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#101 Posted: 00:05:29 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#102 Posted: 00:25:01 04/08/2008
Np
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#103 Posted: 01:19:53 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Who should do the next chapter?
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#104 Posted: 01:20:50 04/08/2008
iunno
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#105 Posted: 01:25:21 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Maybe I will do the next one too! Also I think the next one should be where Infinity meets the Chronichler and learns more about her power of time!
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#106 Posted: 12:32:43 04/08/2008
cool
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#107 Posted: 15:10:09 04/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
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#108 Posted: 17:50:04 05/08/2008
Sweet! Well, I can't do the next chapter. I am going on vacation in about a week. I will put it in my signature when I leave and come back.
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#109 Posted: 17:55:34 05/08/2008
Plz can i do the next chap? Can i bring Infinity back in too? Plz imform me about what has happened, I have read the chapters but I cannot understand? please tell me! I will get the idea soon!
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#110 Posted: 18:04:27 05/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok here it goes, Night Owl.
Well right now I will just tell you what you need to do in the next chapter, is that ok? Well, Asin was captured by Malefor, and he took her to Invities to get her power, or something. So now, in order to help Asin Nalemor, and Infinity created a portal to Invities to help her. But, little did they know the old Asin was brought back to life in the current, reborn Asin's body (Ok, this part is a little confusing, and weird, but this is the same Asin) She did the MOST powerful light fury to turn Malefor to stone (Light cannot destroy anything, but PURE evil, and Malefor isn't) Also, Infinity I think should now awaken her full elemnt of time, by the Chronichler coming to her in a dream in Invities. (This, Night Owl, will be your chapter) Does this help? BTW, Invities is the place where Spyro FIRST met the Chronichler in a dream. |
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#111 Posted: 18:55:32 05/08/2008
I don't get it. Cause Malefor was supposed to turn good. He was poisoned. But I am not saying what did. And I thought Cassandra and Asin Where together!
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#112 Posted: 20:47:47 05/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Malefor is not dead, Cyn16. He just got turned to stone by Asin, and Cassandra (Who IS with Asin, sorry!) Has an idea to free him from his stone encasement.
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#113 Posted: 20:56:24 05/08/2008
OH! Thanks for clearing that up!
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#114 Posted: 21:06:17 05/08/2008
Off Topic:
Did you ever hear that guy in the DotD gameplay? He said Dawn Of Dragon. It's Dawn Of The Dragon.
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#115 Posted: 21:37:13 05/08/2008
yes! I noticed that! It made me SO angry!
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#116 Posted: 21:40:23 05/08/2008
I Know!!! I mean, Your job is to play games so shouldn't you know the NAME??!!
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#117 Posted: 21:46:50 05/08/2008
And Look! I FINALLY got a pic of Cassandra and Devion on the internet!! I did it with google eyes topic!! Well at least it's here.
Devion, Cassandra, & Holly The Dragonfly is Holly.
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#118 Posted: 22:03:21 16/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Ahem, should I finish the story?
Nice pic, BTW! |
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#119 Posted: 23:02:00 16/08/2008
Thanks!! Whoo! I am back!
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#120 Posted: 02:03:55 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Awesome, your back! Would you like to write the next chapter too, in celebration of you being back? Or, would you rather sit back, relax, and read the one that I would write if you didn't?
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#121 Posted: 14:27:17 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Next Chapter will arrive soon!
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#122 Posted: 15:11:10 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Uh, anyone? Oh well, here it is...
