darkSpyro

Well, just to warn you when you get back, that there will be tons of new chapters on my story. I'm getting really excited about this one.

I'm sorry that I havent posted a new chapter today,I have had a busy weekend so far.I will try to post one tommarow if I have the time.

I am really sorry everyone.I promise to finish the story as soon as I can.I have just gotten really busy lately.

@Samius:???????????

Aw Samius, let him explain his way ^_^ I know people ask me things about my story I give the same answer 'wait and see!'
I call it suspense heh but then again in books it's 'to each their own'

What important thing have you asked and has not yet been answered?

Also,I will post a new chapter tonight.I just got back from camp.

Yay your back! How was camp?

what camp???

It sucked.

@Cynder Fan:Summer camp.Thats why I was gone so long.

what camp???!!!

Awww I am sorry to hear that.

What was wrong with it?

I'll send you a p.m about it later.

p.s:I didnt know you were a star trek fan.

I have only seen The Next Generation stuff and I love it all. It is such a classic and interesting without being all about fighting. I also loved nearly all the characters.

what camp!!!!????

Summer camp Cynder fan.

@Tibs:I am a fan of the orginals and next generation.I think they are both awesome,but anyways we can talk about that later if you want.

We can talk whenever CSF, just PM me.

cool,I will send one in a little bit.I just have to get off the computer for a few minutes so my dad can do something.

Thats fine, no problem.

I pm'd you Tibs.
Here we go.

Chapter23

Spyro was very nervous about this.He had no idea what to expect.He slowly walked into the spiritual room.When he got to the center of the room he began to concentrate on what he was supposed to be doing.
He closed his eyes,then started to feel lighter.

He opened his eyes again.He was now in a pure white area.Something seemed diffrent and he did not feel normal.Is this what it feels like to be in spirit form?Spyro asked himself.

He saw another form taking shape in front of him.It was pure black with white eyes,it was the dark form of himself.The embodiement of evil just as Ignitus said.It was time to fight the evil within.

"You are a fool for coming here,"The dark figure said in an exact eerie form of Spyro's own voice."You came here to destroy the evil within you,but all you've done is just going to help it consume you faster."

"No,"Spyro said,"I will stop you from hurting anyone else"

"You talk as if I am another being,"The dark figure said,"I am a part of you,a dark part that you cannot destroy.""A part that will soon be a whole."

"You're lying,"Spyro said."You're a monster."

"I'm a monster?"the figure asked with a unnerving tone."Who bloodthirtly killed all those apes?:you".Who murdered the mole guards?:you",it then smirked."Who almost killed Cynder....."

"Shut up!",Spyro said with his voice rising.He was starting to get frustrated.

In the most annoying and taunting way possible the figure finished,"YOU".

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"Spyro yelled with rage.His eyes turned red.He charged out towards the figure.He then slashed at it with his claws but it disappeared.

It reappeared behind him."Hehehehe",It chuckled.

Spyro's rage was growing he charged at it full force engulfed with hatred.It then moved on to him.Spyro felt the figure merging with him trying to take him over.

"Yes,"the dark figure said."At last the evil will have full control.""Malefor is gone but now a new dark master will soon arise."

Spyro struggled with all his strength trying to resist,but he couldnt break free.He could feel the darkness merging into his spirit.He would soon be comepletley overtaken by evil.Spyro then thought about everyone he cared about,all those that would suffer if this happened.Cynder,Sparx,Hunter,the elders, they would all pay the price.

Spyro let go of the anger and hatred and used his strength to force the dark figure out.

"What?"the figure asked."How is this possible?"

Spyro then felt a new energy come to him.He suddenly opened his mouth and a light beam came out.It hit the figure and damaged it.

"No",it said and shot a dark beam back at Spyro.Spyro dodged it and shot another light beam.The figure stumbled back weakened.

"This cant be,!"it shouted.

Spyro then combined all of his light energy and gathered it.He let it peak and released it in a light fury.The dark figure then faded away.

Spyro opened his eyes.He had done it.He had defeated the evil within.It felt so relieving.Spyro then slowly exited the room.Ignitus then explained to him that the light power was only temporary and was gone now and also warned Spyro that he was still capable of doing evil things but now he would have as much choice as everyone else.Spyro then went outside and stared into the sunset wondering about the future.


THE END.


I hope you enjoyed this fan fic.Please just tell me your opinions on it and tell me how I may improve the next book.

Also,I have a few squeal ideas in mind.Please tell me which one you want me to use the most.

1.A war book.After defeating the evil within Spyro still feels regret over the things he did.Now a strange race from another universe has entered their realm,can Spyro overcome his grief and help safe it?

2.A book with some romance in it.Spyro still feels bad about what he did in recent events.Cynder is trying to cheer him up and help him get back to his life.She is also trying to find a way to make him recogize her feelings for him and to advance their relationship,but Spyro is too engulfed in his own problems to see that Cynder is also emotionlly suffering.This book will have fighting in it too later on.

Please do the above and thank you for reading.I will be gone this week but will check in when I get back and read your posts.

I think # 1. Very good ending. But what happened to Thal?

I think #2. I like your work and look forward to more, oh and yes what did happen the Thal?

I think #2 because it gives you alot more room to develop the characters and I just plain romance in stories.

Thanks for commenting both of you.As for Thal...........

#2 because it sounds good and I love to read about romance!Plus this was really good and i liked the ending of it!

Thanks to both of you.I guess I will have to do a tiebreaker for the next book.

How 'bout since you can't decide, make the next book be War Romance. Romance happens whilst fighting the war.

That is a very good idea Fireball,but there is only one major problem I will have to work out.If you want to help you can pm me but I will have to spoil some of it for you.

I'll pm you tomorrow.