Amilia hadn't been the only one watching the building fall, Zenith, who had it happen, smiled at the sight, it looked like any other building fall, nut to Zenith, he saw the collapse of an era, the fall of the royal, it's what made his smile. And now he had seen the collapse of an era.
'It's time to build a new one...' He smiled, then chucklin, before finally laughing. But his smile was not to last as the dark ones who attacked had come back, all of them nervous. It took a minute before one finally stepped up. Zenith turned to see him.
'This better be good.' In his mind, the dragon knew the next minutes of his life would be pain and misery.
'Well..' He smile had begun it's fade.
'She's alive, isn't she?' The dragon paused before admiting it was true. Zenith's smile turned into a scarl as he hit the dragon to the ground by his neck and pushed hard.
'I gave you orders to find her and kill her!! Not come back with her alive!!!'
'But... Sir!' He said winded, as he couldn't breathe.
'Let me guess!! one of you hit her, she fell to the water, you thought she was dead and that was it!!'
'We'll find her...!!.....We'll have her dead...!! This won't happen again...!!'
'No it won't!! But you won't be finding her!!' Zenith dug his claws quickly into the dragons throat before pulling them out.
After seeing the demise of one of they're own, they know not to fail Zenith, they knew it before, but now they knew he wouldn't hold back, it kept them in fear, one of the reasons they followed him. Zenith, with his anger clearly showing, gazed at them with his blood red eyes.
'You will find her!! You will kill her!! And anyone with her eggs!! Any of you come back with nothing, and you'll be the same!!' Frightened, they all flew off. When he was out of they're sight, some sighed a sign of releif, others kept in fear.
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#101 Posted: 22:36:21 09/08/2009 | Topic Creator
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#102 Posted: 22:44:38 09/08/2009
0_0....I imagined it very bloody.It's getting better and better!
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#103 Posted: 23:09:03 09/08/2009 | Topic Creator
A week had gone, and the shadow dragons feared more with every day passing. They hadn't found Amilia or her eggs, nor had they gone back to Zenith or properly eaten. It was like surviving was more important to them than anything. A few of the dragon had wondered what they searched for, only a few had a guess, but only Lyra knew the true reason. She had kept the egg she longed for safe, out of sight. She didn't know if the shadow dragons would capture any egg, or if they would know it was Amilia's or not. Wether or not they knew, she kept it hidden out of sight, she wondered what had become of the other eggs.
The male to recieve the blue egg hadn't known what to do with it. He was grey, and didn't smile much. He didn't resent the egg, he just didn't think he could look after it. Being middle-aged and not very sociable, he thought it was a wrong choice, yet he didn't even know the reason why he had received it. But today, he had thought of what to do. He had gone over to another dragons for help. 'Look, i can't look after it, i never been around any kids, and i don't know if i know how to raise one.' 'Look, Serviron, i know you got it unexpected, and none of us knows where it came from or why, but no one's willing to look after it.' 'Well who's is it?' 'We don't know. Look, we have no where for it really to go, we don't know if it was abbandoned or not, but try to look after it, and if you really feel you can't look after it, then when someone is willing, we'll take it off your hands. Now, i have important matters to sort out, i'm going to have to ask you to leave.' Serviron sighed. 'Fine.' He then walked out back to his hut.
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#104 Posted: 23:28:39 09/08/2009
Serviron,keep the egg,you idiot. And more as usual ^.^
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#105 Posted: 23:44:43 09/08/2009 | Topic Creator
If you ever watch "Goodnight, Mister Tom", Serviron is basicly the guy that gets the kid.
