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#51 Posted: 05:16:59 26/01/2012
I've never been on a plane
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#52 Posted: 20:31:34 26/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Beautiful Heart, you're not going! Reading about a plane journey doesn't make you sick (Unless you are even more unique than i thought)! Sorry but there won't be a chapter tommorow (I know, again!). I REALLY need some ideas!
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#53 Posted: 23:26:33 26/01/2012
Wait? How could you not have ideas? Shouldn't you talk about what the townsfolk felt? What about the other Skylanders? Are you having Writer's Block?
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#54 Posted: 09:27:51 27/01/2012
Cure for writers block in the spoiler bellow
Malefor bought a bike He rode it down a hill Malefor rode off a cliff And that was the end of him END
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#55 Posted: 14:13:51 29/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Yay, finally had an idea. Sorry for the delay, but here's chapter 12!
CHAPTER THE TWELFTH:Friday the 13th Bleep! Bleep! Bleep! Gus yawned as he looked tiredly at his alarm clock. 6:50. Time to get up for school. What day was it? Did he have any homework due? Where was his swimming kit? Those were the questions that came through his mind each morning. He checked the calender. January, 13, Friday. Gus was not superstitious, but he knew it was a bad day. Every Friday the 13th, the older kids at his school would guard the gates and beat up anyone who wasn't in either their form, their house (school houses not family!) or their gang. He and Lucy, his best friend, would probably spend the day at the park instead of dying at school. Gus lazily got dressed. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Gus rang the Lucy's doorbell. He had packed his 3DS and a few games for the day, plus 2 pounds lunch money. They'd probably go to Mcdonalds or something. Boy did he fancy a beefburger! Strange. Why hadn't Lucy opened the door? It had been two minutes. Gus pressed it again. He remembered Lucy saying the doorbell was quiet, but Gus thought that was just a cover up for 'I don't want to answer the door'. But this wasn't funny. Gus picked up the spare key underneath the welcome mat and unlocked the door. All the lights were off downstairs. Gus walked into the living room. "Lucy? Lucy are you there? I thought we'd skip school today because, well, you know. Lucy? Where are you?" Gus called hopefully. He turned on the light. A bow and arrows? What would Lucy want with them? Too many questions! Gus walked upstairs to find Lucy. How come her mum wasn't home? Gus knocked on Lucy's bedroom door. "Lucy? Are you there?" Gus asked. Gus was NOT going in there. Breaking into a house was one thing, but her bedroom! No way! Gus sat down next to the door and waited. He got out his 3DS and started playing on his old DS Eternal Night Spyro game. No matter how hard he tried, he could never get past the arena... Gus put the game on full volume so that Lucy would hear it. 15 minutes had passed and still Lucy hadn't come out! That was it! "LUCY! GET OUT HERE RIGHT NOW OR I'M COMING IN!" Gus shouted. No reply. "5! 4! 3! 2! 1!" Gus really didn't want to do this... "HALF! A THIRD! A QUARTER! A FIFTH! A SIXTH! A SEVENTH! AN EIGHTH! A NINTH! A TENTH!" Grr, why wouldn't she come out? "ALRIGHT! THAT'S JUST IT!" Gus charged into the door. He wished he hadn't. Just as he walked in, an arrow flew right past his ear. "What the-" Gus started. But then Zap came in. He leaped on top of Gus and pinned him down. Then Flameslinger came in for the kill. Just as they'd do with any Drow scum at Skylands. Gus would be dead now if it weren't for one word. "Stop!" Lucy shouted from the landing. Zap and Flameslinger turned their heads to look at her. They both stopped what they were doing at stepped away. Lucy had never been in the room. She had fallen asleep at Dr. Malum's house. She had only just woken up and came into her house. Zap and Flameslinger had slept in her room. "What are those things?" Gus asked. "They're skylanders. They shouldn't be here. They're lost here and we have to get them back together! There are 30 of them and we need to help them!" Lucy explained. Gus stared. He smiled. He giggled. He laughed. He cried. In pain. Zap had just shocked him. "Ugh... But why do they have to be so... aggressive?" Gus asked. "I dunno. They're just so used to saving people. They must have thought you were a burglar or something." They stood in silence for a minute. Then