darkSpyro

Yeah! I want to see it, too! LOLz

Quote: Nalemor

Please do post it

I will.

Infinity : He looks cute... (wats for Nalemors response )

Asin: YAY! more and more people are getting their Dragon Partners! 8D
That's like.... *counts*....
C_R and Arie
C_f and Silro
Cynder09 and Fireflight
you and Infinity
Ice_bomb and Ed
Me and Asin
Cynde... no, musn't say that...
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That's 6 of of us! Plus, the whole CFC exapt Nalemor! 8D

SO many
D_C CONTINUE PLZ!!!!!!!Imma dieing of it Dx

Quote: Night Owl

Quote: Nalemor

Please do post it

I will.

Infinity : He looks cute... (wats for Nalemors response )

Uhh.... thanks Infinity...

Quote: Dark_Cynder

Asin: YAY! more and more people are getting their Dragon Partners! 8D
That's like.... *counts*....
C_R and Arie
C_f and Silro
Cynder09 and Fireflight
you and Infinity
Ice_bomb and Ed
Me and Asin
Cynde... no, musn't say that...
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That's 6 of of us! Plus, the whole CFC exapt Nalemor! 8D

Except me? What do you mean?

Well.... It's just that...... 6 people (maybe even more) already got their Dragon Partners from the Dragon Elders...... well...... and you didn't.......... Believe it or not, but this is ...... well..... true for us... ummm............

So NiOwl, when are you gonna post the picture?

Quote: Dark_Cynder

Asin: YAY! more and more people are getting their Dragon Partners! 8D
That's like.... *counts*....
C_R and Arie
C_f and Silro
Cynder09 and Fireflight
you and Infinity
Ice_bomb and Ed
Me and Asin
Cynde... no, musn't say that...
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That's 6 of of us! Plus, the whole CFC exapt Nalemor! 8D

Hi, Dark_Cynder! It's surprising how you get dragons....to the fact that Asin is REAL

Quote: Dragonhope

Hi, Dark_Cynder! It's surprising how you get dragons....to the fact that Asin is REAL

Reveal Spoiler

Am I not worthy enough?

What are you talking about? Of course you are worthy enough... just.... Well... Idk why didn't the Elders give you your dragon... maybe you are just not ready for this kinda responsebility, yet. It's all not that easy, ya know...
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And now for the moment someone may have been waiting a LOOOOOOOOOONG time, now..... ^,^ I present to you..... Chapter 4!!! 8D ENJOY!! ^,^

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<Chapter 3: The Light Within>
As the Baby hatchling wandered around the lands, it saw nothing but Darkness and poisoned lands. However, the Hatchling felt something warm all the time, no matter where it was going.
The dragon was walking for hours now and soon it felt hungry. It started searching for something, but nothing has came in to its zone of view. And soon the hatchling got so hungry and tired, it just Collapsed on the Cold ground. its tail fell down and the six lights started to slowly disappear. The hatchling was laying on the ground, unconscious……. But that wasn’t the end………..
After a few hours a Dragon was seen in the Dark Sky. It was so dark, the dragon looked like a shadow. The dragon looked around and saw a little weak light below. “Hmmm… Could this be…….” The dragon whispered in wonder. It started lowering closer to the ground. When it landed, the dragon approached the hatchling. The closer it was getting to the hatchling, the stronger was the feeling like there was a Great Force around… Not a Dark power, but Pure Light…. “There might still be hope for us left…” the Dragon said and took the dragon. It flew in to the sky and disappeared in Shadows….

10 years later….

In a place far away from the Dragon Realms, the only place where the Darkness couldn’t get to all those years ago, there lied old, yet Beautiful Ruins. They where known as The Xaon Ruins- the place where the Sun shines brighter then anywhere else in the World. This is the place where a Dragon has been bringing all the survived dragons ever since the day of the Coming of the Shadows. The little Hatchling was one of those dragons. In total there lived four Dragons in the Xaon Ruins: Kursion the Dragon Guardian- is like a Father to the rest of the Dragons and owns the powers of Earth and Plant; Shade the Dark Dragon- a twelve year old Dragon witch is the oldest of all of the Dragon Children and can control the forces of Darkness; Rionardo the Silver Dragon- is an eleven year old Dragon who was known to be the last of his kind; and the youngest of all- Asin the Black Dragon also known as Kursion’s most beloved Child. They all lived like a family and every day, Kursion was teaching each of the Dragons to control their abilities… each except of Asin. He knows that a Dragon’s abilies cannot be unlocked until the Dragon reaches the year of ten. So this year, Kursion could finally start training Asin.

