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The Legendary Ruuko: The Darkest Hour [CLOSED]
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#101 Posted: 23:40:10 23/02/2009
Quote: Cynder_543
^ Yep. smilie I will start the story now. I just needed time to think. Its hard running two storys....

Take all the time you need, it takes me 2 days to make chapters to my story, then 1 more day to go over and fix errors and change some things smilie
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#102 Posted: 00:17:33 24/02/2009
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#103 Posted: 04:39:45 24/02/2009 | Topic Creator
First, I have to think about the story off Cynder's past. I might take me awile so please be patient.
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#104 Posted: 05:57:14 24/02/2009
Maybe i could help C_543? you know like giving you ideas....
I helped with the ending for "Darkness in Ebony: Arise of the new Purple dragon" smilie
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#105 Posted: 10:41:20 24/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep you sure did. smilie

Thanks Crystal dragon! *hugs* What do you have in mind?
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#106 Posted: 15:56:38 24/02/2009
well i don't know if i can explain Cynder's past by typing maybe i could find a video
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#107 Posted: 07:47:19 26/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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well i don't know if i can explain Cynder's past by typing maybe i could find a video


Cool. I like videos. smilie
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#108 Posted: 20:47:10 15/03/2009
Please Continue!!
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#109 Posted: 07:08:33 27/03/2009
Quote: Cynder_543
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well i don't know if i can explain Cynder's past by typing maybe i could find a video


Cool. I like videos. smilie

I have an idea, maybe you can use what the Chronicler told Spyro about Cynder's past in TEN?
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#110 Posted: 10:14:12 27/03/2009
Oh, great idea! but that would take some time to explain... oops! Sorry! I was reading your story just today, but the story is great!
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#111 Posted: 00:38:04 28/03/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, sorry for the delay peoples! I was just working on my other story.... Anyway, I don't think that would work Crystal Dragon. I think the chronicler was saying to Spyro what will happend to her if Spyro dosn't save her in time..... smilie

CHAPTER 9

"After Darkearth sent you away, Gaul took Cynder to he castle, ready to corapted her. He punched a whole in her egg and pulled her out. Then gaul took her too her room. She was about to die because she got token out off her egg too early, but Gaul corupted her before she could. Then, in a months time, she grew to adult size. Then, thats when you came"
Ruuko roared at the bat. "Thats not all off it! There has to be more about her past!"
Spiderleg shruged. "Thats all Gaul told me about her past... I'm sorry Ruuko. Thats all you have to know"
"No it isn't! I can tell she wen't through alot off hatred! Your just not telling me!"
"Thats Gaul's fult, not mine" Spiderleg pointed out. "Just don't get into troble" He flew off. Ruuko sighed and then rasped "Fine! But I will find out what happend! Just you wait and see!"
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#112 Posted: 02:39:14 28/03/2009
keep rightting plz smilie
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#113 Posted: 16:08:04 28/03/2009
smilie <-- Spiderleg's reaction smilie
Pls continue!
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#114 Posted: 09:49:46 31/03/2009 | Topic Creator
smilie <---- And this is Ruuko's reaction lol. smilie

Ruuko pounced on Spiderleg. He bit down onto his leg that was stainded with blood. Spiderleg screached in pain.
"What are you doing Ruuko!!? Ruuko?" Spiderleg roared and then winced as Ruuko bit down onto his neck. It was all over in a heartbeat. Spiderleg tried to make his last words, but the blood in his mouth began to bubble and Ruuko couldn't make out what he was saying. Ruuko hissed in his ear.
"Don't tell me the full story and be checky to ME, you will get your head ripped off. Its too late now, your going to hell now and you are going to live in mise-"
Gaul came barging in before Ruuko could finish his sentence. Ruuko stod up imidiently. Gaul pushed him away and began to exam Spiderleg. After he finished, he turned to look at Ruuko, his eyes were blazing with fury.
"Why did you kill him?" He roared. He pulled out his sword. Ruuko backed away. He had to think off something quick.
"Well? Have you lost your tounge? Tell me! Before I take your heart out!"
Suddently, Ruuko thought off something.
"As soon as he finished talking about Cynder's past, he attacked me for no reason. He also wen't a little bit crazy. I had no choice but to kill him. If I would off refused, he would off killed me...."
Gaul nodded.
"I see. Its good that you killed him instead off backing down and comanding to his wish. Those are the tipe off warriors I wan't. We fight to survive even if it means killing one off your team mates. You do not back down and help the weak, nor you help the strong. You must suvive, we must all suvive"
Ruuko relaksed. But he flinched when Gaul spoked again.
"But, you are not suposed to kill other apes without my permision. Spiderleg was a great servent. He made my bedding nice and neat everyday. You shouldn't off killed him, not when the purple dragon is out and about!"
"I-I'm sorry Gaul...." He whispered.
"Sorry dosn't bring him back to life. Now that you killed him, you better make m bedding today and catch me a large and jucy meal. Don't forget"
Ruuko picked up Spiderleg's dead body.
"What should I do with this body master?"
"Just chuck it outside, Cynder will take care off it" He walked off.
I guess its time for Cynder to teach me Shadow breath now..... He mumbled. I wounder were she is?
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#115 Posted: 10:42:46 31/03/2009 | Topic Creator
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Ruuko is a boy right??? Then why is that a girl dragon in the picture? Also, lol. (I'm your sister you know!) Sister????? smilie
Please Continue!!


