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Chapter 30,

Dragsooth had a pretty sleepless and miserable night,

the same demon from the other night came over to the cell and opened it "alright you can get out now."

Dragsooth: "why should i? i'm like a prisoner in here anyways." he just layed in the cell looking miserable and depressed.

the demon came in the cell and quickly kicked him in the side "come on get up, our master wants to see you."

Dragsooth: "he's not my master."

the demon kicked him again "get up you lazy son of a gun!"

Dragsooth: "i don't wanna."

the demon walked out of the cell, he looked back at Dragsooth "fine, but wait till i tell the master you refuse to see him."

Dragsooth: "oh i don't give a darn what you tell that *******!"

demon: "i'm gonna tell him you said that!" the demon walked away.

Dragsooth just layed there on the stone ground, he felt nothing but depression and regret.

the demon walked up to lucifer.

lucifer: "well where's Dragsooth!?"

demon: "he- he refused to come master, and he even insulted you."

lucifer: "what did he say?"

demon: "he called you a-... *******."

lucifer: "did he just call me foolish and stupid!?"

demon: "yes... but i heard the word '*******' being used..."

lucifer: "oh i am going to do such painful things to him!" he walked up to Dragsooth's cell, "Dragsooth get up!!NOW!!!"

Dragsooth got up and looked at him "what?"

lucifer: "i heard you insulted me. you called me foolish and stupid."

Dragsooth: "no i believe i called you a ****-"

before he could say the whole word lucifer struck him across the face with his tail. Dragsooth fell on the floor,

lucifer: "get up! i haven't even begun to hurt you!"

Dragsooth slowly got up "are you going to keep hitting me?"

lucifer: "i wish... but i have a job for you. go to Heaven and steal any relics you can find."

Dragsooth: "and if i refuse!?"

a whip appeared in lucifer's hand "you really don't want to do that! and don't even think about crawling back to your former Master. now GO!" he cracked the whip and it almost hit Dragsooth.

Dragsooth ran out of there, he went towards Heaven "i can't believe i'm going to steal from my Master..." the thought of that made him sick.

Dragsooth reached Heaven, and walked on a street of gold toward the Temple. he walked inside the Temple, and toward the relic room. he noticed that there were no guards there, he walked inside the room and noticed that every relic that had been stolen has been recovered, he walked over to the holy grail, he reached for it slowly then quickly pulled back, he reached for it again and grabbed it, he walked out of the room with it in his paw, suddenly Jesus was standing right in front of him,

Jesus extended his hand toward Dragsooth

Jesus: "give me the relic Dragsooth."

Dragsooth backed up a little, he still had the grail,

Jesus took a step toward him "give me the relic. right now."

Dragsooth: "forgive me Master..."

Jesus: "for what?"

Dragsooth: "for this.." he ran past Jesus and ran out of the Temple with the grail.

Jesus watched him run away, "Dragsooth's never disobeyed a direct order before. not even when i commanded him to pray the rosary 5 times in a row without using a rosary... poor Dragsooth must be really scared to go against my orders."

Dragsooth made it back to hell with the relic. he saw lucifer, he walked up to him.

Dragsooth: "here, i got the holy grail..." he gave him the grail.

lucifer took it from him "good, did you have any trouble?"

Dragsooth: "yes... a little... but i handled it."

lucifer: "good, i forgive you for acting so rudely to me this morning." he walked away with the grail.

Dragsooth walked towards the room where they keep all the stolen relics, he walked inside and saw the holy grail, he looked around and saw the cross. he walked up to the cross and layed down in front of it, he wrapped his front paws around the foot of the cross and pressed his cheek on the cross, a tear fell on it, "i'm sorry Jesus, i'm sorry... oh what have i done? what have i done!?" he sobbed heavily. he began to pray outloud through his sobs "oh my Jesus, forgive us our sins... save us from the fires of hell... lead all souls to Heaven... especially those in most need of thy mercy... amen." another tear fell on the cross, he just layed there hugging the foot of the cross.


