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Blaze: Fire Dawn [CLOSED]
Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#101 Posted: 23:26:46 16/05/2009
PC!!!
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#102 Posted: 04:39:11 17/05/2009
Wow! smilie Plz write more
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#103 Posted: 04:54:49 17/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze couldn't help but to feel alone and scared. Everywhere he went, no-one greeted him friendly, exspect for Kai and Harmony. Kai's daughter, Sunshine, was quiet friendly too him. Kai had told Blaze that Yula was Sunshine's mother. Blaze was quiet shocked at first, because Yula was his mothers sister. But, sadly, Sunshine didn't know this.
Harmony also had a son called Fireclaw. But of course, medience dragons are forbin to have cubs. But Harmony had Fireclaw before she was a medience dragon.

Soon, Blaze left SunClan to carry on his journey to ShadowClan. "Thank-you so much for letting me stay in SunClan," Blaze said as he dipped his head. Flamefang smiled. "You are welcome, but remeber, if you do manage to get back to ShadowClan, we won't greet you friendly again. The Dragon Code says that for a reason. Good-bye Blaze, and good luck." Flamefang said. Blaze smiled. I wonder where Kallik, Darkfang and Sandstorm are? Blaze couldn't do anything about it now. "Go on! Get out of here, whelp!" Dustfire rasped. Suddenly, Kallik, Darkfang and Sandstorm burst from the bushes, and charged towards Blaze.
"Kallik! Darkfang! Sandstorm!" Blaze cried. But Blaze was pushed away from the SunClan dragons that came to greet their long, lost friends.
"Where have you been?"
"What happened to you?!"
"I'm so glad you're all back!"
After all the explaining, and hugs, Kallik spotted Blaze squeezed in the crowd. "Blaze!" Kallik gasped as she rushed over to him and squeezed him tight. "Kallik! Darkfang! Sandstrom!" Blaze croaked.
"Hey, Blaze! Long time no see," Darkfang grinned. "Hi Blaze! What happened to you? What did the Twolegs do to you?" Sandstorm asked.
Blaze explained all about the Twolegs, and the "Dragon Heaven". Of course, the rest of SunClan were listening. When Blaze had finished, all the other dragons started to ask questions. "Did they eat you?" Squeaked a young cub. Blaze chuckled to himself. "SunClan dragons did you say?" Flamefang asked, he was clearly intrested in Blaze's story.
"That can't be right! The whelps lying!" Yowled Dustfire. "Quiet, Dustfire! What were their names, again?" Flamefang asked.
"Well, their was Jiang, and her son and daughter, Asmia and Kotshoto, and Asmia's cubs, Riko and Talik." Blaze explained. Flamefang's eyes nearly popped out of their sockets. What's the matter with Flamefang? Does he know them? Harmony gasped. Kai looked down at his paws. "Jiang was my sister," Flamefang croaked.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#104 Posted: 17:37:10 17/05/2009
WRITE MORE!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#105 Posted: 04:51:20 18/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze almost fell off his paws. Jiang? Flamefang's sister? But the rest of SunClan didn't hear what their leader had said. "Anyway," Flamefang said, changing the subject. "Kallik, Darkfang and Sandstorm, what happened to you? Where did you go after the battle with ShadowClan?" Flamefang asked. Kallik soon told Flamefang and the rest of SunClan how they had gotten lost in the battle, because ShadowClan had driven them out. "And of course, we met Blaze." Darkfang sneered. Blaze looked down at his paws. He didn't know that Darkfang ment it in a harsh way, or a funny way. It was best not too say anything. Sandstorm sat next to Blaze while she and her family explained the rest of their journey. Suddenly, Blaze didn't want to leave SunClan just yet. Blaze sighed. I wish I could stay with Sandstorm, Blaze thought glumly. Suddenly, just as if the ansterors read Blaze's mind, an angry group of black storm clouds blocked off the sun. SunClan's power came from the sun, and if the sun was blocked, or any sorce of light, they would immiendently lose their powers.
Fat drops of rain started to pour down on the dragons. "Quick! Everyone! Back inside!" Flamefang bellowed as Kai, and Sandpelt followed Flamefang to his den. The rest of the SunClan dragons quickly raced into their dens.
"Come with me," Sandstorm said, as she took Blaze's paw and lead him into a den. Looks like I'm not going just yet, Blaze thought with a grin.
Darkfang looked up as Blaze and Sandstorm padded in. "Looks like your not going just yet," Darkfang snorted. "He can't stay here any longer!" Spat a young male SunClan dragon. "Yes he can Ashclaw," Kai said. Blaze whipped his head around to see Kai, standing at the entrace of the den.
"Flamefang said that Blaze can stay here till the rain stops," Kai explained.
