okay here is the next part! enjoy!
as nalemor reached for the key, tanzanite ran up to the bars and used metal breath on a guard and killed him. ''did you get it nalemor?'' asked tanzanite with a confused look. ''ya!'' nodded nalemor placing the keys into his mouth. ''this place is pretty protected. take blueshadow and we shall find a escape route. you lead me the rest of the way.'' said nalemor searching for a vent. ''okay. but first we have to free us and the others. blackfire must not find us or we'll get caught.'' said tanzanite trying to reach for the key. ''here you go tanzanite. blueshadow is still weak but its best if we go now.'' said nalemor. tanzanite rapped the keys around his tail and stuck it through the slot. the bars opened. ''okay nalemor, now lets go!'' said tanzanite as he was opening the slot. ''i'll go free the others while you take blueshadow.'' said nalemor taking the keys from tanzanite. ''agreed!'' continued tanzanite as he was placing blueshadow on his back. as tanzanite took blueshadow, blackfire was passing by. she turned her head, tanzanite hid in a corner trying to avoid blackfire. ''that's odd.'' said blackfire as she was leaving the room. ''man that was close.'' whispered tanzanite to himself. ''nalemor!'' said tanzanite running up to him. ''okay everyone is freed. but malefor is coming! hide!'' warned nalemor.
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#101 Posted: 18:11:49 27/09/2008 | Topic Creator
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#102 Posted: 18:14:21 27/09/2008
More! More!
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#103 Posted: 21:47:12 27/09/2008 | Topic Creator
okay! here is the next part!
''hmm.'' thought malefor to himself. ''blackfire! there you are!'' said malefor turning his head towards her. ''yes malefor.'' said blackfire coming in. ''those apes are beyond useless. we need something else.'' said malefor making an evil grin. ''what do you think?'' asked malefor moving his sturdy tail around. ''well i was thinking... why not use the terrahorns?'' asked blackfire. ''what are those blackfire?'' asked malefor. ''they are bull like creatures that has a long spiky tail end, large four horns...two pointing up, two pointing down, their front legs are a birds, and the back ones are a bulls. they are green too with red eyes.'' said blackfire telling her description. ''shall i get riders for them?'' asked malefor. ''yes. please do.'' demanded blackfire in a calm voice. as both malefor and blackfire left the room, tanzanite and nalemor ran off to search for a vent within the fortress. ''hang in there blueshadow!'' said nalemor moving blueshadow's tail back on tanzanite's back. ''wait!'' paused tanzanite looking up. ''what?'' asked nalemor. ''do you see that?'' replied tanzanite. ''ya.'' said nalemor. ''well if we can break the bars off that vent, we can have a better chance to escape!'' said tanzanite. ''let's go!'' said nalemor.
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#104 Posted: 16:31:16 28/09/2008
More more more!
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#105 Posted: 23:32:16 28/09/2008 | Topic Creator
okayz! let me know what you like so far! im interested!
as tanzanite was looking around the room, seeing if there is anyone coming, he shot out an earth bomb at the metal bars and destroyed them. ''come on tanzanite! we don't have that much time!'' warned nalemor as he stuck his body through the vent. ''hang on!'' said tanzanite suddenly flapping his wings towards the vent. as he was trying to join nalemor, blueshadow started to slide off tanzanite's back! ''tanzanite! blueshadow is sliding off you!'' warned nalemor again. ''oh ****!!'' said tanzanite gliding down to catch the blue dragoness. tanzanite exstened his wings and caught blueshadow before anyone could see them. ''you have her?'' asked nalmor sticking his head and claws out. ''ya! i do!'' said tanzanite making sure that blueshadow wouldn't slide off. tanzanite placed blueshadow in the vent first, then he stuck himself in. as they were climbing through the vent, tanzanite continued to keep her on his back. ''wait! SHHH!! listen nalemor!'' said tanzanite listening to the voices.
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#106 Posted: 23:34:46 28/09/2008
Yup! It's getting good! Blueshadow didn't talk...
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#107 Posted: 21:34:54 29/09/2008 | Topic Creator
okay! okay! here it is! the next part!
tanzanite and nalemor looked down through the vent seeing the 3 servants to darkuss. ''okay. we should double the armies and send them to the northern border.'' said demonshadow. ''but what about the sapphire dragon?'' asked malefor remembering him. ''you mean sapphire?!?'' replied darknest. ''yes.'' answered demonshadow shape-shifting into a moon dragon. ''i'll go off in search of the golden warriors and destroy them!'' said demonshadow taking off. ''NO!'' yelled malefor. ''the main ones are sapphire and that red dragoness garnet!'' yelled malefor. ''why the argument masters or future servants!'' laughed blackfire coming into the room. ''oh we were thinking of doubling the armie and...'' paused darknest. ''GOOD!!!! that blueshadow thinks she can steal my place as the next ruler huh? i mean i am the daughter of the world's most powerful evilist dragon!'' bragged blackfire sitting on her dad's throne, treating it like her's. ''we better get going if we are going to save blueshadow!'' said nalemor. ''agreed!'' said tanzanite walking over the cold bars underneath his sturdy paws. ''hmm...mm...'' mumbled blueshadow still unconches. ''blueshadow?'' asked tanzanite turning his head to his back. ''don't worry tanzanite. she'll be fine!'' said nalemor with a sweet grin. the 2 dragons contiued to search their way through, until they found an exit. ''LOOK NALEMOR!!'' said tanzanite. ''well... what are we waiting for? lets go!!!'' said nalemor.
