darkSpyro

(withered voice) more.... i need more to survive... more.... *dies*

NUUUU PINKDESI!!! NUUUUUUU WHYYY????!!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????!!!!!!!!!! *cries* she was so awesome!!

*cough* story stomach ... starving... cant.. hold... on ... much.. longer... without... u ... adding... more........................... * colapses*

wherever dead ppl go: ()
how did you die Karen?! great. everyone's dying. >.>

Wow, you people are obbsessed with this story.
I don;t know if I am continuing. i've run out of ideas.

mabe ember should get jealous or somthin... *dies of lack of this story*

can one of us take it over? please?

yeah this story is good. im excited to read this.

more you have too make another two dragons come in one female one male!!!

Quote: supersonic

more you have too make another two dragons come in one female one male!!!

I don;t HAVE to do make the story some way! Writing is complicated you know! You have to have inspiration before you can write, or an idea.

Spyro and Ember sat under a tree.
They were very edgy these days. Flame and Cynder practically spat on them whenever they crossed paths. Spyro was convined they were planning something, and Spyro and Ember spent almost every waking moment together.
A branch snapped somewhere, and Ember jumped, screaming.
"I think we need to relax. Come on, lets go for a walk."Spyro sugessted.
Ember led the way to their favriote trail, that led to the river. Where they skipped stones and jumped on the giant rocks in the river.
"The dance is only days away. And so is the race. We should look for a tube after the walk." Ember said.
" Okay." Spyro agreed.
They twined tails and kissed.
"You don;t think Cynder and Flame will try something dangerous would they?" Ember whimpered,staring at a spear like leaf under a bush.
"Their just angry about us dating instead of us dating them like our orignal plan." Spyro said. He knew that should make him feel guilty, but it didn't. For the first time, he felt like something was wrong.
"What's that smell?" Ember said. Spyro sniffed.
It smelled like dead roses and wet dog.
"Let's find out." Spyro said.
He freed his tail from Ember's and crouched under a bush. In the clearing, there was piles of plants and a pinkish liquid.
"Looks clear." Ember said beside him.
The two dragons entered the clearing.
Spyro sniffed ht eliquid that carried off a strange scent.
"Ember, you remeber that night when we werew decorating the barn, and we drank that water and fell in love some mintues later?" Spyro said.
"Yeah. Why?" Ember replied.
"Sniff this." Spyro said.
Ember sniffed it for a few seconds.
"It smells like the water we drank!" She exclaimed.
"Of course it did." A voice snapped behind them.
It was Brutus!
"It's a love potion." He growled.
Spyro stood up and glided closer to Ember instictivley.
"What do you mean?" He said catiously.
"I love Ember. I always have. I put the love potion in your water to hope she'd fall in love with me. I guess things went wrong. The love potion only lasts a week, and its beginning to wear off. Now, I am making a stronger patch to last forever. Now I know it will go right. Now, that you know the truth, I'll have to dispose of you."
Brutus lunged.

that was great! i looooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeee it! BWAVO! BRAVO! on core on core!

im so srry i didnt mean to be mean i just really wanted more story cuz i love dis stuff so much i didnt mean to stress you out or any thing im srry

ignitusforever, i guess what hes trying to say is that your story is so good, that we want more is all. But its like drawing, you need insperation sometimes to draw what you want sometimes. And i understand that cause im a artist sort of haha. Just take your time. And I thought that was the reason they feel in love together so quickly it had something to do with the water.

ya exactly what i mean

I already know you need inspiration before you can write,, or draw. I like drawing too, but I don;t post it on the internet.
Supersonic, your comment upsetted me more because you suggested how I should write my story. All is forgived.

