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Thx Have to wait til weekend and see if I can make part 11...

That's okay. No need to rush.

GOOD story! it got boring after a while cause ive been reading for a while. i skip things alot wen i read to much.

^Oh, that's okay, if you say it got boring, for I'm not mad. It's your opinion anyway... I'l have to continue once I get more ideas....

Hey, "Dragongyrl1000", I'm finally reading the "Dragon Rider" book!!!!

good story!!! HURRY UP and make the other part!! wens it gonna be here?

Sry, I probably won't make the next part til I'm done with school work. And to SG2008, that book is one of the best books I've ever read! I had already read the whole thing, and then finished Eragon (the whole thing) and now am currently reading Eldest, which I'm like on pg. 300 and something. VERY good!

Cool. I've read Eragon, too. It's a good book. I just can't seem to finish Eldest, though. But I'll keep trying.

That's cool.^ Yeah, Eldest seems like a book that goes on forever...lol But other books I've read, was those three books by the author Chris D' Lacey, which he wrote "The Fire Within", "Icefire", and "Firestar", each are like 500 pages long, and I've read all three of them... I seem to read a LOT for a 12 1/2 (turning 13 next month) yr old... And I've read some Goosebumps books, which gets me reading on and never stopping cuz it's like suspense...

I've seen the books "The Fire Within", "Icefire", and "Firestar" frequently. Are they any good???? Because I'm planning of buying this entire series soon.

Ohhh, yeah. VERY good. I give each of them a 10/10! They are fantastic books! Anyway, part 11...

Spyro comes out, and looks at them surprisingly. He seems to be looking confused when he sees the looks on Azizi's, Cynder's, and Sparx's faces.
"Umm, is there anything wrong...? Anything I've done wrong...?" he asks, cocking his head to the side. Azizi gets up, shaking his head.
"No, everything is fine. Just told them a story about Guinevere, and they might be wondering about it now. I guess it's my turn, huh?" Azizi says, looking over at Cynder. Cynder only nods and kinda turns away, not saying anything. Azizi looks at Spyro wit his emerald-like eyes and says "Well, it looks like I'll be going in the ice challenge. Ice is one of my main elements, but haven't used it for so long. I'll be on my way now..." and he walks over to the ice portal. The portal was making crackling sounds, like ice cracking. Azizi walks inside, and every breath he takes and breathes out, he can see the wisps of fog coming from his mouth. He feels the coolness of the snow inside, and closes his eyes, relaxing at the feeling.
Once he opened his eyes, Azizi looks around, in wonderment. "This place seems to look familiar, but...how...? Azizi thought. ...perhaps in my dreams. Azizi thought, and shrugs. He continues on, and spots more enemies, and starts whacking some by the time he went near them. His horns were large and shiny, for they're a silver in colour. He hits and breaks things with his horns and then breathes ice. He goes on, and sees that there is a lake in front of him. He thought for a momebt, then took a deep breath. He then let out a burst of ice crystals, shooting it into the lake and it created a platform. He quickly jumped on it, realizing he had to continue it before the platform he's on sinks. He does it quickly again, making another one. He jumps on that one, and makes one more. He then reached the other end, and he looks back, with an awkward expression on his face. He shrugs and keeps going. He breaks open a door, and when it opened, he spots some enemies nearby, and melees them. He hasn't fought for a while, even though he was only in his 30's, he was still quite young and still has more to discover. He then breaths ice on them, making them move a lot slower, as if in slow motion, and he attacks them with his horns. Azizi's tip of his tail is schythe-like, and he stabs it at the crystal-like foes, making them groan in pain and knocked to the ground. The tip of Azizi's tail was like a sharp spear, with what looked like some crystals at the end as well. He shakes himself, and hears howling. He looks around frantically, wondering what the creature was. He sees to platforms curved inward beside him, and then he gazed ahead of him. There, he spotted them crab-like creatures, coming towards Azizi...
Back at the main room of the four portals in the Celestial Caves, Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx lay there, silent for a while. Then Sparx had broke the silence.
"Umm, since Azizi's in there now, shouldn't there be something for us to do? I'm very bored. I'm ready to take more action. This amulet that Gwen made me is fantastic!" Sparx says, but when he looked back at Cynder and Spyro, they only looked at Sparx for a moment, and turned back, looking at the ground. Spyro shook his head, a bit worried of Gwen and the guardians.
"I sure hope Gwen is ok. I wonder if she's still battling that dragon..."Spyro says, and lies down. Cynder lays close by, cleaning the dust off her black scales. Sparx groaned.
"You two need to lighten up..." and he sits back down, and gazes at the wand of Gwen's.
Back at the dragon temple, Gwen still cares for Silverfire, but he seems to be better now. Silverfire gets up, shaking himself. His silver scales glisten in the light from Gwen rubbing some ointment on the scales to heal the wounds, and to make them clean. He scratched his ear, and sees Gwen again. She notices and grins.
"I see that me healing you has made you better. So, do you have a home to go to, young dragon? I see that you look lost..." Gwen asks, resting her hands on her hips. Silverfire only shrugs and says,
"Well, I do have a home, but the thing is is that it's destroyed now, and there's nothing I can do about it. But, I do feel a lot better. I appreciate you healing and helping me..." he says, smiling a bit.
Gwen smiles. "You're welcome. And I appreciate your company, for I am always lonely, just studying my spells and making trips to other places to see some sights. I wonder if Spyro has found Ignitus by now..." Gwen says, and looks at the ground. Silverfire seems to shrug again.
"You mean that small purple dragon? It's hard to remember his appearence when taken over by that spirit...but I'm glad you managed to save me..."
"Well, you're welcome once again, but it seems that there isn't a need for you to thank me again..." Gwen says with a chuckle. Silverfire turned a bit bright red, but turns away, looking at the stuff that Gwen has. He looks back at her, trying to make himself stop blushing a bit.
"Umm, are you...some kind of dragon sorceress? You seem like one to me, but I'm asking out of curiosity..." Silverfire asks.
Gwen turns to look at him with her gentle purple eyes. They looked like glowing amethysts. "Yes. But not only that, I seem to be a dragon queen, but I don't really want to take the responsibility, for I only want to stay with my closest friends and my family, and go on fun adventures, killing evil once in a while. But, my main weapon seem to be a Draconian sword, which I can kill quickly with. I also possess magical wands, staffs, bow and arrow, axes, clubs, and spears. I use many weapons, for I'm built for combat..." Gwen says, and she then made her huge sword appear. It had Draconic languae written on it, and some images of ancient dragons carved in it. On the hilt, lies a gem, glowing white. Silverfire looks at it, as if hypnotized by it.
"Where did it come from...?" Silverfire asks.
"I have accpeted it when I was in my teenage years, for what I've heard, it was forged by a bloodthirsty dragon god, but I think he's been defeated or something like that. This sword can kill anything, even me, but I don't use it for every battle, for it's too dangerous..." Gwen says. "I'll show you some of my attackes if you want me to..." Gwen says, looking at Silverfire's bluish green eyes.
"Uhh, sure. I would like to watch some fighting now..." Silverfire says, and sits down nearby, waiting for Gwen to gather up her weapons...
Back to Azizi, he had defeated the crab-like things, and had placed the giant bulbs into place, moving onto his next destination. He breathes ice in the lake again, and drops towards it...

