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#51 Posted: 01:32:33 21/02/2010 | Topic Creator
lol i will guys i will proberly write some more 2mrow lol that shiny thingy is a secret myah ha ha ha ha i am soo evil lol... now im gna go in my pool !!!! cya l8r !!
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#52 Posted: 04:05:10 23/02/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 10
------------------ That night tiny woke up exacly on time and darted his head around to see if the coast was clear. It was he glanced over at Pooky's hammock clipped to the roof he was snoring ( as usual). He streched and flew out of the window in the wall next to his mini hammock. By the time he had got to the same park that they had been to eariler in the day he was shivering with cold because the night was frosty and cold. well DUHHH it was winter. He landed on a thick branch on a tall oak tree and scanned the ground below. After he had gotten tired of looking up in the air he seared on the ground. Just when he was about to give up and fly home something large and square caught his beady eye. His mouth opened in suprize maybe he had found that shiny object after all ! He wadded over to the object that lay almost hidden in the long motionless grass. He picked it up with his wing and walked over to a spot underneath the moonlight. He almost died of shock he couldn't believe his eyes. In his wing he held a monster/robot creator remote !!!!!!!!! Tiny screamed in delight and flew home as fast as he could clutching onto the remote as he went.....
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#53 Posted: 06:22:23 23/02/2010
COOL!!!!!!! I cant wait 2 see what happends
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#54 Posted: 03:49:15 27/02/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 11
--------------------- " BOSS!!!" Tiny screamed unaware as ever that Pooky was fast asleep "BOSS" screamed Tiny again as he burst into the cave. pooky got such a fright he fell out of his hammock and landed on his stomach and because he was quite plump now his blubber/flab bounced him back up and up to the roof where he made a massive hole! "oh dear" thought Tiny as he started to creep slowly away but pooky was too fast " YOU IDIOT YOU COULD OF GOT ME KILLED AND WHY WERE YOU OUT OF THE CAVE ANYWAY !!! ??? WHAT COULD OF BEEN SO DAM IMPORTANT THAT YOU BURST IN ON ME LIKE THAT HOW DARE YOU!!!" screamed pooky as he fluttered angrily back to the ground " AND LOOK WHAT YOU HAVE DONE TO THE ROOF NOW WE WILL HAVE TO REPAIR IT !!" screamed Pooky again. Poor old Tiny whose eardrums were fit to burst uttered the tiniest squeak ever " i have something to show you" In tiny's mind he said to himself "really that was your fault that you made a hole in the roof you big fat dragon!!" " WELL SHOW IT TO ME THEN YOU IDIOT COME ON SPIT IT OUT!!" Tiny slowly held out his wing shaking and showed the remote to Pooky. He set it on Pooky's working desk and slowly backed away onto his mini hammock on his side of the cave and sat there waiting for an reply. Pooky picked up the remote with his scaly hand and scanned it with his eyes at first he thought to himself what a piece of junk!! but then he glanced at it once more and said ' t-t- Tiny where did you find this?" demanded and questioned Pooky " well you know that shiny thing i saw lying on the ground at the park today?" "Yes" replied Pooky " well that was it ! i went back to the park tonight and found it im not quite sure what it is but im pretty sure that it can help us with our scheme !!! " said Tiny evily. " YES YES YES GREAT THINKING TINY!!" " WHY THANKS BOSS!" said tiny beaming. " i cant belive i'm saying this but this used to be my brother's remote!" said Pooky stunned and speechless. " he was going to use it to finish off Spyro and Cynder!!! but they got to him just too fast" said Pooky flashing back. "That was in the dawn of the dragon" said pooky coming back to reality "anyway yes i belive we can use this to our advantge!!" smirked Pooky and they got to work straight away....
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#55 Posted: 22:33:53 27/02/2010
Cool!!
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#56 Posted: 04:16:38 04/03/2010 | Topic Creator
sorry for the wait guys ... will write some more 2mrow lol !!
