darkSpyro

POst 1001. Just had to do that, BTW.

F: yo! what's up? what'd we miss?
me: *shrugs* dunno.
F: *plays Wii game*
me: are you playing my new game?!
F: um......no....
me: you are, arn't you?! Fire! i just got that!
F: i know. that's why i'm playing it. i'm tired of the old ones.
me: yeah, that's why i got a new one! now turn that off!
F: fine. *turn it off after saving something*
me: what did you do?
F: nothing. at least on your adventure game.
me: you saved a creature to my spore encyclopidia didn't you?
F: well, there were no dragons in it. so i just gave you an awesome creature. enjoy.

Dawn:

Me: Lucky! You have a Wii system?!

me: yep. had it since my birthday last year.
F: yeah. it took all summer to find one. and when we did, she wouldn't leave without it.

Dawn: lol

Me: I would LOVE to have one. Sadly, I have an old fashion-back-in-the-day T.V. I'm surprised I found a way to play my games with the PS2 system

Dawn: Yeah

Me: But I hope that I get one of my family's T.V. Cause my grandmother has a newish t.v and she is giving her t.v to one of us.

me: cool. my tv is old, and small.
F: yeah. it sucks.
me: not really. it works fine. it's just small.

Me: Same here. Only, I can't anything on mine. Only play games

me: i play games and watch movies on mine. i finally got a new DVD player. my old one died.
F: yep. she killed it by watching too much Charmed.
me: yeah. the Charmed Ones vanquished my DVD player.

Me: lol

Dawn: Sucks

F: *plays Brawl on my Wii*
me: Fire!
F: what?
me: you're playing my Wii again!
F: so?
me: so, it's mine! get off!
F: no way! i'm kicking the CPU's but!
me: ugh. fine. play the stupid game. who are you playing?
F: Shiek.
me: Fire, she's my character, i use her!
F: not anymore! i saw you playing Bowser yesterday.
me: so? i can have two characters.
F: then i can use Shiek. after all, i use Zelda and Peach. so i can use Shiek.

Chapter 34: "Here to Help"

They continued to walk in the woods, as Rookie glared at Dawn. She stared back at him asking, "Why are you looking at me for?" "It seems as if you are worried about something," he replied. "I am, Rook... let’s just forget about it," she responded, as her head shook. "Alright, but remember, I’m here to help."
Moments later, Dawn finally told him what she felt inside. "I... I have to tell you something; something that may be disappointing." "I’m all ears, Dawn. Go ahead," he answered. She sighed and began, "Celestial and I went inside this hidden little place, and there was this type of birdbath. Only that it wasn’t..." "Uh-huh, uh-huh, go on," he responded.
She paused and said, "I’ll shorten this. She was curious of why I was angry and all that, and she wanted to study my future. As we glared into it...horrible, horrible stuff just appeared." A few seconds later of silence and before Rookie was going to say something, Dawn added, "I can’t do this no longer; I’m no cut out for this. To save this, to save that, it’s just too difficult right now."
"But you have to try! No matter what, you have to try!" he exclaimed, "I know you can." "How can you possibly know?! You do not anything about being some dragon like me!" she hissed. "I...I may not know. But when I see you fight out there, it seems as if you are capable of defeating anything in your way!" he responded.
"That’s the problem...I can defeat anything in my way," she said, gloomy. "What do you mean?" "My future will be revealed. Destruction is how this world will look like.
And myself? The nightmares that I wish had vanished, the thing that I hate the most...ShadowWing. Along side? My father. Whom I thought I... WE defeated a long time ago, now an immortal...DarkShadow. There’s no hope foe me left, Rook," she ended, as tears fell of her eyes. "Past has been written, you still have the time to write your own present, and the future will be alright," he answered, giving her a hug...

great story! write more!
F: yeah! i wanna know what will happen next!

Chapter 35: “Parting Ways”
(Part 1 of 2)

After a moment of hugging, Dawn finally said, “I...I guess your right. I’ll try.” “Good,” he replied. “C’mon, we are wasting time. We have to rush back to the land.” “Alright.”
Dawn then ran off. “Wait up!” he yelled, running after her.

