darkSpyro

the next chapter is coming tomorrow afternoon (i'm too lazy to write anymore today)

OK, I can wait

i'll think of new ideas for the story.

Nice scorpian addition. Keep throwing new tortures in to make it interesting.

uhh ok i'll try thinking of new things...

Chapter 25,

Dragsooth had a sleepless night, the pain in his back was too great for him to get even a bit of rest. in the morning lucifer came over to the cell,

lucifer: "well i see you are awake. did you have a good night's sleep?"

Dragsooth slowly picked up his head "what kind of question is that? i couldn't get even a wink of sleep." he quickly put his head back down

lucifer: "Dragsooth why don't you leave that tyrant and join me? you are like a son to me... and when i win this war you can rule alongside me and worship me..."

Dragsooth: "you were never a father to me... you're the worst parent ever!... i wouldn't even think of worshiping you EVER again!"

lucifer: "maybe you can rethink that?"

Dragsooth: "no... my mind's made up... i'll never join you!"

lucifer opens the cell and walks inside, he picks Dragsooth up by the back of his neck, Dragsooth whimpers in pain,

lucifer: "you will join me or suffer greatly!"

Dragsooth: "if i suffer so be it..."

lucifer walks out of the cell carrying Dragsooth in his claws. lucifer walks inside the torture chamber and chains Dragsooth to a table, Dragsooth was laying on his back on top of the table, the entire table suddenly became hot, it was burning Dragsooth's back severely, Dragsooth screamed in pain.

lucifer: "are you going to join me now?"

Dragsooth: "n... n-... NEVER!!" he cried in pain as the table became hotter.

lucifer stood and watched as Dragsooth was screaming and crying, then lucifer unchained Dragsooth and chained him on top of the same table, this time Dragsooth was laying on his stomach chained on top of the table. Dragsooth was crying in pain as the table burned him.

lucifer: "now do you join me?"

Dragsooth: "NO!!!"

lucifer grabbed a beaker full of acid and poured it all over Dragsooth's burnt back, Dragsooth screamed in pain and trashed around trying to get the acid off, lucifer laughed as he saw this.

lucifer: "what about now?"

Dragsooth: "n...n...no!"

lucifer put the beaker down and picked up several really long needles, he breathes fire on them and they become hot, he jabs many of them into Dragsooth's and leaves them in, Dragsooth's screams in pan each time, lucifer jams two needles in Dragsooth's abdomen, Dragsooth cries in pain.

lucifer: "this pain will stop if you join me..."

Dragsooth shakes his head...

lucifer: "fine! i'll have to make you join then!" he roughly takes every needle out of Dragsooth's body.

lucifer bites Dragsooth on the back and injected him with darkness, lucifer let's go of him. Dragsooth's color begins to change from purple to pitch lack, the color of his pupils change to black. lucifer heals Dragsooth and unchains him from the table, Dragsooth jumped off and stood in front of lucifer.

Dragsooth: "what is your bidding master?"


next chapter coming tomorrow

Double OH NO D8!

here's a picture of what Dragsooth looks like now...

Good picture

thank you,

Chapter 26,

lucifer smiles evilly at Dragsooth, Dragsooth looks at lucifer.

Dragsooth: "what is your bidding master?"

lucifer: "go up to Heaven and destroy that tyrant!"

Dragsooth: "as you wish master..."

lucifer: " don't come back here unless he's dead."

Dragsooth: "i won't... if i do feel free to punish me whoever you want."

lucifer: "you know i'll punish you if you don't succeed... now go!!"

Dragsooth: "yes master..."

Dragsooth walks towards Heaven...


In Heaven,

Malinda was weeping for Dragsooth, Jesus was beside her trying to comfort her, he embraced her, she still cried while she was in his arms,

Jesus: "there there Malinda, Dragsooth's going to be alright... he's a strong dragon..."

Malinda: *crying* "why did they take him? he is so young..."

Jesus: "demons go for the weak and the helpless because they are weak themselves... picking on the weak ones makes them feel stronger... don't worry Dragsooth is going to be fine..."

suddenly Dragsooth came through the Temple doors, Malinda turns around and sees Dragsooth coming towards them,

Malinda: "what's happen to him?"

Jesus: "he's been possessed..."

Dragsooth came towards them growling and baring his teeth he uttered a viscous snarl,

Malinda: "what dose he want?"

Jesus: "he wants to kill me."

