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Star: My story (Plz read!) [CLOSED]
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#101 Posted: 03:25:19 22/01/2010
i do! smilie
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#102 Posted: 03:28:27 22/01/2010 | Topic Creator
ok. waiting for one more person to say they want to. then i'll start. smilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#103 Posted: 06:27:12 22/01/2010
more more now for comertial random!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#104 Posted: 06:27:54 22/01/2010
lol! smilie

anyway, your online again finally lol.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#105 Posted: 06:38:38 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
HORRAY!!! smilie
and for the prologe thing, i think it's one vote each. KK, did u say no or yes? i'm a little confused...
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#106 Posted: 07:24:00 23/01/2010
i dont get the protologue
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#107 Posted: 07:25:22 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
it's like.... um....
before the story happened
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#108 Posted: 07:29:54 23/01/2010
OH YA OK smilie
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#109 Posted: 07:30:43 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
ok. i'll make it tommarow. i'm too lazy to do it today. smilie
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but i'm not too lazy to add another chapter!!! smilie
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chapter 19: saving the purple egg
Spyro flies down. We follow his lead and fly down too. A bee tries to hit me but i easily dodge and counteratack with a tail swipe. I keep on hitting bees and apes over and over. Nothing is really happening.
Then, I see some dragons moving eggs to someplace safe. One is dropped, but it dosn't break. Thinking quickly, I pick up the egg then fly over the wall. I make a quick grass nest and put the egg in it. I make a tiny fire a little ways away from the egg to keep it warm, but not to hurt it. I fly back over the wall and start fighting again.
Bolt gets close to me and we start fighting apes together. "Hey, I say tou go out of the city for a few minutes." He says. "What were you doing?"
"Oh, I found an egg. I put it somewhere safe." I answer. "It's not too big of a deal."
"Yea, unless it was purple." Bolt says. I stop and look at him, my eyes wide. I don't notice an ape come towards me. I get knocked backwards. I quickly use my fire breath, making the ape run away.
"What abput a purple egg?" I ask, careful not to get hit by an ape again.
"There's going to be another purple dragon. Of course the egg would be purple too. Did you actully save the purple egg?"
"The egg was purple so, I guess I saved the next purple dragon."
"Your sort of like Ignitus."
"Who?"
"Ignitus. He saved spyro when he was an egg. But, some people think that this isn't a rare purple dragon. The egg came way too early."
"Strange..." I say. Suddenly, all the apes and bees go away. I just realize that there are barely any left. "Hey, the're retreating!"
"Let's go tell Spyro and the others about the egg." Bolt suggests. We both walk to Spyro. "Spyro, Star just saved the purple egg."
"What?" Spyro asked in amazement. "Can you take me to it?"
"Sure" I answer. We find the others and we all fly over to where I left the egg.
"We should get the egg back to Lilac. Come on" Ice Shard says.
I pick up the egg carefully and we fly over the city 'till we see a pink dragon.
"There she is!" Cynder tells me. "Lilac!" She yells down to the pink dragon. "Star saved your egg!"
"Thank you! I couldn't find it anywhere. I'm so glad you had it." Lilac says. I give her the egg.
"I have an idea," Sam tells us. "We should follow the army. It will lead us to the person planning all of this."
"Good idea Sam" Spyro says. "Now let's hurry. We need to catch up. The army has a head start."
We all fly out of the city and follow the army to whoever is causing all this chaos.
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DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!
sadly, he isn't in the next chapter. i think he's in the... second or third one after this. smilie
hope u all liked this chapter! smilie
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#110 Posted: 07:51:42 23/01/2010
NOOO AT LEAST LOOK AT THIS TOMARROW! //www.darkspyro.net/images/nig...ICE%20SHARD.jpg
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#111 Posted: 08:04:36 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
cool, but, i thought she was purple. let me try! (i'll edit this and add it on)
Ice Shard
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Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478
#112 Posted: 09:16:01 23/01/2010
Great chapters smilie
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Heavy: MEDIC!
Medic: NO!
smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#113 Posted: 23:04:34 23/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx. smilie
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chapter 20: Bolt
"I think we should find a place to sleep for the night." Spyro suggests. We've been flying for a few hours and everyone is starting to get tired.
"I think a dragon lives near here." Sharon says. "Hey, she's in the clearing over there! Come on!" She quinkly flies down and we all follow. "Hello, are you Starscream?" Sharon asks the dragon.
"Yes. Why are you here?" Starscream asks.
"We need a place to rest for the night. Can we sleep here?" Sharon asks.
"Sure. There's a cave over there if you get too cold." Starscream tells us, pointing with her wing to a nearby cave.
"Thank you. We'll leave tomarrow morning so we won't bother you too much." Sharon Says.
"Moon, Sharon, Metech, and Starscream walk into the cave, while everyone else stays outside. I would go into the cave, but I want to stay with my sisters. We all make a little fire and rest.
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I can't fall to sleep. I feel lonely. I look around. Almost everyone is sleeping next to someone else.
I look over at Ice Shard. She is still awake. She gives me a sympathetic look.
Suddenly, Ice Shard puts her head down. I know something is up. I look behind me and see Bolt walking towards me. He lies down next to me.
"Do you mind if I sleep here?" he asks. I shake my head. We both put our heads down and go to sleep. I see Ice Shard smile at me. I close my eyes and fall to sleep.
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who liked this chapter? smilie
this wasn't two chapters, it was one. I even wrote it that way in my notebook.
also, i'm going to put the prologe in a few minutes. smilie plz read it! i'll put the link once I write the first chapter.
random word: blanket
random logo: du du du du du. i'm lovin it
random leters: hfwiuahfiejohogreghoahjgoiawhgiohe
plz comment! smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#114 Posted: 00:24:59 24/01/2010
awesome chapter smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#115 Posted: 02:53:18 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx gaming master! i'll add another tomarrow! (hopefully. I have to clean my guiniepig's cage, clean my room, go to church, and do chores. hope i have time.)
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#116 Posted: 02:53:44 24/01/2010
i hate chores!
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#117 Posted: 02:59:11 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
i know! smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#118 Posted: 02:59:48 24/01/2010
they suck!