"Infinity," Nalemor cried out in the distance. "I think we may have found it!" Infinty perked up, it had been a few hours since they had been traveling through Invities, and she had gotten pretty run down, and tired. "Come on, Infinity!" Nalemor yelled eagerly. "They could be in danger!" Infinity then glided her achey wings to the stone where Nalemor was standing, and descended with a smile. "Nalemor, is this really it?" She asked facing towards the Golden, stone door. "I...Think so." He stuttered touching the rough, brass knob. He jerked it open, and light spewed everywhere, as the two Dragons tried to hide there eyes. When the light dimmed a small room,practically redussed to rubble appeared. But, when the Golden fog dispersed from the room, jewels appeared to be on every single inch of ground. "This, this is amazing!" He said, his eyes glowing as bright as the gems themselves. ~*~*~*~ A/N I will finish the chapter LATER! ENJOY!!! |
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#123 Posted: 18:06:59 17/08/2008
Sorry. AWESOME!!
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#124 Posted: 20:14:01 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks! I am glad I atleast have one person listening to the story!
The second half will come soon, and then a chapter, or two later I will wrap up the story. |
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#125 Posted: 21:01:06 17/08/2008
Hey guys! LONG TIME NO SEE It's been a while, since I actualy posted something here... Wait! I haven't posted anything here before! This is my first post?! Oh well.... AWESOME Continue of the story, guys But unfortunatly, I can't join ya all with the chapters I'm too busy lately... Sitting on the computer every day 12 hours a day, and I still haven't had a single hour for a break Always typing, typing, listening, drawing, recoding, fixing, posting, etc. WHEN WILL THIS END??!?!!!?!????????!
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#126 Posted: 21:20:22 17/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Awwww, that's to bad, D_C! You where my first buddy-buddy, it seems like we a growing apart, and we are finding new friends! That's great in some aspects, but sad in others. I hope you can do Guest Chapters at least once, or twice! See ya soon!
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#127 Posted: 08:18:02 18/08/2008
I WON'T ALLOW US TO GROW APART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Goes to Alexis1213 to ask for a week off* I WILL write some chapters! I'll try All I need to do, is do all my stuff as fast as posible, right? Well, I guess it is time to start
Don't you worry! YOU are are my first friend here, and that is important for me... I always try to leave "for the first time happened things" in my life. Because that is Memory. The same way as Spyro and Cynder, you'll stay in my memory for ever! Well, and Nalemor ------------------------------------------- ---- --- -- - HEY! If I have time to write these kind of huge posts, then why not have time to make a chapter?!?! |
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#128 Posted: 13:07:00 18/08/2008
Great story!
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#129 Posted: 19:52:43 18/08/2008 | Topic Creator
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OMG, really? This is GREAT!!!!!!!! I can't wait for your chapter! But, no rush! Take your time, take your time.... |
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#130 Posted: 20:42:44 18/08/2008
Alrighty then! I'll write the next chapter, ummm.... Once I'll draw Sapphire for Sapphire, talk to Spyro_Rules about a new Avatar, make new smilies for my MSN, make a new Wallpaper for my Desktop, clean up the mess in my folder on the computer, upload some new pictures on Darkspyro.net, upload my drawings on DeviantART.com, find some game sprites, help Alexis with her forums, find a few musics and download them, and a lot, lot more...... I, personaly, don't think that you guys will survive till the day, I'll write the next Chapter
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#131 Posted: 21:00:10 18/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Geez, how do you even have time to BREATH?
I think I can survive the day, LOL! Just take your time; nothing good comes out of rushing! |
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#132 Posted: 23:38:51 18/08/2008
Yeah, you're right That's why I'll take care of the things I need to do, first ^,^
EDIT (22:36:21 19/08/2008): Well, I was beable to take care of 4/6 part of all of the things I need to do, so I can take a break and start working on the next chapter ^,^ It will take several hours and I don't think, that my skills of writhing chapters are still as good, as they were, but HEY! Atleast you'll see a new chapter |
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#133 Posted: 03:01:03 20/08/2008
Ok, I’m done ^,^ ENJOY!!! This is my bestest chapter, yet ever made by me!