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Chapter 31,

Dragsooth sobbed sadly, he had regretted everything he had done, he didn't let go of the foot of the cross.
lucifer came in the room and saw what was going on.

lucifer: "DRAGSOOTH!"

Dragsooth jumped up in fear and turned around and saw lucifer.

lucifer: "what were you doing!?!"

Dragsooth: "no- nothing...i wasn't doing anything..."

lucifer: "yes you were! you were praying weren't you!!"

Dragsooth: "uhhhhh no i wasn't..."

lucifer: "don't lie to me!" he walks over to him "GET OUT!"

Dragsooth ran out of the room, but stopped while he was outside, he looked back and saw the cross aflame, he ran back inside and breathed ice all over it, the top part of the cross was burned,

lucifer looked at him "you dare interfere with the destruction of the relics!"

Dragsooth: "well i just did!!"

magic chains came around Dragsooth's legs and he fell on the ground

lucifer: "you will have the pleasure of watching the cross BURN!"

Dragsooth: "no... NO!"

lucifer breathed fire all over the cross, Dragsooth had tears in his eyes as he watched it. Dragsooth looked in lucifer's direction he was smileing as he watched the cross burn, as soon as there was nothing but ashes left lucifer picked up the holy grail.

lucifer: "you want to watch the grail get shattered to pieces?"

Dragsooth: "no... NO DON'T DO IT!!"

lucifer threw the grail on the ground and it shattered to pieces. he smiled as he heard the grail hit the ground. he looked at Dragsooth, the chains from around his legs disappeared.

lucifer: "get up!"

Dragsooth slowly got up.

lucifer: "NEVER let me catch you praying again! that just shows how weak you are!"

Dragsooth looked up at him "you are the real weakling here! it takes courage to beg Jesus for forgiveness! you are the biggest coward i've ever seen!"

lucifer: "how dare you preach to me!!?"

chains came around Dragsooth's legs and he fell on the ground, lucifer walked behind him and breathed fire on his back, severly burning him, Dragsooth screamed and cried in agony,

lucifer: "that's it! now beg for mercy from me!!"

Dragsooth: "ne- never..."

lucifer burns him again "beg for mercy!"

Dragsooth: "n- NO!"

lucifer used his claws to claw at Dragsooth's burned back, lucifer was tearing Dragsooth's back up. Dragsooth cried in pain.

lucifer: "apologize to me!"

Dragsooth: "n- never."

lucifer sunk his claws into Dragsooth's back and acid came out of his claws and came onto the wound causing Dragsooth lots of pain. Dragsooth screamed in pain. lucifer roughly yanked his claws out of Dragsooth's back.

lucifer: "are you going to apologize to me?"

Dragsooth was breathing heavily and he was sobbing.

lucifer: "well ANSWER!"

Dragsooth mumbled "i'm sorry."

lucifer: "what was that?" he pretended not to hear him.

Dragsooth mumbled in an angry voice "i'm sorry."

lucifer: "what? i can't hear you, speak up." he pretended not to hear him again.

Dragsooth: "I SAID I'M SORRY YOU SON OF A GUN!!"

lucifer: "say it more politely."

Dragsooth growled at him.

lucifer: "oh i thought you wanted to get out of those chains and get you wounds healed but i guess i was wrong... have fun in here." he started to walk out of the room.

Dragsooth: "NO WAIT!"

lucifer turned around "yes, did you want to say something?"

Dragsooth felt sick to his stomach now "i... i'm.... i'm sorry..."

lucifer released him from the chains and healed his wounds "there was that so hard to do?"

Dragsooth: "it was harder then you thought..." he got up.

lucifer: "follow me!" he walked out of the room,

Dragsooth follows him "that was the most disturbing thing i ever had to do..."


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W00T! nice chapter!

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Chapter 32,

lucifer led Dragsooth into a small building, inside the building was armor, the whole building was filled with armor.

lucifer: "put some on!"

Dragsooth: "uh why?"

lucifer: "don't contradict me just do it!!"

Dragsooth put on some brown body armor but he had no helmet.

