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Deadlier then love [CLOSED]
Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#101 Posted: 18:12:45 21/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Three pages! YES! I cant believe this fan fic made 3 pages! 101 posts! smilie smilie

I feel so proud right now!
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I love you Brittany! ^.=.^
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878
#102 Posted: 21:06:36 21/06/2010
very good story. excellent work. it may be really dark, but i love it. it was really well done. i hope you write more stories. you are a very good writer. you both are.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#103 Posted: 12:24:28 22/06/2010
Huzzah smilie!
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#104 Posted: 03:42:42 23/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Well I am pleased to announce that the my next fan fiction is coming soon! Expect it within 1-2 days or less.
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I love you Brittany! ^.=.^
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#105 Posted: 03:49:10 23/06/2010
cool.I'll be looking for it.
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#106 Posted: 05:05:58 23/06/2010
Link me as soon as it comes out. smilie
cartoon101 Green Sparx Gems: 118
#107 Posted: 22:15:15 23/06/2010
Quote: Tibs
About the sad ending: I wanted to keep the storys dark theme but I also wanted for their to be a happy ending.

I want to say thank you to everyone who took the time out of their day to read my fanfiction and post.

Because this is my first fan fic I am realy curious about how you all liked it. So will you all fill out this survey of sorts?

Please be honest with me.

1. How would your rate this story 1-10?

2. Did you like the dark tone the story had or was it too much?

3. What did you think about the spacing between sentances, dialog and paragraphs? Was it too spread out or was it just right?

4. Did you enjoy reading the "Deadlier then love"?

5. If I wrote another fan fiction would you read it?

6. Did the story impact you emotionally?

7. What was your favorite chapter?

8. What are your final thoughts about the fan fictin?

Also here are some fun facts about the fan fiction.

1. Originally the fan fiction was going to have no fighting in it.

2. 2 Chapters per day was the planned amount of chapters to do.

3. Flame and Ember were not planned to come into the story untill Cartoon101 suggested they should get a alternative story.

4. Sabron and Aithos were the names given to the villians in the story at first.

5. Cartoon101 was orignally only going to proofread the chapters but he wanted to write as well. Though he left the fan fiction at chapter 12.

I think the way the fan fiction turned out is way better then the original idea.

Thanks again!



I did not leave, I just went on vacatain, and was swamped with a decent bit of work, along with the thunderstorm that knocked out my electricity. Do not say what you are unsure of. (oooh more signature!)
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"People try to comprehend that which they cannot understand." ~Cartoon101
Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#108 Posted: 22:34:26 23/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, you left the fan fiction. If you want to help in maing the next one PM me or go to my guesbook. I would be glad to have your help again.
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I love you Brittany! ^.=.^
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 22:34:35 23/06/2010 by Tibs
ShadowCynder12 Green Sparx Gems: 122
#109 Posted: 00:18:17 29/06/2010
Tibs, your writing is absolutely awesome. You could be a professional writer inside.
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SPYRO HATERS ARE JUST JEALOUS smilie
smilie smilie
Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#110 Posted: 01:36:14 29/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Thank you very much. Make sure to check out the sequel. smilie
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I love you Brittany! ^.=.^
DarkCynder10 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3346
#111 Posted: 00:26:02 30/06/2010
Epic. I love it.
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Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#112 Posted: 00:26:58 30/06/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: DarkCynder10
Epic. I love it.



Did you read it? smilie
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I love you Brittany! ^.=.^
DeathStar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1539
#113 Posted: 14:59:15 30/06/2010
I want too wright a story too, could you please help? ( Very nice chapter!)
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"oh sweet sweet sounds of 80s synthesizers, alleviate me...."
black dragon Ripto Gems: 2470
#114 Posted: 21:04:28 30/06/2010
1. 9.5/10

