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#51 Posted: 02:22:10 22/12/2010
Awesome.
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#52 Posted: 19:07:29 29/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Its been awile since this was updated. Here's a new chapter.
Chapter 9 "Destiny you seem troubled." Marie said as the silver dragon lie in bed. "Its nothing Marie." Destiny replied, lying. "No use lying to me Destiny, I can sense your aura, I can tell if you are lying or not." Destiny sighed, seeing as there was nothing she could say to counter. "Please tell me Destiny. What is on your mind?" "Well..." Destiny began, "I couldn't sleep last night. I heard you and Ignitus talking." "Talking about your ability, right?" "Yes... you see, lately I've been haveing dreams, these dragons keep trying to show me something but... but I always wake up. "Destiny, the dragons you see are our ansestors. You truly have the Future Sight ability." ------ "Hey shard" Heather began. "Yes?" the said purple dragon answered. "Have you noticed that Spyro seems troubled lately? I sometime hear him growl loudly about something, I'm not sure what." "Maybe we'll find out later. Don't think to hard about it." ------ Destiny sat in the center room of the Celestial Temple and was looking into the hourglass, still curious of what it was for. Ignitus and Marie were not that far away, they were discusing something the Destiny did not seem to hear; as she was hypmatized by what could be seen in the hourglass. ------ There was a dragon that she could not see the features of standing in the center of the room, looking as if it were in pain. The dragon soon cried out loudly, agony filled it voice. "GET OUT OF MY HEAD!" It begged, collapsing on the ground, paws on its head as it trembled in fustration and fear. Destiny tried to run over to the dragon but found that she couldn't move. "Do not aproach him." a male voice said through telepathy. "But he's hurt!" Destiny snapped at the voice, "why shouldn't I help him?!" "Because..." the voice said again as a faint white glow appeard near Destiny. The young silver dragon turned to the light to find a dragon standing beside her, its scales glowing silver like hers... a silver dragon. "You cannot help him," the large silver dragon said, "at least not here, for you are only seeing a vision that we need you to see." "We?" Destiny asked. Suddenly, it hit her, she was speaking to one of the ansestors, her future sight had been activated. "The time will come Destiny." The silver dragon said as he began to fade. "But it is not now." ------ Destiny snapped back into reality as the vision ended. The dragon's words echoed in her head:. "The time will come... but is not now" "The time will come..." Destiny repeated out loud, "But when?" Hope you enjoyed that chapter
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#53 Posted: 19:25:34 29/12/2010
Good chapter
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#54 Posted: 18:03:24 10/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the long wait. Heres a new chapter
Chapter 10 “What was that Destiny?” Marie asked, hearing the young silver dragon speak. Destiny, knowing it would be pointless to lie to her mentor and friend spoke, “I saw a vision with my ability.” She said, “I was in this pitch black room and I saw the silhouette of a dragon. He, he cried out in pain, asking something to get out of his head. I wanted to help but a silver dragon stopped me.” “Another silver dragon…” Marie repeated, “did he say anything to you?” “Yeah. I wanted to help the dragon but…” Destiny paused, “…but he said I couldn’t just yet and that ‘The time would come… but not yet.’” “Hmm… the ancestors must be trying to give you clues.” Marie replied as the young dragoness finished explaining. “Remember every vision you have, never forget one. It’ll all make sense eventually.” ----- Heather paced in her cell, hopping to think of a plan. She stopped as an idea came to her. “Shard,” she began, “Do you by any chance know an element to get us out of here? I tried Shadow and Water but they don’t work.” “No” Shard replied., “only the basic four. Fire, Ice, Earth, and Electricity.” Heather lay down again, sighing. “Why doesn’t Spyro just kill us now?! So I can join my daughter and be back in a world without darkness?” “Well…” Shard began. “One: I think he’s trying to make a show out of this. Two: I think he’s trying to crush out hope by putting nothing but bars and stone around us, as well as have his underlings torture and taunt us.” “Well it worked…” Heather said; voice cracking as her voice filled with sorrow.” ----- As Destiny practiced her elements outside, Marie spoke with Ignitus. “I don’t know what the ancestors are trying to tell her Ignitus.” Marie said, “I’m worried she won’t figure it out before the…” Ignitus cut Marie off. “Destiny will figure it out Marie.” He said, “You need not worry.” Marie sighed, “Yeah… I guess I’m just over protective it’s just my nature.” There was silence, only the sounds of elements being launched by Destiny could be heard. “I’m also worried Ignitus…” Marie continued, “Every time it draws nearer this sign of alert comes to me.” There was another pause as Marie looked at the starless and clouded sky, the celestial moons barely visible. “On the day of eclissi, the darkness will be unstoppable by even a silver dragon… and... it'll be The End of All Hope.”
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#55 Posted: 19:17:11 10/01/2011
Good chapter
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#56 Posted: 02:58:35 15/01/2011
Nice chapters.
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#57 Posted: 02:56:17 16/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the wait.
Chapter 11 Ok, let me try this again,. Destiny thought. had been trying for days to master her newest discovered element: Light. Opening her maw she exhaled. Nothing came out. Maybe I have to think about more than just light, she planned, getting ready once more. Now thinking of the light she wanted to restore to the world the young dragoness tried once more. Unlike the last time, small sparks came out of her maw. She was getting somewhere. Ok, maybe one more try should do it! Destiny thought once more. Alright, think of light, think of peace, think of the way you want the world to be… With that final thought Destiny tried once more. This time she succeeded as a beam of light shot out from her maw, hitting a nearby tree. “I did it!” Destiny cried “I actually did it!” Not long after her victory cheer, the familiar dizzy feeling of Future Sight returned. Destiny collapsed on her side, awaiting the vision to come to her. ------ The Catacombs were dark, darker than ever, this caused a chill to go down Heather’s spine. She knew what was coming, she had witnessed it before. Shard noticed Heather’s fear and out of sympathy began to speak. “Heather are you ok?” He asked “N-not really…” Heather replied in a whisper, “I’m scared.” “Scared? Why?” Heather was quiet. “This day called Eclissi is coming soon…” she finally began. “Eclissi?” “Yes. It is a day that I have feared for many years in this dark world of ours. I have witnessed it before when I was very young.” “What is Eclissi Heather?” “I can’t explain it. I never heard the true definition of the day from the only one who knew about it. I was too young.” “That doesn’t answer my question.” Heather sighed before speaking once more. “It is a three day event that is worse than the night of Eternal Darkness, it’s a day where we will perish and where all hope for us will perish. It, in short, is the day we might as well kill ourselves.” “Why didn’t we perish when it happened before?” “Honestly, I have no clue. Something stopped it but I don’t remember what.” There was silence between the two purple dragons after Heather’s speech, making the darkness of the Catacombs more ominous then they already were. ------ Memories flashed through his mind, attempting to make him remember. Every time a memory crossed his mind he would cry in pain. Something was stopping him, stopping him from changing. It wouldn’t be long… until what little sanity he had left was gone. Gone… like those he had lost, those he had viciously murdered… …and those that he could have saved. Hope you enjoyed that chapter
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#58 Posted: 04:06:30 16/01/2011
Good job.