Oh, I forgot to say, that was a mistake. It was suposed to be "I am your brother you know!" smiliesmiliesmilie
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#116 Posted: 12:44:04 31/03/2009
smilie, PC!!!
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#117 Posted: 13:54:51 31/03/2009
smilie SO good! PLs continue

Hey Ruuko, Here's a tip:
*whispering* burn his bed, place some poison in the meat, then leave. he did say:"Those are the tipe off warriors I wan't. We fight to survive even if it means killing one off your team mates."smilie
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#118 Posted: 05:48:09 01/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko walked up to an ape that was watching the whole story.
"Don't you go spreding the news about this! If you do, you will follow that bat over there" He roared. The little ape nodded.
"Can you tell me where Cynder is?" Ruuko added.
The ape shock his head. "No. I think she is on her way to fight Terridor now"
"She was suposed to teach me shadow breath.... I guess I will have to wait now...." Ruuko stalked up to Gaul.
"I'm ready to fix your bed master" Ruuko said, bowing his head.
Gaul stod up. "Good. Go and find me some clean moss for my beding. And chuck this dirty moss out while your at it. Oh, the moss is at the place that is filled with snow. You should know were that is"
Ruuko nodded and then padded over to Gaul's bed. It smelt like a rotten egg. He hisitated and only picked it up when Gaul grabbed his staff. Ruuko flew out off the castle.