~Others

“Where’d he go?!” Cynder exclaimed. For the hundredth time! He was so hungry that he went mad!” laughed Sparx, “man that never gets old!” “Sparx, quit it!” said Spyro. “I am pretty sure that they are okay,” said Moonshine. “Poor poor child, Dawn, it’s my entire fault for doing all of this,” said Celestial. “No need to blame yourself—,” Cynder got interrupted, as she heard something in the bushes. Just then they saw both of there companions pop out, as they were relieved that they are okay.
“Dawn, Rookie! You guys are okay!” exclaimed Cynder. “I told you,” said Moonshine, walking away. “Dawn, I apologize for all of this,” said Celestial. “It’s alright. I feel better now,” she replied.
After a while of relaxing and what not, Dawn and Rookie were discussing about something they couldn’t decide. Finally, they came to an agreement, as they gathered there allies. “SO, you’re saying that we should part ways?” questioned Cynder, in shock.
“As I said before, there are many places that still need help, especially here! Rookie and I must travel alone, I figured out that some how things would slow us down. I figured out where to go now,” Dawn explained. “We’ve been through this before, it’s no big deal,” said Rookie. “No big deal?! Dawn, Rookie, the world is at its end! I don’t want us to part, we may not see each other again!” yelled Cynder.
“A chance we are willing to take,” said Dawn. “I am okay with this,” said Hunter. “What?!” “Cynder, please. They have an idea, and we must go along with it,” said Spyro.
“I know that you care, you were my very first friend! But I must go.” “I don’t know,” sighed Cynder. At that moment, they head a big explosion from the entrance of the Land of Moonlight...
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But that's it for now

Awesome!!

me: awesome story!
F: write more!

Thanks! I'll try to type some more, before school starts

Chapter 36: "Parting Ways"
(Part 2)

“What was that?!” exclaimed Celestial. They heard growls and roars, as one of the dragons from the land came running to them. “We are under attack!
We need more reinforcements!” he yelled. As everyone ran toward the danger, they couldn’t believe what they saw. “The creatures of the underground?! Here?!” shouted Dawn. “Sparx, guide the elderly to safety. Cynder, Hunter, and I will try out best to defeat them!” commanded Spyro. “No problem!” said Sparx, flying off. “Dawn, Rookie, leave...NOW!!” he yelled. As Rookie ran toward the woods, Dawn was shock of what was going on.
“Dawn! You have to leave!” said Cynder. “This is all because of me,” she said, sadly.
“There’s no time for this! I’m sorry, but you have to go!” Dawn glared at her three allies, as Rookie shouted, “C’mon!” As she took a last look at Cynder, she ran off with Rookie into the woods.
“Their they go! After them!” shouted the immortal panther, NightSky. “Him?!” exclaimed both Spyro and Cynder.
Running and panicking, Dawn and Rookie had to get away from them as far as possible. “Didn’t...you said...that you learned...teleporting?!” he screamed. “You’re right!” she responded, “but the creatures took away my powers and everything else! Remember?!” “Oh, that’s great!” Rookie said, sarcastically, “now what?!” “I don’t know....I’ll do it! I’ll try!” “Hope this works!” he said, pausing. She stopped as well, and thought, * I don’t know if I could teleport him and if I could really do this!*
“Okay! Just hang on to me!” she replied. As he did, Dawn frowned at the up coming foes, closed her eyes, and concentrated, *Away from here, anywhere! Miles and miles away from here!*
As the creatures reached them, a glow surrounded the two dragons, and was fortunate to get out of the situation....

T.B.C

awesome! keep writing!
F: yeah! continue!

Awesome!!

Thanks!

me: np
F: more?
N: *yawns* what's up?
F: AHHHHHH!!!!!!

Chapter 37: "Safe!"