Dragsooth: "what's this for?"

lucifer: "i have picked you and some other demons to go and destroy that tyrant!"

Dragsooth: "me? why?"

lucifer didn't answer, "follow me!" he went out of the building, Dragsooth follows him

Dragsooth: "oh i am so not looking forward to doing this..."

lucifer: "what was that!?"

Dragsooth: "no- nothing..."

they walked towards the gates of Heaven, there were about 50 other demons waiting there.

lucifer: "you'll work with them to get the job done! if you return here alive and it's not done... well you know what'll happen!!"

Dragsooth: "no i don't and i don't even want to know..."

lucifer stops in front of the demons "you will be responsible for exterminating that tyrant up there! now GO all of you! and kill him!"

the demons walked into Heaven. lucifer turns to Dragsooth

lucifer: "well what are you waiting for?! GO!!!"

Dragsooth runs into Heaven along with the other demons. they head for the Temple. but as soon as Dragsooth sees the Temple he stops and runs in front of the group of demons and blocks their way.

Dragsooth: "I WON'T LET YOU HURT MY REAL MASTER!!!"

a demon: "what are you saying? lucifer is your real master now."

Dragsooth: "NO he isn't! he never was! Jesus is my one and only Master and i won't let you hurt him!!!" Dragsooth bares his teeth and crouches into an attack position.

a few demons run at him but he breathes electricity at them and kills them.
more demons ran at him but Dragsooth breathed ice on them and froze them solid, he then shoots an earth boulder at the frozen demons shattering them, a few more demons surround Dragsooth and ran at him but Dragsooth rose in the air and fire came everywhere and burned the demons alive, it also destroyed the armor Dragsooth was wearing. the fire subsided and Dragsooth landed on his feet, he had noticed that one of the demons escaped but he just watched it run away. Dragsooth turned around and saw Jesus standing in front of him. Dragsooth bowed down in front of him and he didn't look at him. Dragsooth started to weep.

Dragsooth: "Master... i'm so sorry... i'm sorry i betrayed you... i'm sorry..." he hugged one of Jesus' feet and layed his head on it crying

Jesus crouched down and helped Dragsooth to his feet. then he stood back up.

Jesus: "you did the right thing in the end and that's all that counts."

Dragsooth: "so do- do you forgive me?"

Jesus: "of course i do... now come with me there's someone waiting for you."

Dragsooth followed Jesus...


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W00t! Dragsooth is back in heaven
I bet Lucifer is going to be angry
Good chapter

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Chapter 33,

Dragsooth followed Jesus into the Temple, Dragsooth saw Marissa,

Marissa runs over to him "Dragsooth are you alright?"

Dragsooth: "yes Marissa i'm fine. and i'm sorry for leaving you."

Marissa: "that's alright. i'm just glad you're safe..." she nuzzled him.

Dragsooth looked at her "come let's take a walk."

they went outside, Dragsooth walked over to the river of life and took a drink from it "that's better..." Dragsooth and Marissa continued walking, they went to the top of a large hill, they sat down on it.

Dragsooth: "Marissa i have to tell you something... the whole time i was in hell... i joined lucifer."

Marissa: "what? how did he make you join him?"

Dragsooth: "he used my compassion against me. he threatened a human child from Heaven. and lucifer said he'll throw the child into a pit of fire if i didn't join him... i couldn't let him hurt that child, so i joined him..."

Marissa: "oh that's terrible."

Dragsooth: "i know, he made me do things i never thought i'd do..."

Marissa: "what did he make you do?"

Dragsooth: "he made me steal a relic for him, he made me hurt other demons for him, he made me apologize to him for insulting him..."

Marissa giggled at that last thing "what did you call him?"

Dragsooth: "i called him a *******. he hit me for it."

Marissa: "i'm sorry that you suffered so much."

Dragsooth: "i'm sorry i betrayed the Master and left you alone."

Marissa: "i was never alone. the Master comforted me..."

Dragsooth: "that's always good."

they sat really close to each other, Marissa put her head on Dragsooth's shoulder, Dragsooth wrapped his tail around Marissa's, they sat there and watched the sunset.