When he flew half way, he saw a small dragon and a dragon fly.
They must be here to find Volteer. He thought I doupt that will happen. He is locked away in a small cave. I doupt he will go in there Ruuko could make out what the purple dragon was saying. He was talking to the dragon fly next to him. He new strate away that they were talking about him
"Do you think thats Cynder" The dragonfly asked.
"Well, I hope it was...." The purple dragon answered.
"What!?!?!"
"Well, if it wasn't Cynder, then that means that there are more then two evil dragons"
"Oh... Well I hope it was Cynder too..."
Ruuko roared. There is two evil dragons here. And you will be stuck inbetween us purple pest! He thought. He continued on flying.
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#119 Posted: 21:45:07 01/04/2009
LOL! Connection to ANB!
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#120 Posted: 05:21:35 02/04/2009
Perfect connection! love it! great idea!
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#121 Posted: 22:24:15 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Lolz, yeah I know. There is alot more to come. I just need to get mah d@rm brain working again..... Oh, and thanks! =^ _ ^=
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#122 Posted: 10:47:57 13/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko flew up to a tree and sat undernith it. He yawned and closed his eyes. It has been a big day, and Cynder was Suposed to teach him Shadow breath! As soon as he gets home, he would tell Cynder to teach it to him now. By then, she should off beaten Terrador and then hopefuly Ignitus. Ruuko new he had to find the moss for Gaul's bedding, but he was tired so Gaul will have to wait. Before Ruuko could go into a deep sleep, something came out off nowere and attack him. Ruuko shock the thing off of him and he flew up into the air. Before he could see who the creature was, it jumped up and hit him on the head. Ruuko fell down to the ground, pinned down by the strange creature. Ruuko blinked up at it and roared. He could see it more clearly now, it was a lion that was about the same hight as him. Ruuko tried to shake the lion off, but it stod still on top off him. Excrusiating pain wen't through Ruuko as the lion's claws struck down on his stomic and face. Ruuko was too weak to kick the lion off him, he was working all day, not to metion the fight he had with Volteer. Ruuko tried but his legs couldn't even lift up her stomic. Ruuko braced himself, ready for the teath to bite into his neck. Suddently, the lion turned around and the massive weight got lifted off him. Ruuko stod up to see giant dragon picking up the lion in its paws. The dragon was twice Ruuko's size and it glared at Ruuko. It threw the lion into the snow and the lion ran away with its tail low. Ruuko shock himself and blinked gratefuly to the blue dragon.
"Next time, be more careful" The blue dragon spoked carmly. "You obviusly need more trainning"
Ruuko roared at the dragon with his tail and wings held high.
"I could off sent that lion running away with its tail inbetween its legs!" Ruuko growled, he scraped the snow with his claws "I was just tired thats all. I have been flying around all day, I flewed up and down and I have fought and beteen a dragon"
The blue dragon laughed "I see. Well, you are quit the big dragon. You look like a teenager, am I correct?"
Ruuko gave him a confused look.
"A teenager? I am an adult! Not a teenager!
"No your not Ruuko"
"How do you know my name?"
"Because I am a god. I came down from the hevens to save you from that lion. You can't die now Ruuko, you have so much to do. And you promised Hawkfire that you will come back to her three years time"
"What?" Ruuko shock his head. "Hawkfire? Who is he?"
"Hawkfire is female. When you were younge, you played with her until you were thirteenThen, after that, you flew off to be with Gaul because Darkearth told you so"
"Why should I believe that? I was born and raised by Gaul! And I am not twelve, I am not a teenager, I am an adult!"
"Then tell me, how old are you?"
"How old am I? I-I don't know....."
"You are thirteen little one. You will know more when you turn your back on Malefor three years time"
"What? I will never turn my back on Malefor!"
"Like I said, you will know more three years time. But I will tell you something Ruuko. You are not fully corupted because you ran out off the purple beam a quater the way through the coruption. That made you waist a little bit off the beam's time. Therefor, you didn't turn into an adult, but a teenager. You look like you are 16 or 17 years old. But when you grow up three years time, the coruption will kick in and you WILL grow up to adult size and you will be more evil then what you are now. You will be as dark as Cynder and you will not hisitate to attack a dragon. You have to go away from Malefor before then. And that means turning your back on him before that happens" The dragon began to fade away back into the sky.
"Wait!" Ruuko yelled "I have many questions to asked! Why should I get away from Malefor!? What do you mean when you said "I ran out off the beam a quater the way through the coruption"? Please tell me more before I rip your tail out!"
But the dragon did not say anything.
Ruuko growled and then began to search for the moss. He was too fustrated to go to sleep now. He didn't even believe that dragon was a god. He kicked a rock into a pond and continued on searching for the moss that Gaul wanted.
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#123 Posted: 00:17:58 14/04/2009
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#124 Posted: 00:58:44 14/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko found some moss near by an old tree. It was covered in snow and moss. Ruuko picked up a bundle and flew back to Ruuko's castle. Then he will learn Shadow breath and then go back to sleep.

Ruuko walked into the castle and layed down the moss next to Gaul granted and then lay the moss down in his bed.
"You can go now and do what you like. But don't expect me to save you if you get hurt" Gaul growled.
"So that is the thanks I get? Well, at list I am not a smelly old bag that needs to change his bedding everyday!" Ruuko snapped back without thinking what he was saying. He ran away to find Cynder before Gaul to lift up his staff. Ruuko found Cynder lieing on the ground. She was licking a wound on her arm. Ruuko ran up to her.
"Are you alright?" He asked.
"I am fine" Cynder spat. "Terrador manige to put a blow into the great Cynder thats all" Cynder continued on licking her soar.
"When are you going to teach me shadow breath?" Ruuko asked.
"Alright. I will teach you" Cynder roared
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#125 Posted: 22:07:21 14/04/2009
PC!!!
Gaul: *Picks up staff* You know what? I hate this life. *Turns self into ash*
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#126 Posted: 23:41:56 14/04/2009 | Topic Creator
^ That is what I wish had happened.... smilie

CHAPTER 10

Cynder leaped onto Ruuko's back without warning. Ruuko stragled to get free, but he was too week in the legs to push her off. Cynder growled gently in his ear.
"You need to keep up your gard all the time. Never let it go down. You don't know when an enemys is going to jump at you. Oh, and before I teach you, get some rest. You can't even push me off of you"
"I don't need rest! I wan't to learn Shadow breath!" Ruuko bit down onto Cynder's tail and manige to brake fee. He whipped Cynder in the face. Cynder pinned Ruuko down again.
"Ruuko. You do need some rest. You are too weak at the moment. After you had two hours off sleep, come and tell me and we will begin" Cynder pushed Ruuko outside and then closed the castle door yelling "It is alot more better to sleep outside in the fresh air!"
Ruuko snorted and then ran off to find a tree. He sat down for a little bit before going to sleep.


