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^ Agreed. Poor demon.

O.O no comment.

Awesome! and the second page!

thanks,

Chapter 16,

Ben walked through the city shocked at what he had just witnessed. he walked into his mansion and towards the bedroom, he saw an angel standing in front of the door. "is it alright if i go in?"

angel: "yes."

Ben went inside the room he saw an angel standing by Ron who was sitting on the couch.

Ron: "hey thanks a lot for supporting me back there!"

Ben: "what did you want me to do Ronald? join in your argument with the Master over a sinful demon?"

Ron: "you know you could've done just that!"

Ben: "you were acting ridiculous back there."

Ron stood up "why because i decided to protect that poor demon!?"

Ben: "exactly!.... and not only that you argued with the Master... you can't argue with him and expect to win."

Ron: "i was arguing for a just reason."

Ben: "you were acting like a foolish lawyer for a guilty demon."

Ron: "oh so now you're insulting me!?"

Ben: "that was not an insult that was the truth... you could never win in an argument against the Master... you and i both knew that demon was guilty one way or another."

Ron: "what happen to the demon?"

Ben: "he got burned with the hottest of fires and he got-..."

Ron: "he got what?"

Ben: "...he got neutered..."

Ron: "WHAT!?"

Ben: "you heard me... he lost his manhood."

Ron: "oh my gosh... that-... that's terrible!... Jesus really did that to him?"

Ben nodded. Ron tried to walk out the door but the angel blocked his way.

Ron: "can you just move please!?"

angel: "no way, the Master didn't tell us to leave yet." he looked up as if he heard something "we just got an order from the Master to leave now." both angels walked out of the mansion.

Ron walked into another room and came out holding a small mirror and he headed towards the front door.

Ben: "where are you going?"

Ron looked back "somewhere." he walked out the front door and out of the city. he held the mirror up and looked into it, an image of a demon appeared. the demon was burnt and limping heavily through hell. "i have to help this poor soul." Ron walked towards the gates of Heaven.


next chapter coming Wednesday.

Ron is strange...

yes he is...

i think his brain got messed up. O.O

I like him.

Good chapter

Chapter 17,

Ron walked in front of the gates of Heaven, he looked into the mirror again and saw the demon walking through hell. Ron walked out of Heaven and into hell. he walked deeper in, he was looking around nervously. he walked slowly deeper and deeper into hell. suddenly a demon tackles Ron to the ground.

demon: "what are you doing here human!?" he growls at Ron.

Ron: "please don't hurt me... i'm here to help another demon..."

demon: "which one!?"

Ron: "a demon that went to Heaven and got tortured by Jesus..."

the demon suddenly calmed down "wait... i know you. you're that human that tried to saved me."

Ron looked at the demon, the demon was burned all over. "and you're that demon."

the demon got off of him "yes... now why have you come here?"

Ron: "i have come here to help you." he stood up.

demon: "i don't need your help human. i can take care of myself."

Ron: "i know you have a lot of pride and you won't admit that you need help... i had that pride too and then i realized that i'm not invincible."

demon: "yes you're right human.... but how do you intend to help me?"

Ron: "well you could live with me in my mansion in Heaven."

demon: "i am never going back to Heaven to be the slave of a tyrant!"

Ron: "relax.... i'm not going to let him see you..."

demon: "you best hope so... because if he found out that you helped me i don't know what's going to happen."

Ron: "he'd probably throw you back into hell and then punish me somehow."

demon: "i have a better idea... why don't you live down here with me... if i can convince lucifer to let you."

Ron: "i don't know... i'm afraid he might torture me for converting right before i died."

demon: "don't worry. i'll protect you. just like you protected me."

Ron: "thank you... what is your name?"

demon: "my name is Asmodeus."

Ron: "my name is Ronald but you may call me Ron."

Asmodeus: "so come on let's go see lucifer."

they walked up to this big building.

Asmodeus: "this building is called Pandemonium. it's where all demons live. it's also where we can find lucifer."

they went inside and walked up a flight of stairs, down the hallway they stopped by the last door, the door had a large metal pentagram on it.

Asmodeus: "well this is it."

Ron: "i'm scared... i mean i used to worship him... what if he doesn't take me back?"

Asmodeus: "the worst he can do is torture you... don't worry i'll be with you."

Asmodeus knocked on the door "master may i come in."

the door opened by itself, lucifer was sitting on his throne. "what is it you want?"