Dragsooth came closer, Malinda got in front of him and pulled out her sword.

Malinda: "Dragsooth i don't want to hurt you..."

Dragsooth: "you know you can't hurt me! so killing your Master will be easy then!"

Dragsooth breathed shadow at Malinda, the shadow engulfed her and she fell to the ground unconscious, Dragsooth moved closer to Jesus.

Jesus: "Dragsooth you really don't want to do this... fight off the darkness..."

Dragsooth growled and came closer to him.

Jesus: "i don't want to hurt you..."

Dragsooth: "what makes you think you can!?"

Dragsooth approached him even more, a bright light came around Jesus and shown on Dragsooth, Dragsooth stopped and screamed in pain, he stepped back and ran out of the Temple and back to hell,

the light around Jesus faded and he walked over to Malinda, he crouches down and heals her,

Jesus: "are you alright?"

Malinda: "yes..."

Jesus helps her to her feet.

Malinda: "where's Dragsooth?"

Jesus: "he ran back to hell."

Malinda: "can you do something to help him?"

Jesus: "when he comes back i'll get the darkness out of him..."


next chapter coming today

Oh Dear
Good chapter

thanks.

Chapter 27,

Dragsooth ran back to hell, lucifer was waiting for him, Dragsooth walks up to him.

lucifer: "well did you kill him?"

Dragsooth: "no master... he was too powerful..."

lucifer: "WHAT!?... at least tell me you wounded him!"

Dragsooth: "no master i got within striking range though..."

lucifer: "that's not nearly good enough!... you know where you have to go now!"

Dragsooth: "right master... i deserve to be punished for failing you..."

Dragsooth walks toward the torture chamber, lucifer follows closely behind him...


i have to stop here because i'm afraid the power is going to go out with the bad weather... more coming tomorrow

Good chapter

thank you, that chapter was really short though...

Thats OK

Good work on the tortures before, and the chapters now.

thank you.

Chapter 28,

Dragsooth walks in the torture chamber, lucifer walks behind him and picks him up by the back of his neck, lucifer chains Dragsooth on top of a table, lucifer gets out a whip, he starts to whip Dragsooth repeatedly, Dragsooth screams in pain.

lucifer: "this is what you get for failing me!" he whips Dragsooth even harder,

Dragsooth begins to cry. lucifer stops.

lucifer: "even with you being possessed you still aren't very resistant to pain..."

lucifer unchains Dragsooth and chains him on top of another table, this time Dragsooth is laying on his back, the table gets hot and it burns Dragsooth's wounded back, then spikes come out of the table and go into Dragsooth's back, Dragsooth screams in pain, tears stream down his face, lucifer begins to laugh at his pain and distress, lucifer gets out a metal rod and he breathes fire on it, he pressed it against Dragsooth and ran it across his stomach and chest, Dragsooth screams and cries in pain.

Dragsooth: "PLEASE MASTER HAVE MERCY!!"

lucifer: "i like you're plea for mercy... do some more screaming, i like it..."

lucifer took the rod off of Dragsooth and he put his hand on Dragsooth and pushed him even further into the burning spikes, Dragsooth screamed and cries in pain, lucifer laughs.

lucifer: "that's it... that's it..."

lucifer takes his hand off of Dragsooth and picks up a rod with a metal spike at the end of it, he breathes fire on the spike and heats it up, he stabs the hot spike into Dragsooth side, the spike goes in a little, Dragsooth screams in pain,

Dragsooth: "PLEASE... HAVE... MERCY..."

lucifer pulls the spike out of him and goes over to the other side, he heats up the spike and stabs Dragsooth in his other side, Dragsooth cries in pain,

lucifer: "that's it Draggy that's it..."

lucifer pulls the spike out of Dragsooth, Dragsooth has burns and wounds all over. lucifer unchains Dragsooth and picks him up by his horn, he walks over to a large vat filled with acid, lucifer dips Dragsooth in, Dragsooth trashes around in pain, after a few seconds lucifer pulls him out and drops him on the floor, Dragsooth lays there crying in pain breathing heavily.

lucifer: "stand up!"

Dragsooth stands up slowly, he groans in pain.

lucifer: "are you ready to try your mission again?"

Dragsooth slowly nodded.

lucifer: "good!... this time i'll come with you... we'll do this together!"

lucifer heals Dragsooth.

lucifer: "let's go!"

lucifer walks toward Heaven, Dragsooth follows.


next chapter coming tomorrow

Poor Dragsooth
Good chapter

thank you...