When Ruuko woked up, he could smell meat. The meat was rotten and it stank really bad. Ruuko Opened his eyes to see rotten food all around him. Ruuko roared. Someone must off did this! Ruuko thought. When I find out who it is that did this, they will be cleaning the bats for months! Ruuko streched his legs. He thought he saw something flash past him. But it was gone before he could make sure. Then, something hit him one the head. It was a rock. Ruuko roared. Another rock came flying down towards him. It fell right next to him. What the? Were are they comming from? Ruuko murmed to himself. He looked up to see a small black dragon and a grey dragon. They were looking at him scornfuly and they had rocks in there paws.
"Hey, dog breath! Have you finished looking up at the sky?" It was the black dragon who spoke.
Another rock came flying down from the cliff.
"No wounder you don't have any friends!" This time, it was the grey dragon who spoke.
Ruuko looked up at them. He doged another rock that they threw at him. Who are they? Are they talking to the right dragon? Ruuko roared at them, ready to charge up the cliff.
"Aww... Whats the matter? Scared and sad that we are tormenting you? Are you going to call the sky for help moony?" They both spoked this time.
"Rotten flea bags!" Ruuko growled. He ran up the cliff. "When I get you too, you will be getting those rotten food out off that tree over there!" When he made it to the top off the cliff, the dragons were not there anymore. Ruuko spat and then climed back down the cliff again. When I find those two dragons, they will be getting rither the rotten food out off the tree.
The castle door opened and Cynder walked out.
"Whats with all the yelling? And whats that stench!? Cynder asked Ruuko.
"A bunch off idiots came and did this. They also said some stupid words and they threw rocks at me" Ruuko snapped. "If those would off been one off our minions, they would off been getting the rotten food out off that tree and washing the bats for the rest off the month!" Ruuko added.
"What did they say" Cynder spoked carmly.
"They said something about me looking at the sky, they called me names like dog breath, they called me a stupid name, moony, and they said that I don't have any friends. Not to mention throwing stones at me and putting rotten food around were I slept. If Gaul found that out, then he would be making me clean up the mess!"
"It seems like they teased the wrong dragon" Cynder replied. "It sounds they new who they were talking too"
"It did. But they should off Knowen that they were teasing the wrong dragon"
"Well yeah. They should off. If they tease you again, call me and I will rip there wings off"
"I think I can handle it Cynder"
"Well I hope so. Who is going to clean the rotten food over there? I am NOT cleaning that up"
"When I find those two dragons, they will be the ones that will clean it up" Ruuko growled.
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#127 Posted: 05:09:20 15/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Suddently, another rock came flying down from the cliff.
"There back..." Ruuko roared. He padded up the cliff again, but nothing was there.
"What the? I could off sworn that was them!" Ruuko growled. He charged back down the cliff again
"Cynder, did you see a grey dragon and a black dragon?"
Cynder shock her head.
"No, I havn't. The rock might off just fell down thats all. There gone Ruuko. Don't go fussing over nothing. Get more sleep and I will teach you shadow breath in the morning"
Ruuko roared that loud that more rocks came fulling down the cliff.
"You don't believe me don't you?"
"I do believe you. But I don't think it is such a big deal! Now get some sleep and stop fussing over these to little dragons! Surly two baby dragons can't hurt a BIG dragon's feelings"
"I am not sad Cynder, I am angry that they put rotten food on the tree. Gaul will think I did it and he will make me clean it up!"
"If I say it wasn't you, then he might send someone else to do it"
Yeah right, fat chance that will happen. I will be dead meat by Sunrise..... Ruuko mumered to himself. He walked away and slepted undernith a tree far away from the tree filled with rotten food. He closed his eyes and fell asleep.
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#128 Posted: 11:24:57 15/04/2009
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#129 Posted: 01:20:02 16/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko woked up in about an hours time. He thought he could here voices. He stod up, only to step in on a dead rat. Ruuko sniffed it, it was about three days old and it was full off maggots. Ruuko backed away from it it is those two brats again... he mumbled to himself. Ruuko looked up at the cliff, he was right, two dragons, the same dragons from last time was on it. They chucked a rock down at him.
"Did you like the present we got you moony?" The grey dragon teased.
"I doupt the dog breath didn't even saw it sister. He is probely that busy looking at the sky that he couldn't even see it!" The black dragon laughed.
"Yeah your right. He probely got blinded from the sun because he keeps on looking at the sky!"
"So dog breath, your gonna clean up the rotten food we gave you? It can't move by it self"
Ruuko just roared. This time, he is going to talk to those two and see if they got the right dragon. He never looks up at the sky. If he would just clime up cliff like last time, they would just run away from him. Ruuko needs to hide behind something so they would just walk away. He was about to charge into the bushes when the dragons walked away. Ruuko saw his chance, he flew slilently up the cliff. He landed but he could not see them You are not getting away from me this time! he thought. He charge through the bushes, he ignored the spikes that tugged at his skin. He ran until he could fantly see the dragons. He ran faster until he cought up with them. And to his luck, it was a dead end. They were trapped and Ruuko could talk to them easily without them escaping. He could hear them whispering to each other.
"Stupid mutt!" The black dragon laughed. "We sure made him sad this time! Next time, lets shove some rotten food under his paws!"
Before the grey dragon could speak. Ruuko quickly growled; "So, who were you too talking too?"
The two dragons turned around, there eyes were filled with fear when they saw who it was.
"Err... we were not talking to anyone...." The grey dragon scraped her paws on the ground.
"Really? I saw you too talking to me when you were standing at the ege off the cliff" Ruuko walked closer too them.
"You must off heard wrong sir.... We were not talking to you..." The black dragon whispered.
"Really? Then who?"
"Were not talking to anyone!" The grey dragon spat.
"So you are telling me that you were standing on the ege off the cliff, talking to knowone and you were chucking rocks to knowone and you put rotten food undernith the trees were I was sleeping for no reason? Are you two stupid?"
"We are not stupid!" Said the grey dragon.
The black dragon looked at her with sad eyes.
"He is not the one... We got the wrong dragon...." The black dragon said.
"So you were teasing me!" Ruuko spat.
"Let us go! We didn't know you were not him!"
"Who?" Ruuko demanded.
"There is a teenage looking, black dragon, like you, who sits down and always looks up at the sky. Everytime we talk to him, he always goes on about some ancistors or something....."
"So you were teasing someone for doing that?" Ruuko roared.
"But he is wiered!"
"So? Just leave him alone. He can do what he likes" Ruuko growled. "Oh, and you are going to get rither the rotten food from the two trees. You diserve to do it because you did it in the first place"
"Were sorry! Just let us go!" The grey dragon screamed, looking for a place to run away.
"I will let you go, but you will promise me you will not tease this dragon anymore. And you will clean the trees with rotten prey" Ruuko spat. He let them pass. They nodded and then they flew down the cliff to clean the trees.
Ruuko yawned. He would like to visit this dragon they were talking about. He might know something about his pass. And Cynder's. But first, he would like Cynder to teach him shadow.
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#130 Posted: 09:09:18 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Heeeellllloooooooo???? smilie
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#131 Posted: 09:31:39 17/04/2009
I am so reading this!
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#132 Posted: 10:13:56 17/04/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks. smilie