Asmodeus: "i have brought someone to meet you."

Ron stepped into the room.

lucifer stood up "Ronald!"

Ron: "yes... it's me...your former servant."

lucifer went over to him and picked him up by the neck "why did you betray me!?"

Ron: "...i didn't mean to... it was my brother... he convinced me... but i never got used to serving his God... i want to come back to you."

lucifer loosened the grasp he had on Ron's throat "you might be telling the truth."

Ron: "i am.... i am... i'm sorry for betraying you..."

lucifer dropped him, Ron laid on the ground and looked up at lucifer

lucifer: "fine, i'll take you back. although your betrayal deserves to be punished!"

Ron: "please have mercy... i'm sorry."

lucifer: "you should have thought of that before you bowed the knee to that tyrant!"

Asmodeus: "please master have mercy on him... he's just a human, you know how stupid they are."

Ron: "yes... i was stupid... extremely stupid."

lucifer: "hmmm yes you were... but you deserve to be punished for that. get on your knees!"

Ron gets on his knees.

lucifer: "Asmodeus tear the back of his robe!"

Asmodeus easily tore the silk robe with his claws. lucifer handed Ron a whip with many tails on it.

Ron: "what am i supposed to do with this?"

lucifer: "you really are stupid!... i want you to flog yourself!"

Ron: "wait... why?"

lucifer: "as punishment for turning your back on me for all these years!... and don't stop unless i say so!" he sat back down in his throne "you may begin... and do it hard! i want to hear that whip crack and your screams of pain!"

Ron began, he barley groans as the whip hits his back.

lucifer: "do it harder!"

Ron hits his back harder, he yells in pain as he repeatedly strikes himself across the back.

lucifer: "stop."

Ron stops, he breathes heavily, his back has only a few scars on it. suddenly the whip disappears and a new whip appears in Ron's hand this one had twice as many tails on it and at the end of each of the tails there were little hooks.

lucifer: "if the hooks get caught in your flesh just yank the entire whip."

Ron: "but... won't that rip my flesh?"

lucifer: "yes! now begin!"

Ron begins, he yells in pain as some of the hooks dig into his flesh, he yanks the whip and gets all the hooks out of his back but rips his back a little. but he continues, lucifer is laughing at his screams of pain.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

good chapter

painful chapter. O.O

yeah...

i would say poor Ron.... but he's crazy. O.O

yeah...

you've always gotta have one crazy person in a story.

yeah...

jsut wouldn't be a story without one.

yeah...

lolness.

Chapter 19,

In Heaven,

Ben falls asleep on the couch. he had been asleep ever since Ron left. suddenly Jesus appears standing beside the couch where Ben is still asleep.

Jesus: "Ben..."

Ben is still asleep.

Jesus: "Ben. wake up."

Ben is still sleeping.

Jesus: "Benedict!"

Ben awoke startled.

Jesus: "glad to see you're awake."

Ben sat up on the couch "what is it Master?"

Jesus: "it's about your brother, he's in hell."

Ben: "what did he do this time?"

Jesus: "i didn't send him there. he went to help that demon i punished earlier today... and i'm afraid that he's joined lucifer again."

Ben: "you mean he's converted back to a satanist again?"

Jesus: "i'm afraid so..."

Ben: "what's happening to him now?"

Jesus: "lucifer commanded him to flog himself as a form of repentance."

Ben didn't know what to say. he looked down at the floor sadly.

Jesus: "don't worry i'll talk to him later on tonight. i'll try to convince him to come back to us."

Ben was crying "i shouldn't have insulted him the way i did... i should have been more supportive of him..."

Jesus sat down next to him and put an arm around him "there there, it's going to be alright. i'll forgive him for what he's done."

Ben hugs him and continues to weep "i'm just so worried about him..."

Jesus: "don't worry he'll be alright."

Ben let's gf Jesus, "sorry Master."

Jesus: "that's alright no need to apologize. i'm going to talk to Ron tonight." he stood up "you try to keep yourself together and don't be depressed he'll eventually come back." he disappeared.

Ben just sat on the couch. he wipes his eyes with the sleeve of his robe.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

poor Ben.

yeah he's really upset isn't he?

yep. i feel sorry for him.

Oh dear D8

I don´t.

why??

He should be sorry for his complete lack of empathy.

ok...

