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#101 Posted: 23:45:39 21/06/2008
sweet! *chants* do more do more do more do more do more do more do more do more!
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#102 Posted: 08:08:46 22/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Soz, that wasn't the end of the chapter . I clicked on Post Reply when I'd done 1 paragraph and then my computer died .
Chapter 29 Part 2: Spyro was confused, yet amazed at the same time. "Then what now, you've got me what more do you want." Spyro shouted to him. Cynder flew up infront of the cage. "We need your engery..." Spyro looked confused. "What do you mean 'my energy'?" He said confused. Cynders eyes where the same glowing green as Gaul's. "Cynder..." He whispered. Just for a moment her eyes flashed from glowing green to her normal eyes. "Stop it!" Gaul demanded. Spyro grinned. He knew what to do. "Cynder, let it go. Let it drift away from your mind. Without you they will die." Cynder fell to the floor. Spyro peered his head through the bars. "Cynder?" He said nerviously. "Open your eyes Cynder." She lifted her head up to Spyro, he eyes still closed. For a second she oppened he eyes then closed them. It was only for a second but Spyro could see what had happened. "Convexity!" He whispered. Spyro couldn't get out, he was trapped. Cynder hovered closer to his cage. What would he do. To Be Continued... |
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#103 Posted: 08:26:26 22/06/2008
more
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#104 Posted: 09:14:47 22/06/2008
Quote: bionicle2809
I LOVE it!!
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#105 Posted: 09:30:17 22/06/2008
B2809, ur story rockzz
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#106 Posted: 09:39:33 22/06/2008
True , I WILL DIE IF I DON'T READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#107 Posted: 13:42:30 22/06/2008
They are right, this is great!
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#108 Posted: 15:19:28 23/06/2008
DYING, DYING!!!!!!!
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#109 Posted: 15:32:51 23/06/2008 | Topic Creator
keep dying...
(My evil plan is comming to place! Once these mortals have seen my theories video they'll kill there selfs if I don't finish the fanfic! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAAHA) |
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#110 Posted: 15:34:53 23/06/2008
STILL DYING, DYING, you are evil
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#111 Posted: 19:28:18 23/06/2008 | Topic Creator
MWAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHA!
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#112 Posted: 19:31:58 23/06/2008
aaaaaaahhhhhh!! im a Mosher/Emo (MEMO) and now im gunna slit my wrists!!
aaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! need more!!
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#113 Posted: 23:04:43 23/06/2008
As I ve said this could be much better if you worked on the structure of the story; to make it look more like a professional book.
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#114 Posted: 17:03:19 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
The best thing about writing a fanfic is that ONLY I know what happens at the end... I'm even planning 4 a sequel...
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#115 Posted: 17:18:16 24/06/2008
DYING DYING. I know you are gonna say keep dying. and then MWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHH
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#116 Posted: 17:32:18 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
No, that would be evil
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#117 Posted: 19:04:05 24/06/2008
oh plz write more!!
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#118 Posted: 19:04:37 24/06/2008
What she said! ^
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#119 Posted: 19:06:52 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
THIS IS WHAT ALL OF YOU OUT THERE HAVE BEEN DYING FOR!... But be carfull, this ones a tear jurker *grin*, also when you have finnished reading it PLZ DON'T HATE ME!
Chapter 30: The Dark Convexity Cynder took a deep breath. Spyro could see the air around her turn into shadow as she breathed it in. "Sorry Cynder..." Spyro quckly said. He suddenly released an electric orb. Cynder fell backwards. Spyro looked down at her again. He looked at where he was holding onto the bars. They had been melted at his electric attack. Spyro spun around in an electric tornado. The bars snapped off. Spyro glided down to Cynder. Spyro touched her black scaly skin. A back shadow swooped off her skin. She oppened her eyes slightly. "We did it..." She whispered. "I'm sorry Spyro..." She closed he eyes. "Cynder?" He said. "No! Cynder!" Spyro closed his eyes. As he oppened his eyes a tear fell onto her skin. "She's... Dead..." He said to himslef. He couldn't beleve what he had done. He had killed Cynder. The Convexity was keeping her alive, and he'd set it free from her. 'Spyro STOP!' He heard a voice in his head. An image appeared in his head. Spyro was flying in the well of souls as Sparx and Cynder looked up at him. Spyro stumbled around. It was happening again. Images flashed in his head, too quick for him to see. He saw an image of Sparx and Spyro playing when they were younger. It changed to Cynder being tormented by Gaul. 'Spyro... The darkness aproches...' Said another voice. He looked at the body of Cynder, lying there helpless. "Why couldn't it be me..." Spyro said. Behind him, the shadow that had left Cynder quite a while ago was building up. Growing every second. He turned around. The convexity had morphed itself into a large beast with arms and legs. Spyro looked at Cynder, then back at Convexity. 'My destiny is sealed, but you will have more to come in your life...' Spyro thought to himself. "KILL ME! KILL ME IF IT WILL FREE THIS WORLD!" He shouted. Convexity got closer to Spyro. Spyro released a fury of all the elements. Cynders hand twitched. She oppened her eyes quickly. To Be Continued... |
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#120 Posted: 19:11:17 24/06/2008
YEY!!!!!!!!!!! But now your gonna make us wait for another INFINITY! DYING DYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STILL DYING HERE!