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#108 Posted: 22:04:31 29/09/2008
This is just getting intense more and more!
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#109 Posted: 20:52:31 01/10/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks! my writing has been improving!
finally they had reached to the summer forest, seeking to help the falling dragoness. ''pour that water over her nalemor!'' said tanzanite. ''i got it tanzanite!'' said nalemor grabbing a cupped like leaf with his tail and scooping up the water. nalemor had then poured the crystal blue water over blueshadow's body, making sure it would work. ''please blueshadow. please. i love you... just please.'' said tanzanite beginning to shed tears. ''hmm...i..love..you..too...tanzanite!'' answered blueshadow trying to get up. ''blueshadow!'' said tanzanite racing up to her and giving her a sweet hug with his wings. ''where am i tanzanite?'' asked blueshadow turning her head slightly. ''oh you are at the summer forest!'' laughed nalemor. ''how did you escape from the cell tanzanite?'' asked blueshadow. ''we.. well..its kinda hard to explain.'' replied tanzanite. ''i don't care how you escaped... but i have you!'' said blueshadow kissing tanzanite's cheek with her tongue. ''we need to stay here until you fully recover!'' said tanzanite kissing her back. ''you guys really love each other don't you?'' asked nalemor taking a drink from the waterfall. ''ya....but we have to keep it a secret. our love is forbidden. darkuss the ruler of all dragons is freed... my masters are in his rule and the darkness had spread.'' said blueshadow telling nalemor what has happened. ''why had you asked?'' wondered tanzanite. ''well...nevermind.'' said nalemor in an upset voice. ''its okay nalemor. we'll find her!'' said blueshadow trying to cheer him up. ''thanks guys! you are really good friends!'' said nalemor hugging the both of them. ''now, what about darkuss's heir?'' asked nalemor.
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#110 Posted: 22:19:35 01/10/2008
What happened to Blueshadow?
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#111 Posted: 21:46:46 02/10/2008 | Topic Creator
sorry! was busy again! LOLZ! here is the next part!
''nalemor. we must know her name.'' demanded tanzanite in a soft voice. ''okay. okay. her name is asin. she... we were split apart by darkuss... i miss her and don't know where she is.... i love her.'' said nalemor shedding a tear. ''we can find her for you!'' said blueshadow. ''but how? i don't even know where she is!'' said nalemor sitting back down. ''if we can, we could ask the natives.'' said blueshadow thinking to herself. ''who are the natives anyway?'' asked nalemor with a blank look on his face. ''im not even sure. maleff must be furious at me right now!'' said tanzanite placing his head down in shame. ''who is maleff?'' asked blueshadow playing with her slender tail. ''he was my trainer. he thinks of me as a leader to everyone, even though i am.'' said tanzanite. ''ya. and darkuss and the others thinks of me as a adviser, wanting to have a cruel, dark wretched life. i don't want this life anymore!!! i want to be with tanzanite! i don't care where i come from or which side im on i just want to be with you!! i love you and i don't want anyone to kill you!'' said blueshadow admitting her truth. ''i don't want anything happening to you too. i love you. and maybe some day when we're older we can be together. but we are just teenagers but i don't care. i still love you.'' replied tanzanite giving her a big kiss. ''well just be happy your together! and maybe when we are adults we can meet up with each other again!'' said nalemor looking at the both of them in a proud way.
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#112 Posted: 18:13:33 04/10/2008 | Topic Creator
i'll do the next part!
soon it became night. blueshadow and tanzanite were sleeping together inside a waterfall cave, while nalemor was sleeping outside the waterfall, still awake in shame. ''huh? nalemor. what are you doing outside?'' asked blueshadow wlking through the waterfall. ''i can't stop thinking about asin!'' replied nalemor trying to find a comfterble spot. ''how about you sleep with us tonight.'' said blueshadow starting to give a sweet grin. ''okay. i will.'' sighed nalemor walking into the warm cave. just then a big red figure came, blueshadow, tanzanite, and nalemor all went out to check what it was. ''who...who are you?'' asked blueshadow in a nervous voice. ''i..i am sarden the fire guardian. you must be blueshadow.'' answered sarden in a shocked voice. ''how do you know who i am?'' asked blueshadow wondering what the strange dragon has to tell her. ''you see when you were in your egg, you were taking by malefor. i thought you would have followed the dark ways but it turns out im wrong.'' answered sarden in a horse voice. ''did i have... real parents?'' asked blueshadow. ''yes their names were peroxx and gemstone... they were both killed by darkuss while you were still in the nest.'' said sarden. blueshadow ran back into the cave shedding her tears about her past.
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#113 Posted: 18:22:58 04/10/2008
ZOMG! Since when did Nalemor and Dark_Cynder approved of NalemorxAsin?
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#114 Posted: 00:34:30 05/10/2008 | Topic Creator
i have no clue! anyways here is the next part!
