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#51 Posted: 18:53:28 27/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok. Its been ages, yes I know this may be considored a topic bump, but I just wanted to tell you all that Im writing the next chapter now. After seeing a certain scene in DOTD I've gained for ideas! So it should be on in about, half an hour. Also whist I'm writing this I'll be writing my other fanfics to so it might take longer.
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#52 Posted: 19:45:56 27/10/2008
ok, as long as i know you will write.
for a while i fought you stoped doing this fan-fic!
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#53 Posted: 22:34:45 27/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8: Polyxenas Ash
Cynder looked at the glowing eyes in the purple light confused. She bowed her head unsure wheather it was the right thing to do. The voice gruntted. "You see Gaul, true loyalty. A true servant." It said. Cynder looked at Gaul as he looked back at her with a stern look. "But true loyalty can only be proven, not heard of." The voice continued. Cynder looked confused. To large apes walked in carrying a large black Dragon tied onto a long pole. Cynder looked at the Dragon as it hung motionless from the pole. She had seen the Dragon before. It was one of the Dragons from the oposite cell to hers. She always heard them talking about her, whispering when he head was turned, when they thought that she was asleep. She didn't know why but sometimes she thought of them as if they were comforting her in her darkest hours. The two large apes lifted the Dragon up and held it by to chains suspended infront of the large purple beam of light. "This is Polyxena, Cynder. She and all other Dragons are stopping you from true power, so why not make a start? Why not start whist your young?" The voice said. Cynder was worried about what they were asking her to do. The Dragon begna to open her eyes as she looked down at Cynder. She struggled trying to free her arms from the chains. "There is no need to struggle Polyxena..." The voice whispered. The Dragon grinned looking down at the floor. "Malefor..." She whispered. The two eyes in the beam of light narrowed. "That name means nothing to me..." The voice said. Cynder looked confused but worried at the same time. Polyxena looked at Cynder. "No... Cynder no!" She yelled. The voice sniggered. "Go one Cynder... Start now, start with her." To Be Continued... |
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#54 Posted: 23:07:01 27/10/2008
plz continue i like the chapters so far!
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#55 Posted: 02:26:14 29/10/2008
Cool!!!
I love this story!
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#56 Posted: 14:03:30 03/11/2008
I was bored. I forgot most of your stories and I know that cutscene! Er...um...
The Dark Cynder cutscene?
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#57 Posted: 17:42:59 03/11/2008 | Topic Creator
No this has got nothing to do to that. Techincly that didn't actualy happen to her until that cutscene.
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#58 Posted: 23:11:38 03/11/2008
*slams* Wait a sec...wait a minute....shucks! I didn't even beated it!!!!!!!
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#59 Posted: 13:19:30 04/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Hu? I don't get you...
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#60 Posted: 00:30:19 05/11/2008
I didn't beated the game so I don't know what's the cutscene.
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#61 Posted: 16:52:27 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9: The Darkness Of Cynder
Cynder was confused. She didn't know what to do. She didn't know why the Dark Master wanted her to kill this Dragon but somehow she recognised the Dragon as she hung from the chains. Cynder knew there was something familiar about her but she didn't know what. It was like she knew that there was something in her mind but she couldn't find it no matter what she did. "Do it..." The voice yelled to Cynder. She was worried, she didn't know what to do and she definitly didn't want to make her master angry. She closed her eyes and lowered her head in fear. She began to shake more nerviously than ever. 'I don't understand! What does he want me to do!' She thought to herslef. She opened her eyes again and found herslef in a large black room. 'He wants you to kill her Cynder... He wants the purple Dragon to be alone, to always be alone. With no one to run to... He wants the purple Dragon to feel like you...' A voice echoed. Cynder shook her head and found herslef back to where she was. She shook her head. 'But I can't kill! I won't!' She thought to herself. 'Oh, but you will Cynder... You will kill...' The voice echoed again. Cynder shook her head. She began to grow worried. 'She will die Cynder... And I will live!' The voice yelled and as it did Cynder felt the rage and anger that she had never felt before. Her eyes glowed a bright white light and her scales had turned a pitch black. She closed her eyes as she began to hover above the ground. She opened her eyes and has she did the voice coming from the purple beam of light made a triumphant laugh. "Excelent... Now, do what you were born to do..." The voice said. Cynder nodded as she took one deep breath and suddenly a large beam of purple lightning came from Cynders mouth and hit edsactly on the large Dragon infront of her. To Be Continued... |
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#62 Posted: 16:56:01 30/11/2008
Okay, now I officaly know you got the alone part on DotD. Which I was gonna do
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#63 Posted: 16:58:14 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OMG! How did you discover But it actualy makes sence if you think about it because in DOTD he says that Spyro is alone, and this makes him alone
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#64 Posted: 16:58:44 30/11/2008
Easy. I have DotD and cried on that part.
''You were always alone.''
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#65 Posted: 16:59:51 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I didn't cry, and I've got DOTD now anyway.
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#66 Posted: 17:01:23 30/11/2008
I still can't believe that I did a drama part on my story. I AM A CYNDER KILLER
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#67 Posted: 17:03:50 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
WAIT! WHAT! YOU DID WHAT! (When I did that in Death Of The Dragon I had to bring her back )
Edit: Also, I got some good news. Im also writing for my other fanfics too! |
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#68 Posted: 17:19:24 30/11/2008
I BROKE HER UP TO PEICES!!!