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#57 Posted: 23:04:33 05/03/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 12
--------------------- They had been working for quite some time now on the robots when one of the robots made a crackling noise and it surged up into the air and was floating in the air beacuase it had hover boots. " EXCELLENT!!!!!!!" cried pooky as he raised his greasy sticky claws into the air. "Finally out job is acomplished!!!" " uhh boss that's only one robot done i believe that there is still like - tiny counted on his fingers and silently in his head and then said " AT LEAST 150 TO GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" no sooner said than done then the other 150 robots rised into the air !! " HA HA HA WE HAVE DONE IT !!! " now to finally destroy Spyro,Cynder and urgh Layla!!" ONCE AND FOR ALL !!!!!!!!!
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#58 Posted: 03:47:11 10/03/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 13
--------------------- meanwhile Spyro,Cynder and Layla had been wandering around their replacement house worrying. they were waiting for the results to see if Pooky was really the one who had burnt down half the temple. suddenly a big bang echoed throughout the temple " WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT?" Cynder cried. " I dont know but we had better find out!" said Spyro and they all ran out of the temple and scanned the area. Layla was looking around and flew up into the air and looked around but there was nothing then she glided over onto the roof and dissappeared. a few seconds later Spyro and Cynder heard a loud echoing scream! they both jumped and cried " LAYLA IS THAT YOU ?" there was no answer and then they heard a giant flap of wings and a voice echoed over the valley " SPYRO,CYNDER AT LAST WE MEET!" " what do you want pooky??" growled Spyro just then Cynder glanced over at the sack that pooky clutched tightly in his paw. then she cried out " Spyro Layla's in that sack !!! let our daughter go now pooky or you will pay!!!!!!!" " ha ha ha you will not defeat me as easily as you did to my brother!!!" smirked pooky " oh and you will have to get me first!!!!" teased pooky and he flapped away loudly without a backwards glance. " we have to get her back!!" cried Spyro and with that Spyro and Cynder chased after him .............
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#59 Posted: 05:04:37 10/03/2010
Ohhhhhh ni wounder whats gonna happen!!!! keep going!
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#60 Posted: 22:09:53 13/03/2010 | Topic Creator
write more 2mrow !!!!
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#61 Posted: 04:19:35 14/03/2010
K write more when you can!!!!
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#62 Posted: 04:54:05 14/03/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 14
------------------- Spyro and Cynder had been chasing after pooky for a few minutes now flat out and they needed a rest. gasping for breath they flapped weakly over onto a tree branch and fell into a heap on the branch. " omg im not as fit as i used to be !" Cynder joked half serious half sad. " we can't give up now we have to get Layla back!" cried Spyro. " come on then lets go!" said Cynder tiredly but not backing down without a fight and they flapped as hard as they could to pooky's lair. meanwhile pooky had other plans .......
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#63 Posted: 04:54:43 14/03/2010 | Topic Creator
lol sorry guys that was all i could write i got to have dinner !! CYA write more 2mrow !
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#64 Posted: 04:55:06 14/03/2010
Cool!! Its a little short though.............
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#65 Posted: 21:36:42 20/03/2010 | Topic Creator
pooky and Tiny had been working franticly rushing and knowing that Spyro and Cynder were not far behind them. " quick that will have to do!!" said pooky evily. " lets prepare the robots!!" pooky commanded all of the 150 evil robots to form a wall for miles so Spyro and Cynder could not get past so easily. Then out of nowhere they heard a explosion and the wall that lead to pooky and tiny's lair errupted into flames. And there stood Spyro breathing flames tall and proud. Pooky got a bit of a fright ok ( a big one) but that didn't put him off. " ha ha ha ha FOOLS DID YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD STOP ME SO EASILY ?!" pooky boomed. Spyro went to reply but was not fast enough. " i will not be defeated i am pooky and you will die!!!" spyro and cynder started to giggle at that one and pooky had had enough. " ENOUGH !!!!!! SPYRO AND CYNDER SAY GOODBYE TO YOUR PRECIOUS LAYLA!!" " ROBOTS ATTACK !!!!!!" " huh what WHAT!?" said Spyro and Cynder confused and with that the 150 robots surged foward to Spyro and Cynder and attacked. And the great battle begun .....
