darkSpyro

@Kjr
Thanks!

@Blayze
Thank you! It's not even close to bieng started though..

r u working on the story

No problem its still awesome though.

Thanks.

@Kjr
Yes I am working on it, I started chapter 4 5 days ago and havent had the time to finish it, but I'm getting around to it. Thanks for at least bieng patient, I know you've been waiting.

your welcome

No, can you stop asking please? I don't know why you two think I am one. Sorry...... I'm not bieng mean but, really, im not a christian.

ok i promis to stop

Thanks..

r u almost done with capter 4 (not to sound in pashunt)

Haha, yeah, I'll get working on that now.

The Forest....The Search of the Evil banes Weapon
Chapter 4

Ace ran for his life on all fours deep with in the forest. He looked around behind him to see the hundreds of demons chasing after him, with bows in their hands. Don't stop running Ace, those things are gaining, and you are weak. spoke a voice inside of Ace's head.

But that's the problem, they ARE gaining. Ace argued in his head, to the voice. I still advise you do not stop, it's better safe than sorry. spoke the voice. Ace hesitated, but he knew he wouldn't get away from the demons. I'm sorry, but i can see they will catch me, so its at least worth the shot to take them down. He spoke through his mind. Very well...I suppose as long as I am a simple voice in your mind I cannot stop you, but at least let me give my knowledge that I have to refresh your abilities. the voice said.

Ace was a green dragon, he had pointed gold horns, and gold like eyes. His wings were long and orange. Ace also wore a small gold helmet on his head, as well as dull green wrapping that went around his two front ankles.



Ace started to find himself glowing, and memory's came in, reminding him of amazing power and strength he remembered how to use. Ace stopped in his tracks, turned around, and readied himself.
With memory of his fighting skills, Ace had no hesitation in his battling. He flew forward, dodging arrow after arrow, and with in time, dodging one by jumping and managing to catch it. Ace took the arrow and threw it with extreme speed right down the middle of a demon. The arrow went strait through the demon, and he fell over, crumpling to the ground. Ace came forward and started to use his earth power, one of his elements. He pulled huge sharply pointed gemstones out from the earth, digging right through demons.

One came up then jabbed a demon through the forehead. Another came right under the feet smashing the demon just between the legs, and causing it to pass out. Ace saw a demon charge at him, so he pulled a rock wall from the ground, and caused the demon to hit it with great force, then go flying backward, nocking into another demon, causing them to get stacked on one and another. With that, Ace, pulled a nicely pointed gemstone from the ground, jabbing between the stomachs of the two stacked demons. Ace continued to knock down and kill demons, though they just kept coming. He only had one option that, might drain his powers and strength, but maybe finsh them off.

Ace curled in a ball and pulled hard rock from the ground, clasping it around him, making a nice ball that Ace could now roll in. He flew forward, and knocked all kinds of demons to the ground, then jumped in the air in his ball, and slammed down on the backs or chests of demons, either breaking their spines, or cutting off their oxygen. After so many kills, Ace found himself against two larger demons, who held large blades, though Ace simply knocked them down then smashed them from the air. Worn out by all the energy Ace had used, he let go of the rock ball he was in, and paused to take a breather.

He looked around and saw no demons left. Each and every one were sprawled on the ground, with blood leaking out, or they were simply knocked unconscious. Either way, with the time Ace had saved for himself, he dashed forward. Ace ran for many feet until he was stopped in his tracks. Out in his way stood a snake like creature. It wore red armor, and had black leather that hooked the armor. The head was longer and thicker than a cobras body. It had razor sharp teeth, and yellow eyes that had a strange red spot, which he assumed would be the pupil in the eye.

Ace, be careful, the creature that stands before you is definitely not one to mess with. spoke the voice. As Ace got a better look at the creature he noticed the mouth had a great set of venom, enough that it seemed to mix with the creatures saliva. He also found it had a black blade, perfectly curved so it could make a nice clean slice through anything that got in this creatures way. Considering these facts, Ace took the voices advice, and ran for his life.