Dragsooth: "i'm just glad to be back here with you."

Marissa: "me too." she licked him on the cheek.

Dragsooth smiled at her.


In hell,

the only demon that survived Dragsooth's attack came back to hell, the demon came up to lucifer.

demon: "Dragsooth has double crossed us!"

lucifer: "WHAT!? HOW!?"

demon: "he turned holy and good again... as soon as we saw the Temple he said that he was going to protect Jesus. and he killed 49 demons in afew seconds, i was the only survivor."

lucifer: "gather a few demons! we are going to pay Heaven a little visit tonight."


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Chapter 34,

In Heaven,

it was getting dark, Dragsooth and Marissa were heading back to the Temple they were walking close to each other, suddenly they were surrounded by demons, Dragsooth looked around and saw lucifer, Dragsooth uttered a low growl, Marissa stepped back when she saw lucifer,

lucifer: " Dragsooth, Marissa..."

Dragsooth: "lucifer!" he growled at him.

Marissa: "...lucifer..." she took a step back.

lucifer: "GET THEM!"

the demons lunged at them and overpowered them, the demons chained them up. and dragged them to hell.

they were taken to the torture chamber, Dragsooth and Marissa were chained to tables, Dragsooth was laying on his back and Marissa was laying on her stomach.

Dragsooth looks at lucifer "what are you going to do to us?"

lucifer: "you should be more worried about what i'm going to do to your little girlfriend..." he walks over to Marissa.

Dragsooth: "you leave her alone!!" he bares his teeth at lucifer.

lucifer: "then pledge your loyalty to me and i'll let her go..."

Dragsooth: "NEVER!"

lucifer: "then watch her suffer!" lucifer claws Marissa's back and while he does acid comes out of his claws hurting Marissa even more.

Marissa screams and cries in pain "DRAGSOOTH WHATEVER YOU DO.... DON'T BETRAY JESUS!!!" tears came down her cheeks as she was continuously being clawed at...

Dragsooth had tears in his eyes from watching this "I WON'T!!"

lucifer stops clawing at Marissa, a muzzle comes around Marissa's jaws so she can't speak...

lucifer looks at Dragsooth "pledge your loyalty to me or i'll torture her to death!!"

Dragsooth: "you're bluffing! you wouldn't really!"

lucifer: "am i?" he turns towards Marissa and breaths fire on her back, she screams in pain,

Dragsooth: "STOP! I'LL PLEDGE!!"

lucifer stops and turns to him "i knew you would! say these words: lucifer you are my god and my master and i worship and obey only you never will i go against you..."

Dragsooth took a deep breath he felt sick "lucifer... you are my... god... and my... master... i worship and obey only you... and i will never go against you... you B******!"

lucifer: "now, now, that's no way to talk to your god..."

Dragsooth growled and bared his teeth at him, lucifer struck him across the face.

lucifer: "that outta teach you to look at me like that!"

Dragsooth coward a little.

lucifer laughs at him "that's better..."

Dragsooth: "you're going to let Marissa go now right?"

lucifer: "NO i don't think i will!"

Dragsooth: "WHAT!?"

lucifer: "DON'T raise your voice at me!!"

Dragsooth flinched at the tone in his voice.

lucifer turns to a demon "take Marissa to a cell."

the demon unchains Marissa and takes her away,

lucifer: "now that you pledged loyalty to me you need to have my mark on you. a permanent sign of your loyalty to me..." a branding iron appears in lucifer's hand, he heats it up.

Dragsooth's eyes get wide "YOU'RE GOING TO BRAND ME!!"

lucifer: "yes! you don't actually think i'd prefer the painless way did you?"

lucifer came over to him and pressed the iron hard against Dragsooth's chest, Dragsooth's screamed in pain, after a few seconds lucifer removed the iron and Dragsooth had a big black pentagram on his chest.

lucifer: "there now you look eviler already."

Dragsooth looked at him with tears in his eyes "i hate you."

lucifer didn't pay attention to that, he unchained Dragsooth.

lucifer: "get off the table!"