“ASIN! Come over here, Young Dragon!” An old Dragon’s shout was heard all the way from one of the Destroyed Buildings. “Coming!” A young Black dragon shouted back while hiding a few shiny objects in a hole in the ground and then put a rock above it.
An old dark Green Dragon was standing in a large open zone, surrounded by Destroyed buildings. As soon as he heard someone running, he spoke: “Asin the Black dragon…” then he turned to face the one who has came. “…today is the day when exactly ten years ago I have found you. So now, I am sure that we can begin your training. You are a Black dragon, witch means your Abilities must be based on controlling Darkness. Just like Shade. However, those lights on your tail are pointing on a different solution. Well, we will never know until we will give it a try” Kursion has spoken to the Young Dragon. “I’m ready. Just say the word, old man!” Asin said making a cool face. Kursion says, annoyed by Asin’s behavior: “Very well then... then I want you to close your eyes, empty your mind and focus on something what you feel is burning inside of you. Forget all witch you know, and----“ The dragon was interrupted by someone’s yelling: “Master Kursion! Master Kursion!” A Silver Dragon ran from behind of the Ruins, still shouting: “Master Kursion! We have a BIG problem!” “What is it, Rionardo?” The Old dragon asked. “ It’s Shade. She was token away!” Rio shouted. He looked very worried about Shade. “By who?” But before Rio could answer, Asin said, pointing in to the Sky: “By them!” The Dragons saw four Reptile look alike creatures. They where covered in Black fug. Two of them where holding a Black Dragon by its wings and one of the other two shouted: “Get the other Black dragon!!!” And then quickly flew down, targeting Asin but before they could grab the Black dragoness, a number of trees grew right in front of the Dark creatures, working like a Shield. Then Kursion summoned some Vines to catch the Creatures and pull them away from Asin. But while he was concentrated on these two, the other two used a combination spell and shot an uncountable number of Dark Orbs at Kursion. He was hit by all of them and collapsed on the Fresh Green Grass. “ Master Kursion!” Rio shouted. He got mad, but before he could fly up to attack the Reptile creatures he felt something warm not too far away from him. He looked back and saw Asin in a very weird way. She was standing, eyes closed, and second by second, the six lights on her tail began to shine brighter and spin faster. Then she quickly opened her eyes, unleashing a huge flash of light witch then turned in to millions of lights. Time slew down a bit, as the little lights started flying around and trough the Dark creatures in unimaginably high speeds. After a number of hits the Dark Reptiles where exploding like balloons filed with Black dust. Once both of the Creatures, witch where holding Shade, where destroyed, the Dark Dragon fell down on the ground. Rionardo ran to her and asked: “Are you okay, Shade?” “I’m fine, but I can’t say the same about him” she said, looking at Kursion who lied on the Ground, unconscious. Rio said, approaching the Old dragon: “He doesn’t look good. I don’t think I know how to heal this. Do you?” He asked looking at Shade. She opened her mouth to answer, but before she could, she saw Asin walking to Kursion and placing her front paws on him. She looked like she was possessed by something. Her skin and her eyes where glowing with a Light Blue color and six lights where flying around her in circles. Then her claws started to glow Blue and after a while she removed her paws from Kursion’s body and fell on the ground, loosing her Light Blue shine and the six lights returning to the way they where in the beginning of the day. When she hit the ground, Shade and Rio shouted together: “A-ASIN!”………

To be continued in <Chapter 4: The First Step against Darkness>
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How did I do? Did you guys like it?

Wow! Like it? LOVE IT! 8D

I just learned you need a necklace for that. Thanks to Cynder_fan and Cynder09.

Gee, thanks! ^,^ I've spent almost 3 hours on this... X_X

Yeah, I've just finished reading your conversation on "If dragon's where real" topic.

Beats my time 0__o

I actually talked to Fireflight in person.

In person!? Whoa! You're one lucky person....... I think the Elders are planning to take Asin from me

No, in the Internet that's what I mean.

Why!? Why would they take Asin!?