''blueshadow! blueshadow wait!'' cried tanzanite running after blueshadow. ''why?!? why were my parents killed?!?....i didn't even know that i had real parents until now! don't you know how hard it is to just find out that your own parents were killed by a ruler?!?'' said blueshadow shedding more tears. ''my parents suffered the same fate as well...'' confessed tanzanite putting his wings against her long slender body. ''they......they did?!?'' asked blueshadow. ''yes, they also died under neath darkuss's dark clutches... maleff didn't tell me about it until i was 9.... he raised me as if i was his own son... but all he ever thinks of me is greatness... nothing more. but it wasn't until i found you.'' answered tanzanite. ''you opened my eyes tanzanite, you know that right?'' asked blueshadow placing her head under neath his gold chest. ''yes, i will alwys know that.'' said tanzanite putting his head down. ''now, let's go hear what sarden has to say.'' said tanzanite kissing her again. ''but before we go out i just want you with me...'' said blueshadow. ''it will be all right, you'll see.'' said tanzanite wiping her tears off her face. ''come on guys! sarden knows where asin is!'' said nalemor rushing into the cave. ''hang on nalemor!'' yelled tanzanite. ''let her have her moment, she just found out that she had parents!'' answered tanzanite. ''of course. everyone needs a moment.'' said nalemor running back to saarden. ''when they are ready. i'll tell them.'' said sarden in an relaxed voice. ''alright.'' said nalemor messing around in the dirt. ''i'll always be there for you blueshadow. always. i know things will get better.'' said tanzanite.
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#115 Posted: 00:40:22 05/10/2008
Where did Blueshadow go?
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#116 Posted: 01:27:49 05/10/2008 | Topic Creator
i love writing this story! i love the bond between blueshadow & tanzanite!
''but tanzanite... what if you die? i won't ever see you again. i would want to die with you.'' said blueshadow. ''blueshadow. listen to me... if i die, i'll die for you. even if it means that darkuss would take over, i'll die for you.'' said tanzanite. ''but i wouldn't want you to go! i want you HERE!'' said blueshadow hugging him tightly. ''don't worry blueshadow. im not going to die. but if it ever happens, i'll always love you!'' said tanzanite. ''i miss my parents.'' said blueshadow in grief. ''i miss mine too. maleff isn't even like them.'' said tanzanite. ''we have to help nalemor though.'' said blueshadow. ''yes. are you ready to go outside now?'' asked tanzanite. ''ya, im ready.'' said blueshadow getting up and giving a kiss. ''well. i have been expecting you two.'' laughed sarden. ''nalemor, asin is with me at the temple. i found her under a pile if rocks on a mountain.'' said sarden. ''can you take us to her?'' asked nalemor in a hyper voice. ''of course i will. you deserve to see someone who you care about.'' said sarden opening his wings up and expanding them. sarden took the three of them and flew back to the temple. ''well, here we are.'' said sarden winking at them. ''nalemor! is that really you?!?'' asked asin. ''yes. its me!'' said nalemor rushing up to her and kissed her black cheek. ''thank you. for everything blueshadow and tanzanite.'' said nalemor hugging asin.
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#117 Posted: 15:54:02 05/10/2008
OMG! Kissing!
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#118 Posted: 19:47:35 05/10/2008 | Topic Creator
ya. i kinda like stories like that. here is the next part!
nalemor and asin flew off together and looked back in happiness. ''so. this is my real home. its so amazing!'' said blueshadow looking up at a statue. ''yes. it quit is... but every night i grief about the night you were taking from the temple.'' said sarden in a horse voice. ''blueshadow, i like you to meet the other guardians. electrite, terroc, and cercro.'' sarden said in pride. ''blueshadow, we would never have thought to see you!'' said the three guardians. ''now, now everyone. blueshadow has chose her path. she is with us.'' laughed sarden. ''yes. we need a place to stay until our powers return a little.'' said tanzanite. ''we would be happy for you to stay here, as for the both of you it is best if you two stay hidden. if darkuss ever sees you two together, who knows what would happen.'' warned sarden. ''don't worry. we will be fine.'' replied tanzanite. it soon became morning and tanaznite sneaked out to see what was going on. ''well, well, well tanzanite. we meet again.'' hissed a dark figure in the dark shadows. ''who are you?!?'' asked tanzanite ready to attack the figure. ''i am blackfire. you must be that wretched blueshadow's boyfriend. i thought so.'' said blackfire. ''what do you want with her?!?'' growled tanzanite. ''oh.. i don't want her, i want you!'' snarled blackfire trying to grab tanzanite into her knifed like claws. ''GAAAAHH!!'' yelled tanzanite in pain as she was digging her claws into his back. ''i love the sound of pain!'' whispered blackfire to herself. ''im gonna follow in my father's foot steps, and become a ruler!!!'' continued blackfire. ''even....if i die.... i'll do it.... GAAAHH!!!......for my love.....EEERRR... blueshadow.'' said tanzanite. ''im not gonna kill you. just to see you suffer!'' giggled blackfire as she was watching his pain grow worse. '' why do you hate blueshadow so much???'' asked tanzanite falling to the cold hard ground. ''you don't need to to know!!'' said blackfire slashing her silver knife like tail across tanzanite's body. ''why let your hate take over you?!?'' asked tanzanite.
