i wonder where they could be? i'll just continue anyways!
''a death hound!'' said tanzanite. ''they are everywhere!'' warned blueshadow. the death hounds had then formed a circle around them, tanzanite and blueshadow took out their sords and slashed them all, except for the alpha male. ''aw, is blueshadow in love with a warrior?'' hissed the death hound. ''leave him!'' demanded blueshadow. ''okay, then i guess i'll just...GO!'' hissed the death hound ready to attack tanzanite. ''NO TANZANITE!'' yelled blueshadow attacking the death hound. ''blueshadow!'' cried tanzanite. ''its better my life then yours!'' said blueshadow trying to kill the hound. ''but i love....you.'' whispered tanzanite. finally blueshadow took the final stab and killed the death hound, she was then covered in wounds, and had bled in some spots. blueshadow fell to the ground. ''don't worry blueshadow, i'll help you!'' said tanzanite pulling her back into the cave. ''all i need is some ingredients to make a medicine for her.'' said tanzanite searching for plants. ''maybe i could help!'' said a strange voice. ''who's there!'' yelled tanzanite. ''show yourself!'' demanded tanzanite. ''come out or i'll go for you!'' yelled tanzanite. ''my name is perinale.'' said the pinkish colored dragon. ''can you help me?'' said tanzanite. ''yes and what do you need help with?'' asked perinale. ''blueshadow is hurt and im afraid she'll...'' paused tanzanite begining to cry. ''come! i'll help!'' said perinale.
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#52 Posted: 18:17:56 17/08/2008
AWESOME!!! Excellent, as always.
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#53 Posted: 20:37:43 18/08/2008 | Topic Creator
here is the next part! sorry for the delay!
perinale and tanzanite finally got what they needed and healed blueshadow. ''tanzanite... what happened?'' asked blueshadow waking up. ''perinale and i saved you!'' said tanzanite. ''thank you guys!'' said blueshadow trying to get up. ''here blueshadow.'' said tanzanite helping her up. ''its time for me to go.'' said perinale leaving the cave. blueshadow and tanzanite sat back down. ''there is something that i want to tell you blueshadow.'' said tanzanite laying his head down. ''tell me! what is it?'' asked blueshadow laying her head down as well. ''i...i love...'' paused tanzanite. ''i know what you were going to say, tanzanite.'' said blueshadow. ''you..you did?'' asked tanzanite with a blank look. ''yes, you were going to say i love you!'' said blueshadow putting her head under his chest. ''i love you too!'' said tanzanite scooting his body closer to her. later at the fortress... ''WHY HASN'T SHE SHOWN UP!?! IT HAS BEEN DAYS NOW.'' raged malefor cracking the ground underneath of him. ''do you think during the storm she died?'' asked demonshadow limping into the room. ''possibly demonshadow.'' said malefor suddenly shedding a tear. ''malefor are you, crying?'' asked demonshadow staring at him. ''what? no! masters don't cry!'' said malefor trying to keep his image. ''okay malefor.'' said demonshadow leaving the room with a blank look. ''oh blueshadow.. im sorry for the way i had been treating you.'' said malefor walking out to the balcony. ''malefor! i found all the orbs!'' yelled darknest carrying all of them. ''you do? let me see them!'' demanded malefor. ''here they are.'' said darknest. ''tonight we free darkuss!'' said malefor clenching his fist.
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#54 Posted: 00:38:23 20/08/2008
I'm reading it!
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#55 Posted: 03:08:19 20/08/2008
IM HEREZ!
wooooowww, I never expected that from Malefor!
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#56 Posted: 22:54:03 20/08/2008 | Topic Creator
here is the next part! plus that dawn of the dragon trailer is cool!