Ace continued to look behind himself, watching as the creature came nearer. After so many times of looking back, he started noticing that this thing had the legs of an eleven foot tall man. With every step the creature took, it came closer to Ace by about, five feet. With that, Ace tryed to mess with the monster. He would make sharp turns through trees, then twirl around going in all kinds of spirals around the thin trees, though the creature seemed to simply slither through the trees and have no hesitation in following Aces path.

With all the energy Ace had already used, he was fairly exhausted, which made it very hard to try and keep away from the creature, especially at the pace this thing was keeping. After so many turns and misleading paths Ace made for the creature, he found himself reaching an opening. With that, Ace pushed himself to move forward. He finally came out from the forest to abruptly stop at an edge of a cliff. Ace turned around hoping to dash back in the forest and continue forward, though the creature had already cornered him.

Ace backed up farther towards the ledge, enough that his foot almost scooted off the edge. He yelped for a second. He stared into the creatures eyes as it drew near. What do I do!? He yelled in his thoughts. He expected for the voice to guide him, although, there was no response. The creature started to raise its blade, ready to slice Aces head off. With no other options, Ace opened his mouth, not very sure what he was doing. He lowered his head. The creature then took its blade and, attempted to slice at Ace. With Aces mouth open, he managed to counter attack, and capture the blade in his mouth. He started to play tug of war with it, using all kinds of strength to forcibly take the blade away from the monsters hand.

Ace finally managed to take it away from it, though using such strength, that he took the blade and threw it in the air. With the blade out of the monsters hands, it reluctantly readied its head, intending to lunge out and take a good bite from Ace. As Ace stood, frozen on the spot, he noticed the blade he had thrown coming down from the air. The blade came down and, just as the creature was ready to strike, bonked it on the head with the blades handle. This caused the monster to lose balance, and have its eyes rolling in all directions. It tryed several times to regain its footing, but failed. Finally, after one last try, the creature came on one foot, and backed up to the left side of the ledge, then fell off.

The thing screeched as it hurdled towards the ground, from the fifty foot high cliff it had fallen from. Ace watched as the monster shrieked, then hit the ground so hard, it created a crater in the ground. With the last of Aces energy, just to ensure that it wouldn't climb back up, still half alive, he pulled a large cylinder made of gemstone from the ground with such force, the monster catapulted through the air, screaming. Then Ace silently watched the thing as it flew off into the distance. Awfully exhausted, Ace still managed to get a hold of himself, then dash off, deeper into the forest.

The Forest....The Search of Evil Banes Weapon
Chapter 4 (Cont...)

After so long, positive that Ace had escaped any enemys, he started to slow his pace, and walk the rest of the way. Where am i even going? He asked in his thoughts. To the weapon you need to finish off the dark lord. spoke the voice. What is that weapon anyway? You'll find out... Hmm... Ace groaned.

Quite the trick you pulled off on that Gerudo. The what? The Gerudo. the voice confirmed.
It was that strange snake like creature you fought off. Oh yeah..that thing. Ace remembered. Why didn't you respond when I asked for help? Ace asked. Because I expected for you to figure it out yourself. the voice said. That's ubnocious. Ace responded with. Ace, your destination approaches. As Ace looked forward, he found himself nearing an opening.

He walked out to find himself in the middle of a nice lighted opening.he didn't walk out of the forest, but he had walked into a wide circular opening surrounded by trees, along with a bit of sunlight shining through the opening. Ace looked all around him. It seemed like nothing but a circle of trees, although there was a small log in the middle, where a full grown tree must have once stood. The light came down, shining onto the log. At long last. the voice said. The voice in Aces mind sounded even louder than it did before. Woa. Ace said bewildered. Your voice is rather loud. Ace said. I'll explain later, but for now.. the voice cut out

Hello? Ace wondered. Ace stared forward, and started to realize that the light shining on the log was beginning to twirl and twist. He watched as the light grew brighter, brighter, then absolutely blinding.
Ace fell to the ground. Doing his best to catch a glimpse of what was happening, he squinted, and saw a dragon start to shape in the light. He didn't get much detail, but the dragon had large wings, a crystal that hung down from the neck, and also short horns that slightly curved. After so long, his eye sight started to focus again. Though as he watched, the dragon he saw in the light was twirling around, turning into one large ball of light.