Yes! A rush of happiness buzzed through Blaze. I can stay with Sandstorm! Ashclaw snorted with disgust as Kai padded out of the den. "You can sleep next to me if you like," Sandstorm purred, offering Blaze a nice, soft, warm nest. This is the best day ever! Blaze thought happily as he trotted over to Sandstorm. Darkfang watched Blaze wairly. "Thanks Sandstorm," Blaze purred gratefully. Sandstorm smied at Blaze. She smiled at me! "You are welcome," Sandstorm purred back.
Blaze smiled back at Sandstorm, and the two dragons coiled up, and went to sleep.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#106 Posted: 05:03:16 18/05/2009
Write more!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#107 Posted: 05:40:29 18/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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Dawn rippled across the forest, as Blaze stumbled out of his den. Sandstorm, Darkfang, Ashclaw and the rest of the SunClan apptertices were gone. Blaze blinked back the early sunlight, and yawned. Blaze padded over to the fresh-kill pile, and munched happily on some insects.
Sandstorm trotted over to Blaze once he had finished eating. Sandstorm! Blaze smiled happily. "Hi, Blaze!" Sandstorm purred. "Umm, hi Sandstorm!" Blaze purred back. Sunshine bounded over to the two dragons. "H-hi! Whoa, a-ah!" Sunshine yelped as she tripped over her tail. Sunshine really is clumbsy, I wish I could tell her I'm her cousin, Blaze sighed. "Are you alright?" Sandstorm asked, as Blaze and herself helped Sunshine up. "Yeah! It's just that my tail always gets in the way!" Sunshine said cheerfully. Fireclaw padded over. "Huh! More likely your just Torax brained!" Fireclaw teased. Sunshine growled. "No I am not!" She hissed. "Are too!" Fireclaw spat back. In not time at all, the two were fighting. Blaze laughed slilently to himself. Sandstorm giggled.
Flamefang stalked out of his den, followed by Kai and Sandpelt, and leapt onto the Fire Rock "Let all dragons old enough too catch their own prey gather here for a Clan meeting!" Flamefang yowled. I wonder what Flamefang has too say, Blaze wondered as he, Sandstorm, Sunshine, and Fireclaw padded over. Soon, when the Clan was gathered and settled, Flamefang spoke: "Two cubs are now five Moons old, and now are ready to become apptertinces. Firecub and Cindercub," Firecub and Cindercub, who were sitting by their mother, trotted up happily onto the Fire Rock. "May our ansetors look down on these two cubs and bring forth their appterince names," Flamefang said, looking up at the sky.
Firecub and Cindercub couldn't help but to squeal with excitment.
"Firecub," Flamefang bellowed. Firecub sprang too his paws, and looked up at his Clan leader. "Do you promise to follow the Dragon Code, and protect your Clan even at the cost of your life?" Flamefang asked.
Firecub gulped, "Yes," He squeaked. Flamefang smiled. "From this day onwould you will be known as Fireheart." Fireheart beamed at his mother and sister, and reapated his name over, and over again. "Your menator will be Sunfang," Flamefang said. Sunfang, a golden and yellow male dragon, padded up to the Fire Rock and touched noses with Fireheart.
"Sunfang, I know your knowledge and braveness will be passed onto Fireheart, that will make him a strong warrior." Flamefang smiled. Sunfang dipped his head, and sat next to Fireheart.
"Cindercub," Flamefang breathed. Cindercub bounded up next to Flamefang, only to squeal with excitement. "Do you promise to follow the Dragon Code, and protect your Clan even at the cost of your life?" Cindercub looked down at her paws. She gulped. "Yes," Cindecub squeaked. "From this day onwould you will be known as Cinderclaw," Flamefang said. Cinderclaw beamed at her brother and mother, the same way as Fireheart had, and squealed happily. "Your menator will be Brightheart," Flamefang continued. Brightheart, a pale yellow female dragon, padded up onto the Fire Rock and touched noses with Cinderclaw.
"Brightheart, I know that your kindness and wiseness will be passed onto Cinderclaw, that will make her a great warrior." Flamefang finished.
"Fireheart! Cinderclaw! Fireheart! Cinderclaw!" SunClan chanted. Even Blaze joined in. Sunfang, Fireheart, Cinderclaw, and Brightheart leapt down from the Fire Rock. Fireheart's and Cinderclaw's mother licked her cubs proudly, and watched them pad over to the appterntices. When the noise had died down, Flamefang spoke once more. "As you all know, there is a Gathering tonight, and since the rain has gone, Blaze can join ShadowClan after the Gathering."
"But what will SilverClan say? He's a hybrid! And ShadowClan might even not want him!" Dustfire yowled. "Yeah! What if they send him back too us?" Yowls of agreement filled the Clan. "Silenece!" Flamefang hissed. "We will have too wait and see, this Clan meeting is dismissed." Flamefang growled, as he stalked back to his den. Followed by Kai and Sandpelt. Gathering? What's a Gathering? Blaze wondered. It looks like I'll just have to find out when it happens.