How do you like part 11? Please comment.

Great job, yet again!!!!

woooo, awesomeness job mate!1

it was short! i skip all the boring parts. but it is good.

^Who cares if it was short, but glad you liked it....T_T *sigh* And your avvie is hilarious, EternalSpyro.....

this is good but what about me my name is cyclone i am a dragon with some strage but power for powers i can use a space and time jump that will take me and eneyone i touch. also i can lift things with my other power i don,t even have to touch the thing i am lifting also i can shock enemys with lightning when i have them up in the air or on the ground i can lanch my self at a enemy so fast that it almost always his them to the ground. i have a stun move that will stun a enemy still for a short time. i am a black and silver dragon that has a move that i don't like to use because it destors every thing in its path it is like a big exposhon. i would defend spyro from eney enemy.

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^Who cares if it was short, but glad you liked it....T_T *sigh* And your avvie is hilarious, EternalSpyro.....

Don't worry about it, Dragongyrl1000. There are bound to be people out there who will critisize people's work. But remember that there's still others (like me) who really love your work. And it all should even out in the very end.

Have't you see brom?

^Yeah, I have. I like him. He's wise and he interests me...
And thx, SG. That's sweet of you....^.^

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^Who cares if it was short, but glad you liked it....T_T *sigh* And your avvie is hilarious, EternalSpyro.....

I shall replace it with something weird

-_0 Wow, VERY weird...

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-_0 Wow, VERY weird...

It was named something like "Britney Retarded LLama"

Oy, I HATE Britney Spears...>.< But... the name is retarded and funny....

Hi "Dragongyrl1000". Just wondering how you're doing on your Spyro story. I haven't checked in with you about your story in a while, and would like to know how the story is going.

Side Note: I have also decided to make a Spyro-like story as well (which can be viewed under the "My Spyro Story" on this section-Fandom-of the site). Although, my story starts out a little different than yours. Your story seems to start out sometime after around the end of "The Eternal Night" (I could be wrong about this), whereas mine starts around the end of "The Darkest Hour"/"Dawn Of The Dragon" game. The story is kind of a rough draft so far, but I hope you enjoy it.

^Yeah, you can start that. I don't know if I should start another part though...

How come? Your stoyr is great! I really like it! And I would really like to know what happens next. (The story kind of ends in a kind of cliff hanger so far.)

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How come? Your stoyr is great! I really like it! And I would really like to know what happens next. (The story kind of ends in a kind of cliff hanger so far.)

Your stoyr?

Sorry. Type-o. I meant to say "story".

Itz really kool DG1000!!! - scratch that, MEGA NEAT!!!!

^Thanks. ^__^ And I'll get to it once I'm not so distracted...

K.

So.cool.good.job.

COOL!

Thanks.

NP!

However, I don't think I'll be able to make anymore, sorry...

nnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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nnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heh. Sorry, I have a lot of other things important to do. So I might have to close this topic.

nice story

Thanks Skyqueen.

*sob a ocean * whhyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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*sob a ocean * whhyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've been busy. I'm sorry. =(

OK.

Wow, I'll have to read all my stories again and then make a part 12! I'll type in part 12 when I have enough free time.

yesssssssssssssssss........ ten years later.. ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.

do it now plz.

I'm really busy. I don't have time to make any other parts, sorry. So please don't rush me.

I understand what you mean by busy, Dragongyrl1000. I'm constantly busy with my homework that I haven't done much of anything on my Glitch Guide for Spyro 2: Ripto's Rage/Spyro 2: Gateway To Glimmer. So, yeah, if you're busy, then I understand that I'll have to wait a little longer for an update. It's no rush really. After all, the longer the wait, the better the story will be.

ok (starts playing spore) oh i forgot i don't have it....yet

cool story i feel sorry for everyone else as ive been able to read all this in one go and i wont have to wait as long for the next part
hope its not that long meh anyway so far its been brilliant