Brutus pinned Spyro to the ground and slashed feircely. Spyro yelped and kicked him off. Spyro jumped over Brutus and twisted around, biting in his foreleg.
Ember joined the fight and dug her claws into Brutus's neck, drawing blood.
Brutus screeched, but couldn't shake free.
Two more dragons popped out of the bushes and launched themsel'ves onto Spyro.
They pinned him down and beated him fericely.
Brutus smacked the two dragons.
"I'll deal with this one presonally! Go take care of Ember!" Brutus barked.
Spyro leaped onto his feet, ready to defend his friend to the death.
Friend. The word echoed in Spyro's mind.
Knowing that the potion's effect is what made him and Ember fall in love was enough to make their romance vanish.
Brutus pinned Spyro to the ground and bit into his neck.
Spyro gasped and blood trickled out of his mouth. Ember screamed beside him, the two dragons pinning her down. They started poruing the love potion in her mouth.
Spyro gulped in air and breathed fire on Brutus.
Brutus roared in pain, and Spyro hauled the two dragons off of Ember. Ember got up at spat out the potion.
The three dragons hissed and spread their wings.
"Give it up. It's three against one." One of the dragons growled.
Spyro finnaly regonized the two.
It was Brutus's friends, the ones they met at the Ice Cream Parlor.
"I don't think so." A voice said behind them.
It was Flame and Cynder!
"Your not going to hurt our friends." Cynder snarled.
Sparx floated above them, holding a rock.
Spyro immideatley felt guitly.
He spent so much time with Ember he hardly seen Sparx anymore.
The three dragon lunged, and pinned down Flame and Cynder, snarling and snapping.
Spyro leaped onto his hindpaws, and crushed the smallest dragon beneath him.
The dragon wailed while Spyro tossed him aside like a toy.
The dragon was back on his feet as soon as he landed and chraged Spyro.
Spyro spun around to avoidhim, and bit into his tail.
The dragon bellowed, but couldn;t escape Spyro's grip.
Brutus smacked Spyro in the head, sending him whirling. He landed on his side by the ground, his vison fuzzy.
Brutus stood over him, smirking in triumph.
"You can bring in the whole town, but you'll never keep Ember from me. As soon as I have her, she'll be having my chicks and you'll be in the ground." Brutus sneered.
He bit into Spyro's neck again. and Spyro prepared to say his final goodbyes to the world.
A rock hit Brutus right in the eye,and he screamed in pain.
Sparx hovered over him.
"You jerk! Stay away from my friend!" Sparx demanded.
Brutus huffed in annyonce and leaped for Sparx.
Spyro got up, fury filling his belly.
He wasn;t going to let Brutus anywhere near Ember, or kill his very best friend.
Spyro jumped high and slashed Brutus's neck. Brutus crashed into the ground, his green scales coated with blood and mud.
Spyro smacked him hard in the head, pressing it into the damp earth.
Brutus's eyes rolled and he stumbled, struggling to get back up.
There was a huge bump on Brutus's head the size of the moon.
With a hint of satisfaction, Spyro knew he done that damage.
"You won this time, but it won't last. Ember will be my mate, and you'll all suffer a horrible death." Brutus growled furiously.
Him and his friends feld into the bushes.
Spyro trotted toward Flame and Cynder.
"You saved us, but why? You were so mad at us." Ember wondered.
"Sparx came to find Spyro, and he overheard everything. He came to us for help." Cynder explained.
"You can't resist a cute little firefly." Flame teased.
"At least I am not fat." Sparx shot back.
"Does this mean were friend's again?" Spyro asked.
"Friends." All four dragons said at once, holding paws.

Nice chapter, great detail in the battle. Great as always. Oh and ignitus I was explaning the insperation thing for supersonic. It takes awhile to finish a story or drawing.

great chapter you r a great writer!

Amazing, I love it

is there a sequel not to be rude though

Nope. No sequel. i am planning to write another story soon though. Keep watch!

