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#51 Posted: 23:58:58 12/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Oooh you didn't? Is she not supposed to be in this one?
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#52 Posted: 00:11:48 13/10/2010
heres chpt 4
Chapter 4 Another apology and Sparx finally goes mad “Fergor’e ,Minius patrol daily” Ripto said “Fine” Fergor’e replied and they both turned and ran out. ______ “I need something to break”. Elora said. She realized she still had Hunters bow. She broke it right in two. Right down the middle “That didn’t help much” She said “That was my ONLY bow! It cost me 3 hundred gems” Hunter said “So? Moneybags can just price 300 hundred more..” She said then turned and left “Again never seen her that upset “ Zoe said Hunter ran after Elora….Cynder’s heart was racing Spyro could sense it “Are you okay”? He asked her. “Yes” she replied. Then Sparx went off into a huge rant that was worst then the last….. At the end of the argument (That Cynder and Zoë stayed out of) Sparx stormed out grumbling under his breath…Zoe flew after him
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#53 Posted: 00:20:00 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Awesome! Great Chapter!
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#54 Posted: 00:35:06 13/10/2010
thnx
yea she is i just didnt notice it was her when i first read though
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#55 Posted: 01:01:51 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Oh, okay!
Chapter 5: Heart Break Elora sat on a rock in the thick forest and cried for a very long time. "I---just can't believe---*sniff*-- that he didn't-- love me!" She sobbed. With her blurry vision she stared up at the blue sky. Then she got angry again. "I'm gonna give him what he deserves!" She growled. ___________________ Spyro and Cynder sat in the cave. He felt sorry for her and gave her a kiss. "Don't listen to what Elora says, okay? She's just some psycho ex," he comforted her. Cynder laughed a little bit. "Heh, I can tell," Suddenly she clutched her stomach and groaned in pain. "Cynder? You okay?" Spyro asked, concerned. She nodded. "Yeah... False alarm," she grinned weakly. All of a sudden Elora burst into the cave and grabbed Spyro by the throat. Cynder screamed. "Don't!!!" She shrieked, paw over her mouth. Elora was very angry. She dragged him out of the cave and took him in a little woods behind it. Unable to move from the pain, Cynder sat there and cried, hoping nothing would happen to him. Elora shoved Spyro against the rock. "Spyro, I'm gonna do to you what I should have a LOOONNGG time ago!!" She growled and rose her hand. Spyro winced, bracing himself for the horrible pain. But instead, she put down her hand, put it on his shoulder and kissed him right on the mouth. Spyro gasped, trying to get away, but for some reason he didn't want to. She continued to kiss him for about two minutes. Finally they broke apart. Spyro was speechless. "Don't get me wrong, I'm still pretty pissed at you!" Elora said angrily. Spyro was extremely confused. So did she love him or hate him? "Dang, mixed emotions much? What are you, menstruating?!" He joked. She shot him an evil glare. He stopped laughing. "DON'T tell that Gothic girlfriend of yours about this, okay?? 'Cause I WILL find you..." She said and walked away. Spyro ran back inside to Cynder. "What was that all about, Spyro??" She asked, worried. "Oh, don't worry about it!" He said nervously. Then he added, "Urm... I'm gonna get some fresh air, okay?" and before she could answer he ran outside. He found a tree and sat under it, ready to doze off. But just before he could fall asleep, something hit him very hard on the back of the head and he was out cold.... |
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#56 Posted: 01:04:07 13/10/2010
omgz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (o mi godzilla)
chapter 6.... away we go....
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#57 Posted: 01:06:26 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Awesome! Thnx!
Lol we're already on Chapter 6!!! ! |
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#58 Posted: 01:16:12 13/10/2010
yep weird huh
*starts chapter 6*
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#59 Posted: 01:24:26 13/10/2010
Chapter 6: Spyro wakes up
Spyro awoke to a riptoc shaking him “Uggggggg what happened?” “Where the **** am I?” asked to no one. Fergor’e came into the light. “I am Fergor’e and this is Minius my brother” Fergor’e said Now Fergor’e was the prettiest female riptoc and she was smart. But her Brother Minius wasn’t the smartest fruit in the basket. “We are servers of Ripto” Minius said “RIPTO??” Spyro imminently jumped up “I haven’t heard that name in over 15 years”! “Thought he was dead” Spyro exclaimed “Nope” Fergor’e said After about 20 minuets Spyro figured out what was going on (Wow….after that long?) He put up a fight a strong one but escaped As he flew to his cave he saw Sparx’s light he also saw Zoë’s twinkle. He smiled as he past them when he got home he said “Cynder im home”!
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#60 Posted: 01:24:55 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Gr8t!