The dragons were defeating the immortals as NightSky shouted, "Retreat! The two fools are gone!" They did what they were told and disappeared. Spyro and Cynder both glared at each other with fear and confusion, as the panther threaten them, "Speak or see them ever again and I'll make sure that you'll be long gone!" He then raised his zeptar, and vanished.
A small glow appeared in midair, as Dawn and Rookie fell onto the ground. "Ugh....are we away from them?" he asked, getting up. "yeah, we're safe now," she replied, "how then heck did I just teleported?!" "Well perhaps it's a new power you have that hasn't been drained yet," he answered. "That seems logical. Well sorry for the rough landing back there, I didn't concentrate like how I was suppose to do." "No problem." "Where are we?" she questioned. "I don't know. I thought that it was your job to do that," he responded. "I know it was, I just freaked out and thought of going anywhere from the situation!" she exclaimed. "Alright, cool it. What should we do now?" "I'm not sure. Let's just find a place to sleep and travel around tomorrow," she said, walking off. "Alright," he sighed, following her.
It was close to sunset as Rookie said, "Nice place, it seems familiar. Anyways, is there any shelter here?!" "Be patient! I see a cave up ahead, just hang on an--" "I get the routine," he said, as he stood by her. She concentrated on heading to the cave and teleported to it in just a few seconds.....

T.B.C

Good job!

Thanks

No problem!

great story!

Thanks Gosh, I haven't been writing much of my story on here and ideas on my notebook! Well, that's what happens when you get a huge writer's blocker...

Dawn: ...AND being LAZY!!!!

I am not!

Rookie: Here we go again...

Silver:

Some one is gonna get a surprised when they read this chapter!
CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!
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Chapter 38: "Caved in with Allies"

Seconds later, they appeared way inside the cave. "It’s dark in here," said Rookie. "No really?! I haven’t noticed!" Dawn said, sarcastically. Her pendant glowed, as she searched for something to light up. "Found anything yet?" he asked, behind her. "Nope!" All of a sudden they heard a loud roar, as Rookie hid behind her. "What was that?!" he said. "I don't know," she replied to where the entrance may be at. "What are you doing?!" "I'm gonna check it out! Just stay here." "Will do!"
Dawn then found the entrance and ran outside. She looked around if there was anything suspicious. "Well, I found some wood," she told herself, picking them up. Lighting then struck a tree, as it was on fire. *It's only thunder. Now how can I stop the fire anyways?* Just then it started to pour a lot of rain, as she said, "This is really weird."
Echos from afar came--saying-- "Oh, just great!" "Well, I'm sure it'll end soon!" said the other. Thunders and roars came from the skies with the winds blowing hard. "Yeah! I think it will!" said the first one, sarcastically.
"I'm either starting to go nuts, or are those familiar voices to me?" Dawn asked herself. All of a sudden, at distance, she saw her allies--Wanderist and Sally! "Dawn?! Is that you?!" exclaimed Wanderist. "Wanderist! Sally! Of course it's me!" she said, "C'mon. Let's go inside the cave."
"Rookie! I have a surprise for you!" "Did you get rid of that monster?!" "It was only thunder! But look! Your girlfriend is here!" "Wanderist?!" he exclaimed, staring at her. "Rookie!" They both ran to each other, and hugged--glad to meet each other again. "So...where's Pablo?" Sally questioned. "I rather not say," she said, gloomy. "He left you?"
Seconds later she replied, "Yeah...something like that." "I'm so sorry. He was an idiot anyways." "No, he didn't dump me...he..." Rookie over heard the conversation, and jumped in, "Well! This was a crazy adventure for us, and yours?" he said, changing the subject. "Well, my stupid sister here wanted to travel in this "lovely" weather," answered Wanderist. "Well, it's not my fault! Everything was great until we were chased and got lost!" The sisters then began there argument, as Dawn said, "Don't you just miss all of this disagreement?" "Yeah...C'mon guys we're all tired! Let's just go to sleep!" Rookie yelled over them. "Fine!" said Sally.
Dawn quietly chuckled as she lay down by the fire. *Gotta love those sister*
Minutes later everything was quiet, as they all fell asleep over the rainy outside.

Sally:Aww!!Boyfriend and girlfriend are together again!

Wanderist: Oh,shut up!

Me: Anyway, awesome job! And you did a great job imitating Sally's personality. And Wanderist's.

Wanderist: Agreed!

