darkSpyro

Those are really good!

I really liked Poem 2, it reminds me of a pet who was abandoned and they just sit there waiting for their owner to come home, but he or she never does ):

Thanks!

Every one gets a diffrent veiw of a poem. A poem could mean many diffrent things then the writer. My origanla thought of Poem 2 was a guy that i like left, but as you said it can mean other things to diffrent ppl. Tahts the great thing about a peom.

Nice poems.

Thanks.

Not a problem.

Quote: Cynder 19000

Here's another one. I dont have a title for it yet but here it is.

What I see,
What I hear,
What I know,
It could scar you all,
The pain I feel,
Is not my own,
I want to help them,
They want me dead,
There in me,
And I feel there pain,
There loses,
There deaths,
I know to much for comfort,
They are long forgotten,
Long lost,
Long dead,
I feel lost,
I feel that there lost,
They controll me,
And i want them gone,
I want to help them,
They want me dead.

you could call it: Spirits

Quote: Cynder 19000

Poem 1

I feel so alone,
I feel so afraid,
I want help,
But theres nothing to fix,
There's nothing you can do,
There's nothing you can say,
I wake up in the morning,
Wondering how this could fo happend,
Wondering what I should say,
Should i lie for the loved one?
Or should i tell the truth,
And make you pay?
You wont belive me,
You'll think im crazy,
You'll think im insane,
I feel so alone,
I feel so afraid.

Poem 2

I want the pain to go,
I want the sadness gone,
I want him to come back,
But he'll never show,
I sit by the window,
I wach the the rain drip down the glass,
I wait for the message,
But it'll never come,
He left without warning,
I wish i said goodbye,
I wish i could see him just one last time,
I wish he'll come back,
But he'll never show.

poem 1: inner fear
poem 2: sorrow

AND I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Thanks.

And ill use those titles, thanks CL.

It's nothing!

Here 2 more. The first one is untitled.

My past,
Present,
Future,
It written down,
On pen and paper,
Word for word,
Day by day,
I've smeaked a peak,
Into my future,
What i saw,
Should never of been uncovered.

Locked up
I feel locked up,
Im my own future,
I watch it like a movie,
It flashes pass my eyes,
I want it to stop,
I dont want to know,
How I die,
Im locked up,
In future deprstoin,
Locked up because of feeling,
Locked up because of my connectoin,
Locked up because of dreams,
Locked up because of my situatoin,
I try to get out,
Form the lock and key,
I try to wake up,
Form this horrible dream,
I feel locked up,
In my own future.

Interesting.

lol kk

that first one is sort of bugging me. what is it that should have remained secret!?

I really dont want to say...

oh, but if you know what it is then give it a suitable title. OOH! I know! "the unspeakable"!?

Here's another one:

Live life to the fullest,
Live life at it's best,
'Cause you never know,
When it'll end,
What would you do,
If today was you last day,
The last day to tell the people you care for,
That you truely were thare,
The last day to make your sins forgiven,
Only if you could,
Would you tell him,
That you truely wanted to be thare,
That you ruely loved him,
What if tomorrow was to late,
Would you treat it like any other day,
Or would you treat it as your best,
If today was your last day,
The last day to smile and laugh,
That there was no more yeasterday,
The last to day to cry and sob,
That today was you last,
Would you regret that other day,
Would you try to make it your best day,
If today was your last day,
Would you think you wasted life,
Or would you think you lived it right,
What if tomorrow was to late,
Would you try to set things right,
Or would you leave it at that,
If today was you last day

Nice poem you got there.

Thanks.

You have a great talent at make poems , the bests what I've read.

That's a sad poem, but good.

Thanks.

You're welcome.

wonderful, but now it makes me thing I'm gonna' be killed soon... O.O

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^Exactly my thoughts.

O.O I'm staring at myself. any who, when's there gonna' be more poems!?

Ya, im going to post one later today.

EDIT: here

I sit in my room,
It's a gloomy day,
Like always,
While you've got blue sky's,
Some one i care for dies,
While your out haveing fun,
I feel like mt lifes done,
As always,
I dotn remeber,
The last time i was achully happy,
The last time i didnt fake a smile,
The last time i diled the phone,
To call a freind,
I've got wounds,
That will never mend,
I dotn know why im here,
Other then to suffer,
When i hear laughter,
It makes me want tocry,
There will be a time,
That i will die.

it's spelled, actually. but really good anyway.

....loooolnesss

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

Ill pt more up when I find my damn jornal...

lol! Xp