darkSpyro

Quote: GamingMaster_76

i dont think vivendi intended it, but it makes more sense that way in my story.

Well.... Cynder said "I love you" to Spyro at the end off DOTD. And, unfortunately, I think she said it meaning that she literally loves Spyro, not just as a friend. And if they would be brother and sister, then that would be really.... weird....

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!!

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Quote: karen f

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!!

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Your reasonably new, so I'll just give you some freindly advice... People won't appologise for something like this... And you won't get any freinds on here with that kind of attitude. Just a word of warning...

i`m going to make a bro and sis topic now

Quote: karen f

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!!

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Hey, Bionocle!
I don't care what u say, I agree w/karen!
N', if it's ok, I'm her freind!

Quote: MinM20

Quote: karen f

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!!

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Hey, Bionocle!
I don't care what u say, I agree w/karen!
N', if it's ok, I'm her freind!

I never said you didn't have to agree with me, I was stating my opinion... Am I not aloud to do that anymore? Last time I cheaked its a free world...

yeah you can state your opinion but theres a way to state that opinion lol. its like stating your opinion to your boss at work yelling at him or acting like a jerk to him when he asks you nicely about a opinion. Thats how you get fired. Desi keep going, its your story you aint doing nothing wrong please continue. I stated my opinion to desi on how to make her story better. Instead of bashing or saying something sucks in a rude way, tell the person some ideas on how to improve something. Just give your input and if the person listens and likes how you told them to do better they will respond by trying to do better.

I'll post the next chapter as soon as i can. i hope you all can wait that long... i'll try to post verry verry soon.

Quote: S240sx24

yeah you can state your opinion but theres a way to state that opinion lol. its like stating your opinion to your boss at work yelling at him or acting like a jerk to him when he asks you nicely about a opinion. Thats how you get fired. Desi keep going, its your story you aint doing nothing wrong please continue. I stated my opinion to desi on how to make her story better. Instead of bashing or saying something sucks in a rude way, tell the person some ideas on how to improve something. Just give your input and if the person listens and likes how you told them to do better they will respond by trying to do better.

But what if the boss is yelling at you before you state your opinion to them... Anyway, I can't be bothered with this anymore. There are just some people who won't give up and will just scream their heads off until they get their way...

If your boss was yelling at you just smile and say sure ok. next thing you know he gets the boot. But the way you came on bionicle was rude. thats all i got to say. Desi I cant wait.

Quote: bionicle2809

Quote: S240sx24

yeah you can state your opinion but theres a way to state that opinion lol. its like stating your opinion to your boss at work yelling at him or acting like a jerk to him when he asks you nicely about a opinion. Thats how you get fired. Desi keep going, its your story you aint doing nothing wrong please continue. I stated my opinion to desi on how to make her story better. Instead of bashing or saying something sucks in a rude way, tell the person some ideas on how to improve something. Just give your input and if the person listens and likes how you told them to do better they will respond by trying to do better.

But what if the boss is yelling at you before you state your opinion to them... Anyway, I can't be bothered with this anymore. There are just some people who won't give up and will just scream their heads off until they get their way...

*shudders* my father...

Quote: S240sx24

If your boss was yelling at you just smile and say sure ok. next thing you know he gets the boot. But the way you came on bionicle was rude. thats all i got to say. Desi I cant wait.

When I said what?

Flame war #3.

I read the post you first posted on here and MinM20 called you out on it. If you didnt delete it I'd show you but whatever its ok. Not going to start a flame war. I'll leave it at that, sorry desi for the inconvience. continue.

ohh why do bad freaks alays have to come back? i miss the peace. >.> >.> WHYYYY? OH WHYYY. lawl good story.

Quote: Pinkdesi101

Flame war #3.

No, I was just curious... Thats all...

Quote: S240sx24

I read the post you first posted on here and MinM20 called you out on it. If you didnt delete it I'd show you but whatever its ok. Not going to start a flame war. I'll leave it at that, sorry desi for the inconvience. continue.

I'm still confused but yeah, we'll just leave it at that...

Done and done...

PC ur story, desi!