I try my best! Glad ya likes it

Chapter 39: "The Crystal Catacombs"

After tossing and turning for some hours, Dawn finally got up and decided to explore the rest of the cave. She walked some steps away from her sleeping allies, and then made her pendant glow. "What's wrong with me now?" she whispered to herself. Walking miles and miles, she found herself facing a a lot of tunnels. "Wow, this must be some sort of labyrinth! Hope I don't get lost." She took a few seconds to decide which tunnel to take, and went forward on. After a few minutes, she told herself, "This is starting to get a little b--" All of a sudden, Dawn some how slipped. She was sliding down and down, not able to get up.
Just then she slowly stopped to a place that was even bigger than the cave. "A catacomb? It looks amazing!" she exclaimed. It had a small waterfall, rivers, and tons of crystals. "Maybe I can try to practice moving the water here." So she then walked towards the waterfall, and began to concentrate. A few minutes later she was going to give up, but then earned back her power! "Finally!" She then thought of who she saw in the Dream World, and sat on a bolder. *I still can't believe it was just all a fake. I felt that he was actually there...is my mother hiding something? she thought, while meditating. Minutes yet passed, as Dawn yawned, "Until now I'm beginning to feel tired." Dawn then teleported back to the rest area, and walked the where the others were sleeping. All at once her pendant glowed, and fainted.
But it wasn't the Chronicler or her mother calling her....

T.B.C

Awesome!!

Question:

Who do you think is calling her?

A.) Pablo

B.) Her Father

or

C.) Her Ancestors

PAAAABLOOO!!!!

Sally: I hope not!

Wanderist: Why do you hate Pablo so much?

Sally: He cheated on Dawn!

Me: *smacks Sally* That was a STORY!!

Dawn: *smacks Sally* AND he didn't cheat on me!

Sally: OW and OW!!!!

Wanderist:

Chapter 40: "A Visit From Fear"

The ground was dull and dead, along with all the plants. The skies were gloomy and showed signs that is was going to rain....

Dawn finally woke up in the woods with the shadows surrounding her.
"Wha-where am I?" she questioned. *You mean...you don't know?* whispered a voice in the winds. She then heard as if there was an evil laugh at distance. "Who are you?!" All of a sudden a pair of red glowing eyes appeared in front of her; inside the shadows. "Why...I'm your father!" he replied, showing himself in a spiritual form. "DarkShadow?!" she said, in shock.
"I thought that I--WE got rid of you!" she hissed. "You have...but not my spirit, my child," he smirked. "As you can well see, I'm not a child anymore!" "Keep it up, your darkness is showing," ignoring what she said; as he walked around her. Dawn then breathed in deeply, and calmed herself. "As if it's that easy, my daughter. You shall soon see that it will become a whole new level of difficulty," he continued.
"Where are you getting at?!" she growled. "Let me demonstrate it," he ended, as he disappeared. "Show yourself, you coward!" *I am, you just can't see me. You haven't masted it* "Mastered what?!" "You'll be told." Just then he rapidly appeared and held her down to the ground. "Get off of me!" she yelled. "Now why would I do that? You'll ruin the surprise!" he chuckled, as his turned red. Dawn's eyes widen, and transformed into her nightmare--ShadowWing.
"Welcome back," he responded. "What...do you want...from me?!" she hissed, trying to get out of his grip. "I have summoned you here so that you could be marked on your wings. So that you'll never forget the fact that becoming corrupted permanently shall be your true destiny!" he roared, as he raised his claw; ready to tear up her wings....

~TO Be Continued.....

Oh, dang. Poor Dawn

Chapter 41: "Fear That Has Been Followed"

(part 1 of 2)

ShadowWing roared out in pain, as the ground slightly rumbled. She was shaking really badly as DarkShadow said, "You shall never forget that you are now part of my clan--The Storm Bringers." He laughed out evilly, as ShadowWing fainted--turning back to her normal self in the real world.
Morning came--it was still raining--as Dawn was widely awake; trembling as she was trying to sleep, with pain on her wings. There were to be only red markings of where her father scratched her; the real tears have been left on ShadowWing.
Back to where the others were sleeping, Rookie was the first one to get up. He glared outside to find out that it has been raining overnight. "What?! It's still raining?!" he whispered. He then looked back to find Dawn trembling badly. "Dawn?" Rookie ran towards her and questioned, "What's wrong?" She stared at him and moves away, "Go...go away." He then glared at her wings, as his eyes widen in shock.
"Dawn...what happened?!" "N...nothing," she replied. He then reached out and gently touched her wing, as her eyes widen. "Don't...don't do that!" she warned him. Rookie looked back if the others woke up yet; nothing. "Can't you heal it?" "I...I don't know." "You've got to try." "Just...leave me alone." He looked at her sadly, and walked away.

