darkSpyro

Thanks, but I still take some pity on it for being so small and for the fact it isn't attracting anyones attention... But it is fun, and I enjoy it, so I guess that is what matters most!

well, what if....... i joined in to helpz you? 8D

I dunno, I am doing this story mostly because I get bored real easy, and it gives me something fun to do...But, sure! Why not!

Hi, C_R! Hello Nalemor ^,^

Awesome story, C_R! You brouth a new idea in to the history of Fan-fics on DS.net! ^,^ I wonder what'll happen next *Thinks* Nah, better wait and see the 3rd chapter to know Keep up the good work!

To Nalemor: Damn, if I would have woke up on 2 hours earlier, we would have met Damn!

Thanks, D_C!^.^

NP! ^,^

BTW I made that topic, I told you about earlier in your guestbook If you forgot, then visit the second link in my siggy ^,^

Sorry... Off-topic ._.

Naw, that's fine. I hardly care for of topicness...

I'll check it out. I haven't been Online much, that's why.

Chapter two- Second half

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"I've got you NOW!" Sienza growled, as she pounced on a small bograt feircly. The poor thing didn't stand a chance against Sienza's swift and powerful malee moves, but latley, since the fire had burn't most of her prey's habitats, meat had been scarce. She licked her lips greedliy, and tipped her head back as she plopped herself down and moved the morsel above her hungry self. "Would you mind sharing that?" A deep strong voice called out, starling Sienza, causing her to drop the large rat from her grasp. "Well, I MIGHT have, but you scared it away!" She responded angrily.

But the second she turned to see who the speaker was, her expression and tone changed dramatically. Standing infront of her was a big, HUGE, green-"Dragon!" She whispered slowly. She could feel her heart start pounding quickly and her tough, muscular legs wobble. "I would imagine." He responded sarcastically, as he moved his green body away from the burned brush, and into the bright shinning sun. From what she could see, he was almost full grown and seemed to have gone through something difficult, for she saw scares strewn across his dark scales.

"W-who are you?" Sienza asked. "Why you may know me as Angtor." He said with a smile.

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I'll add more to the second half later! A/N

Oops. It's Angtor always remember there's a N on it.

Fix'd, but it still stinks!

Probablly my worst chapter; I rushed to quickly!

Oh c'mon! Just try your best, C_R.

I know but I could have gone with a better ending! *Goes to edit*

Cynder_Rox I swaer I am not copying you but I was gunna write about a fire beginning in the first place!! I SWEAR IT!! If you don't feel you actaully want me to do this please say so.
DRAGONS!!
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actaully dont worry

Hi! I love the new chap! *dies*