Dragsooth rolled off the table and fell on the floor "ow..."

lucifer: "you weren't supposed to fall on the floor! get up!!"

Dragsooth got up

lucifer: "you may start worshiping me now!"

Dragsooth: "no."

lucifer: "perhaps you didn't hear me!" a whip appears in lucifer's hand "bow before me NOW!!!" he cracks the whip...

out of fear Dragsooth bows down to the ground but he stares up at lucifer. he could see the fear in Dragsooth's eyes...

lucifer: "refer to me as master..."

Dragsooth gets up and looks him right in the eyes "NO!"

lucifer hits Dragsooth across the back with the whip "DID I SAY YOU COULD GET UP!? BOW BACK DOWN AGAIN!" lucifer whips him again once more...

Dragsooth bows back down, he looks at lucifer.

lucifer: "refer to me as master from now on..."

Dragsooth nodded but lucifer whips him once.

Dragsooth: "AH! what was that about?"

lucifer: "you are to speak when spoken to! understand!?"

Dragsooth: "yes..."

lucifer whips Dragsooth one time again.

Dragsooth: "what was that for?"

lucifer: "for not calling me master!! now do you understand?!"

Dragsooth: "yes..."

lucifer whips Dragsooth another time "yes WHAT!?"

Dragsooth: "yes master!"

lucifer: "good... that wasn't so bad was it?"

Dragsooth: "yes it was..."

lucifer raises his whip...

Dragsooth: "yes it was master!"

lucifer lowers the whip "see you're getting the hang of it... now get up and follow me!" lucifer walks out of the room, Dragsooth gets up and follows him

Dragsooth: "ugh that was disgusting i think i was gonna be sick..."


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yeesh... poor draggy.

Hmm, everything is getting a bit repetitive, but what else can you do
Good chapter anyway

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Chapter 35,

lucifer walked over to a cell, Dragsooth stood beside him,

lucifer: "look in there." he pointed to the cell,

Dragsooth looked into the cell and saw Marissa trapped in some sort of giant dark crystal, Dragsooth's eyes got wide as he saw that.

Dragsooth: "wha- what did you do to her!?"

lucifer: "i trapped her in the dark crystal, if you go back to Jesus and betray me i'll simply stop Marissa's heart... but i don't think it'll come to that will it?"

Dragsooth slowly shook his head "no, no it won't master..."

lucifer: "good! go and do whatever you want until tomorrow. i've got to finish some battle plans!" lucifer walks away.

Dragsooth just stands there looking at Marissa,

Dragsooth started to cry "oh Marissa... what has he done to you?" he walked away, he walked into the room that was used for sleeping, he lyed down near a wall and fell asleep.

Dragsooth began to talk in his sleep "Jesus... forgive me.... forgive me... Jesus if you can hear me help me..."

a demon next to Dragsooth wakes up "HEY! stop saying those words!!"

Dragsooth continues to talk in his sleep "oh Jesus forgive me for breaking the first commandment... get me out of here... please forgive me..."

demon: "HEY! WAKE UP!!"

Dragsooth wakes up "what!?"

demon: "you were sleep talking! you were saying all these things about how you wanted Jesus to forgive you!!"

Dragsooth: "i do want him to forgive me..."

demon: "you're lucky i'm too tired to report you to lucifer!" the demon went back to sleep...

Dragsooth was whispering "Jesus if you can hear me help me..." he put his head down and fell asleep...


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Nice chapters,poor Dragsooth...

Chapter 36,

Dragsooth had nightmares all night while he was sleeping.

he awoke the next morning "oh what a pretty bad night i just had..." he picked his head up and looked around the room, no one was there "where is everyone? why do i even care?" he stood up slowly, "hmmm i guess it's safe to pray now..." he looked around to make sure no one was there, he began to pray "Jesus please protect Marissa, take her out of here... i deserve to be left here because i betrayed you but please get Marissa out of here..."

suddenly lucifer came in the doorway, he had heard everything, he came toward him "praying again!! you should be giving me all that attention! how dare you even think of begging Jesus for mercy when he's rejected you!?"