Gus realised something. "Where's your mum?" He asked. "She's at wo-" Lucy started. She stopped because she realised she was lying. "I don't know..." Ding Dong! "I'd better get that." Lucy said. She walked shakily downstairs. The idea of not knowing where her mum was really worried here. Dr. Malum stood at the door. "Are you ready to leave? We are heading to Berlin first." Malum asked. "Umm... Well I'm not sure what to bri-" Lucy started. "Hang on! Where are you going?" Gus asked, who was listening on the stairs. "To find the rest of the skylanders! Like I told you." Lucy replied. "No your not! I'm not letting you go! You can't just go to Germany with a total stranger! I won't let you." Gus shouted. "But Gus we need-" "He's right," Malum said. "You shouldn't go with me. Look after Flameslinger and Zap. It will be dangerous. Oh, and dragons are fine with eating chicken. I've got plenty of supplies at my house. The key is in the roses. Goodbye." Malum left, with Gus and Lucy standing in the doorway. Lucy sighed, then walked up to her room.
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#56 Posted: 15:53:41 29/01/2012
Good.
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#57 Posted: 18:14:52 29/01/2012
Check the Characters wanted page. I posted one
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#58 Posted: 18:40:28 29/01/2012
Yay! Also, I do get sick thinking about things I get sick about.
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#59 Posted: 19:19:13 29/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Ok... Well i'm not describing the plane journey anyway, as Gus and Lucy aren't going on the trip.
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#60 Posted: 05:23:52 30/01/2012
*gasp* what happens now
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#61 Posted: 14:42:44 30/01/2012
Is it ok if I start of the next wave of fan-made skylanders with a tech element? Also, your sig makes me think you hate your own skylander team...
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#62 Posted: 17:29:23 30/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Lol, so i see go ahead with the tech skylander.
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#63 Posted: 20:19:24 30/01/2012 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER THE THIRTEENTH:Catastrophe
The 7 Sky Warriors had already defeated three of the elemental beasts, Arborick, Leviathan and Quicksilver giant. They had become very popular, but nobody yet had the guts to join them. They were on their way to Cynder, who had apparently completely demolished the Creepy Citadel. Corpsery was in his element (literally) and was slaying bone and arrows at light speed. Camo and Kitsune were aetting up camp that they would rest at before advancing to Cynder. Corspery, Grunna and Equator were defending them. Flora and Sienna were getting the food. They were all ready for battle, ready to defeat Cynder. But they would never hurt Cynder. They would never get close to her. There was no chance. Because one person stood in their way. If you could call it a person. The thing came just as all the sky warriors gathered for lunch. Camo was just eating a melon. Corpsery was still fighting, with no stomach he, of course, wasn't hungry. The rest were eating berries from a plain just behind the deadlands. What do you expect them to eat? Roast spider? A fire was up and they were all enjoying themselves. But it wouldn't last. Corpsery felt it first. Then Sienna. Then Grunna and Flora. Then the others. Horror. Fear. Despair. "RUN!" Corpsery screamed. They didn't need telling twice. They dropped everything and sprinted away from the fear cloud. "Wait!" Camo cried. "It's Cynder! She's trying to scare us away! Then she'll completely eliminate every undead thing in the deadlands! We've got to go back!" The others agreed, then rushed towards the clouds source. But it wasn't Cynder. It was something much worse. Much, much worse. Corpsery was at the head of an arrow formation. They would smack Cynder head on. Everyone knew the Sky Warriors tactics, attack from behind and out of view. So with the tougher enemy, why not surprise it? The horror became stronger and stonger as they charged forwards. It seemed to find their worst fear, then replay it right in front of them. In front of Sienna, a terrible sorceress stood. The owl stopped. Her parents stood in front of her. The sorceress walked towards her parents. Her parents fell to the ground, clutching their stomachs. Poison. Sienna stared in total horror. Tears fell from her eyes and she fell to the ground. Grunna saw a huge army of drow