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#108 Posted: 05:55:15 18/05/2009
That is a very big paragrah! Please write more!
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#109 Posted: 06:09:33 18/05/2009
wm!!!
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#110 Posted: 09:16:47 18/05/2009
Please continue!
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Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#111 Posted: 06:54:56 19/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. smilie
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Flamefang had chosen Kai, Sandpelt, Ashclaw, Harmony, Harmony's appetince Sunleaf, Sandstorm, Sunshine, Fireclaw, Fireheart, Cinderclaw, Sunfang, Brightheart, Kallik and Blaze to go to the Gathering.
"Do you know what a Gathering is?" Fireclaw asked Blaze, as they and the rest of the dragons that Flamefang had chosen made their way to the ThreeTrees. "Er, no." Blaze mumbled. I feel like an idiot saying that! Blaze looked down at his paws. Fireclaw snorted. Sandstorm rolled her eyes. "A Gathering is when all three Clans gather together for a Clan meeting. But there is a truce, that no dragon from any Clan should harm, or fight one another." Sandstorm explained. "And every Clan must be there, or the ancsetors will get angry." Sunshine added.
Well, at least SilverClan can't harm me. I wonder what ShadowClan will think of me? Blaze shivered at the thought.
Flamefang finally appeared from his den, once again, followed by Kai and Sandpelt. Flamefang signaled with his tail to follow him. Kai and Sandpelt were on both sides of Flamefang, while Sunfang and Brightheart behind them. Harmony and Sunleaf were behind them, along with Ashclaw, Fireheart and Cinderclaw. Fireclaw, Blaze, Kallik, Sandstorm and Sunshine were at the very back. "This is going to be our first Gathering! I wonder what it will be like!" Blaze could hear Cinderclaw squeal. "Yeah! I've never seen a ShadowClan dragon, or a SilverClan dragon before." Fireheart squealed. Ashclaw snorted. "Then why don't you look at him." Ashclaw snarled. Fireheart and Cinderclaw glanced nervously at Blaze, then turned away. Blaze's muscles tensed. I'll give them something to be scared about! But Blaze stopped himself. Fireheart and Cinderclaw were basically still cubs. They didn't know any better. Blaze stiffened. He could smell a cold, minty sort of scent. Blaze immdentliy reconized it. SilverClan! "We're almost there," Kallik breathed. Flamefang lead the dragons up a mountain of rocks. "Why can't we just fly over it?" Blaze panted. But no-one asnwered his question.
When they were at the top of the rock mountain, Blaze could see three, enormus trees. There was a small island, were the three trees were.
Blaze gulped at the dark gurgled water below. "Do we have to cross that river?" Blaze gulped. "Yes we do, but don't worry, there's a tree bridge, see." Kallik pointed out to Blaze. There was a thick, large tree that was like a bridge to ThreeTrees and too the forest. "Is this ThreeTrees?" Blaze asked. Sandstorm nodded. Flamefang lead the dragons to the tree bridge. Blaze sniffed the air. He could smell and see SilverClan from here, and when he was on the rock mountain. Sadly enough, Blackstorm was there. Along with Snowscales, his aunt Yula, Whiteface, and some other dragons that he did not reconize. Blaze stiffened. He could smell a new scent. A strong, sharp foul scent that smelled a lot like his father.

ShadowClan!
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Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#112 Posted: 07:52:10 19/05/2009
Please wright more! smilie
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#113 Posted: 14:23:42 19/05/2009
The Gathering place is a lot like the one in Warriors. WM!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#114 Posted: 05:46:15 20/05/2009 | Topic Creator
I know, I want it to be like the Warriors.
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"ShadowClan's here," Fireclaw breathed. And sure enough, a group of ShadowClan dragons prowled out of the brambles. Blaze couldn't help but to look with intrest at the ShadowClan dragons. Sandstorm waved a paw in front of Blaze. "Come on, let's go! The Gathering is about to start!" Sandstorm hissed, as she dragged Blaze along. Flamefang, Snowscales, and Razorclaw leapt onto a shining, silver rock. "What's the rock called?" Blaze whispered to Kallik. "That's called the Star Rock, it's were all the Clan leaders and deputys sit on when it's a Gathering." Kallik whispered back. Poisonheart, Fearclaw, Rayheart, Moika and some other ShadowClan dragons were at the Gathering, too. Blaze wondered if these dragons were realated to him, or his father. I will find out when I tell them, Blaze sighed. Kai sat next to Flamefang, while Blackstorm was next to Snowscales. Blaze shivered at the last encounter with SilverClan.
They almost killed me! Blaze reminded himself. The ShadowClan leader, or what Blaze thought was the ShadowClan leader, looked a lot like his father himself. In fact, they looked excatly the same! But they were different colours. That must be father's father, Blaze thought excitedly. A female ShadowClan dragon, that was white and blue, seemed very familar to Blaze. And another female ShadowClan dragon, who was an acid green colour, seemed very familar to Blaze as well. Blaze couldn't help but to notice his aunt Yula, look at Sunshine. Blaze wouldn't blame her. Sunshine was Yula's daughter.