--- Serviron had since laid down infront of his fire. Despite the fact it was midday, he felt his hut to be cold, so always had a fire going when he was home. He looked at the egg, still facing the fact he had to look after it. He didn't know who's it was, or why they choose him, but he just had to live with it. Lyra had been huting for fish while she was out. Whenever the shadow dragon flew above, she always seemed to be cautious. She knew they wouldn't instantly know she was part of the hiding, but she always did be catious. While she was fishing, she had thought about names for the egg. She hoped it to be a girl, as she always longed for a daughter, but would be just as happy with a boy. She jumped out of the water carrying another fish in her mouth. She walked over to her pile and put it on there. She then layed down and looked at the sea. She looked at the fish. 'For something that spends it's life in the water, how can it smell so bad?' She looked out again. Lyra then got up and put the fish in a basket to put on her back. She then began walking back from the shore line. She saw the shadow dragons pass again, it made her walk faster before running slightly. 'No... it'll be fine, don't give yourself away. Upon reaching the village, she walked over to a cave which looked more like a store room. She put the basket down and walked to the center of town. A green dragoness walked upto her. 'Hey Lyra!' 'Alright Navra?' 'Yeah. HEy, do you know those shadow dragons?' 'Oh yeah?' 'Do you know why they're here?' 'Not exactly' She lied. It hurt her to lie to her best friend, but she had to. 'Apparently they're looking for someone.' 'Who?' 'I dunno, but no one really knows.' 'So how are you and Saphiren?' 'Oh fine, i finally got him to tidy the cave for once...' 'How'd you do that?' 'I have my ways...' '.. You theatened him didn't you?' 'Is it that obvious?' 'Yeah.' From the distance another green, but darker male, stood out. 'NAVRA!' 'Ugh.... i better go, i'll speak to you tomorrow.' 'Ok, bye.' Navra then ran off.
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#106 Posted: 23:58:22 09/08/2009
''Oh fine, i finally got him to tidy the cave for once...''<---Your mum!
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#107 Posted: 00:03:11 10/08/2009
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#108 Posted: 00:12:47 10/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Youtube is your friend.
Lyra walked back to her home. She looked around, but didn't see the egg. She quickly paniced, thinking that the egg was found, that it was going to be killed, but while she looked, she trod on something sharp but hard. She lifted her paw to see a white shard, with a little liguid on it. She then heard a high pitched sound, like something called her. She turned round to see a small white htachling. She then realized what happened and smiled, then picking up the young life. 'Aww... you adorible thing... god, you made me think something bad happened.' She said relived. 'But it's a good thing your ok.' She said hugging. The hatchling seemed to enjoy it. 'A good thing... Sylvia...' she named the young dragoness. 'A daughter....' Serviron wasn't the only one to be shocked by the appearance of the egg, for another male had been shocked, but knew that he had to look after it, and he was happy to, and so would his seven year old son. 'So what do we call it?' 'Well, you normally wait till it hatches, so you can decided easier... you can't easily tell if it's a girl or boy just by looking.' 'Oh..' 'But still, you'll have a brother or sister soon.' He smiled. The boy smiled. 'Yep, your own light blue sibling... But how was that for a hatchday present?' 'The best ever dad! Thank you..' He said hugging him. 'Your welcome Zyren.'
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#109 Posted: 00:27:48 10/08/2009
Hatchday present,good idea. And this made me ''Aww...''
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#110 Posted: 00:48:31 10/08/2009 | Topic Creator
By now the shadow dragons had left. They had spent the day searching, and now it was night, and even they needed sleep.
Lyra, looking out knew she had to some how settle the little one down. 'Right misses, we both need to rest, you and i got a big day tommorrow.' She said. Sylvia yawned and moved over. Lyra then laid herself down with Sylvia moving in to Lyra's body. Typicaly she enjoyed the warmth Lyra gave, it soothed her as she curled up and rested. Lyra smiled and wrapped her tail round herself and Sylvia, the covering her with her wing, leaving a gap for air. Sylvia fell asleep quickly with the warth Lyra had provided, and Lyra slept with a smile on her face. Surviron had been out side for sometime. He had been working on something, but now he rested down inront of the fire, taking the tray above for the meal he had left to warm while he worked. As he ate, he looked at the egg, wondering how he would raise it, still thinking someone else was better than him. Once he had finished, he set the tray above him and pushed some sand on the fire to calm it slightly. He then moved his arm out and heard a crack. He looked at his tray beside him and thought he broke it, but upon picking it up, it was fine, he moved the tray down to see a slight crack on the blue egg. He watched as more cracks appeared round the top of the egg. After another crack appeared, a peice fell out reaveling a blue body, with the rest of the peices then slitting apart to reveal a small blue male. It shook itself and looked at Serviron. 'Well, hello there.' It then walked over and nuzzled him making a chirping noise. Surviron stroked it's head. 'You choose the wrong time to wake, it's time for me to rest...' He moved his paw away, the hatchling tried following it, but Surviron made it clear not to. 'Right.. better get you sorted with something...' He then got up and looked around, then pulling a small, brown cloth. He then looked at the hatchling which looked at him and wagged it's tail from side to side. Surviron then moved over. The hatchling went to nuzzle but Surviron held his paw. 'No, you need sleep.' The hatchling was confused , but understood he couldn't do what he wanted. It then layed down. Surviron put the cloth on him, thankfully being more than enough for a quilt for him. The hatchling smiled as surviron layed down. He looked at the tired hatchling. 'Hmm.....I suppose you need a name....' He then yawned. 'Maybe tommorrow..' The hatchling yawned before laying it's head down. As with Sylvia, the warmth from the fire made him cosy, as well as the cloth. He then slept, and so di Surviron.