The light flew down, and struck the log. As this happened, the ball of light started to transform, creating a shape on the log. The light dissipated, and flew into the center of the object. Ace approached the object, and grabbed a hold of it. It was a bow. It was shaped perfectly, the edges of the bow curving off so it held the string tightly. It was made of silkly wood, and the middle held a green gem, although it seemed rather dim. On both sides of the gem were feather like carvings made of silver, crafted into the bow.

Ace held it high. He noticed a socket that also settled on the log. Without hesitation, he grabbed the socket and placed the bow in a silver socket. He took the strap that attached it and threw it around his neck, which after he did so, he found the bow held nice and tight to the right of his stomach. Aces eyes narrowed, and he saw a gold socket that was just beside the socket of which the bow was held.

Ace.. the voice said, though it sounded like it wasn't in his head anymore. He looked around, and wondered if the creature that the voice came from was near. Ace, you may have noticed that my voice sounds more public now. the voice said. This is because my voice this whole time has been translated through this bow. But until now, the only way I could speak to you was by linking to your mind. "Who are you?" Ace said out loud.

His voice was like Vulcans, although it was more of a higher pitch. You will find out, though for now, it is your job to take your bow to the person who has arrows, crafted by the one who meant for the arrows to be passed down to the owner of the bow, you, Ace. "So...this is the weapon that I'm destined to use against the dark lord?" Ace wondered. Indeed. Also, if you continue down, deeper in the forest where the darkest of creatures lurk, you will find the next clue to your destiny. "Alright.." Ace said. "This gold socket is meant for the arrows right?" Ace wondered.

Yes, though the person you look for is not in the forest, there is another reason you must lurk farther down in the woods. the voice said. "Why then?" Ace asked. You will find out, but for now, my only advice is...listen for the music that guides you to peace. "What?" Ace asked. Though the voice didnt answer. With that, Ace decided to follow those orders, and proceed deeper into the woods. While he did so, he tryed to remind himself of that particular sentence of which the voice spoke of, 'Listen for the music that guides you to peace' the voice had said. I wonder what that means... As Ace thought about it more, he proceeded farther into the woods, where he found the forest getting rapidly darker, though the sun was still shining...

Next chapter> Chapter 5> The song of memory

i love chapter 4 its great

oh and this girl said to me this is it a virus that a 9 year old boy spells words wrong just becauce i spelled a word wrong

...eh, ok I can tell she was trying to be rude, though I don't really understand what that person was getting at. It doesn't make much sense in what she was getting at other than you spell stuff wrong, which you don't really.

Oh and, thanks!

Wicked wicked wiiicked, man ace is wicked

do u still like me?????????????

cool!

please say yes

awesome gem, love it, hey, where did you find the website to make your dragons?

Ok wait! I just realized a mistake. LOL, did anybody read "strap gelt darker" in my story? Lol, sorry about that, I think what I meant was "rapidly darker" Edit time!!

Thank you guys! By the way...when you reach the climax of the story (the epic finale) it...will without doubt be the best part of the book! Just wait, you'll see.

@evolutionspyro
If you go into the search box in darkspyro you type "Dragon Generator" where you can create the dragons like I did.

@Camo
Yes, I still like you.

ok,thx

No problem!

do u know when the next capter is?(not to sound pushy)

only gem and god know that silly

i know i was talking to gem

No that's fine!! I have a few ideas about chapter 5, but I haven't begun to start it yet.

well, take your time, its a good story.

coolz

Thanks!

Ok gem check this out

Is that a ghost from packman?? That's awesome! How'd you do that?

you tipe this :blinky:

do u no any secret faces?

cool stuf

Nah I don't know any secret faces.

Awesome!

how do you do that

go PACMAN!

Oh, the orange ghost? It's : clyde : Without the spaces and no capilization in the C.

hope this works

omg, it worked!!!

Lol, I told you! I want to see if there are anymore secrets to those codes, such as pacman.

cool dude

sweet PS how do u do the other ones

Right, for the other ones you make sure there are no caps and also put in the dots ( : ) other than that just type these names. pinky, blinky, clyde, inky, and pacman. See??

ok inky, blinky, clyde, inky, pacman:

dam, hold up, : pinky, blinky, clyde, inky, pacman :

wait, what the?