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“He can breathe ice, too?” Blaze, the fire Guardian gasped once Asura told them the news. “But that’s impossible,” Sokka snarled. “he doesn’t have ice dragon blood.” Asura sighed. “But he can, I saw him breathe ice with my own eyes,” Asura insisted. Malefor narrowed his eyes. “It’s true! I can!” he yelled. “This is a breakthrough for the dragon race,” Thunder murmured. “A dragon that can both breathe fire and ice…” “But that’s impossible!” Sokka growled. “Well, you better believe it!” Blaze snapped. “So are you telling me you don’t believe Asura? And your own grandson?” Blaze hissed. Sokka should believe us! He’s my grandfather! Malefor’s blood suddenly ran cold. What if Salmu’s told him? Maybe that’s why Sokka is being so grumpy around me. But he’s like that anyway, he thought. Malefor’s tail twitched. Asura frowned. “Sokka, I am truly disgusted. How could you not believe a Guardian when you are one yourself?” Asura hissed. Sokka opened his mouth to speak, but then thought better not to. “I’ll prove it,” Malefor snapped. Before any of them could argue, Malefor took a deep breathe, and blew with all his might. A chilling, blue and white stream of ice and snow blew out of his mouth. Luckily, he didn’t freeze anything. Sokka was dumbstruck. “I guess you were right…” Malefor’s grandfather muttered. Malefor beamed with pride. “I told you!” he yelped. Asura bent down to talk to Malefor. “Why don’t you go find your parents? I’m sure they would love to know.” Asura whispered into Malefor’s ear. His heart stopped. I can’t face Salmu again! Who knows what he’ll do to me? But he didn’t have a choice, Malefor couldn’t tell Asura, she and the other Guardians would know that he set the Temple on fire. Malefor slowly padded away to find his parents. He gulped. What am I going to say to my father? he shivered at the thought.

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Chapter 5

“You’ve got to be kidding me,” Salmu snarled when Malefor told his father the news. “Fire and ice? That’s just ridiculous.” His father snapped. Malefor narrowed his eyes. “Look, Dad, I know that your still mad at me for burning the Temple, but-” Salmu interrupted his son with a growl. “I don’t care! You could of killed us all! You could of destroyed the Temple for good!” Salmu hissed. Malefor started to panic. “Not so loud, please, other’s will hear.” Malefor hissed. Salmu snorted. “Does it look like I care? My father was right, your mother and I should of never been together.” Salmu snarled and stalked off. Malefor was heartbroken. Salmu, the father he loved, the one dragon he always looked up too, hated him for life now. How am I going to tell Mum? he almost choked out those words. Mellina still had no idea that her own son had set the Temple to flames. But it was just an accident! I didn’t mean for any of this to happen! Malefor clawed at the earth in his anger. Suddenly, Mellina trotted up to her son. Malefor gulped as his mother squeezed him to death. “I heard the news!” Mellina beamed. Malefor stiffened. “I’m so proud! You can breathe ice, too? This is wonderful! I wonder if you have any more hidden powers?” She squealed. Malefor felt icy claws stab at his heart. What am I supposed to say!? Mellina finally let go of her son. “Hey, and guess what?” She smiled. “What?” he squeaked. “Your going to be a big brother!” Mellina beamed.

