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#51 Posted: 10:42:26 18/07/2010
Aw, poor Bone, wanting to be pure so Spyro might trust him... and Convexity is evil, we all know that. Poor little guy. Please continue!
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#52 Posted: 10:46:34 18/07/2010
yes pure bone bad conexicty
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#53 Posted: 19:35:56 18/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I feel a trick coming on.
Chapter 12 Ocean Island Bone flew across the ocean and started hovering above it. He was hearing noises. Just then, one had been a small cry had been a huge ARGHH! Shouting and other strange noises were heard. Bone looked up to see pirate ships passing by. Bone looked around the huge purple ocean and then saw a small island off in the distance. He flew towards it, when he realized that the island was not small at all. This island was huge and seemed deserted. Bone slowly flew down towards the tropical island and landed on its beach. The island was quiet, palm trees were everywhere, and a smell of water was in the air. What could this island be? Bone walked through the tropical forest and saw a small hut. He walked up to it to see no body was there, just a note saying: If you are reading this, then get off this island now! The water monster will get you, he will! Bone wondered about this water monster and then decided to head back. He walked around the forest until he found that he was lost. He stepped into a huge open area where a gigantic lake was in. The lake's water was black and very mucky. A small bird perched in the water and was burnt to a crisp. Bone stepped back as the water's tide nearly touched his paw. He looked across the lake and then saw that there was no other way around it. He had to fly over it. Bone flew above it and heard a large roar. Just then, the black water began to move and a watery hand popped out of the lake. It was gigantic. Then an arm came, then a shoulder, then a chest, then a whole body. This so called water monster was a giant water man. Bone flew back to the forest and landed on the ground. He looked at the water man and shot a blast out of the gauntlet and into the giant's eye. The giant clutched his eye and shot black water at Bone. It had a very good aim. Bone dodged it and backed up. He shot another blast at the giant's other eye. The giant was really mad now. He could barely see. He struggled to find where Bone was at. Bone flew over the lake and at the water man. He swirled around him. The giant reached at him, but missed. It turned around to grab Bone. Bone flew behind it and shot a blast at the back of the giant's head. It barfed up red water and then fell into the water. It then died. Bone flew to the other side of the lake and landed next to a huge palm tree. He continued walking through the forest. Bone reached the other side of the island and looked around. He saw the Dragon Kingdom on the right. A grassy plain was here. He flew towards it.
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#54 Posted: 22:12:35 18/07/2010
Wow, this story is good!
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#55 Posted: 02:53:01 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 13 Tornado Prairie
Bone flew towards the grassy plaice and saw a dark cloud in the far distance. He landed in the grass and walked around the deserted hills. Deserted farms were the only thing in sight. This must have been a prairie, but what happened here? Bone was thinking about Convexity and the gauntlet and the evil dragons. He was also thinking about his family and why his dad didn't like him. Just then, a roar of wind swept through Bone's ears, causing him to lose his train of thought. Up above a hill, a dark storm was coming right at him. Lightning flashed and it began to rain. Suddenly, the harsh winds formed a funnel cloud and it touched down, forming a tornado. Just a few meters away formed two other tornadoes. No wonder this place was abandoned, it's a death trap! Bone ran far from the tornado, but he was blown around in the air. His flabby wings caused him to be attracted to the wind like metal is to a magnet. Curse these wings! thought Bone. He struggled to fly away from the storms. He broke free of the winds and flew as far from the storm as possible, but it chased after him. Bone flew over a few hills and saw a dragon standing in the middle of a battlefield, generating his elements. Bone flew towards the dragon and landed next to it. The dragon growled and shot magic at the storms, causing them to disappear. "Thanks, uh..." replied Bone. He didn't know the dragon's name. "Blaze. And I am afraid that this is my battlefield and anyone who puts one paw on it will be killed. You see, this whole area of the Dragon Kingdom is mine!" exclaimed Blaze. "No it isn't! This place is the king's!" replied Bone. The rightful owner of this land was the king of the kingdom. "If you mention that stupid king again, then you will be dead in a heart beat. Do I make my self clear? Now I'm letting you go as a warning! But don't come back here again!!" snapped Blaze. Bone ran away from the prairie and entered a steaming hot desert. He looked back to see Blaze still watching him.
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#56 Posted: 02:58:27 19/07/2010
Great story!
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#57 Posted: 12:06:14 19/07/2010
This is really good,I still cant believe what Spyro did.
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#58 Posted: 15:28:24 19/07/2010
Wow, nice chapters!