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#111 Posted: 08:45:36 10/08/2009
Finally!
I had so many feelings while i read it...
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#112 Posted: 08:47:34 10/08/2009
Were you crying? Jk
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#113 Posted: 08:52:50 10/08/2009
Not really but some parts was sad
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#114 Posted: 09:56:54 10/08/2009
True,true.
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#115 Posted: 10:24:32 10/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Dammit! Lost for ideas!
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#116 Posted: 10:29:51 10/08/2009
Get more!
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#117 Posted: 15:03:43 10/08/2009 | Topic Creator
A new day dawned as the sun began rising. It shed it's light and warmth accros the village and continued rising. It took a full hour before it had risen fully, and by then, a few villigers had already woken up and began they're day. Lyra had decided to sleep more then normal. Eventually though, she awoke. She carefully freed herself of Sylvia as she walked out and strentched. Looking out, it seemed like any other day, but something was different, Lyra knew it, but didn't know why. She looked at Sylvia and found the answer. Her, the white child had made the difference. She walked back in and laid down.
Serviron had woken up sometime ago, and had since began working again. He was fixing things, sharpening things, making sure it was done. the sound of Seviron's work made the hatchling wake up. He looked to the side to see the ashes of the once blazing fire. He then pulled hmself from the cloth and also stretched. He looked around for Serviron, then walking out to find him. Serviron saw him out of the corner of his eye. 'I'd stay back, wouldn't want these sparks going in your eyes.' He then turned. 'You'd be blind for life.' He set his work down and looked at him. 'Right, i suppose i'd better get some food for us. You'll be fine on your own, right? Just stay here and don't go anywhere.' Serviron walked off. The hatchling lay down and wait.
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#118 Posted: 15:08:36 10/08/2009
Serviron is.....is the careless rigth word
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#119 Posted: 17:45:36 10/08/2009
Nice story so far please continue
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#120 Posted: 00:49:57 11/08/2009
awesome story and why r there 2 blue eggs
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#121 Posted: 07:12:48 11/08/2009
Cool,post more soon
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#122 Posted: 19:20:53 13/08/2009
Any new ideas?
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#123 Posted: 01:04:54 14/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Lets see how long i can go before i crash on the keyboard
While walking, Serviron looked around. He too had seen the shadow dragons but hadn't cared much, although he had noticed fewer were there than before. The hatchling waited for him to come back soon, i didn't know what to do. It was about a minute later he was scared. One of the shadow dragons had a suspicion about him and landed in front. It then tried seeing if it could be one of the one's they looked for. 'Maybe you're one of them...' It walked closer. Serviron had noticed while walking back, he speed up slightly before reaching them. 'Is there a problem here?' 'Maybe... Tell me, how can you have a child if we never saw a mate?' 'Does it matter? My personal life is none of your concern..' 'Is it even yours?' 'O'course it is, why do you think he's here?' 'Then what did you name it?' '...Ray, that's what I named him' The dragon thought, maybe he had a clue. 'Now, i got work to do, and i don't want to see you lot keep coming up to him in your bloody search.' 'Very well...' IT then left. 'What do they want with you anyway? You're not even a week old and they qeustion me...' Lyra hadn't let Sylvia out of her sight for her protection, even when she had to go out, she always had Sylvia with her. Navra had asked where it came from, Lyra sayign she wanted it a secrect, not for anyone to know. She enjoyed every moment of her time with Sylvia, completly forgetting it wasn't hers. Because of her love and protection for Sylvia, she was especially scared when one of the shadow dragons stopped to look at her. She called Sylvia close to her and waited for it to leave, and when it did, only then did she relax. Lyra looked at her. 'You know, no matter what happens, i'll always protect you, even if you go against me...'