I'll make the next chapter now. I don't know if the song i'm listening to will help me or distract me. oh well....
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Chapter 2:
"Cyndro, get up." Thunder said, and nudged his friend. Cyndro groaned, but she sat up, blinking. Thunder dropped a rabbit at her feet. "Here," He said. "You'll need it."
"What about you?" Cyndro asked. "You need to eat too."
"It's ok. I caught a bird." He replied. "Once your finished with that, we need to move on. Malefor's army is going to be searching the forest, and the farther away from it, the better."
Cyndro quickly ate the rabbit, and stood up. "ok, i'm ready." She said. "but, which way are we going to go?"
"I think we need to go this way." He walked forward a little ways. "Come on," He said. "We don't want the army to find us." Cyndro followed her friend through the trees. She heard a rustle in the leaves. She turned back and saw a green and purple dragon. She was the same age as Cyndro and Thunder.
"Hello Thunder." She said, then smirked.
"Rachel!" Thunder said. He stepped in front of Cyndro, trying to protect her. "What are you doing here?"
"I'm helping our uncle, what does it look like i'm doing?" She said casually. "so, this is your best friend, i take it." She took a step towards the two dragons, and Thunder crouched down, ready to attack.
"Your not going to hurt her!" He growled.
"Who is she?" Cyndro whispered to Thunder. Rachel heard what the purple dragoness said.
"You don't know?" Rachel asked. "Thunder's my brother, and a lousy one at that."
"Your the bad sibling!" Thunder shot back. "How could you do what you did to us? After we trusted you? I thought you were different than our uncle, but apparently you arn't."
"And i'm proud of that!" Rachel said."Our uncle is the smart one. Her parents are dumb to think that this world can be saved from him." She looked at Cyndro.
Cyndro tried to not flinch at what Rachel said. Was it true? Did the world really have no hope of being saved?
"Your wrong!" Cyndro said, steping next to Thunder. He looked at her, but by the way she looked back, he knew she didn't need to be protected. "If you really think that your uncle is going to win, then your the dumb one. My parents have beaten your uncle once, and they can do it again, easily."
"You think so?" Rachel asked."Well, we'll be able to see who's right when this is over." She turned her attention towards Thunder again."You'll be sorry that you didn't come with me to help our uncle."She said."Now, if i remember right, one of Malefor's armys is near here. If you'll excuse me, i'm going to go warn them your here." She smirked again, then ran back the way Cyndro and Thunder came.
"Come on!" Thunder said. "We need to get out of here, before the army gets here!"
"I'm right behind you!" Cyndro said. They both turned around and ran. They heard Rachel's voice right behind them.
"Attack!"
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did you like this chapter? sorry it took me so long, had a block. I'll try to make the next chapter asap.

Awasome!

it's wonderful! more more more more!

i will. don't worry.

when? my story tummy is hungery!

*rolls eyes* when i get insperation. (better hope i get some insperation soon) that, or when my mom gets home so i can have my zune to listen to my "Story song". yea, i nkow, why the heck is my zune in her car. the answer: i was too lazy today to get it before she left.

Quote: karen f

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!! >:(

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Babyish behavior? Speak for yourself. That whole post that you wrote was babyish.....

Anyway, I don't think I got my question answered lol. xD

Quote: DarkCynder_543

Quote: karen f

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!!

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Babyish behavior? Speak for yourself. That whole post that you wrote was babyish.....

Anyway, I don't think I got my question answered lol. xD

my point was stop filling her story topic with flame wars

Quote: karen f

Quote: DarkCynder_543

Quote: karen f

U guys stop it!!!! enough with this u gonna go arguing, soiling desi's wonderful fasinating story filed pages with a battle is just discraseful!
i don't mean to be rude but its the truth!
u wanna argue just say the word and i will post a topic where u can argue on this all u want but not on desi's topic so apoligize for this baby-ish behavior, drop it entirly, or request for me to make a topic for u to argue on right now!!! >:(

oh and desi srry about this, u just keep addin' on to this great story ok ?

Babyish behavior? Speak for yourself. That whole post that you wrote was babyish.....

Anyway, I don't think I got my question answered lol. xD

-_- my point was stop filling her story topic with flame wars

I know, and I gotta admit, fighting on someone's story IS not a good thing to do... But there are mature ways to handle fights like these.