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#121 Posted: 19:11:40 24/06/2008
OMG I THOUGHT SHE WAZ DEAD!! MOOOOREEEE!!
BTW, i thought Cynder was dead and Spyro was gunna kill himself...
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#122 Posted: 19:14:42 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Suacide Spyro
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#123 Posted: 19:15:50 24/06/2008
EMO Spyro!!
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#124 Posted: 19:16:43 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
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#125 Posted: 19:25:21 24/06/2008
wat??
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#126 Posted: 19:26:49 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Emo Spyro
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#127 Posted: 19:27:32 24/06/2008
yea man!! u got any more story 4 us??
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#128 Posted: 19:31:52 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Note to LOS: Cynder was dead, so how did she come back to life? All will be explained...
Chapter 31: An End Spyro was firing a fury of all the elements. Cynder had seen this before. It was a test that she had to do when she was younger. She had to survive the strength of such a blast. Nothing survived, only she could. "Spyro, stop!" She shouted. He ignored her, thinking it was his imagination again. "SPYRO!" Cynder shouted. He looked at her. Spryo smilled. The fury took some time, but a sheild protected him from the cloud of Convexity. "Spyro! You need to stop!" She yelled. "I can't! I don't know how!" He responded. He had to concentrate on stopping Convexitys. He looked at her then at Convexity. The sheild grew larger and larger. "Spyro!" Cynder breathed heavily "Your not going to survive this..." "Good!" He said. The sheild rappidly grew. Cynder looked confused. "When you were dead, when I thought you were dead, I couldn't bare it! Now, I'm gonna make it up to you..." He said gasping for breath. "Spyro..." Cynder said. "Good luck..." A tear dripped down her check. She stood and watched as he tempted his own fait. He might have been a purple Dragon but he cannot cheat death. He's going to die. "Cynder..." He said quickly. "I-I-I-I..." Before he could speek he was covered in a blinding light. The light faded. Spyro lay on the floor. He didn't move at all. He was as still as a rock. Cynder walked up to him. "I know..." She said to him. She reached her head down to him and kissed him gently. "I love you..." She whispered. She held onto him and flew out of the mountain. Everybody dies... But not everyday... To Be Continued... |
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#129 Posted: 19:32:48 24/06/2008
YEY!! I gotta stop saying YEY!!
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#130 Posted: 19:39:12 24/06/2008
WRITE IT THEN PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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#131 Posted: 19:46:31 24/06/2008
*_* I really want to read more, but there's nothing to but the comments now
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#132 Posted: 20:09:24 24/06/2008 | Topic Creator
There it is. Soz I din't know anyone would comment while I was editting the comment
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#133 Posted: 02:49:49 25/06/2008
Lol, Well know you know.
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#134 Posted: 15:19:29 25/06/2008
it says to be continued so hopefully there is more am i right?
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#135 Posted: 15:58:20 25/06/2008
oh plz say yesh!!
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#136 Posted: 16:02:46 25/06/2008
Again what she said^
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#137 Posted: 16:08:43 25/06/2008 | Topic Creator
... Alright, theres no use hiding it from you. Yes theres more to come.
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#138 Posted: 16:12:49 25/06/2008
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#139 Posted: 16:14:38 25/06/2008 | Topic Creator
...where did that come from
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#140 Posted: 16:17:55 25/06/2008
You
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#141 Posted: 16:31:12 25/06/2008 | Topic Creator
...slowly walks away backwards...
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#142 Posted: 16:36:15 25/06/2008
????? JUST DO THE STORY!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!
