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#101 Posted: 23:23:29 24/12/2009
Ooo...HES CHEATING!
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#102 Posted: 23:27:50 24/12/2009 | Topic Creator
No, he and Cynder were never going out. they felt love, but in a buddy-buddy way, I know kinda weird but, I hope you understand what I mean!
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#103 Posted: 02:03:35 25/12/2009
Yeah.
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#104 Posted: 03:49:30 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Strange Happenings
Hakushi had been with Tutok for about a month. Yet, he noticed some strange things. he had seen some of the trees shimmering, like a gem. sometimes he would see small clear spots on the ground, but when he came back to the area, they were gone. "Tutok, is this forest.. Magical?" Hakushi asked one day. "No, why do you ask?" she replied with great interest. "Oh, just wondering..." he said quickly. he went out again, for he like being outside. He enjoyed basking in the sun, swimming in the shallow water, and smelling the flowers for hours on end. "Why do you do such foolish things, Hakushi?" Tutok sometimes asked. "It is very fun, and it feels good on hot days." Hakushi smiled. Now Hakushi was troubled, if this was not a magic forest, then it was a bewitched forest. His head shot up. He leaped from the spot he was standing. Now i understand, I have to get Tutok out, before it is too late! Before the bewitching spreads to US! "TUTOK!! GO FLEE AND TAKE THE CART WITH YOU! go back to my valley, I need to take care of something, I may not return. catch as much ood as you can, and put it in the cart, NOW GO!!" screamed, he then attached her to the cart and let her bound away. Hakushi saw one of the glassy places on a nearby tree. He took his chance and leaped onto it. To Be Continued... |
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#105 Posted: 12:51:40 28/12/2009
that was unexpected!
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#106 Posted: 15:49:14 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
twits and turns, Isn't that what stories all about? And I will take that comment as a compliment, so thanks!
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#107 Posted: 19:10:18 28/12/2009
I was was! so yoyur welcome!
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#108 Posted: 23:59:05 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
what? I couldn't make out what you were trying to say, sorry.
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#109 Posted: 00:17:25 29/12/2009
Uh? Oops... Thats what you call spelling mistakes! I was saying: It was a complement. So your welcome!. How did i mess THAT up!
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#110 Posted: 00:31:05 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
I do not know! LOL!
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#111 Posted: 00:41:38 29/12/2009
I must of been on a suger rush or something.
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#112 Posted: 16:32:16 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
LOL maybe, and also the next two chapters will be the last two, sorry. But they will have lots of twists turns and sadness. Trust me, I have BIG things planned. SO DO NOT START CRYING YET!!
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#113 Posted: 19:33:09 29/12/2009
WHAT!? The next two are the LAST! WHY?! Is there going to be a sequl?
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#114 Posted: 20:22:18 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Maybe! MAYBE! and I said don't start crying YET!!
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#115 Posted: 21:10:58 29/12/2009
I know.
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#116 Posted: 21:17:36 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
LOL! So the next chapter will be today, or tomorrow!
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#117 Posted: 21:20:40 29/12/2009
YES!!
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#118 Posted: 23:42:45 30/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Crystal Lair
Hakushi landed on his feet, on crystal. He looked around to see that the entire area was crystal. He looked left and right but not a single thing was as he remembered. He walked around the trees and into a field. "AH!" he gasped as one of the stalks of grass pricked him. The grass was high, over his head. It was easy for him to navigate though the grass, until he reached a large pit. the bottom had large, sharp globs of crystal. on the other side he saw a dragon. His heart leaped as he flew over the pit to the dragon. "Hello!? HELLO!!" Hakushi shouted to him. The dragon turned, his face showed no expression. His voice was hard and sad. "Oh, another dragon, dead. Hello my name is-" "Crystal?" Hakushi guessed. the dragon looked surprised,but then chuckled. "Yes, that is my sister's name, Hakushi. and you must find her to find how to fix your' forest." he said with a smile. "How do you know me name? WHO ARE YOU!?" Hakushi said in panic. "Calm down boy, I am Phenox Eye. And I can see into the world of the living. That is how I know your' name, that is why they call me Phenox Eye!" he laughed. Hakushi was confused, Was he in the under world? "Phenox Eye, where is your' sister? I need to speak with her!" he cried. "She is over that ridge, in her arena. Now go." Phenox Eye said with great wisdom. Hakushi thanked him, and flew over the ridge. he was just over it when the sun rose and Hakushi fell to the ground, a cat. Still he got to his paws and began running. He arrived at the arena, panting and sweating. "LET ME IN! LET ME IN CRYSTAL!!" Hakushi screamed. The large, metal door swung open silently. He entered the arena and saw Crystal and Phenox Eye. Phenox Eye,why is he here?? Hakushi wondered. |
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#119 Posted: 00:29:54 31/12/2009
Uh.....very confusing! I LOVE IT!