*backs away*
ok! time for another chapter!
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"Come on!" Thunder said to Cyndro, but before they could get away, some orcs stepped in front of them. They looked around desprately, trying to find a gap to escape, but they were circled. "We have to fight." Thunder told Cyndro. "I won't let you get hurt. Don't worry." Cyndro was uncertain. They were outnumbered.
"Should have joined our uncle." Rachel said again. "You had your chance." The orcs walked towards Cyndro and Thunder. Cyndro shot ice shards from her mouth, while Thunder was shooting earth missles. Rachel saw that the army was getting smaller. She needed to do something, or else when she came back to her uncle, he would get angry. Just after all of the army was gone, Thunder and Cyndro started to run. Rachel flew ahead and landed in front of Thunder. She smirked, and then tail swiped him away from Cyndro.
"Thunder!" She yelled, and tried to run towards him, but Thunder stood up, and looked at her.
"Cyndro, you can't fight her. She's too strong. This is between me and her." Thunder and Rachel circled eachother, then Thunder leaped towards his sister. Rachel stepped aside, and scratched Thunder's leg. He growled, then got back up. Cyndro just stood there, too scared to move. "Rachel, you don't have to do this. You can come back with Cyndro and I, and everything will be all right." Thunder said, trying to avoid a fight with his sister.
"I'm sorry Thunder, but i've already chosen my path." She lunged for him, but Thunder hit her stomach. She spun around and hit him with comet dash. He fell down, hurt.
"Thunder!" Cyndro yelled again. Rachel turned her head, only to see a purple orb with Cyndro inside it. The sphere exploded and hit Rachel, hard. She had no choice but to fly back to her cave. When Rachel was gone, Cyndro ran over to Thunder, who was bleeding badly. "Thunder, I'm so sorry." She whispered.
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sorry, i would add more, but i need to get off now. i hope you can wait ppl.

yay more more more!!!

i don't want to let it wait until tonight(might forget), but i dont want to use all my time this morning....

i'll make another chapter. hooray!
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Thunder opened his eyes. "It's ok Cyndro." He said softly. "I'll be ok."
"No you won't thunder." Cyndro said to him. "We need to get you to warfang, or else..." She couldn't finish her sentence.
Thunder tried to get up, but he was too hurt. "Please don't leave Thunder." Cyndro pleaded.
"I'll try the best i can, but even if i don't make it, i'll still be with you."
Cyndro heard wing beats coming towards her. She stood up, prepared to fight, but when she saw who it was, she calmed down. "Mom!" She yelled. "I'm over here!"
"What happened?" Cynder asked, flying down to the two dragons. Lilac was right behind her. They saw how hurt Thunder was, but before they could ask anything Cyndro answered their question.
"Rachel." Cyndro said angerly. Lilac and Cynder shared a worried glance. "We saw... We saw Malefor." Cyndro explained. We tried to run away, but then Rachel followed us, and she hit him. hard."
"Thunder." Lilac whispered softly. "We'll take care of you. don't worry." She picked him up gently. "Come on Cynder, we need to get him to warfang, and quick." She started to fly above the trees.
Cynder and Cyndro followed her, and they quickly flew to Dragon City.
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hope you like this chapter.

i posted a little more on chapter 7

random.... but ok.

