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YAY! yay!

this is starting to get good.

Thank you! I doubt there are going to be many more chapters in this story, which means I get to start working on the next book! YAY!

actually, that was a quote....lol
but, it is a good story.

LOL! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Okay, so while I was thinking about the next book, I was going to switch points of view to another character, so instead of it being Kayda this and Kayda that, it would be someone else. So, what do you guys think? Should it be Skyler, James, Sierra, or Kierstyn?

NEW CHAPTER! Possibly the final one in this story!

Chapter Eighteen

The sudden entrance scared everbody. But Comet's question startled them all.

"What offer?" James asked.

"Nothing," Kayda replied.

"You didn't tell them?" Comet jeered, "Why, I asked lovely Kayda here if she wanted to ditch you guys and spend all eternity with me, as my queen,"

"SO THAT'S WHAT HE SAID!" Skyler shouted.

"Why didn't you tell us, Kayda?" James asked.

"Oh, well excuse me for thinking that you no longer cared what I did," Kayda replied.

"Of course I cared!" James shouted.

"I hate to break up your whatever it is, but we do have a schedule to keep with, I need an answer," Comet said bluntly.

"Then the answer is no," Kayda said. Comet looked surprised.

"But, but, but WHY?!" he shouted, "No girl can resist my charm!"

"I'm a different kind of girl," Kayda replied.

"Yes she is," Skyler and James both said under their breath. James then glared at Skyler. Comet's eyes were full of rage.

"Fine, don't say I didn't warn you," he said, turning to Axel, "Detonate the bombs after I leave," he told him.

"Will do boss," Axel said. Comet nodded, and vanished. Axel took a button out of his pocket and pushed it.

"You have thirty seconds until detonation," a robotic voice said. Axel smiled demonicly, and waved goodbye, vanishing like Comet had.

"Okay, everybody stay calm," James said, "We need to get outside," They all started walking toward the cavern that led to the surface, but found that it was blocked off.

"We could travel out," Skyler suggested. James shook his head.

"Neither of us could take two people with us," he said. Kayda had an idea.

"James, take Kierstyn," she told him, "And Skyler, take Sierra,"

"But what about you?" James asked.

"I'll stay behind and try to keep the explosion from burning too much stuff," she told him.

"Kayda, that's suicide," James warned.

"It's not, fire can't harm me," Kayda said.

"You don't know whether an explosion like this can, please Kayda, we'll figure something else out," James pleaded.

"Ten seconds until detonation," the robotic voice said.

"James, just go, please," Kayda begged.

"Not without you," he told her. She walked up to him and kissed his cheek.

"Please," she whispered, "Go, and if I don't make it, then atleast I went out like a hero," James swallowed and nodded. He turned to the others.

"Let's go," he told them, his voice full of pain.

"Kayda?" Sierra asked. Skyler took her hand.

"We have to go," he said.

"Five, four, three," the voice said.

"GO!" Kayda screamed, and they traveled out just as the voice said one.

HaHaHa skyler's a perv Skyler's a perv!!!
YES HE IS!!! I should know.....

BTW I found this awesome song That is like the theme song 4 this book!!!

It's called Into The Fire

Quote: Tahreh

Okay, so while I was thinking about the next book, I was going to switch points of view to another character, so instead of it being Kayda this and Kayda that, it would be someone else. So, what do you guys think? Should it be Skyler, James, Sierra, or Kierstyn?

I think you should stay with Kayda's point of view (it's interesting!) but maybe you could change point of view evry othe chapter(like in warriors)

i think it should should be Sierra.

i agree wit nght but i hav to say mycharacter

hey eira that kida soundslike your pinao playing

I keep forgetting schools out. I nearly woke up at six in the morning, thought i was late, and tried to get dressed. Then realized that it was summer.

i dont think i did that

x chews finger nails x i gotta read more, gotta know what happens.

hahaha

x chew water melon x I'll go write something...

No, I'm not doing Kierstyn, yet. I was thinking about flip flopping like warriors, but that would get too confusing with my brain. James is definetly going to be the third book. I'm stuck between Skyler and Sierra. Skyler seems to stand out to me, only because he's so fun to write, but Sierra and her dad could resolve some issues if she had her own book.

So, should it be Book Two: Jet of Light or Book Two: Waters of Fury?

Into the Fire is perfect btw.

*cries then shrugs * oh well i still like the sierra idea

Quote: NightBlade

x chews finger nails x i gotta read more, gotta know what happens.

Yay! I'm doing my job! I'm driving people insane while they wait for the next book like JKR did with Harry Potter! (You guys should have seen me at Books A Million when DH came out)

see unlike my sister i waited till all the ooks were out

*INSPRIATION SMACKS TAHREH UPSIDE THE HEAD* I HAVE BEEN INSPIRED! OMG OMG OMG OMG! THIS IS GOING TO BE GOOOOOOD!!!!!!! *starts typing prologue*

ive been inspired but unlike some people i dont caps it

But this is big!

SIS CHECK OUT MY STORRRRY

I DID!!!!!!!!!!!

i saw that

yay! this is going to be cool!

yepperes

yay! New book!

I still like kayda's PoV....

HOW COME WHEN I GET ON WVERY ONE ELSE GETS OFF!?!?!?!?!?!

LOL! I know that feeling!

I'm sorry Eira! I want to talk to you! I really do! Maybe on Monday or something... I'll be on for most of Monday most likely. Not on Saturday, I have to go take the freakin ACT's... Dx

But I'm going to the beach this sunday!!! T.T
maybe the have wifi there!!!.... No no now that I've said it we're probally not gonna have it..... Can you email meh ch 12-18 so I can show my cousin?

Okies! Anywho, you read the first chap in the new one? I personally think I'm going to rewrite it...

Wat new one?

oh.....

I AM IN THE ULTIMATE FAN OBCESSION MOOD SO IM GONNA POST RANDOM PICS!!! YAY

Kayda: HEY Emo-Kid-That-I-Know-Called-James! Whats up? *Hugs*
James: AHH GINGER!!!!
(tahreh if you don't get that I'll indian burn hex you)

xD OMG I JUST FOUND A SONG FOR COMET! Of atleast, the first verse is definetly.

Head on Collision by Hawk Nelson! But, the second verse, who would that be about?

.....idk DID YOU SEE THE PRETTY PIC!!!

hey eira how do u post pics?

you hit the button the looks like a tree labeled image, then you find an image off of google, hit the see full sized button and copy the URL. Paste it into the thing.

thank you

IT WORKED THANK YOU NB

your welcome!

the ending of the story brought up his song...

I LOVES IT. :D And I would also very much like to have some information on this conversation about Lauren Lopez and demonic Ravenclaws. [:

Okay, so she (lBobessed) was writing about Alice In Wonderland... Hang on, here's the link //forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=30355