Before Ruuko went up to Cynder and told her to finely teach him shadow, he killed a large, over feed rabbit and gave it to Gaul.
"Here is your food that you wanted master" Ruuko grunted.
"It is about time. It didn't take you two hours to catch this did it?" Gaul growled.
"No, I had a rest thats all" Ruuko tried to speak carmly. This was his master he was talking too, this was his leader and he had to show him alot off respect. He backed away when Gaul stod up.
"You yelled at me earlyer and you were late giving me this rabbit. Have you no loyaty to me and this pack?"
"Off course I do master! I would never betray you!"
"Then I expect you to do what I say without question. Everytime I tell you to do something, you usually growl at me. I don't wan't to hear a growl from you when you talk to me ever again. If you do, then you will be following the pawsteps off Spiderleg"
"I am s-sorry Gaul" Ruuko blurted out. "I will never do it again. I was just-"
"I don't wan't to hear excuses now Ruuko. Now get out off mine sight!"
Ruuko struggled to claw at Gaul's throat. He turned away without looking back. He flicked his tail at Gaul to show Gaul that he is very angry. Now to talk to Cynder about trainning me Ruuko thought with a smile.
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#133 Posted: 13:02:55 17/04/2009
Keep up the work Cynder_543, this is great smilie
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#134 Posted: 00:41:42 18/04/2009 | Topic Creator
"So, you wan't me to train you now? Are you at full power?" Cynder asked.
They were outside, Ruuko had asked Cynder to train and he is sure that he is at full power.
"Yes I am" Ruuko answered.
"Very well. Lets beging" Cynder growled. She sprang into the air and aimed her claws at Ruuko's neck. Ruuko doged the blow and flew up into the air. He was awear off the two dragons watching him in awe. They only had one more tree to go. And the stench was gone from one off the trees. Ruuko nodded to them to continue on with there work and then he flew down really fast at Cynder. Cynder turned over to her back and stuck out her claws, ready for Ruuko to land on top off them. Alarm and shock went over Ruuko like a bullet. He flapped his wings as hard as he could, despret to stay in the air, but he was too late. Pain stabbed him in the stomich. Ruuko hissed in range and pain and. He whiped his tail at Cynder's face. We a loud roar, Cynder let go off Ruuko and back away. Ruuko realised that the two blades on the end off his tail had scraped her on the forhead. It left a strange mark. Cynder growled at him.
"You just left a mark on my forhead you fox brain!" Cynder whipped her tail back at Ruuko, trying to get the same mark on his forhead but Ruuko grabbed it and then he flew up into the air. He span around and then flew back down onto the ground, he bashed Cynder into the ground before he landed. Cynder got up, blood and dirt was on her body and forhead.
"I-I see... you are at full power.... Lets begin..." Cynder grunted.
Ruuko looked at her douptfuly "But you have blood and dirt all over you!" He rasped.
"I will be fine. Lets get started"