''its best if we go now.'' said blueshadow expanding her wings. ''NO! we are in this together!'' said tanzanite running out of the cave. ''we are now in a world of darkness. i can't let you get hurt!'' worried tanzanite lowering his head. ''your right! lets go!'' said blueshadow flying off with tanzanite. at the portal... ''now master, its time for you to return!'' said malefor placing all the items in the slots. soon the orbs started to light up with pulsing red light, the portal began to open up. ''master.'' said malefor, darknest, demonshadow bowing down. ''i have returned!'' said darkuss in relief. ''so where is blueshadow?'' asked darkuss lifting his eyebrow. ''she died during the storm. master.'' said demonshadow limping towards him. ''she died? never mind. tonight the war begins!'' said darkuss. when the war started a cheetah named hunter was sent out by sarden to look for sapphire. ''it begins.'' thought hunter taking out his bow and arrow. hunter shot at one of the creatures and killed them. ''i must go find someone who can help.'' said hunter jumping from cliff to cliff. ''what is going on down there?'' asked blueshadow watching the battle. ''we must stop this!'' said tanzanite putting on his armer along with blueshadow. ''lets do it!'' said blueshadow gliding through the air shooting out blue fire. tanzanite flew down to the ground and took out his sord. ''i'll handle them!'' said tanzanite.
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#57 Posted: 22:56:27 20/08/2008
YAY!!!!!!!!! DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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#58 Posted: 00:18:07 21/08/2008 | Topic Creator
heres the next part! enjoy!
suddenly a huge black figure appeared and grabbed tanzanite. ''who are you?'' asked tanzanite trying to get out of the claws. just then a huge purple figure came out and grabbed blueshadow as well. ''malefor? what are you doing?'' asked blueshadow. ''taking you back to the fortress!'' said malefor turning his head. blueshadow opened her mouth in shock looking into malefor's eyes. when they had finally reached to the fortress the big black figure then revealed himself. ''darkuss.'' said tanzanite changing his shocked face to an angry face. ''yes you worthless purple dragon. and i heard you were the leader of your army. what fool would let him lead?'' laughed darkuss walking around in a circle. ''let him go!'' said blueshadow all chained up. ''please master! leave him!'' said blueshadow suddenly crying. ''take him to the cell! guards make sure you starve him!'' demanded darkuss. ''no tanzanite!'' said blueshadow crying really hard. ''YOU! its time for you to return to your duties!'' said darkuss sitting down in his chair. ''i thought you were dead! but instead you had chosen a life with a dragon who is against us?!?'' yelled malefor. ''he's not against us! its you who are against him!'' yelled blueshadow trying to break the chains.
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#59 Posted: 00:24:14 21/08/2008
Great choce of WORDS FROM BLUESHADOW! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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#60 Posted: 01:00:38 21/08/2008
I can give you a great fanfic of one of your characters. I'm secretly doing fanfic requests but I can't because I'm planning on a second Corruption fanfic.
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#61 Posted: 01:01:50 21/08/2008 | Topic Creator
heres the next part! enjoyz!
as the days went by, tanzanite grew weaker and weaker. blueshadow sneeked into the room while darkuss and the masters were watching the war. ''blueshadow... is that.. you?'' asked tanzanite in a weak voice. ''yes its me. here i brought you some food.'' said blueshadow pushing the plate up to his face. ''blueshadow... im so... weak.'' said tanzanite trying to get up. ''but if i go i just want you to know this... i will always love you.'' said tanzanite putting his head through the bars. blueshadow and tanzanite's lips came closer and closer until they finally kissed. ''you are a real friend and a true leader.'' said blueshadow giving him some water. ''only you could end this war.'' said tanzanite putting his paw on her shoulder. ''NO! we are in this together. like you told me!'' said blueshadow. '' but if im going to fight, first i have to heal.'' said tanzanite ina weak voice again. ''BLUESHADOW! GET OUT HERE!'' demanded demonshadow. blueshadow lefted the room and demonshadow shape-shifted into tanzanite. ''tanzanite! how did you recover so fast? and how come you don't have that scar?'' asked blueshadow. ''i just.... um healed.'' said demonshadow with an evil grin.
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#62 Posted: 01:15:43 21/08/2008
NOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor blueshadow! ((((
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#63 Posted: 01:45:27 21/08/2008 | Topic Creator
heres the next part! p.s if you want you can post blueshadow and tanzanite!