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#59 Posted: 08:15:05 16/01/2011
Good chapter
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#60 Posted: 07:02:41 25/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the wait
Chapter 12 Destiny found herself face to face with the Silver Dragon fromm her last vision. "Hello young dragon." He said. "Er...hi?" Destiny replied, feeling strange talking to the silver dragon. There was silence untill the silver dragon spoke. "You are wondering why I have summoned you here...am I right?" He asked. Destiny nodded. "It is almost time for you to fight Destiny. Spyro will not be an easy opponent." "I know that but... I'm not ready. I'm only six years old!" "You do not have a chance to wait Destiny. Eclissi, the day of destruction, is drawing nearer." "Eclissi? What's that" "A three day event that only comes every twelve generations. A day when the world will perish in darkness." "What's that got to do with me?" "If you do not defeat Spyro before the end of the third day of Eclissi...he will be unstopable. No power will be able to defeat him." "I guess I have no choice then..." "I am afraid not Destiny." Destiny saw the silver dragon begin to fade, her vision was ending. "Remember, the fate of our world rests in your claws." ------- Destiny's eyes snapped open, she was awake now. Gah! I forgot to ask how many days were left before Eclissi! she mentaly yelled at herself, slapping her right paw on her forehead. "I should tell Marie and Ignitus about this. They should know about Eclissi." Destiny trotted over to her mentors, many expressions shone in her eyes. "You had another vision didn't you Destiny?" Marie guessed as the young dragoness came over. "Yeah," Destiny replied. There was silence. "Marie, Ignitus, do you know anything about a day called Eclissi? The silver dragon in my vision mentioned it and the fact it was drawing nearer." "Eclissi, like you probably have been told, is the three day event that you must defeat Spyro by." Marie said. "Yeah. But do you have any idea when it will be here?I forgot to ask that." Destiny explained sheepishly. "Judging by the placement of the Celestial Moons... almost a month from now." Ignitus replied. "So not that long huh?" Destiny questioned fearfully. "Sadly, no." "Marie, Ignitus, I'm ready! I'm ready to fight Spyro!" Destiny exclaimed, the thought of the world's doom corssing her mind. She wouldn't let it happen. She would defeat Spyro... or die trying. "It is a two week travel from here to the Well of Souls, where Spyro currently dwells." Ignitus explained "Why two weeks?" Destiny asked. "Thanks to the twisted minds of many dragons and creatures, it is dangerous to travel. Not to mention because of your age you'd get tired easily. If it weren't for those two things you could make it in a week." "I have to travel to the Well of Souls alone?" "No. Marie will go with you. However, she cannot aid you in your fight against Spyro. For it is your destiny to stop him. Not hers." "I will help you reach the Well and get you inside. Other than that... I will not be by your side." Destiny was silent. The thought of Spyro, a fully grown dragon, fighting her, a six year old hachling, it seemed that the winner of the battle was obvious. No! Destiny thought to herself, I will win, Spyro will fall! "I'm ready when you are Marie. When do we set out?" "Tomorrow morning." ------- Spyro looked at the sky, a smirk crossing his maw. "Eclissi is drawing near." He said, "Then, I will be unstopable! Not even the ansestors themselves. Unlike Malefor... they cannot do anything to me." Hope you enjoyed
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#61 Posted: 02:14:25 26/01/2011
Very nice. It was worth the wait.
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#62 Posted: 20:10:22 27/01/2011
I haven't been reading these lately, huh? Sorry, these new chapters are GREAT!
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#63 Posted: 17:49:12 28/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys
Here's a new chapter Chapter 13 Morning had come; though it was hard to tell due to the dark clouds above. “Are you ready Destiny?” Marie asked, looking at the young dragoness. She’s grown so much since we found her. She is ready to fight. “I am Marie.” Destiny replied bravely, yet fear could be heard in her voice. After all, she hadn’t left the White Isles since she was just a hatchling. Marie turned to Ignitus, the one who had sheltered her when she had washed up on shore all those years ago. “Goodbye Ignitus.” She said, “I promise we’ll return once we complete our quest.” Marie and Destiny got airborne, ready to cross the dark ocean, ready to complete their tasks. As the duo flew off Marie heard Ignitus’ voice. “May the ancestors look after you… may they look after us all.” He said. Those were the last words Marie and Destiny heard before the White Isles vanished from view… and the sight of a large landmass appeared before them. The duo landed, a chill went down Destiny’s spine; the dark, lifeless field they had landed on filled the silver dragoness with fear. I cannot be scared! She thought, they’re counting on me to save everyone. Marie looked around the field for any signs of danger. Seeing none, she turned to Destiny. “I know you are scared Destiny.” She said, “But do not fear. We will be safe.” Destiny nodded at this statement to tell Marie she understood and was brave. Hours past by as the duo silently walked the plains, Marie sensing for any threats. Destiny walked alongside her mentor, looking around at what was once a beautiful field. The sight of the field now only strengthened her desire to change it. Suddenly, Marie stopped, holding her wing in front of Destiny in warning. “Do you see anything Marie?” Destiny questioned quietly. Marie nodded before speaking, “A few corrupted dragons are around here. If we are careful we might be able to avoid them. Understanding Marie’s statement destiny continued alongside Marie, being silent. So far none of the dangerous dragons in the area had attacked them; that was a good sign. The silence continued for many miles, “I think we’re out of their territory.” Marie said in a whisper. However, without warning, Marie was tackled to the ground. The Aura dragoness stood up quickly, looking at the attacker. A large red dragon glared at them, eyes filled with nothing but insanity and anger. As the dragon lunged at Destiny it was thrown back by a powerful shard of ice. Destiny growled at the dragon in warning, but the dragon wasn’t phased by her action and lunged at her once more. Destiny had no time to react as she was knocked to the ground, temporarily paralyzed from hitting the ground hard. Before the dragon could did its teeth into the silver dragoness’ scales it was thrown into a nearby rock by the glowing blue sphere of Aura launched by Marie. The dragon hit the rock and slumped to the ground, unconscious. Marie went over to Destiny as the dragoness shakily stood up. “You alright?” She asked her. “Bruised a bit but I’ll live.” Destiny replied. There was silence until Marie spoke again. “Come on, lets get out of here before that guy wakes up.” She said, nodding at the now unconscious dragon before walking forwards; Destiny right behind. “Marie, do you think I have a chance against Spyro when we fight?” “As long as you believe you can defeat him you will.” “I guess but he’s a fully grown dragon. I’m only a hatchling.” “As long as Eclissi isn’t over he is able to be defeated.” ------ “You wanted to see me master?” A red dragoness with glowing orange eyes asked, bowing. “Yes, Dragonfire” Spyro replied, “get a few of the others and search the lands. ‘They’ might be searching for the prisoners. If you find any of ‘them’ or any dragons that oppose me...kill them.” 