And that tells you how she got that trigangle mark thingy on her forhead. smilie
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#135 Posted: 12:49:27 18/04/2009
smilie good! Finally they will start! Sorry, I was gone for some time because i was sick! pls continue!
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#136 Posted: 18:06:24 18/04/2009
PC!!!
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#137 Posted: 01:02:19 19/04/2009
yeah! more!!!
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#138 Posted: 06:52:30 19/04/2009 | Topic Creator
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smilie good! Finally they will start! Sorry, I was gone for some time because i was sick! pls continue!


OMG, I hope your better! smilie

CHAPTER 11:

"You know how you did fire breath?" Cynder asked.
"I don't know how I did.... I just opened my mouth and it came out..... And what has this got to do with it?"
"Do what you did last time. But instead, try to sink down into the ground. Something should trigger in your body, making you be able to do it. But you have to try hard for half an hour to get you to do it" And with that, Cynder walked away.
"Thats it? But there has to be another way!" Ruuko roared.
"That is how I learnt it. If I can do it, then you can to Ruuko" Without waiting for a reply, Cynder walked out off the room.
"I have to collect Terrador's enegy crystal now. I am sure it is ready" Cynder quickly told Ruuko before she closed the castle door.
Ruuko sighed.
"It is now midnight.... I guess I should tell those twerps to go home now..." Ruuko grunted. He walked up to the two dragons.
"Alrightm you can go home now. Your mother and farther will be worryed sick"
They backed away a little and began to cry.
"Well.... Our mother died. Are farther blames us for her death and he treats us like prey..... We don't wan't to live with him anymore.... We now walk around the forest. But we don't mind it, we like it" The grey dragon rasped
Ruuko began to shed a tear.
"I don't even know who my mum or dad is..... I havn't even met them... Well I don't think I have...." Ruuko mumbled.
"Can we stay here for a while? Oh, and can we learn how to fight like you did? We saw what you did, you defeted that large dragon that was twice your size! We wan't to fight like that too! Can you teach us? Please!?" The black dragon pleaded Ruuko.
Ruuko sighed.
"Alright.... I will teach you tomarrow at dawn. I have two learn shadow and then I have to get some sleep"
"Yay! Thank you!" They both screamed.
Ruuko sighed.
"Alright, it is about time you two tell me your names. I will tell you mine after you tell me yours"
"My name is Sparrowheart" The black dragon replied. "And this is Bluefur"
The grey dragon dipped her head.
"You look more grey then blue to me" Ruuko laughed.
"My mum was going to call me Greyfur but she thought Bluefur sounds better then Greyfur"
"Well it does sound better. My name is Ruuko and that other dragon was my sister, Cynder"
"Ruuko? Nice name! But it is not as good as Sparrowheart" Sparrowheart boasted.
"So, tomarrow, you will teach us how to fight?" Bluefur asked.
"Yes. I will teach you tommarow...." Ruuko grunted.
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#139 Posted: 15:41:55 19/04/2009
PC! Love it!
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#140 Posted: 12:50:02 20/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Ruuko has been trying to "sink into the ground" for an half an hour, but nothing has happend. Ruuko thought he looked like an idiot, just standing there looking down at the ground. But if he would give up now, he is sure he would have to start all over again. No! I musn't give up now! It should happen any moment now! He thought. He had to rub his paws agains the rock solid earth and swish his tail around to stop himself from moving. He would not dare lift his head, not even for a second. It ached all over, especily the neck, but Ruuko didn't care. He closed his eyes for a minet and began to pitchure himself digging his way around inside the dirt. It must be great to go undernith the ground... Ruuko thought. He opend his eyes, but when he opend them, he could see nothing but darkness. He could see a glimps off purple, but that is all he could see. When he opened his moulth, even just a tinny bit, he could taste sand. Ruuko began to panic.
What is happening to me!?!?!?