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#119 Posted: 21:37:44 05/10/2008
Screw you Blackfire!
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#120 Posted: 21:31:33 06/10/2008 | Topic Creator
i agree with you! LOLZ! here is the next part.
tanzanite struggled to get up. ''if you ever want to see your little sweet heart again, you must end your love or my father will kill her!'' laughed blackfire. ''you wretched horrid monster! you are no princess!'' yelled tanzanite. ''HOW DARE YOU?!?'' hissed blackfire swatting her claw across tanzanite's face. ''DO NOT UNDER ESTIMATE ME!! YOU FOOL!'' continued blackfire. tanzanite began to grew weak. ''had enough yet? actully it is kinda funny. blueshadow's parents deserved to die!!'' harassed blackfire trying to make tanzanite furious. ''NO!! YOUR WRONG!!'' yelled tanzanite. ''i'll heal you if you tell that to blueshadow! or you will be the first one to see her die under my father's clutches!!'' said blackfire. ''i'll do what you want.... just don't hurt her.'' said tanzanite. ''i don't worry. i won't!'' said blackfire to herself. later at the temple. ''blueshadow there is something i want to tell you....'' paused tanzanite as he started to cry. ''what is it?!?'' said blueshadow softly. ''i don't love you....'' tanzanite said as the words haunted him as he was telling his love. ''what?!? i don't.... NO!! after all we've been through?!? after all the things said to me were a lie! I HATE YOU!! I NEVER WANT TO EVER SEE YOU AGAIN!!'' cried blueshadow rushing out of the room in tears. ''what have i done?'' thought tanzanite to himself. ''well blueshadow, it appears that your sweetheart doesn't love you anymore!'' laughed blackfire landing on the dirt.
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#121 Posted: 22:28:35 06/10/2008
Oh no! C'mon! Kill Blackfire! She deserves to die!
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#122 Posted: 00:45:48 07/10/2008 | Topic Creator
agreed! LOLZ!! here is the next part!
''how do you know about this blackfire?'' questioned blueshadow as she saw blackfire eating a moth. ''you know i can help you, after all tanzanite doesn't love you anymore.'' taunted blackfire. ''since when did you ever try to help me?!? you always tried to kill me!!'' said blueshadow wiping her cold tears off her face. ''plus all you care about is power!!!'' continued blueshadow. ''so why should i give a d**m as to what you have to say?!?'' teased blueshadow in an angry voice. blackfire paused. ''because.... tanzanite is a worthless idiot who doesn't even care about you! so i can help you!!'' answered blackfire trying not to give herself away. ''wait. so did you tell him to break up with me?'' asked blueshadow staring with a blank look on her face. ''NO!!'' freaked blackfire suddenly shaking her legs. ''im gonna go find him... i know he still loves me!'' said blueshadow trying to get away from blackfire. ''not so fast! i told him! it was me who told him to break your heart... because you deserve to DIE!!'' admitted blackfire pouncing on to blueshadow's back. blueshadow snapped her jaws onto blackfire's neck and tossed her body off to a hard boulder. ''I'LL BE BACK! AND COME BACK MORE POWERFUL THEN WHAT YOU COULD EVER IMAGING!'' yelled blackfire gliding off into the cold dark sky. blueshadow went off to find her tanzanite, and to forgive what she had said. ''blueshadow. im sorry! i didn't mean that! it was all blackfire, just please! i still love you! i did that to protect you!!'' said tanzanite shedding his warm tears as he placed his paws around her neck and hugged her with his wings. ''i love you too tanzanite!'' said blueshadow.
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#123 Posted: 14:57:22 07/10/2008
Yay! Blackfire go boom!
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#124 Posted: 20:26:53 07/10/2008 | Topic Creator
ya! she did deserve that! LOLZ!! so here comes the next part!!
tanzanite and blueshadow kissed each other again. ''so you were trying to protect me.'' said blueshadow. ''i had to fight with her... i had to do that.'' said tanzanite. tanzanite turned his head. ''what's wrong?'' asked blueshadow. ''she said something horrible about your parents... saying that they deserve their fate.'' answered tanzanite. ''its okay tanzanite. i understand. darkuss is a cruel ruler, i just want to be free from my duties.'' said blueshdow turning his head back with her claw. tanzanite blushed. ''like you told me, things will get better.'' blueshadow said looking up at the darkness in the sky. ''your right, it will....but i don't understand why blackfire hates you so much? she might be next in line to be a ruler but why?!?'' asked tanzanite. ''i don't know... she is just power hungry.'' said blueshadow. sapphire came, along with garnet. ''blueshadow?!? what are you doing here?'' asked sapphire. ''long story.'' said tanzanite. ''come on sapphire!! lets go inside!'' yelled garnet in a cheerful voice. ruby came out. ''blueshadow!!! get out of here!! if you are here to kill sapphire or my love storm, i sware to you--'' paused ruby as she was interuped by tanzanite. ''she's not like that!!'' yelled tanzanite. ''sorry if i made you mad, its just that, well she is with darkuss. she is bad news.'' contiued ruby. ''please ruby, just give her a chance. you love someone who was from darkuss's kin.'' said tanzanite putting his paw on her shoulder. ''okay i will, and ya it is true. sorry blueshadow.'' said ruby.
