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#101 Posted: 05:18:02 15/08/2009
Oh no! Please continue!
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#102 Posted: 09:58:08 15/08/2009
More story! Please! I can't keep out of these stories!
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#103 Posted: 22:32:33 18/08/2009 | Topic Creator
It's a good thing I still have SOME readers who still read it.
Everyone else just left as soon as Icy was over.
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#104 Posted: 09:54:17 19/08/2009
Shame! They're missing out on great story here!
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#105 Posted: 23:45:53 22/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
Chapter 32 Flight to Darkness Spyro looked around everywhere, "Zappy???" "Oh, Spyro, this is horrible." cried Cynder. "I know, dear." replied Spyro. Zappy weeped. Zappy looked up into the sky, at Chaos's lair. "I'm going to go there and talk to him. It wasn't my fault Mom and Dad attacked him. And that cold stair that he gave me before he left..." said Zappy. Zappy got out her magic carpet and flew towards the Floating Islands. Cynder suddenly saw her flying towards Chaos's lair. "Spyro, Zappy's going to Chaos's lair!" cried Cynder. "We have to stop her before it's too late!" exclaimed Spyro, flying towards her. Cynder flew too. Zappy turned around and saw Spyro and Cynder on her tail. She shot Twilight Beam out of her mouth and knocked them to the ground. Spyro got back up. "Cynder, are you alright?" asked Spyro, lending Cynder a paw. "I'm fine, but Zappy isn't." replied Cynder. Zappy flew towards the lair. Suddenly, shadow beasts on Dreadwings surrounded her. "Huh?" wondered Zappy as the Screachos slashed at her. Zappy knocked them away with Twilight Beam and flew toward's Chaos's lair as more Screachos chased her. Zappy shot more Twilight Beam at them and then shot a wave of Twilight all around her. She flew towards the Lair and landed.
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#106 Posted: 06:06:49 23/08/2009
Yeah, this is a great story! Please continue!
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#107 Posted: 10:07:29 23/08/2009
More story please!
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#108 Posted: 22:33:11 27/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 33 Dark halls
Zappy walked up to the giant, black door and busted it down with Twilight Beam. She walked into the dark hallway. "I wonder where Chaos is." she said aloud, she didn't just want to know where he was for she could find him, but to find him for he could keep her company and get rid off all the scarey stuff. She gulped. Zappy walked down the Dark corridor and saw something in the wall... a face. Zappy....... Zappy......... whispered a voice. She leaned up against the cold stoney wall and listened, scared. Zappy..... You are in great danger, Twilight Princess. Leave this place at once! cried the voice. "Rahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have made me angry and now you will die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed a voice from behind. Zappy turned around to see the face scrurming in the wall, blood red. Zappy gasped as the face popped out of the all and formed in a strange creature half human half monster. Zappy screamed as she ran down the hallways, being chased by the creature. The red man was fast. Zappy shot some Twilight Beam, but it didn't do anything. The man roared and ran faster, reaching out to grab me. Zappy ran faster, she knew her magic carpet was fast enough, but if she slowed down to get it out it would be to late. She ran as fast as her heart descired, she needed an escape, and quick! The man growled and was only a centimeter away from grabbing Zappy when she turned into a room. The Monster reached in to grab her, but she slammed the door on him, locking it 10 times with the differen't locks on the door. The man roared, Zappy breathed out and leaned against the door, luckily it was made of metal, something the monster wasn't strong enough to break. I looked into the darkened room, something was in there. Blood red eyes gleamed in the Shadows. "Ah, Twilight Princess, you've made it. But now, you must die." said the voice. Zappy gasped.
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#109 Posted: 10:54:41 28/08/2009
More story PLEASE!