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#141 Posted: 01:19:51 21/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Suddently, understanding shot through him like lightling scraping through a tree. Could it be? Did I did it right? Is this shadow? Ruuko thought. He began to panic he didn't know what to do next. He couldn't breath because he was underground. Ruuko scraped his claws despretly on the dirt. He thought he could see a small beam off light and he dug towards it. In about a heartbeat, Ruuko made it out off the ground. The dark purple smoke faded. Ruuko shock himself.
"I did it! I learnt Shadow!" He roared out loud.
"Congradulations!"
Ruuko turned around, Cynder was walking towards him.
"You have masterd shadow. Now you must learn how to use it alot better then that" Cynder grunted.
"I did it..." Ruuko mumbled. He fell to the floor and went to sleep in a couple off seconds.
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#142 Posted: 00:50:17 22/04/2009
PC!!!
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#143 Posted: 01:08:10 23/04/2009 | Topic Creator
It seemed like only a heartbeat had past when a couple off paws jabed him in the ribs. Ruuko turned over.
"Leave me be...." He muttered.
"You promised us that you will teach us Ruuko" A dragon growled at him.
Ruuko opened his eyes. Bluefur and Sparrowheart was siting down next to him.
"I will teach you when I feel like it" Ruuko mumbled and then closed his eyes.
"You promised us that you will teach us at Dawn. It is dawn now" Bluefur roared.
"You have been alseep for a whole day!" Sparrowheart couldn't help but add onto his sister's words. "You will move! You promised us that you will teach us at dawn and you are not breaking our promis!" Sparrowheart bit Ruuko on the tail.
Ruuko roared at them but he couldn't be botherd to argue.
"Alright. But if you continue to be staborn, then I won't" Ruuko growled. He couldn't believe that he slepted for a whole day. It seemed like he only slepted for a couple off seconds. He was still tired and he wanted to have more rest. But he promised this two younge dragons and he new they wouldn't let him break it. Ruuko let out a long, silent sigh It is going to be a tuff day.... he thought.
"Listen, do you know how to hunt animals like deer and rabbits?" Ruuko asked.
"N-no..." It was Bluefur who spoke "All what we have been eating is berrys, grass, vegibles that grow out off the ground. Those sort off things. Oh, we can hunt fish though, our mum tought us how to catch them before she passed away.... We only left our farther for a week..." Bluefur couldn't help but weep a little bit.
"Then I'd better teach you then. You wouldn't survie on berrys and grass for so long. And in winter, the river will be frozen so you wouldn't be able to catch any fish...." Ruuko got stod up and added "Do you mind if I change this lesson to a hunting lesson?"
"Go ahead, we don't mind" Sparrowheart replied. Bluefur jumped up into the air and landed with a thud.
"When you hunt, you need to be light on you paws. Pratice that while I find something small like a rabbit" Ruuko teased. The two dragons rolled there eyes and started jumping. But they kepted on landing with huge thuds.
"Okay, pratice it over there. Your so loud that you can scare off every single prey around here!" Ruuko growled. Bluefur and Sparrowheart nodded and started jumping closer to the castle.
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#144 Posted: 04:39:03 23/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Oh, this is Sparrowheart BTW.

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^ Sparrowheart has two holes in his wings because his father attacked him and Bluefur. Sparrowheart's farther put holes in Sparrowheart's wings and the are permement holes. He didn't do the same to Bluefur, instead, he bit down REALLY hard on Bluefur's tail and he mange to bite a half off her tail. You will learn more soon!

I can't do Bluefur (should be Blueskin lol) because she is grey and you can't get grey.....

The next story after this is going to be called "The Legedary Ruuko: Dark Revange". It is called that because Ruuko trys to get his revange on Spyro. I won't tell you anymore then that because I don't want to spoil it.

The next one after that is called "The Legendary Ruuko: Chasing Stars" and you will find out why soon.