tanks. Her parents stood their as well. A bomb was fired from a tank. It exploded in between her parents. Grunna chased after her parents, as if to save them. She sulked on the ground, crying her heart out. Camo didn't see anything, but he was set on fire by a bone and arrow. He ran from the battle. Kitsune saw images of himself, being tortured and hurt by Kaos' spells. He could almost feel the pain again. He shifted into a fox, curled up and cried into his soft tail. Flora could see her home, being ripped apart by bullets and bombs. Equator saw his parents. He was one. They were shouting at his brother, Zap. Only Corpsery had no image. Everyone apart from him had fallen on the ground, with utter sadness in their hearts. Corpsery charged towards the thing. And then he saw it. Catastrophe. Corpsery looked up. He had never felt fear before that day. And boy it felt bad. Corpsery fell to the ground, sword and shield lost. A shadowy hand picked him up. Corpsery was held up to a terrible demon eye. And then he knew only one thing. Despair... ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sorry this is shorter than usual, I'm not excalty in the mood for writing. But I'll get into it, then it will be as long as usual!
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#64 Posted: 20:31:10 30/01/2012
*gasp*
And now to get ready got school
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#65 Posted: 23:04:29 30/01/2012
Story hook!
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#66 Posted: 08:43:49 31/01/2012
Suspense.
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#67 Posted: 10:01:33 31/01/2012
Despair…
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#68 Posted: 00:38:16 01/02/2012
Would it be okay if we got to decide what our characters say...but wait, it might take longer. Your choice, or we can just post what we want our Skylanders to say and sound like on your Create-A-Skylander thread.
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#69 Posted: 16:23:23 01/02/2012 | Topic Creator
I suppose a catchphrase would be alright, or commonly said words/phrases. But add at the bottom in an "other" category.
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#70 Posted: 20:23:27 01/02/2012 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER THE FOURTEENTH:The advert
"Move your arm to the left a bit, a bit more... There! Now let go!" Flamslinger ordered. With nothing else to do that day, Flameslinger said that he'd teach Gus archery. Gus released the string and the arrow flew onto the target. It hit the bull (the green circle around the bullseye). "Nice one! Not many people I teach get a bull on their first go. But I guess I did help you," Flameslinger commented. "How do you know how to hold it perfectly?" Gus asked. "Ahh, just practice. That's all you need when you have the basics. Are you alright on your own? I need to talk to Zap." "Yeah, I'll be fine. See ya!" Flameslinger walked out of the hallway and through to the dining room. Gus fired again. Miss. Maybe he wasn't alright on his own... Meanwhile, Zap and Lucy were having a webcam chat with Dr. Malum. Stealth Elf was with Malum. Malum said that they were heading to Italy next. A skeleton (Chop Chop) was causing a stir there. "How much room have you got in that house?" Malum asked. "What? I won't be able to let them stay here! My mu-" Lucy stopped. She remembered about her mum. 4 o'clock. Almost a full day. She hadn't been answering her mobile. She wondered whether the same thing had happened to her mum as her dad. A car crash... "Are you ok?" Malum asked. "Yeah. I'm fine. How much room at your house?" "5 rooms. About space for 2 in each. I'm sure you could have 1 or 2 at yours." "Yes. So is Stealth coming over here?" Zap asked. "Yes, my assistant will bring her," Malum replied. "Oh, and look on TV. Channel 3. Bye!" 'Channel 3?' Lucy thought. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ "Oh Mike! I love you so much!" the actor cried. "Melissa! I've been having the same feeling!" Mike replied. "Let's get married!" "Yes!" The theme song played as the soap ended. "Why did we have to watch that rubbish? I mean, that wasn't helpful at all!" Lucy complained. "Wait! Look!" Flameslinger pointed. The adverts were on. "Try out the hot new toy: SKYLANDERS! Pick up your figures! Place them on the portal! Play the Game!" The man shouted. "My name is Zap! Abba Yabba Jabba! Buy me and you get my awesome abillities in game! Abba Yabba Awesome!" An actor cried. "Hey... I don't sound like that!" Zap exclaimed. "And when was the last time I said that? Come on, Abba Yabba Jabba?" "If you are