Dragsooth: "i know that Jesus still loves me... and you can't prove he doesn't!" he turns toward lucifer and looks at him angry.

a chain suddenly appears on Dragsooth's neck and lucifer pulls him toward him.

lucifer: "come with me!" lucifer drags him out of the room and takes him to another part of hell.

Dragsooth sees a large pit, there were some large metal carts pulled up alongside the pit, and some demons were going in and out of the pit and filling up the carts with rocks, and one demon pulled each cart up to a building.

Dragsooth: "what are they doing?"

lucifer: "they are collecting materials needed to make weapons and armor... you will pull one of those carts up to that building and back to the pit again. you will do that all day today!"

Dragsooth: "wait i can't do hard labor on a sabbath day!"

lucifer: "you'll do it if i have anything to say about it!"

lucifer attached the chain to a cart full of rocks, Dragsooth just stood still.

lucifer: "pull the cart!!!"

Dragsooth: "here's my answer to ya lucy... hell no!" suddenly Dragsooth heard the sound of a whip against the ground, he looked and noticed lucifer was holding a whip.

lucifer: "PULL THE CART!" he cracks the whip again.

Dragsooth begins to pull the cart with all his strength, but when it's not going as fast as the other carts lucifer whips him "PULL HARDER!"

Dragsooth: "I'M PULLING AS HARD AS I CAN!" he pulls harder.

lucifer: "GO FASTER!" he whips Dragsooth again, Dragsooth goes faster... after 1 minute he reaches the building with the cart, some demons come out of the building and take all the rocks out of the cart.

lucifer: "go back to the pit!!!"

Dragsooth begins to pull the cart toward the pit "you don't have to yell."

lucifer whips him again "don't tell me what to do! MOVE IT!!"

Dragsooth picks up the pace and is back at the pit with the empty cart, demons fill up the cart with rocks, and Dragsooth continues to pull it towards the building, the cart is emptied and he pulls it back to the pit... every time he slows down and stops to rest lucifer whips him to make him pull the cart again, that happens many times. by the end of the day Dragsooth is exhausted, wounded and disliking lucifer more and more...

lucifer unchains Dragsooth

lucifer: "your loyalty and obedience to me is great. but you still need to be more willing to please me... follow me!" lucifer walks away, Dragsooth follows at a very slow pace, he is very exhausted, and his breathing is labored

Dragsooth: "who dose he think he is anyway? making me bow to him, making me work on a sabbath, making me grumble to myself..."

lucifer: "QUIT COMPLAINING AND PICK UP THE PACE!!!"

Dragsooth walks quicker and catches up...


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Poor Dragsooth
Good chapter

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Chapter 37,

Dragsooth follows lucifer to the gates of Heaven,

lucifer: "go to the Temple and get me a relic!"

Dragsooth: "why do i have to?"

lucifer: "GO NOW!!"

Dragsooth walks inside Heaven and reaches the Temple, he gose into the relic room. he looks around and picks up a small cross, he carries it out of the room when an angel sees him.

angel: "HEY! drop that cross!"

Dragsooth runs away still holding the small cross, he runs out of the Temple, the angel chased after him and pins him to the ground, Dragsooth gets away but he he leaves the small cross behind. the angel picks it up and goes back in the Temple, Dragsooth runs back into hell,

lucifer: "well did you get it?"

Dragsooth: "yes... but i dropped it..."

lucifer: "you did WHAT!?"

Dragsooth: "i was being chased by an angel!"

lucifer: "why didn't you kill him!!?"

Dragsooth didn't say anything...

lucifer: "go back in there and get me a relic!!"

Dragsooth goes back in Heaven, he goes towards the Temple but he noticed that the entrance was now being guarded by 2 angels, he ran toward them, he tripped one of them with his tail, and ran into the Temple, he ran into the relic room and grabs a small cross. the other angel comes into the room, Dragsooth jumps out a window and flies back to hell, the angel tries to follow him but he gets pulled back by the other angel,

angel 1: "stop! he's gone... there's no sense in following him down there."

angel 2: "you're right, let's go back to the Master and tell him that Dragsooth stole another relic..." the angels fly back to the Temple.