The reason why I called the first one "The Darkest hour" is because the bit when Ruuko gets corupted is his darkest hour. And before you ask why, it is his darkest hour because he never wanted to turn evil and he was filled with sadness and ALOT off worry.
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#145 Posted: 08:10:22 23/04/2009
smilie fully recovered! PC!
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#146 Posted: 09:01:29 23/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Er... what? Fully recovered? :/
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#147 Posted: 02:08:16 24/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Err, anyway, I will continue on with the story now. smilie

Ruuko looked around. He couldn't find any prey in sight. He snorted and then travled deaper into the forest, forgetting Sparrowheart and Bluefur. Ruuko crunched his paws onto the soft grass and spreded out his large wings. They scraped on the tree bark. Ruuko flapped them for a second and then he shot up into the skys. Ruuko flew deeper into the forest until he was at the heart off it. He could smell alot off rabbits. His mouth began to water. This is perfect! I will get those two to come over here and catch as much rabbits as posible. I need to see they way they hunt first before I can do anything..... Ruuko let out a small laughter and then flew back to the castle.
"Hey! Sparrowheart! Bluefur! I found some rabbits! Come with me!" Ruuko called out too them.
"Comming!" They both replied. Sparrowheart and Bluefur stopped jumping and padded over to Ruuko.
"Try to be light on your paws you too. You are that loud that you can scare almost anything" Ruuko teased. Bluefur nodded and coppyed what Ruuko was doing. She spreded out her wings and flew up into the air. Ruuko licked her forhead in aproval and flicked his tail blade at Sparrowheart's body. Sparrowheart sighed and followed Bluefur and Ruuko.
"We are almost at the heart off the forest" Ruuko told them with a tiny smile. He havn't eaten for days and he only remembered how hungry he was just then.
"T-the heart? But why there? That is were our farther lives!" Bluefur wimpered. She backed away and flew next to her brother.
"I don't think we will see him. We will only be there for a short time. And we can always fight him off if he does come out and attack us" Ruuko sighed. He flapped his wings and then landed.
"Were here. The rabbits are in that barrow over there" Ruuko pointed his tail towards a barrow close to them. He then whispered sofftily to them. "Be very quiet..."
Bluefur and Sparrowheart nodded and then stalked over to the barrow.
"One at a time! Stay low on your paws! Wait until a rabbit comes out off the barrow! Put all off your weight into your shoulders! Go close to the rabbit as much as you can without it smelling you or hearing you, then spring and chase after it at full speed!" Ruuko hissed softly.
Bluefur and Sparrowheart did what they were told
They almost got it perfect.... But they have there weight in there paws. Therefor, they will be too slow when they spring and they will lose balence when they run.... Ruuko let out a silent, anoyied hiss. He crouched down low, ready to spring if neither off them maniged to catch the rabbit.
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#148 Posted: 02:32:50 25/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello!?!?!? Anybody!?!?!? smilie
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#149 Posted: 03:10:31 25/04/2009
I'm reading smilie
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#150 Posted: 03:51:32 25/04/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks. smilie

Sparrowheart stopped were he was and let his sister go closer to the rabbit. Bluefur didn't keep her eyes off of the barrow for a second. Bluefur could see a small, white ball off fluff comming out off the barrow. Bluefur creped closer too it. Ruuko's heart began to pound, he sat back up, ready to give chase. The white rabbit bounced over to were Bluefur was crouching, not recognizing Bluefur's grey skin. Bluefur sprang and chased after the rabbit. The rabbit immediately leaped on top off her and sprang to the other side. It’s paws kicked the side off Bluefur's face. Bluefur screeched in range and chased after the rabbit like a cat chasing a mouse. Sparrowheart darted out to help Bluefur. Bluefur was that keen on catching the rabbit that she didn't realize that there was a black log in front off her, she bashed into it like a hammer bashing a nail into sharp wood. Sparrowheart charged into her from behind. The rabbit kept on running and Bluefur just grunted with anger. Ruuko ran too the right. He jumped over the log that Bluefur bashed into and ran straight after the rabbit. He kept to the side off it, making sure that the rabbit wouldn't see him.
The stupid rabbit is too scared to smell me.... Ruuko thought while springing out off the bushes. He stuck out his claw, ready to sink into fresh meat. But the rabbit darted faster to where it was going. Ruuko twisted and turned in mid air and caught the rabbit on the back. Ruuko flapped his wings and then stuck his other paw deep into the rabbit's neck. The rabbit stopped and Ruuko released his grip on it and immediately flew in front off it. He twisted the rabbit's neck with his sharp fangs and broke it. Blood poured out off his prey.
Bluefur and Sparrowheart darted over to him.
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