'As you wish Master" Dragonfire said as she bowed to the corrupt purple dragon before leaving the dark room that was lit only by the acid below. ------- Destiny and Marie had left the large field and were in a forest. Like the rest of the world, everything was dead and dark, leaving any travelers in plain sight of enemies. Marie had sensed for any threats here, but she had found nothing. “Looks like we’re safe here” she said, “But keep your guard up.” As the two continued onwards there was silence. No noise was heard accept for the small gusts of wind. “Where are we anyway?” Destiny asked “I believe that this place was once called Twilight Falls.” “Must have been a pretty place.” Marie nodded in reply, searching once more for any threats. The duo had gone much deeper into the forest around what had been Twilight Falls, so far no threats had come to them. A volcano soon came into view in the distance, or at least what was once a volcano. “That mountain over there was once an active volcano in the Burned Lands. It’s dead now though. The darkness has affected it.” Before Destiny could reply she heard a twig snap. Marie had obviously heard it to; she was sensing the area once more with her Aura abilities. When Marie’s eyes opened, they were filled with fear. “Marie, what’s going on?” Destiny whispered as her mentor turned around to face her. “A corrupted dragon, one of Spyro’s underlings.” Marie whispered back. “Its coming this way.” “What should we do? Should we run?” Marie shook her head and nodded at a large rock formation nearby. “We can hide behind that. They won’t see us here.” Without question, Destiny followed Marie behind the rock formation, just in time before a dragoness came into view. She was pitch black with nine, slightly curved, white horns. Her chest and wing membrane were dark red. Her tail tip was shaped like a scythe, like the tips of her wings. Several white markings covered her body. “We can’t run as long as she’s here.” Marie said to Destiny through telepathy, “We aren’t safe.” Destiny looked at Marie with a ‘then what are we going to do’ look on her face. “I’ll attack her and knock her out, or at least make her flee.” Destiny nodded, she understood. Marie stalked around the rock formation so she was behind the dragoness. The dragoness turned to the rock formation where Destiny was hidden, walking towards it. However, before she could get near it, she was tackled to the ground. Quickly standing up the dragoness turned to her attacker to see Marie behind her, her eyes glowing a silver-blue color, making her look like one of the many feral dragons. “Hmm… an Aura dragon? How strange to see one of the gentlest species as a feral.” Marie didn’t reply to the dragoness’ comment and fired a blast of water from her maw, hitting the dragoness head on. Angered, the dragoness charged at Marie, shadows swarming around her. Marie was hit by the attack but was quickly back on her paws, wasting no time as she fired a large sphere of Aura at her opponent, knocking it back. Destiny could only watch as attacks met and claws collided with scales. The black dragoness was shaking in fatigue from the claw marks and Aura elemental attacks. She was soaked by water. Marie was panting and shaking, several claw and teeth marks covered her body. She had taken the shadow elemental attacks as well as poison and fear attacks. The black dragoness recovered first, lunging at Marie, teeth bared. Destiny launched a beam of light at the dragoness, knocking her to the ground, obviously greatly wounded from the countering element for dark and shadow. Marie had recovered by now and with one more sphere of Aura, the dragoness was down, unconscious. Marie walked over to Destiny and spoke, “We should go. She won’t be down long.” Without hesitation Destiny followed Marie away from the battlefield and deeper into the forest. ------ Hope you enjoyed that chapter
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#64 Posted: 19:49:38 28/01/2011
Good chapters
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#65 Posted: 03:04:46 29/01/2011
Awesome.
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#66 Posted: 03:44:06 29/01/2011
that was cynder i think you should have had marie tell destiny that just a sugestion
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#67 Posted: 18:56:16 31/01/2011 | Topic Creator
Chapter 14
Marie and Destiny had stopped a long distance away from where they had encountered the dragoness and were now resting in an outcove. "Marie..." Destiny began, "who was that?" "Her name is Cynder, she used to be Spyro's enemy in the past and helped him save the world after he freed her from the 'Dark Master'; also known as Malefor. At that time she convinced her love to Spyro and the two became mates. Now, she is his best fighter and general." "Cynder sounds like she was a good dragon in the past." Destiny replied to her mentor's tale. "Yes, but like many others... her mind has become twisted due to this darkness." "Marie, I'm hungry..." Destiny stated to change the subject. "I am too. Luckily this place is crawling with meat and you can use the life element to bring any small fruits or berries back to life." ------ Heather had fallen asleep by now, nightmares haunting her mind. She saw herself standing in darkness, Destiny lie dead in front of her. She had no time to run as razor-sharp claws dug through her scales. Looking up she saw she was surounded by many dragons, some feral, and some corrupted. They all leapt at her, knocking her to the ground. Several elemental attacks then hit her, the life faded from her eyes as she died instantly. ------ Shard had noticed the purple dragoness tossing around in her sleep. Nightmares obviously filled her mind. If only I could help her. But I can't find any way out of here. 'They' can't help me escape, Spyro's underlings are always searching for 'them'. Shard sighed, "I guess we can only wait for a miracle or our doom." ------ Destiny and Marie had caught anough food to eat, at least enough to keep them alive. They were silent as they ate, not wanting to attract any attention. Only after they finished their meal did they speak. "If you don't mind me asking this Marie..." Destiny began, "Why aren't you and Ignitus affected by the darkness?" Marie sighed before she spoke, "Aura dragons like myself are symbols of peace, and balance between good and evil. We are said to be pure enough to repel darkness. Therefore I cannot be efected by it. Ignitus probably hasn't because White Isle is a special place. Plus, he's the Chronicler." "What about me? Can silver dragons be affected by darkness?" "Seeing as your kind posseses the power of light and the power of aura, no, you can't be affected." Good, Destiny thought, that'd be the worst thing to happen. "You've had any dreams or visions Destiny?" "Not since yesterday, no." "I guess we should get going. We need to find better shelter before nightfall. Before the worst of our problems come out." Destiny gulped, "Worst problems?" she questioned fearfully. "Hunters. They're creatures made of shadows that are able to mess up the minds of their victims... or kill them from the inside by getting rid of their life force." Destiny shivered at this, "is there any way to get rid of them? Or at least scare them off?" "The Light element is the only known weapon against them since shadows are darkness and light counters that. Another defencive weapon is the Aura or Balance elements. But they don't do anything but stun them for a few minutes. Light can destroy them completely." Destiny relaxed a bit, knowing that they were at least somewhat safe from these 'Hunters'. "Another thing that is useful is to NOT show fear when they are close by. They only see and hear those who feel fear or any other emotion like it." Destiny nodded, showing that she understood. It was going to be a very stressful journey to shelter. Hope you enjoyed that chapter
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#68 Posted: 19:17:46 31/01/2011
Good chapter
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#69 Posted: 03:33:38 01/02/2011
Nice.