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#66 Posted: 00:29:08 21/03/2010
*gasps* That is AWSOME!! Plz keep on going!
And could u plz read my story!
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#67 Posted: 05:31:48 22/03/2010
Cool! Can't wait for more!
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#68 Posted: 23:49:18 26/03/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 15
-------------------- Spyro shouted " ahhhhhhh" for no reason at all and Cynder slapped him. " oww" said spyro rubbing his flaming red cheek. " This is no time for mucking around!" screamed Cynder "we are about to be attacked by giant robots who will not stop till we die! NOW DODGE!!!" Spyro and Cynder jumped out of the way and flew into the air. "FIGHT BACK!" pooky screamed gleefully. " fight back? ohhh il show you how to fight back!!!" said cynder and with that Cynder flung herself down at the robots as fast as a bullet with Spyro not far behind her. She destroyed about 10 all in a row and then got tired then Spyro stepped in. Cynder flew up and rested on a roof Spyro flew down and said " il take over from here sweety you have a rest. Spyro breathed a massive tidal wave of earth rocks flew everywhere and clunked the robots on the head then when they got dizzy Spyro them off with a massive head butt. " arrrrggggghhh" pooky cired out in anger "when will they ever give up !? " Cynder was flying down to breathe a big wave of shadow onto one of the robots but she had her back to Pookyso he took this opotunity as fast as it came and flew up behind her and said " lights out Cynder" Cynder turned around but not fast enough. the last thing she saw was pooky's claw swiping her face Cynder dropped to the ground motionless .....
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#69 Posted: 00:09:58 27/03/2010
OMG!!!! I wounder whats gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!
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#70 Posted: 05:50:30 28/03/2010 | Topic Creator
write more soon !
im going to queenstown in 2 weeks!
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#71 Posted: 22:05:16 01/04/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 16
--------------------- "Cynder noooo!" Spyro cried out. " myah ha ha ha you really thought that you could defeat me so easily ?" Pooky questioned with a smirk on his face. " Before spyro had a chance to reply pooky said " well if that answer is yes then you must be pretty pathetic " Pooky spat. Rage built up inside of spyro and all of a sudden he opened his mouth as wide and large as he could and big magnificent balls of flames shot out of his mouth and sped towards Pooky....... Meanwhile back at the lair Layla was having some troubles of her own. And she finally woke up. She opened her eyes slowly everything was blury as if she was in a dream.huh w-w what ? where am i ? all of these thoughts came into her head and suddelnly everything came flodded back to her.The kidnapping, the fire .. everything.....
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#72 Posted: 22:05:13 02/04/2010 | Topic Creator
write more 2mrow proberly happy easter!
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#73 Posted: 00:31:24 05/04/2010
Awsome! Keep going!!!
I'm back from holiday now!!!
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#74 Posted: 22:26:05 07/04/2010 | Topic Creator
okay i promise u pplz i will write more on friday ( 2mrow) cause then after sat morning im going to queenstown for a week !!!!!! so i won't be wrting any for a week sowy ! :-c
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#75 Posted: 22:34:42 07/04/2010
Quote: galbatorix
:c Okay, have a nice time! Write more as soon as you can.
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#76 Posted: 06:29:08 08/04/2010
PLZ write more soon and have a great time going Queenstown!!! First time on a plane!!
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#77 Posted: 00:32:50 18/04/2010 | Topic Creator
okay okay okay everyone i pinky promise u one thousand times that i will write a whole chapter 2mrow !! i hvnt had time cause iv been in queenstown 4 a week lol and just to tell u it's bloody beautiful !