Spyro flicked the patch, satisfied with his work.
Spyro and his friends were busy preparing for the river race. Spyro's partner was Cynder, and Ember's partner was Flame. Just like their orignal plans.
Spyro and Cynder had picked a rough tube, and fixed it up as best they could.
Spyro was patching up all the holes, and Cynder was covering the tube with a tightly-woven net so their claws wouldn't pop the tube.
Sparx also tried to attach a chari for him to sit in, but it would always fall off.
Sparx flew out of the way as the chair snapped from its supports and pummled to the ground.
"Stupid chair!" Sparx cursed.
"Face it Sparx. Your just going to have to watch from the finish line. If you fall off, you'll be killed in the current." Spyro warned.
"I guess your right." Sparx sighed.
Spyro coudln't hide a flicker of suprise.
Sparx always ahd a snappy comment at the ready.
But in the fight with Brutus two days ago, he was almost killed. Sparx probaly didn't want to brush with death again so soon.
This thought sent shivers pulsing through Spyro's spine.
A horn sounded from nearby, and Cynder raced toward him.
"The race is starting!" She panted.
"Already? It's not supposed to start is five mintues!" Spyro exclalmied.
"The cake by the finish line for all the contestants is melting in the heat. They have to start the race early so the bakery people can do their best to preserve the cake." Cynder explained.
Spyro found this pretty suspicous, but there was no time to waste.
He rested one side of the tube on his shoulders and helped Cynder carry it to the starting line.
Sparx hovered over them excitedly, making silly comments that Spyro evantullay tuned out of.
Flame and Ember were already at the starting line.
Ember crouched on the front side of the tube, ready to paddle. Flame stood on his hindlegs, his frontpaws pressed against the tube, prepared to push it into the river.
Spyro and Cynder flopped the tube beside them and took the same pistion.
Cynder on the tube, Spyro at the back.
"So are you ready to lose?" Flame teased.
"Don't get cocky Flame. That's how lots of dragons lose." Spyro teased back, even though it wasn't very good.
"We do have more experince then you. The rapids are tough in this river." Ember pointed out.
Spyro gazed into the rushing white rapids.
The water roared and pounded the rock on the other side.
The river at the starting line curved into a bend before bending down into a wide, choatic rapids. The starting line was on a low hill that dropped off into the river.
Beyond the 'slope' in the river, was small waterfalls,high waves, fast currents, and the worst, under currents that doubled the rapids effect.
Spyro gulped as he considered all the factors of the dangerous rapids.
Spyro gazed into Cynder's glowing green eyes, and felt confidence replace his fear.
Him and Cynder have beaten Malefor, defeated a golem, almost stopped the destroyer, and saved dozens of lives.
If anything, this should be a millon times easier.
The flare gun crackled and shot sparks everywhere.
A shower of them fell toward Sparx, and he fled, screaming in terror.
Spyro pushed the tube into the river, jumping on before the waves could carry it away.
Cynder scooched onto one side to let Spyro up.
Spyro dug his claws in as waves from all sides batted the underside of the tube, threatning to knock it over.
Spyro dared to glance back.
So far they were in the lead, but Flame and Ember were swiftly gaining on them.
"Paddle down and crouch! We'll go faster!" Spyro ordered.
Cynder obeyed, and soon they were going so fast the surrondings blurred in Spyro's vison as his eyes dried.
The wind howled as the tube gained speed, and Spyro had to use every once of strength to stay on the tube.
A waterfall flashed into veiw, and the two dragons were hurled over the edge. Instead of falling into the water below, the tube raced through air before splashing back in the raging torent.
The tube sank below the surface, and Spyro gasped as the freezing water chilled his scales.
The roaring of the river dulled when Spyro's head submerged.
Spyro held his breath and dug in his claws stubbornly, refusing to let go.
The tube hit the sandy bottom of the river, and rose back up, dragging Spyro and Cynder with it.
Spyro gasped for air once he surfaced.
He tried to climb back on, but the water made the tube slippery, even with the net.
The undercurrents started to drag Spyro under the surface, and he started to lose grip.
Cynder grabbed his paw and hauled him onto the tube.
"We have to slow down. Are tube will burst if that happens again." Cynder advised.
Spyro nodded in agreement. Besides, they would be very far out now.
Spyro spotted a flash of green at the top of the rising stone wall.( the river is starting to turn into a gorge.)
Spyro's blood stopped once he regonized it.
Brutus.
"I told you it wasn;t over!"
Brutus leaped for him, and knocked SPyro into the river.

bwavo! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh dang now the drama begins again. Nice now its interesting.

amazing oh god plz i need more

Cynder cried in alarm as Brutus dragged Spyro under the cold water.
Brutus's plan was pure genius.
Spyro couldn't use fire or earth, since they would have no effect in water. Using electricity would fry not only him and Brutus, but everything living in the river. If he used ice, Spyro would turn him, Brutus and all the river orginisms into popsicles and turn the river rafting race into a ice sliding race.
Spyro would have to rely on combat, and combat only.
Spyro squirmed free of Brutus and kicked his way back to the surface. Spyro gasped for breath as the river dragged him away.
Brutus leaped out of the water and grabbed Spyro again, snarling.
Spyro clawed Brutus's belly, but his efforts weakened with every second he was held under.
All the sudden Brutus's weight lifted, and Spyro dully heard him scream.
Spyro swam back to the surface.
Cynder had caught up with them, still on the raft, and breathed fear on Brutus.
Spyro smiled.
Brutus may know the advantage to Spyro's elements, but nothing could hold back Cynder's elements.
Spyro climbed back on the raft.
"Thanks." Spyro puffed.
Brutus shook off the fear fog, fury in his eyes.
"That's it! I've had enough of you!" Brutus screamed. His sclaes started to glow an ominus green as Brutus seemed to be lifted out of water.
Spyro couldn;t belive it.
He was going to use fury!