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#61 Posted: 01:25:09 13/10/2010
NO spyro! ima hooked
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#62 Posted: 01:25:59 13/10/2010
i am 2
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#63 Posted: 01:53:47 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7(already? ) : Something's Not Right
Spyro looked around but he could not find Cynder anywhere. "Cynder?! Where are you??" He called, getting really worried. He ran around, but didn't find her anywhere. "Elora!!" He thought and ran outside. He found her hanging out with Hunter. "Elora! What'd you do to Cynder??" He ordered, angrily. She raised one eyebrow. "What are you talking about?!" She said. Spyro didn't know what was going on. Then he remembered: "Ripto!!" He bolted in the sky and headed back to Ripto's Chateau. He burst through one of the windows and wandered in the halls until he found her imprisoned in a cage. "Cynder!!" He sighed and ran to her. She was crying. "Spyro! Some two weird lizard things caught me and drug me here!!" She cried. All of a sudden they heard footsteps. Spyro hid behind a golden statue of Ripto and listened to the voices. "Hehe I think this is Spyro's mate Boss! She looks pretty big in the stomach-area..." One of the voices was Fergor’e. "Hmm.. Good work, Fergor'e! Wh-What are you doing Minius?!?" Ripto asked, staring at him. Minius was staring at Cynder, panting. "Sorry Boss!! But.. Damn she's hot!!" He said. Ripto slapped him across the face. "Don't let your hormones get in the way of our plan, you idiot!!" Ripto said angrily. "Yah! C'mon, let's kill this b****!! Before she can have Spyro's kids!" Fergor'e said. Spyro jumped out from behind the statue. "Ripto!! You lay your hands off her!!" He growled. Ripto stared at Spyro in bewilderment. "Spyro old buddy! Man, have you--- grown!!" He said nervously. Spyro opened his mouth to say something, but Cynder roared in pain. "MY WATER BROKE!!!" She screamed. Spyro ran over by here. "Hang in there dear!!" He said, grabbing the bars of the cage. "Oh no!! We're too late!" Fergor'e groaned. Then she added, "Let's get out of here," "No way!! I wanna watch this!!" Minius said, panting. Ripto grabbed his arm. "C'mon you pervert!! You don't want to watch this!!" He said and they left. |
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#64 Posted: 01:57:08 13/10/2010
LOLD SO ****ING HARD
gonna start chapter 8 2marrow after school
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#65 Posted: 01:59:48 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Alright, awesome!
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#66 Posted: 02:11:53 13/10/2010
Good story so far!
Spyro is a victim of love again... |
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#67 Posted: 02:13:11 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol yesh he is!
That's a crappy birthing place! In a cage lol! |
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#68 Posted: 02:19:45 13/10/2010
OMG that is to funny!!! this story is just getting better and better
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#69 Posted: 02:20:37 13/10/2010
where her mate cant get to her
im trying to decide wreather or not to do the next chapter on sparx hrmmm?
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#70 Posted: 02:21:41 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
You can do whatever you want, you're one of the writers lol!
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#71 Posted: 02:22:03 13/10/2010
nice idear nobody gives sparx da plot anymore any ways, although i did
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#72 Posted: 02:22:11 13/10/2010
then i will (might b short)
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#73 Posted: 02:23:36 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
That's just fine!
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#74 Posted: 02:24:52 13/10/2010
im gonna start......
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#75 Posted: 02:25:47 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay!
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#76 Posted: 02:31:51 13/10/2010
ooo jeperody is on be back in 30 min
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#77 Posted: 02:31:59 13/10/2010
Lol, a few years later:
Child: mommy, where have i born? It's for school project. Cynder: in a cage, dear. Child: WTF??? . Ok and where has born my brother? Cynder: in your room, dear. Child: and who is my daddy? Cynder: he works in a restaurant... Child: ... and cooks food? Cynder: no, he tastes new dishes. Child: . Is there anything normal in our family? Cynder: nope... Child: why? Cynder: dunno. Ask LTU Spyro. He did all this. Child: *faces me* Are you my father? Me: what? No! Why the heck did you thought like that? Child: but you have Spyro name, so you must be my father! Me: duh, look at the top of this page. It says: "darkSpyro". And half of the users have a username with word "Spyro". Child: wow i got a lot of daddy's. Me: i had enough! *picks eraser* Child: what? Noo! Don't erase me! I promise i be a good... *gets erased* Now stay out before i erase You! The End??? Dum, dum, dum, dummmmmmmmmmmm... |
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#78 Posted: 02:33:43 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Wow, awesome!!!
Lol a fanfic.. within a fanfic... |
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#79 Posted: 02:36:19 13/10/2010
Hehe, thanks. More after 20 chapters
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#80 Posted: 02:57:58 13/10/2010
LOLZ just started cht 8
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#81 Posted: 02:59:12 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Great!