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#59 Posted: 16:58:38 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
Chapter 14 Dusty Desert Bone walked through the scorching desert, no sign of water. He was becoming very de-hydrated. He could not take much more of this. On the horizon, Bone began to see a small city. Was this just his imagination? Even if, he still had to see. Bone walked towards the city to find that it was no make believe. Sand warriors marched around the place. "Excuse me, sir, but could you please give me some water?" asked Bone. The one he was asking was very tough. The warrior grunted and slashed his blade at Bone. He ran to an alarm and sounded it. Several other sand warriors charged to the rescue. They all surrounded Bone. Bone looked at the circle of warriors surrounding him. He then shot a blast out of the gauntlet and at two warriors. The warriors went flying into a building. They devolved into a pile of sand. To Bone's suprise, the pile reformed back into warriors. The other warriors slashed at Bone. They grunted and roared as the alarm rang out in everyone's ears. Bone dodged the slashes and shot a few blasts out of the gauntlet. All of the sand warriors went flying into buildings. Bone took this opportunity to run. He ran into a tower and reached the top. A rope leading to another buidling's roof was in a window. Bone grabbed onto the rope and ziplined to the other building. He landed on its roof and saw a cannon. He walked towards it and saw a stone wall blocking the only way out of the city. He turned to look at the cannon and saw 12 cannonballs next to it. Bone picked up a cannonball and stuffed it into the cannon. He fired it and it went flying at the wall, busting a hole in it. He then heard grunting and shouting from behind as the sand warriors began to climb up onto the roof. Bone fired 3 cannonballs at the warriors, sending them falling to the sandy ground. He jumped onto a nearby rooftop which lead into another tower. The sand warriors climbed back up and chased after him. Bone walked into the tower and reached the top. Another zipline was up here, leading to a huge building. He zip lined down it and landed at the entrance of the building. Bone ran inside and looked behind him to see the sand warriors zip lining too. Bone ran through the building and up some stairs. He busted open a door which lead into a big control room. Bone ran towards the control panel and began pressing buttons. Gun turrets outside in the other room began to fire at the sand warriors entering the building. Bone continued firing them until all the sand warriors were in piles of sand. He ran up some stairs and reached a balcony at the very top of the building. A third zip line was here, it lead to the hole in the wall. The sand warriors were climbing up the steps after Bone. He grabbed onto the zip line. One of the warriors swiped at him. Then, Bone zip lined right before the warrior swiped at him. He landed at the hole in the wall. He ran through it and away from the dreadful city. The sand warriors roared as they looked out the hole and decided to go away. Bone ran through the hot desert and saw a dark scorched plain, and in that plain was a great volcano: Volcano Mountain.
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#60 Posted: 17:39:16 19/07/2010
cool.
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#61 Posted: 18:01:55 19/07/2010
Nice chapter, can't wait to see how his experiance with a volcano goes.
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#62 Posted: 20:49:38 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 15 Volcano Mountain
Bone flew towards the scorched plains and landed in front of the volcano. He looked up at the top, then around him. A shadowy figure was lurking in the rocky plains. Bone shot a blast at it. The figure jumped out of the shadows and landed in front of Bone, causing the ground to shake. It was Blaze, "Didn't I tell you to get off my territory?!" "Y-yes." replied Bone. He looked at Blaze. "And why have you not?" asked Blaze. He sprang onto Bone and pinned him. "I'm trying to. I don't know the way out of your land." replied Bone. He shivered at Blaze's wicked face. "Well if you didn't know, you just wondered into my inner sanctum!" growled Blaze. "I'm sorry, I didn't know!" cried Bone. He whimpered at every word Blaze said to him. "Well the way off my territory is right past that huge rock over there," Blaze pointed at a huge sharp rock on the right, "Now this is your final warning: If I find you here again, then I will not let you escape!!" Bone began to cry. He gagged, "Y-yes, s-sir." Blaze got off of Bone and walked off into the desert. He disappeared into it. Bone got up and was just about to go the direction Blaze told him to go, when he saw a blue crystal hovering above the lava at the top of the volcano. What could this crystal be? Bone just had to know. He looked to see if Blaze was nearby and then charged towards the volcano's base. He began to climb up it. Bone continued to climb until he was half way there. He heard footsteps and then a roar, "What did I say, boy?!!" Bone began to climb faster. Blaze had returned and was very angry. He shot magic at Bone, only to hit a ledge above him. It began to fall at Bone. Bone quickly jumped to the right and snagged onto the volcano again and continued climbing. "Get down here, boy!" roared Blaze. He continued to blast the volcano, sending falling debris at Bone. Bone dodged each one and reached the top of the volcano. The blue crystal was only inches away from his grasp, but so was the lava. He reached for the crystal. "Don't you dare!" growled Blaze. He shot one last blast at Bone. Bone snatched the crystal. The blast of magic hit the ledge next to him, causing him to plummet off the volcano. He still clutched the crystal though as he fell. Bone gained control of his wings and flew over the rock and away from the volcano. "Get back here with my crystal!!" roared Blaze. His voice soon faded away as Bone flew away from the area. He landed in a jungle and then walked deeper into it.
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#63 Posted: 21:06:10 19/07/2010
nice.
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#64 Posted: 21:16:34 19/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Hey guys, I am taking a break from this story for a little bit. I've been getting bored of it.
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#65 Posted: 21:27:51 19/07/2010
okay then.I'll keep in eye out for when you continue.
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#66 Posted: 09:36:38 20/07/2010
Great story, and I can't wait for the rest!
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#67 Posted: 15:09:58 20/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Okay everyone! I am back!
Chapter 16 The Crystal Bone walked through the strange jungle. He stopped at a huge tree. A metal circle was on it and a hole in the shape of the crystal was in it. Bone thought for a moment and then looked at the blue crystal. He stuck it into the hole and green light began to form around the tree. The oak revealed a strange looking glass deep inside its leaves. Bone looked into it. Convexity was on the other side of the looking glass, clearly in Terror Mountain. "Convexity? Is that you?" asked Bone. "Yessss," hissed Convexity, "And that crystal you found isss very important." Convexity looked at the crystal through the glass. "Why?" asked Bone. He looked at the blue crystal and then back at Convexity. "Becaussse. That crystal upgradesss your ssstaff'sss ssstrength. Take it out and place it in one of the holesss in your staff." ordered Convexity. Bone grabbed the crystal and pulled it out of the hole and held his staff. He looked at it and found 5 holes. He put it in the one that was shaped like the crystal. The staff began to glow blue. "Now you have the power to create ice," replied Convexity, "There are 4 other crystals scattered through out the Dragon Kingdom, each crystal gives you a different element: Earth, fire, ice, electricity, and wind. Once all crystals are collected, you will be given a very special power: Your ultimate power. Find the crystals, Bone." Convexity's face disappeared and the looking glass was hidden away in the leaves. Bone looked at his staff and held it out. Its blue glow shot out ice. The ice froze the grass and several trees. "Awesome." said Bone as he stopped shooting the ice. He walked through the forest.