LUCIFIER'S A B*ST*RD!!!
He's just like Malefor only worse!
Poor Draggy, but good chapter!

Malefor: "Good, Lucifier! Very good!"
Lucifier: "Thx! I'll do worst things to that tratier Dragsooth!"
*Both laugh menicingly*


Sorry. Very random... PM me if u want it deleted, Torok!

I like it very creative...

Chapter 29,

lucifer and Dragsooth got to Heaven, they flew toward the Temple, they came through the doors of the Temple, a lot of angels ambushed them as soon as they entered, the angels overpowered Dragsooth easily, lucifer broke free and started to flee, Dragsooth struggled to free himself but he couldn't.

Dragsooth: "master help me!!"

lucifer ran back to hell.

Dragsooth continued struggling "let me go!"

the angels chained Dragsooth up and took him to Jesus. the angels dropped Dragsooth in front of Jesus, he came over to Dragsooth and put his hand over Dragsooth's heart, Dragsooth struggled to get away, he trashes around as if he was in pain though he can't move much, Dragsooth suddenly stopped moving and closed his eyes, Dragsooth's body reverted back to it's original form and shape.

Jesus: "unchain him."

the angels unchained Dragsooth, Dragsooth opened his eyes and picked up his head.

Dragsooth: "what happen?"

Jesus: "you were possessed..."

Dragsooth: "all i remember was lucifer biting me and everything went dark... i didn't do anything bad while i was possessed did i?"

Jesus: "well you tried to kill me, you obeyed lucifer's every command and you tried to hurt Malinda..."

Dragsooth: "...i did? is mom alright?"

Jesus: "yes she's fine... go and see her..."

Dragsooth stood up "where is she?"

Jesus: "she's in her home... one of the angels will take you there..."

angel: "i'll take you..."

Dragsooth follows the angel outside and through the city, they come upon a large mansion made out of gold.

angel: "she's in there..."

Dragsooth walks inside the building, there was lots of room inside and there were a lot of doors... Malinda came out of one of the rooms and saw Dragsooth.

Malinda: "Dragsooth!" she ran toward him and hugs him "i'm so glad you're ok! are you alright honey?" she looks at him.

Dragsooth: "yes mother i'm fine... can you let me go now?"

Malinda let's him go.

Dragsooth: "so is this where you used to live?"

Malinda: "yes i didn't live here alone i shared this mansion with lucifer.."

Dragsooth: "really?... so this was his mansion too?"

Malinda: "yes... he didn't mind sharing it with me..."

Dragsooth: "did you share a room?"

Malinda: "no... he had a room of his own... but we can share a room, if you want to."

Dragsooth: "i kinda want a room of my own..."

Malinda: "well ok, i have a vacant bedroom near my room if you want it?"

Dragsooth: "ok i'll take that room... wait that room didn't belong to lucifer did it?"

Malinda: "no... his room was the last one..."

Dragsooth: "oh ok... can i see my room?"

Malinda: "of course..."

Malinda leads him to the room, she opens the door, Dragsooth walks inside and looks around, there was a large bed in the middle of the room, there was a life size crucifix near a wall, there was a big white Bible sitting on a nightstand near the bed, there was a big picture of Jesus on the ceiling.

Dragsooth: "this room is perfect."

Malinda: "i'm glad you like it... it's late why don't we both get some sleep."

Dragsooth: "sure... good night mom."

Malinda: "good night honey..." she closes the door.

Dragsooth goes to the bed and gets on it, he curls up on it and falls asleep...


next chapter coming tomorrow

Dragsooth's back

Chapter 30,

a few hours later into the night Dragsooth was having a nightmare,

*dream*

lucifer had taken over Heaven, he was being worshiped by demons. Dragsooth was taken to him in chains.

lucifer: "you have been faithful to that tyrant till the very end! now i condemn you to hell for your betrayal!"

Dragsooth: "no... NO please don't do this!!"

the ground opened up and Dragsooth felt heat come out. 2 demons threw him in and he was falling toward the flames... *end dream*

Dragsooth woke up "AHHHHH!!"

Malinda came in the room "Draggy i heard screaming... are you alright?"

Dragsooth: "no..."

Malinda came over and sat down next to him "what's wrong?"

Dragsooth: "i had a bad dream..."

Malinda: "was it the one about the torture chamber again?"