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#110 Posted: 23:12:18 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 34 Convexity
Zappy backed up against the door as the eyes came closer. Chaos shot a fireball at a torch and lit the room up. "Hello, Twilight Princess!!!" cried out Chaos as he grabbed Zappy's neck and held her up against the wall. Zappy struggled to breathe. Suddenly, Spyro and Cynder busted down the door, "Let her go!!" "Mom, Dad!" exclaimed Zappy. "Fools! You shall suffer the same fate!" cried Chaos as he shot convexity at them. Spyro and Cynder were knocked down, they couldn't get up because of the convexity making their paws stone. "Now, where was I?" asked Chaos, "Oh yes, I was about to kill you Twilight Princess." "No!" cried Spyro. "Daddy!" cried Zappy. "Zappy, honey, I want you to know we always loved you!" exclaimed Cynder. Chaos threw Zappy into a wall and then summoned dark magic that would destroy Zappy. Black light flashed around Chaos as he held his paws out at Zappy. "NOW PREPARE TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!" roared Chaos. He threw his hands back, ready to fire. "STOP!!!!!!" cried a voice. Suddenly, a figure on a platform high up on the wall stared at us. "Who dares disrupt me?!" shrieked Chaos. "Me, Icy!" replied the figure. "Icy? But we..." said Spyro and Cynder. "You thought wrong,....... Mom and Dad." said Icy. Zappy gasped, that guy was her brother. "I was Chaos all along, I was the one that destroyed Malefor." said explained Icy. "You were.... Chaos?" asked Spyro. Zappy gasped again, Chaos was her adult brother? "But if you're Chaos, then who is.... that?" asked Zappy looked at the one about to shoot darkness at me. "Fools! Don't believe that fool! He is a fake!" cried the dragon. "We are not fools, clearly we can see that you are a fake, Convexity!!" exclaimed Icy. "Then who ture my wings off and caused chaos across the land?" asked Zappy. "It was all Convexity, not me! He was the one who tour your wings off, he was the one who sabitodged your family when you were a baby, he was the one who made you almost drown in the flood, it was all him! His doing!" cried Icy. "Rahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! You shall suffer the same fate as these 3, Dark Master!" roared Convexity as he shot the darkness at me. "No!!!!!!!" cried Icy. "No!!!! cried Spyro. "No!!!!!!!" cried Cynder. "No!!!!!!!!!!!!" cried Zappy. Was this the end? wondered Zappy. The darkness was so close now. 3-2-1....... "No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" cried a voice. Zappy looked to see Comet jump infront of her. "Comet, no!!!!!!!!" cried Zappy. But it was too late, Comet had turned to ashes.
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#111 Posted: 10:32:02 30/08/2009
Noooo Comet!
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#112 Posted: 18:53:13 30/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 35 Tears
"NO!!" hissed Convexity. Zappy bent down over Comet's ashes and cried. Everyone was silent. "How could you.... you MONSTER!!" shrieked Spyro as he broke the cuffs and attacked Convexity. Convexity knocked him away, sending more cuffs to him. Zappy looked up at the horrid Convexity and growled. Convexity smiled at the sight of tears and shot into the air, ready to finish her off. Chaos shot convexity at Convexity. "I can't believe he's gone." cried Zappy. Chaos was seemed upset not of just a dragon dieing, but of something closer that only he knew. "There is one way to save Comet, because of Malefor's curse whenever a dragon dies it comes back as an evil dragon to work for Malefor and Convexity. But it's not too late. He has already turned into a Screach inless you find true love he will stay evil." explained Chaos. Suddenly, the ashes formed a Screach. Zappy grabbed it, "I don't want you stay this way. Not like how Icy did. So get ready........ to feal the light!" exclaimed Zappy as she began to kiss him. The ground they stood on rose above everyone, crashing through the ceiling. "Grahhhhhhh! No!!!!!" screached Convexity as he flew up towards the two. Suddenly he was knocked back from a light that surrounded them. Zappy held her lips up to Comet's for a whole 30 seconds and then stopped. Comet's Screach body began to glow a golden glow. He floated up into the air. Zappy mouth gapped as she looked in amazement. Suddenly, comets shot around everyone and a tornado formed around the Screach. A blinding light shot everywhere. "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" cried Convexity as he tried to shield himself with his arm. Chaos smiled. Spyro and Cynder wondered in amazement. You couldn't see anything but light. "You are not made of shadow, you aren't evil.......... you are........... light." whispered Zappy. A huge explosion of light went everywhere. "NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT THE LIGHT!!!! I WILL RETURN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" screamed Convexity as he disappeared into the light. Zappy looked into the light and saw a figure floating down towards her. Comet slowly went to the ground, his eyes shut. "Comet? Comet!" exclaimed Zappy. Comet didn't open his eyes. "Comet!" cried Zappy. Nothing. "Comet, you must live!" cried Zappy, shaking him. Nothing happened. Zappy turned away. Suddenly, Comet began to open his eyes. "Zappy?" asked Comet. "Comet!" exclaimed Zappy, hugging him. Everyone smiled. "You're alive!" exclaimed Zappy.
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#113 Posted: 20:03:33 30/08/2009
Yay! Comets alive! (more story please! guess it's nearly the end now )
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#114 Posted: 00:01:24 31/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah...... But look forward to the next one...