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#68 Posted: 17:21:15 20/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 17 Amazon Jungle
Bone looked around the strange jungle. Purple trees and black puddles were the only thing in site. Bone walked deeper into the jungle until he reached a meadow. Strange figures began to come up from the horizon. The figures were very ugly. They were creatures, and they had 7 arms, one on their heads. They had bat wings and were furry. They had 4 feet like bird's feet. One eye was bigger than the other and their ears were pointed. "Woah! Talk about ugly!" exclaimed Bone. He jumped back. The creatures roared and slashed their claws at Bone. They ran at him. Bone jumped backwards and shot a blast of power out of the gauntlet and at the creatures. The blast sent the creatures flying into a huge river. Several other creatures began to come out of hiding and surround Bone. They hissed and roared as he clawed at Bone. Bone took the beating and then looked at the river. He had a very clever idea. He froze the creatures with ice and ran towards the river. The creatures thawed out and chased after Bone. Bone used his ice power to freeze the river. Then he blasted it with power and the river broke into pieces of ice. He hopped onto a large chunk of ice as it floated down the river. He turned back to see the creatures walking through the river and after him. Bone froze that part of the river, causing the creatures to get stuck in the ice. He laughed and then looked ahead to see where the river was headed. A rush of water was heard as a waterfall appeared ahead. Then Bone knew that he was headed for the waterfall. Bone couldn't get off the ice now, everywhere he looked was water. He then saw a huge tree directly in front of the waterfall. Dangling from the tree was a green vine. Right as the ice piece fell down the waterfall, Bone jumped for the vine. He grabbed onto it and dangled from it, looking down at the watery lake below. Then Bone began to feel the vine move, and he heard hissing sounds. He looked at the vine to see that it wasn't a vine at all. Bone had grabbed onto a boa contrisctors' tail. He screamed and let go of the vine. He went pummelting into the deep brown lake. Bone landed in the lake with a big splash. He looked around the waters and then saw a green face coming towards him. It was a crocodile. Bone screamed again and quickly swam out of the lake and onto dry land. He looked at the crocodile, who sank back into the water. Bone looked on to see more of the jungle. He walked through it for hours, avoiding all sorts of creatures. Eventuallly, he reached the other side of the jungle. He stepped out of it to see that he was in a small village near the dragon city, Warfang.
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#69 Posted: 19:00:03 20/07/2010
Wow, the Amazon. Is there jaguars?
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#70 Posted: 21:53:35 20/07/2010
This story is great!
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#71 Posted: 13:48:32 21/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Cynderfyre: Yeah if you want there to be.
Chapter 18 Killing Spree Bone walked into the village to see several moles gathered around a camp fire. He walked up to them. "Yes, dragon?" asked the mole. It glared at Bone and then at his fellow friends. "I... I... I'm looking for a magic crystal and a gauntlet." replied Bone. "Never heard of 'em," replied the mole, "But please sit down." Bone sat next to a very big mole and immediatly began to feel the heat from the fire. He looked into it. "Now, as I was saying... my family is very great. And my parents were great too." said the mole. "Mine too." replied a few moles. They all were very happy. Bone twitched as he thought about his parents and how his dad hated him. Then he heard a mole say: "Your very quiet. Is something bothering you?" asked the mole. Bone shook his head and looked deeper into the fire. "My parents always loved me." said a very small mole with glasses. Bone twitched some more and tried to control himself. He looked deeper itno the fire, still twitching. "Are you sure nothing is wrong?" asked the mole. He was sure something was. "I'm sure. Just continue your chat." replied Bone like his heart was in his throte. "Okay then." replied the mole. He looked at the tall mole. "My parents loved me sooo much. They never let me get into trouble and tehy were always by my side whenever I needed them!" exclaimed the tall mole. Then Bone lost it. He got up off the ground and charged towards the tall mole first. He charged him into a tree, killing him. "What are you doing?!" shrieked the mole. He grabbed the nearest weapon, a stick. Bone grabbed the stick and crushed it in his palm and roared, "MUST KILL!!!" He knocked the mole into a tree and looked to the other moles. The moles grabbed pitch forks and charged at Bone. One stabbed him in the stomach, but it didn't do any damage. Bone snatched the pitch fork out of the mole's hands and tossed it right into the mole's chest. The mole fell over dead. The moles screamed in horror and began to run for their lives. They were running for Warfang. "OH NO YOU DON'T!!!" roared Bone as he sped up way faster than he ever could and tackled a mole. He clawed its eye out and ran to the next one. This one was very chubby. The mole through his pitch fork at Bone: Worst mistake ever. Bone grabbed the pitch fork and threw it right into the mole's stomach. He charged after the last one: the small one. The small one was screaming and huffing and puffing as he ran as fast as he could. He then tripped over a rock. The small mole landed hard on the ground and tried to get up, only to see that Bone was right in front of him. "Please don't hurt me!" Bone raised his claw to strike him. He clawed his chest until his heart stopped. The moles were all dead. Bone snapped out of his killing spree and looked at the dead bodies. Then he looked at his paws. Blood was all over them, his footprints had blood on them. He looked towards Warfang and then back at the bodies. He had killed innocents. Bone walked towards a small stream and began to wash the blood off. After he was done, he left the camp and went towards Warfang. If anyone asked, he would just say the jaguars did it.