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Malefor’s mouth gaped open. “W-w…what?” he mumbled. Mellina grinned. “I’ve just had another egg! I know, I should of told you and your father sooner, but I wanted it to be a surprise. You should come and see it! It’s beautiful! And where is your father anyhow?” Mellina looked behind her hoping to see her mate. He shrugged. “I dunno…” Mellina’s eyes narrowed. “Well, he’s got to be around here somewhere. Hey, there’s Anki! Maybe she knows.” and with that, Mellina bounded off with her tail head high. Malefor watched his mother go over to his grandmother. He heard his mother ask where Salmu was, but Anki shook her head sadly. She obviously wanted to find her missing son, too. Malefor felt his stomach twist. Where is he? Salmu probably hadn’t gotten over the fact that his son was the cause of the destruction to the Temple. What would Mellina think when Malefor told her? He shook his head. Malefor had new things to worry about. He was going to have a baby brother or sister! Maybe his new sibling would be a purple dragon like him? There was only one way to find out. Malefor trotted into the Grotto, where the Guardians slept, and where the mother dragons laid their eggs. There was only one nest, and Malefor guessed that it was his mother’s nest. He slowly padded up to it. Malefor sniffed the egg. It was a beautiful sapphire blue, with purple spots. It smelled like his mother and father mixed together. This egg wasn’t either a earth or electricity dragon. This was way beyond strange. That was probably what his parents thought when Malefor first came into the world. He sighed. Well, at least he would have another playmate. But if it was a girl…Malefor prayed with all his heart that the egg would bring him a new baby brother. He quickly padded out of the Grotto, he wasn’t even supposed to be there anyway. He saw Sokka, standing a couple of metres in front of him. “What were you just doing in the Grotto?” his grandfather snarled. Malefor stiffened, his paws frozen to the earth. “Umm…just seeing my new baby brother or sister.” Malefor squeaked. Sokka’s tail flicked. “Hmm…how can I trust your words?” Sokka replied, his voice dark and unwelcoming. Malefor narrowed his eyes. “Because I’m your grandson, your kin.” Malefor snapped. Sokka snorted and stalked away. He paused, and glanced back at the purple dragon. “You shall bring destruction for us all,” Sokka barely whispered those words, Malefor just made out what he said. And with that, Sokka stalked off.

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Thanks guys. I promise I'll write more as soon as possible. (Lol I'm at QueenMika Tinks house right now X3)

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OOC: finally. my game shipped 6 days ago. and.... FINLLY. I GOT THE EMAIL. >.<

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“Wait, Sokka!” Malefor yelped. Sokka turned around and hissed. “What is it?” he snarled. Malefor swallowed hard. “Umm…do you know here Salmu is?” Malefor squeaked. Sokka spat at the ground. “Hmph, why the hell should I tell you?” Malefor growled. “Because I’m his son!” Sokka stumbled back, and fled. Malefor was puzzled. Why did Sokka run away from me?…I should be the one running away! he was still confused.

I'm sorry it's not much, but I can't think of anything at the momment. Lol

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anyway... hope you had a good time ice! when u read this you will have come back.

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Next Chapter!

Chapter 6

It was the Year of the Dragon once again, and the mother dragons laid many eggs; although Malefor’s baby brother or sister hadn’t hatched yet. He hadn’t continued with his training, the Guardians were discussing it over. Still accepting the fact that Malefor could master both fire and ice. Malefor felt extremely guilty, and bad, Salmu hadn’t returned. Mellina was upset and in tears for many weeks, and so was Anki, Salmu’s mother, and Malefor himself.
It’s all my fault, Dad hates me forever now…he told himself over and over again, which made him even more upset. Malefor wished that he had never told his father his horrible secret…

“Malefor, Malefor!” he heard his mother cry. Malefor jolted awake. “Yes, Mum. What is it?” he asked. “The egg!” Mellina cried. “The egg - it’s hatching! Come on!” Malefor ran after his mother into the Grotto, where several mother dragons had gathered around Mellina’s nest. His mother shoved past them to see her new baby. Malefor scurried after his mother. “Look,” Mellina purred as she let her son look at her egg. Malefor stared at the sparkling blue and purple egg. There was a massive crack in it, followed by two more cracks.
Crack! The egg burst open, and a baby blue and purple dragon emerged from the egg. Mellina purred. “It’s a boy- you’ve got a baby brother.” Malefor smiled at his brother. The baby dragon looked up at him- the baby dragon had glistening purple eyes, but he was mainly blue. He looked more like a ice dragon. Mellina’s smile soon faded. “Salmu…he doesn’t know…” Mellina almost started to cry. Malefor hugged her. “Mellina, it’s alright, he’s bound to show up.” one of the mother dragons said. Mellina sighed and let go of Malefor. “It’s okay, Mum, you’ve got me-” he pointed to his brother with his tail. “and you’ve got him, too.” Mellina smiled and licked Malefor. “I’ve come up with a name,” She purred. “Really? What?” Malefor asked. “Gadzooks.” his mother replied.

