darkSpyro

Ruuko stared at them disbelievingly.
"What.... What are you doing here!?" He blurted out suddenly.
Sparrowheart stood up on his hind legs, bravely showing off how powerful he had gotten. Bluefur just closed her eyes, listing to the wind.
"You really thought we were not going to see you again?!" Sparrowheart asked.
"Well, yeah" Ruuko sighed. He turned around, sigling the two young dragons to be quiet.
"There is nothing to see here Forest. You can go now, you to Brokentooth"
Ruuko made sure they disappeared into the bracken before he turned back around.

Sorry, short part. :[

Nice part

I will type more tomorrow. :]

OK, I can wait

Me neither!

Normally people say "I can't wait", but whatever.... xD

"Now, tell me, what are you doing here?" Ruuko asked. But he got to admit, he did missed the both off them.
"We wanted you to test our skills" It was Bluefur who spoke this time. Her voice was croaking, as if she haven't spoken for a long time.
"Why now?" Ruuko asked, feeling disappointed. He wanted to hunt in the river and feel the cool water on his black scales.
"Why not now?" Bluefur mumbled tartly. Ruuko ignored her back stabbing comment and rested his gaze on Sparrowheart, hopping for a better answer from him.
"I-ignore my sister," Sparrowheart sighed "she has been grumpy ever since I told her that I had to train her instead." He jabbed his sister gently in the ribs.
Ruuko took a step back, remembering the very day when he flew to convexity, trying to save his sister. But he couldn't take a step further into the past without a familiar grey dragon interrupting his memories. Suddenly, he halted, remembering what the dark dragon did to him. He took the name Sky, he was a wind guardian, but retired long ago. He nearly killed Ruuko, which was the reason why he couldn't get to Cynder in time. Ruuko dug his claws in the ground, hatred roaring in his heart.

Good part

You and Skyqueen are the only people who are reading....

EDIT: Lol, three pages already, and the story still has ALOT to go. xD

EDIT 2: ROFL, look at this avatar off GIR that I found. xD

"You said you would train me, Ruuko" Bluefur's cry shoot Ruuko out off his thoughts. "Instead, my brother ended up training me!"
Sparrowheart got up to his paws, baring his teeth.
"Hey! I taught you everything I knew! You should be grateful!" Sparrowheart spat. "What is so bad about your own brother teaching you!?"
"Sparrowheart is right." Ruuko added in before Bluefur could protest. He didn't want this to turn into an argument.
"Bluefur, if you want, I could teach you and Sparrowheart more moves"
He had to push the disappointment bubbling in his throat back down to the core off his body. This was no time to wine about the rest off his day. First, he would train these two puny dragons, then, he would deal with Sky. Perhaps even kill him.

Good chapter
Could you remind me who this "Sky" is?

Well, towards the end off the story (the first story), Ruuko's sister had to fight the purple dragon. Ruuko had this feeling that she is going to lose to Spyro. He set off to help her, but he didn't know were she could be. Sparrowheart told him that that dragon that he and his sister was making front off earlier, could help him. Ruuko runs to the lake to find Sky. He finds out more about him when he meets him. Sky tells him to sleep beside a crystal rock, which will tell him everything he needs to know. But when he wakes up, Sky wouldn't let him escape because he found out that Ruuko is working for Gaul (according to him, Ruuko's eyes told him everything). He fights Sky, but got defeated, but surprisingly got healed up (the creature that did this will be reviled earlier on in the story). Because off this, he was late on helping Cynder. Now he wants his revenge, and that is one reason to why the title is called "Dark Revenge".

Ah right, thanks

No prob.

Awesome! I love this story! I love your avi of Gir! He's so cute!

Thanks! I like him better as a robot then a green dog. xD

I see that you've change your avatar to a GIR avatar. :3

It's time for a poll!

Which character do you like the best?

Ruuko
Forest
Sparrowheart
Bluefur
Rockheart

Can I put down two answers?