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#125 Posted: 22:05:11 07/10/2008
If Ruby dosen't trust Blueshadow I want her to go boom too!
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#126 Posted: 20:41:25 08/10/2008 | Topic Creator
here is the next part! i'll try to improve some more!
ruby sighed and left. she turned her head back, then looked around. ''i still don't trust blueshadow! she is just like blackfire that evil princess!'' thought ruby. '' at any time she could kill tanzanite.... hmmm....'' said ruby as she was playing with her tail. ''sister are you coming?'' asked garnet. garnet was the older sister, while ruby was the younger one. ''yeah garnet im coming.....do you trust blueshadow?'' replied ruby as she she saw her sister pause to the question. ''YES!!! she is one our friends!! why can't you just give her a chance?'' yelled garnet. ''i don't know...i just don't....'' said ruby walking back into the temple. garnet followed. ''blueshadow, its best if we atleast take a rest and keep our love a secret... i don't care what maleff says, but the fact that we're together... i love you.'' said tanzanite. ''i---'' paused blueshadow looking up at the fire flys in the darkness. ''fire flys? what are they doing here?'' asked tanzanite placing her paw on his staunchly gold chest. ''i don't know... but they sure are beautiful.'' blueshadow said taking one of them and gave it to tanzanite. he took it and saw a strange necklace on the dirt. it had a small glass orb attached with a gold string and on that string it had small sapphires on it. he smiled and picked it up. blueshadow carefully placed the dragonfly inside the orb. tanzanite gave it to her. ''this is for you, i thought you might like it.'' said tanzanite opening up his claws. ''i will keep it forever!'' said blueshadow. ''come on you two! you must come in! the darkness continues to spread!'' warned terroc. ''coming!'' said the two of them rushing in before the dark lighting could strike them.
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#127 Posted: 22:12:52 08/10/2008
Aww! They should'nt have kissed but it's a good seal for love!
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#128 Posted: 21:58:39 09/10/2008 | Topic Creator
here's the next part! i like writing this story! 8D
the lighting bolt zapped them both weakening them. ''we got to help them!!'' demanded sapphire as he was racing to grab blueshadow. garnet took tanzanite, and ruby followed. they were all in. ''guys don't you get it? she is evil!!! she wants to kill you!!'' said ruby looking at blueshadow. ''sister!! your wrong!! YOU LOVE SOME ONE WHO IS ONE OF THE SONS OF DARKUSS, YET HE WAS RAISED BY HUNTER!! SO WHY CANT YOU TRUST HER?!?'' shouted garnet as she was trying to help them. the fire fly in blueshadow's necklace got burned but it was still glowing. they both got up. '' thank you guys! you are really good friends!'' said blueshadow regaining her strength. ''glad to see you guys okay!!'' said garnet. ''thanks.'' said tanzanite. meanwhile... ''malefor! get in here!'' demanded darkuss as he was tapping his claws on the chair. ''yes master?'' asked malefor. ''my daughter wants to tell you something.'' said darkuss with an evil grin. ''yes blackfire?'' continued malefor. ''send in my servants!'' demanded blackfire as she watched malefor. ''of course i will future master!!'' said malefor leaving the room. the baboons walked in nervously. ''well? are you just going to stand there? go get me some meat! im starving!!!'' yelled blackfire staring at them with a firey look. ''y-y- yes ba--ba- black--fa--fire!!'' said tooth sig the baboon. ''as for you! go get me some fresh water from the summer forest! i don't even care if it kills you!!'' said blackfire waving her paw, forcing the two out of the room. ''and you! go find some of those moths! a future ruler must not starve in her own future fortress!!'' continued blackfire impaitiontly. ''oh man!'' whined snag gar as he was stomping out. ''YOU DARE CHALLENGE ME?!? DON'T YOU EVEN KNOW WHO YOUR TALKING TO? MY FATHER PROMISED ME WHEN HE PASSES I WILL BECOME THE FUTURE RULER! YOU ARE UNDER OUR COMMANDS!'' cried blackfire as she got out of her seat and lunged onto the baboon. ''SO I SUGGEST YOU MOVE YOUR LITTLE A** AND GET MOVING!!'' snarled blackfire as she took out her claw ready to stab em. ''ya---ya--yes i'll hop to it!!'' said the baboon in fear. blackfire smiled.
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#129 Posted: 22:07:35 09/10/2008
Ooh! Blackfire got mad!
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#130 Posted: 21:53:53 10/10/2008 | Topic Creator
OMFG!!! the second trailer is just.... AWESOME!!