Snowscales was the first to speak; "SilverClan is all well, we have three new cubs. The mother is my daughter, Yula." Snowscales boomed proudly.
The three Clans congraudulated Yula, and yowls of 'well done'! filled the air. Blaze saw Kai look very red in the face, and very disapointed. It looks like Kai wasn't the father. Yula had found a new mate. When the noise had died down, Snowscales continued. "Their names are; Frostcub, Icecub, and Silvercub!" Snowscales finished. A dark blue male SilverClan dragon sat proudly next to Yula. Looks like he's the father. Poor Kai, Blaze thought sadly. "SunClan also bring good news," Flamefang bellowed. "We have two new appertinces, Fireheart and Cinderclaw!" Fireheart and Cinderclaw squealed happily, as some dragons patted them on the back, and yowled words of incouragment. "SunClan is also healthy and well. Razorclaw, what news has ShadowClan have?" Flamefang asked kindly. The dragon the was called Razorclaw, puffed up his chest.
"ShadowClan is heathly and strong. One of our queens is almost ready to have her cubs," Razorclaw bellowed. Rayheart, who was the ShadowClan deputy, nodded proudly. "And Rayheart, our ShadowClan deputy, is the father of these unborn cubs." Razorclaw finished. Flamefang and Snowscales nodded. Blackstorm looked down at his paws. Blaze almost fell off his paws. Why does Blackstorm look so much like a ShadowClan dragon? Blaze wondered. Maybe, his mother was a SilverClan dragon, and his father was a ShadowClan dragon. . .like me? No! I should stop thinking these stupid thoughts! But Blaze had a dark feeling that he was right.
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#115 Posted: 06:06:56 20/05/2009
This is getting good! Write more!
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#116 Posted: 14:28:50 20/05/2009
Yes it is getting good!
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#117 Posted: 22:57:56 22/05/2009
^ What they said.
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#118 Posted: 01:05:59 23/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.smilie By the way, Blackstorm's father is Razorclaw. Pretty shocking, eh?
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Flamefang broke the silence. "SunClan also has a. . .a dragon that would like to join ShadowClan," Flamefang said, uncomfortably. "His name is Blaze, he has ShadowClan blood in him, along with. . .SilverClan." There was a long silenece. ShadowClan and SilverClan stared at Blaze, and muttered things to each other. Snowscales eyes grew large as he saw Blaze. "Blaze! That whelp! His parents broke the Dragon Code! I tried getting ride of him. . .but we lost him." Snowscales growled. Blackstorm glared at Blaze, and spat angrily. "That whelp is nothing but a useless, runt, hybrid cub!" Blackstorm spat. Razorclaw couldn't take his eyes of Blaze. Blaze saw Rayheart whisper something to the ShadowClan leader.
"We shouldn't keep him, we should kill him! He's nothing but a hybrid!" Spat a young male. Yowls of agreement muffled the air. "Enough!" Razorclaw roared. Blaze couldn't help but too quiver with fear. Maybe coming here wasn't the brighest of ideas, Blaze shivered.
"Rayheart and I have dieced to let him stay in ShadowClan until his parents come to get him. But for now, he's a prisoner in ShadowClan."
Razorclaw bellowed. Blaze gulped. He couldn't help but to feel scared.
What will father say? What if they don't get here!? Blaze shivered. Sandstorm nuzzled him. "Don't worry, you'll be alright." Sandstorm purred. "Yeah! Razorclaw isn't that bad! I don't think so anyway. . ." Sunshine said. "Good luck, it was nice knowing you." Fireclaw said, looking at Blaze for the last time. "Bring the hybrid here!" Razorclaw bellowed. Kallik and Sandpelt lead Blaze to the Star Rock. "Don't worry, you'll be fine," Kallik whispered to Blaze. "I sure hope so," Blaze mutterd.
Sandpelt and Kallik padded away as Blaze sat in front of the mighty ShadowClan leader.
"Who are your parents?" Razorclaw snarled. Blaze gulped. Should I tell him? "M-my father i-is. . ." Blaze paused, and took a deep breath.
"Shadowclaw."