Because I'm not ready to take care of her...... That's probably the reason..... ._. They've came to me this night in a form of a Dream. They've said that they'll take her for now, untill there will appear a place for her in this world......................... they gave me her on 11th of November..... today is 25th of Nov...... that's like complete 2 weeks, since I've had her...... 2 weeks! Just 2 WEEKS!!! I wonder when will they give her back, again ._.

EDIT: must be going to bed, soon... ._.

Don't cry, Dark_Cynder....

What about me? They'll probably take him/her for me too....

Appear a place in this world....you know this, Dark_Cynder! Until you find your place in this world!

What do you mean, Dragonhope? ='( You're trying to say that, the reason why they're taking her, is because I don't feel myself belong in this world? Or what? <='(

Something like that. Just believe. Believe....

I think I know why they're going to take her............................................ Because......... ._. ............................She wasn't here.................... She was...... a test............. Now I see....... They've made me believe she was here, to see am I ready to have the Real Asin, or not............. That explains why I've got Asin already as a Teenager........... ._. I guess.... I'm not ready, yet......... *Cries*

Must be going now... Bye.... ='( I'll wait for your answer, answer on it......... and go to bed.......... ._.

I know what they're going to do to me now....they're going to test me too...I'm barely half-teen. No! No! No! No no NO!!!!

*looks at Dragonhope's siggy* Believe, Dragonhope.. Believe in the better future =') I'm hoping you will get your dragon, without passing any tests! Okay.... Must be going to bed (06:16 in the morning here...) bye and.... Hope for the best! Test-Asin always said and says: "What ever happens, happens for the best".... So it's for the best that the Elders gave me this test...... It will be for the best and for you, if it'll happen =') Bye... for now.... =')

Bye, Dark_Cynder! Remember, believe!!!

I love the new chapter

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh that is so cool D_C! Best chapter!

Thanks Guys!! ^,^ I've made Chapter 4 like 2 days ago, just because of DS.net being Down all the time, I wasn't beable to post it Dx But now. CHAPTERS 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >8D

