darkSpyro

keep going!

thanks

oh i like your story its really good and your charecter is awsome plzzzzzzzz write more

thanks
but i have wrighters block D:
pleas pm me if enyone has ideas!

you can't have writers block
you got to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gridion landed on the temples balcony and let Deanna off.
"thanks" Deanna wispered
" are you shure you whant to stay here!?"Grindion asked
Deanna looked at the entrence then back at Gridion"yes"she says as she nuges him with her nuzzle."good bye" she wisperes
" good bye Deanna" Gridion says as he takes off, back to the cave
Deanna turned around and snuck into the temple.No dragons where seen enywhere. She saw a big dragon stache in the center of the room. She also saw a big red dragon over a little green pool. She hid and managed to hear him
" im worried about Spyro Tardoor." he said
"Why?what is wrong with him?" Tardoor said
"He thinks he saw another purple dragon" Ignitus said
"Hes tooken to many hits from malafor" Tardoor sighed
" are you saying hes becoming RETARTED!?" Volteer yelld
"SHHHHHHH"Cyril shushed him.
"no im not" Tardoor wispered
"Its impossible!"Cyril said
"its time for bed. Well deal with this later" Ignitus said as he walkes to the chamber where they sleep.Deanna heard a buzzing behind her.
"heyyyyyyy spyro!whachya doing?"said the voice
'whos spyro!?' deanna said in her mind.
"hey buddy! you look diffrent.When did you get so many horns like the evil she dragon?and where have all your orenge go?its black where is suppost to be...."
Deanna turned around"ShHHHHHH!!!im not this "spyro" you keep talking about!"
"Then who are you!?" the voice said.
Deanna got use to the yellow light and saw it was a dragonfly.
"my name is Deanna" she wispered
"Sparx" He said."heyyyyy your the purple dragon we carried back!i gota tell the others!" sparx said as her started to fly off
"NO"deanna hisses as she pined him down
"AAAAAA ANOTHER EVIL SHE DRAGON!!!!"sparx yelled
Deanna covered his mouth with the back of her claw
"you cant tell enyone!" she said as she let go
"fine, fine i wount" Sparx said as he brushed off any dirt. He flew away to another chamber and the door opened. He looked back at the black and purple dragon, then dissepered into the dark chamber.

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" im worried about Spyro Tardoor." he said
"Why?what is wrong with him?" Tardoor said
"He thinks he saw another purple dragon" Ignitus said
"Hes tooken to many hits from malafor" Tardoor sighed
" are you saying hes becoming RETARTED!?" Volteer yelld
"SHHHHHHH"Cyril shushed him.
"no im not" Tardoor wispered
.

lol that rly made me laugh lol i am still laughing!
so funny!!!!!!!!!!!1

lol if i know sparx the second deanna turns her back sparx will go running for his life to spyro yelling he saw another purple dragon

please write more

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" im worried about Spyro Tardoor." he said
"Why?what is wrong with him?" Tardoor said
"He thinks he saw another purple dragon" Ignitus said
"Hes tooken to many hits from malafor" Tardoor sighed
" are you saying hes becoming RETARTED!?" Volteer yelld
"SHHHHHHH"Cyril shushed him.
"no im not" Tardoor wispered
.

lol that rly made me laugh lol i am still laughing!
so funny!!!!!!!!!!!1

i know when spyro convinces Ignitus that theres a dragon and its not there.....

im letting my reders deside if i sould add ember

HHhmmm... That would make Cynder's job even harder, considering the fact that she has to explain to everyone that she tried to kill Deanna.
But with all canidates together that would equal... a love pentagon?
Is that possiable?

well......cynder might tell that she tryed to kill her....or just let it slip...who knows

SO you can vote and then i juess itll be a love pentagon

Sparx flew to the sleeping spyro."Spyro!spyro!wake up!" he said, conserned for the safty of only him and spyro, and betrayind the promese ha made with Deanna.
"what?" spyro groned
"its her!" he hissed
Spyro wolk up stood up in a second."WHERE!?" he yelled
"SHHHHHHHHH" sparx yelled back
Spyro covered his mouth ans fell on his face"oooooooo....." he moned
"get up moron"sparx said as he roled his eyes
Spyro got up."sorry.."spyro wispered
Sparx came out and Deanna was seen sleeping in a shadowy corner and sparx pointed to her."there she is" sparx wispered
"its a she!?" spyro said
"yep" repliyed sparx
Spyro walked over to her. Deannas purple scales glisened in the moon light. How pretty she was, how fragal she looked, how inasint.....but then he saw the claw marxs on her.
"thouse whernt there" spyro wispered to himself.'maby this was the dragon in my dream!?' he said in his mind
"bet you it was the evil she dragon" sparx said
Spyro thought about it. Maby it was her.
out in the trees, Grindion spyed on the dragon that have gave him warm, nice felling. He saw Spyro and dissepered into the forest below

HHHmmm...
Love at first sight???

maby

its cool

Aw, sweet! Erm...love at first sight!