need....more....chapters!!!!!!!
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Cyndro, Lilac, and Cynder looked at thunder lying in a bed. A green dragon came over.
"Do you think he'll be ok?" Lilac asked.
"We don't know yet." The green dragon replied. "We can just hope." Cyndro put her tail on his paw. He flinched, and she pulled back. She looked at him sadly. He might die. She thought. It's all my fault, I shouldn't have let him battle Rachel.
The green dragon was talking to Cynder and Lilac, but Cyndro wasn't listning. She was lost in her thoughts. Only her mother's voice made her come out of it. "Cyndro, come on." She said. "We need to go." Cyndro looked back at Thunder, and walked towards her mother who was near the door. Once they were outside, they started to fly to their cave.
"Will he be ok?" Cyndro asked her mom. Cynder just shook her head.
"Like the doctor said, we have no idea." Cynder started to fly towards the ground, and Cyndro followed. They landed at the cave entrance. Spyro ran out, and nuzzled Cynder.
"What happened?" He asked.
"Cyndro, go inside. You should sleep." Cynder said. "We're going to stay out here a little bit."
Cyndro walked into the cave, and flopped down onto a bed made of grass. She put her head on her front legs, and went to sleep.
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Cyndro was walking through a forest, looking around franticly. The moonlight barely came through the trees, making everything dark. She heard something, and ran towards it. She was desprate to see something, but when she saw who it was, she stopped dead in her tracks. Looking at her, smirking, was Rachel. "Hello Cyndro." She said.
"No!" Cyndro said, backing up. "What's happening?" She cried. Rachel stepped forwards, preparing to attack Cyndro. Cyndro turned around and ran as fast as she could, but Rachel kept appearing in front of her. Soon, her legs could carry her no more, and she dropped from exauxtion. Rachel came behind her. Cyndro closed her eyes, preparing to feel Rachel hit a deadly blow to her, but nothing happened. She opened her eyes, and saw Thunder and Rachel in front of her, circling each other. I'm seeing this all over again! Rachel thought. She turned her head, but the image of what was happening kept flooding through her brain. She was seeing this all over again, but this time, she was powerless. Rachel lunged for Thunder and used her fear breath. He yelled in pain and fell to the ground. "No!" Cyndro yelled. Thunder looked over at her, pain in his eyes, and they closed. Cyndro could tell he had died.
"Your next!" Rachel smirked, and walked towards her. Cyndro tried to get up, but she was too exausted. Rachel was right in front of her now. Cyndro picked up her head and looked Rachel straight in the eyes. "Goodbye." Rachel said, and thrust her tailblade towards Cyndro.
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Cyndro gasped. Her hides heaved heavily, and she felt like she was still in the dream.
"Are you all right?" Cyndro heard her mother ask. Cyndro looked over, and saw that she was still in the cave. She breathed a sigh of relief.
"It was just a dream." She muttered.
"What was just a dream?" Cynder asked, eyeing her daughter.
"Oh, nothing." Cyndro replied quickly. She just got a glare from her mother. "Can i go to see if Thunder's ok?" She asked.
"Ok, but don't take too long." Cynder said. Cyndro nodded, and then flew off towards Warfang.
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does the long chapter make up for not having any for a while?

WOW! Very good!

and long.
i think Cyndro acts older than the intended age i made her so does thunder....lol.

LOLNESS WRITE MORE! I AM BORED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WILL THUNDER DIE?

that's for me to know and you to read
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Cyndro walked into Thunder's room, but it was empty. Fear flooded through her body. She just stood there, but then a dragon came in back of her and nudged her. Cyndro turned around, and saw Thunder looking at her. "Thunder!" She said happily. "You're alive!"
"What? You thought i was going to die?" He asked. "You can't get rid of me that easily!" Cyndro laughed, and they both ran outside, smiling.
"I'm so glad your okay." Cyndro said.
"Come on." Thunder said. "We still need to tell my mom that I'm alright." They flew out of Warfang, headed towards Lilac's cave. They landed and quickly found her.
"Thunder! You're okay!" She ran up to Thunder and nuzzled him. "Come on, i'll get you something to eat. you must be hungry. You can come along Cyndro. They flew back up into the sky and started to head towards warfang again.
"I think we should've just stayed there." Thunder joked. "oh no. too...long...can't....make it." He pretended to drop towards the ground. Cyndro just rolled her eyes and laughed. Thunder came back up, shooting past her. She followed him, gaining altitude. Soon, they were all the way in the clouds. They flew together, then cyndro looked down a little, then hovored. "What are you doing?" Thunde asked.
A smile appeared on Cyndro's face. "Bye." She said, then stopped flapping her wings, putting them at her side. She fell like a rock.
"Hey! Wait for me!" Thunder yelled after her and followed. They both darted past Lilac.
"Slow down you two!" She said, rolling her eyes. "When will young dragons ever learn. She carefully landed on the ground, with Thunder and Cyndro already on the ground long before her.
"Come on." Lilac said, and walked into a restrant, with Cyndro and Thunder just a little ways behind, playing around and talking.
I'm so glad he's not gone. Cyndro thought.
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The green dragon from the hospital watched Cyndro and Thunder playing around, and snorted in desgust. He walked back inside, and walked up to a young purple dragon. "Did you give it to him?" She asked.
"Yes." The green dragon said, nodding.
"Good. I'll go report it to him." she said. "No one will know. IT'll happen to Thunder when everyone are the least expecting something to happen. I just hope it works."
"Of couse it will. Are you saying he's dumb?"
"No!" the purple dragon snapped. "Anyways, you better have givin it to Thunder. If i learn you didn't, your dead." She threatened, then flew off.
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Cyndro was running through a dark forest again, not being able to see. She ran into Thunder. Concern was on his face.
"What's wrong?" She asked. As if it were the answer, rachel jumped and pushed him down. She swung her tailblade towards Thunder, but Cyndro jumped and blocked the attack with her own tail. Rachel looked at her, furious.
"You can't do this!" She yelled.
"It's just a dream. I can do anything i want." Cyndro replied.
Rachel yelled in anger and the dream faded away.
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who was the dragon was?
what did the green dragon do?
why am i asking you these questions?
lol. you'll find out the answers sometime....(not the third one)
plz comment!