Ruuko.

Yes, you can Solister.

DarkCynder_543 will now be running teh storys. :]

Probably Rukko and Sparrowheart

I actually like Bluefur. She is kind off like me. Well, if she was shy that is.... But off course, I like Ruuko. :3

CHAPTER 6:

"Okay, lets begin!" Ruuko's roar echoed through the trees like a log crashing through a waterfall. He is with Bluefur and Sparrowheart in a quiet dirt hollow. Vines were poking out all around them, and Ruuko new that the vines would block out any screeches from bursting through the trees. He didn't want to alert the prey.
"Bluefur, show me what you got." Ruuko flicked his tail blade at her.
"I don't have anything, sir." Bluefur laughed.
"Just attack me!"
Bluefur gave a brown, ragged stick one finale push before she faced Ruuko. Her eyes where fixed on his jet black scales. Ruuko wouldn't let her out off his site. He twisted and turned as Bluefur crawled around him. At last, Bluefur's paws kicked in the dust, and she sprang up into the skies. Ruuko was amassed at how high she was, but he shock his head and focus the right time to jump and land.

Ruuko was surprised at how much time he had to think and plan everything think out, and he waved his paw, giving Bluefura signal to land. With a frustrated wail, Bluefur did what she was told and landed on the dirt, but she wobbled and nearly fell over.
"What was that!?" Ruuko hissed.
Bluefur took a step back.
"What!? What did I do!?" Bluefur yelped so suddenly. Now it was Ruuko's turn to step back. He was shocked at how heart broken Bluefur was.
"Wha- what did I say?" Ruuko struggled to find the right words.
Bluefur realized what she did and closed her eyes, calming herself down. Sparrowheart was sitting on a vine, enjoying the show.
"Oh, I'm sorry... I just wanted to impress you..." She replied at last.
"Well, showing off how amazingly you can jump won't get you anywhere," Ruuko began. "If anything, you have to jump not so high. It's the speed you need to master, not how high you can leap. Try again, and this time, remember to concentrate on your spe-!"
"Ruuko, remember, Bluefur is only young. Don't expect her to be so successful." It was Forest who called out to him, interrupting his speech.
Ruuko sighed, then nodded his thanks. He wished he could just get this over and done with already.
"Now, attack me again."

Good chapter

good story

Yeah! Awesome! I would have to choose. . .Forest and Ruuko.

Woot, a new reader. ^O^

I've finished my drawing off Hawkfire BTW.

Wow, great picture

Thanks. ^.^

Awesome picture. Your very good at drawing.

Sorry I haven't been reading your stories Cynder543. I am now!

I haven't been reading your stories lately too... I forgot about them completely. Sorry about that. xD

Oh, and thanks for the complement, Skyqueen. :3

Ruuko was glad at how clever Bluefur, and Sparrowheart were. Most dragons would start with the usual wrestling and the snarling. But because he was twice there size, they have no choice but to leap upon his shoulders.
Bluefur just stared at him, and in a couple off heartbeats, she sprang with her her paws out stretched. With a surprised yelp, Bluefur slammed into his side and bowled him over. Sparrowheart's jaw dropped in surprise.
Bluefur pinned Ruuko down, one paw planted on his neck.
"Well, how did I go?" Bluefur asked.
"I will tell you if you get off me!" Ruuko growled.
With a cry off laughter, Bluefur sprinted off Ruuko, then turned to face him.
"Can you tell me now? Please?" Bluefur jumped up with joy.
What a change in attitude...
"You did great. How did you learn so fast!?" Ruuko asked.
Bluefur looked down at her paws, not showing her face.
"Lots off practice..." She finery sighed.
Ruuko stared at her. What is wrong with practicing!?
"Hey, Bluefur. Everyone needs pratice when it comes to fighting. It's a way off life. Pratice is the best thing for a dragon." Ruuko tried to cheer her up, but he knew it wasn't working.
"Hey, why don't you watch me and Sparrowheart fight?" Ruuko added.
Bluefur looked up.
"Yeah. Sure, whatever." She turned away and padded up to a soft looking bush. She sat down on it's crusty leaves.
Making sure she wasn't in ear shot, Ruuko whispered to Sparrowheart rather quickly.
"What's wrong with her? She looks like as if she got beaten up by a horse..."
Sparrowheart stared at him wildly.
"It's because I trained her instead off you. She didn't like the fact that you ran off without telling her what is happening face to face. I don't blame her." Sparrowheart replied. Then his wild gaze softened.
"What is wrong with me?" He said the last part rather loudly, and Bluefur's tail twitched irritably. Ruuko let out a breath he didn't realize he was holding.
"I think this is the wrong time to.. You know, talk about this," Ruuko growled. "Lets practice our skills."
And then I will defeat that stupid Sky!

