darkSpyro

Wait... now I do.

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more moneybags!!!

yes please

yes please morer

OOC: FINALLY POSTING MORE!!!

Chapter 10

Spyro, Sparx, and Cynder sat in the grass in front of the Proffesor's Lab.

"This is insane... We've got to go find Elora."

"I told you not to play that stupid trick on Moneybags."

"Why do you care about Moneybags so much?"

*sing-song* "Cynder and Moneybags sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!"

"Shush!"

***

Elora was standing and looked around. She was somehow back in Summer Forest - part of Avalar.

"Ok, what kind of treasure map is this?!?"

Zoe flew over.

"Hi, Elora, what're you doing here?"

"I'm trying to find the treasure to this treasure map.

"Wait, did Moneybags give this to you?"

"How did you know?"

"He's looking for it."

Elora through the map into Zoe's tiny hands.

"TAKE IT! All it's done is slow me down!!!"

"Um... I guess Moneybags will be happy to see it..."

Zoe flew off, leaving Elora in the Summer Forest by herself.

yes me like more please

I'll make more as soon as I know what to write!

Elora through it? the proper way to say that is threw it. Um... because you said it like, "I went through it.", instead of like, "I threw the ball."
besides my English teacher mom would have scolded you for not using proper English. no offense, though. very funny.

i need more writing

Oh, sorry, homophones really confuse me...

Chapter 11

Zoe flew into Moneybag's shop in the Dragon Village.

"Ah, Zoe, are you here to buy from me?"

"No..."

Moneybags growled.

"Well then why are you here?!"

I have that treasure map you wanted."

Moneybags beamed and grabbed the map from Zoe's hands.

"Thank you, Zoe, now would you like to buy from me?"

"No..."

***

Cynder, Spyro, Flame, sat in the grass behind the Dragon Nursery.

"So... should we just let Elora get lost out there or what?"

"No way! We've got to find her and stop her from walking around randomly forever!"

Cynder shook her head.

"Sorry boys but you started this mess and you have to fix it... I'm not helping!"

Spyro moaned.

"Cynder, we need you help!"

Cynder began to walk off.

"Sorry, but I can't help you."

Cynder left. Spyro and Flame both groaned.

"So... what do we do?"

"WE'RE DOOMED!!!"

Too Short.

But still, nice chapter.

Sorry, I know it was too short! I had to rush out the door so I didn't have much time! It'll be longer next time.

Chapter 12 (i'm only about three chapters away from finishing it)

Elora came running over to Spyro in the Dragon Village.

"Elora? What're you doing here?"

*panting* I just came all the way from Avalar! That stupid treasure map got me lost!"

"What?!?"

Elora nodded.

"I gave it away."

"To who?"

"Well Moneybags said he wanted it, so I gave it to him."

Spyro sighed.

"So now we're back to the first problem!"

***

Meanwhile, in the Cloudy Domain, Flame had agreed to going to find Elora and tell her that the treasure map was just a prank for Moneybags.

"ELORA!!! ELORA!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Sergeant Byrd flew up suddenly.

"Hello, Flame, why are you here?"

"I'm looking for Elora."

"You know, I believe I saw that faun a few hours ago! You just missed her."

Flame sighed.

"Ugh! What do I tell Spyro?"

Moneybags was now following the map again. He was in the Cloudy Domain when he saw Flame and Sergeant Byrd.

"What are you doing here?"

& "Um..."

... this story is very funny , hope see more today

Thanks!!! l'll post more in a few hours when I have more ideas.

yes it is funny thats why i need more

Chapter 13

Spyro was sitting in the grass with Cynder and Elora.

"So it was just a trick all along?"

Cynder nodded.

"Yup, Flame and Spyro thought it'd be funny to play a prank on Moneybags."

"So this is all your fault, Spyro?"

"No! It was Flame's idea!"

Cynder and Elora rolled their eyes.

"Look, we've got to get Flame. Maybe he can fix all of this."

Spyro nodded.

"Well, like I said before: I'm not helping! You started this and you have to fix this!"

*whispering to Spyro* "I like your knew girlfriend, Spyro! She really knows how to handle things."

Spyro growled.

"CYNDER! COME BACK!"

Spyro sprinted after Cynder, leaving Elora alone.

***

Flame and Sergeant Byrd looked at each other.

"You have the map back?!"

"Yup, I took it from Zoe who took it from Elora who took it from me who took it from you."

*mind explodes*

"Well... Uh..."

"Well what did you want to tell me? You seemed as though you had something to say."

*thinking* You know, I think I'm gonna go through with the prank! *not thinking* "Oh, nothing! I just wanted to tell you: Good luck finding that treasure!"

"Thank you!"

Moneybags walked away.

***

Cynder and Spyro were walking into a cave with skulls all over the place.

"Spyro, this is NOT going to work!"

"Calm down, I'm sure she'll help me!"

"You realize this is the stupidest plan in the entire universe, right?"

Spyro shrugged. The two came to a large door.

"I'm gonna call her name."

*rolls eyes* "Sure..."

"ELEMENTAL DRAGON??? Are you home?"

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This is only because I'm only about an hour away from getting to Elemental Dragon in TEN.

lolness

hahahahahahaha!!!

LOL ... cool chapter... wants more , when possible of course.

Ok, next chapter!

Chapter 14

The ground shook as a GIANT, glowing red dragon roared.

:elemental dragon: (no smilie) "Who dares come into my lair?!"

"Spyro, I hate you. Now we're both gonna die."

"I thought you loved me!!"

"I'll only love you if I don't die from this insane idea."

"Fine, we won't die."

:elemental dragon: "Um... Aren't we gonna fight or something?"

Spyro shook his head.