-------------------------------------------------------------------- --- -- - <Chapter 31: The Shadow from the past> “So... What is the plan, Cassandra?” Asin asked the White dragon, with a light of hope, still shining inside, that Malefor can still be turned good. “Malefor, deep inside, is still good… We just need to find him… And bring him back” Cassandra answered to the black dragon. “What do you mean?” Asin asked back. “Come, we mustn’t waste any more time… I’ll tell you everything, once we’ll get to there…” Cassandra finished her phrase and then closed her eyes, concentrating on something. Asin wanted to ask, where will they go, but she decided to don’t interrupt Cassandra. After a short while, Cassandra opened her eyes and said: “Now, JUMP! As high as possible!” Then she flapped her wings and jumped in to the air, but not getting higher above ground even for one feet, she started to disappear, slowly. Once Cassandra disappeared, Asin followed her movements and disappeared the same way. As Asin was lifted in to the air, she felt dizzy… Loosing control of gravity. Then suddenly, a familiar voice sounded in her head: “Oh man! Do I REALLY need to do this silly teleporting thing?!” Then an unknown female voice answered to the familiar one, witch al-so seemed familiar, but yet, never heard before by Asin: “Yes, it is required for the sake of the world. You know, that this type of teleportation is the only way to get there” “Fine, fine… I’ll do it, Shade… But NOT because YOU asked me to!” The familiar voice yelled on the one, who’s name turned out to be Shade. Soon, a scene followed: It was a dark dungeon room. A big black dragon stood in the middle, yelling on a strange looking creature. It was hard to see, how it looked like, because there was no lighting in the room. But the dragon was glowing with a weak light, witch helped to see, how it looked like. It was Asin! Though much more bigger and older. The creature continued the conversation: “Okay… Here goes!” The creature then put its hand behind its back, and once raised her hand up, a shining green crystal was in her hand, lighting the whole room. It was easier to see, how the creature looked like, but as soon as it raised her hand at full height, the light from the crystal became so large and shining, it covered the two creatures as a ball of light and then, became getting smaller, as if it was loosing power. But once disappeared completely, there was no one left in the room, and the vision ended…. Asin woke up, realizing that she was in the same Dungeon room, which she just saw in her vision. “What the? What just happened? Why am I…… here?” Asin asked, confused. It was very dark in the room. She stood up. Then suddenly, a figure appeared from the shadows of the darkest corner of the room. It was very familiar for Asin, especially after that vision. The creature said: “And so we meet again, Asin the Dragon, You are probably wondering, how come I am still as good looking, as before and what I am doing in this world, again…” “What are you talking about?” Asin asked the creature. “Hmmm… I expected to see you much more bigger, then you are right now… But, I guess- Size doesn’t matters, right? Ha hah ha!” “WHO ARE YOU!?” Asin was running out of patience. “Hmmm…. Now I get it… You’re not Asin. Though she is still alive… Within YOU!” The creature started to approach Asin… Asin got scared, seeing how in a fully dark room, where you can’t see anything, you see and feel, how someone is approaching you, and you can’t even see WHO or WHAT it is! Asin ran away, but there was no way to run, or even hide. The room was completely empty. She looked behind, to see if the creature is still there, and suddenly saw something different, then that creature. It looked the same as that creature, yet it was a demonic looking, with a big head, sharp, sword like claws, huge horns on its legs, black skin with red markings all over its body; it was all glowing with an evilly red colored energy. It was approaching Asin slowly, yet fast, as it seemed for Asin. Then suddenly, Asin woke up, again. But this time, she found herself to be in a beautiful, calm and peaceful forest. There was a lake and a river, that leaded its flow right in to the clean waters of the lake. The pixies where happily flying around the lake and between the trees. “It was just a dream…. But it seemed so… real” Asin talked to herself. “Because it was.” Asin suddenly felt the same feeling, as a minute ago. It was a feeling of fear…. fear of seeing