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#72 Posted: 14:01:55 21/07/2010
That was brutal.
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Very...
Chapter 19 Warfang's Crystal Bone ran into Warfang. He stopped in the central plaza. Several moles were pushing him aside as he walked. He looked up to the highest building in Warfang to see a green crystal floating above it. He ran inside the building and up a flight of stairs. Bone continued to climb higher up the tower and eventually reached the top. He opened a door leading outside and began to climb up the peak of the tower. He reach the point of the tower and looked up at the green crystal above him. With one paw on the point, he used his other paw to reach for the green crystal. He snatched it, but lost balance. He went falling off the tower with the crystal in his paw. He gained flight and flew down to the ground. He landed softly and looked at the crystal. He saw a statue in the central plaza with a crystal shape in it. Bone walked towards the statue when he heard a roar. Clinging on to the top of the tower was a huge stone monster. It jumped off the tower and landed hard on the ground, causing some moles to fall over. The monster roared and charged at Bone. He wacked him, sending him flying into the statue. Bone dropped the crystal. The monster grabbed the crystal and shot earth missiles out of his fist and at Bone. Bone dodged every one took out his staff and began to spray ice out of it and at the monster. The monster roared as he was frozen in place. It quickly broke out of the ice and shot more earth missiles. He slam the ground, causing an earthquake. Bone lost his blance and hit the ground. He quickly rolled out of the missiles' aim. He got back up and froze the monster again. He quickly began to melee it. The monster roared in pain and broke out of the ice. He created more earthquakes and shot more missiles. Bone lost his balance and rolled out of the way again. He got back up and then got an idea. He ran into the tower and up the flight of stairs. He reached the peak again. The monster began to climb up the tower after him. It roared when it reached the top and swiped at Bone. Bone dodged it and hit the monster. He knocked the monster off the tower and jumped onto it. He slammed him down the tower and into the ground. A massive earth quake began, but soon stopped. The monster broke into several stone pieces. Bone got up and grabbed the crystal. He walked over to the statue and placed the crystal in it. The statue was of a dragon, its wings unfolded, revealing another looking glass. Convexity was on the other side again. "Well done, Bone! You have found the earth cryssstal and can now ussse the power of earth! But I mussst warn you that there are guardiansss for each cryssstal. The elemental guardiansss will attempt to sssstop you from getting the crystalssss. Be careful." explained Convexity. He disappeared and the wings folded back. Bone took the green crystal out and stuck it in his staff. The staff glowed green and Bone shot earth missiles out of it. They hit the ground. Bone looked at the destroyed city, "Some how I know that I will be blamed for this." He flew off and away from Warfang. He flew towards the Burning Plains.
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#74 Posted: 15:57:56 21/07/2010
Whoa, nice chapters! Very destructive.
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#75 Posted: 16:53:29 21/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
Chapter 20 Dream Bone was walking through the Burning Plains when he heard a noise. He turned around to see a shadowy figure creeping in the dark. "Who's there?" asked Bone. He walked towards the shadows. He looked in them to see that nobody was there. He shrugged and continued to walk through the Burning Plains. Bone stopped when he reached a dead end and heard the noises again. He turned around to see the shadowy figure again. "Come out, I know your there." He walked towards the shadows and looked into them. He didn't see anything. Just as he was about to turn around he saw something metal fly at his face. "What the-?" Instantly, Bone fell over on the ground unconcious. The figure stepped out of the shadows and revealed its self. It was an ape. It roared to the other apes which came out of hiding and surrounded Bone's limp body. ----------------------------- Bone was in and electricty area. Platforms were every where and there was complete darkness. Electricity shock waves swarmed around the strange place. He jumped onto a platform and heard a voice. "Bone. You must stop this madness." said the voice, it sounded very ancient. "Who are you?" asked Bone. He looked into the dark space for any sign of a person. "I am the Chronicler, I know what your future is. It is of great destruction that will lead to your very death." replied the voice. It rang through Bone's mind. "I know that Convexity will help me become pure." said Bone. He didn't believe anything the Chronicler was saying. "No he won't. He will make you-" the Chronicler attempted to say, but he was cut off by a familiar voice. "Quiet you! Listen, Bone, every word he is saying is a lie to get you to be corrupted." said Convexity. "No!" replied the Chronicler. "Look, Bone, if you want to be pure then continue to collect those crystals and the gauntlet." replied Convexity. "But-" said the Chronicler. The dream ended before he could say anything. Bone awoke in an electricity room where they stored their power units. He wondered about what the Chronicler had said. He looked at the generators and then at a small door. Someone was opening it...