''so tanzanite you ready to end this?'' asked blueshadow expanding her wings. ''yah lets end this!'' said demonshadow expanding his wings as well. they both then started to fly but suddenly tanzanite attacked blueshadow. ''tanzanite! what are you doing? i thought we were in this together!'' said blueshadow tossed to the ground on her stomach. ''you fool! you actually belived that we were in this with eachother!?!'' laughed demonshadow watching her get up. blueshadow and tanzanite began to fought, blueshadow pushed tanzanite against a rock and smashed him to the ground. ''i knew she was evil!'' said maleff proving his point. ''i don't think that's the real tanzanite.'' said hunter shooting at the attacking creature. ''well, how would you know?'' asked maleff lifting his eyebrow. ''because he has that scar on his left eye! and that one doesn't!'' said hunter shooting his arrows. ''then i guess she's helping us!'' said maleff. ''but who is that?'' asked maleff with a blank look. ''i don't know. but he's wearing a purple crystal around his neck.'' said hunter. ''why have you turned against me?'' demanded blueshadow. ''because he's not me!'' yelled the real tanzanite tossing him to the ground. ''tanzanite!'' said blueshadow hugging him with a sweet smile. ''one who is weak becomes strong with light!'' said tanzanite in a proud voice. ''you fools!'' said demonshadow changing back to normal. ''you! why demonshadow?'' asked blueshadow. ''because i was on to you!'' said demonshadow beginning to laugh. ''leave her alone! you might of gave me this scar but you can't hurt me!'' said tanzanite.
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#64 Posted: 01:50:08 21/08/2008
YAY! i'll post the dragons
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#65 Posted: 01:50:23 21/08/2008
You actually had Hunter on your story? Strange...
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#66 Posted: 01:50:56 21/08/2008
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#67 Posted: 21:20:39 21/08/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks axel! here is the next part!
''ha! what do you mean by that?!?'' laughed demonshadow. ''when i said that i met this!'' said tanzanite doing a electric furry. one of the lighting bolts had shocked demonshadow as he was ready to shape-shift. ''you whelpling! you think you can hurt me with one of your bolts! i think not.'' said demonshadow shape-shifting into terroc the earth guardian. ''leave her!'' demanded tanzanite taking out his sord. ''fool!'' said demonshadow shape-shifting into a lava golem. ''he's too big!'' said blueshadow trying to destroy his leg. ''the only way to destroy a golem is to...'' paused tanzanite as he saw demonshadow shooting flames from his body. ''there will be blood you filthy warrior!'' said demonshadow trying to kill tanzanite. soon tanzanite's wings were left with tors, his body was all scratched up and his crest had been burned in some spots. ''look at your hero now!'' said demonshadow throwing his body to the ground. ''our leader is down!'' yelled hunter running towards him. ''wait hunter! maybe i could heal him!'' said blueshadow walking up to him. ''but how?'' asked hunter. ''cause when i was healed a special kind of juice gave me this power!'' said blueshadow. as she put her paw on his chest tanzanite no longer had tors ,scratches, and a burnt crest. all was healed except for the scar on his left eye. ''thank you blueshadow! now lets finish him!'' said tanzanite expanding his wings. ''bring it!'' said blueshadow shooting out blue fire balls in the air. ''good luck, young warriors.'' said hunter watching them attack demonshadow. ''grrrr!'' growled malefor.
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#68 Posted: 04:25:28 22/08/2008
THIS IS UBER AWESUMH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#69 Posted: 20:49:04 25/08/2008
Aren't you gonna do more?
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#70 Posted: 21:02:17 25/08/2008 | Topic Creator
so sorry! i had a little delay! here it is!
''blueshadow aim for his legs!'' said tanzanite in a strong voice. ''got it!'' said blueshadow gliding down to the leg. blueshadow began scraping her horns against his leg, but demonshadow swiped her away. ''are you trying to turn against us blueshadow?!?'' asked demonshadow making a fist. ''im only doing whats right!'' said blueshadow pushing herself back up. demonshadow returned back to normal but he grabbed blueshadow and tanzanite, yet he took them to the fortress where darkuss was waiting. ''let us go you filthy monster!'' said blueshadow trying to open up his claw. ''im doing darkuss's orders!'' growled demonshadow. ''you have them again?'' asked darkuss in a demanding voice. ''take the boy to the meeting room and chain him up! blueshadow will go in the same room as well! i have a little suprise for them!'' said darkuss slowly starting an evil grin. meanwhile in the room... ''see this blueshadow? that is the sight of war. we could end this if you follow your orders and kill off those warriors!'' said malefor pulling her face to his face with his claw. ''no! i won't!'' said blueshadow pulling her face away. ''everything will be better for you!'' said malefor walking up to her.