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#124 Posted: 02:13:12 14/08/2009
I read the first page and then realized that there were 2 more so I stoped... don't like reading large amounts at a time.... but anyhow.... something's you can improve (Only trying to help )
Between paragraphs try adding an extra line of space.... it makes it crisper looking other than that it seams to go nicely..... though I like the longer chapters that it looks like you are now producing here near the end.... Keep it up |
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#125 Posted: 02:22:13 14/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, i have a problem writing large ammounts....
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#126 Posted: 02:26:36 14/08/2009
I understand that much.... I have problems writing small amounts.... lol
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#127 Posted: 02:38:22 14/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, maybe cause it's half 3 in the morning...
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#128 Posted: 02:39:37 14/08/2009
lol... only 10:30 here... lol... different time zones
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#129 Posted: 03:06:38 14/08/2009
when do the other 2 eggs hatch
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#130 Posted: 05:39:00 14/08/2009
It was good chapter,
For us not for the keyboard if you really crashed on it
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#131 Posted: 06:22:53 14/08/2009 | Topic Creator
You mean other egg....
Thanks... *crashes*
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#132 Posted: 22:36:31 14/08/2009
i thought there were 4 eggs
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#133 Posted: 00:44:33 15/08/2009 | Topic Creator
No, only 3.
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#134 Posted: 11:09:40 15/08/2009
I just noticed you posted more,I will read it when I come back from church,bleh >.<
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#135 Posted: 13:31:12 19/08/2009
More?
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#136 Posted: 18:41:32 19/08/2009
finally you posted more, but now we must wait once again. Please continue
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#137 Posted: 13:44:28 20/08/2009
wens the next chapter
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#138 Posted: 13:53:23 20/08/2009
Waiting for more
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#139 Posted: 11:08:18 21/08/2009
still waiting...
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#140 Posted: 00:22:54 23/08/2009 | Topic Creator
hmmm.....
'dad...? Daaaad?' The male heard the voice echo, yet he remained asleep. '.......dad, come on.....................DAD!!' He then woke up completly shocked. He panted. 'What was that for?' He saw Tyren smile at him, but something was different, like he was more excited, it was then when he looked up to see the light blue egg they had recieved not long ago shake and move. It was hatching. He then picked himself and moved over. At first it shook, then sligh cracks began appearing with them turning into large cracks and then finally, the egg shell colapsing. The hatchling inside had it's eyes closed at first before slowly opening them to see Tyren excited over it. The hatchling nuzzled his face. 'I think he likes you.' 'He? You mean...' 'Yes, he's you're baby brother ain't he?' He said chuckling. The hatchling looked at him, before falling out of his shell. He picked himself up and shook himself, then looking back at him. 'What do we call him?' 'Why don't you decide?' The hatchling looked at him. Tyren thought. 'I can't think of anything...' The hatchling walked over to the male and nuzzled him. He stroked it. 'How about manic hey?' 'Manic.... Yeah!' Tyren smiled. The male (I know! i'll name him soon!) looked out. He looked shocked. 'You could of told me it was midday.' 'Well, i did.... You didn't wake.' Tyren smiled. Lyra had since moved from the beach with Sylvia to the town again. Some people looked, but minded they're own buissiness. Narva was looking around before she saw Lyra and ran over. 'Hey Narva.' She greeted. 'Hey Lyra! Oh, and i ment to ask you yestrday.' 'Ask me what?' 'Well, me and.... hello there..' She said after noticing Sylvia peeking at her through the gap between Lyra and her wing. Narva smiled at Lyra. 'You never said you were pregnant before...' 'Didn't you see?' 'No, then again, you never said about it..' 'Her.' 'Her to me before either...' she said curious. Narva wasn't the only one curious. One of the shadow dragons was over hearing they're convosation. 'Well, i didn't know how you'd react.' 'I'm you're buddy! How would you'd think i'd react?' 'I'm not sure.' 'So....' She said looking away, then looking at her again. 'Who's the lucky guy?' '...Guy? Oh... right.' 'You ok?' 'Yeah yeah, fine' Narva thought for a second. 'You weren't... you know.... were you?' 'I wasn't what do i know?' Narva sighed. 'You know..... raped..' 'Oh god no... no no no.' 'So who's the guy?' Lyra thought. Not once did she ever think about dating, or ever tell Narva. She didn't want to say the truth, not because she didn't trust Narva, she had known her for years, but she didn't know if it was private or public. She had to think of something quick. She hadn't left the vilage, nor had she dated, but she did fish every so often. 'Uh.... Sur..' 'Surviron?' Narva said shockingly. 'What? Oh no no... not him. His names Sur... Not sur, saviron.' 'Saviron?' Narva repeated. 'Yeah, we met through my little fishing trips.' 'How long have you known him?' 'A couple of moths...why?' 'Well, wy haven't i seen him?' Lyra had to lie once again. She tried thinking of another excuse. She had a reason for having Sylvia, but now she needed a new one. 'Well.... we... we kinda wanted it... it to be a secret...' 'A secret? Why? you can trust me, i'm your best friend...' 'Just... listen, how about you come over sometime and we'll talk then?' 'Why not now?' Lyra moved her head closer. 'I'm not sure if you and i are the only ones listning.' She whispered. 'Oh.... Ok then, when?' 'Sometime after morning prefrebly.' 'Ok, i guess i'll see you then.' 'Ok...' Narva looked around before flying off. Lyra looked around and sighed. 'Oh, i never asked, what's her name?' Narva said after flying back. 'Sylvia.... her names Sylvia.' She said smiling at her.
