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i was joking...? >.>

THIS IS SERIOUS BUSINESS DUDE.xD

Interesting.

Is thatt he only comment you have?xD

Pretty much.

Quote: Eragon25

THIS IS SERIOUS BUSINESS DUDE.xD

Meh, just keep writing.

Yes.But it's gonna be different.xD

Jeremiah led Jake to his appartment,where Sarah now lived.They walked in and Sarah ran to Jeremiah.
"Miah!"She embraced him and then noticed Jake."Jake?Haven't seen in a while."
Jake smiled and said."Well I'm your new roommate."


Over the next three weeks,Sarah started to lose her mind.Jake constantly got into fights with Jeremiah,sometime over the stupidest things.They never left the appartment,and she couldn't go on account of the infection.Military units provided food until last week,when a new security fence was put up.
Jake was up early and was about to leave when Sarah caught him."And where are you going?"
"To fix this mess I made.Would you mind if Jeremiah came along?"
Sarah shook her head."No..."
Jake went and got Jeremiah,waited for him to dress,and then they left.Jeremiah kissed Sarah before leaving.
As soon as she was sure they were far away she quickly packed her bags,dressed,and went outside,hailing a taxi....

Hey, you remembered his nickname she gave him



Keep going, this is getting good

Jake and Jeremiah explored the city,gathering information,watching guards,and even capturing one of the infected,collecting skin samples.
"I don't think I've ever seen a whore not want money."Jake said.(The captured infected had been a hooker,whom they let go afterwards)
"She seemed rather upset that we attacked her."
"Yeah.Look,go home to Sarah,I'm gonna continue exploring."
Jeremiah nodded and left.

He arrived home to find no one there.That's odd...She should've called me.
He found a note on the kitchen counter that said:
I'm so sorry, Miah...I'm leaving you for fear of what you may have become.I've seen how you get angry with Jake and it scared me.I still love you...

Signed,

Sarah

Jeremiah dropped the note and ran to their bedroom.The closet was empty of her clothes.Her bags were gone.Just gone.

Okay then

She friking left him.xDShe never stopped loving him though,in my story.

Jeremiah sat there on the bed for hours.When he finally broke out of his silent state it was 1 in the morning.He looked at the hundreds of pictures on the wall....Pictures of his and Sarah's life....And he snapped.He stood up,tore pictures of the wall,grabbed anything that reminded him of her and threw in a pile.He grabbed his leather jacket,slipped it on,and then grabbed the matches.He lit a single one and tossed on the pile.It started to burn very quickly.He left the appartment building and made his way to a local nightclub...

Okay



Nice, I'm lol'ing here.

No,there's no lapdancing!xDOnly an epic fight.xD

D*** You! fun spoiler

Sarah had received a call from a friend and returned to the appartment building,which was on fire,firefighters trying to put it out.Jake stormed over to here.
"Jeremiah did this."He snapped.
"How do you know?"
"The fires stench reeks of him.It had to have started in your appartment.I followed his scent to a nightclub.Come on."

Jeremiah was drunk out of his mind,which made him angrier.The place had bright lights,strippers,and a ton of people dancing.
"Miah?"
He turned around to see Sarah there.
"Please,Miah.I'm sorry...I shouldn't have left.I'm so sorr-"
He lifted and threw her acroos the room.She landed on some people,so she was okay.He was over to her within seconds.People were screaming and running away.His claws started to extract and he was preparing a finishing blow on Sarah when he was hit by a chair,being sent the whole way to the other side of the room.
Jake stood there with a chair in his hand."That's a homerun!"

.....

Yeah.I've been planning this for a while.xD

I love it!

I thought you might.xD

You know me TOO well xD

Are you gonna continue?

Latah.

HA,YOU MUST WAIT!

'Latah'?

NO! I DEMAND MORE!

Later.

NO,YOU MUST WAIT.I'M EVIL LIKE THAT.>:)

I should have know that *facepalm*

D:< *kills you*

Great...waiting... My favorite thing!!!

Jeremiah was up and attacking Jake in a blink of an eye.Jake fought him off as best he could,but when you're infected,angry,and drunk,you're rather dangerous.
"Jeremiah,stop!"
Jeremiah didn't listen only continued the attack.Now Jake was angry.He shredded Jeremiah to peices."How's it feel?!"
"STOP IT!"They both turned to see Sarah,red faced,crying,and obviously angry."Both of you,GROW UP!!"
Something clicked in Jeremiah's head."Sarah..."

THat was too short

It's all I got.xD

So no teeth knocking out or ball kickin

All you got?!

Sorry,but I'll probably not post here until next week.Gotta let my creative juices flow for this story.I'll be focusing on Serial Killer for a while.

D:< YOU TRAITOR!!! *gets out gun* YOU WILL PAY! *fires*

I promise that next Saturday you'll have a new part here.

A week is too long

Well then you're gonna hate this.

I've decided to actually make this a weekly post thing.This story I don't have as many ideas for as Serial Killer.So sorry.