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its cool

WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE U DONE WITH ROBOTIC KITTY!?!?!
your to sweet to be him=_=

no one?

It's great!

thanks

Dawn soon came and Cynder wolk up.
"Good morning Spyro" she said as she yawned
"Spyro?" she asked. She looked around and saw only sparx, sleeping. She got up and walked over to him and pounced on him.
"WHERES SPYRO!?" she asked
Sparx insently wulk up "WA AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! GET OFF OF ME YOU EVIL SHE DRAGON PERSON THINGY!" he yelled
cynder got off andd looked at him"where?"
"go out there" sparx said as he pointed to the door. Cynder ran to the door and looked around for spyro. Im the croner, she saw that spyro was asleep with the purple menise she saw eirlyer. Deanna was laying on spyros sid and he had his wing over her like a blamket. Anger, fear, and sarow filler Cynder.
"how?" she wispered to herself "why?"
"WHY!?" cynder yelled as she whent off.
Spyro jumped up in time to see Cynder leave.
"where are you going!?" he asked
Cynder keep running. Spyro ran after her and finally caut up with her. He stoped her with his paws.
"Cynder, whats wrong?"
"You...her..."she coked out as she pushed him out of the way.Cynder disapered into the forest.
"But we where never together" he wispered

Poorest Spyro...

lol, but from Cynder's point of view... MASSIVE IRONY.

more?
yeash?
no?
add Ember?

hhhmmm....
things seem kinda tough without ember right now, make later when things calm down a little.

maby i could add ember but shes not with them at the moment but with flame and bandit

after that last story i can only imagine what cynder will do to spyro after all those feelings filled her. its a good thing spyro doesent have a sore throat or else hed most likley wont get the word to cynder and get killed

youll see what will happen


Cynder ran outside.she remembered that this was the spot where she let the temple befor she got capshered by Gule. Tears ran down her face. The door opened and Cynder turned around. She came face to face with Spyro.
Cynder got up and walked to the dragon statchue and sat down again.
"im not with her....im with you......"Spyro wispered
"i saw you with her!" Cynder cried
Spyro came and sat next to Cynder. He put his wing over her.
"she was cold, she was hurt, and she was lonly. I only like her as a friend Cynder. Nothing more, nothing less." he wispered to Cynder
Cynder looked up. Spyro wiped away her tears with his paw.
"i love you and only you Cynder."he told her as he moved closer to her.
the sun was rising and Cynder looked at Spyro. He moved closer,and closer. Cynder was whondering what he was doing. then all of a sudden, Spyro kissed her. Cynders eyes opened wide in suprise.
They parted and Cynder was brethless.
"Spyro!" she said since she had nothing else to say. Red showed on her checks.
"Cynder! are you bleeding!?"spyro said, knowing what it was but whanted to make her laghe
"im blushing, not bleeding"Cynder laghed

Deanna came outside to find Cynder and Spyro laghing. She yawned and streched her purple and black wings.
"morning" she yawned
Cynder and spyro both looked back to see Deanna. He wings where bigger than spyros and black replaced where orenge should be. She had wavy hornes but where in rows like Cynders. He claws where sharp and cerved, talones. a blue mark ran across her leg. he purple scaled Glisened in the sunlight. Spyro was doumstruk. He looked at CYnders scales and they did not glisen like Deannas and they where dul. Cynder growled at Deanna then at Spyro.Cynder spred her black and red wings and took off to the river.
Grindion was on the top of the temple, looking at the dragons. He wached Cynder go and he saw Spyro spred his wings and took off after her. Deanna was all alone on the bottom and didnt try to fallow. Grindion spred his wings and flew down to her.
"Hey" he said
Deanna whouldnt look up. Tears ran down her and landed on the soft ground below her paws. He took a claw and put it under her chin. He lifted up her face and saw the tears. They where blue with a little fire in them. They loked like cristales.
"why so sad pretty one" he said.He took his paw from her chin and covered him mouth with it.
"what did you say?" she asked
"nothing...nothing at all...." he said.
He sat next to her and put his wing over her. He was a inch bigger than her, but the same age. Deanna layed her head on his muskuler shoulders and her tears rain down. Grindion looked at her and looked at the risin sun. He put him paw gentally on Deannas. SHe looked down and closed her eyes and then smiled. The sum dried up her tears and it made her fell so warm. Grindion smiled and raped his tail with deannas.

awww...our draggys love.

i cant wait to read the next part...

thanks

I'm excited to see what happens next!

i got most of it covered.....sould i post it?...or mady not...

i will anywhay.....
WARNING!!!
IF U HAVE NOT BETTED DOTD DO NOT GO ON!!!