that monster… fear of death. Asin slowly, in fear, turned her head around, and when she did, she saw a strange looking animal. It had a big head, black skin and a few markings on her head, hands and legs. It was standing on its back legs. It was Asin’s size. It seemed harmless, but what made Asin still fear and not trust it, is was that it looked so much like that monster, except that that monster didn’t had any clothes on. “Do not fear. I mean no harm. And your dragon friend is safe, too. If you follow me, I will bring you to her” The creature finished and turned around, walked in to the forest. Then Asin remembered, that that creature, with the green crystal, looked extremely similar to this creature, here. “Shade?” Asin screamed, as the creature was walking more and more farther from her. “Yes, my name is Shade. You must have heard it from the vision, didn’t you?” Shade asked, already knowing the true answer. “Who are you!? Where am I???...... What was THAT MONSTER??!!?!??” Asin yelled, approaching Shade, still shaking in fear, because the picture of the monster was still in her mind. Shade answered, seriously, continuing to walk: “You must face your fears…… Before it caused you your life” “What?” Asin asked, catching up with the black animal. “Every single warrior has a fear… And if a Warrior will defeat that fear, he just might save his life… as well as many more lives. It depends on what your fear is. Your fear is: You don’t want to see the most important for you person as… evil. If it’ll get to you having to fight someone, who was your friend, and now nothing but a monster, you won’t be able to raise your hand against him.” “Cynder…” Asin lowered her head, realizing that all that Shade said… is true. “That’s why I will help you defeat this fear” Shade smiled, while thinking: The only one way I can help her defeat her fear, is to tell her, what relationship I and she have shared, back then. Soon, Asin and Shade reached a Stone Castle. Cassandra was standing in front of the entrance, turning to face the two black creatures. --- --------------------------------------------------------------- --- -- - OMG!! Writhing all of THIS spent me like… 4 HOURS!??!? I hope you enjoyed it ^,^ BTW, if you’re wondering, this is how Shade and that monster looks like ^,^ Shade (My Fan Character): http://i354.photobucket.com/al...in/DSC00145.jpg ^Bad quality.... The Monster: http://i271.photobucket.com/al...DemonShadow.jpg ^Not too scary, I know But I needed to find a monstreus picture of Shadow, and there you have it! Demon Shadow BTW in my chapter, I imagine the monster more scaryier, then he is shown here, but I don't know how you guys imagined it, while reading my chapter, so... yeah... |
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#134 Posted: 07:54:30 20/08/2008
not Shadow again......
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#135 Posted: 08:00:33 20/08/2008
HEY! First of all, I didn't use Shadow! I just needed a monster, that looks like my Fan Character- Shade, and the only one that looks like Shade is Shadow, so I needed a Demon Shadow... Besides, the reason I showed you a Picture of Demon Shadow, so that you guys could see, that that monster looks like Shade! Do you understand??? And WHY THE HECK such a harsh reaction I have feelings too, ya know I tried to make it better, and look what happened.....!
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#136 Posted: 08:01:42 20/08/2008
I just wanted to add something new in to our story...
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#137 Posted: 08:02:47 20/08/2008
:"( i was just joking........
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#138 Posted: 08:04:23 20/08/2008
You was joking????
Pweh, what a relief ^,^ I already thought that I got too annoying with the all "Sonic X characters" stuff. |
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#139 Posted: 09:35:14 20/08/2008
Can I write a chap? and bring my new fan charater in? Please?
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#140 Posted: 17:25:26 20/08/2008
Of course you can, Night Owl! ^,^ Though, I was hoping that someone will continue Nalemor's and Infinity's quest in the Invities, but it's up to your decision, what'll happen next ^,^ Go on! I'll be waiting But there's no rush BTW Thanks for adding a new character, that'll make the story even MORE interesting ^,^
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#141 Posted: 17:38:18 20/08/2008
Thank you! I will do it later today.