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Chapter 21 That's a Shocker
The figure was a huge commando ape. It entered the electricity room and glared at Bone. It sent a shock wave of electricity onto the ground with his staff. Bone shot earth missiles at the ape and killed it. He ran towards the door only for a gigantic ape walk into the room. It was huge and had a green crystal eye and a magic staff. It had blades on its arms and two swords. This ape looked very tough. "Ah... a dragon. You remind me of a very dark dragon that was once my slave." said the ape. He was very bloody and was missing his tail. "Who??" asked Bone. He thought that this may have been his mother. "A young dragoness named Cynder," replied the ape, "Why do you ask?" Bone gasped, "You're Gaul!! But I thought that you were killed at the Floating Islands! You corrupted my mother!" "Oh, so you are Spyro and Cynder's son? So they have more than one?!" shrieked Gaul. Bone was confused, "What do you mean more than one?" "You mean you don't know? You had a brother named Icy. He knocked me off the Floating Islands, but I survived." replied Gaul. "Where is he now?" asked Bone. He wanted to know about this brother. "I don't know! He was going off to defeat Malefor, that was the last I saw of him!! Now shut up! I have another dragon to corrupt!" roared Gaul as he grabbed his staff and pointed it at Bone. Bone jumped out of the way as a black darkness shot out of it. He jumped behind Gaul and began to shoot him with earth missiles. Gaul roared in pain and drew his two swords. He slashed at Bone. Bone jumped out of the way, but was cut slightly on the wing. He began to freeze Gaul with is staff. Gaul roared," No!!!!!" He froze as he was lifting his foot to step away. Bone opened the door and ran out of the room. He pointed his gauntlet at Gaul and shot it. Gaul thawed out at the last second and moved out of the way. The blast hit the generator, causing a massive explotion of electricity. Bone slammed the door shut and froze it with ice. He ran off as he heard Gaul roar as the electricity shocked him. The generator blew up and the power was lost in the strange place. It was very dark. Bone walked into a huge chamber to see several apes waiting for him.
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#77 Posted: 17:42:26 21/07/2010
Yay, apes are back! And Gaul! Nice chapter name too
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#78 Posted: 18:27:40 21/07/2010
really cool.
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#79 Posted: 17:30:04 22/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
Chapter 22 A Shocking Discovery The apes jumped at Bone. He knocked them into the air with his gauntlet. He charged at them and froze the small ones into small balls of snow. He pushed the balls up some stairs and then back down again. The ice cracked and the apes fell over dead. Medium sized apes began to run into the chamber. They all charged at Bone and clawed at him. Bone jumped backwards and shot earth missiles at the apes. All of them died instantly. Bone then turned to walk into another hallway. Several large apes ran towards him and shot electricity out of their staffs. Bone was hit and shocked. He screamed in pain and flew at the apes. They wacked at him. He dodged the attacks and shot earth missiles at them. The apes fell over. Blood was all over the place now. Bone looked down the hallway and ran down it. He then heard a roar. He turned around and ran back towards the generator room, for the sound was coming from that. He stopped at the doorway to see that the door was busted down. He walked inside and didn't see Gaul's body. "This is getting too creepy..." Bone said to himself. He walked out of the room and went into the chamber. He went back down the other hall and into another one. Bone looked down the hall. Several rooms were down here. Then he heard apes coming. He backed up against the wall and saw a small ape running out of a room with a shocked look on his face. It ran past Bone and disappeared into a differen't room. Bone looked down the hall and heard giant footsteps coming closer. Then he couldn't believe his eyes. Out of the same room that the ape had came from charged a giant ape. It was Gaul, and electricity was surrounding him. But this time Gaul was 10 times his size. He had been turned into a power hungry electro monster! Gaul roared and charged down the hall and towards Bone. "Woah!" Bone cried as he jumped out of the way and shot ice at Gaul. The ice immediatly melted from the electricity. Gaul roared and shot electricity out of his palm and at Bone. He charged at him again. Bone dodged the shot and jumped out of the way. Gaul slammed into the wall, causing a shockwave spread across it. Bone ran down the hall and entered a gigantic water room. He looked back to see Gaul right behind him. Bone flew up towards the top of the room, but was hit by Gaul's electricity. He landed in the water and soon realized that he needed to get out. Bone jumped out of the water right as Gaul electrified it. The water was now an electric floor. Bone flew up to the top of the room and landed on a small catawalk. He looked at the Gaul and then ran through a doorway above the catawalk. Gaul roared and shot electricity at the entrance right as Bone went inside. Bone entered the small room. It was a dead end, but floating in front of him was a yellow crystal. He snatched it and ran back out onto the catawalk to see that Gaul had left. He flew out of the chamber and back out into the hallway. Gaul was nowhere to be seen, Bone heard a racket coming from inside another room. Bone charged into the room to see Gaul tossing lights and metal objects around. Then Bone saw, directly behind Gaul, a machine that read: Extra Electro Power Generator - Only use in case power generator blows. And in the machine was a crystal shapes hole. "Hey bone head! Look over here!!" exclaimed Bone. He knew this would work. Gaul turned to look at Bone and roared. He slowly walked towards him. Gaul shot electricity at Bone, who jumped to the left. Gaul roared and charged at Bone. Bone jumped out of the way and flew towards the power generator. Gaul roared and chased after Bone. He reached Bone, who was in front of the generator. He charged at Bone. Bone quickly stuck the crystal in the hole and jumped out of the way. Gaul slammed into the generator. Suddenly, the generator began to glow and lights began to flicker. Gaul roared, trying to get away, but the machine was pulling him back. The generator began to suck Gaul into it. "No!!!!!!" roared Gaul as he was sucked into the machine as if he were the machine's electricity. All of the lights turned back on to reveal that everything was destroyed. The machine showed a hologram of Convexity. "Congratulationssss, Bone! You now have the ability to ussse electricity! Your more than half way there. Now you are trapped in a ssstrange fortressss, so I must bring a portal there. Ssstand back and a portal will appear in front of you. Make sssure that you grab the crysssstal!" explained Convexity. Bone quickly grabbed the crystal and jumped back. Convexity's hologram disappeared and the power shut off again. A purple and green portal appeared in front of Bone and he stepped into it. Just then, a furry figure came out of the machine and laughed. Bone appeared outside the strange fortress way out in a crystal domain. The portal disappeared and Bone looked out at the crystal domain. He stuck the yellow crystal into his staff and shot electricity shock waves out of it.