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#82 Posted: 03:01:34 13/10/2010
Awesomez!
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#83 Posted: 03:08:45 13/10/2010
almost done
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#84 Posted: 03:12:44 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Can't wait lol..
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#85 Posted: 03:21:32 13/10/2010
done
Chapter 8 Sparx Sparx was upset. He came to stop at a cliff. Tears fell down his cheeks. He thought he was alone but Zoë was behind a tree. She remberd after they kicked sorceress ass she and princess Ami dueled for Sparx’s affections. She ended out winning (Ami was hospitalized for a month) But by the time she had won Sparx was already here. She secretly liked this new version of Sparx. Something soared over head “Probably hunting for HER again” Sparx murmured Zoe looked up to see a purple figure glide overhead She stepped out from behind the tree. Breaking a branch in her way. Sparx heard this he whirled around he smiled “Hello” He said he motioned for her to come over “Hi” She said. After a few minutes they had a conversation going. A shooting star dashed across the night sky “Make a wish” Sparx said Zoe did there hands joined “It just did” Zoe said Sparx looked down at there hands Zoe blushed. Sparx noticed . “Lets go back to the cave” Sparx said as they got back Sparx felt something seriously wrong…..
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#86 Posted: 03:24:37 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Ooooh, I think Sparx was going to get some action lol!
Chapter 9 will be up tomorrow, after school! |
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#87 Posted: 03:26:15 13/10/2010
awesome!!! *waits*
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#88 Posted: 03:28:13 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol you're gonna be waiting a looooong time!!
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#89 Posted: 03:30:33 13/10/2010
*waits for a loooooonnnngggg time*
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#90 Posted: 10:16:47 13/10/2010
*60 years later* Have you done it yet?
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#91 Posted: 12:27:50 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Ha-hah nope!
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#92 Posted: 18:19:14 13/10/2010
Please hurry, because Grim Reaper said i have only 12 hours to live
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#93 Posted: 19:42:15 13/10/2010
paitients young one patieeents.
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#94 Posted: 21:22:55 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
OH NOEZ LTU!!
Don't worry, here it is! Chapter 9: Odd Place To Give Birth "PUSH CYNDER, PUSH!!!" Spyro yelled, one paw reached in on her shoulder and the other arm wrapped around the bars of the cage. "I AM!! THIS ISN'T AS EASY AS IT LOOKS!!!" Cynder yelled back. Sweat was rolling down her head. Spyro looked around. Ripto was walking down the hall. "We need someone to help! Ripto!!!" Spyro called to him. Ripto gulped. "NOT ME!!!" He said and ran away. "Great.. Sorry dear, but you're gonna have to do this all by yourself," Spyro sighed. "I ALREADY DO EVERYTHING BY MYSELF!!! YOU'RE TOO DAMN LAZY TO DO ANYTHING!!!" She screamed. "Ooooh, burn!" A voice said. Spyro whipped around and saw Minius staring at them. "GO AWAY!!!" Spyro raged. "Awww!!" Minius groaned and walked away. "God! What a freakin' pervert!" Spyro said to himself. "UH, HELLO?!? I'M GIVING BIRTH HERE, DAMMIT!!!" Cynder yelled. "Oh, right!" Spyro laughed. "YOU'RE GONNA BE LAUGHING WHEN I STRANGLE YOU TO DEATH!!!!" She screamed. "Hey! Calm down! I didn't do anything--" "WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DIDN'T DO ANYTHING?!? You're the one who got me pregnant in the first place!! I was like, 'You better put protection on', and you were like, 'Oh no! I won't get you preggo!'" Cynder said loudly. Meanwhile Ripto, Fergor'e, and Minius sat behind the door laughing their heads off. Finally, Cynder laid the eggs. There were 3 of them. Spyro couldn't believe his eyes. "What?! Three?!" He gasped, staring at them. "And do you have a problem with that??" Cynder raised her eyebrow. Spyro gulped. "No! No! It's fine he-heh!" ________________________________ So that's Chapter 9! Good so far? |
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#95 Posted: 21:57:48 13/10/2010
great. thys ys just gettin silly
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#96 Posted: 22:02:08 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Lol this is supposed to be a funny story!
But it won't be like this through all of it though... |
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#97 Posted: 22:08:28 13/10/2010
yea its hilariouse!!! way to funny (if thats possible)
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#98 Posted: 23:24:55 13/10/2010
i gotta start 10 after i getz bac from soccer practice
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#99 Posted: 23:29:36 13/10/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay! Awesomez!
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#100 Posted: 23:45:21 13/10/2010
hehe cool
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