Chapter 36 Another Secret "I missed you!" cried Zappy. "I missed you too, but I still can't believe I'm alive! I thought I would turn evil any second..." replied Comet. Spyro and Cynder took a close look at Comet. Spyro gasped, "Zappy. Do you know who that is?" "Yeah, I'm Co- Co- Comet.........." gasped Comet looking at Spyro and Cynder. "What? Is there something that I don't know?" asked Zappy. "Zappy, honey, Comet is your brother." replied Cynder. Zappy couldn't believe her eyes, she had another brother. "But-but-but how?" asked Zappy. "We had him as soon as we put you down the river, we never told him that he even had a sister or brother. One day he was taken away from us and that was the last time we ever saw him." explained Spyro. "So Chaos is my brother and so is Zappy?" asked Comet. "Yep." replied Cynder. "Did you know this, Icy?"asked Zappy. "Yep." replied Chaos. "So, son, will you join the side of good?" asked Spyro. "Remember this: When destruction begins, storms rage, and chaos commenses, and when all seems to be lost, look up to the Tatora mountains. Your answer shall be there." replied Chaos. "So you aren't?" asked Spyro. "What do you think? I can't go back there now, what would they think??" asked Chaos. "It's your choice, son." said Spyro. "Come on Zappy and Comet!" exclaimed Cynder, waving a wing and flying out of a broken window. "Coming, Mom!" cried Zappy. "Come on, Comet." said Zappy. "See ya later, Icy!" exclaimed the two as they flew out the window.
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#115 Posted: 17:32:35 31/08/2009
Comet her brother? Well... decided on the enxt story yet? Could be Comet's story?
Oh, and just a suggestion, turn the smilies off when you write a part of the story.
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#116 Posted: 18:05:17 05/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I didn't turn 'em on. It just keeps doing it whenever I start a word with d as the first letter...
Anyways.... Epilouge 1 month later, Comet walked into his home, "Ah, it's nice to be a family again." "Yeah." replied Zappy. "Hey, Dad, do you think we will ever see Icy again?" asked Comet. "Of course we will, son." replied Spyro. Cynder just smiled. "Well, what did we miss while we were gone?" asked Zappy. "A lot, including when Beauty rosted Dragon marshmellows for us." replied Cynder. We looked up at the sky. Suddenly, a magical dove flew through the sky. Zappy gasped, she had never seen one of those before. The bird flew towards us. "Do my eyes decieve me? It's really a messenger bird!" exclaimed Spyro. Comet stared at the beautiful bird as it landed infront of us. "Attention, dragons! Where might I find Comet?" asked the Dove. "I-I-I'm right here, sir...." replied Comet. "Ah, Comet. Yes, I have something for you. From a certain someone...." explained the bird, dropping the scroll he was holding on the floor. Comet picked it up, who could it possibly be from? Spyro and Cynder didn't respond. "Who's it from?" asked Zappy. "It is from......... Chaos." replied the bird, "Go on, open it." Comet clutched the scroll with his claws and opened it up, golden words shimmered across it. "Dear Comet, I have been wondering when Convexity would return, when I stumbled upon a prophecy that Malefor left behind. Let me read it off to you: When dawn has come on the day of black snow, there shall be someone to rise to destroy everything. But there is also one who is worthy enough to fight him, this someone is a red dragon, about 12 years old. The swords will clash as the 2 fight and only one will win. You see? This prophecy speaks of you, Comet. I was walking around outside when I saw a shooting star, but then it hit the Earth and shot a splatter of darkness across the world. Then the 2 moons eclipsed and it was eternal night once more. I am afraid the prophecy is true: a new evil is coming, and I am afraid it is Convexity who is coming. Comet, my brother.... I am afraid you are our only chance. Here are some words of advise: (These words shimmered the most) When Darkness falls, a hero was rise. Follow you heart. It is the only thing shining now. When all seems to be lost, look up to the silver clouds to find your ticket to winning. Keep fighting...... - Chaos " read Comet. Spyro, Cynder, and Zappy's mouths gaped. "Well, what will you do?" asked the messenger bird. "I'm going." replied Comet. "Okay." said the dove, flying away. "But you can't!" cried Zappy. "He's going, he is the only one who can save us from the darkness." said Spyro. "I'll miss you!" cried Cynder, giving Comet a kiss. "I'll miss you too, Mom," replied Comet, "And I'll miss you the most, Zappy." Zappy teared up. "Bye!" exclaimed Comet, running out of the cave.
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#117 Posted: 10:21:44 06/09/2009
No, the end of the story
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#118 Posted: 05:00:39 07/09/2009
Awesome story! I can't believe that Comet is Zappy's and Icy's brother! Wow!
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#119 Posted: 22:52:44 08/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Theme song: Rush
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#120 Posted: 16:11:29 17/09/2009
MORE!
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#121 Posted: 20:21:44 17/09/2009 | Topic Creator
More, what do you mean more? I finished the story......
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