I've run out of ideas right now. I'll post as soon as i can!

Wow epic! Wonder what spyor is going to do? ok bro take your time that was good.

wow super epic! can't wait to see how this turns out

love it!

AMAZING you rock

Not Bro. SIS.

Cynder stared in horror as a soft, high pitched noise grew louder and louder as Brutus came closer to activating fury.
There was only one thing she could do.
Cynder dug her claws in the tube as a wave lifted half of it into the air.
The rapids were getting tougher... and higher. The space between the gorge walls grew wider, but that was the least of Cynder's troubles.
Th bubble around Brutus grew so bright as Brutus activated fury.
Cynder shook off her fear and launched herself as Brutus, stopping him from using fury at the very last second.
The waves swallowed the two dragons up, but Cynder didn't make any move to get back to the tube.
Nothing would stop Brutus now. She wasn;t going to beat him by crouching on the tube.
Brutus surfaced from the river, and Cynder attacked.
She lunged toward him and bit into his arm.
Brutus's scream was cut short as Cynder dragged him under the waves.
She could hear Flame calling her name. The other racers had caught up.\
Brutus struggled from Cynder's bite, but she wouldn;t let go.
Blood leaked out from the wound and stung Cynder's eyes.
Cynder gasped and blinked, letting go of Brutus.
The undercurrents bought Cynder back up, and her ears decided to open up.
There was no mistaking the look of absloute rage in Brutus's eyes.
He lunged for Cynder. Cynder tried to move, but the current slowed her down.
Brutus caught her and scraped through her scales with his claws.
Cynder cried out in pain and sturggled to escape. But with every bat make the wound deeper, and soon blood coated all of Cynder's scales, even underwater.
Cynder's vison blurred as she weakened.
Cynder tried to swat Brutus as a final attempt to save herself, but it was too late.
"Hey, dungbag!" A nasty voice rasped.
Brutus swung around to face Spyro,Flame and Ember.
Their fire breath was useless in water, but just above the surface...
All three of them breathed fire at once, combining in one ray.
The fire exploded in Brutus's face, and he screamed in terror.
He dissapered under the water, and Cynder was hauled onto the tube.
"Oh my gosh! We have to do something, she'll die in this condition!" Flame gasped.
"Let me." Ember said.
Spyro and Flame kept their distance. Ember crouched beide Cynder, who rested between both tubes.
Ember loosened her jaw, and a thin pink mist came out.
The mist sinked into Cynder's flesh. Cynder gasped as the stinging pain paralyzed her. The pain embed away evantullay, leaving a warm, comfortable sensation.
Cynder took place on her tube again as one wave washed over all four dragons.
A look of undisguised horror shadowed Ember and Flame's faces.
"Were going down the Emerald River ravine. Prepare for a bumpy ride." Flame warned.
As soon as he finsished speaking, a huge wave took Spyro and Cynder captive.
Cynder clung on to the tube with all her might as salt water invaded her mouth.
Once the wave relased them, Cynder spat out the disgusting water.
Salt water? The currents in here are so mixed up there's ocean water in here... Cynder thought.
She looked around to find Flame and Ember nowhere in sight.
The waves splashed against Cynder's paws and batted the tube around constantly.
"Look -" Cynder didn;t hear SPyro's warning as a wave from behind flipped the tube over.
Cynder tangled her claws into the netting, holding her breath for dear life.
Her lungs were about to burst when the tube was flipped right side up again.
Cynder gasped desparatley for air.
The finsh line was right in front of them, with Flame and Ember just one yard behind.
Spyro cheered just before the tube burst.
Cynder felt reilf wash over her for once.
The waters were calm, and the supervisers fished her and Spyro out of the river.
There was no way this was easier then defeating Malefor, the golem, nearly killing the destroyer, or saving thousands of lives.
Flame and Ember crossed the finish line, and the crowd burst into cheers and the confetti was let loose.
Flame and Ember flopped into the water, only to be escorted to shore.
"Congratulations, once again, are top winners!" The mayor annouced proudly as two volunteers placed the gold medals around their necks.
The two dragons dashed toward their friends.
"Sorry you two didn't win. You were so close." Ember said.
"That's okay. There's always next year isn't there?" Cynder teased.
The celebrations was cut short when Brutus washed onto the sandy shore.
The dragons gasped and rushed to his aid.
"My goodness, what happened?" The soccer coach murmered.
Brutus stood up feebly, reviling all his scars.
He pointed his broken claw at Spyro, Cynder, Flame and Ember.
"Those four! Those four did this to me!" Brutus snarled.

