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#51 Posted: 13:20:55 06/08/2012
How did you fit that!
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#52 Posted: 13:22:45 06/08/2012 | Topic Creator
just type y81y95 without the y's. It lets you post under 5 characters.
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#53 Posted: 13:24:33 06/08/2012 | Topic Creator
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#54 Posted: 13:29:41 06/08/2012
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#55 Posted: 11:17:24 09/08/2012
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#56 Posted: 12:09:18 09/08/2012 | Topic Creator
It used to be a code for a blank post. Dark fixed it so it shows up as dots now.
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#57 Posted: 22:59:50 09/08/2012
Can you, put a chapter up?
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#58 Posted: 23:46:37 09/08/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter Δ - Arrival
Dark, gray clouds filled the skies of St. Louis. The arch stood boldly just like any other day aside from the fact that it was emanating bright white light. This, of course, was an indicator of dimensional travel. Suddenly two forms shot out from underneath the arch with a lound crack sound. This unintentionally caught the attention of everyone within 1000 feet though. Immediately heads began to turn towards the sound and turned to panic as people began to notice the two figures that had arrived. The two figures, whom you should recognize, hovered 500 feet above the city, analyzing their surroundings. Malefor quitely said to Tessaractor "I have a promise to keep", "you'll have to deal with this", he gestured to the city, "alone." Malefor flew off without giving his companion a chance to respond. Tessaractor then looked at the panicking civilians below and decided to have some fun. A fleeing person suddenly disappeared in a flash of white light and a "crack" sound. Another and another civilian randomly popped out of existence. Within a few minutes only a few stragglers were left running for safety. This is going to be great Tessaractor thought to itself. With that he disappeared a person's arms spewing blood everywhere and resulting in a loud scream. He left him bleeding on the ground and disappeared another person's legs causing a spew of blood and another terrible scream. There was only 1 man left and to this one he disappeared the head. There was no scream this time, only the thud of a body and an ever expanding pool of blood. Malefor gazed at the home of the one he promised to kill. He knew he was going to enjoy this. He crashed through the roof of the house and quickly had Andrew pinned to the floor with his back legs. He repeatedly stabbed the boy with his foreclaw, met with a scream each time. To finish he ripped Andrew in half with a shower of red. He examined his work, and satisfied, flew off to rejoin his ally. I've had this in my head for a while and decided to finally type it out. Tell me how you liked it. Feel free to criticize but be constructive. |
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#59 Posted: 00:16:23 10/08/2012
... I thought Andrew was already dead.
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#60 Posted: 00:18:14 10/08/2012 | Topic Creator
He was. The first chapter was Andrew's perspective. This chapter was from Malefor's point of view as he came into this world. It's the same event from 2 different POV's.
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#61 Posted: 01:18:42 10/08/2012
... OKAY then
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#62 Posted: 14:23:42 10/08/2012
...that's great...
If I'm not mistaken, you write this from your dream right? Dreaming of yourself to be dead...I wonder how you woke up... |
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#63 Posted: 23:03:17 12/08/2012
Aawesome! Glad to see another chapter up. Will we see more of Max? (I think that's the presidents name.)
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#64 Posted: 16:18:35 15/08/2012
Well that puts the number down to 2...
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#65 Posted: 18:03:27 15/08/2012
AT LEAST 2.
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#66 Posted: 02:47:15 16/08/2012
what 2?
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#67 Posted: 04:32:52 16/08/2012
Quote:
That AT LEAST 2!
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#68 Posted: 04:47:18 16/08/2012
Hey, hey...
What 2??? Lucky number? |
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#69 Posted: 05:41:52 16/08/2012
Stopped stories he's seen.
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