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#119 Posted: 03:25:38 23/05/2009
Write more!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#120 Posted: 06:04:46 23/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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The Clans were silent. Razorclaw finally spoke. "D-did you s-say, Shadowclaw?" Razorclaw stammered. Rayheart leaned closer, wanting to hear more. "Shadowclaw? But that can't be!" Rayheart spat. "Hush, Rayheart! What did you say, Blaze?" Razorclaw snarled. Blaze gulped, and looked down at his paws. All of ShadowClan, SilverClan and SunClan were staring at him. I have a bad feeling about this! Blaze shivered, but finally spoke. "Y-yes," Blaze mumbled. Razorclaw stepped back. "Shadowclaw. . .my son. . .no, he couldn't have. . .is he alive?" Razorclaw said, leaning closer to Blaze. Blaze nodded slowly. Snowscales butted in. "And my daughter, Crystal? Is she? Speak, cub!" Snowscales growled. Blaze gulped. "Y-yes, my mother and father are alive and well." Blaze manged to say. A dark red ShadowClan dragon, with light red stripes, who's name was Fearclaw yowled; "Shadowclaw! You're Shadowclaw's son?" Moika, the ShadowClan's medicence dragon yowled as well; "Shadowclaw is my brother!" Poisonheart, the mother of Shadowclaw and Moika yowled as well; "My son is alive!" Poisonheart, Moika and Fearclaw raced up to the front of the Star Rock. All three of them gazed up at Blaze. My. . .my grandmother? And my aunt Moika? Father's told me about them, Blaze rested his gaze on Fearclaw.
Is that, Fearclaw? Rayheart stared at Blaze as well, Rayheart was Fearclaw's brother. "But you are part SilverClan!" Razorclaw hissed.
"Yes! That is why we should kill him!" Blackstorm snarled. "D-don't kill me! Please!" Blaze screamed. "Don't kill him!" Moika yowled. "Maybe if he is part SilverClan, he has ShadowClan blood in him all the same."
"My daughter speaks the turth!" Poisonheart yowled. Flamefang glanced at Blaze, then said nothing. Kai looked at Blaze sadly, then looked at Razorclaw. "Do you have venom?" Razorclaw asked, sternly.
"Yes, yes I-I do." Blaze said, puffing up his chest. Razorclaw looked at Blaze right in the eye. Blaze shivered. Please. . .I'm your kin! Blaze screamed inside.
"Like I said, you will be kept prisoner in ShadowClan. I don't know what to do with you, rip you to shreads, or welcome you will open paws." Razorclaw grunted. Poisonheart gasped. "Razorclaw! He's our grandson!"
Razorclaw growled at his mate, which Poisonheart kept quiet.
Moika sighed with relife, along with her mother. Fearclaw looked down at his paws, not to sure that he should be on his friend's sons side anymore.
Thank the ancsetors their letting me stay, Blaze sighed.
Razorclaw, Snowscales, and Flamefang flicked their tails to tell their Clans that the Gathering was over. Razorclaw and Rayheart lead Blaze into ShadowClan. He could hear young ShadowClan appertinces whispering to each other. "Are you really part SilverClan?" Squeaked a young appertince. Blaze growled, and padded away. Blaze glanced sadly at SunClan, as he watched Sandstorm, Kallik and Sunshine pad away.
I'm going to miss you, Sandstorm. Razorclaw lead ShadowClan back into the ShadowClan border.
I can't beleive it, I'm going into ShadowClan!
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Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#121 Posted: 09:04:47 23/05/2009
Please wright more! smilie
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#122 Posted: 15:28:02 23/05/2009
Ya write more!
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#123 Posted: 20:11:30 23/05/2009
More!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#124 Posted: 22:59:51 23/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Don't worry, Blaze will see Sandstorm again.
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Blaze didn't know weather to be scared or thrilled. Well, ShadowClan is part of me. Soon, they reached the ShadowClan camp. A sharp pain shivered up Blaze's spine, mostly all of ShadowClan was staring at him, as if he was an enemy. Poisonheart wrapped her arms around him. "Oh, I have a grandson! My grandson!" Poisonheart beamed, hugging Blaze tighter. Moika smiled down at Blaze. "You're father saved my life," Moika whispered into Blaze's ear. Shadowclaw had told Blaze countless times how he had saved his sister, and brought her back to life. Razorclaw snarled, and Poisonheart imdently let go of Blaze. "I need to talk to the hybrid alone," Razorclaw hissed.
Blaze gulped, and padded after his grandfather. "Don't go too hard on him!" Poisonheart called as they disapeered into Razorclaw's den.
Razorclaw sat down, and tucked his tail beneath his paws.
"Sit," Razorclaw growled. Blaze did as he was told. Blaze was shaking all over. What do you want? Blaze screamed inside.
Razorclaw sighed. "Where is Shadowclaw?" Razorclaw snarled. Blaze gulped. Should I tell him? They could invade my parent's home! Even if Razorclaw is my grandfather. . .Mother and Father wanted to keep the Moon Mountains a secret. . .I promised not to tell anyone were we lived, but I failed. . .I might as well, Blaze sighed. "My father lives up in the Moon Mountains. Their really happy there, please. Don't-" "No! My son, my own flesh and blood. . .has left his own Clan. . .forever!" Razorclaw roared.