Good part

I'm just wondering, should I start my own Ruuko contest?

The person who draws Ruuko the best wins something. :3

hmm, you could do, but what could be the prize

The person who comes first gets two drawing request off any off there characters (sorry, it has to be an animal. I suck at drawing humans). Plus, there character gets to be a miner character in my Ruuko story, "Chasing Spirits".

The person who comes second wins a drawing request off there character (ones again, it has to be an animal).

And, the person who comes third wins an uncoloured drawing request off there character.

Well, can you make Rukko in the dragon generator to give people an idea of what Rukko looks like

Well, I will use the generator, but I will have to change it a bit. And, I will put up my picture off Ruuko's head that I posted earlier in this thread to show what his head looks like....

His body is like a slightly skinner version off Spyro really.... His tail is shorter too. And his wings are slightly bigger.

Sorry, CHAPTER 6 will have to be a short chapter...

CHAPTER 7.

Ruuko stood upon a large bolder. His tail shifting softly in the breeze. In front off him, stood a young pigeon. Ruuko took one paw step after another towards the helpless creature. His gaze resting on it's soft feathers. Ruuko's mouth watered at the thought off blood pouring out everywhere as he sticks his teeth into bare flesh. In a couple off heart beats, Ruuko sprang, his tail streaming out from behind him.

Suddenly, a dragon appeared and stood before him. Ruuko screeched in terror and took many steps back. Ruuko's head spun as he looked up upon the
brown dragon's face. He new at once who it was. It was the same dragon that was in his dream no that long ago. Ruuko curled up his wings and hissed, trying to make him look two times his normal size.
"What do you want from me!?" Ruuko asked. He clawed at the air as if he was swatting a fly.
"Every time I have a nice dream that's filled with the senses off flesh, your always there to ruin it! When will you stay out off my dreams, and stop destroying my life!?"
To his surprise, the brown dragon laughed.
"So, I can see you this time? Thats a big surprise." The dragon gazed calmly at Ruuko. "It's about time you begin to recognize your own friend. I'm surprised at the amount you've grown!"
"You look young...." Ruuko couldn't help but reply. "Very young..."
"Oh, you noticed? I'm only fifteenth"
"Fifteen!?' Ruuko stared at her in astonishment.
"Yes, and your only thirteen!" The brown dragon chuckled.
"Yes, I already know that. Oh, and thanks for scaring off my pigeon!" Ruuko snapped, rising the tip off his tail.
"I see. I haven't fully mastered my power yet... I shouldn't be able to see you... This should off turned into a night mare by now..."
"Why are you here anyway? What do you want with me? Haven't you haunted my dreams enough?"
"That is not why I'm here," The dragon snapped. "My name is Hawkfire, and we used to be friends until you joined this ragged place."
"Ragged place? How dare you call it such a name!" Ruuko roared with rage. "Besides, we're leaving to the mountain off Malefor, any-" Ruuko realized that Hawfire was fading, and he cut off what he was saying.
"Where you're going?" Ruuko asked.
"You must find your old friend...... You will find her at a beautiful river..." Hawkfire breathed out her last words before she disappeared completely, leaving Ruuko standing on the large boulder, alone. He began to watch as her dust began to float down the river. He still didn't know who she was, and he didn't want to find her until he got more knowledge.