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#80 Posted: 13:00:37 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 23 Cynder's old lair
Bone looked around the crystallized area. He saw some apes jumping across platforms ahead and walked towards them. The apes laughed and jumped at him. Bone shocked them with electricity and walked on through the crystal maze ahead. In it was a few apes and statues. Bone went left and encountered a big ape. He shocked it with electricity and continued through the maze. He took a right and then a left, and then a right again. Ahead of him was a huge statue of a black dragon. He walked up to it. The statue read: Cynder. So this must have been Cynder's lair from way back then in his dad's childhood. Bone turned left and found another huge ape. He defeated it and continued through the crystal maze. He stopped when he found the exit. Ahead was a strange figure running through the area. It appeared to be a dragon, black too, but not Convexity. It looked like an adult. "Hey! Stop!!" cried Bone. The dragon stopped and turned towards Bone, "You must stop collected those crystals. Convexity is just trying to trick you int collected them, so that he will have all your strength." Bone growled, "How can I trust you?! Who are you anyways?" He charged at thhe dragon, who shot dark magic at him. "Chaos. You will not do this." replied the dragon. He stormed towards Bone. "You can't stop me!! Now get out of the way!!!" roared Bone. He shot a blast out of the gauntlet and at Chaos and then flew past him. Chaos blocked the shot and faded away into the darkness. Bone flew through the rest of the crystal area and reached the shore and flew above the ocean and then stopped when he heard pirates coming. Then a net grabbed him and he was lifted up into the air...
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#81 Posted: 16:51:00 24/07/2010
Ah, it was Concurrent Skies. And Chaos is back too!
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#82 Posted: 19:41:29 24/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks for reminding me the name. I couldn't remember it...
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#83 Posted: 19:43:27 24/07/2010
No problem. I always had trouble remembering that name too, and Fellmuth Arena. Nice chapters!
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#84 Posted: 21:07:26 24/07/2010
Good.I wonder who will appear next.
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#85 Posted: 17:17:42 25/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 24 Prisoner
Bone woke up in a cell, inside a pirate ship. He looked through the cell door and saw several pirates walking around. He growled, "Let me out!!" "No. You can not tell us what to do you fiendish dragon!" snapped one of the pirates. He continued walking. "Very well..." said Bone. He slowly fell to the ground and played dead. He stuck out his tounge and laid there. "What the-?" said the ape. He walked up to the door and unlocked it. He slowly walked up to Bone, grasping his blade. He stopped in front of Bone and bent down to see if he was breathing. Just then, Bone knocked him into a wall and ran out of the cell, then he ran down the hall. Several pirates began to chase after him, "Argghh!!" Bone ran down the hall, blasting the pirates with his gauntlet. He continued to kill the pirates until he reached a dead end. He looked at the pirates and then at the wall. Directly above him was an escape hatch outside of the ship. He sprang up and clutched onto the hatch. He opened it and jumped out onto the pirate ship. He landed on the deck. The pirates began to climb after him, but Bone ran up to a cannon and pointed it at the hatch. He immediatly began to fire it, killing the apes. He then began to fire at the ship, making holes in it. He shot the sails too. The ship began to fly downwards. It was on fire. All of the pirates charged at Bone and slashed at him. Bone dodged the slash and quickly ran for the plank. He jumped off the edge of it and fell down into the air. He landed splat in the water. The ship crashed several meters away. Bone got out of the water and flew away. The Dragon Kingdom was nearby, so he flew over to it. He stepped onto the turf and walked through it. Then he realized what he shouldn't have realized.
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#86 Posted: 17:27:08 25/07/2010
DUN DUN DUN.cant wait for more.
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#87 Posted: 17:56:26 26/07/2010
Suspense... please continue soon!
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#88 Posted: 17:28:17 27/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 25 Losing A Belonging
Bone looked around the area and knew that this was indeed Tornado Prairie, Blaze's terratory. He ran through the terratory in search of Volcano Mountain, but only saw the desert. So he ran through it, avoiding the sand warriors and reached the otherside of the desert where Volcano Mountain was at. Bone began to run towards the rock leading out of the land when he heard a voice. "Didn't I tell you to get off my land?!" roared Blaze. He charged towards Bone. Bone jumped out of the way and shocked Blaze. "And where is that crystal you stole from me?!!" roared Blaze. He shot fire at Bone. Bone jumped out of the way and raised his staff, "Come and get it!" "What?" wondered Blaze. Then he saw the blue crystal in the staff and dashed into Bone, knocking the staff out of his hands. He quickly grabbed the staff and held it high. He looked at the other crystals. "Give that back!" growled Bone. "You offered it to me, and now I have all of these elements under my control! Now I can finally destroy that stupid excuse for a king!!" roared Blaze as he ran off with the staff. Bone ran after Blaze, but he was too slow. Blaze created a portal and ran into it. Bone ran towards the portal, only for it to disappear. Now it was just Bone, his gauntlet, and his mind. The only weapons... He cried out, "No!!!" All that effort just to lose the staff. Just then, a dark shadowy portal opened in front of him. Bone looked into the portal to see Terror Mountain. He ran into it.
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#89 Posted: 19:12:33 27/07/2010
Agh, Blaze has the staff...