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#71 Posted: 21:03:52 25/08/2008
Yay! There's more!
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#72 Posted: 21:59:32 25/08/2008
YESSSSS FINALLY! *explodes*
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#73 Posted: 21:38:04 26/08/2008
mooooorrrrrreeeeeeeeee!
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#74 Posted: 21:38:50 26/08/2008
YEAH CAN'T WAIT!
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#75 Posted: 21:57:17 26/08/2008 | Topic Creator
next part! hope you like it!
''what do you mean malefor?'' asked blueshadow turning around. ''your boyfriend won't get killed if you return back to your duties!'' said malefor with an evil grin. ''no! i won't!'' said blueshadow trying to leave the room. ''then i guess you'd left me no choice.'' said malefor pulling tanzanite with the chains. ''let him go! i order you!'' demanded blueshadow starting to growl. ''i wouldn't have said that blueshadow!'' said malefor putting a sord up to tanzanite's neck. ''malefor! release him!'' said darkuss walking out of the shadows. ''yes master.'' said malefor dropping tanzanite to the ground. ''so tanzanite what is it like being a leader im sure they'll all would like to find out you were dead!'' laughed darkuss. ''now it is time for you to die!'' said darkuss forming a dark aura with his paw. tanzanite got shot by the aura and blueshadow took him out. ''wha..what are you doing?'' asked tanzanite. ''we are ending this war! it has gone long enough!'' said blueshadow taking him to a cliff. ''EVERYONE LISTEN!'' yelled tanzanite trying to get their attention. ''what is it?'' asked a panther ready to stab a monster. ''our leader is with that wretched beast!'' said a dragoness. ''violence is not the answer! blueshadow and i will lead you!'' yelled tanzanite. ''let her lead along side of you?'' asked a dragon. ''yes! she is a good fighter and leader!'' yelled tanzanite. ''we want everyone to move to the enchanted forest! we'll handle darkuss and his army!'' demanded blueshadow. ''hunter take them to the further grounds! we'll stay here!'' said tanzanite. ''well you heard them! come on!'' said hunter shooting one more monster.
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#76 Posted: 22:00:19 26/08/2008
YAY! Finally!
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#77 Posted: 22:27:14 26/08/2008
JEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDDDD
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#78 Posted: 04:10:27 27/08/2008
mmmmoooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#79 Posted: 21:07:48 27/08/2008 | Topic Creator
here it isss! so sorry! i was busy but anyways enjoy!
''so now what are we gonna do?'' worried tanzanite. ''i have an idea!'' said blueshadow touching tanzanite's shoulder. meanwhile back at the fortress... ''so blueshadow you decided to come back!'' said malefor walking slowly into the room. ''i want to be corrupted!'' asked blueshadow. ''that's a first! welcome back blueshadow.'' said malefor with an evil grin. as malefor was taken her to the corruption room, malefor then chained her up. ''the corruption begins!'' yelled malefor shooting purple lighting bolts at her. her teenage body grew bigger, she became older until she became an adult. ''tanzanite also wants to be corrupted too!'' said blueshadow pushing him in the room. malefor did the same thing and also changed tanzanite into an adult. ''now go!'' demanded malefor. ''a leader turning against his own warriors.'' laughed demonshadow walking in. blueshadow flew down to the same cliff and started to speak. ''you fools listen! the warriors are gone you all won!'' yelled blueshadow in fake victory. after the speech blueshadow and tanzanite flew down and started to kill the dark army. ''there is way too many! first lets return back to normal.'' said tanzanite returning back to himself along with blueshadow. ''good idea!'' said blueshadow.
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#80 Posted: 21:09:22 27/08/2008
Cool! You finally made more.
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#81 Posted: 22:02:45 28/08/2008 | Topic Creator
next part. again another delay but... oh well. enjoy!