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<Chapter 4: The First Step against Darkness>
Asin opened her eyes, finding herself to be lying in her bed, made out of Leaves and Grass. “wha-what happened?” She said looking around, seeing Shade standing near the entrance in to the room. “We are not sure, but Kursion says you where overpowered by something Beyond, something he has felt raging inside of you ever since he found you. He’s guessing it is one of the three forbidden elemental forces. These forces are known as the most powerful and destructive Elements that can only be wielded by special Dragons but mastered only by few.” Then Kursion walks in to the room and asks: “Are you alright, young Dragon?” Asin looked at him and responded: “Yea, I’m fine, pops” The Old dragon looked at Asin annoyed, but yet relived that she still is she. Then he continued: “The three Forgotten elements where found in different times by different breeds of dragons. The Dark element, one of these Elements, was first found ten years ago, when the Great Dark Shadow consumed the world and turned it in to Dead Lands. The Dark Shadow also has corrupted the Dragon, that was suppose to be our hope, the one who would protect the Dragon Realms, using all of the Elements and Abilities possible. Including the three forgotten Elements… Shade here can also Use the Dark Element…. In fact, I was blessed to find three dragons, who could master all of the three forgotten Elements…” Then Rio cuts in to the talk: “Yeah! I own the Celestial Element!” He smiled as if he wanted the others to be jealous of him. “Yes, Dark, Celestial and Light…. the three Forgotten elements…. The Celestial Element was the element that only Silver dragons could use and since Silver dragons was always a rare breed, this Element was know as a Special element. However after the Day of the Darkening, all of the Silver dragons where killed…. I’ve managed to save Rionardo right before his death… since that day, everyone in the Dragon realms thought that this breed was extinct, so they’ve considered the Celestial element….. forgotten….” Kursion finished. “What about the….. Light element?” Asin asked a little more serious then ever. “Awww yes, the element of Pure Holiness… The element, that dragons where trying to find and master for many generations now, but no one has ever seen The Light Element in its true form…. The dragons knew that there must be a Pure element, because where’s there Darkness, there is Light. The first one to bring the news in to the Dragon Realms was a Young dragon, about your age now, Minecoln…. He maybe was just a Time dragon, but he dedicated all his life to find the mystical Light. He thought that this Element can be used by those who can find the True Light of this World…. But he was young and foolish…………… But it’s thanks to him the Dragons have wondered about this. It was about four generations ago, when Minecoln has first told the World about this. Ever since Minecoln’s death, the Dragons came to a solution, that the Light Element will once reveal itself and one of the Dragon predicted, that one day, in the day of pure Chaos and Destruction, a Chosen Dragon will step in to the World, to bring Pure Light in to it…….” Kursion has finally said all that he wanted. “Whoa….” Asin said, surprised. “WHOA!!! Does this mean?......... Aw man…….” “Yes, this might as well mean that you are that Dragon, the Prophesies has spoken about…. And that also mean I cannot teach you to use this ability, because it’s completely unknown for me.” Kursion explained. “I see…” Asin said, getting up from bed. “…In that case, I must learn to use it on my own.” Asin smiled Evilly, yet not thinking about using the Light Element for Evil. “I’ll show that “Dark Shadow” who’s boss around here!” Asin shouted heroically and took off in to the Air. “Asin! WAIT!! You are not ready to face the atmosphere outside this Shield! Asin! ASIN!” Kursion tried to stop her, but she too far away already. Nature has granted her Large Wings and the ability of Fast flight. Even at the age of ten, she was as fast as an Arrow.
Asin flew like the wind and quickly passed through the force field that was keeping the Darkness out of the Xaon Ruins. Though once she did, she felt Cold and Dizzy. There was too much pressure in the Air, she just couldn’t stay up in it. “Ughh!” She said and fell down.
Back at the Ruins Kursion has said to Shade: “She won’t less long out there. You must go and bring her back!” “Right!” Shade quickly answered and took off in to the air; flied as fast possible out of the Ruins. Once she flied out of the Force field, she flew down to find Asin. It seems the Darkness all around didn’t have any effect on Shade. It was known that if to use a certain force against the same force, they would cancel each other out. Shade knew that, that’s why she could freely move in the Darkness, and it would never hurt her. She landed near Asin, seeing her glowing a bit with Light and trying to pull herself away from the Ground, and said to her: “Asin, you have to return, you are not ready to face such a strong Dark power!” But Asin, as if ignoring what Shade said, said, and as every word got out of her mouth, she got up more and more up: “I… Won’t… Give…. IN!!!” And as the last word sounded, a Bright Flash exploded from Asin’s paws and she catapulted from the ground, standing up on her back paws but then falling back on the ground. Though this time, she was standing with no pressure. Free. Shade, looking at the Black dragon with wide eyes, spoken. She looked surprised: “A-asin? Are you o—“Yes, I’m fine” Asin replied, knowing what she would say and looked kind of Evil, as if she knew a secret how to fool the darkness. The remaining light on her body turned in to a Force field. It looked like an Orb. Shade looked at Asin and thought: “A Shield?” Asin then took off in to the Sky and flew away, knowing that it won’t be easy, but she can do it.

To be Continued in <Chapter 5: The “one VS thousand” battle>

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I just looove huge Chapters!

Wow, that was great!

Purrrrrrrr-fect! You gave me an idea for a new chapter on my(private)story!

Private?................... Well anyways, glad to be an assistance! ^,^ And maaan, THANKS ya Guys! ^,^ Especialy Nalemor, even though your Eyes hurt, you still read my story! <= ) Thank you Too bad though, that you are the only ones who read it ._. Well, better then nothing! ^,^

BTW I want to give you guys a hint, Nalemor maybe will even understand exactly what I mean: "This Asin is not my main Asin. This... is her Past."

This Story is actualy Part 1 of Asin's complete Life, and it's not main, that's why I am making everything to progress so fast ^,^"

And one more thing. I can be today all day on the PC, that's why i'll definatly Write more! Even if not today, tomorrow my Bro won't be at home in the first part of the day (untill evening)

Cool! U get 2 stay on!
And AWESOME!!!! I just love this story!

Yaaaaay!

Private? That's my Neopets story. 0__o

Yeah, I love it eather, Cynder16! I have planned SO MUCH for it already X_x Trust me, this story will take FOREVER to completely finish O.o

Did you try writing it on Notepad? You can copy and paste it.

