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~Seven~ *Chapter 8 is up! [CLOSED]
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#51 Posted: 22:17:21 11/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5:

... hardcoreignitor, who is easily recognizable in some unknown way to the others.
"Hmm... But that's 15 letters! Oh, remove the hardcore, then it's 7," weebbby states.
The other voice steps out from the shadows as well, revealing a person who weebbby personally knows. "You!?! But that's impossible as well!"
"Actually, you'd be surprised what happened," she said.
Slambam whispers, "Who is she?"
Weebbby replies, "I think it's better you don't know for now. Let's just say it's a person who I have had quite a few bad experiences with."
"And some good ones," she snaps, overhearing.
"Yeah, about that........................... Nevermind," he says.
"Well then, there happens to be another challenge for you all," she says.
"Another one?!?" Ninpire replies, very worried.
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weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#52 Posted: 02:09:16 12/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Thanks! ^.^ I write these fast, so they might not be that good sometimes.
I think once I really get into my plans, a lot of people will stop liking it... Maybe I should change my plans. smilie
Chapter 6 should be tomorrow.
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#53 Posted: 22:53:34 12/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6:

"And why should we do what you want?" ignitor snaps back.
"Because it's your only chance of survival, and, you may even like the reward you receive," she replies, and gives them some time to think it over.
Weebbby whispers, "I have a feeling this is all a trick, and that the reward will be something that only she wants to happen. When we finish the challenges, run for it, do not accept any other rewards besides freedom."
"Sounds like a plan," slambam replies.
"Ya think? Of course it's a plan. But not a good one at that," ignitor states.
"Why not? I thought it sounded amazing! ^.^" thumper replies.
Eevee88 blurts, "How could a reward lead to bad things?"
"Just trust me on this, as I said, this person is not one to be trusted. Especially not after bringing us here." weebbby replies.
Ninpire Gold Sparx Gems: 2951
#54 Posted: 03:09:05 13/11/2013
I seem so stressed in this story, I must've been drinking......
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#55 Posted: 00:29:09 14/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Of course not. smilie Although, it does seem a little like that I guess...
prextail202 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4039
#56 Posted: 16:44:44 14/11/2013
I dont know why, but i can see myself having a random Kid Icarus fangirl moment in this...
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di ****n molto or whatever I guess
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#57 Posted: 01:17:01 15/11/2013 | Topic Creator
I don't think that fits in my writing style, so that won't happen...
Ninpire Gold Sparx Gems: 2951
#58 Posted: 17:34:52 16/11/2013
/bump
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#59 Posted: 01:26:23 17/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7:

They walk up to her, "We're ready for that next challenge."
"Brilliant!" she exclaims. "So, for this challenge, you must smash this rock hard potato into 50 pieces exactly, and then reassemble it perfectly!"
"Simple," slambam says.
They walk a little ways away, and begin.
"All we have to do is take a pocketknife and slash it, than use the Perfecto Glueso I always carry with me in my pocket. Anyone have a knife?"
"Here," Ninpire says, handing him one.
Slambam cuts it, proves to her that it was in 50 pieces, then uses his glue and puts it back together perfectly. The others watch in amazement as the glue works, completely disappearing after sticking it back together, and leaving no trace. He brings it to her, and she bites it.
"Amazing!" She says, "I didn't even taste anything besides potato."
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#60 Posted: 01:36:04 17/11/2013 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8:

She gives them a series of 3 more challenges, and each time a different one of them solves it.
"2 more left," she says. "In case you haven't realized, each one of you has a strong point in these puzzles, and that is the reason you 7 have been the ones chosen to come here. These puzzles could not be solved by entirely ordinary men and women."
There is murmuring among the 7.
"As you may have also noticed, ignitor and Eevee88 are the ones to not solve challenges yet. I believe they may need to work together on the next one... However, the last challenge will, of course, be the hardest of all, and if you succeed, I know I chose correctly."

Author's note:
This one is not nearly the best chapter, probably the worst I've ever written. However, I promise the next two will be better and longer than this one. Thanks to all my readers! ^.^
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slambam104 Gold Sparx Gems: 2464
#61 Posted: 01:49:50 17/11/2013
Pretty good ^.^
Ninpire Gold Sparx Gems: 2951
#62 Posted: 02:06:34 17/11/2013
Amazing! I didn't even taste anything besides potato.
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#63 Posted: 20:11:29 17/11/2013 | Topic Creator
smilie I just realized how stupid that sounds.
Next chapter will probably be today or tomorrow.
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#64 Posted: 14:21:50 23/11/2013 | Topic Creator
*bump*
Sorry I haven't gotten around to writing more, but I've been sick.
Ninpire Gold Sparx Gems: 2951
#65 Posted: 03:47:09 29/11/2013
Bump. Finish eeeet
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#66 Posted: 16:13:26 29/11/2013 | Topic Creator
I will, probably once I get better.
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#67 Posted: 20:45:42 30/11/2013 | Topic Creator
*bump*
I need an idea for the next challenge.
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#68 Posted: 21:38:19 30/11/2013
Quote: HIR
Quote: weebbby
Quote: HIR
Look at what my flavor text has done. @.@


Hmmm?


Everyone's making darkSpyro fanfics now. <.<;


darkSpyro fanfics have been around for a while

i believe what's to blame is really the darkSpyro "creepypasta"
but EH fanfics are fun
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#69 Posted: 21:40:42 30/11/2013 | Topic Creator
The 2 most majestic Hunters posted on my fanfic! D: I feel so honored. XP
And I never read the creepypasta, whatever that is.
And yes they are.
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#70 Posted: 01:02:21 03/12/2013 | Topic Creator
New chapter tomorrow.

EDIT: Didn't get around to it. I'm sorry. I'll try to get it on the 4th, but no promises.
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NINJAsk11 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1124
#71 Posted: 13:26:03 03/12/2013
ooh cool!
Reimu Yellow Sparx Gems: 1076
#72 Posted: 14:01:51 03/12/2013
6-8 lines isn't really a chapter you know? Maybe more like a short or something. A sketch?
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weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#73 Posted: 22:11:37 03/12/2013 | Topic Creator
^ I'll change the title to short when I release the new one. But I'm not going to edit all my old posts. >.>
Reimu Yellow Sparx Gems: 1076
#74 Posted: 22:17:46 03/12/2013
That's not what I meant. Maybe you could try to go further, take more time and make longer sketches?
weebbby Emerald Sparx Gems: 4220
#75 Posted: 23:19:21 03/12/2013 | Topic Creator
Well, I try to lengthen them out a little already, and I think if I added too much, it would be a lot more boring to read. I did plan on the next one being quite a bit longer though.
Reimu Yellow Sparx Gems: 1076
#76 Posted: 10:44:29 04/12/2013
Ha, you have a point there, if it's too long they won't read it =/
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