Cynder landed at the silver river. her tail splaced on the serfece. she hured wing beets and spyro was soon next to her.
"why did you take off?" spyro asked
Cynder didnt answer. she just stared at the water.
"what do you have agenst her?" he asked
"im afraid...."
"your afrad of her!? why!? shes nothing like malafor."
"im afraid she will get in our relashonship.."
"what do you mean Cynder?"
"Im afraid that she will spit us....that youll go to her."Cynder wispered
Spyro looked at her and put his wing over her.
"theres nothing to be afraid of..." he said
Cynder stayed there, quiet. something bothered her.
"what is it Cynder?" spyro asked
" what happeneed to us...after saving the world.....did we die?"
"were clearly alive...."
"but spyro...we whached Ignitus die...in the fire...how can he be with us!?"
Spyro though about it.
"i think where in another wold..." Cynder wispered as she looked round.
"the cronicaler!" Spyro yelled exadidly."if we find him we can go back!?"
"but how spyro!? where clearly traped here!"
"right...well figure that out later..." he said "right now...we have alote of planing to do..."
"and where will that get us?Spyro, we GOT to find a way out! now!"
Spyro looked at the sun in the sky. Cynder looked to. a tear came down from Cynders face.
"whats wrong Cynder?" spyro asked
"it dosnt make sence enymore....Ignitus is somehoe alive and here...and hunter is gone..."
" Hunter has a home not with us...but Ignitus gives the whole thing away."
"lets go back Spyro..." she said.
Spyro nodded and spred his wings. Cynder also spred her wings
"ladys first" Spyro chuckled
Cynder laghed and hit him plafully , nocking him down.
"Hey!" spyro laghed as he wached her fly away. he spred his wings and took off after her.
"cant ceach up!" Cynder laghed
"I bet u i can!" Spyro laghed back
Spyro smiled
'This is the way it should have been....with sparx by my side and evryone here...' he thought to himself

Wait... so are they in a differnet world or is Cynder just over-reacting?

too bad its ending already i was hoping it be longer and scarier with more exictment...all well

A-W-E-S-O-M-E! wait, is that how you spell it?
Celestial: yes, yes it is.
thank you, my blue friend...
Celestial: is there something wrong?
yeah, you're not in the story! GAH!

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Wait... so are they in a differnet world or is Cynder just over-reacting?

if u whated till the end of the credits u whould know there in Ignituses crystil thing around his neck
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too bad its ending already i was hoping it be longer and scarier with more exictment...all well

its NOWHERE near the end

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A-W-E-S-O-M-E! wait, is that how you spell it?
Celestial: yes, yes it is.
thank you, my blue friend...
Celestial: is there something wrong?
yeah, you're not in the story! GAH!

i cant includ evryones dragon...but pm me her profile and ill see what i can do
(that gose for evryone else to if they whant)

D, you already know her profile! ok, i'll draw a pic for you, then give it to you next time i see you! by the way, D, pm me please! i have something very important to tell you!

Quote: Cynder1

Quote: dragonknight565

Wait... so are they in a differnet world or is Cynder just over-reacting?

if u whated till the end of the credits u whould know there in Ignituses crystil thing around his neck

Actually, there not in the crystal, they did that to show where the two were. (valley of the avlar)

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Quote: Cynder1

Quote: dragonknight565

Wait... so are they in a differnet world or is Cynder just over-reacting?

if u whated till the end of the credits u whould know there in Ignituses crystil thing around his neck

Actually, there not in the crystal, they did that to show where the two were. (valley of the avlar)

then how come they did a close up of Ignituses Crystal?
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D, you already know her profile! ok, i'll draw a pic for you, then give it to you next time i see you! by the way, D, pm me please! i have something very important to tell you!

i need her profile on HERE. right HERE
*sighe* fine

geez, D. but i don't really know EXACTLY what she's gonna look like... hold on. i gotta think... hmm...

Quote: Safira101

geez, D. but i don't really know EXACTLY what she's gonna look like... hold on. i gotta think... hmm...

@_@ ur saying u dont know ur character?
did u forget?or making new agestments?

hello peoples!!

Hiya person!

hiya peoples

I'm a person, not a peoples.

UR NETHER!!!

You're right, i ish a dragon. And i come from Dragonia, the dragon version of Riptonia. I am the King there, but i was exiled becuz i ate a piece of bad fruit and threw up on the Governor.