im so glad thunder didnt die. more, please and thank you!

your welcome.
just to put this:
years passed, and soon Thunder and Cyndro became teenagers...
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"You'll never catch up to me!" Cyndro said, and flew quickly, swiftly dodging trees at the last second.
"We'll see about that!" Thunder yelled after her, and flew as quick as he could. He knocked into her and they both fell onto the ground in a laughing heap.
"That was just luck." Cyndro said.
"Yea. You just keep thinking that, okay?" Thunder teased. They both stood up, and their eyes widened. In front of them, was the same cave they stumbled into years ago, and found Malefor. The cave had been looked into and there were no sightings of Malefor, Rachel, or any grublans since then. They looked at eachother, and slowly walked in. They came into the place with the purple crystal floor.
"It is deserted." Cyndro said.
"Where do you think Malefor went?" Thunder asked.
"Wait, look at this." Cyndro said, looking at a bottle with liquid. "It looks familiar, i think they gave it to you when you were in the hospital." Fear crept over her. Why would it be here?
Thunder walked over to her. He looked at it too. "It dosn't look good." He looked worried. "Are you sure i got this?"
"It probebly isn't that. It's been so long, it probebly looked way different than this." She said, reasuring him, but it was really her who needed reasuring. "Let's get out of here." She said. They both started to walk out of the cave. Cyndro looked at Thunder. What was that stuff, and what does it do? She thought.
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Cyndro looked around. She was in a cave. She could fell Thunder was right next to her. She turned around to look at him, and saw his scales turn from light purple to black. She looked at him in horror. He turned his head towards her, his eyes were glowing white. Cyndro backed up, startled. He walked towards her, his eyes seemed to burn her.
"Thunder! No!" Cyndro cried, but he kept walking towards her. She felt her tail touch the side of the cave. She was trapped. Thunder started to glow purple-black. She realized that he was going into a fury. She put her wings in front of her fave to protect herself, then there was a blast of pain.
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Cyndro mumbled in her sleep. Her eyes opened quickly at the sound of her friend's voice.
"Cyndro! Are you there?" Thunder stood at the entrance of the cave, calling his friend's name. Cyndro groaned a little then got out of her bed. She walked up to Thunder, but was keeping a distance.
"What's wrong?" Thunder asked. "Do i look like a ghost or something?"
"Sorry." Cyndro said. "Just a dream i had." She went closer to him.
"Don't worry. It was just a dream." He said.
"Just a dream." Cyndro echoed. she wasn't too sure, but she had to believe it.
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Any ideas what that stuff was? TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!!!

poison? it might be poison.

mabey.........

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i've got a block....i hate blocks.

i do too, because i need more story!!!!!!

i thought i made another chapter...i guess it was a dream or something...o.o
am i going crazy?

you were always crazy lol jk.jk. now write more. i'm serious. i will bite you.

i added another chapter on my story...

which 1?

link.

probably my most mature chapter yet, inspired by Deltora Quest...

i've already been bitten before (that kid always creeped me out.)