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#78 Posted: 22:02:53 23/04/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 17
----------------- In a rage Layla charged foward and headbutted the cage with all her might.It creaked and groaned for a few seconds but then it gave way." Woooooo" !! "i did it " cried layla and she jumped up and punched the air.now back to reality! thought Layla she glanced out of the window and saw giant evil robots closing in behind Cynder. What the hell !! giant evil robots?? since when did they come into the picture!? sighing Layla sprinted straight ahead and rised into the air above the ground and up towards the giant evil robots...Meanwhile giant flaming balls of fire speed toawrds pooky. Just in time Pooky dodged. Spyro growled and unleashed more giant balls of flame. Pooky dodged again this time only missing them by an inch. " ha ha ha " mocked Pooky " do you really have no other way of defeating me ?" " ha useless" muttered Pooky under his breath. Pooky started to fly back to his cave roof where he then planned to sit on a deckchair with an umbrella and popcorn and a cocktail and watch the fight. Spyro then saw his chance with his back to me i could somehow trap him... but how? he needed to something genuis quickly time was running out! his eyes spun around the room only then to come back to where he had started then they scanned the corners. There was a metal cage lying there.... of course !!! Spyro thought. He charged over to the cage grabbed it in his mouth aimed and flung it over pooky! With no time to lose he charged over to the cage and fired earth breath all over the outlines of the bottom of the cage no sooner than done tree roots began weaving themselfs around the cage so Pooky couldn't escape. He then sealed the roots by sending layers of ice over the roots.Satisfied with his work he smirked at pooky and flew over to cynder and layla who were getting surrounded by Giant evil robots..... !!!
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#79 Posted: 22:05:14 23/04/2010 | Topic Creator
ha ha ha told u i would write more i just didnt stick 2 my time !! lol
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#80 Posted: 06:42:32 24/04/2010
Kewl keep on going!
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#81 Posted: 04:33:49 27/04/2010 | Topic Creator
okay pplz lol sry bout not riteing more eailier but iv been so caught up in this fight !! lolz buts its ovr now ... o and also iv been caught up in idle chatter lolz so im gonna rite more on hmmm thursay !! if my computer works....
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#82 Posted: 04:29:13 29/04/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 18
------------------ Pooky was screaming and banging his fists on the cage but it was no use. He could not get out. " arrrghhh you have spoiled my plans i will get yooouuuuu!!!" but spyro could not hear his pathetic cries because he was already helping Cynder and Layla. " Cynder spun around and screamed when she saw the giant evil robots closing in on her. But then she saw layla and she was reilved. " Quick layla cover the back of me and il do the front!!" Layla spun round and saw a large robot coming for her. She leaped into the air twirled in the air for effect and kicked the robot in the head hard she paused as she landed on the ground smoothly. the robot froze on the spot as if he was seeing stars then collapsed. then his head rolled off. Layla laughed and cheered. then Cynder said " looks like u have your fathers touch" Layla grinned and as if on cue Spyro landed right behind Cynder puffing heavily. " whoa ! what happened?" Questioned Cynder " oh i just defeated all the robots that were about to attack you ! but yeah it was no biggie " commented spyro grinning. "oh thanx honey!" said Cynder. They hugged and then made out. "OMG get a room ! " said Layla disusted " And anyway this isnt the time for that.... LOOK !!! " Layla screamed Cynder and Spyro turned around slowly and saw a massive wave coming fast towards them and above the wave was Red, ripto and gaul all screaming wth laughter........
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#83 Posted: 03:51:11 30/04/2010
ohhhhhhhhh i wounder wats gonna happen
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#84 Posted: 06:49:06 30/04/2010 | Topic Creator
lolz i just made a random as ending to the chapter lolz red guall and ripto tee hee but i thought it would be kwl
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#85 Posted: 01:38:01 03/05/2010 | Topic Creator
OK im making a change in da story instead of guall ripto and red its just gonna b red and ripto !