luckily, i never have any. smilie

my life is WIERED...
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#119 Posted: 03:00:36 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
here's the link for the prologe. smilie
this story's prologe!
smilie
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#120 Posted: 03:38:39 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
(srry about the double post)
a few days ago, I got a cool idea.
since i'm too old for build a bear..
build-a-bear and siarra could team up to make...
DESIGN A DRAGON
it would be cool! (although a lot of stitching would be involved)
there would be a boy dragon shape and a girl dragon shape.
they come in all colors.
-you pick out the dragon body
-choose a stomach color (stitch on)
-choose a wing web color (stitch on)
-choose wing tips (stitch on)
-choose tail tip (stitch on)
-choose horns (stitch on)
-choose crest (stitch on)
-go over to a place with tons of fabric markers
-color the eyes(and put any speacial marks on the dragon)
this part is sort of like cloths
-choose a helmet (optional)
-choose a tail armor (optional)
-choose bracers (optional)
-any speacial necklaces (optional)
-buy it!
who likes my idea?
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#121 Posted: 03:39:59 24/01/2010
i love it!!!!! :heart:!!! lol!!!
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#122 Posted: 03:41:38 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
i know! the idea happened when I was writing a buisness letter in reading class (a fake one) i had the idea to make a buisness letter with this idea. i sometimes actully consider it, but, i don't think that would actully happen.
smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#123 Posted: 03:44:30 24/01/2010
i hope it would D:
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#124 Posted: 03:49:50 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
i might make one. i hope it works. smilie
those companys probebly get so much mail already, it probebly won't work though. >1% chance
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#125 Posted: 03:59:30 24/01/2010
LOL!

new achievement: designer- you have had a creative/good idea for spyro or a company.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#126 Posted: 04:00:40 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
YAY!!!!! ME GET ANOTHER AWARD!!!
how many awards does Karen F have?
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#127 Posted: 04:04:35 24/01/2010
let me see...

new achievement for karen f- rare: has rarely logged on when i was logged in; original bestest friend, award given

new award for goldendragon- common: is almost always on when i am
new award for BEST FAN EVER- common, award given, original bestest friend
new award for Bolt- same as BEST FAN EVER
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#128 Posted: 04:18:35 24/01/2010 | Topic Creator
MORE AWARDS GIVIN OUT!!! HORAY!!!!
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#129 Posted: 08:58:23 24/01/2010
Quote: GamingMaster_76
let me see...

new achievement for karen f- rare: has rarely logged on when i was logged in; original bestest friend, award given

new award for goldendragon- common: is almost always on when i am
new award for BEST FAN EVER- common, award given, original bestest friend
new award for Bolt- same as BEST FAN EVER


YAY IM AN ORIGINAL ALSO SRRY IM USULAY NOT ON WHEN U GUYSS ARE
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#130 Posted: 09:35:24 24/01/2010
lol, ur on now smilie

well anyway... it got u an achievement...

idea: Blocked- i have blocked you. (nobody has this yett)
karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#131 Posted: 00:01:30 25/01/2010
wait blocked me? whats that me ( remember im easy to confuse
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#132 Posted: 00:05:18 25/01/2010
no you havent been blocked
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#133 Posted: 01:15:19 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
it's like being ignored on other websites.
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#134 Posted: 01:26:33 25/01/2010
i know....
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#135 Posted: 04:05:16 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
wow. i JUST realized that i'm on my 21st chapter. wow. smilie
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Chapter 21: starscream's help
"I think we should leave soon" Spyro says. We all just ate breakfest and now all we need to do is find whoever is causing all the ape attacks.
"Thank you for letting us stay here." Sharon says to Starscream.
"Your welcome. Where are you going?" Starscream asks us.
"We're following the army to find out who's been making all the ape attacks." Cynder answers.
"I know where he lives. I can take you there." Starscream offers.
"No, It's ok. We've already bothered you enough." Spyro says.
"I don't mind. Besides, the apes really annoy me when they pass through here. Follow me."
We all fly up and follow Starscream. I'm really nervous that one of us will get hurt when we face the dragon, but I know we have to do it.
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yea, i know, really small chapter. srry.
NEXT CHAPTER FINNALLY
HAS THE DRAGON IN IT!!!!
smilie
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
oh, and, also, i'll get a picture of Starscream as soon as:
-my friend tells Karen F how Starscream looks
-Karen F draws and colors the picture
-I scan the picture
-I make an account on a website that has pictures.
smilie
so, i don't think it will happen too soon. smilie srry ppl.
random word: sushi
random quote:
Quote:
wassabi