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Malefor grinned. “That’s an awesome name,” he replied, looking down at his baby brother. “Anyway…Malefor, I forgot to mention-Thunder, the electricity Guardian, wants to see if you can master electricity breath tomorrow.” Mellina beamed. Malefor smiled. He was likely to breathe electricity, because his mother was a electricity dragon herself. “I just wish that Dad was here.” he muttered. Mellina sighed, and hugged her son. “So do I, sweetheart. So do I.” Mellina whispered. “Hrrrrggg.” Gurgled Gadzooks. Mellina let go of Malefor, and leaned over to her other son. “He looks like Salmu, doesn’t he? His face, I mean.” Mellina said. Malefor leaned over to the nest. His mother was right, Gadzooks did look a lot like his father. “Um, I’m going to go play with Ignitus and the others.” Malefor said. “Okay, have fun.” Mellina said, stilling looking at Gadzooks. And with that, Malefor scurried off. He raced out of the Temple, and into the Swamp. Malefor wasn’t going to go play with his friends, he was going to go find his father. It’s all my fault he left anyway. he told himself.

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I will write more, I promise. Just not right now.

take your time. i have a block, too. >.>

Okay, next part! Sorry for the delay.

Malefor searched and searched for many hours, and had no success. Malefor was thinking about heading back to the Temple, his mother and the others would be worried sick about him. (not including Cyril, Crystal and Sokka)
He was about to give up hope, when a orange dragonfly buzzed past his head. “Sup!” yelled the dragonfly. Malefor stumbled back with surprise. Who is this? Malefor wondered. “Wow, I haven’t seen a purple dragon before.” exclaimed the dragonfly, staring at Malefor. “Umm…not to be rude, but who the heck are you?” Malefor asked. The dragonfly grinned, and fluttered up to Malefor’s nose. “Name’s Spark. What’s yours?” the dragonfly asked. “Malefor,” Malefor replied. Spark’s eyes widened. “What an awesome name!” Spark held up a tiny hand. “Give me five!” Malefor was rather confused of Spark’s strange actions, but held up his paw like Spark did. Spark stayed in that position for a few seconds. “Um, dude, don’t you know what a hi-five is?” Spark asked. Malefor was even more puzzled. “What’s a hi-five?” Spark rolled his eyes. “Never mind, watch ya doing here anyway?” Spark asked. Malefor looked down at the ground. “I’m looking for my father, actually.” he replied quietly. “Oh…well, that sucks, that your father is lost. Hey, why don’t I help you? I haven’t got anything better to do.” Spark grinned. Malefor’s eyes brightened. “Really?” “Yup. It‘s what friends do.” Malefor’s eyes widened. “Friends?” Spark laughed. “Yeah! Your officially my friend, dude. Now let’s go find that dad of yours.” And with that, Spark buzzed off. Malefor quickly raced after the dragonfly.

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Next part!

Chapter 7

Malefor and Spark searched for many days, but with no luck. “Argh…dude, I’m starting to think that your dad’s gone.” Spark moaned one day. Malefor stopped and growled. “No, he can’t be dead.” Spark sighed. “Look, bro, your father’s gone. I’m sorry to say it, but…I don’t think we’ll find him.” Spark said. “No!” Malefor yelled. “I’m going to find him!” and with that, Malefor charged off deep into the Swamp. I don’t need him! I can find Salmu by myself. but he felt bad for leaving Spark alone like that. Spark had offered to help Malefor to find Salmu in the first place, even though Spark had no idea who Malefor was. “Yo, wait up bro!” Spark shouted and zipped after Malefor. Malefor waited for the dragonfly. “Sorry, Spark. I didn’t mean to leave you, I just…-” Malefor tried to explain, but Spark seemed to understand. “Hey, it’s okay bro, we’ll find your dad. Relax.” Spark said. Malefor smiled. “Thanks,” he grinned. “No problemo, that’s what friends are for.” Spark grinned. Many hours past, but still neither of them had found Salmu. “Look, dude, I honestly think now that-” “Hey, look!” Malefor cried, interrupting Spark. “What is it?” Spark asked. “There’s another dragon over there, by that tree.” Malefor said, pointing with his paw. “It’s a green dragon…” Spark muttered. Malefor’s eyes lit up. “Dad!” Malefor yelled, and charged towards the green dragon. The green dragon whipped it’s head around, snarling. Malefor skidded, and yelped with surprise. “D-dad?” Malefor squeaked. The green dragon stepped out of the shade and into the light. It was indeed Salmu. “Go away,” Salmu growled. “Dad! Why did you leave? Mum and I where worried sick! Plus, Mum has-” Salmu roared. “Go away! You’re a disgrace for the dragon race!” Malefor shuffled back with fright. What is he saying!? “Hey, pops, calm down dude.” Spark said fluttering up to Salmu’s snout. “Go away, you little pest!” Salmu snorted and flicked Spark away with his claw. “Aaaahhhggg!” Spark yelled, and went flying. “Spark!” Malefor yelled.