Dragsooth: "no... this one was worse... lucifer won the war and he was god, he had demons worshiping him and he threw me in the fires of hell... i could actually feel the flames..." he sat up and leaned his head against her.

Malinda petted him "oh don't worry nothing like that will ever happen... we're safe in Heaven..."

Dragsooth: "that dream was really scary..."

Malinda: "it was only a dream hon... would you like me to stay with you tonight?"

Dragsooth: "yes please..."

Dragsooth layed down on the bed, Malinda layed down next to him, she petted him and started to hum a song to him.

Dragsooth: "what is that you're humming?"

Malinda: "it's an old heavenly lullaby." she continued to hum softly.

Dragsooth's eyes closed and he fell asleep instantly. Malinda fell asleep next to him.


i actually ran out of ideas for this chapter... more coming today.

Good chapter

Chapter 31,

Dragsooth and Malinda were still asleep. Malinda was having a dream.

*dream*
every being in Heaven was inside the Temple. Michael and Gabriel came in dragging lucifer behind them in chains, they threw him in front of Jesus, Malinda was standing a few feet away from lucifer, she looked at him, he didn't notice her, lucifer looked at Jesus with fear in his eyes, suddenly everyone started chanting.

crowd: "throw him in hell, throw him in hell, throw him in hell!!"

Malinda couldn't believe what they were saying, she told them to stop, but he voice was drowned out by the crowds chanting, she looked beside her and saw Dragsooth, he was chanting along with the crowd.

Malinda: "Dragsooth stop agreeing with the crowd!"

Dragsooth looked at her "why this is what that beast gets." he continues chanting.

the crowd's chants become louder as the ground opens up in front of lucifer, extreme heat comes out of the open ground and millions of screams could be heard, lucifer looked inside and flames could be seen, he looked at Jesus with tears in his eyes.

lucifer: "i'm... sorry... i'm sorry... please don't throw me down there... I'M SORRY!"

the chanting became louder "THROW HIM IN, THROW HIM IN, THROW HIM IN!!" the crowd was screaming it now.

Michael and Gabriel grabbed lucifer and started to take him towards the pit, Malinda tries to run toward lucifer but two angels grab her and stop her from going any farther, lucifer was tossed into the pit.

Malinda: "NOOOOOOO!!!"

she got out of the grasp of the angels and ran to the pits edge, she saw lucifer fall into the flames, piercing screams came from him when he landed in the flames, the crowd cheered celebrating, Malinda looked in the pit, she looked at how much lucifer was suffering, a tear rolled down her cheek, then the pit closed up... *end dream*


now wasn't that a sad chapter? i almost felt sad myself...
next chapter coming today

Poor Malinda

Good chapter

thanks. next chapter is coming tomorrow.

Lucifer gets what he diserves!
I feel no pity, shame, sadness, etc for the Father of All Lies!
BURN IN HELL 4EVER LUCIFER!

yeah! i agree.

Chapter 32,

Malinda woke up after having the dream. she looked at Dragsooth who was still asleep, Malinda got out of bed and walked outside.

Malinda: "i have to talk to the Master..."

she walked to the city, she walked inside the Temple, she walks up to Jesus.

Jesus: "Malinda why are you up so late?"

Malinda: "Master i want to know are you going to send lucifer to hell?"

Jesus: "if lucifer doesn't truly repent then yes. why do you ask?"

Malinda: "because he's my brother and i still love him even though he turned evil..."

Jesus: "you're ability to love and forgive is strong... i'll see if he's going to truly repent of his many sins. i'm willing to take him back if he repents..."

Malinda: "thank you Master. i am relieved..."

Jesus: "i'm glad that you feel better. now go back to sleep."

Malinda walks out of the Temple and through the city toward her home, suddenly lucifer comes out of nowhere and pins Malinda to the ground, other demons are also with him.

lucifer: "well well look who it is..."

Malinda: "lucifer don't do this! Jesus is willing to forgive you..."

lucifer: "lies! i know that all he wants to do is torture me if i loose! i'm not falling for your lies!"

Malinda: "lucifer i'm not lying. Jesus really is willing to take you back..."

lucifer: "why!? so that he can make me his slave again!? chain her up!"

the demons chained Malinda up. lucifer dragged her back to hell.


next chapter coming late tomorrow.

Uh Oh
Good chapter

You know what I'm going to say!

no what are you going to say?