BREAKING NEWS: CYNDER IS NOW THE ENEMY OF SPYRO!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#69 Posted: 17:31:40 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Dragonhope
What... Like... Blown up? Like smashed to peices? Also what story is this in? |
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#70 Posted: 17:32:41 30/11/2008
Black Winds. Read the prelude and then first chapter....if you dare
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#71 Posted: 17:36:01 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, lol
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#72 Posted: 06:59:32 01/12/2008
It's really interesting! Please write more!
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#73 Posted: 18:59:42 07/12/2008
yeah write more plzzzzzzzzzz!
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#74 Posted: 21:52:28 07/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Im gonna write ASAP. Not now thoe, I've got to go in like 10 minutes...
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#75 Posted: 23:23:44 07/12/2008
ok i'll wait then!
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#76 Posted: 06:26:21 09/12/2008
when's he gonna write again do YOU know spyrorockforeva???
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#77 Posted: 18:15:00 09/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok, what I did was I wrote the best I could last night and then when I had to go to bed I coppied it onto a Word Document and now Im gonna coppy it to this site and continue it again.
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#78 Posted: 18:26:32 09/12/2008
oh ok!
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#79 Posted: 20:02:47 09/12/2008 | Topic Creator
HERE IT IS! The first see of Cynders secret ability... Telepathy. This time she uses this to contact Spyro, from the future... But can Cynder beleve that this vision realy is Spyro...
Or just a trick by Convexity... Chapter 10: Black Soul Cynder landed on the stone hard floor of her cell with a thud as Theron pushed her in. She quickly cheacked her scales in fear. She didn't know what had come over her, but all she did know was that she didn't like it. She could't trust herself, she didn't know when its would return. She shivered in fear as she began to cry. Her tears made a small puddle on the grey floor. Suddenly she spotted a strange glow from behind her. She trurned her head and standing there was a small purple Dragon with a faint purple glow around it. "You..." Cynder whispered. "Your the one who they talk about arn't you!" She yelled in anger. The Dragon shook its head. "No, you don't have to do what they say Cynder. You can stop this! You can chose what you want to do." They said to her. She shook her head. "No, my master says I must! I can't let him down!" She yelled in return to him. Suddenly the purple glow turned into a dark cloud and the Dragon's scales itself had turned pitch black. Its bright white eyes gleemed at her as she stood in her cell. "Then so be it!" The Dragon yelled, its voice echoing over the room. Cynder covered her eyes with both of her wings. "No! No!" She yelled but when she took her wings off her eyes the Dragon was gone. There was not a trace of anything there just the stone wall. Cynder was worried, if this was the Dragon that her Master was talking about then who knows what he could do, what he could be doing. Cynder shook her head as she closed her eyes and rested her head on the stone floor. To Be Continued... |
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#80 Posted: 05:58:11 10/12/2008
cool (post 2 short)
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#81 Posted: 00:02:23 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
By the way, Gaul is the ape king so Cynder as to call him 'Your Majesty'.
Chapter 11: Pure Shadiw Cynder hung from her chains not paying attention to what Gaul was saying to her "Cynder!" He yelled. She suddenly looked up at him as he gave her a stern look. "You master won't be pleased if he hears you've been sleeping." Gaul said as he walked closer to her. She nodded. "Yes your majesty." Cynder replyed. Gaul nodded as he turned around as he put down his two swords. Cynder was confused. "Why are you stopping?" She asked. Gaul turned around to face Cynder. "We will stop when I have said! Your master has given me new orders as our previous tecnique isn't working as well as once thought." Gaul said. Cynder didn't like the sound of this. She began to shake in fear as Gaul walked up to her. He placed a pair of silver gloves on both of his hands. "Do not struggle Cynder, it will only hurt more..." Gaul said and as he did he pointed towards Cynder with one of his fingers. Cynder began to scream in pain as she felt a dark energy flow towards her from his gloves. Cynder began to feel a strange sensation in her tail, neck and legs. "What! What are doing!" She yelled in pain. Gaul began to grin as he watched Cynder. He suddenly stopped as Cynder hung from the chains weakened. "Performing the same proccess as previously only faster and more painfull. Which is a price your master is willing to pay." Gaul said. Cynder sighed as she looked back up at Gaul. She shook her head. "You... You can't do that!" She yelled. Gaul began to laugh. "Just watch me!" He yelled. He pointed to her again as the energy flowed towards her and she once again screamed in pain. It had lasted for hour but for Cynder it felt like and eternity, like she had been born with the same pain and lived with it her whole life. To Be Continued... |
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#82 Posted: 01:26:18 02/01/2009
Wicked awesome man
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#83 Posted: 02:35:00 02/01/2009
good wright more.
p.s. that small purple dragon that Cynder saw was Spyro wasnt it? |
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#84 Posted: 19:45:59 02/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: torok
Actualy it wasn't realy the proper Spyro, it was Convexity tricking Cynder into thinking that Spyro was evil, but basicly it was meant to be Spyro. |
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#85 Posted: 21:52:32 02/01/2009
ok right more
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#86 Posted: 22:01:27 02/01/2009
yeah write more!
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#87 Posted: 23:45:45 02/01/2009
WRITE MORE don't make me call Sniff
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#88 Posted: 02:07:21 21/03/2009
Whose sniff?
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#89 Posted: 07:01:46 21/03/2009
From TLoS:TEN on of teh parrots.
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#90 Posted: 01:54:14 24/03/2009
oh yeh that one sparx punch.....LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.Sorry it's just funny thinking about it.
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