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#86 Posted: 23:42:07 07/05/2010 | Topic Creator
write more soon !! maybe 2mrow idk
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#87 Posted: 05:21:17 10/05/2010 | Topic Creator
ok im most likely gonna write more tomrow (tuesday)
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#88 Posted: 05:01:33 11/05/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 19
------------------ Spyro charged foward headbutting all of the robots out of his way. "sweety you saved us !" cried cynder. " yeah and theres more of that coming mum look out !!". once again spyro jumped over Cynder's head and kicked them out of the way. " uhh mum--dad where are all the rest of the robots " Questioned layla. It was dead quiet you could even hear the crows cawing. Then the sky turned black and all they could hear was a wooshing sound like running water. Spyro,Cynder and Layla all spun around slowly only to see a massive tidal wave coming straight at them and surfing it was Red and Ripto. " W-W-WHAT" screamed Spyro dumbfounded and horrified at the same time. As if to read his mind cynder said " oh no are they some of your old enimeis ??" " WHAT ! how did you know??" questioned Spyro. " mmm lucky guess" Cynder shrugged. As the wave was fastly appoching Layla was panicing. " yeah but their not just my old enimies i thought they were dead !!!!! " said Spyro still dumb founded. " well never mind that look whats coming!!" the wave had gotten even closer now so close that they didnt have time to react and the last thing that Spyro heard was Laylas cries then everything turned black...........
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#89 Posted: 10:58:27 12/05/2010
^ Do it!
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#90 Posted: 04:53:11 13/05/2010 | Topic Creator
do wut ?? lol
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#91 Posted: 03:47:48 14/05/2010
lol thats gud write more soon!
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#92 Posted: 06:30:36 14/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thanx write more soon !
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#93 Posted: 04:51:23 20/05/2010 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 20
----------------- " SPYRO-SPYRO-SPYRO !!!!!" cynder screamed. " w-w-w what? where am i ?" said spyro. " dad were in the middle of a tidal wave !!!!" Then laylas words reminded him of something. " oooo where are red and ripto ?? i wanna rip their heads off !!!"" said spyro fuming red. " no that will only make matters worse " said cynder with a wobbly voice. spyro looked at his surroundings cynder and layla were holding him up and they themselfs were only just staying afloat. " o uhh guys ?" yes ? questioned cynder spyro coughed and looked at his feet. " o right yes well umm " spyro coughed again and they let go of his legs. " uhh thanks now we need to find land we can't just stay here!! " yea i agree" said cynder im already tired i dont think i can stay up much longer" ya same " commented layla spyro scanned the area there was nothing but water for miles. " how about we search for land in the sky ?" suggested layla. " great idea"" said cynder but before layla had a chance to do anything a massive wave came and swept layla away and under. " LAYLA NO !!! " cynder screamed.......... i know its a bit short but i have to go to netball now...... CYA !!! xD
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#94 Posted: 04:41:09 21/05/2010
Oh man this storys getting better and better
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#95 Posted: 07:07:22 23/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thanx lol ur da only one whos reading it lol write more soon
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#96 Posted: 19:52:38 26/05/2010
yes please do write more.that is a very good story
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#97 Posted: 07:31:50 27/05/2010 | Topic Creator
thanx write more soon !
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#98 Posted: 01:40:36 29/05/2010 | Topic Creator
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While Cynder was screaming another wave came and a whole bunch of water came surging into her mouth. She coughed and glugged and choked. Spyro spun around in the water noticing that Layla had gone. " Cynder where is Layla ??? !!! " Spyro asked. But then when no answer came Spyro knew that something was wrong. Then he noticed a black shape floating down river. oh no that must be Cynder !! Spyro thought panicing. He swooped up and out of the water and nose dived down towards the black shape that was quickly heading towards a waterfall. crap i have to hurry!!! thought Spyro trying not to panic. He then sped up and was not far behind Cynder now. When he was close enough he extended his neck and opened his mouth. He grabbed Cynder up and out of the water safely in his mouth and looked for a safe and dry place well above the water to put her. He scanned everywhere and then finally saw a flower bed on the top of a flat mountain peak. He then thought that this was the best place he could find for now and swooped down and placed her gently down. now Cynder should be safe here i will come back when i find Layla. If only i knew where to start...........
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#99 Posted: 21:18:20 29/05/2010
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!! Oooooooo i woulder where Layla is!!!!
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#100 Posted: 22:51:21 29/05/2010 | Topic Creator
yea mon write more soon thnx !!
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