BURN IN HELL 4EVER LUCIFIER!
*Chanting w/angels* THROW HIM IN, THROW HIM IN!

I'm very random in many ways!

yeah, sorry i haven't written yesterday (i got home very late and i was tired)

Chapter 33,

lucifer dragged Malinda to the torture chamber,

Malinda: "you got to listen, Jesus is willing to forgive you..."

lucifer: "that's a lie! he only wants me to surrender so he can torture me earlier!"

Malinda: "please don't do this."

lucifer: "oh but i will and i'll enjoy every second of it!"

lucifer chained Malinda on a table.

Malinda: "lucifer please i want you to be in Heaven so that you won't have to suffer in hell."

lucifer: "no! i don't believe that! you and everyone else wants me to suffer in hell!"

Malinda: "no we don't... well others might but i want you to be in Heaven. i want you to be happy... you're still my brother..."

lucifer: "i know you're lying to me! and i'm not believing anything you say!!"

a whip appears in lucifer's hand, he raises it. Malinda closed her eyes waiting for him to hit her... the whipping never came, lucifer stood there for a moment, he dropped the whip.

lucifer: "i've got more important things to do!"

lucifer unchained her and threw her in a cell. he closed the door and walked away.

Malinda sits at the back of the cell "i knew somewhere deep inside of him there was a good side..."


next chapter coming tomorrow.

OOH, Lucifer is finally expressing his good side, only in small chunks.
Good chapter

thanks...

Chapter 34,

lucifer went back to his lair and up to his room. he started to make plans for a raid on the Temple when he heard a voice calling him.

voice: "lucifer... lucifer..."

lucifer looked around, no one was there.

voice: "lucifer it's me God..."

lucifer looked up "what do you want!?"

God's voice: "Malinda is telling the truth lucy i do want you back in Heaven..."

lucifer: "no! i know you're lying! you only want to torture me in hell!"

God's voice: "i never wanted anyone to go to hell, but you sinned and you wouldn't stop. you waged war against me and you never felt any regret... all you have to do is apologize and i'll gladly let you back..."

lucifer: "you think i'll let myself be tricked into giving up so easily!? i know you only want me to surrender so that you can make me into your slave again!"

God's voice: "i only want you to be back in Heaven... i want you to be happy..."

lucifer: "no! i will not be tricked into giving up everything that i worked for so that i can bow the knee to a tyrant like you!!"

God's voice: "fine lucy... i knew you wouldn't be convinced so easily... but i ask that you let Malinda come back to Heaven..."

lucifer: "NO! i will not let her come back to you! you brainwashed her! you turned her against me and i'll undo the damage you did to her!"

God's voice: "if you won't do it because i want you to at least release her out of the goodness still left in your heart..."

lucifer: "NO! i'm not letting her come back so she can be enslaved!"

God's voice: "fine have it your way... you're going to wish you had let her go when i asked..."

lucifer: "what do you mean!?"

there was no answer...

lucifer: "HELLO!? answer me!! what do you mean!!?"

God's voice: "release Malinda within the hour or you'll find out what i meant..."

lucifer: "do you think i am afraid of you!?"

God's voice: "you have been warned lucy..."


next chapter coming tomorrow.

OOH, supension
Good chapter

Chapter 35,

when the hour passed lucifer still didn't release Malinda.

God's voice: "lucifer i give you one last chance release Malinda or i shall curse your army..."

lucifer: "i would never listen to you! i won't let her come back so she can be your slave!!"

God's voice: "very well but remember you had brought this upon yourself..."

a greater darkness came over hell. hell became 10 times hotter. every demon was feeling the heat.

lucifer: "you just made it hotter... HA if you think this will work you are seriously pathetic!"

lucifer was very uncomfortable because of the heat but he didn't want to show it... suddenly every demon felt strong pain, they stopped everything they were doing. they all groaned in pain...

lucifer: "you think a little pain will make me do what you said then you are mistaken..."

a beam of white light shown on the building that held the weapons and armor. the weapons and armor disappeared...

lucifer: "...you think that is going to do anything.... we can just make more armor and weapons..."