awesome enough to get me, you are sure to get the high score! I'm Bash, and I'm exclusive to London, England! Raar!" "How strange..." Gus said. "How did they know about them?" Underneath, the words "always in stock at 26 Manchester street, Ealing, London" were written. A strange gap was next to it. "Say 66895 to manager?" Flameslinger wondered. "Where does it say that?" Gus asked. "At the bottom on the right. Here!" He pointed at the gap. Flameslinger had such good eyesight, he could see the hidden writing on the advert. "They must have Bash! Someone must be using these adverts to get us together!" Zap exclaimed. "But I don't see why they had me in it, they don't know where I am! And it was a waste of a bad actor, they could of used him for Eruptor!" They decided to go to the store.
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#71 Posted: 20:32:43 01/02/2012
Great! You getting better on this.
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#72 Posted: 23:06:45 01/02/2012
Holy crap man this story's awesome. Keep up the good work!!
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#73 Posted: 09:52:23 02/02/2012
Lol love Zaps reaction
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#74 Posted: 16:19:35 02/02/2012 | Topic Creator
I will be CLOSING the skylanders suggestions page tommorow. The final sky warriors will be included in chapter 17. To go to the skylanders suggestion page, follow this link: //forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/vi...ic=46074&page=1
CHAPTER THE FIFTEENTH:The capturing of Gurglefin "Sierra! Sierra wake up!" Camo cried. He had just returned to the barren Deadlands, only to find 5 sky warriors unconscious and 1 missing. "Huh? What happened?" She asked. "It's Corpsery, he's gone!" "What?" Sierra got up. "We need to get to him them! Cynder must have taken him!" Sierra shouted. "That wasn't Cynder. Cynder was never that powerful." "Then who was it?" "I... don't know." Camo thought. He thought back to the night in the ship, with Gill Grunt. He remembered seeing something he hadn't noticed before. 'Camo opened his eyes tiredly to find himself in a dragonbed. He looked around him. A gillman was sitting on a crate. Next to him was a harpoon gun.' Camo tried to think harder, to see what else was in the room. 'Wooden boards made up the walls and floor. A porthole was on one wall. On the other walls were posters. Posters of Kaos with a red cross. Posters with 'DEATH TO KAOS' written on them. And there was another poster hidden underneath that he noticed. 'VICTORY FOR MALEFOR' and 'PRAISE THE TRUE MASTER' were written on them.' "Gurglefin," Camo said. "What? What about him?" Sienna asked, who was part way through waking up Equator. "He supported Malefor." "What? How do you know?" "There was a poster on his boat. And if he supported Malefor, there is quite a chance that he supports that... thing as well." Equator woke up. "Well then what are we waiting for, let's find him!" He started to wake up Grunna. Camo woke up Kitsune while Sienna woke up Flora. They all prepared and got ready to go. They would split up and meet back at Melon Farmland if either they found Gurglefin or one hour had passed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Equator walked around the lava lakes railway. 45 minutes had passed, and he was starting to think he should head back. He sighed, then hopped into the train. He would have gone. He would have missed Gurglefin. If it weren't for one horrid noise. OOOOOWW! Equator turned around. Ahhh, he was hiding inside the rock. He walked around a huge boulder until he found a small doorway. Inside, there were two people. A gillman and a troll was inside. The troll was standing on the gillman's foot. They looked up at Equator. Equator looked at them. "Awkward..." The troll said. "Hey! You look like Zap!" The gillman said. It was Gurglefin. "I'm his brother. And I've been looking for you," Equator said. "Tell me where my brother is! Tell me how to get him back!" "Heh heh... I didn't do anything to him! It was my master. The true master. Oww!" The troll stepped on his foot again. "I will never switch sides! The only true master is the one I have been butler for, for 6 years! Kaos is the master." The troll, Glumshanks said as he slammed on Gurglefin's foot again. "You're coming with me. The rest of us need to speak to you." Equator said. "Aww, I was having fun! Can I come and do the punishments?" Glumshanks asked. "Don't see why not. Could you keep an eye on him so he doesn't run off while we're in the train?" Glumshanks nodded, then they headed back to meet up with the other Sky Warriors.