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#70 Posted: 17:02:54 05/02/2011
this is one of my favorite fics althought i wish you'd nupdate it more often
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#71 Posted: 20:38:47 08/02/2011 | Topic Creator
New chapter
Edit 2/24/11: There will be a new chapter (Chapter 16) for this soon don't worry, I'm not letting this fanfic or my others die just yet. Chapter 15 Heather and Destiny quickly ran through the forest, hoping to find shelter before midnight fell. "Do you think we'll make it Marie? Destiny asked through breaths. "Hopefully. Twilight Falls didn't have much shelter if I recall." The duo continued to run, still no sign of shelter at all. "Come on, come on, give us something to hide in, give us something to hide in" Marie growled to herself impatiently “Hey Marie, if Hunters hate light… would fire scare them off? Or at least make them keep their distance if they get to close to us?” “Maybe. Fire is one way to keep away creepy things at night. I think it’ll work with Hunters. Deeper and deeper into the forest Marie and Destiny traveled. Like before, no luck in finding shelter Marie looked up. It was midnight. “Destiny, be brave and careful; it’s midnight” She warned. Destiny nodded, showing she understood as she let all her fear fade away, not wanting to risk anything. A twig snapped nearby, then another, and another. “Hunters…” Marie said in a whisper, not wanting to let anyone hear. A ghostly cry echoed through the darkness of the forest, causing a chill to go down Destiny’s spine. Soon a clearing came into view, Marie and Destiny stayed in the depths of the forest, Destiny trying to hide fear at the sight in the clearing. A dark blue dragon trembled with fear as about fifteen shadow creatures resembling no shape at all circled it. Marie led Destiny away from the scene as the creatures leapt at the dragon, causing it to cry in pain…but only for a moment before dropping dead on the ground; all color from its body and eyes gone The duo had gotten too far away to witness the scene, luckily. “Were those Hunters Marie?” Destiny asked quietly, a slight amount of fear in her voice. Marie nodded, “We should find another path. The Hunters seem to be plentiful here. With no hesitation, Destiny followed alongside Marie, hoping to find another path before they were attacked. “I think we’re almost out of this forest.” Marie said quietly as she and Destiny continued to run. The duo froze as the sound of dead leaves rustling was heard. “Marie is it a dragon or Hunters? Destiny asked. “Hunters, definitely Hunters.” Marie replied. Once more a ghostly cry was heard, three more followed. “Looks like there’s four of them.” Marie stated, “If we run we may be able to avoid them.” The duo began to run again in attempt to get out of the forest. They had almost reached the end of it when Destiny’s cry was heard. “Marie! Look out!” Marie had no time to dodge as two ghostly figures landed near her. ------ Spyro stood in the darkness of the room, silent, as if deep in thought when he heard the sound of claws clicking along stone. Dragonfire ran into the room, bowing to Spyro as she stopped. Spyro turned to his underling, his demonic eyes showing no emotion. “I assume everything went well Dragonfire?” he asked. “Yes master, everything went fine. However, we found Cynder in the forest near Dark Falls.” “And…?” “She was greatly wounded.” Spyro froze at this, for once, his demonic eyes showed an emotion…shock. His strongest fighter and underling had been defeated? He didn’t know of any dragon or creature that would be able to do that other than himself. “Bring her here. Let’s hear what she has to say about this.” Dragonfire nodded and soon returned with a very beat up and limping Cynder “Cynder” Spyro began “might you tell me why you managed to be defeated?” Cynder nodded weakly and spoke. “In Dark forest, I was attacked by one of the many feral dragons.” “You managed to loose to a normal feral dragon?!” Spyro growled in question and anger. “No.” Cynder continued, “It wasn’t just any dragon… it was an Aura dragon.” “An Aura dragon? A very interesting species to find as a feral.” “I also was hit by the light element. I have no clue weather it came from the Aura dragon or another dragon.” There was silence until Spyro spoke. “If you ever see this Aura dragon bring it and any others accompanying it to me. If it refuses to come here… kill its companions.” “As you wish Master.” Hope you enjoyed
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#72 Posted: 19:39:32 11/03/2011 | Topic Creator
Once again, sorry for Double post. I just had a new chapter and I promiced I'd put it up.
Chapter 16 Marie opened her maw, a sphere of aura forming in front of it. “Take this!” She cried, flinging it at the nearest Hunter.” The shadow creature was frozen in place as the attack collided. But, not long after Marie stunned the Hunter more came, swarming around her and Destiny. Destiny shot a beam of light from her maw at three Hunters that came over to her. They vanished completely. Two Hunters jumped onto Marie’s back, a few more following. “Marie!” Destiny cried to the weakening Aura Dragon. Destiny ran towards her mentor but stopped as a faint silver light surrounded Marie. Rearing onto her hind legs Marie’s eyes snapped open, now glowing light blue. With a roar the light around Marie lit up the dead forest; the Aura fury attack throwing the Hunters in different directions. “Come on! While they’re still stunned!” Marie said as she began running; Destiny following close behind. Finally getting out of the forest the duo panted. “Ok, next time, remind me not to let us roam in a forest at night.” Marie said between breaths. “Are we going to encounter any more of them Marie?” Destiny whispered, slight fear in her voice. “Yes” Marie replied as she stopped panting. “But not as many as we encountered back in the forest.” “Lets get beck to finding some kind of shelter.” “right!” ------ A cry of pain echoed through the catacombs, this sent a chill down Shard and Heather’s spines. “I don’t know what to think anymore Shard…” Heather whined. Shard wanted to find a way to cheer Heather up, give her a glint of hope. But one thing stood in the way. A secret he kept. “What do think is happening? Do you think that cry was good or bad?” “Like I said Shard, I don’t know what to think anymore. I’ve lost all hope for us, for the world. Sometimes I just wish I could end it all right now.” “Heather don’t talk like that! There is always hope. Who knows, maybe your child is still alive.” “I guess… but until I find out… I’ll try to restrain myself from ending everything.” Silence filled the ominous darkness of the room. Shard found himself once again deep in thought. Come on you guys, he thought, where are you? ------ “Marie look!” Destiny said, “I think I see a cave up ahead!” Marie looked in front of her and Destiny. Sure enough, a cave was in the distance. “Do you think anyone lives there?” “Lets just hope not. If there is someone living there, hopefully they’re friendly.” As the duo entered the cave Marie’s eyes glowed silver-blue once more as she checked their surroundings. “Sense anyone Marie?” Destiny asked. “No. No one is here.” “Should we stay here? What if someone does live here? We’d be in trouble then.” “We have no choice Destiny. If we don’t stay here tonight…we’ll be killed.” Marie had a point. The Hunters would still be out there. Not to mention the insane and corrupted creatures that traveled the lands. “We should rest,” Marie continued, we must be at full strength. ------ “Come on! Why do I have to do this?!” someone with a male voice said. “Because you’re the only one of us that has the ability to do it you dolt!” someone with a female voice snapped at the male. “Fine…” the male groaned, “I’ll do it.” “Good.” The female said, “now go.” With that, the sound of claws hitting stone was heard, meaning that the mysterious duo had left. ------ Destiny found herself once more in the dark room, alone. “Hello?” She asked to no one. A familiar glowing dragon soon slowly appeared in front of her. “Hello Destiny” The Silver Dragon spirit said as he approached. “Why did you bring me here tonight?” “To warn you” “About what?” “The next dragon you meet… he is not who he seems.” “What do you mean?” “He is a feared assassin, he has been sent to kill or capture both you and your guardian.” “But why?!” “Isn’t it obvious young dragon? Spyro has gotten word from Cynder of your guardian’s presence and power; as well as the fact that someone with the Light Element is with her.” “It’s all my fault… I shouldn’t have interfered.” “You had no choice Destiny. Sometimes we all have to make sacrifices. Weather they result in death or something else.” The Silver Dragon began to fade away as Destiny began to wake up. “Wait! Don’t go!” ------ “Destiny, get up” Marie’s familiar voice came from beside the young silver dragoness. Destiny opened her eyes slowly, shaking her head as she stood up. “It’s morning. We should be heading out now.” Marie said as she looked towards the cave’s exit. “Ok Marie.” Destiny replied as she followed the aura dragoness. The warning given to her in her dream echoing in her mind. “The next dragon you meet…is not what he appears to be.” Hope you enjoyed. Feedback is always welcomed Also. I'd like to say that this may have a sequel. So be ready for that (if it happens) in the far future
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#73 Posted: 20:34:30 11/03/2011
awsome
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#74 Posted: 13:39:20 13/03/2011
Good chapters
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#75 Posted: 08:57:05 15/03/2011
Nice!
