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a new beginning (Deannas tale) [CLOSED]
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#101 Posted: 03:58:20 13/07/2009
Pic doesn't work.
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#102 Posted: 07:36:43 13/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder1
I had a pic of her tat i drew but its not working>.<
See: [User Posted Image]


But anywhay......


Shes a dark purple dragoness, she had talons insted of claws, Her eyes are a sappire color.....Her wing membrean is black.....erm....
She had a marking on her right shoulder that looks like this:

But they could just ignore that inless they whant a hard chalange (dosnt make sence smilie)smilie
erm....what else....she was scares all over herself.
Three on her eye, three on each wing(where it begins) three on her tail.
erm.......hehe what else.......i havent drew her in a long time so erm.......
i think her tailblade i forgot smilie erm.....*whent to go look at pic*
pretty weird looking smilie


Look in the bold xD ya i knowsmilie
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#103 Posted: 16:53:59 13/07/2009
I didn't see that and if you click on it it still doesn't work...
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#104 Posted: 21:08:09 13/07/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie i know>.<

Ill try to get another on here cuz last night i was on the wrong computer for the pic. And now SpyraTheDragon might 'steal' my character disine. The reason why i prenthasised the steal is cuz she hasnt sen my disine for her but meh......


Ok so i couldnt find it(well i did but it was a diff character) and i juess i wrighten over it>.< so thats why it might not be there......
So im going to try t find it again in a usb port and see what happenes smilie
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#105 Posted: 19:37:28 16/07/2009
*clicks on now working picture.* Jeeze she has a long tail. xD Are you gonna work on this anymore?
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#106 Posted: 19:39:54 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Ya, since birth she had larg wings and a tail smilie.

Work on what?
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#107 Posted: 19:43:12 16/07/2009
The story. xD
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#108 Posted: 19:44:17 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
OOOOoooooooooooOoOOOOOoooooOoOOoooOoooOOoooOOoooooOOooOOoooooO
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaAaaaaAAaaaAAaaaA
Now where was i? *looks back*
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#109 Posted: 19:52:06 16/07/2009
*noms on ramen as she waits*
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#110 Posted: 20:21:15 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 16:
Feelings rushed back to her. Sound came next, then sight. She looked around and found she was traped in a small cage. Yellow percing eyes glared at her from the darkness. A low growl then a dark chuckle then followed. Deanna backed to the farthest place she could go and ferfully hissed at him. Zor'ran came out of the darkness and laghed.
"Why are you doing this!?" Deanna fearfully studdered, trying not to show hide her fear.
"Why? Bacause just looking at you makes me sick!!" He snaped at her, as his jaws came togeather the cave bommed in what sounded like a dragon snaping threw his prey without stoping.

Deanna wimpered and layed down. She found she was in chains. One round her neck, and two around her fround paws. her wings where in one larg think that lookied a bit like armor, but still unable to move her wings exept fold them and streach them out. Her tail had a chain on it as well though it didnt pose a threat yet since her tail blad was still growing and was still soft. Well, its what she thought since it looked as though somone desided to leave it on her but untie the chains to whatever it led to in the darkenss. Her eyes peeked out of the cage to look at whatever light shown since he could see her so well and she could see a few flashes of light every now and then in random places. She found there where holes in the rof of the little hut and she whent back to the middle of the small cage. Zor'ran just wached her, seeminly with intrest. Deanna didnt knowtice since her head was hung in sorrow. Zor'rac shifted his weight and just walked away from the hachling. Deanna layed down and hid her eyes in her paws. Her head pirked up[ a few seconds later remembering about the light in the cave that bounced off her sclaes and made that dazzaling light show. She stuck out her paw to let it ceach a ray of light. Her arm lit up in a vary light purple(not pink) and the lights daced all around her. She whould have injoyed it if she wasnt horaffied at what she saw.
Skelentons of dragons hung by there necks in chains their bones held togeather by only a few rotting peaces of roting flesh and mussle, other dragons layed there in a heep of bones. Others where chained to the wall as there flesh roted off and a few body parts where missing. One dragon, as she saw, had one of its eyes goughed out and its right paw was all bone, dripping blood as shreded peiced of skin and musle hung off. Same for its left leg. Its bones dreanched and blkeached in the red color. It looked as though it was a freash kill, but also old at the same time.
She shivered and brought her paw back in so she could hid herself from this horrid place. She knowticed that it didnt stink from the dead dragons. Infact, it didnt smell like enything. She layed down, followed by her head. Then she closed her eyes and was ingulfed in darkness as she drifted off into sleep, falling into a new nightmare.
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#111 Posted: 20:26:41 16/07/2009
Zor'ran sounds like a tyrant I hope he gets what's coming to him. >.>
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#112 Posted: 20:31:08 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie WRIGHTER BLOCK!!
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#113 Posted: 20:32:12 16/07/2009
DX I hate that I get it when I hit the forth or fifth chapter in a story and never finish it!
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#114 Posted: 20:34:06 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie that was all of chapter 16 smilie
Short, i know, but its not like im plublishing it smilie

I have a gift for you in you topic :3
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#115 Posted: 20:36:56 16/07/2009
? *looks*
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#116 Posted: 20:40:42 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie lolz, i over shadded
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#117 Posted: 20:45:52 16/07/2009
Eh it's fine I would like to get rid of those ears though and maybe just give her four horns right beside each other on her head like PeaceDragon's but a little closer together. smilie
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#118 Posted: 20:47:07 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie Maby, its your dragon smilie
I did the effect where the closest thing to the veiwer is larger then the rest but it looks weird....
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Yeet
Adria Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#119 Posted: 20:50:24 16/07/2009
Yeah she is. *pets her* :3 I like the markings you all have given her the swirl on her chest and everything.
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#120 Posted: 21:04:56 16/07/2009 | Topic Creator
X3 lolz.
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Yeet
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