random funny phrase: I like to eat watermelons whole
comment ppl! smilie
plz!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#136 Posted: 04:10:21 25/01/2010
awesome!
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#137 Posted: 04:16:49 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
thx! i can't wait till i put the next chapter tommarow, and I'M THE WRITTER! I ALREADY KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!
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karen f Yellow Sparx Gems: 1578
#138 Posted: 05:56:31 25/01/2010
me:GRR MORE! BARK BARK! *drools*
desi: DOWN GIRL DOWN! SIT ...SIT!
me: *sits*
desi: GOOD GIRL*gives treat* NO MORE CHAPS TILL TOMORROW
me: *wimpers & uses inosent puppy eyes*
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#139 Posted: 01:35:53 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
oh, remember when I gave u a dog cookie fri.? smilie
well, i guess i'll write another chapter! smilie
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Chapter 22: Storm
"His name is Storm," Starscream tells us while we are flying. "He lives right down in that cave."
We all land in front of a giant cave.
"This is as far as I can take you." Starscream says. "I'll be tight in the clearing in case anything goes wrong. Just because i'm not fighting, dosn't mean I can't help."
"Thanks again, Starscream" Sharon says.
"No problem." She replies, and flies off.
"Come on, Spyro says. "time to finally meet whos been causing all this trouble.
I'm scared, but I follow the others into the cave. In a few minutes, we all come into a giant part of the cave.
"Hello." I hear a voice say. I turn around to see an adult white dragon.
"So I take it your Storm" I say.
"Lucky guess." he replies. "Now all of you move aside, I'm only fighting Spyro and Cynder."
We all make a protective circle around them.
"Why them?" Sam asks testily.
"They killed my brother. Now I want revenge."
"We've never even met your brother!" Spyro says angerly.
"So, your telling me that you've never met Malefor? Hmmm.... I guess it was someone else then."
"He was your brother?" Cynder asks, astonished.
"Yes, and I plan to get my revenge on you two."
"We didn't kill your brother!" Spyro says."He was trapped. I'm sorry that he was your brother, but you need to let this go."
"I don't think so!" Storm says.
The cave starts shaking, and then a peice of the wall comes off. Something looks at us.
"Golem!" Spyro yells. He flies over and starts hitting it's hand.
I see Storm escape, and I follow him. I see Cynder, Ice Shard, Night, Sam, Sharon, and Moon behind me. I guess the others went to help Spyro.
"He's headed to dragon city!" Ice Shard says."Why would he want to go there?"
I think for a second, and realize what's happening. "He wants to get the purple egg!" I yell."We have to stop him!"
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did u like this chapter? I decided i'm going to start naming all my chapters. I'll go back and edit all of my old chapters and name them too. smilie
hey, that means I might get the dragon time award if i'm fast enough! yay! smilie
random word: pepper
random funny phrase: EGGS WILL RULE THE WORLD!!! BOW DOWN TO EGGS!!! smilie
random food item:hot cheetos
random made up element: laughing gas
random logo: the're GRRRRRRREAT!!! smilie
random color: barf green (hope u arn't eating anything while reading the random color. lol )
plz comment! smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#140 Posted: 01:40:20 26/01/2010
awesome chapter! canrt wait to see whats next! smilie *popcorn*
GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#141 Posted: 01:43:31 26/01/2010
did you see my new art? <3
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#142 Posted: 01:45:54 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
not yet, i will after i've finished naming all of the chapters. so close!
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#143 Posted: 01:47:40 26/01/2010
i know!

anyway, i need to think of an excuse to scan my pictures.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#144 Posted: 01:49:15 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
why do u need an excuse to scan a picture?
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#145 Posted: 02:07:11 26/01/2010
i have other pictures i drew myself.
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#146 Posted: 02:09:03 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
oh.
btw, did i get the dragon time award? smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#147 Posted: 02:11:01 26/01/2010
yep!

here's another art:

[User Posted Image]
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#148 Posted: 02:14:25 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
cool! i luv it! smilie
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GamingMaster_76 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1271
#149 Posted: 02:18:34 26/01/2010
her name is Adria. smilie
Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#150 Posted: 02:25:18 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
cool! is she in ur story?
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