2. I loved it, but it's also me.

3. I thought it was good. Didn't see how it would annoy someone like that.

4. Yeah.

5. Would you even give me a choice?

6. Not really.

7. Can't decide.

8. It is certainly worth reading, and is a good story.

If this doesn't work someone's gonna get SHOT.
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#115 Posted: 21:05:37 30/06/2010
sory it's soo boring
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,,This is where it really ends''
Andi_Shy_94 Red Sparx Gems: 50
#116 Posted: 01:01:04 01/07/2010
I loved this! Even though it was extremely dark and what not.
The only thing I was curious about is what happened to Ember?
I may have accidently glanced over her but I'm EXTREMELY curious...
<3Nick<3
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You're the Purple to my Black <3
Tibs Yellow Sparx Gems: 1183
#117 Posted: 02:31:53 01/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Quote: Andi_Shy_94
I loved this! Even though it was extremely dark and what not.
The only thing I was curious about is what happened to Ember?
I may have accidently glanced over her but I'm EXTREMELY curious...
<3Nick<3


Thank you for reading! smilie Oh and about Ember.


" Ember would go on to live a life of emotional solitude forever remembering the dragon who gave his life to save hers."

From the final chapter.
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I love you Brittany! ^.=.^
Andi_Shy_94 Red Sparx Gems: 50
#118 Posted: 02:37:36 02/07/2010
Thanks Thanks Thanks! :3
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You're the Purple to my Black <3
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#119 Posted: 23:10:54 02/07/2010
I loved that story.
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#120 Posted: 23:43:08 04/07/2010
Ok, you asked me to comment, and so I will..

1. I'd say 8..

2. I'm sorry to disappoint you, I know you aimed for a dark story, but it's nothing new to me.. (Meaning that I did like it, but I don't think it was that dark..)

3. You know the way I like it, If this story truly was inspired by mine.

4. Yes, altough I wouldn't have read it if you hadn't asked me to.

5. If you hadn't asked me, I propably would not. Presumably because I'm a bad reader..

6. No

7. Number 7. I find the occasional violent outburst refreshing.. My story would be full of them, but I've got a number of readers, and most of them wouldn't like it..

8. Overall it's really good, I found no real flaws in the storytelling, exept for the few generic cliches, and the chapter 5. mishap. Good work. I will be reading the next one tomorrow..

EDIT: Almost forgot to add.. It's kinda short. Few more chapters would help bring up tension..
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 17:03:18 05/07/2010 by Samius
Night Owl Yellow Sparx Gems: 1942
#121 Posted: 16:21:40 05/07/2010
1. How would your rate this story 1-10?
10000000000000 *shot*
2. Did you like the dark tone the story had or was it too much?
I loved it. C:
3. What did you think about the spacing between sentances, dialog and paragraphs? Was it too spread out or was it just right?
Just right. |D
4. Did you enjoy reading the "Deadlier then love"?
Definatley. C:
5. If I wrote another fan fiction would you read it?
Yes. C:<
6. Did the story impact you emotionally?
Yes, a bit when Spyro murdered. D:
7. What was your favorite chapter?
All of them *shot*
8. What are your final thoughts about the fan fictin?
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Back from hibernation.
pankakesparx456 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7795
#122 Posted: 23:52:20 15/07/2010
I LOVED this book. It was a really awesome fan-fic.
oh, and for the questions:

1. 10/10

2. I think that was in the middle. I still can't believe Spyro murdured a seven year old dragon. at that point, I got fussy. But still, it desired me to read more

3.just right

4.yes

5.yes

6.i have no answer for that question

7. The first chapter. it really impacted me to read more

8.I think you did very well with this fan-fic.
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Cool cool.
cynder fan Blue Sparx Gems: 588
#123 Posted: 04:32:29 16/07/2010
never mind
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,,This is where it really ends''
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#124 Posted: 15:52:08 16/07/2010
cynder fan fails
crazyspyrofan Yellow Sparx Gems: 1042
#125 Posted: 02:27:36 19/07/2010
^whats new?
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"This twisted game needs to be reset,"-Solo Wing Pixy,Ace Combat Zero.
SequoiaDragon Emerald Sparx Gems: 3930
#126 Posted: 04:08:28 31/07/2010
Good story, I like the parallel action in the first chapter. smilie

(And... I don't think you have to worry about people not reading this, in case you can't already tell. smilie I wish I had your fortune.)
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My book Harahpin is now on sale! smilie
LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#127 Posted: 23:50:44 05/08/2010
Cool story, i loved it, well it has much dark tone, but it was ok.
11/10
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