ooo! epic!!!! i wonder if they are in trouble...

good chapters!
Quote: karen f

ooo! epic!!!! i wonder if they are in trouble...

that's what i was thinking >.>
sorry i havn't been able to post in a while. my computer was blocking it out.

Sorry ignitusforever. lol great chapter cant wait to see what happens to them.

That's okay.

The dragons gasped in shock.
Cynder didn't try denying him.
After the bitter fight with eachother, no one would belive their side of the story.
The soccer coach bared his fangs and spread out his wings defensively.
"I should have known those dragons were still up to trouble!"
The dragons were starting to turn on them, and Cynder felt the same pit in her stomach just like flying away from the carnies all over again.
"Wait! Doesn't anyone want to see the replays?" A voice squeaked.
It was a homeless dragon, by the looks of it. He was a bright red, even though it was hard to tell since he was covered in soot. he had a hat with sevral holes in it, and was just as soot coated as him.
He held a battered video camera in his paw.
"I lust lost it by the Cranberry trail. It looked like there was a big fight. Lucky It didn't get wrecked." The dragon rasped.
Cynder and Ember exchanged worried glances.
Wasn't that near the place where Brutus...?
Cynder thought she saw a red object in the sky during the race. Could that have been this dragon?
The mayor snatched the camera from the young dragon, and hurried toward the near-by tourist centre. Everyone followed.
In the tourist center was a three dimensinal model of Timerpine and the forest around it, and a gift shop not far way from that.
Behind the gift shop was the door to the muesum.
There was a projecter along with a huge screen in the middle of the large room. Usualy the staff played geolgist or history movies of their town for the tourists to watch.
But not today.
The mayor connected the projecter to the camera with a worn out wire, and pressed an equally worn out, flat play button.
Sure enough, the first scene was the fight between Spyro, Ember, Brutus and his friends. The camera was dropped in a bush, and no ne had a clue it was there.
Brutus's words were repeated on the screen.
She could see Spyro and Ember shivering at the horrible memory, and pressed together.
But Cynder didn't get mad.
The love potion was almost gone, but it still had a tiny effect on Spyro and Ember.
It only took a few mintues to review the footage, but to Cynder, it seemed like forever.
She shivered when the footage showed Brutus nearly killing her in the river.
How could a dragon be so hearless to get to the dragoness he loves?
The screen went blank, and the camera beeped, flashing a little picture of a red, empty battery.
The homeless dragon collected his camera, checking the batteries.
"Aw, shucks!" he muttered.
But the mayor had seen enough.
"Brutus had started the fight with these dragons. What he says is true, but it is not their fault. It was simply an act of self defense." She annouced.
"But they still hurt another dragon!" The soccer coach pointed out.
Cynder shook her head. Their coach would never stop blaimng them for anything, not since their fight at the soccer game.
The mayor gazed into the coach's eyes, annoyance and anger radiating off her.
"I see no fair punishment for self defense." She snapped. Even the coach looked nervous under her glare.
The mayor turned to Brutus.
"Brutus, for here on, you are permantly suspended from particapating in any of the festival events. This year and every year after that.
And It is strongly recommended that your parents send you to juvie for a year. After that, you'll spend the rest of the school year with volunterring around the commuinty." the mayor turned her head to Brutus's parents now.
Both shock and dissapointment displayed on their expressions, and they nodded their agreement.
"Good. Now there is other business to be done." the mayor trotted back outside, the rest of the dragons following. Cynder breathed a sigh of reilf while Brutus didn't breathe at all, his face red with rage.