''see that canon over there?'' said blueshadow lifting up her eyebrow. ''yah why?'' asked tanzanite. ''we can probably use it to hold them off. but i can't find any bombs.'' said blueshadow searching around the canon. ''why not use earth bombs?'' asked tanzanite. ''but i don't breath earth.'' said blueshadow. ''but i can.'' said tanzanite powering up his ball. ''there is another spare canon too. you can use fear or bluefire.'' said tanzanite putting his earthball into the canon. ''i'll try to mix up the elements.'' said blueshadow beginning to power a ball. ''now you ready to fire?!?'' asked tanzanite putting his paws on the canon. ''NOW!'' yelled blueshadow. the earthbomb killed 25 creatures while the fearfirebomb killed 27. ''wait! why not mix our elements that we'd had mastered?'' asked blueshadow. ''i'll mix metal with fire!'' said tanzanite. ''then i'll mix fear with shadow!'' said blueshadow in a challeging voice. ''lets make this a game. whoever kills the most monsters wins!'' said tanzanite lifting his eyebrow and smiling. ''ready...set....GO!!!!'' yelled blueshadow shooting her first canon. later... ''oh you know im winning!'' bragged blueshadow. ''in your dreams!'' bragged tanzanite. finally they took their final shot. it was a tie! ''wow! then i guess that means that we're both really good.'' said tanzanite. ''yah!'' laughed blueshadow.
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#82 Posted: 02:19:13 29/08/2008
xD WHOOOO@
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#83 Posted: 03:07:20 31/08/2008
Look what I did with Blueshadow!
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#84 Posted: 03:09:00 31/08/2008 | Topic Creator
she looks wicked!
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#85 Posted: 03:10:09 31/08/2008
I'm working on Tanzanite right now!
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#86 Posted: 03:15:48 31/08/2008
Sorry for double posting but here is Tanzanite!
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#87 Posted: 23:28:51 31/08/2008 | Topic Creator
cool! when i have the time i'll do more parts!
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#88 Posted: 04:18:07 01/09/2008
I need more...
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#89 Posted: 00:15:43 02/09/2008 | Topic Creator
sooo sorry! here is the next part!
suddenly the scar on tanzanite's left eye started to have a strange sting. ''i... i feel...'' paused tanzanite falling to the ground. ''yah me...too..'' paused blueshadow fainting as well. the 2 dragons had both fainted into a sleep. they were both taken to the fortress. ''come my daughter, blackfire. i like to welcome you back.'' said darkuss swishing his tail around. ''thank you father.'' said blackfire suddenly giving an evil grin. ''so did you find anything?'' asked darkuss. ''well father, it appears i have found 2 dragons in the battle fields near the canons.'' said blackfire placing them to the ground. ''you have proven yourself to be one of us daughter. im very surprised.'' said darkuss with an evil grin. ''what shall i do with them father?'' asked blackfire. ''put them both in the cells and keep them seperated.after all they do love each other.'' said darkuss. ''yes father.'' said blackfire taking them to the cells. ''wait daughter! before you go, how would you like to be my adviser?'' asked darkuss. ''i'd love to father!'' said blackfire turning her head. ''if i die, you will become the next master.'' said darkuss placing his paw on the arm of the chair.
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#90 Posted: 21:02:43 02/09/2008 | Topic Creator
anyone here?
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#91 Posted: 00:42:28 03/09/2008
I'm here!
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#92 Posted: 19:57:14 03/09/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks dragonhope! enjoy! blackfire is a dragoness!
''huh? where...where am i?!?'' asked blueshadow waking up. ''tanzanite wake up!!!'' yelled blueshadow. ''wha...what?'' asked tanzanite. ''we are in a cell. my own master. he must think im a traitor.'' said blueshadow in a upset voice. ''all he cares about is power and darkness! don't worry blueshadow. you have me.'' said tanzanite trying to cheer her up. ''good to see you two get comfy, in your own cells!'' laughed blackfire. ''oh! and what's this? my father's own adviser in filthy old cell? pathetic!'' laughed blackfire staring at the cell that blueshadow was in. ''come on blackfire! let me out!!!!'' demanded blueshadow. ''and who is this? a warrior? wait your the leader who is trying to overthrow my dad!'' growled blackfire. ''and you must be his daughter?'' smerked tanzanite. ''that's right. i was the chosen one in my family, my other siblings we're weak!'' laughed blackfire again. ''so you were darkuss's daughter!'' said blueshadow in shock. ''must be hard to stay away from your loved one.'' said blackfire looking at tanzanite. ''have you ever loved someone?'' asked blueshadow running up to the bars. blackfire paused as she was leaving the room.