In hell,

Dragsooth walks up to lucifer and gives him the relic...

lucifer: "good... but next time kill those angels!"

Dragsooth: "i will not kill for you!"

lucifer: "you will if you don't want to get tortured!"

Dragsooth looked away from him... lucifer walks away with the relic...

Dragsooth looks back toward Heaven, then he walks deeper into hell. he walks into the sleeping room and sees lots of demons sleeping, he walks over to his usual spot and falls asleep...


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Chapter 38,

Dragsooth kept having nightmares all night,

he woke up and knew it was morning "yet another bad night..." he noticed all the demons were not in the room. suddenly a demon was in the doorway.

demon: "hey prepare for battle! we're going to war again!" he walks away.

Dragsooth: "and how do i do that?... oh i'm talking to myself again..." he gets up and walks out of the lair, there was a big army of demons in front of the lair, Dragsooth stood in with the army... suddenly lucifer appears in front of them...

lucifer: "today we will take Heaven as our own! there will be no mercy! you either kill or be killed in the battlefield! anyone who dose not kill an angel will feel my wrath! we will have our revenge on our enemies! Heaven will be ours! FORWARD DEMONS!!"

the demon army marched toward Heaven, Dragsooth was walking with them. they broke through the gates and charged... an angel army was coming toward them.... the 2 armies collided, Dragsooth was directly in the middle of the fighting, a few angels nearly stabbed him, Dragsooth flew up in the air to avoid confrontation, an angel flew at him and tried to stab him, Dragsooth barley dodged he swiped the sword out of the angel's hand and breathed fire at him but the angel put a shield up and the fire didn't go through the shield, Dragsooth dove down on the angel and they crashed to the ground. Dragsooth was standing on top of the angel, Dragsooth raised his paw to strike him but another angel hit Dragsooth with the side of his sword and knocked Dragsooth to the ground, Dragsooth got up and and swiped his claws at him, the angel had a shield and Dragsooth was only hitting the shield, the angel swung his sword and stabbed Dragsooth's wing, Dragsooth screamed in pain and tackled the angel to the ground, Dragsooth bit down on his neck trying to suffocate him... then a bright white light shown on the entire battlefield, Dragsooth felt intense pain and retreated back to hell, the rest of the demons ran back to hell as well, some of the demon army was destroyed, and every demon was wounded. the gates of Heaven shut behind them, lucifer was wounded severely and he didn't have enough energy to heal himself completely, some demons came over to him and gave him some of their energy, and within a few seconds he was healed... he walks over to Dragsooth...

lucifer: "did you have mercy on any of them!?"

Dragsooth: "no... i really tried to kill someone..."

lucifer: "did you succeed!?"

Dragsooth: "no i didn't succeed, but i tryed."

lucifer: "trying is not good enough!! and since you didn't succeed you will be punished!!"

Dragsooth: "punished for WHAT!?"

lucifer: "for showing mercy to the angels and for raising your voice at me!! now go to the torture chamber or the punishment will be worse!!!"

Dragsooth started to walk towards the torture chamber...


ok next chapter coming tomorrow...

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Oh dear, poor Dragsooth
Good chapter

I thought he did kill an angel? He suffocated one.

no he tryed to kill it, but Dragsooth retreated before he killed it.

oh, ok my bad.

ok then, the next chapter is coming tomorrow.

Rats.

it'll be early in the morning so you don't have to wait...

o ok.

plus i'll think i'll make two chapters tomorrow.

Chapter 39,

Dragsooth walks slowly toward the torture chamber, lucifer is walking behind him, lucifer quickly kicks Dragsooth.

lucifer: "walk faster!!"

Dragsooth: "i don't want to..."

lucifer quickly strikes him in the hip with his tail "don't contradict me!! GO FASTER!!!"

Dragsooth stumbles a little from the blow, but walks faster. he reaches the chamber, lucifer picks him up by his horn and chains him to a table.