God's voice: "fine... i shall go into the next phase..."

a few minutes later a demon barged into lucifer's room. he staggered in.

lucifer: "what is it you want!?"

lucifer looked at him, the demon had big sores all over his body, he looked weak and sick.

lucifer: "what happen to you!?"

demon: "...i.... don't know... i feel like... i'm... going to... die...every part of my body... is in pain... and it's not just me.... all demons are suffering....the same way..."

lucifer: "use some magic to heal yourself."

demon: "i... tried... it doesn't work..."

lucifer used some magic on him. it didn't effect him at all.

lucifer: "are all the others like this?"

demon: "...yes... we are all suffering... even the demon children have the same sickness..."

lucifer walked out of his lair and walked around hell, he saw many demons with the same form of sickness, he saw some of them were dead...

lucifer: "alright... ALRIGHT... you win! i'll release Malinda!"

he went over to the cell and opens it.

lucifer: "you are free to go to Heaven..."

Malinda: "...really?"

lucifer: "yes... just go..."

Malinda walked out of the cell "i hope you consider coming back to Heaven..."

lucifer: "just go! leave!"

Malinda walked back into Heaven... suddenly all the sores on the demons went away. some of them still lay dead...

God's voice: "lucifer you really should come back to Heaven... you are miserable in hell..."

lucifer: "i'm free in hell and nothing that you say could ever make me reconsider this decision!"

God's voice: "i am willing to forgive you..."

lucifer: "...no... no you're not!... i'll make sure i win this war and take your place!! i'll make you and your slaves pay for what you did to me!!"


next chapter coming today or tomorrow

Good chapater

Chapter 36,

Malinda went back to Heaven, she saw Dragsooth coming toward her, he stopped in front of her.

Dragsooth: "mom you're safe... thank goodness.... what did lucifer do to you?"

Malinda: "nothing... in fact he let me go..."

Dragsooth: "... what? he let you go?"

Malinda: "yes he did... i think he's finally expressing his good side..."

Dragsooth: "if he has one..."


In hell,

every demon was standing in front of lucifer's lair, lucifer was in front of them.

lucifer: "since that tyrant destroyed all our weapons and armor everyone must work non-stop until we get back what we lost... well? what are you waiting for GET TO WORK!!"

every demon goes away to work.

lucifer: "i will have my revenge on all of Heaven..."


next chapter coming today

Good chapter

Chapter 37,

a few hours later in hell,

a giant demon army was standing in front of lucifer,

lucifer: "today we will win this war! none shall stand in our way! we will destroy our enemies and take our rightful place in Heaven!!"

all demons cheered,

lucifer: "forward demons!!"

they all marched towards Heaven, they broke through the gates and charged toward the city.

angels tried to defend the city as best they could but the demons were too many in number, lucifer flew toward the Temple.


In the Temple,

Dragsooth and Malinda were with Jesus...

lucifer came through the doors of the Temple

Dragsooth: "what do we do?"

Dragsooth noticed he was alone...

Dragsooth: "mother?... Master?.... where are you!?"

lucifer came in front of him "well look who it is little Draggy..."

Dragsooth: "you'll never take the throne!... not while i'm still here!" he growled at him.

lucifer smiled at him "i never thought it'll be this easy..."

lucifer hit Dragsooth with his tail, Dragsooth crashed into a wall, lucifer walked over to the throne and sat in it, he felt a continuous wave of power come over him.

lucifer: "i won this war!! I AM GOD!!!"

Dragsooth got up and charged toward lucifer, magical chains came around Dragsooth's legs and he plummeted to the ground in front of lucifer.

lucifer laughs at him "what a pathetic attempt..."

Dragsooth shot an ice spike at him, lucifer caught it and crushed it in his hand.

lucifer: "you are pathetic going against your god..."

Dragsooth growls at him,

lucifer: "now now Draggy it's not polite to growl at god..."

a chain came around Dragsooth's jaws.

great darkness came over the land and Heaven became dark, the flowers and the sparkle in the grass went away, the river became dark, the sun did not shine through the darkness, the buildings of gold turned into rock, and at the top of the Temple was a giant statue of lucifer. all the angels and humans were taken prisoner, they were all brought before lucifer and forced to bow down to him.

lucifer: "look who you're all worshiping now!"

the angels and humans were scared. the children that were there started to cry in fear... the demons took all the angels and humans and locked them in 3 cells, one cell was for humans, one was for angels and one was just for children, Dragsooth was with the children...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Oh no D8
Good chapter

Chapter 38,

the little children were crying in fear, some of the older ones were trying to calm them down but nothing seemed to work. Dragsooth just stood there, he was still in shock at what just happen.

Dragsooth: "lucifer is now god... who knows what he's going to do to us... who knows what he's going to do to me..."

he then saw some demons take the angels out of a cell and take them somewhere.

