Chapter 24: Cloudales
"I knew this place when I still colt pony"Gary Sparkle said.A Ballon tranport has landing and Maria walking untill she drop slowly on Clouds."eep,help"Maria gasp."oh no,you wouldn't walk on coulds"he said when he flew down and grab Maria.
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#101 Posted: 04:11:30 02/03/2016 | Topic Creator
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#102 Posted: 04:14:09 02/03/2016
Nice.
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#103 Posted: 04:23:09 02/03/2016 | Topic Creator
I almost forgot about Gary Sparkle and Maria's solo music need adds.
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#104 Posted: 22:26:18 02/03/2016
Oh no!!!
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#105 Posted: 04:33:54 03/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 25: Gilda returns
While Gilda is in waiting room."I suppose to know where Black Pegasus?"she remember.
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#106 Posted: 07:43:06 08/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 26: Maria got through Portal
"well,here goes"Maria said.
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#107 Posted: 18:44:57 08/03/2016
Ooh, can waif to see what happens next.
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#108 Posted: 03:12:00 09/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 27: Royal Guards shool has newly upgrade
"Welcome back"Applejack said."I hope your sister Twilight Sparkle is alright"."I guess wonderbolt uniform Sport going give all"Gary Sparkle said." I can't wait to wear uniform sport"."Gary Sparkle is here"Spike said."Gary Sparkle,over here"Maria said and she wave."Oh hi Maria"Celestia said."Hello"Maria said. what you think celestia's pony and human form? ![]()
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#109 Posted: 03:20:13 09/03/2016
Well, I have the Equestria Girl for Celestia, so I know.
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#110 Posted: 04:47:39 09/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 28: Drummer missing
"our drummer just went missing"Applejack taps her foot."what we do without drummer??".
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#111 Posted: 19:14:00 09/03/2016
Isn't the drummer..... Rainbow?
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#112 Posted: 04:51:10 10/03/2016 | Topic Creator
oh right.
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#113 Posted: 04:48:22 14/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 29: Rainbow Dash has been trap in Music room
"Door can't open without Keys" she standing infront door."Gary Sparkle start music without me"."Where is Rainbow Dash?"Gary Sparkle said to Applejack."no idea,where she went to?"Applejack thinking.Sunset Shimmer knews Rainbow Dash."Just follow Rainbow Dash's foot"she said.
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#114 Posted: 00:58:14 15/03/2016
Intresting...
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#115 Posted: 14:22:43 15/03/2016 | Topic Creator
I would write more story.
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#116 Posted: 23:48:12 15/03/2016
Okay.
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#117 Posted: 04:01:32 16/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 30: Maria's magic has been appear
Maria remember magic started appear on her horn."Look your horn,Maria"Gary Sparkle said."At last,my horn magic appear"Maria happy and jump circle.
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#118 Posted: 21:31:41 16/03/2016
Nice! I can't wait to see what magic she has!
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#119 Posted: 07:19:52 18/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 31: Learn Magic
"easy to teleport yourself,Maria"Gary Sparkle said."watch me"he teleport himself."now you try teleport"Maria try Teleport herself."I can't"she said.
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#120 Posted: 19:14:14 18/03/2016
Oh no! ;^;
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#121 Posted: 04:58:51 20/03/2016 | Topic Creator
don't worry,your character Maria need learn more magic.
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#122 Posted: 05:13:37 20/03/2016
Okay, good, What is a unicorn with no magic, anyways?
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#123 Posted: 02:47:35 22/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 32: Study magic
"oh,I see"gary Sparkle said."Follow me"."really,you sure to teach me a magic"maria said.
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#124 Posted: 03:23:05 22/03/2016
I agree.
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#125 Posted: 03:42:43 22/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 33: Zap Gary Sparkle's tails.
Suddenly,Maria almost zap Gary Sparkle's tails by mistake."yeow"He jump."Are you alright?"she gasp worrie."oops sorry,my mistake"she blush."that ok"Gary Sparkle said. ![]()
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#126 Posted: 20:25:36 22/03/2016
Hey, she learned lightning magic, right?
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#127 Posted: 03:44:10 23/03/2016 | Topic Creator
yep.what is cutie mark look like?
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#128 Posted: 19:51:56 24/03/2016
Didn't I show you a picture before?
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#129 Posted: 03:16:30 25/03/2016 | Topic Creator
I already see a picture.
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#130 Posted: 03:40:00 25/03/2016
That's her cutie mark.
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#131 Posted: 03:44:39 25/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Star cutie mark?
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#132 Posted: 03:47:42 25/03/2016
Yup. Kinda like Twilight's, but without sparkles.
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#133 Posted: 03:54:55 25/03/2016 | Topic Creator
mine is Spear Sun with Sparkle on his cutie mark.
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#134 Posted: 03:56:08 25/03/2016
Cool.
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#135 Posted: 04:01:53 25/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 34: rising Sun
"just you and me"Princess Celestia ask Gary Sparkle."now rise together".she and Gary Sparkle rising together."*rise sun*I did rise sun"Gary Sparkle said. oops, forgot put chapter 34. ![]()
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#136 Posted: 04:04:23 25/03/2016
That's sweet!
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#137 Posted: 04:19:12 25/03/2016 | Topic Creator
thanks,I would write more story.
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#138 Posted: 04:48:31 25/03/2016
Okay.
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#139 Posted: 08:24:45 25/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 35: Galaxy of Guardians has Return
While Waiting at Train Station,Applejack and Rainbow Dash with Princess Cadence,Gary Sparkle."I can't wait to see Rocket Raccon"he said happy and he wear rocket raccon costume.A Train has stop to canterlot.A Pony name Rocket Raccon."good afternoon,sir"Rocket Raccon said as he bow at Gary Sparkle."OMG OMG OMG"he squeak
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#140 Posted: 20:04:16 25/03/2016
Nice!
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#141 Posted: 04:40:02 28/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 36: Throne Room
"shal we go to Crystal empire,Rocket?"Gary sparkle said."where is Groot?"."Groot sleep"Rocket Raccon said.
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#142 Posted: 05:38:03 28/03/2016
Wait, so are they ponies or are they actual Groot and Rocket?
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#143 Posted: 05:52:10 28/03/2016 | Topic Creator
yep,Groot and Rocket are ponys.
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#144 Posted: 06:26:14 28/03/2016
Okay, it makes more sense now. Thank you!
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#145 Posted: 06:52:41 28/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 37: Winter wrap upi
"Brr,really too cold"Groot said."I need sweater"."here sweater"Gary Sparkle said."thanks"Groot said.
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#146 Posted: 07:05:55 28/03/2016
In this world Groot can talk?
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#147 Posted: 03:29:04 30/03/2016 | Topic Creator
maybe,I look to sugguest that Character
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#148 Posted: 08:09:48 31/03/2016 | Topic Creator
Chapter 38: Trading something
"well,should we trade old books at ponyvill"Rocket Raccon said."yeah,good idea,Rocket"Gary Sparkle said."here we are"Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash said."Rairty would trade something"Applejack said."I know"Rarity said."how about your trade,Maria?"
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#149 Posted: 11:48:22 31/03/2016
Can't wait to see what they trade
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#150 Posted: 09:49:41 01/04/2016 | Topic Creator
I wonder they trade some items.
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