Dragsooth: "wha- what are you going to do to me?"

lucifer: "oh you'll see soon enough..." a whip with many tails appears in his hand, he walks behind Dragsooth and strikes him 50 times across the back,

Dragsooth screamed and cried in pain, tears were coming down his cheeks, lucifer laughed evilly at his pain... he then began to repeatedly claw Dragsooth's back, acid came out of his claws and into Dragsooth's wounds causing more pain, Dragsooth screamed even more, lucifer stops and smiles at Dragsooth's pain, he unchains him from the table,

lucifer: "get off the table!"

Dragsooth is barley able to move but he finds the strength to roll off the table, but he falls on the floor "...ow..."

lucifer: "stand up!!"

Dragsooth slowly stands up.

lucifer: "i'll forgive you for what you did if you bow down and worship me."

Dragsooth slowly looks up at him "never... again..."

a whip appears in lucifer's hand "WHAT DID YOU SAY!!?"

Dragsooth bows before him,

lucifer: "that's better."

Dragsooth: *muttering to himself* "i never had to do this for Jesus..."

lucifer: "WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY!!!?"

Dragsooth didn't say anything...

lucifer: "NEVER mention that name in my presence I am your god!!!"

Dragsooth: *shuddering* "y- yes... y- you are... m- m- my... god... i have no idea why i said his name but i'll never happen again... PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!! I'M SORRY!!!"

lucifer: "i won't be so quick to forgive you! you have to be punished for such a horrible offense!!" he whipped Dragsooth 10 times with the whip.

Dragsooth didn't move, when it was over Dragsooth sobbed in pain.

lucifer: "that'll teach you to say such a horrible thing!!! now get up and follow me!" he left the room...

Dragsooth barley got up and he had trouble walking.

lucifer led him to the training room, there were many demons crowded around something, the demons stepped aside, lucifer and Dragsooth walked through the crowd. Dragsooth saw an angel his hands and wings were chained...

lucifer: "since you didn't manage to kill on the battlefield you can simply kill one of our prisoners!"

Dragsooth: "i am not going to kill a helpless being!!"

lucifer: "oh and i thought you cared about Marissa. have you forgotten i can easily kill her if i wanted to!?"

Dragsooth: "fine i'll do it..."

lucifer: "good! and make sure his death is painful!"

the demons gave Dragsooth some room, the angel looked at Dragsooth.

angel: "oh Dragsooth look how low you have fallen. if you kill me Jesus won't like it... you don't have to kill for the devil... come back to Jesus..."

lucifer came up to the angel.

angel: "go ahead you damned beast kill me! it'll be the last thing you ever do!! Jesus will strike you down! and his wrath will abide on you!!"

lucifer punched him in the stomach, it brought the angel to his knees.

lucifer: "shut your mouth you pathetic creature!" he struck him in the head with his tail, the angel fell to the ground...

lucifer looks at Dragsooth.

lucifer: "kill him!"

Dragsooth walks over to the angel who was laying on the ground. the angel looked at Dragsooth.

angel: "Dragsooth... please don't do this... don't destroy your soul... don't go against Jesus... no matter what the cost might be... don't go against Christ..."

Dragsooth: "i... i'm sorry..."

angel: "Dragsooth NOOO!"

Dragsooth breathed electricity on the angel and electrocuted him, but when he stopped the angel was barley alive. with his dying breath he said "may Christ forgive you..." he died...

the demons cheered, lucifer walked up to Dragsooth,

lucifer: "well done... i am pleased with you..."

lucifer and the demons walked out of the training room, Dragsooth starred at the angel's body, Dragsooth shed a tear "may Christ forgive me..." he walked out of the training room...


R.I.P angel...
next chapter coming today...

Good chapter

thanks.

Nice chapter torok. My mom likes your story

your mom is reading my story!? what dose she think about it?

She likes your creativity.

oh thank you... the stories going to get better...

You are using the technique of posting/writing the unexpected. Most would expect dragsooth to not give in to the devil. Nice job.