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#76 Posted: 15:13:49 15/03/2011
finnaly
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#77 Posted: 07:17:14 16/03/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys. I'm trying to make sure to swich bettween two of my main fanfics to keep their chapters even, so thats why these take awhile.
Chapter 17 Marie and Destiny continued along a barren and destroyed road. "Keep your guard up." Marie warned, "Open areas like this are normaly sites of ambush. Not only that, but Cynder probably has reported us to Spyro, meaning his underlings are probably on the lookout for us." Destiny nodded to show she agreed. ------ "Alright, on my signal attack them. Remember the plan." "Right" "Just don't mess it up or you're going to be dinner tonight Tsunami!" ------ Marie froze in place. "Marie... is there something wrong?" Before Marie could answer four dragons emerged from the shadows and quickly surrounded them. "Get ready Destiny..." Marie said as she defencivly growled at the surrounding dragons. "Well, well, so you're the feral Aura Dragoness..." A blue dragoness with dark pink horns, claws, and wing membrane. Her glowing, purple eyes were a tell-tale sign of her alliance with Spyro. "So what if I am?" Marie replied cockily, still in her defencive pose. "What do you want?" "Nothing much," A yellow dragon with green lightning bolt-shaped markings and glowing, red eyes, began. "Come with us and your hatchling you're hiding there wont be harmed." "Hey! I'm no hatchling!" Destiny growled, her silver scales shining as a glowing, yellow, electrical orb formed in front of her maw. "The Silver Dragon..." a red dragon with dark-grey horns began in disbeleif, "she lives." Marie and Destiny colapsed to the floor, paralyzed as the electric dragon fired a bolt of green electricity at the duo. A green dragon with cracked, white, horns and a club-like tail tip lunged at the paralyzed dragoness' Marie tried to move but thanks to her paralysis was unable to. Before the green dragon could sink his fangs into one of the two a dark blue dragon with light blue wave-like markings tackled it to the ground. "Leave you pathetic excuses for a dragons!" He roared, a whirlpool of water knocking back the quadrant of corrupted dragons, rendering them unconcious. "Thank you" Marie said as her paralysis wore off, "You saved our lives." "It was nothing really." The dragon said "I'm glad I could help you out. Name's Tsunami. I'm a rogue like you two." "Oh, we aren't rogues. We're just traveling the barren lands of the world..." Marie replied, adding the last part on sadly. "I see, mind if I join you? At least for awhile?" Marie tilted her head at this before speaking. "Hang on." see said, turning to Destiny. "Destiny, I sense worry. Something is wrong am I right." She asked the young dragoness telepathicaly. "Yeah" Destiny replied, "I had a dream last night. The Silver Dragon I always meet in dreams or visions told me that the next dragon we would meet... would not be what he says he is." "I see. I guess that means that we should be careful around Tsunami then..." "Probably." "Should we let him join us for a bit?" "If my dream is true... probably not" Marie looked back at Tsunami, speaking without making eye contact with him. "I'm sorry but we're doing fine on our own." She said "Alright then," Tsunami replied, "I'll be on my way then." With that the dragon vanished, leaping through the shadows behind the duo. ------ "Master..." a dragoness began, bowing. "I asume things whent well Nebula?" "Yes master. Tsunami is following them as we speak." "Them? So the dragoness did have company..." "Yes Master and this company was..." "Was what?!" "...was the Silver Dragoness... she lives." Hope you enjoyed that chapter In case some of you don't know... Marie is a semi-immortal. She can die, but not that easily. Example: Stabbing her heart/a vital organ or somehow draining or overusing her powers would kill her. Anything else... probably would not. (She is like this in her original form too) Also, a quick teaser for something possible in the future: Fail banner I know but still, be prepared for that
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#78 Posted: 16:12:11 16/03/2011
OM MY GOSH
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#79 Posted: 19:18:52 16/03/2011
Good chapter
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#80 Posted: 19:51:13 20/03/2011 | Topic Creator
New chapter
It's kinda rushed in my opinion but I hope you enjoy Chapter 18 “WHAT!” Spyro roared in rage, demonic eyes showing anger. “You said you killed the hatchling!” “We thought we did Master.” Nebula replied Spyro just growled “Leave” he said. “Y-Yes Master.” Nebula replied before leaving the room. “So the Silver Dragon is alive…” Spyro said to himself. “I’ll have to change that…” ------- Destiny and Marie had long left the mysterious water dragon, Tsunami, behind as they continued onwards. “Do you think Tsunami is one of Spyro’s underlings Marie?” Destiny asked. “No. If he had been his eyes would have been glowing blue. They were not.” Marie replied. Destiny thought back to her dream, in case the silver dragon had said anything else important. She found nothing. Marie seemed to be deep in thought as she walked. Destiny chose not to disturb her. ------ What is this feeling? This sense of dread? Marie thought to herself. Something’s going to happen soon, but what? Marie looked at destiny who was looking around, apparently seeing if there were any dangers. Maybe I’m just paranoid. That Tsunami fellow was suspicious after all. ------ It was nightfall as the duo walked in silence. “Marie we should find shelter.” Destiny said, breaking the silence. “We don’t want to repeat the event that happened last night after all.” “I guess you’re right Destiny.” Marie replied, “the last thing we need is to deal with those things again. A tree came into view, the hollow area in the base of the tree looked big enough to two dragons. “That looks like a good place to stay for the night Marie.” Destiny said pointing the hollow out. Marie nodded in response to show that she agreed. ------- The duo, by now, had long fallen asleep, unaware of the presence approaching them. Tsunami slipped out of a shadow, nearing the sleeping dragons, teeth bared. So