"Trust me, he's a lot more happier-" Razorclaw hissed. "I don't care! His rightful place is with his own Clan! And his mate, she should go back to her own Clan, and they will never see each other again! And you!" Razorclaw spat. "You will be held prisoner, forever."
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#125 Posted: 23:18:02 23/05/2009
smilie Oh no! Blaze! *kills Razorclaw*
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#126 Posted: 01:18:31 24/05/2009
smilie wm!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#127 Posted: 05:42:57 26/05/2009 | Topic Creator
I might write some more this weekend, or next week. It's just that my cousins are coming this Thursday, and I have tons of homework to do.
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#128 Posted: 14:37:41 26/05/2009
smilie That's too long to wait! smilie
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#129 Posted: 23:38:01 28/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, okay! I'll write more now! smilie
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Blaze's blood turned to ice. No. . .he c-can't! Blaze yelled inside. "You can't!" Blaze yelled. Razorclaw laughed. "Of course I can, whelp! I'm ShadowClan's leader, I do what I please! Anyway, you look like you could have some food, eh?" Razorclaw snarled. Blaze stepped back a little.
Food? But I-I'm being held prisoner! "Well, don't just stand there!" Razorclaw snapped, as he stalked out of his den. Blaze quickly followed behind. Razorclaw lead Blaze to the fresh-kill pile. "Eat," Razorclaw hissed, with a sneer. Blaze gulped as he saw all the dead rabbits and other animals. I. . .I c-can't eat meat! "I said, eat!" Razorclaw roared. Blaze almost jumped out of his scales. "I have no other choice. . .eat this, or starve," Blaze muttered to himself.
Blaze sniffed a small rabbit. He turned away from it at first, but Razorclaw made sure Blaze wouldn't run away. Blaze gulped and sniffed the rabbit again, he took a deep loud sniff. He could smell the warm fresh scent of flesh and blood.
Blood. . .flesh. . .meat. . .kill! Blaze opened his mouth, flared his fangs, and started to devoure the fresh-kill. The blood flowed into his mouth, warm and fresh. Razorclaw smiled. Blaze had never tasted anything like this before. I should of listened to Father a long time ago! Blaze thought as he started to crunch on the flesh and bones.
Soon, there was nothing left but rabbit skin and fur.
Razorclaw grinned. "Yes! I have unleashed the true blood within you!" Razorclaw boomed. Blaze was puzzled. Blood. . .? Wait, he means ShadowClan blood! I am turning into a ShadowClan dragon!
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#130 Posted: 00:19:20 29/05/2009
WM!!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#131 Posted: 06:14:36 02/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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"I can see that shocked look on you're face!" Razorclaw roared. "And yes, you are turning into a ShadowClan dragon! Even though you're stupid mother was from SilverClan, you're true, true blood is ShadowClan blood. It will only be a matter of time until you turn into you're true form," Blaze gulped and shivered. T-true f-form. . .? I-I'm going to change!? Blaze's blood turned too ice. Blaze suddenly remeber when he had broke free from the Twoleg nest, with Jiang and Ogozok. He had breathed ice, Blaze was sure of it. Crystal had shown Blaze her ice and wind breath, and said one day too, he would have either wind breath, or ice. Now, Blaze wasn't so sure. Maybe he would only have his ice breath for a short ammount of time, but his true power would be his venom. But Blaze was still confused, and scared.
Razorclaw laughed. "Maybe you will turn into a fine ShadowClan warrior after all! Even if you share SilverClan blood! But still, I am true too my word, you will stay prisoner until you find your true ShadowClan self!"
Blaze gasped. "N-no! You c-can't!" Blaze cried. Razorclaw grinned. "Oh, yes I can. I'm you're grandfather, remeber? Ha! Oakclaw, take this whelp into the prisoners den," Razorclaw snarled. A brown and dark green dragon stalked over too Blaze. Oakclaw dipped his head. "As you wish." Oakclaw hissed as he lead Blaze into a small, cramped den.
"Go on, get in!" Oakclaw snapped. Blaze jumped, and scrambled into the den. Blaze could just hear Razorclaw yowl; "Oakclaw, Blackheart and Ravenfang, I want you too guard Blaze's den until Moonrise. But you are free to have some fresh-kill when you please." Two other black dragons dipped their heads to Razorclaw, and padded over beside Oakclaw.
Blaze sighed. Now I'll never get out of here! At this point, Blaze just wanted to leap into his mothers arm's, and just shut out the world, until all his worries were over. But that will never happen, I'll just be a stupid, lost, hybrid runt for the rest of my miserable life!
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#132 Posted: 15:11:51 02/06/2009
smilie WM!!!!