OMG!! Poor Dawn.

Sally: CHILD ABUSE!!!

Well...it's not really child abuse, it's--

Dawn: I AM NOT A CHILD!!!Okay, maybe

Me: As I was saying it isn't child abuse, more like having a corrupted father how will really TRY to make his daughter just like him

Sally: Yeah..but it's still hurting her.

Wanderist:

Me: Yeah but still--

Dawn: OKAY! Just shut up already

Sally:

Chapter 42: "Fear That Has Been Followed"
(part 2)

Eventually, Dawn does heal her wings, but still has the red markings. Back to the others--who are now awake--are planning on trying to figure what's wrong with there ally. "Look at her, she's still trembling. This isn't like her at all," said Rookie, shaking his head. "And that's why we must try to calm her down," replied Wanderist, "does everyone know what to do?" "Let's do this!" exclaimed Sally. "Hopefully nothing goes bad," he said to himself. The three then walked toward where Dawn was at.
"Dude, get up now!" yelled Sally. The other two looked at her with a look on there faces. "Just trying to do something helpful," she said, backing away.
"What's with you Dawn? At first, you were glad to see us again!" Wanderist started, "and now your shaking like a frighten sheep!" "Dawn, try to understand that we are attempting to help you out, to keep you from being so scared," said Rookie. "I...no...I can't," she stuttered. Dawn was feeling too scared and timid to speak to her allies; she doesn't want them to feel so down, so emotional of what happened. The three still tried to talk her out of it, but nothing came out of Dawn's mouth.
Wanderist suddenly gets impatient with her, and makes Dawn get up and look at her.
"Dawn. Snap out of this...ridiculous thing you have inside! You are acting like a small child who had a nightmare!" she yelled and then slaps Dawn with her tail. "Snap out of it! You know better than this!" She shakes even more, and all of a sudden, glows from her markings and eyes turn white. "You just had to trigger her bad side, didn't you?" spoke Sally.
Yet again, she transforms into ShadowWing, as everyone sees the secret
that she was trying to hide....

~T.B.C

Chapter 43: "Secrets Let Loose"

They were shock to see that her wings were torn, and have a bit of blood stains on them. "D...what...what happened to you?!" exclaimed Rookie. "As you can well see," she started, spreading her wings, "I have been marked permanently to remind myself the clan I am in." "A clan?" asked Sally, confused. "Yes!" she hissed. "But who would be stupid enough to mark your wings?!" said Wanderist. ShadowWing smirked at her questioned and responded, "Why...my father, of course!" "DarkShadow?!" yelled out Rookie. "The one and only, who else?!" "Haven't Pablo and your other self defeated him--permanently?!" he continued. Wanderist and Sally looked at each other with disbelief and have never been told about this before. "It seems like it, but his spirit still lives on; still unhappy until his destiny has come true." "What idiotic thing could that be?!" "To turn me into a queen, and to become corrupted! Not only to mention that I'll carry on and complete what my father needed to do!" "What?!" he exclaimed, with a little bit of laughter, "to do a thing like that?!" "Sure laugh now, but must I remind you that I have the power to control many things?!"
"Alright! This has to stop, NOW!" shouted Wanderist. "Oh? And how will you do that?" she chuckled. "Do it sis!" grin Sally, knowing what she's going to do. Wanderist then let out a huge beam of Ultra Light, towards ShadowWing. Thinking of blocking it, she had no choice but get hit--for her wings were still soar. "Give up and bring my friend back!" she yelled, ready to strike again.

Wow...so much emotion. You have a talent when it comes to writing.

Thanks! I try to make them sound good

What do you mean by sound? They are good!

Or well, I dunno