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#142 Posted: 17:50:18 20/08/2008
NP ^,^
Ok! Just take your time Like I did ("4 hours"!) |
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#143 Posted: 17:56:21 20/08/2008
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#144 Posted: 20:14:27 20/08/2008 | Topic Creator
OMG, that was amazing D_C! I LOVE your chapters! I can't wait to hear what happens next!
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#145 Posted: 07:36:52 21/08/2008
Chapter: 32?! : Luna.
Asin followed the creature, Shade. She found it weird that Shade stood on only two legs, yet it seemed natural for Shade. Shade led her through a long trail through the forest. The forest was dark, yet it was full of light. Asin kept walking and following Shade. Eventually they came to a tunnel, it led down below the earth. “In here.” Shade told her. They walked in. “GRRR!” A mysterious voice growled. “Its me, Luna.” Shade said. “Who’s that with you?” The voice replied in a slightly calmer female voice. “Asin, she is here to see the white dragon who fell from the sky.” “Ok.” The voice continued, “Just say the phrase and the door will open.” Suddenly Asin felt a power growing inside her. It felt like she was being pulled to someone or something in the cave. “ Darkness rules this era, but a hero will arise.” Asin blurted out. The door opened. “How did you know that?” Shade asked. “I just.. knew it, like it was information I had stored but then I found it!” Asin answered. " Then you are a light dragon?" Shade asked. "Yes," "ah. Light Dragons often have the power to do that." He replied. The door opened and revealed a dark blue dragon of Asin's hieght and age. She had a glowing star mark on her forehead. She had horns the same as Asin only the spikes on the end looked like stars. Her chest plates were a brilliant yellow. her wings were dark blue with a light blue membrane. She had brilliant black eyes that seemed to give light into the dusty cave. She had an orange sun mark on her forehead, and a full moon mark on both of her shoulders. "Hi, I'm Luna. And I am a celestial dragon if you are wondering." She ansewered the question that had popped in to Asin's mind. "I can crontrol powerful magic, read the stars and breathe a breath that heals my allies but destroys my enimes. And come in!" she finished. Asin walked in, taking in her surroundings although it was just a dusty old cave. "Asin!" a white dragon gasped. Cassandra. "Cassandra!" Asin gasped back. She ran to the pure white dragon. "I thought you were lost in the realms!" Cassandra told Asin. "I was, then I found my way here and found Shade who knew you!" Luna held back at the edge of the cave, not knowing wether she would be befriend by the newcomer like the white dragon. She sighed. Her life was horrible. First she had been taken as an egg, then she had hatched in the middle of the woods and then she was adopted by Shade. She had never really had a family or a friend. She walkd up to Asin and Cassandra and asked Asin if she could be friends then she told them more about her powers and her life. " Do you want to come on our quest to free Cynder from the darkness? We need some one else who can see in the dark!" Asin asked. "Really?" Asin nodded. "Thank you so much!" Luna said and cannonballed into Asin. "Only if you don't do that!" Asin laughed and struggled free from underneath Luna. ====== LONGEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER WRITTEN! Like it?
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#146 Posted: 07:51:21 21/08/2008
nice, hmm ive never been in this forum before *looks around* maybe i dont belong in fandom...
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#147 Posted: 07:52:21 21/08/2008
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#148 Posted: 14:39:03 21/08/2008
OMG! NIGHT OWL!!!! That was surely the most HUGE chapter, of all you have ever made! (But still not as big as mine But the most important in the chapters is their Sense for the story, not the size ^,^) ...And the gretest so far! I wonder, who's doing the next one? *looks around, but sees no one around* I guess it's my turn, again
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#149 Posted: 16:24:30 21/08/2008
Hey guys, I've just got a good idea for the next chapter, so... Can I make Chapter 33? My sister is going to be on the computer, now, so I'll do it later. Maybe even tomorrow, but I will ^,^
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#150 Posted: 19:54:51 21/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Night Owl, I am srry to say...That was the one of the BEST chapters I have EVER read! Luna is an awesome character, did you make her yourself?
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