peaceful, He thought, Shame they won’t get to see their fates. With that, Tsunami lunged at the duo, ready to sink his teeth into their scales. ------- Although asleep, Marie’s aura abilities were active, allowing the dragoness to know of any presences. A familiar aura showed close nearby, one tainted with darkness. The dragon shown red in Marie’s mind, it was lunging at Destiny. Before Tsunami could sink his teeth into Destiny’s side he was blasted with a blinding beam of aura. The power of it knocking him back. Destiny’s eyes opened at the sound of Tsunami’s painful roar and quickly stood up. Tsunami recovered soon after Destiny stood up and flew at Marie who had gotten airborne. The aura dragoness lazily moved to the side, easily avoiding Tsunami’s attempt to hit her. Destiny had flown to her side as Tsunami turned around to face them. He launched a blast of shadow energy at Destiny who easily countered it with a light beam; hitting the water dragon hard and stunning him. Tsunami recovered from his temporary paralysis in time to swing the scythe on his tail across Marie’s left side, making the dragoness flinch in pain. Tsunami charged at Marie, shadow energy forming in his maw as water surrounded his body. The force of the water stunned Marie long enough for Tsunami to bite her neck with the shadow energy in his mouth before kicking her to the ground. Marie hit the ground hard, blood running out of her wounds. Tsunami turned his head to Destiny, an evil smirk crossing his maw. Destiny charged at her opponent in anger, psychic energy surrounded her body as white hot flames appeared in her maw. Tsunami, due to his combo attack was stunned for a moment, taking the double-elemental attack. He quickly recovered and flew quickly at Destiny; who had formed a sphere of aura in front of her maw. Destiny’s attack hit Tsunami’s wing head on, knocking him off balance long enough to launch a bolt of lightning at him; making hi fall out of the air onto the ground where he was hit with the power of light and knocked unconscious. Destiny went over to Marie who was struggling to stand. “Marie…” she began, as she helped her mentor up, “You ok?” “I’ll be fine Destiny,” Marie groaned, now on her feet, “I just need rest for now.” “That’s probably best” Destiny replied as she led the aura dragoness into the hollow to rest. They know I'm alive... She thought, I must be ready for anything ------- Claws were heard weakly clicking along stone, making Spyro turn around to face the dragon that had entered. Tsunami collapsed on the floor in front of the corrupted dragon, dipping his head in a weak bow. “I see you failed to capture the Aura dragon and kill the silver one Tsunami.” Spyro said, growling quietly. “I am sorry Master.” Tsunami said, “That aura dragoness and the silver one are no ordinary dragons.” “Really now?” “Their attacks… they’re more powerful than they should be.” “Is that so?” “Yes Master.” There was silence. “Get out of my sight you worthless dragon!” Spyro growled, breaking it. “Y-yes master.” Tsunami quickly replied, limping quickly out of the room. I seem to be underestimating them. Spyro thought looking at the dark sky above. No matter. If I can’t kill them now… I’ll kill them when they arrive. Hope you enjoyed it
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#81 Posted: 19:55:24 20/03/2011
AWESOME
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#82 Posted: 22:11:48 20/03/2011
Good chapter
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#83 Posted: 22:26:27 25/03/2011
Awesome.
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#84 Posted: 06:41:42 31/03/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys
Also, I've decited that my other fanfic 'Dawn of Darkness' is a semi-prequal to this so I'll be updating it too. Anyhow, here's the next chapter Chapter 19 Marie and Aurora had by now woken up and were continuing down the barren and abandoned road they had strayed from the previous night. "I don't think we'll be ambushed this time." Marie stated as the duo pushed onwards. "I sence no one around here." "If Spyro knows I'm alive we should get out of the open as soon as we can. Tsunami won't be the last of his underlings we'll run into." Marie nodded to show that she agreed. Destiny was right after all. ------- Heather lie in her cell. She had not moved from where she was laying for the past three days. Shard wasn't sure why the purple dragoness hadn't moved and was worried about her. Was it because of her lonliness? Maybe because she'd lost so much blood? Or the fact that all hope was going to end? He wanted to help her but how? Shard opened his mouth to speak to the dragoness in front of him when the sound of claws could be heard. He looked up to see Hope walking over to Heather's cell; making the dragoness look away. "Well now Heather I have some good news and some bad news for you." the Psychic dragoness said in her evil voice. "What? That I might as well kill myself because Eclissi is almost here?" Heather snapped, "I know that already so why don't you just do it now!" Hope, for a moment, was shocked by the dragoness' remark but quickly returned to her evil personality. "What's the fun in that? Oh, and you might want to know this..." Heather scoffed and replied, "and what might 'this' be?" "Oh nothing," Hope replied, "just the fact that... your annoying daughter is alive and we are hunting both her and an aura dragoness down." "Destiny's alive?!" "For now you pathetic dragoness... for now. Don't expect her to save you, she'll be long gone before she even reaches here." With that Hope laughed evily as she left the dungeons and the two prisoners behind. -------- Marie was focusing greatly, wanting to check for any signs of trouble. She had found none. "Marie how much longer until Eclissi?" Destiny questioned, breaking the silence between her and her mentor. "Not long. At the rate we're going... we ight run out of time." "Maybe that's what Spyro wants. He wants us to run out of time as we fight to survive out here... then finish us off when he is at full strength. "Maybe. But that is why we must hurry. The sooner we leave this road... the sooner we can avoid ambush." Hope you enjoyed
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#85 Posted: 06:49:58 31/03/2011
Nice chapter, I'm really enjoying this story.