Chapter 20,

In hell,

Ron flogged himself for half an hour. he barley had any strength left. his back was completely torn. he sobbed in pain.

lucifer: "ohhh are you crying?... WELL GOOD!... it serves you right for betraying me!!"

Ron: "... can i please stop now?..."

lucifer: "NO!... i still don't think you're sorry enough for what you've done..."

Asmodeus: "master he's had enough... look at him he can barley move."

lucifer: "you're right... Ronald drop the whip."

Ron drops it. he prostrates before lucifer. "thank you master..."

lucifer: "although i do miss you worshiping me. why don't you worship me a little?"

Ron: "... i need to be healed of my wounds..."

lucifer: "heal on your own time! worship me NOW!"

Asmodeus: "please master... he can't worship properly with a wounded back."

lucifer: "yes he can! and i advise you to do the same!"

Asmodeus slowly bowed before lucifer.

lucifer: "bow up and down continuously and praise my name."

Ron and Asmodeus bowed up and down and said "hail satan." over and over again, this lasted for half an hour, suddenly Ron collapses from exhaustion.


next chapter coming tomorrow. sorry about these chapters being so short.

Oh no! I wonder whats going to happen.

Great Chapter.

Ron's probebly going to get in trouble. even though it was from exaustion.

yeah... he is.

i would say poor Ron.... but he's stupid.

yeah...

Loool!

ok, stupid ron. poor and stupid ron.

yeah... LOL

I can't wait to get gems this Sunday.

you really want gems, don't you?

Good chapter

Chapter 21,

Ron was having a dream, he was standing in a white room, suddenly Jesus appears in front of him.

Ron: "if this is an attempt for me to come back to you it's not going to work."

Jesus: "Ronald tell me is being with lucifer better? is being his slave better then being my son?"

Ron: "i was never your son!"

Jesus: "yes you are. i created you, i died so that you can be in Heaven. and what has lucifer done for you? treated you like a slave, hurting you... he doesn't care about you."

Ron: "he's only treating me like that because i betrayed him."

Jesus: "on earth you kept turning away from me and then when you wanted to come to me i didn't punish you for not coming to me in the first place."

Ron: "lucifer knows how to keep his followers from betraying him better than you do."

Jesus: "only because his followers fear him. the only thing he can offer you is hate. i can offer you love and mercy if you come back to me."

Ron: "no... no i'm not coming back to be your slave again!"

Jesus: "if you won't come back to me then maybe you'll come back for your brother..."

an image appeared in front of Ron, he saw Ben crying.

Jesus: "he's weeping for you. he's worried about you. he wants you to come back to Heaven."

Ron: "i won't come back."

Jesus: "you'll eventually realize your mistake and come back to me." *end dream*


In Heaven,

Ben walked inside the Temple, he walked up to Jesus.

Ben: "well Master did you talk to Ron?"

Jesus: "yes... it doesn't look like he's coming back anytime soon."

Ben: "i can't help but blame myself for what happen."

Jesus: "it's not your fault. Ronald has always been stubborn."

Ben: "i know... i'm going back to my mansion... goodnight Master and thank you for trying." he walked out of the Temple sadly.

Lumina was laying beside the throne "Master i have a question."

Jesus: "yes?"

Lumina: "why didn't you just forgive that demon for what he did?"

Jesus: "because he didn't ask for mercy or forgiveness, he wasn't sorry for his sin."

Lumina: "so someone has to be sorry for you to forgive them?"

Jesus: "yes."

Lumina: "so what happens to those that aren't forgiven?"

Jesus: "they go to hell."

Lumina: "what happens to them in hell?"

Jesus: "they burn for eternity."

Lumina: "...why?"

Jesus: "because they didn't come to me so that i can save them."

Lumina: "is it their fault that they are there?"

Jesus: "yes."

Lumina: "why don't you have mercy on them eventually?"

Jesus: "i sometimes ease their suffering but i am not able to take them out of hell."

Lumina: "why?"

Jesus: "because my father said i'm not supposed to take anyone out of hell once they're judged."

Lumina: "oh alright, that's all i wanted to know..." she was feeling concerned about those who were in hell.


next chapter coming tomorrow.

"What have the Romans ever done for us?!"

huh??

its a line from a monthy python movie

oh...

good chapter...but little worried for some reason.

Good chapter

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good chapter...but little worried for some reason.

why?.

i don't know....O.O

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