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#90 Posted: 19:44:52 27/07/2010
Good work.
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#91 Posted: 19:51:47 27/07/2010
Fireball's stories are always good work. Keep up the good work!
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#92 Posted: 15:13:53 28/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks everyone.
Chapter 26 Convexity's Speech Bone landed flat on the ground inside the chamber that he last met Convexity, "Convexity?" He looked through the dark chamber, but didn't see any sign of life. "Yessss, young one?" asked Convexity. He landed in front of Bone. "Blaze... he's got my staff! Now all I have is the gauntlet..." replied Bone. "Grahhh! The fool! You were jussst about to finisssh collecting the cryssstalsss too." replied Convexity, "Did he sssay anything after that?" "Well he did say that he had enough power to go and destroy the king of the dragon kingdom." replied Bone. "Then that mussst mean that you will find him at the dragon palace way out there passst the Mountain of Malefor..." replied Convexity, "It will be far. You need to find that other gauntlet for protection from the dragonsss which will await you at the palace." "Where is it?" asked Bone. "In the Catacombsss," said Convexity, "Once you have it, the gauntletsss will give you more than jussst thossse ssstupid blassstss. They will give you ssseveral unknown powersss that even I don't know." "I'll get it." replied Bone. "And be on the lookout for the other two cryssstalsss while you are out. I know that you can't ussse them without the ssstaff, but you can ssstill take them with you until you find it," said Convexity, "The two locationsss of the fire and wind cryssstalsss are: Tornado Prairie; the wind cryssstal. And deep in a huge volcano directly below the Floating Islandsss; the fire cryssstal." Bone nodded and looked outside. "I have a portal for you that will sssend you to Tornado Prairie," replied Convexity, "Good luck." A portal appeared in front of Bone. He ran through it and appeared in Tornado Prairie.
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#93 Posted: 15:16:52 28/07/2010
very good.
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#94 Posted: 15:59:10 28/07/2010
Nice chapter, as ever!
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#95 Posted: 17:26:07 29/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 27 Wind
Bone landed in Tornado Prairie. He got back up and ran up a hill. Ahead were several tornadoes circling something. He ran towards them. Suddenly, as if Bone were a magnet, and the tornadoes were nails, the tornadoes began to spin towards him. "Woah!" cried Bone as he jumped back right as a tornado was about to grab him. The tornadoes roared as if they were alive. Bone stared into the tornadoes and saw two evil red eyes in the center of each one. These tornadoes must have been some type of super storm... Bone ran away from the tornadoes. He looked back to see a gleaming object on the otherside of the tornadoes. It was a white crystal. The tornadoes roared and grew even bigger than before. They were spinning after Bone. Bone ran away from them and found a way around the tornadoes and towards the crystal. He charged towards the crystal as the tornadoes twisted faster. He jumped for the crystal right as a tornado grabbed him. He snatched the crystal and held it up to the tornadoes as if it had some special power. He closed his eyes. Just then, a rush of air shot around Bone's body then at the tornadoes. A blast of energy hit them, causing them to go flying far away. They roared in anger. Bone opened his eyes to see that the crystal was glowing. Just then, the tornadoes began to go towards Bone again. Bone held the crystal up to them again and it shot a blast of wind out and at the tornadoes, causing them to fly away again. Bone looked at the crystal and then back at the tornadoes. He walked backwards, shooting wind out of the crystal, knocking the tornadoes away. He continued this five more times and then shot an ultimate blast of wind, causing the tornadoes to go flying 12,000 miles away. Bone ran through the prairie and stopped when he saw a huge boulder with a crystal shape in it. He stuck the crystal in it. A looking glass popped out, showing Convexity. "Well done, Bone. You have found the wind cryssstal. Now you jussst need the fire cryssstal and you will have all the cryssstals." said Convexity. "When I stuck the crystal up to the tornadoes, it shot wind out of it. I thought you said it wouldn't do anything without the staff..." said Bone. "It mussst of had sssome ssspecial power on it. I am sssending you a portal to the Floating Islandsss." hissed Convexity. Bone grabbed the crystal and stepped back. A portal appeared showing Floating Islands directly above a volcano. He looked up a hill to see that the tornadoes were coming back. He jumped into the portal right as they passed by.
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#96 Posted: 14:58:23 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 28 The Great Leep
Bone appeared on a floating island above several volcanoes. He looked around the place and then down at the huge volcano below the island. Then he saw a huge building not too far away. He ran towards it and stopped when he saw the strange black dragon again. "You must stop this madness, Bone." replied Chaos. "How do you know my name?!" growled Bone, "I demand to know!" "I am the dark master, I know everyone's names. Now I am warning you to stop collecting those crystals! You will not become pure, you will become evil!!" roared Chaos. "Don't lisssten to him, Bone. He isss jussst trying to trick you into becoming evil." hissed Convexity in Bone's mind. Bone couldn't decide who to trust, Convexity, or Chaos. He had to choose one. After all, both could be evil. But one of them could lead him home. "I take you back to your parents, for I know them very well. So... who do you choose? If you can't decide then follow what your heart tells you." replied Chaos. Bone had to decide sooner or later. Join Chaos, or continue collecting the crystals... which one? Then he knew. He wouldn't go to Chaos or Convexity. He would still collect the crystals. Once he had the crystals, the gauntlets, and the staff, he would go to Terror Mountain and fight Convexity himself, if he was evil, that is. "So...? Who do you choose?" asked Chaos. "Choossse me!" hissed Convexity. Bone ran towards the edge of the floating island and jumped off of it. He swandived into the volcano as Chaos stared at him. Bone gained flight and slowly hovered onto a molten rock.