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#86 Posted: 06:52:59 31/03/2011
Good chapter
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#87 Posted: 15:12:54 01/04/2011
YAY MORE CHAP
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#88 Posted: 19:02:06 06/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the wait, here's a new chapter
Chapter 20 Marie and Destiny had by now reached the roads end; now at a fork. Straight ahead would lead them to a steep cliff and into bone-chilling rapids. Left would lead the through a canyon and right would lead them through a forest. “Which way should we go Marie?” Destiny questioned. “Left, through the canyon” Marie replied, “it’ll be safer than the forest and this road.” Agreeing with Marie the duo wandered away from the road and into the canyon. “Hey Marie,” Destiny began “How much longer until we reach The Well of Souls?” “At our pace, hopefully a day before Eclissi begins.” Marie responded. There was silence. “Marie, why does Eclissi happen? Were you around when the first Eclissi began? “I was not around when the first Eclissi happened, I was born when Malefor, the Dark Master, created his army.” “Do you know why Eclissi happens though?” “From the many legends I read as a hatchling Eclissi first began when a dragon that was worse than Malefor himself was attempting to rule over the realms. He called himself… Falcon and with the help of a strange crystal and the Night of Eternal Darkness… he created the day we fear as Eclissi. His plan with this day was to cloak the world in darkness forever, and claim himself as a king. Pureblood Aura Dragons, like myself, sacrificed their lives to defeat him and succeeded. However, they could not stop the crystal used to create Eclissi. That is why it happens today.” As Marie finished the legend she had told silence, once more, came between her and Destiny as they continued forwards. Night had fallen as Marie and Destiny continued onwards. “We should find shelter Marie.” Destiny said bluntly. “I think I see a cave over there. We can stay in it tonight.” The duo of dragons had made their way into the cave and were now lying on the ground. “Marie.” Destiny began “Yes?” Marie replied, not opening her closed eyes. “I’ve been wondering something.” “What is it?” “I remember something from long ago… I think it had something to do with a few of Spyro’s underlings and a female purple dragon… I think she was my mother. “She was Destiny, but like you already know… Spyro wants you dead. “So he sent his underlings after me and captured my mother?” “Yes, and they almost succeeded in killing you… your mother got in the way and you only ended up falling unconscious. That’s when Ignitus and I saved you.” “I see.” Destiny replied closing her eyes, “goodnight Marie.” ------ Again Destiny found herself in another dream A voice came from somewhere, making destiny turn. “Hello?” She questioned, hoping to see the Silver dragon that she spoke with. There was no reply. “Maybe I’m hearing things.” The voice came again. “Alright, whoever you are come out! I know you’re around here!” A blurry figure appeared a short way in front of her, it’s lavender eyes the only noticeable feature. Destiny neared the figure before her to see pain and fear in its eyes. The figure spoke only two words once she stopped. “Help…me…” With that the scene began to fade, bringing Destiny back to reality. ------- Destiny opened her eyes, it was morning. She turned to see Marie was not there and stood up, walking back to the cave entrance. Sure enough, there was her mentor, looking at the cloudless sky, deep in thought. “Marie?” Destiny said in question as she approached her mentor. “Hmm?” Marie asked as she snapped out of her thoughts, “Destiny what is it?” “Well I had a dream last night, I saw a blurred figure with lavender eyes and it was in pain and fear. It said two words when I came over to it; ‘Help… me…’” “That’s quite a strange dream. Do you think the figure is the dragon you mentioned in your first meeting with that silver dragon?” “I think so. I don’t get it, first it says ‘Get out of my head’ to something or someone, then it asks me to help it. How can I help it If I don’t even know who I’m talking too?” “Not sure. But the answer will be revealed eventually.” ------ Two figures clashed with each other, power evenly matched. “Just give up” the first figure hissed. “Never!” The second one cried weakly as it stood up, blood slowly dripping from his wounds. “Fine, then I’ll just kill you!” The first figure snapped, lunging at the second one, making blood flow into its mouth. The second figure collapsed weakly onto the ground painfully. “I…will not…give…ugh…” With that, it fainted Hope you enjoyed that chapter Oh, and the legend Marie spoke of is an event in a comic I'm making for somewhere else.
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#89 Posted: 19:14:39 06/04/2011
coooooooool
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#90 Posted: 06:39:34 11/04/2011 | Topic Creator
New chapter
Chapter 21 With every day that went by... the closer the day of Eclissi came. Marie knew this and it struck fear into her. She and Destiny were running out of time, by the placement of the moons... they had been traveling for longer than she thought. "We're running out of time aren't we Marie?" Destiny asked, knowing something was wrong with her mentor. Marie nodded, "I'm afraid so Destiny." she replied sadly, "Lets just hope we don't have a run in with any more of Spyro's underlings." ------ Heather had not spoken since the news; Shard was worried. "Heather are..." he began but stopped when the purple dragoness spoke, fear filled her voice. "It's coming..." she said, "I know it is." "You mean Eclissi?" "Yes. I never thought I'd see the effects it has ever again;but now I have to." "You think your daughter will make it in time?" "I don't know. Spyro probably has already sent some of his underlings and comanders out to search for them." "I guess... we just have to hope" ------ Pain, all he could feel is pain as his opponent mercilessly attacked him. He knew he couldn't surrender to him but what could he do in his battered state. Struggling to stand he got to his feet, preparing to launch a fireball at the one before him. His attack was easily blocked by the opponent who spoke, "Pathetic. do you really think you can stop me?" "I won't let you do this!" "I'm afraid you have no choice" "You won't... you won't get away with this... you will be stopped." "You do realize that if they destroy me before you're out of the way they'll destroy you as well?" "I don't care! If I have to die to stop you... so be it!" ------ Streaks of red and blue lightning crossed through the clouds above, casting an eerie glow across the dead landscape. "Be careful Destiny" Marie warned "This place is known for the deaths of many. The lightning streaks above have a minds of their own and will sometimes strike a passerby, instanly killing them." "How will I know when one will hit?" "When you hear an ear-peircing crack in the sky... quickly jump to the opposite side from where it came from. If it came from the right, jump to the left and so on." "Ok Marie..." With the warning in her mind Destiny followed Marie as she crossed the dangerous valley. Hoping that she would survive." Hope you enjoyed that chapter (I promice that they'll get longer and have mor action soon) For anyone who is curious... this is what I picture the world to look like in this story:
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#91 Posted: 08:01:31 11/04/2011
Good chapters
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#92 Posted: 16:04:10 11/04/2011
AWSOME
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#93 Posted: 21:34:17 21/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the wait, heres a new chapter
Chapter 22 So far Destiny and Marie had managed to avoid the deadly lightning above them, continuing onwards. Destiny heard the tell-tale crack from above and leapt to the right as a red fork of lightning struck the ground where she had once been. Ok, that was too close… she thought, running to catch up with Marie. The duo had picked up their pace and were now running through the plains towards the valley ahead. However, as they were about to leave the deadly plains… the ear-peircing crack was heard again. “Destiny! Move!” Marie cried as the lightning bolt came down. Destiny followed Marie’s warning and sprinted towards safety. As she reached the safety of the valley she heard a cry of pain. The silver dragoness turned to see Marie, unmoving and burned, lying on the ground. “Marie!” She yelled, running to the aura dragoness’ side. Marie opened her eyes slowly, groaning as she did so. “Marie you’re alive!” Destiny cried happily. “Did you really think I’d die that easily?” Marie asked cockily in response, struggling to stand, “Lets get out of this death zone before anything else happens.” ------- Cries of agony were heard from above, striking fear into Heather and Shard. “What do you think is going on up there Heather?” “I don’t know Shard. But whatever is going on… it doesn’t sound good.” “If Eclissi causes corrupted and evil creatures to gain ultimate power… you think that’s what is happening to Spyro?” “Maybe but I’ve heard the things he says up there. Sometimes he’s yelling at someone but then replies to himself, its strange Shard.” ------- Marie looked at the sky, night had by now fallen. “Marie, how many more miles until we reach The Well of Souls?” “We have quite a ways to go Destiny, and not much time.” “Well I’m afraid you won’t be going any further, your little journey ends here” Marie and Destiny turned around, behind them was a large shadow dragon, an X-shaped scar crossed his eye and several more covered his body. However, the most noticeable features were the red dragon mark on his left side and his pure red eyes. “Allow me to introduce myself… the name is X, remember it” “Let me guess, you were sent to stop us?” Marie asked, not intimidated. “Honestly, do you think you’ll win? It’s two against one.” The dragon, now known as X only smirked. “Foolish Aura dragon, do you really think I came alone?” “Well yes, actually, seeing as how we only battle one of you at a time.” Destiny replied in Marie’s place. “Ignorant hatchling.” X scoffed, “why don’t we take out you first?” From the shadows of the darkened valley emerged many dragons, Marie and Destiny were surrounded. “Kill them!” X roared in command. Marie and Destiny has no time to attack or run as their opponents fired an onslaught of attacks at them. Marie, being still weak from getting hit by the deadly lightning earlier, was the first to fall, unable to withstand the attacks that hit her… she fell unconscious. Destiny, despite her size, was able to withstand the many attacks, though she was barely awake. “Impressive, I see why Master fears your power” X said, pretending to be impressed. “Grab her; leave the aura dragoness for the ferals!” Destiny stood her ground as best she could as she struggled against unconsciousness. The last thing she saw was a large silhouette. Then, nothing. Hope you enjoyed that chapter
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#94 Posted: 21:47:45 21/04/2011
Nice! These new chapters are good! Sorry I don't pay much attention to the Fan Fiction section anymore.