''hmm.... we should triple the armies. i cant afford having that sapphire dragon wondering about!!!'' growled darkuss under his breath. ''yes father i agree with you!'' said blackfire. ''i know that blueshadow has petrayed us father! we should kill her for turning against us like how my siblings did!'' burst blackfire as she darkuss of her opinion. ''now..now daughter. i have a better plan. since the world is now under neath my darkness!'' laughed darkuss as he picked up a moth from his plate and ripped its head off with his sharp peircing white teeth. ''and what is that?'' asked blackfire. ''we will use and currupted blueshdow, kill the leader tanzanite, then once my armies had spreaded we will awake the golem!!'' said darkuss clenching his fists. ''but why cant i just do it?!?'' asked blackfire. ''blackfire that's... that's a perfect idea! im so proud of you. but since you are already cruel like i am. your perfect for the job.'' said darkuss changing his mind. ''thank you father. WHERE IS MY MOTHS? HAVE YOU APES HAVE NO MIND?!? WHERE ARE THEY?!?!'' demanded blackfire as she began to loose her temper. ''ha--here--bla--black--fa--fire this i--is fa--for you.'' said langus as he was afraid to confront her. she took one and ate it. ''disgusting!! you expect me to eat this CR*P?!?'' snarled blackfire as she was spitting it out. ''NOW GET BETTER ONES WHO DON'T HAVE YELLOW WINGS! OR OTHER WISE MY FATHER WILL KILL YOU!!'' yelled blackfire as she swatted the plate out of the ape's hand. ''i--im sa--sorry bla--blackfire i'll find ba--better ones!'' said the ape as he ran out of the room in fear. ''YOU!! GET ME A SOME BETTER MOTHS AS WELL!!! IF YOU EXPECT ME TO EAT THIS SH** IT WILL BE YOUR LIFE!!'' demanded darkuss as he was ready to kill the three of them.
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#131 Posted: 22:06:13 10/10/2008
I know! Pure epicness to DotD! Lol the moths make me laugh.
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#132 Posted: 21:48:21 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
here is the next part!
it was night. everyone was asleep. blueshadow was sleeping in the corner cold and scared. she was having a nightmare. ''blueshadow? whats wrong?'' asked tanzanite as he was stretching out his legs. he walked over to her. ''i had a nightmare. it had you in it. and in my nightmare... i killed you!'' said blueshadow as she clunged to his chest and began to cry. ''its alright. you could sleep with me tonight.'' said tanzanite flipping to his stomache and laying on his back. blueshadow raced on to him and jumped on him. ''i love you tanzanite. i just don't want my nightmare to come true.'' said blueshadow kissing him and slowly falling asleep. tanzanite smiled. ''it won't. i'll protect you.'' said tanzanite putting his head down to her's. a tree dragon was watching them from the outside. ''the boy is still alive!'' hissed the tree dragon as his eyes went from green to red. ''i must tell darkuss!'' said the tree dragon shape-shifting back into demonshadow. ''how dare she turn against us!!!'' growled demonshadow leaving the temple grounds. tanzanite opened one eye, then slowly went back to sleep. hunter was behind a tree watching demonshadow leave. he growled. then left.
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#133 Posted: 03:41:50 14/10/2008
Darkuss already knows, right?
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#134 Posted: 20:50:33 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
herez the next partz!
demonshadow returned to the fortress with a evil looking grin on his face. ''the boy is still alive darkuss!'' said demonshadow reporting what he saw. ''GRRRRR!! I ALREADY KNEW THAT DEMONSHADOW!!!'' growled darkuss as he took demonshadow by the nose with his tail and threw him against the wall. ''ouch!'' grumbled demonshadow to himself. ''DARKUSS! OH DARKUSS I FOUND YOU!'' said malefor rushing into the room covered in sweat. ''what is it that you want malefor?!? this better be good!!'' said darkuss getting out of his throne and began to growl. '' the avalarians seem to have taken out half of our army!!'' said malefor. ''NO!!! we cannot have this!!! onix go disepline those b**terds!! otherwise they will die!!'' said darkuss kissing her then sat back down. ''i will darkuss!'' said onix as she took off into the dark sky. ''WELL YOU HEARD DARKUSS!! MOVE YOUR A**ES!!'' yelled onix as she blew fire on them. ''MOVE IT!!!'' continued onix as she whipped some of them with her tail end. meanwhile... ''tanzanite it is still dark out!'' said blueshadow opening her burning red eyes. ''i know!'' yawned tanzanite as he gave her a kiss and got up. ''its darkness... it needs to end!'' said sapphire. ''maybe storm can help!!'' said ruby as she was racing to the temple door. ''actually that's a good idea! but we must find cheetah village!!'' said garnet walking up to her sister.
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#135 Posted: 22:04:53 14/10/2008
Isn't Onix a Pokemon?
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#136 Posted: 21:50:50 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
herez the next part! sorry for the lateness!
the four friends took off into the sky searching everywhere in the realms. ''da**it! we searched everywhere and still no sign of it!'' said sapphire after being so stressed of searching. ''maybe if we see hunter's hawk there could be a possibility to take us there!'' said ganet turning her head to the three of them. ''that could work. but the village used to be easy to see! even flying you could see it!'' said tanzanite coming up with second thoughts. '' have any other bright ideas sister?!?'' said garnet as she quickly turned her head to ruby then growled. ruby paused. ''why not just walk? we could maybe see it better that way.'' said ruby. blueshadow sighed. ''do have any idea as to what you are thinking?!?'' growled blueshadow. ''what? the ground looks fine to me?'' said ruby. then she looked down again. she noticed red dots spreading through the land. it was the dark armies! ''if we fly to the ground now there is a possibility that sapphire could be seen! and also because they will kill you off!'' yelled blueshadow tilting her wing to avoid the smoke. ''oh...sorry.'' said ruby. as they continued their search. tanzanite noticed a small brown figure flying through the cold air. it was the hawk! ''follow him!'' yelled garnet as she told the others the message. following the hawk, the five of them tried to catch up with him. flying through clouds, mist and smoke. the hawk screached then landed. he landed to a small area which looked like the village. ''see i told you my plan would work!'' laughed garnet as she was the first one to land. the others followed.