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#93 Posted: 22:58:08 03/09/2008
I really need more!
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#94 Posted: 22:01:00 05/09/2008 | Topic Creator
wowz! of course! you might hear something in here very... enjoy!
''NO!!!!'' growled blackfire charging towards blueshadow's cell. ''I ONLY CARE ABOUT POWER! THE WEAK ONES ARE THE ONES WHO LOVE!!!'' blackfire growled once more putting her face to blueshadow's. ''you know blueshadow, my father did choose you to be the next master.'' lied blackfire suddenly putting a grin on her face. ''the masters are speaking such matters already?'' said blueshadow in shock. ''yes in fact they say...er said to me that they were thinking of putting you in my father's place.'' continued bvlackfire opening her cell door and chaining up tanzanite. ''can you belive they would choose you, rather then their own daughter.'' growled blackfire. ''SHE'S LYING!'' yelled tanzanite. ''now it is time for you to....DIE!'' yelled blackfire. blueshadow and blackfire began to form a circle, and went into a attack mode.
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#95 Posted: 22:09:41 05/09/2008
Oh no! Poor Blueshadow!
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#96 Posted: 22:40:07 05/09/2008 | Topic Creator
in that chapter it kinda sounds like the black blood alliance! enjoyz!
suddenly blackfire started to grin as she was ready to lounge at blueshadow. ''im sure you wouldn't mind if i told my father your dead!'' laughed blackfire. ''GRRRR!'' blueshadow growled. the two dragonesses looked at each other in a way like if they we're the only two there. then blackfire lounged while blueshadow wasn't looking. blackfire scratched her claws across blueshadow's face leaving blood. blueshadow began to attack as well. ''you fool! im just as powerful as my father. im sure my siblings blackuss, storm, kiona and shade wouldn't mind seeing this.'' said blackfire slashing her violent tail at blueshadow. ''what a bruet you are!'' said blackfire continuing to damage blueshadow. blackfire grabbed blueshadow behind her neck and tost her against the wall. the other dragons and dragonesses in the cells were amazed of how strong she was. ''you....your the one who's...er...weak!'' said blueshadow pushing herself up. ''WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME NAVE?!?'' yelled blackfire clenching her teeth together. ''she is no nave!!!'' answered tanzanite trying to destroy the chains. tanzanite noticed how bloody and scratched up blueshadow was. ''maybe a dragon or dragoness in one of the cells can help me. blackfire manage to escape putting blueshadow and tanzanite back into their cells. ''argh!'' groaned tanzanite trying to come up with a escape plan.
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#97 Posted: 22:42:18 05/09/2008
Wohoo! Finally!
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#98 Posted: 20:38:44 11/09/2008 | Topic Creator
heres the next part! im adding a guest character into it!
''cr*p!!'' mumbled tanzanite to himself. ''hey! psst! hello!'' whispered a strange voice in one of the cells trying to get tanzanite's attention. ''what do you want?'' asked tanzanite with a confused look on his face. ''im nalemor. i see you got captured too.'' said nalemor placing his head between the cold medal bars. ''yah i know. im trying to escape but they locked up the place pretty good and.... blueshadow she's hurt.'' said tanzanite in an upset voice. ''oh that's a shame... wait! aren't you the leader of the golden warriors?'' asked nalemor killing a rat. ''i was.'' mumbled tanzanite. ''i heard a rumor about a rare breed of dragon that can heal the ones who are near death.'' said nalemor trying to flame the bars with his shadow breath. ''yes but.. we are stuck in these d*mned cells!'' said tanzanite trying to break the wall with his shoulder. ''hmm. maybe tonight we can find a way to break out of here!'' said nalemor in an excited voice. ''okay good! but we must do it when blackfire isn't around!'' said tanzanite running up to the bars.
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#99 Posted: 22:39:36 11/09/2008
you used me 8D *hugz* TANKUUUUUUUUU x]]
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#100 Posted: 02:27:58 23/09/2008 | Topic Creator
guys i promise i'll try to do the next parts when i have the time!
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