Dragsooth: "where are they taking them?"

a teenager: "probably to be tortured somewhere..."

small child: "one of them is my guardian angel! and they're going to hurt him!?" the child began to cry.

the teenager tried to calm the child down...

a few minutes later Dragsooth saw some angels being taken back to their cells. he saw the expression of pain on their faces. they were all put back in the cell. Dragsooth looks at the cell across from him where all the angels were.

Dragsooth: "what happen to you guys?"

an angel: "the demons branded us!" he rolled up his sleeve to revel a pentagram on his shoulder "they told us that it was a mark symbolizing the worship of our new god..."

a small child walks over and looks at the angel from inside the cell "what does branding mean?"

angel: "... it's where they put something hot on you so that it leaves a mark..."

child: "does it hurt?"

angel: "yes very much..."

the child runs to an older child and hugs her crying in fear...

a few minutes later a lot of demons walk over to the cell and open it, they put chains and shackles and tie up every child's hands they pull them out of the cell and take them away. only Dragsooth is left in the cell. a demon closes the cell door, he looks back at Dragsooth.

demon: "our god has a special treat for you... don't worry you won't be left out..." he walks away.


next chapter coming today, tomorrow or the day after tomorrow

Good chapter

thanks. double post

I hate it when that happens

me too

there, fixed it

Chapter 39,

a few minutes later two demons came up to the cell where Dragsooth was, one demon opens the cell, the other demon comes in holding a chain, he puts the chain around Dragsooth's neck. he tugs on the chain, Dragsooth comes forward a little,

demon 1: "come on! our god wants to see you!"

Dragsooth: "he is NOT my god!!!"

the second demon came behind Dragsooth, he was holding a whip, he hit Dragsooth with it once.

demon 2: "move! NOW!"

the 1st demon yanks Dragsooth forward and stats to walk, Dragsooth lagged behind him. the 2nd demon walked behind Dragsooth, the demon cracked the whip.

demon 2: "walk faster!"

Dragsooth reluctantly walked faster, he was beside the first demon, they walked by a room, the door was closed, the screams and cries of children could be heard.

Dragsooth: "poor children..."

Dragsooth and the demons walked up to lucifer, he was sitting on a throne.
the second demon looked at Dragsooth.

demon 2: "bow before your god!" he whipped Dragsooth.

Dragsooth reluctantly bows down.

lucifer: "demons you may go!"

the two demons left.

Dragsooth looked at lucifer with anger.

lucifer snapped his fingers and the chain around Dragsooth's neck disappeared and a necklace with a pentagram appeared on Dragsooth's neck.

Dragsooth: "what's this for?"

lucifer: "it's a symbol of you're worship of me... oh and it'll drain your magic... watch."

the necklace glowed black and it felt like burning metal against Dragsooth's neck, Dragsooth screamed in pain, he fell on his side and screamed in pain...

lucifer: "the pain means it's working... don't move too much..."

chains came out of the ground and chained Dragsooth in place. the heat of the necklace increased, Dragsooth cried in pain, he felt it sapping his power from him. suddenly the pain stopped. Dragsooth breathed heavily.

Dragsooth: "...oh thank God that's over..."

lucifer: "you're welcome... you have such respect for me..."

Dragsooth: "i wasn't talking about you!"

lucifer: "now now Draggy... don't be rude to god..."

Dragsooth: "you are not God... you don't deserve to be God... Yahweh is God!"

lucifer: "WHAT!!?... what did you just say!?"

Dragsooth: "i said Yahweh is God..."

lucifer: "NEVER say that again!"

Dragsooth: "and what if i do!?"... may Yahweh be praised!"

lucifer: "STOP THAT!"

the chains that were around Dragsooth started to burn him, he screamed in pain, the heat increased 10 times, he struggled but the chains wrapped around him tighter and the pain became greater. lucifer sat back and watched.

lucifer: "you're screams are music to my ears Draggy...let's make it worse shall we?"

acid oozed out of the chains and covered Dragsooth's body, Dragsooth screamed louder, tears were streaming down his cheeks.

lucifer: "this ought to teach you some manners..."

after a few minutes lucifer called two demons to him.

lucifer: "take him back to the cell."

the demons unchained Dragsooth and took him back to the cell. they threw him in there. he passed out from the shock and pain...


next chapter coming tomorrow.

Oh No D8