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#120 Posted: 00:46:36 31/12/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah, I HATE following the steps of making a story, so I just popped some peeps. in there!!
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#121 Posted: 00:48:41 31/12/2009
HEhehe!
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#122 Posted: 22:27:00 01/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Hakushi's Death
Hakushi ignored Phenox Eye's presence and focused on Crystal. "Have you been bewitching our forest Crystal?!" he called to her. She looked surprised at the mention of 'our', but that soon turned into an evil smirk. She rose to her paws and glided down to him. "Yes, I have. If my realm is to be made of crystal, not a single tree. No moss, grass, or flower that is green, then no one else can!!" she shouted. Anger was in her voice, and her jaws were turning a light blue. Hakushi knew know that she had the power of ice. This was bad for him, she could freeze his venom, and simply shatter his poison. But he saw that there was no other choice but to fight her, for then her powers were to be released. But right when he was about to pounce she flew up, onto a large iron, gritted gate. She then turned the wheel and a large, bubble like, force field surrounded the arena. Two large figures walked through the gate, a cyclops, and a centaur. Now the bubble zapped Hakushi, the cyclops, and the centaur. Hakushi felt furry wings with long claws come from his shoulders, and a long, thick tail. Along his back grew black spikes, and sharper slimmer ones on his tail. His curved, black horns grew from the back of his scull. He fell to the ground, and when he looked up, he saw a monster. for now Crystal had leaped on as well. The creature had short puny wings, and the body of a centaur. It had one eye and it's coat was a sky blue. it had horns just as Crystal's, and long sharp teeth. It reared and began to speak in an echoed, dark tone. "If you want your forest and world back, you must first pass a test. if you pass, then your world will be saved. if you do not, you are supper." "I will die to save my friends!" Hakushi said. The two then raced at one another, growling and screaming with every step. the monster punched his face, and Hakushi bit it's thigh. It howled in pain and again punched him. this time he growled and spit acid on it's face. then it fell, and breathed out heavily. Hakushi stood, and wondered why it had fallen so quickly. Then Phenox Eye glided down to him. "You did it!! You got rid of that beast!" he said with delight. "I am starting to think this was not my real test." Hakushi said glaring at him. Phenox Eye looked startled at this comment but then smiled. "You are not fooled easily Hakushi. Mwa ha ha ha ha!!" he laughed in the same tone as the beast. He then grew and grew, till he was larger than Hakushi. He had grown tentacles from his sides, and become covered in slime. he laughed again as one of the tentacles picked up hakushi, and squeezed him. blood was pumping from his mouth, and just before he could no longer breath, he bit Phenox Eye, poisoning him. He dropped Hakushi, then fell. "You- you have passed my test, now go." he said as a tentacle turned a rock into a portal, right next to Spyro and Cynder. Hakushi took his chance and leaped into the portal. "HOLY CRAP!!" Cynder screamed when Hakushi hit her. Hakushi collapsed still bleeding. Cynder saw his blood stained coat and wondered what had been going on. "Where have you been, what is happening!? You are hurt, Spyro!" she yelled. Hakushi lifted his head. "No my time ends here, do not call him. Cynder, I love you, and nothing will ever change that." he said before laying his head on the grass, and closing his eyes for the final time. _________________________________________________________ that was the end to my story, hope you have enjoyed. wow rely long final chapter. |
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#123 Posted: 01:28:45 02/01/2010
*claps* I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ...I was going to say PLZ continue but thats the last chapter!D:
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#124 Posted: 01:29:30 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
yeah, but I tried to make it a nice end but, what is the fun a happy end.
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#125 Posted: 01:32:38 02/01/2010
Wha'?
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#126 Posted: 01:33:54 02/01/2010 | Topic Creator
What is the fun of a happy end, right?
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