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#75 Posted: 20:07:15 02/02/2012
Good part.
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#76 Posted: 23:53:28 02/02/2012
*tear* You're becoming a beautiful (notice the coincidence in my name) story writer!
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#77 Posted: 18:49:28 04/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Hey! I bet your wondering who is gonna be in the story? They won't be in today's chapter, as I'm alternating between Lucy and Gus' chapters and Camo's chapters. So if you don't want to spoil the surprise don't click reveal!
Void, by spyrocrash Cyclone (or Kazesora), by Cynder134 Double Cross and Etch, Ridinggrl27 Techna, Beautiful Heart Thanks for your suggestions! Here's Chapter 16! CHAPTER THE SIXTEENTH:Bash Gus and Lucy stepped off the train. Zap and Flameslinger weren't going to the shop to find Bash. Well what would you think if you saw 2... things walking around town? Instead, they were watching TV, looking for more adverts. Zap did not approve of this, as it would mean watching a horrible soap, and listenening to that terrible Abba Yabba Jabba actor... Lucy checked the map. Manchester street was half a mile away. They started to walk. __________________________________________________________________ "Here it is," Lucy stated, standing in front of the gaming shop. They stepped inside the extremely busy shop. Many people cued up, holding their new bash figure in one hand, a ten pound note in the other. An assistant hastily restocked the skylanders shelf with bash figures, which came from the large warehouse in the back. "But mummy, I want the Playstation AND the 3ds pack!" A seven-year old cried. "Honey, you don't even have a 3ds... Besides, you've got enough skylanders as it is!" A mother complained. "But mummy, I've only got Spyro, Gill grunt, Trigger Happy, 2 Bashes, 2 Chop Chops, 5 Zaps and a Stump Smash! I WANT THE 3DS ONE!" the spoilt child screamed. "Alright dear, we'll get the 3ds pack, but no more!" The child beamed and grabbed the starter pack. "This thing is really popular!" Gus exclaimed. "Yeah, and it only came out this week!" Lucy replied. They walked up to the busy assistant. "Excuse me, could we please-" Gus started "Yes! Yes! Take one! Take two! I'll be getting more in a minute, please be patient!" the assistant interrupted. "No, not that, we don't want one. We'd like to-" "Oh, you want to know when Final Fantasy 15 comes out? April. I know, ages away. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to get more figures, have you seen the cue?" Before Gus could ask, the assistant rushed off to the warehouse at the back. Gus sighed. Lucy was waiting in the cue, hoping to talk to the cashier. The spoiled kid was behind her. She could hear him talking. "Mummy, she's not buying any Skylanders! Can't we push in front? Skylanders are more important!" the kid muttered. "No Charlie, that would be rude." "But I want to go home and play with my Skylanders!" The mother sighed. She tapped Lucy's shoulder. "Excuse me, but would you mind if we pushed in front of you?" she asked. "I really need a break from his whining!" she whispered at the end. Lucy shrugged and let them. "I'd like to warn you that the shop is closing in 5 minutes! So pick up your exclusive Bash-bash-bash figure and come to the check-out before we close! Thank-you." someone said through the speakers. The shop couldn't shut! A real life was more important than games. Lucy would never get to the end of the cue before the end of 5 minutes, the cue was too long. So, before she knew what she was doing, Lucy just shouted out the 5 numbers Flameslinger had written at the bottom of the map. "SIX, SIX, EIGHT, NINE, FIVE!" She shouted. Silence. Everyone stared at her. The spoiled kid started giggling and pointing. The mother tried to shush him. Gus gave her a strange look. Even the non-stop moving, talking, restocking assistant stopped. A man walked up to her. "I think you'd better follow me..." the man said. He had a manager badge on his jumper. Lucy signaled for Gus to follow. "I will drive you home, assuming you have finished shopping? Bash is waiting in the car. I assume you know about them?" the manager asked. "Yes. We know," Gus said. "Phew! Wondered whether I'd told the wrong person then. How many have you found?" "Three, Flameslinger, Zap and Stealth Elf. Do you know where any more are?" "No. Do you have a Nintendo Wii?" Lucy nodded. "Take this. Every time a new Skylander comes out, buy it. Say the code you just mentioned to the cashier to get it free. Bash understands the gibberish they speak on the game. They will say where they are located." The manager gave them a Nintendo Wii starter pack. They all climbed into a black BMW. The windows tinted so you couldn't see through them. Bash waited inside. They drove back to Lucy's house. Her mum still hadn't returned...