After the results of the race were recorded, the fesitval was over. The only event left now was the dance.
Cynder adjusted her necklace, happy with how she looked.
She only wore a diamond necklace and make up, unlike Ember.
She had a blue dress, enough jewlery to bring the econmy out of a deep ressicon, and tons of make up, and a strong, sticky perfume.
"How do I look?" Ember asked.
Cynder didn't want to spoil her mood, so she just said fine.
Soon Cynder and Ember caught up with Spyro and Flame.
"Easy on the get-up Ember." Flame joked. Ember laughed.
The dragons neared the barn as the night choked away the last of the sun's rays.
"The commitee worked hard after we were kicked off after the soccer fight." Spyro commented.
As if in reply, the skylights lit up, The light escaped through some of the cracks and holes in the roof, and chased away some of the darkness.
"Why are we going so slow, let's go!" Cynder said, racing toward the barn in excitement.

The barn was packed with dancing dragons and cheesy, romantic music.
Cynder looked down at her punch nervously.
There was a nerd right beside her, and she didnt feel like anomusly falling in love with the dragon right beside her.
Spyro chuckled in amusement.
"Brutus hasn't been out of town limits all day! I think the punch is safe." Spyro reassured Cynder.
"I guess your right." Cynder shrugged and looked up as one of her favroite songs started to play.
Everyone was dressed colorfully.
Blue,green,red, pink, black.......black? Cynder whipped her head back around.
It was Madame Meow!
"I am just going to get some fresh air." Cynder fibbed to Spyro.
Once she was sure Spyro couldn;t see her, Cynder raced toward her.
Madame Meow had already spotted her. She wore a dark red gown, her arms crossed. She flicked her tail impatentliy.
"I expected you to be here." She meowed as Cynder screeched to a halt.
"What are you doing here at a party like this? Surely you have other things to do?" Cynder questioned.
Madame Meow purred with amusement as she uncrossed her arms.
"I think you're forgetting, I was part of that carnival the mayor found to be 'unsanitary'." Madame Meow explained.
Cynder gaped in horror.
"how will you make a living! I can lend you some food if you want." Cynder offered.
"No thanks, I am sure I'll come across something. Good luck comes to the one's who have faith in the future, you know." Madame Meow purred. Something about the way she said made Cynder think there was more meaning to that then she was saying.
All of the sudden, Madame Meow's reading came back to her.
Cynder,you will feel betrayed by a life long friend, and a new one. Don;t be quick to judge them,your freind troubles might be more then it seems. The words echoed through Cynder's minds as the previous events took her on a flashback.
Once it was over, she found herself gazing at Madame Meow in amazement.
All this time, everything that happened,,,
Madame Meow purred and flicked her tail across Cynder's chest.
"You have a strong spirit, Cynder. You just need to look deeper than the surface." With that, Madame Meow glide out of the barn.
Cynder watched her go, her jaw gaping.
"Hey, Cynder, what are you doing just standing here! This is supposed to be a party!" Ember exclaimed.
Cynder turned to Ember and thought of telling Ember everything.
But not now. There was other things to enjoy right now.
Cynder and Ember raced back to the dance floor, giggling in delight.

THE END.

I hope you enjoyed the story!

Wow that was a great story ignitus. Bravo i enjoyed every chapter of it. too bad it ended. but great job.

it's over!
other than that, i liked it.

i loved it!

a little late there KK.

omg! does that mean there IS a sequel!?! im saying this because of da weird stuff madam meow said.

I liked the part where you added ember was wearing enough jewlery to help jump start the economy, that was a good comparison, it helped me get an idea of how much ember was wearing. Well at least spyro and cynder were together at the end and all is well.

ya u describe things well

verry. how do you think ember got all that money? O.O

It's Ember. Who knows?
And there is still no sequel. I might be writing another fanfic, but I don't go any ideas right now.
As for the things Madame Meow said,, it's supposed to be a reailzation that Madame Meow knew everything that happened was going to happen.

Well good story. I had fun reading this.

Well, I lied. I acctulay do have another fanfic, but it's on another site on a compeltely diffrent seris.
Warriors!!
http://forums.warriorcats.com/.../4651099742/p/1
If you have a Warrior cat forum account, please comment there!
If you don;t, then comment on it either here or on my profile page. thanks!
DO NOT READ IF....
1. You have not or never heard of Warriors. otherwise, it would be very confusing. (the one about the cats)
2. You have not finshed reading Forest Of Secrets. (So many risks of spoilers... sigh)

well if you somehow get an idea write a sequeal plz this was a great story and i enjoyed reading it!