darkSpyro

Gahh new page lolz!
Oh and thanks, Levi!

I always have to PM you first don't I Pyro?

Hehe nope..

*starts chaptetr 10*

Gr8t!

the chapter is called

OMG what? It's almost over?!

no its just all i could think of

Chapter 10: the end is nie!!!

“Sparx where they?!” Zoe cried

“I-I -don’t know!” Sparx stammered Just then Elora and Hunter came in at that time

“WTF” is going on” Hunter said Sparx and Zoe shrugged Elora saw a note attached to the wall (on the bow she shot) it was written in poor bold hand writing very hard to read)

Dear, Spirow or who ever the **** is reading this,

Ive gote your Grilfriend Cinderr and the only wayy to gett her back is too comee and herr

Ripto


“Ripto I haven’t seen him for ages”! Sparx said

“None of us have!” Elora said

“Well what do we do”? Zoe said

“We go after them!” Elora said They all nodded in agreement

“But where are they?” Sparx said

“I think I know…” Hunter said and he pointed to the mountain of Malefor

“I HATE THAT ****ING PLACE!!!” Sparx remarked

“We all do.” Hunter said they sat off as they reached the foot of the mountain (it wasn’t that far away.) The sun was coming They reached Ripto’s castle at afternoon .They stared in awe. Riptocs came charging at them.. Zoe and Sparx managed to escape Fergor’e and Minius saw this and chased after them. Zoe and Sparx were trying to find Spyro and Cynder. Hoping it wasn’t to late (Although they would be going back to the last save ;p)

“Come back you ****ing fairies” Fergor’e shouted

“We’re not both fairies” Sparx said….

Elora and Hunter got captured and were dragged to the dungeon

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i ONpurpose made those spelling mistakes

Cool! I'll get 2 work on Chapter 11!!

*waits* *plays sonic*

oh yea that rocked! its ending soon?

no i just couldnt think of anything

Phew!!!! I was gunna bez madiziz!!!!!¡ I love this story to much.

we still hav 2 wait 4 chpt 11

I'm workin' on it lol!

Yay can't wait!!

*plays a little more sonic*

Whew! Finally!!

Chapter 11: Let Me Go

"Let me go!!" Cried Cynder, holding the eggs. Spyro had been caught and was now in a seperate cage. Fergor'e and Minius held a bow and arrow to each of them. Fergor'e was going to shoot Spyro, Minius was going shoot Cynder.

"Don't do this," Spyro pleaded.

"Why not?" Fergor'e asked, calmly.

"I have kids now, don't you see?" He pointed to the eggs and Cynder. Then he added, "I have a family now,"

"I don't care! When will you get that in your thick HEAD?!?" Fergor'e yelled the last word and pointed the bow right at Spyro's heart. Spyro gulped.

"Please... What will happen to my children?" Cynder begged.

"Sorry hot-shot, but I gotta do this, or else da Boss man will--- what was that again, sis?" Minius called over to his sister.

"Kill us," Fergor'e said as-a-matter-of-factly.

"Oh right! Or he'll kill us!" Minius said. Then he added, "Alright, ready to die miss?" Cynder started to cry even more, she clutched her eggs tightly.

"Someone save us!" She cried.
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Lol sorry for short chapter...

Ill start now!

Great!! *waits*

Awesome story!

Lolz aww thanks!!

Chapter 12 : FOR AVALARR!!!!!

At that moment Hunter and Elora were thrown in They saw Spyro and Cynder locked up Hunter said

“You thinking what im thinking?”

“Oh yeah!” Elora

“ASS KICKIN TIME!” Hunter said

Just as Minius was about to shoot he got slugged in the face . By Elora. Fergor’e dropped her bow as Hunter picked her up and threw her Spyro and Cynder watched…..Minius Got up and rubbed his head. He got a good look at Elora

he thought: “She’s kinda hot”

Fergor’e got up “YOU ****ING BASTARD!” she screeched she attacked him Hunter drew back. She hit him…hard. he got up.

“FOR NARNIA!” he cried Elora face palmed

“Dude you live in Avalarr” She said

“Oh right ….FOR AVALARR!!!!” Hunter said grabbed rammed back into Fergor’e she hit the wall and didn’t budge

Minius picked Fergor’e up “Ill be back for you sweet cheeks” He said to Elora. She tried to hit him again but Hunter held her back

“IM GONNA KILL EM!!!” she repeated over and over again

Sparx and Zoe finally decide to show up…

Hehe cool!

thnx!!

Awesome, I'm a gonna write Chapter 13 tomorrowz!

okayz

Okey dokey!

i loved what Minius said to Elora

Lololol ya, and you wrote it lol!!

i know!!! ILOLD so ****ing hard after i read that (and or typed it)

I know I LOL alot at myself when I wrote that stuff!

Someone put on the topic name (from 12) cuz there are so many bad words and there are small kids on the site

Lol yeah.. Especially because there's alot a sex talk too lol!
Okay, I'll change the first post..

im 12!

Bwa-ha-ha-hah then you can't read this!!

im an authour of the story of course i can

Lol ya... X)
Oh wellz!

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Who wants to hear what random thing happend in in skool 2day

Shore!

that chapter was awesome!!!

Lol the shortness strikes back! Sorry...

Chapter 13: You're Finally Here?!

"We have to find Spyro!!" Hunter cried, starting to run around aimlessly. Elora sighed.

"And that slut, too," she said and they both ran down the hall in hopes of finding them. Sparx and Zoe followed. They checked in a lot of different rooms but could not find them anywhere. Finally they found them in the very last room on the left.

"There they are!!" Hunter yelled and ran to Spyro's cage.

"Hunter!! Am I glad to see you!!" Spyro sighed. Elora rushed up to his cage as well, along with Sparx and Zoe. Cynder huffed.

"Uh, hello?! I'm over here in a cage too, ya know!" She growled.

"Oh, we know," Elora said smart-aleky.

"Hurry! Get us out before those Riptocs---" Spyro started but was interupted by Hunter.

"Heh-heh, you don't have to worry about them! We kicked their asses before they could say 'Doodly-squat!'" Hunter beamed.

"But still!! Ripto's lurking around here somewhere too, and I have a feeling he'll be back soon----" But Spyro was interupted yet again...

"Well, well, well! And what do we have here??" Ripto smiled, arms crossed. Spyro, Cynder, Elora, Hunter, Sparx, and Zoe's eyes widened and their mouths dropped open.

"Uh-oh...." They all said.

DUN DUN DAAAAAAAA

omg!!!

I know!!

*stats chapter 14*

Sweet!

Chapter 14: Dragon revenge (Holy **** chapter 14 )

“Oh No!” Elora said as Minius poked out from behind the and Ripto smiling evilly.

Hunter had got Spyro out of the cage. He breathed Ice breath on Ripto he was frozen now. Hunter got Cynder out of her cage. Carried two of the eggs Cynder carried one.

“Lets get outta here before he melts” Spyro said they ran out Sparx Grabbed Zoe by the arm pulling her along…..When they got back to the cave they realized Elora wasn’t with them….

She was passed out on the dungeon floor after being hit in the head with a frying pan by Fergor’e .

“Take her to my room” Minius said slyly

“What are you planning on doing” She asked him

“My thing” he said

“GAKKK” she answered

“Just do it” He said

“After we carry master up to his room” She stared at Ripto Screaming in his icy cage. They carried him up to him up to his and sorceress room …Then Elora was carried up to Minus’s room…..