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Malefor raced over to Spark, who was lying unconscious on the ground. Malefor snarled. “Dad! Why’d you do that? He was my friend!” Salmu looked away. “Just an annoying pest,” Salmu snorted. “Dad, he’s not!” He yelled. His father growled. “Do you want to know why I left?” Malefor looked at his paws. “Because I was ashamed that my own son set flames to the Temple! I don’t care if you’re my son, you’re a disgrace for dragons!” Salmu roared. Malefor’s heart shattered. No…I didn’t mean too! It was an accident! Malefor roared, and stood on his two back feet. Salmu moved back a little, puzzled by his son’s actions. “It…was…an…accident!” Malefor screeched and blew out a strong gust of wind from his mouth. Salmu roared and went flying.

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that's a lot like spyro's life......... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........

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that's a lot like spyro's life......... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........

Slightly, but completely different.

Sorry for the double post...moving on! X3

Malefor stopped, dazed and confused at what he had done. “Dad! Wait, I’m so sorry! I-” Malefor yelled, but Salmu was no where in sight. Damn it! I just made it even worse! Dad’s never going to forgive me. Malefor glanced down at Spark, who was still unconscious. Malefor nudged the orange dragonfly with his paw. “Spark? Pssst, Spark!” He hissed. Spark made a gurgling sound, but nothing more. Malefor gulped. Gosh, I hope he’s okay. Malefor sighed. Now what? Dad’s never going to forgive me, Mum’s going to go all ape on me since I’ve been away for so long, and Spark is hurt and it’s all my fault! Malefor then collapsed into a heap and wept.
“What is the matter, young dragon?” Rasped a unfamiliar voice. Malefor whipped his head up, and quickly wiped his tears away. The creature that stood before him was a gray snow leopard, with a staff with a blue-green crystal on the top. “Who are you?” Malefor snarled. The cat clicked his tongue. “I am The Hermit,” The snow leopard replied. “And what is a young dragon like you doing here? Shouldn’t you be at the Temple?” The Hermit asked. Malefor jumped back. “How do you know the Temple?” The Hermit chuckled, but didn’t reply. “Come,” The Hermit hissed. Malefor shook his head. “Why the heck should I go with you?! And besides, my friend needs me.” he pointed down to Spark. The Hermit spat on the ground. “Just a pest, now come if you want to know your destiny.” Malefor cracked up laughing. “That’s the most stupidest thing I’ve ever heard! How can you tell me my destiny? I just met you anyway!” The Hermit snarled. “Come, I can teach you things…powers that you never knew you had.” Malefor laughed even harder. “How the heck can you teach a dragon?” The Hermit smiled. “You shall see…now leave the dragonfly and follow me.” Malefor glanced down at Spark. No, I can’t leave him. He’s my friend! Spark was willing to help me when he first met me. I can’t just leave him now! He then glanced at The Hermit. But then again…Malefor took one last look at Spark, then he trotted off after The Hermit. The Hermit grinned. “Excellent…” The Hermit muttered under his breath. “Did you say something?” Malefor asked. The Hermit jumped. “O-oh, no…nothing. Now come.” The Hermit replied as he walked in front of Malefor.

Wow i wounder..................................................