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#95 Posted: 07:26:24 22/04/2011
Good chapter
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#96 Posted: 10:03:30 22/04/2011
this is AMAZING
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#97 Posted: 20:43:30 12/05/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry for the wait guys, school is bombarding me with homework T_T
Chapter 23 Destiny opened her eyes to find herself in a cave, Marie was lying next to her, still unconscious. The young dragoness quickly stood up, yelping at the pain coming from her hind leg. “I wouldn’t move around if I were you.” A gruff, yet calm voice said. Turning, Destiny saw a large, green dragon with a red underside and a dark green stripe down its back. A deep scar crossed his left eye. “Who are you?” Destiny asked the dragon, hoping it meant no harm. “I have no real name. I am, however, known as Rogue.” “Do you live here by yourself?” “For now. Eventually I will find somewhere else to live.” “Rogue, were you the one who saved us from those corrupted dragons?” Rogue nodded in response to Destiny’s question. “How did you manage to take them all out? I mean there were thirty of them!” “You’d be surprised how strong you get when you travel the land as a loner.” Marie groaned from behind Destiny, drawing the said dragon and Rogue’s attention. “Where…?” she muttered weakly. “A cave. Rogue lives here.” Marie looked at the large dragon before her, “Oh.” She said, “Nice to meet you.” Rogue nodded in response before speaking. “If you don’t mind me asking… why were those dragons attacking you?” Destiny looked at Marie as if to ask if it was ok to tell Rogue of their goal. The aura dragoness gave her a look that said ‘yes’. “It’s a long story really” Destiny began, “You see, we’re on our way to the Well of Souls to defeat Spyro before a day known as Eclissi when he is more powerful. His underlings are after us for that reason.” “You wish to stop Spyro alone?!” Rogue questioned in surprise, “impossible! Not even the strongest of dragons would be able to stop him, let alone a hatchling.” “I’m the prophesied Silver Dragon, it’s my destiny. If I don’t do anything the world will be shrouded in darkness forever! I can’t let that happen! I don’t care if I die doing it I WILL stop Spyro!” Destiny recoiled at the fierceness of her own voice, “I-I’m sorry I snapped like that.” She said. Rogue looked between Destiny and Marie. “If you wish to get to the Well of Souls from here… there is an underground path that will lead you to it. It’s dangerous but it’ll help.” “Thank you Rogue.” Marie said “We’ll set out right now, we’re racing against time now, anything will help.” “Very well. Come with me.” ------ “Come on where are you guys?” Shard growled in annoyance. “Who are you talking about?” Shard recoiled, he’d forgotten Heather could hear him. “N-no one Heather.” He stammered. “Tell me now Shard.” Shard hesitated before speaking, “I’m sorry, I can’t say.” Heather sighed, “fine, have it your way, I could have helped.” With that the purple dragoness lie on the ground once more, the solemn expression she had since Shard heard about Eclissi returning. ------ Rogue had led Marie and Destiny to a large stone, strange markings covered it. “This leads into the underground path.” He said as he moved the stone away. “Go through here and you’ll end up not too far from the Well.” “Thank you Rogue.” Marie said. As Destiny and Marie entered the underground path they heard Rogue’s voice. “Promise me that you’ll try to change this dark world.” “We will Rogue. We will.” With that Rogue moved the stone back into place, leaving Marie and Destiny to walk through the dim pathway. Maybe their chance of reaching the Well before Eclissi was higher now. ------ Rogue lie on the ground, thinking of the two dragoness’ he had helped. Footsteps came louder and louder, causing him to stand up in alert. A large yellow dragoness with a grey underbelly and a blue backstripe and horns came into view, her red eyes glowing with insanity. Rogue backed up once he saw tell-tale sign of Spyro’s alliance. “Hello there feral.” The dragoness said, voice filled with malice, “I hear you know a silver dragon and Aura dragon…where are they?” “I know neither of the dragons you’re talking about. I am a loner, I make no alliances with others.” “Is that so?” the dragoness asked, strutting in circles around Rogue. “Yes. It is so.” The dragoness stopped and looked Rogue in the eyes, making him recoil in fear. “I have ways of making you speak feral.” The Dragoness said. “I’m telling you, I know no such dragons. Silver dragons are a myth and Aura dragons, purebloods and hybrids were wiped from existence generations ago.” The dragoness glared at Rogue harder, “You will tell me!” Rogue cried in pain, cringing as he collapsed onto the ground. “They’re… heading for the Well of Souls… that’s all I know…” He stammered. The dragoness looked away from Rogue, smirking in satisfaction. “You’re lucky I’m letting you live feral… I’m not normally merciful.” With that the dragoness took off, leaving Rogue on the ground, paralyzed in fear. --------- Spyro stood alone, looking at the sky, thoughts ran through his mind, causing pain. Claws could be heard hitting stone, snapping the corrupt dragon out of his trance. The strange dragoness bowed to her master. “I brought news of the Aura and Silver dragons.” She said. “And what might this news be Spite.” Spyro asked in his usual emotionless voice. “Like you guessed they are indeed heading here to stop you.” “Anything else?” “No master, the dragon I gained this information from wouldn’t say all he knew. He also managed to take out X’s group in one attack.” “And you didn’t bring him with you?! He could have been just what we needed for finding all the whereabouts for the silver and aura dragons!” Spite backed up as Spyro came closer to her. “You foolish weakling! You don’t even bring the dragon that would be useful back with you!” “Master…” “Don’t call me Master, you’re useless to me now!” Spite had no time to react as Spyro lunged at her. His teeth gripped around her neck, his claws tore into her chest. A weak cry was all Spite could make… before she fell to the ground motionless. Spyro shook the freshly spilled blood off his claws and walked back into the darkness of the chamber, once more falling into a trance. ------ He collapsed on the ground, blood quickly came out of his wounds. A dark claw descended down on him, pinning him to the floor. “You ready to give up? Or would you rather slowly die at my mercy?” “I won’t give up until you’re stopped!” the pinned figure said to its opponent. “Very well, if you want to die fighting… you’ve made the wrong choice.” Once more attacks clashed with each other, each one evenly matched in power. Hope you enjoyed
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#98 Posted: 15:00:26 13/05/2011
awsome
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#99 Posted: 00:03:41 14/05/2011
Nice, can't wait till seeing the rest.
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#100 Posted: 00:06:42 14/05/2011
This is awesome, nice job on it!
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