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#137 Posted: 22:22:40 16/10/2008
Lol. Ruby got owned!
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#138 Posted: 21:37:28 17/10/2008 | Topic Creator
heres the next part! i'll try my best!
it was silent. the ground was covered in ebony ash. dust filled the air. small flames were slowly vanishing. ''what... what happened here?'' asked sapphire looking down at the hawk. the hawk sighed. ''its the dark armies. they struck here.'' said garnet as she was exploring the grounds. blueshadow noticed something. she saw survivors! they rushed towards them, making sure that they were all okay. hunter was one of them. ''where is storm?'' cried ruby. ''he's over there. we'd try getting him out...'' said one of the cheetahs lifting himself up. ruby tried pulling him out of pile of burned wood but he wouldn't move. blueshadow helped pull him out. it worked! but he was weak, he was covered in ash, he had wounds and gashes. he was also covered in blood. ''storm? storm get up!'' said ruby licking the blood and ash off his face. ''ruby?....the dark armies.... fire.... darkuss.... death.'' said storm struggling to talk. ''so he was here.'' thought blueshdow. she began to cry then ran off. ''blueshadow! wait!'' yelled tanzanite as he grabbed her by the tail. ''im sorry. its just that darkuss! he destroys everything!'' cried blueshadow as she jumped to his chest. ''its okay. we have sapphire, and the others. we'll end this darkness some how. believe me blueshdow. you just have to trust me!'' said tanzanite. ''i do trust you!'' said blueshadow wiping her tears off he face. storm got up. ''looks like we have no choice. we must fight!'' said storm walking towards the injured chief. ''yes we must.'' said the chief.
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#139 Posted: 22:19:56 17/10/2008
At least Storm is not against Blueshadow.
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#140 Posted: 19:28:39 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
here is the next part! one more day left! te he!
''but where are you guys gonna live? what are you gonna do to survive?'' asked garnet. storm turned his head and looked up at the sky. ''why must you do this to us father? why?'' said storm to himself, clenching his fists and began to cry. ''i don't know why your dad miss treats you like this... storm.'' said ruby. ''all he cares about is power! he is the most cruelest, power hungry ruler ever!'' yelled storm. sapphire looked up then turned his head. he sighed. ''if we are going to battle, we must prepare for the worse. come on everyone we must defend for ourselves!'' encouraged sapphire as he was trying to convince them. ''well you heard the dragon! lets move!'' said the chief grabbing one of his spare weapons. ''what about the village?'' asked one of the cheetahs. ''i don't know yet, but we CANNOT LET DARKUSS DESTROY OUR LAND!'' growled the chief as he was running up to sapphire. ''i see him!'' said storm. ''grab your arrows storm and hunter! you two are the best ones to get a bull'seye!'' said the chief. sapphire shot out blue fire from his mouth, trying to focus on the main enemy. blueshadow helped out as well with her blue fire. garnet found a sord and slashed all the enemies. ''hurry storm!'' yelled hunter.
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#141 Posted: 20:00:29 19/10/2008
Storm is Darkuss' son?
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#142 Posted: 21:15:32 23/10/2008 | Topic Creator
sooooooooo sorry for the lateness! here it is! this one is short.
storm raced up to darkuss and shot his arrows. darkuss took his son and squished him until he could not escape. ''you are just as pathetic as your other siblings!'' laughed darkuss. ''you are a sick, cold father!!!'' yelled storm as he was turning his head. darkuss's eyes became cold and tossed his son to the ground. ruby ran up to him and rapped her red tender paws around his damaged body. he got up and kissed her. then looked up and growled. ''well, my work here is done!'' laughed darkuss as he took off at lighting speed.
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#143 Posted: 23:42:33 23/10/2008
Storm died!
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#144 Posted: 17:12:20 25/10/2008 | Topic Creator
here is the next part. and things do get more tense. enjoy!
''YOU! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT! YOU KNEW THAT DARKUSS WOULD COME HERE AND DESTROY THEIR HOME DIDN'T YOU?!?'' cried ruby as her eyes grew wide. ''its not my fault.... i didn't know... i...'' paused blueshadow as she was ready to cry. ''YOUR WRONG! YOU DON'T KNOW ABOUT HER PAST AND WHAT SHE HAS BEEN THROUGH!'' yelled tanzanite. ''or did you know that... that this would happen... did you?'' asked tanzanite as his voice grew soft. ''yes tanzanite...i...i did... i knew this was going to happen. was i was turning 15, malefor and the others told me that when their master darkuss is free, they would destroy the land and put me in charge as the advisor... apparently when i met you... i gazed into your golden eyes, knowing that you were my light out of the darkness... but that was when i didn't care... now i do.... but im afraid that if i told you this you wouldn't...'' paused blueshadow as her eyes started to tear up. ''that i wouldn't love you anymore? blueshadow i love you no matter what happens... this is not your fault. none of this is. but i am upset about what is going on right now.'' said tanzanite placing his wings around her neck and smiled with gleaming eyes. ''but tanzanite, you shouldn't love me. im a horrible dragoness.'' said blueshadow as she continued to cry. ''i do still love you.'' said tanzanite. ''really?'' said blueshadow. ''yes.'' said tanzanite as he gave her another kiss and continued to hug her.