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#97 Posted: 15:10:09 30/07/2010
Good chapters.Nice twist.
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#98 Posted: 15:30:21 30/07/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
Chapter 29 Blazing Fire Bone immediatly felt the heat. It was very hot, all most dying temperature. He looked around the scorching area and saw a red crystal above a pedestal on the other side of the lava. He tried to fly, but couldn't, do to the heat. Bone knocked down a couple of rocks with wind, creating a stone walkway to the crystal. He walked across it. Bone reached out his paw to grab the crystal when he heard a roar. Wings were flapping and more roaring was heard. A dragon landed over on a huge circular molten rock platform. This dragon was indeed Blaze. "So, you thought you could take the fire crystal and leave? Well I know that you took the wind crystal too and I am asking for them back!!" roared Blaze. "Give me back my staff!" cried Bone. "I believe I can not do that. I'll be taking that!" cried Blaze. He flew at Bone to snatch the two crystals. "Not so fast!" cried Bone. He snatched the red crystal and held it at Blaze. Imediatly, Blaze was being scorched by the fire. "No!!!" roared Blaze. He raised the staff and shocked Bone, causing him to drop the crystals. Bone reached for the crystals, but Blaze grabbed them. He stuck them in the staff and began to shoot wind at Bone. Bone was blown into a wall. He raised his gauntlet, it was the only thing he had left. Blaze gasped, "Where did you get that?! No matter, I still have the staff!" He shot fire at Bone. Bone jumped out of the way and shot a blast of energy out of the gauntlet and into Blaze. He jumped onto the circular platform and continued to shoot Blaze with the gauntlet. Blaze roared in pain and shot ice at Bone, who simply evaded and shot more blasts out of the gauntlet. Blaze was hit. He roared and shot earth at Bone. Bone evaded again and shot him one last time with the gauntlet. Blaze roared in pain and went crashing into the lava. He held his staff up so that it wouldn't be destroyed. He sank into the lava, staff above it. Bone reached for the staff for a horrible figure to come back out of the lava, scorched, bleeding horribly. Blaze clutched the staff and knocked Bone away with earth. He flew out of the volcano and away from the area. There was only one problem. Bone couldn't fly! He tried to flap his wings, but he couldn't raise himself off the ground. He was going to die down here. A tear dripped from his eye and onto the gauntlet. Then he looked at the gauntlet and then back up to the top of the volcano, maybe if he could fire the gauntlet underneath him, full charged, then he could rocket out of the firery inferno. Bone had to try. He lowered the gauntlet underneath him and then shot a blast out of it, full power. He shot through volcano like a rocket. He went flying up into the sky. He landed hard on the Floating Islands. He got up and flew after Blaze, but he was long gone.
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#99 Posted: 18:52:28 01/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 30 Catacombs
Bone flew for an hour until he saw a huge formation nearby the Valley of Avalar. He landed in front of it to find a cave. He walked into it to see that this was actually an underground grave yard. Bone knew that he had found the catacombs. A large roar echoed through the catacombs as Bone walked through it in search of the other gauntlet. He shivered and walked across a large wooden bridge dangling above a huge canyon. He stopped in the center of it to hear the roar again. A huge red furry demon-monster charged towards Bone. Bone tried to run across the bridge, but the monster still chased him. He stopped and turned around. The monster jumped at him. Bone shot him with the gauntlet, sending him flying back over to the other side of the bridge. He stopped to see if the monster was dead. The monster got back up and looked at the ropes keeping the bridge from falling. It began to claw at it. Bone ran across the bridge for the exit, but he tripped. He got back up and looked at the monster. The other side of the bridge was just so close, he just had to- Just then the ropes snapped and the bridge began to fall. Bone ran for the other side of the bridge, but was too late. He began to slide down to bridge. He fell off the end of it, but reached out and grabbed onto it. He was dangling from the tip of the bridge. He looked down to see a bunch of sharp rocks. He looked back up and began to climb up the bridge like a ladder. The red monster jumped across the gap and landed on the other side of the bridge. It looked down at Bone and then back at the two remaining ropes. It began to claw at these ropes too! In sight of this, Bone began to climb up the bridge faster. He was just a few inches away from reaching the top. He reached the top. The monster slashed at Bone. He ducked. The monster clawed the ropes again. The ropes snapped and the bridge fell. Bone reached out his paw for something to grab onto. He grabbed the ledge and began to pull himself up. The monster slashed at Bone again. Bone ducked and shot it with the gauntlet. He climbed up the ledge and was on the other side of the gap. He shot more blasts out of the gauntlet, causing the monster to fall off the ledge and into the spikes. Bone continued walking through the catacombs and stopped when he saw a huge gap ahead. On the other side was a gateway leading into a temple. The bridge was missing. The ceiling was too close to fly. There had to be some way acrossed the gap... Then Bone though. He looked up to see several giant stelagmites. He shot them with the gauntlet, causing them to fall. The tops of the stelagmites were flat, flat enough to easily hop across them. Bone leeped off the ledge and landed on a stelagmite. He jumped acrossed it and landed on another stelagmite. From there, he jumped onto one more stelagmite. He ran towards the edge of it. He jumped off of it and reached his paw out. He grabbed the ledge on the other side of the gap and pulled himself up. He looked at the strange temple gateway and walked inside. Just after that, a big red ghost appeared in front of the gateway and went into the temple.
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#100 Posted: 19:23:44 01/08/2010
Really good.
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