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#133 Posted: 07:40:33 03/06/2009
Please continue! smilie
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#134 Posted: 04:56:07 04/06/2009
Blaze likes. . .*gulps* blood now? smilie

WRITE MORE!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#135 Posted: 08:53:19 05/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Yup. His powers are making him savage. smilie
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As the weeks went by, Blaze had finally forgotten why he had come too this dreadful Clan. Although, he was slightly happy that he had met his grandmother, Poisonheart, Ogozok's daughter, and his fathers sister, Moika. But Blaze wished that his grandfather, Razorclaw, would let him free. But that would never happen now. Blaze stayed in the prisoners den for many weeks, almost a month. Either Blackheart, Ravenfang, Oakclaw or any other of the ShadowClan dragons would throw Blaze some meat.
Blaze would sink his fangs into the flesh, and began draining all the blood and flesh out. And what's worse, he had enjoyed the taste.
Blaze had finally come too the point when he would never touch a vegetable or piece of fruit again.

"Blaze?" Whispered a sweet, familar voice. Blaze grunted and raised his head too face Poisonheart. Will I ever get any sleep around here?
Poisonheart padded in and sat down next too her grandson. She sighed. Blaze looked away from her. "I know that Razorclaw has been tough on you," Poisonheart rasped. Blaze curled his lips back into a snarl, and thumped his tail angrily. "Been tough on me! Been tough on me! He wants too kill me! And I've got news for him, I'm going to be the one who kills him! Yes! That's what I'll do!" Blaze roared. Poisonheart stepped back and gasped. "No Blaze! That's not what I ment!" Oh, yes it is grandmother! Blaze screamed inside. Blaze smiled an twisted, evil smile, and his eyes glowed with hate and anger. Poisonheart stepped back, and raced out of the den. Blaze laughed. "That's right! You go tell that stupid, wimpy excuse for a Clan leader that I, his own flesh and blood will kill him! Ha, ha!" Blaze snarled.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#136 Posted: 14:06:21 05/06/2009
Cool. WM
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#137 Posted: 04:08:55 07/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.smilie Lol I love your avatar Firestar!
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Blaze bolted out of the den, Blackheart, Ravenfang or Oakclaw had no chance too catch him. "Quick! Get him!" Blaze could hear Ravenfang yowl.
Blaze turned around to face the three warriors. Blaze suddenly went completely dark red, his eyes black and dark, and his body had a dark, black glow too it. "I have the power of the stars! No-one can stop me!" Blaze roared as he tackled Blackheart. Blackheart snarled fericly, and raked his claws into Blaze's arm. Fresh, warm purple blood oozed out of the wound. Blaze yowled in pain, then sliced Blackheart's head off with his claws. Purple blood splattered all over the floor. Oakclaw and Ravenfang gasped in horror. "Look, cub, we don't want too hurt you," Oakclaw said, trying to calm Blaze down. Blaze curled his lips back into a snarl, and spat venom into Oakclaw's eyes. Oakclaw yowled in pain, as purple blood poured out of his eyes. "R-Ravenfang, go g-get R-Razorclaw." Oakclaw choked, the Oakclaw thumped onto the ground and slowly passed away. Ravenfang slowly stepped back from the uncontrolable dragon, then raced towards Razorclaw's den.
Moika was staring at Blaze, with fear and sorrow in her eyes. Blaze hissed at her. "Please Blaze, don't do this!" Moika cried. Blaze laughed.
"I can do as I please! I have the power of the stars!" Blaze roared.
Razorclaw and Rayheart raced out of the den, followed by Ravenfang.
Poisonheart was sitting next too Moika, as the rest of ShadowClan came out. Some young cubs squealed with fear at the sight of Blackheart's and Oakclaw's dead bodies. Their mothers wrapped their tails around their cubs.
"He killed two of our bravest warriors!"
"The monster should be killed!"
"Who will he kill next?!"
"He's mad!"
"Silence!" Razorclaw roared. Imdentily, the Clan stopped. Fearclaw glared at Blaze, but said nothing. "You have pushed it to far, cub!" Razorclaw snarled. "You purposly killed two of our bravest, and strongest warriors! You had no right by our ancsetors to murder them!"
Blaze growled, and arched his back into a fighting crouch. "This is your fault, Razorclaw! You locked me up in that den! You made me break out! This is your fault, grandfather!" Blaze hissed.
Razorclaw glared at his grandson. Poisonheart glaced at Blaze, then at her mate. Moika glared at her father. You did this too me! Blaze screamed inside.
"And this is what you did too me!" Razorclaw roared as he lunged towards Blaze.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#138 Posted: 04:18:39 07/06/2009
WM!!!!! THIS IS GETTING GOOD!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#139 Posted: 04:32:48 07/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.smilie
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Razorclaw pinned Blaze onto the ground, and snarled angrily. Razorclaw raked his claws on Blaze's stomach. Blaze roared with pain, as purple blood oozed out. "Father stop!" Moika yelled. "Razorclaw! No!" Poisonheart cried. But Razorclaw ignored them. "I should of done this a long time ago! Exspect, I should of done it too my stupid son, Shadowclaw!" Razorclaw growled, froth was forming on his lips.
