darkSpyro

I'd post some of my characters here, but most of my characters are based in the TLoS world, so they're sort of FC's.

Oh, I know that! It's just that OC's are higher on the list (:

Bomp.

I have an OC i would like feedback on, mainly when it comes to design and strengths. personality and backstories im still working on, mostly about how to wright it.

name: Heiwa
gender: female
age: 14 (human)
species: wolf, tiger, dragon hybrid
appearance: http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs7...nts-d6946cy.jpg
powers: fire manipulation, acute hearing
strengths: skilled flier, skilled at close combat, well known for her fast and precise blows, wide knowledge of creatures, uses the environment and the attacker to her advantage, light and manoeuvrable, great physical strength and speed, intelligent
weaknesses: absolutely hates loud, high pitched sounds, and bright light in her eyes, to the point of keeping her paralysed, low stamina and defence, if a battle goes on for a very long time she eventually begins to feel heavy and struggles to keep herself flexible, stress will make her go confused, leading to not be able think properly, being light she is easily thrown about, there needs to be a supply of oxygen in order to use her fire abilities, she fights better in open areas more than closed in areas, her loyalties can easily split, short tempered, is not skilled at verbal attacking or manipulation, has one kill point directly under her jaw

i would like some feedback please