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#145 Posted: 17:13:36 25/10/2008
Aww! That's sweet!
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#146 Posted: 22:37:12 30/10/2008 | Topic Creator
sorry i was busy...AGAIN! here is the next part! tee hee!
''so...you did know about this?'' said the chief as his eyes grew in anger. ''yes.'' sighed blueshadow as she turned her head and walked away slowly. ''blueshadow where are you going?'' asked garnet. ''please blueshadow don't leave me! this is none of your fault... its darkuss's. just please don't leave... please.'' begged tanzanite as he stopped her by grabbing her tail gently with his mouth. ''i've already caused enough trouble...im sorry tanzanite.'' said blueshadow. ''blueshadow... if you go... i don't think i would deserve to live anymore.'' said tanzanite as he let go of her long slender tail. she sighed. ''he's right blueshadow. you have us. don't blame this all on you. you just had a hard time telling everyone.'' said sapphire. ''thanks guys. and i won't leave. tanzanite.... i love you.'' said blueshadow as she raced up to him and gave him a kiss. his face slowly changed to a smile and continued to kiss her. ''alright dragons! lead the way! we shall leave avalar for now until we stop darkuss.'' said the chief as he gathered everyone and their weapons. ''lets head to warfang. im sure dragons are there.'' said tanzanite as he moved himself to the front with sapphire. ''but chief, what about the dark armies?'' asked hunter, filling his case up with arrows.
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#147 Posted: 15:02:22 01/11/2008 | Topic Creator
i'll just continue anyways. i hope you like it!
''we have the dragons don't we?'' said the chief as he picked up his large sharp sord. ''are you ready?'' asked sapphire in excitement. ''yes we are!'' said hunter. later... ''finally! in warfang!'' said storm as he was panting in joy. ''well, well, well... who might you be?'' asked a mole as he raced up to the new coming group. ''im sapphire. and we wish to stay here for a while.'' sapphire said, kissing garnet. ''you! your the adviser for darkuss aren't you?!?'' said another mole in rage. ''no! im not like him! please just give me a chance!'' cried blueshadow. ''please? she is with us. she had a terrible past. please don't blame this all on her!'' said tanzanite as he slowly walkedto the front. ''well..... i guess we can trust her.... but on one condition. if she saves us from the army, IF it ever comes. we can trust her. but for now our judgment is with us.'' said one of the moles as they were leading them through the city. ''look at all these dragons!'' said ruby. ''amazing isn't it?'' said hunter. ''i wonder what those golden statues are for?'' thought blueshadow as they contiued to walk. ''here is where you will be staying...as you can see this city was made for dragons of all kinds. from fire, to earth, ice and many others, maybe even some rare breeds!'' said one of the moles, opening the door for them.
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#148 Posted: 15:05:08 01/11/2008
Warfang is real beautiful if there was no burning house on DotD.
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#149 Posted: 17:01:00 02/11/2008 | Topic Creator
here it is! im sure it is a beautiful city! enjoy!
''do you like it here?'' asked tanzanite as he was rapping his golden wings around her and sticking his head on top of her's. ''no one seems to trust me... they think... they think im bad.'' said blueshadow. ''i was wondering why everyone was looking at you.'' said tanzanite. ''they just need to give you a chance... prowlus and his tribe trusts you. along with sapphire.'' continued tanzanite. ''are you sure they will?'' asked blueshadow. ''they will. i promise.'' said tanzanite giving her another kiss. ''tanzanite, i see you are adjusting well and blueshadow you...'' paused a mole then slowly walked out of the room. ''just ignore them blueshadow.'' said hunter giving her a smile then turned his head towards tanzanite. ''you wont mind if i talk with him blueshadow?'' asked hunter. ''not at all hunter.'' said blueshadow. hunter grimaced then went outside. tanzanite followed him. ''im amazed to see another purple dragon.'' said hunter looking at the sky. ''why? have you ever ment another one?'' asked tanzanite with a blank look. ''yes. his name was spyro. he also had a dragoness as his ally as well. she looked liked blackfire only her eyes were green and her underbelly was red. her name was cynder.'' said hunter as he quickly turned his head at tanzanite. ''malefor is a servant to a much more powerful dragon. darkuss.'' hunter continued. ''i know who he is.'' laughed tanzanite. ''i know that.'' said hunter. ''the reason as to why i wanted to talk with you, its because of your love with you and blueshadow. i trust her as much as you do.'' explained hunter as he went back inside.
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#150 Posted: 17:04:32 02/11/2008
I see it now! I see it! The thing thing!
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