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#143 Posted: 16:57:08 25/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 32: Victory Of Darkness
Cynder carried the body of Spyro into the wilderness of the land bellow. Smoke rose from an object in the distance. "The temple..." Cynder said worridly. She flew quicker and quicker to the temple. Spyro hung motionless from her claws. There was no hope for him, but there was hope for everyone else. The phrophecy will have to wait another 10 generations, but when that day comes Malefor would be defeated. Cynder looked down through the shattered roof of the temple. Ignitus, Volteer, Cyril and Terrador were surrounded by many of the Malefor statues. "We'll give you one last chance, wheres the welpling?" Malefor demanded. Igntus looked up at Cynder. She shook her head back to him. "Im telling you, I don't know!" Igntus yelled to him. Malefor bellowed. "Kill them!" Cynder lowered herself down to the temple floor. "Stop Malefor!" She said as she lay Spyro down of the floor. Cynder wallked back from his body. "He is no longer usefull to us!" Yelled Malefor annoyed. "We want him alive!" He replyed. Malefor lowered his head down to Cynder. "Who killed him?" He whispered to her. Cynder pushed Malefors head backwards. "He killed himself!" She said. She walked backwards. Malefor grinned. Ignitus and the other guardians looked at each other. Malefor flew into the skies along with the staues that followed him. "Cynder, do you say that he killed himself!" Igntus said puzzled. He walked closer to her. "Yes. He used a light fury, something that only I can survive." She replyed. Igntus turned around and looked at the other guardians. "My freinds, it is time." He said to them. Cynder looked confused. To Be Continued... |
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#144 Posted: 17:10:24 25/06/2008
awesome please write MORE!!!!!!
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#145 Posted: 17:16:24 25/06/2008
You are gonna make us wait AGES again. GOOD STORY! Is spyro really dead?
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#146 Posted: 19:49:35 25/06/2008
^ u have to wait till the evil Bionicle stopzz keepin us waitin
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#147 Posted: 20:50:07 25/06/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 33: The Lost Soul
The 4 guardians and Cynder flew into the air, chasing Malefors army. "Where are we going?" Cynder shouted over the gushing winds. Igntus and the others simply ignored Cynders question. They were too busy trying to figure out that question for themselfs. Cynder still carried Spyro. She couldn't keep up with the others. She was getting tierd and couldn't keep flying for much longer. Cynder flew lower to the ground bellow the clouds. She tryed to make out a tall abject in the distance. The clouds eventualy cleared. The army was leading them to the mountain of Malefor. Cynder flew above the clouds. "Ignitus! There leading us to the mountain!" Cynder yelled to him. Ignitus turned around to her. He looked worried. 'Then our fears have been realised...' He thought. The Dragons dived down into the mountain. Cynder dared not go anywhere near the mountain. Not after what had happened before. Ignitus stayed outside of the mountain. "Cynder, we need you." He said calmly. "No, Im not going in there. Not after..." She looked at the body of Spyro. Despite it being over three hours after he had died he was still warm. There was no trace of change in temperature. This was wrong, this was very wrong. Cynder nodded an followed the rest of them into the mountain. Malefor stood tall with his army by his side. He had his back to them. "Convexity!" He yelled. "You strength shall be freed from my army, and returned to you!" With that the many statues surrounding him glowed as they fell to the floor. A beam of purple light shone from the sky. "I can't be..." Said Cynder. Malefor laughed in triumph as the beam got stronger and stronger. "The lost soul shall return!" A figure formed in the beam. A young Dragon, Spyro. Cynder looked shocked. 'How... What!' She thought to herself. Shadow surrounded the figure. The light faded as the young Dragon emerged from the beam. It was like Spyro but with blackned skales. It was Dark Spyro. Cynder stood with her mouth wide open. She looked at the body of Spyro, then the shadowy Dragon that stood infront of Malefor. "No!" She shouted. In a blink of an eye the Dragon appeared infront of her. "Yes? No, what..." It said. Malefor laughed harder. "You thought you'd gotten rid of me. You had planned this all along..." The 4 guardians looked at each other. Dark Spyro walked closer and closer to Cynder in circles. He looked at the dead body lying on the floor. "I think, I'm going to enjoy this..." He said. Cynder was scared. She didn't know why but there was something about standing in the presence of Dark Spyro that sacred her. She looked behind herself. "Theres no were to run..." Dark Spyro said. "You've run out of time..." To Be Continued... |
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#148 Posted: 20:53:24 25/06/2008 | Topic Creator
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#149 Posted: 02:50:16 26/06/2008
Man, I wish people liked my Fan Fic as much as they do yours!
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#150 Posted: 06:54:14 26/06/2008
To Bionicle: CON-TIN-UE, no pressure!
To Spyro LUVA: Post a link or tell me the topic and I'll read it.
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