"Sorry, we need your help right now, actually."

:elemental dragon: "WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!"

"Yup, he's insane."

***

Moneybags was now walking around Crocodilla Swamp.

"Hm, I wonder if I'm close to the treasure..."

Blink the mole ran over when he saw Moneybags.

"Hey, bear."

"My name is Moneybags!"

"Who cares? If I'm right then you're the one who owns that stupid shop."

"I'm just trying to make a living, you know!"

"Sure." *note sarcasm*

***

:elemental dragon: "Why should I help YOU?"

"Because I'll be your best friend if you do!"

:elemental dragon: "OK!"

*face palm*

lolness i love this stroy please continue

lolness, that word has grown on me... more please!!!

yes me like saying the lolness

Chapter 15 1/2 (i only have time for half the chapter

:elemental dragon: "So what do we have to do?"

"Well you see... (Spyro tells Elemental Dragon everything)"

"So basically he's gone insane."

"For the last time: IT WAS FLAME'S IDEA!"

"You just keep telling yourself that."

"It's true!"

:elemental dragon: *grabs popcorn* "I like this fan fiction! I hope Cynder kills Spyro!"

:me: "I thought you were supposed to save Moneybags, remember?"

:elemental dragon: "I don't wanna save Moneybags!"

:me: *sighs* "Fine. Spyro, Elemental Dragon isn't in the fan fic anymore!"

Elemental Dragon dissapears in a puff of smoke.

"So, now who do we go for help..?

"Um... I dunno." *shrugs*


OOC: I'm gonna write the other half soon

lolness very random

Yes, very random!

Chaptert 15 1/2 (other half)

Spyro stared at the spot Elemental Dragon was just standing.

"Wait! It says in the fan fiction script that Elemental Dragon saves the day! What do we do now?"

*shrugs* "Let's just end this thing!"

"I'll tell Flame that we just have to get this over this."

"Finally! You have some SENSE!!!"

*frowns*

***

"So you want to find that treasure?"

"Yup! I HAVE to be RICH!!!"

*backs away slowly* "Ok..."

"So what do we do? Where is the treasure?"

"Well let me look at the map."

:NOOOO! MY MAP!"

"Ok, I'm not helping then."

Blink walked away.

"So... um... What do I do now?"

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Only one of two chapters left.

hehehehe...wants more plzz *when possible*

me want more

lol, more moneybags!!!

Chapter 16

Spyro and Cynder had gotten Flame and Ember.

"So we're just gonna end this fan fic... It's getting out of hand."

"Sounds good. This thing has gone insane."

"You finally have some sense!"

"We've got to get Moneybags and take that map from him once and for all."

"Sounds good."

"How?"

"I think we should just let him look forever! That'd be the greatest end ever!"

"That'd be funny, but I think the people reading this fan fic would like to see a HAPPY ending."

"What isn't happy about Moneybags getting lost?"

& *rolls eyes*

***

"I WILL GET THAT TREASURE!!!"

A giant crocodile from Crocodilla Swamp came with an axe and attacked him.

"AHHH!"

Moneybag ran away with the crocodile chasing him. He evetually found a cave.

"Ooh! What's in that cave?"

Moneybags walked in and saw... Something...

"Ooh! Shiny!"

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Ooh... What's gonna happen!

(last chapter coming soon)

Nice. I'm thinking it might be the treasure... *shifty eyes*

lolness it sounds like mony bags is retarded

Hope the next one comes soon

Chapter's here!

Chapter 17 (last chapter)

The four dragons continued to talk as they sat in the grass.

"Ok, I'm just gonna give up and let Moneybags get lost. Happy now, Flame?"

"Yes, I am!"

& *rolls eyes*

"You realize that every Moneybags fan out there will hate this fan fic, don't you?"

"I never thought I'd say this, but Cynder's right! We've got to go save Moneybags!"

Suddenly, Moneybags walked over dragging a huge chest.

"Ah, Flame, I was meaning to thank you!"

"Um... For what?"

"Well I got lost at first, but I followed that map and I got this treasure!"

& "WHAT?!?"

"How much treasure is in there?"

"Ten Billion purple gems!"

Flame fainted, Ember's jaw dropped, and Spyro just sat with his eyes huge in shock.

"I warned you!"

"I hate you."

"I know that's not true..."

"You're right, it's not."

Flame awoke.

"So does this mean you're gonna lower your prices?"

"NO WAY!!! Because I'm rich, I HAVE to raise my prices!"

"That doesn't even make sense!"

"Well I'm rich, so I don't really care!"

*to Spyro* "Let's just end this stupid fan fic!"

Ripto suddenly pops up.

"Ok, this fan fiction is now officially over! The En-"

"Where'd you come from? You're not supposed to be in this fan fic!"

"I don't wanna end this fan fic! I was barely in it!"

"Yeah! Me too! Let's keep this fan fic going!"

:me: "No, the fan fiction's offically done... Don't worry, I'll write another one."

"Phew!"

:me: "Ripto...?"

"It's offically...

THE END!

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I hope you liked it! And I'm gonna start my next fan fiction soon!

Me liky and how can there be a money bags fan thats impossilbe

Lol, yeah, I don't think there are any Moneybags fans!

ME:

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itd called crocodile swamp not crocodilla. thats sounds like a crocodile flavoured ice cream
LAWLNESS

Quote: super spyro

Me liky and how can there be a money bags fan thats impossilbe

lol exactly.
he was designed for hatred. *freaky voice* HATREDDD!!

Lolness!

And crocodilla does sound tlike icecream!

i hate money bags in the game

Yeah, same here. My dad, who play Spyro with me some times, got SO mad when Moneybags made him pay to get places!