Anger was building up in Blaze's mind. "No!!!!" Blaze yelled. Blaze roared with anger as he stabbed his fangs into Razorclaw's heart.
The whole inter Clan gasped.
"He's killing our leader!"
"No!"
"But he just can't!"
Blaze started too drain his grandfather's blood. Razorclaw started to choke and go faint. "No. . .!" Razorclaw mumbled, as he started to go pale. "Blaze! Stop!" Poisonheart and Moika yelled. Rayheart lunged towards Blaze. "No! You can't kill our leader!" Rayheart yowled. Blaze narrowed his eyes at the young male. Blaze dropped Razorclaw's limp body onto the ground, and spat an ice spike at Rayheart. Rayheart froze soild, in mid-air.
"He froze my brother!" Fearclaw yowled.
But before Fearclaw or any other dragon could stop him, Blaze drank the rest of Razorclaw's blood. Blaze had killed Razorclaw.
"Good-bye ShadowClan, I will never see you again!" Blaze growled as he spread his wings, flapped them a few times, then flew away.
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Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#140 Posted: 04:44:04 07/06/2009
GO BLAZE!! smilie

What? I think Razorclaw diserved that. smilie
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#141 Posted: 04:49:45 07/06/2009
Me too smilie WM!!!!!
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#142 Posted: 04:51:57 07/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Yes, he did.smilie I might write some more tomorrow or something.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#143 Posted: 04:58:02 07/06/2009
Aww, okay.
Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#144 Posted: 05:34:35 07/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Actually, I will write more now. I can't keep my fans waiting!smiliesmilie
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Blaze smiled to himself as he flew away from ShadowClan. Razorclaw's blood was dripping from his suddenly larger fangs. Blood. . .Blaze kill. . . Blaze thought hungrily. Blaze now had the taste of dragon blood, his own grandfather's blood. And what's worse, he had enjoyed it, even more than he had enjoyed when he first tasted the rabbit blood.
The wind whipped through his wings, suddenly hissing; "Yes, Blaze kill." "Blaze. . .KILL!" Blaze roared as he swooped down, just over the trees as he flew past. Blaze flapped his wings harder, and opened his mouth too let the scents of the forest call him. Blaze could smell many things, a rabbit, deer, even a overfed chipmunk, but there was one scent stronger than the rest. Dragon! Blaze eat, Blaze kill! Blaze flapped his wings widliy, following the scent as he flew.
Finally, Blaze landed and found the sorce of the scent. A young, sand coloured she-dragon was drinking by a small stream.
She stopped drinking, and slowly whipped her head around too face Blaze. The she-dragon gasped, and slowly stepped back. Blaze tilted his head too one side. The young dragon before Blaze was Sandstorm.
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Polar-krush Blue Sparx Gems: 871
#145 Posted: 05:47:53 07/06/2009
Blaze...killed... RAZORCLAW!!!!????? smilie (but Razorclaw did deserve thatsmilie)
And now he's going to kill Sandstorm!!??smilie *faints*
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#146 Posted: 05:50:06 07/06/2009
OMG SANDSTORM
Cynder_543 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1277
#147 Posted: 07:05:17 07/06/2009
Run Sandstorm!!! smilie
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Fireball Emerald Sparx Gems: 3163
#148 Posted: 14:05:03 09/06/2009
Yeah! Run!!!!!!!!!! (Razorclaw diserves it)
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Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282
#149 Posted: 21:25:52 09/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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"Blaze? Is that really you?" Sandstorm stammured. Blaze growled, and arched his back. "Blaze. . .kill! Blaze kill!" Sandstorm gasped. "Please Blaze! You don't have to do this! It's me! Sandstorm!" Sandstorm cried.
Blaze stepped back a little. "Sandstorm. . .?" Blaze croaked.
"Blaze, I left my Clan to go and find you, I knew you were in trouble." Sandstorm said. Blaze snarled, and lunged towards Sandstorm and pinned her down onto the ground. "No! Blaze, please!" Sandstorm begged, as she started to cry. "Blaze kill! Blaze need blood!" Blaze hissed. "No Blaze! Blaze don't kill! Blaze. . .I. . .love you." Sandstorm said.
Blaze quickly leapt off Sandstorm, and stepped back. "Sandstorm. . .love Blaze?" Blaze asked. Sandstorm nodded. "I love you so much Blaze, that's why I left SunClan to go find you." Sandstorm explained.
Blaze suddenly colasped onto the ground, and turned back to normal. "Blaze! No! What happened? Blaze!" Sandstorm yelped, as she raced over to him.
"Sandstorm. . ." Blaze mumbled, then he closed his eyes.
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897
#150 Posted: 22:48:08 09/06/2009
OMG! WM!! Luv ur avi, Skyqueen. DOGGIE GOT PWNED!!!
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