I'm sorry about not showing the rest off the training session. I just wanted to get on with the next part, which is interesting to me.

Good chapter

Okay, I will start the competition. So get your pencils ready!

Ruuko woke with a startled glare. He jumped out off his nest and stretched. He new that today, he would fight Sky and, this time, win the battle. Not long ago, he trained Sparrowheart, and organized apes to go hunting further then the river. It won't be long until they leave to go to mountain off Malefor. It was tomorrow in fact. He grunted at the thought off leaving this place. He began to like this fortress, and his nest. He would miss the wide open space, the stream flowing down a river, and the forest and mountains where Bluefur and Sparrowheart used to live. Ruuko blinked the sleep out off he's eyes before he boated out off the castle and took off into the skies.

Cool! Please continue! (sorry, I haven't been on for a while)

Time for the action to finely kick in.

"Wow! I haven't been up here for a long time!"
Ruuko shouted to himself in the air. He couldn't believe how much he had missed out. He loved the wind swaying coolly on his scales, the bright blue sky glittering in the distance. But most off all, he loved the sunlight beaming down on him. He never felt so alive as he soared through the skies. He suddenly remembered the battle he would have to face once he reached the lake. He would have to be ready for what was inside the cave. Ruuko was glad he caught a plump dear after he did his training with Sparrowheart. He would need all the strength he could get. He didn't want his chest to get ripped to peaces again by Sky. Ruuko shivered at the thought off Sky's claws taring into his stomach.
No! Ruuko thought. I can't.... I can't just shiver like a coward! The lake isn't far away now! I would get there if I would hurry up.
Spreding out his wings even further then before, Ruuko flapped them as hard as he could. He felt himself getting speed and he used it to glide swiftly through the wind. As he soared the the skies, he began to wounder who saved his life that very day when he got torn to pieces.

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He didn't know how much he had flapped his wings. It seemed like he had been flying for over a month. But the determination to defeat Sky erged him on. And, within a couple off heart beats, he could see a lake close by. Standing next to it was a shimmering cave. Ruuko folded his wings a little and flew down in front off the cave.
"Well.... This is it... Sky, prepare to die! Cynder, this is for you!"
Ruuko bolted through the cave.

Good chapter

My contest is open. ^.^

Right

As Ruuko ran inside the cave, it started to get dark. He felt the sides off the cave closing in, making it hard for him to breath. Ruuko began to panic as he ran further into the cave. He knew that there was an open space at the end off the tunnel, but he didn't know when he would get there. The panic began to rise in his stomach. He didn't know how long he had ran for, but he guessed over a minuet.
It's like a never ending tunnel. Should I turn back? Ruuko thought before he shock his head and ran faster into the cave.

He was about to stop and breathe when he saw a beautiful light shimmering out off the other end.
I made it!
Ruuko padded towards it, he squinted at the bright light but he carried on anyway. Once he made it through the light, it started to die down, and all he could see was a crystal blue rock sparkling in the distance. There was a hole in the roof off the cave, and in the sky, the stars danced wildly.
I'm here....
Suddenly, a hint off grey bolted in front off him and he heard a voice. In a couple off heartbeats, an old grey dragon stood in front off Ruuko, his magnificent tail swaying in the breeze.
"Who are you?" Was all the dragon said.

Good chapter. Please continue! I've written more of my Deigo story, can you please read it?

Quote: Skyqueen

Good chapter. Please continue! I've written more of my Deigo story, can you please read it?

Sure! I will read it. :]

Good chapter
Could you also please read my fanfic aswell when you have the time

Quote: Solister

Good chapter
Could you also please read my fanfic aswell when you have the time

Sure.

I don't think my Ruuko contest is doing all that great. xD

Well, last time I checked, it hasn't....