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#78 Posted: 22:54:24 04/02/2012
I wonder who they are going to find next. That was one spoilt little kid,
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#79 Posted: 08:09:04 05/02/2012
Good.
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#80 Posted: 20:21:32 05/02/2012 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER THE SEVENTEENTH:The madman
"Woah, that is one big melon!" Glumshanks commented as they neared the farmland. "Camo gets bored. He's trying for the biggest melon skyland record," Equator replied. "Wait, that melon is made out of stone!" "What?" Equator looked at the skyland. Instead of the usual, plain field and lake, a huge castle had been built on it! It was shaped like a melon and painted green. Equator could see seven people standing next to the castle, looking at the balloon. A silver monkey waved at them with fingerless gloves. His name was Void, and next to him a two-headed wolf sat. He stared at them with glowing red eyes. Double Cross, the wolf sat next to Techna. She was a purple dragon, except partly robot. Behind her was a half human half cat called Etch. She had a giant pencil floating next to her. Finally, an air dragon by the name of Cyclone stood at the back of the lot. She seemed uninterested in the balloon, looking more at the two water dragons in the lake. They were called Lily and Ness. Lily was a half frog, half chinese dragon and Ness was a small sea serpent. Glumshanks landed the balloon. "Who are you?" Equator asked. "We'd like to help you! We'd like to become Sky Warriors!" Etch said. Equator shrugged. "Guess so. Anyone is welcome. We are about to question the fishman. His 'master' has taken Corpsery, a sky warrior, so we need to know where he is." Glumshanks held Gurglefin's wrists. They all walked into the castle. The castle was huge. It was split into 10 sections. The main room, the bedrooms and a training room for each element. Double Cross grabbed a chair and tied Gurglefin up on it. "Where is your master?" Equator asked. "Core Island. You can go there if you want. You won't get far..." Gurglefin laughed. "How do we get past to it?" "'It' is Catastrophe. Glorious Catastrophe. And there is no way of getting past! Only WE followers can pass the cloud of despair." Gurglefin looked up and smelt the air. "Ahh, can you not feel that? It is in the air, on this island. The beautiful despair!" Gurglefin cackled out loud. "Your mad!" Equator said. "Mad? But I'm on the winning side! So who cares!" Etch pointed at the door. A flaming sword had cut an X on the wooden door. The door fell in pieces, to reveal Corpsery. "Corpsery! You made it back!" Equator said, approaching him. But there was something strange about Corpsery. His sword was not metal, but fire. His shield had a burning forcefield around it. And inside his empty skull, a fire burned. It was strange. Dark, yet light. Dark light. And as Equator got closer to Corpsery, he felt something strange. Despair... Corpsery kicked Equator in the face. He walked over him and stabbed him. Equator cried out. Not dead, but being tortured by the despair that hung inside him. The skeleton leapt towards the chair and cut the rope. The other sky warriors approached Corpsery in an attempt to stop him. But with a simple swish of his sword, Corpsery took them all out. One-by one, each sky warrior fell to the floor in agony. Gurglefin jumped out of the chair and the two ran out of the castle and into the balloon. Cyclone crawled slowly towards Equator. "Do you really, honestly believe that we can win this war?" she asked. "No," Equator replied. "I don't think we can," They groaned and fell unconscious.