No I mean, that there is WAY to much to write (Tons of Chapters), not that I can't copy or paste it I'm using Microsoft Word to write it, because here I can correct the mistakes easely. That's why there is no mistakes (almost) in my story

Oh! I don't have a code for Microsoft Word that's why I use Notepad.

Oh, well we've once bought the whole Microsoft Office 2003 and we're still using it 8D

Love it!

Thank you ^,^ It's been a while since anyone replied on here ^,^ Too bad I don't have time to write more I don't even have time to come Online on here to often ._.

oh i love new chapters!
plzzzzzzzz continue!

oh and Dragonhope i used to use notepad because i don't have microsoft word but just use Microsoft Works Word Processor its free and it have spelling and grammer check! Check your computer and see if you have it it will be under the file Microsoft Works!

I'll continue, as soon as I have time.... School is taking all of my time away

but today is a sunday!!!!!!!!! lol
oh wait are you doing homework!
i hate homwork and school is taking time away i find it rly hard just to get a min in this site cause of school!

plzzzzzz write more when you can then plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

Even if today is Sunday, my Homework is still not done... =( And ok, I will write as soon as I can

ok thx you!

Smallest Chapter I've ever did!

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<Chapter 5: The “one VS thousand” Battle>
Asin flew pretty long, until she could finally see the Temple. She saw, that a huge number of Dark Creatures where all over the lands. When she flew close enough for the Creatures to see, she landed and prepared for a fight. The Dark creatures sensed someone’s presence and turned to face Asin. They where surprised to see a Dragon, since they thought they where all dead. The Reptile looking Creatures growled and run right for Asin, like bullets. But Asin knew she had an advantage against them. And so she said to herself: “Light and Darkness….” then she looked down and closed her eyes: “…Are complete opposites!” and she, in a blink of an eye, opened her eyes and looked really tricky evil. Her eyes flashed with a Light Blue glow and in front of each Dark Creature exploded a Light and they where thrown away for a few thousand miles. “WHOA!! I knew this attack is strong, but this is ridiculous!” Asin said, looking surprised, with wide eyes. But there was no time to relax, as each of the defeated Creatures where replaced with even more of them. Then all rushed and ambushed the Black dragon. They wanted to attack all at once, but a shout has stopped the attack: “Hold it!” All of the Dark Creatures faced the direction the voice came from and then some of them moved aside, revealing a Massive Dark Purple Dragon. “She’s mine!” Asin looked frightened at the Dragon. She didn’t expect that there will be another dragon, in fact not on her side. The Creatures stepped back, giving room for their Leader’s ten year old servant to do what he wishes. “Do not interfere, my Minions, it is time for him to finally show what a true Dragon is capable of!” And Demonic voice spoke from inside the Temple. “A true Dragon? Yeah right! Well then, “true Dragon”, show me what you’ve got!!!” Asin yelled to the Large Dragon, itching to kick his butt. “Fool! Do you actually think you are any match for me!!?” The Dark Purple Dragon Yelled back. “YAWN!!! Are you gonna keep yapping? Or are we going to get this over with????” Asin Interrupted, showing she was bored. “Then be it! You will die on this very spot!!!” The Dragon roared and started concentrating his attack.

To be Continued in <Chapter 6: The Sacrifice>

oh rly good chapter!
plzzzzzzzzz keep writing more!
oh and yeah it is the shortest chapter you have wrote lol

.... I think I know who this "servant" is

Great chapter.

I can't think of anything

Only C_R and NiOwl would know what I'm talking about (and D_C but... thats obvious )

Oh, okay.

Yeah. Complicated. I know D_C.. I've got a VERY good feeling the servant is who I am thinking him to be.

Thanks guys! ^,^ I thought this chapter is pretty boring, but it seems that you like it and that's a good sign 8D But Nale, I'm pretty sure you're wrong, but no worries, in the next Chapter, all will be revealed! Because the next Chapter is the Finale Chapter in this Part of the Story =) I'll give this bit of Info, there are total of 5 Parts of this story:
"The Beginning" (this part), "The Greatness", "The Main Life", "Artificial Fear" and the Finale of all- "Poisonous Darkness", having even more sadness and difficulties then even this one >8D I've got the WHOLE story thought up already And I've got to say............. the Finale part makes me Cry ='( But that is what I love about stories!!! 8D Major Sadness! Probably because I like to cry over the Characters =)