The eight eeveelutions do~
Just remember,at the very beginning Liko was a show-off jerk style person

I don't remember too much about Liko being a show-off jerk. I see him as the quiet, strong, silent type. Well at least when I entered I think.

@D-o: You want her to be fat?? That's mean. But I just can't draw her any differently. I'm not used to drawing rodents. And I personally like drawing the tails "way big". Just my style, I guess.

@mini: the Marked Eeveelutions have marks ...

@rio: Yep! I'll try to remember.

Back when the RP first started I had Liko as a jerk...then I changed him and he became a bit more resigned,probably because :
a) his adopted little sister was supposedly dating a murderer (Everyone remembers the Storm ordeal)
b) He ended up pink and girly ()
and c) He realised how he was actually acting and felt really bad....

Nice job with that comic CL~

lol, yup~
Flare: he wasn't girly ... And did we ever actually figure out if Storm murdered Jake's friend? I don't even remember ...

Uhhh, guys .... Bad news. I just drank lemonade ... D=
Lacy: *spazzing out from lemonade*

Well...not fat...just....uhh.......bipedal?
And the pink blobs on her legs should be on her feet as pads.

@Rio: Ahh, I see. And I remember a bit of the Storm ordeal.

Supposed murderer then...I know he didnt go girly,but he looked feminine and he sorta lost it because of thet....dont make me bring up 'Attract' again....

OH NO
Liko: *doesnt care*
Laurie: Am I allowed back here?

@D-o: Depends on how you look at it. When she walks on all fours (which is the faster way to travel for any rodent), so the big pink pawpad that is usually on the ground when she's walking on two feet will not be touching the ground. Thus they're not not touching the ground in the picture. Besides, Raichus can walk on all fours if they want to. She doesn't have to be walking on two legs all the time.


Flare: .... Still, he wasn't girly, even if his coat was pink.
Psycho Shift: *stalking everybody in the background*
Lacy: *still spazzing out* *turns into Nyan Cat-Lacy*
....... WAT?

Ahh, Attract. Heehee...yes, THAT thing again.

Losi: *turns away*

Ahhh, Attract ...

Flare: Yeah, Attract, lovely, who cares? >.>
Lacy: *tackles Losi*, Let's do something!! Oh, oh oh, we can go bungee-jumping, write a novel, and eat frozen yogurt! AT THE SAME TIME!! How does that sound? or would you rather go rock climbing while learning to tap dance? I like both of them~

....never mind about the cat thingy. The pink blobs on her legs. That's my problem. It shouldn't be showing.

Losi: .....No. *shoves Lacy off* *walks off again*

That's just how I see it working out. Sorry if it bothers you, but the only change I'll be making to the paw pads is making them smaller. I'm not going to remove them because that's the way they are.