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#81 Posted: 20:32:05 05/02/2012
Suspense. Keep it up.
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#82 Posted: 23:09:10 05/02/2012
I read all of it in one day...I CRIED!
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#83 Posted: 00:00:30 06/02/2012
This is amazing! Thanks for using my characters! A suggestion: Double Cross is kinda evil and has darkness inside him, so mabey he could save the sky warriors? Just a suggestion. Keep writing, love it!
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#84 Posted: 00:39:40 06/02/2012
Idea: When you finish the story, close this thread, make a new thread about this, and copy and paste all of the story into one post.
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#85 Posted: 10:03:35 06/02/2012
I love it, you got her just right
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#86 Posted: 19:47:54 06/02/2012 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER THE EIGHTEENTH:The portal
Lucy started up the laptop. Malum and her had agreed to have a webcam chat every 5 o'clock British time. Malum was in India at that time, searching for Dinorang. He had heard reports of a strange dinosaur-like person beating everyone at the world boomerang championships. Stealth Elf had arrived at the houses and Chop-chop was on his way. Lucy clicked on the Skype symbol and called Zap over. Flameslinger had seen the advert for Spyro. "Spyro? He's a skylander?" Lucy had asked when Flameslinger alerted them to the advert. "Yes, why? Do you know him?" "Did you not SEE my desk? I've got ALL his games!" "Ahh, that. Spyro visited Earth in 1998 and told a game developer about his life. In return, the developer, helped Spyro get home," Flameslinger explained. "I see... Do you think it's the same developer that is doing the Skylanders game?" "Probably." Malum was online. Lucy clicked on his name and they started the video call. Zap stood up on a chair. Malum was on his own this time. "Lucy, at 7 o clock, you need to find your way to This address," Malum showed her a piece of paper with an address on it. "There will be a helicopter. I need you to take all the skylanders there and get into it. It will take you to the Portal of Power. Step on it to go to Skylands. I haven't got much time, as the Boomerang championships finish soon. Goodbye." "Wait! What-" Lucy started, but Malum had already left. "Right. Well looks like we ought to get to this portal. We can pick up Spyro on the way." She closed the laptop, told everyone about their plan, then started walking. _______________________________________________________________________________________________ They all looked out of their windows. There were 3 helicopters: Spyro, Lucy and Gus in the first, Stealth elf, Flameslinger and Zap in the second and Bash on his own in the third, as he was too heavy. They were flying towards Miami in the U.S.A. But they stopped short of Miami, instead landing on huge platform in the middle of the sea. In the centre of the platform was a large disk. The portal of power. The helicopter landed next to the portal. A group of scientists stood around the portal. They were wearing white coats and safety goggles. They were throwing stones on the portal to see whether it would disappear. They didn't. The only reason they could say it was the portal was because a scientist accidently fell on the portal and was never seen again. The scientist nodded at them as they got out of the helicopter. The 5 skylanders and Lucy and Gus all stepped on to the portal. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ They ended up in a large crypt. "Cadaverous Crypt," Zap identified. "Sounds lovely..." Gus replied sarcastically. They heard a loud roar coming from behind them. "What. Was. That." Lucy asked. They turned around. With the small amount of light in the crypt, they couldn't see much. But Spyro recognised her. "Cynder!" Spyro shouted. "That. Is Cynder?" Lucy asked. "Afraid so. She's been, changed. We have to save her!" Cynder let out a large puff of fear into the group. Gus and Lucy took most of the attack and fell on to the floor in horror. Zap and Stealth Elf ran around Cynder to surround her. "The collar! Destroy the collar!" Spyro shouted, pointing at a glowing red collar around Cynder's neck. Zap fired an electric bolt. It missed, hitting instead Cynder's ear. The dragon turned to face Zap. A burst of Poison and Zap was down. "Oi!" Bash shouted. "NOBODY, but NOBODY messes with us!" The dinosaur slammed his tail down on Cynder's foot. While she was distracted, Flameslinger let loose an arrow. That too missed. It hit Cynder's other ear. Can you imagine the amount of pain she was in? Cynder swiped her tail around and tripped up Flameslinger. Gus got up. He could see the battle that was taking place. They didn't stand a chance. Gus ran over to Flameslinger. He was unconscious. Gus picked up his bow and arrow and fired an arrow. Bullseye! No it didn't land in Cynder's eye. But it did hit the collar! The collar broke and Cynder shrunk back to her usual size. Slowly, everyone got up. Cynder was asleep. They set up camp and rested while Cynder got up. But there was one problem. Lucy and Gus had no way of getting home.
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#87 Posted: 20:17:20 06/02/2012
AWSOME!
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#88 Posted: 08:15:39 07/02/2012
Poor Cynder, 1 electrified ear and 1 burnt ear
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#89 Posted: 14:35:32 07/02/2012
Should you make a new thread ater the 15th chapter? You can make a part 2...
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#90 Posted: 16:29:54 07/02/2012 | Topic Creator
It's possible. I have an idea for what happens after the story, but it is only about three chapters long.
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#91 Posted: 19:14:51 07/02/2012
Cool story!
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#92 Posted: 19:45:43 07/02/2012 | Topic Creator
Thanks for the comments guys! I'm not going to start a part 2 JUST because I reached a milestone chapter. I will make a part 2 if the story goes that way. Otherwise it is just staying in here. Do you specifically want it in a new topic? If so, why? Lol, I'm DEFINITELY being an English teacher when I grow up
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#93 Posted: 19:58:26 07/02/2012
^ Do what you want.
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#94 Posted: 23:11:09 07/02/2012
LOL you should. I want a job that's clean. Like my signature says, I'm not just another Jane Doe, I want to be in high-society.
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#95 Posted: 01:46:52 08/02/2012
Are you going to do any more?
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#96 Posted: 08:37:56 08/02/2012
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You don't have to open another topic ya' know X3
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#97 Posted: 22:04:56 08/02/2012 | Topic Creator
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Don't quite understand how making a part 2 is 'clean' or in 'high society'. Not trying to have a go at you, just wondering what you mean. I have an idea for a second Spyro story, but I need to know this: Do you want it now, with me alternating between this and the new one, or after this story?
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#98 Posted: 23:34:39 08/02/2012
I meant my job
EDIT: Also, you could do co-op on a fan-fic, but I'm not going to do that.
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#99 Posted: 04:49:16 09/02/2012
If you were going to do another story (just saying) I would finish this one first
If you do do another, you could include Skylanders GIANTS!
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#100 Posted: 14:41:46 09/02/2012
Yeah, I really like this one and don't want a delay.
.......................I have perfume Sunburn, -Just sayin'- I BROKE THE 100 COMMENT BATTLE!!! YAY!! I MADE THE 100TH EDIT! 200th edit get's a bigger prize!
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