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#141 Posted: 10:28:13 23/08/2009
FINALLY!
Good...
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#142 Posted: 13:41:09 25/08/2009
nice chapter
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#143 Posted: 23:58:01 27/08/2009
PC!!!
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#144 Posted: 17:42:43 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
The dragon who had overheard had since gone to the now dark cliff of the castle now in ruins. He had gone up to Zenith.
'This had better be good.' He said turning round. 'Well, is it good if i think i may have one of the three siblings?' Zenith looked interested. 'Go on...' 'Well, this firl called Lyra, she has a girl with her, i just listened in on the off chance, and she kept pausing for time at points.' Zenith lost his intrest and turned back. 'And i know she's lying about the guy she supposedly met. So where would the child have come from? Considering she's blue and the girl is white...' He looked back round. 'So...? Do you have them?' '..eh what?' 'Do you have them?' He repeated. 'No...' 'And why not? If you have a lead why not just get them now? Get it over with? Hey?' 'Well, i...' 'Thought i might be intrested. You really just came to gloat over the others didn't you?' 'No i.. uh...' 'Then when come if you don't have them? I said to come only if you had them, or had killed all of them.... You have done neither... Your wasting your time and moreimportantly, time spent find them.' The dragon stepped back slightly. 'Well, i.... i'll go now.... grab this kid and...' 'Just hold it... Where does this "Lyra" live? Is it the one who helped amilia? Or did you just come to say you "might" have a lead?' Zenith walked slowly closer. The dragon stepped back. 'Sir, please, no offence... but you said i was wasting time... when i could be going and getting them, so technicly, aren't you wasting that ti..'. He was quickly grabbed by his throat. 'What was that? Im now wasting time? Since when were you in charge?' 'Ne....ever...' 'Exactly.' 'But....you ar...e... Zenith went to hit before being blocked. He then used his horns againt him. The dragon then quickly used it's tail blade to try and stab him. Zenith looked. 'So after you had killed me... What were you planning?' The dragon now was in disbelief. 'But...how?! It's impossible!!' 'There's a reason im feared.... and you just saw it...' He then hit the dreagon to the ground and hit the back of his neck hard. The dragon couldn't move, but just about survived. Zenith moved in front. 'You're just lucky, but i never let someone try to kill me...' He looked at him. 'And sruvive...' He then hit the dragon off the cliff and watched as he fell to the deps below. The dragon hit some rocks on the way down before hitting the sea and sinking.
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#145 Posted: 18:59:00 29/08/2009
He is mad, no doupt XP
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#146 Posted: 19:04:05 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
He looked around and saw some had watched.
'Well what are you waiting for?! Find out if this kid is the sibling or not!!' The all flew off. Now another had gone, they had reason to be scared, the fact the stab hadn't killed Zenith made them even more scared. He waited until they had gone to look. He saw the stab, and the scarlet red luquid around it, he knew he was lucky to be alive. He looked over the cliff. The pain didn't matter to him, he knew what he wanted to do. short i know.
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#147 Posted: 19:08:50 29/08/2009
Wow,Zenith didn't yell so much this time.Good parts.
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#148 Posted: 19:41:53 29/08/2009
*nods* what S-F said
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#149 Posted: 00:18:06 30/08/2009
PC!!!
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#150 Posted: 13:34:29 31/08/2009
nice chapter
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