darkSpyro

yay im so happy ill do 1 random comment...
Plankton "ill say a word and u say the opisite.lets begin... potato"
Spongebob:"pototo
Plankton: tomato...
Spongebob: tomoto

i am amking my story too! and my dragon is

I want to know how reacts! write soon!

ok! time for another chapter! Yay! (this one is long)
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chapter 11: a new home
"I think she's waking up." I hear the purple dragon sau. I open my eyes a little and see more dragons standing around me. I look over at Night to make sure she's ok. She's still sleeping.
"Should I get her some water?" I hear a voice ask. She sounds familiar, but I'm still too sleepy to turn around and see who it is.
I hear a red dragon say "That would be a good idea Cynder."
Cynder! I turn around quickly, all sleepyness gone from my body.
"Cynder!" I say in amazement. "Is it really you?"
"Star?" Cynder asks in despeleaf. "and Night too?"
Just at that moment, Night yawns and wakes up. "Where are we?" She asks. When she sees Cynder, she looks stunned. "Cynder? Is that you?"
"Yes, it's me. What happened to you? How did you get here?"
"When we got split up, Night and I flew away. We found Crystal Falls, and we lived there for a long time. Ape armies sometimes came, but we always defeated them. Then a few days ago, we finally got beaten. We were forced to find a new home. We ended up here."
"Wait," the purple dragon says. "you said there were ape armies that attacked you. That's impossable. Cynder and I defeated Malefor a long time ago. Someone has to be behind this."
"It's definatly not Malefor" Cynder says. "Someone else is doing this. We'll find out sometime. He can't hide forever."
"Cynder is right." a purple dragoness says. "The dragon will show himself eventuly. Right now we should rest. We can train in the morning."
"Wait," I say. "Who are all of you?"
"I'll introduce everyone." Cynder says. "This is Spyro." She says, pointing with her wing to the purple dragon I first saw. "The red dragon is Flame. He reaches fire. The yellow dragon is Bolt. He teaches electricity. The dragon that looks similar to me is Ice Shard. She teaches ice. The green dragon is Rock. He teaches earth. And the pink dragon is Ember. She dosn't know any breaths, but she is an expert at close-range attacks. Now let's go rest. Like Ice Shard said, we'll train tomarrow morning."
Night and I follow the other dragons into the sleeping room.
I think we've finally found our new home.
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told u that chapter was going to be long.
i'll show u the pictures of the dragons.
Spyro!
Cynder!
Flame!
Ember!
what? u already know what they look like. and, i havn't drawn pictures of them yet. guess i'm too lazy.
inkdesi101.deviantart.com/art/Zap-drawing-147570924">Bolt!
i changed his name from Zap to Bolt.
inkdesi101.deviantart.com/Rock-drawing-147098030">Rock!
inkdesi101.deviantart.com/My-friend-s-Ice-Shard-drawing-146994274">Ice Shard!
inkdesi101.deviandart.com/My-Ice-Shard-Drawing-149750778">My picture of Ice Shard!
(Karen F did the horns)
i'll put the other picture of Ice Shard later. i know, lots of pics of Ice Shard!
it isn't working. it puts the whole thing.

By the way, in my story,

Starlight and her familiy will eventaully meet Spyro!

well i coulda done this with u guys but lol nvm... or maybe they meet later.

i'll put my next chapter later.

same...

Yay! i don't know if i can fit in my next chapter in only 4 min. well, i'll try.
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Whoops. i can't. it's three pages long. i'll never make it. guess i'll have to post tommarow. srry ppl.

yay so happy! so 1 more random no make it 2! 1:Cheese(fosters home for imaginary friend)"i like chocolate milk"
2jimmy neutron)"BRAIN BLAST!"

im havng a break from writing. chapter 4 was shorter then the others.

Good chapters

thx. u havn't commented in a while. were u busy or something?

time for the next chapter! yay!
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chapter 12: training day #1
I wake up and hear noises. I walk through the door to see what it is. It's just Night and Rock in the training room. Rock is making earth missels while Night is using her favorite breath, fire.
"Hey" I say to Rock and Night. "Has anyone else gotten up yet?"
"No," Rock answers. "Just us three."
"Are you going to practice or what?" Night asks.
"I'm going to." I reply. "I'm just a little tired. I just woke up, you know."
"Let's have a compotition!" Rock says. "Each time you defeat a small ape, you get one point. A medium ape is worth two points and a large ape is worth three. Whoever gets the most points wins."
"Ok. Sounds like fun." I say.
"It is!" Night tells me. "Rock and I had a compotition a little while ago."
"Uh... where are the apes?" I ask right before they come towards us. "Nevermind."
I wait for lots of apes to come near me, then make a tornado. Night is using close-range attacks. I'm amazed she isn't using her fire breath. Rock is in an earth ball and runs over the apes, squashing them.
I've never used my ice breath on an ape before, so i try it on a dummy. It slows down, so i throw it up into the air and know it into some other apes.
"You were right," I say to Night. "This is fun!"
"I told you" she replies.
20 minutes later, all the dummies are gone. Night has 48 points, i have 56 points, and Rock has 73 points.
"I won!" Rock says happily.
"You've been training your whole life," I point out. "and your the earth teacher."
"Hey, I don't have more then one breath." Rock replies.
"Night dosn't really use her ice breath. She likes the fire one too much. And since she's not a teacher, i can see why she didn't get first place." Night glares at me after I say that. "It's just a game." I tell her. "You know that."
"Yea, your right." Night replies.
"Wanna practicce with the new dummies?" Rock asks.
"What new dummies?" I ask.
"Night told us that you two need a little practice fighting bees. Ember and I stayed up for a while last night making bee dumies for you two."
"Let's start!" Night and I both say together.
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yea, i know. not much action in that part. srry about that. the next part has a picture. try to look forward to seeing it. it might block out the bordom of no action. if u want action in almost every chapter, read my friend, Karen F's story. Karen F, if ur reading this, i have something verry important to say.

yea, if u read it, i know u didn't get it. it's something we made up, so nobody else knows what it means. if u really wanna know what it means, look here. (although it's a really dumb word to have a code.

told u. but here's a word i will NEVER tell u ppl. srry. i've been sworn to secracy.

i wish i could tell u, sort of, but i can't.
oh and, u know what? i feel really sorry for putting u ppl through the agony of reading that chapter with no action whatsoever, so i'll put the next chapter right now. (this one is short, though)
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chapter 13: bee fighting 101
"Star!" I hear Bolt shout in amazement as he walks into the room.
"What? Wait... did I just use electric breath?!" I ask.
"What is all this talking about?" Spyro asks as he and Cynder walk into the training room.
"Star just used electric breath." Bolt answers. "and she didn't have to get shocked by lightning to learn it."
"Hey, who said it whas the shock that caused me to learn that breath? Spyro said. "It dosn't matter. Let's just start training, ok?
"ok" Bolt agrees.
A little later, Ice Shard, Ember, and Flame come out into the training room with us. We train for the rest of the day.
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srry, but i can't put the picture up right now. guess u'll have to settle for just the picture in ur brains for now. I would put another chapter up, but i don't want to get too close to the part i'm already writing.
hope u all liked the last two chapters!
rocks!
srry, just had to be random for a second. it took me a long time to write all of this.
comment plz!
THE FATE OF MY NEW ZUNE DEPENDS ON IT!!! jk

LOLOLOLOLOL, KEEP GOING. and i dont think anyone else of us are reading it

i'll add on tommarow, ok?

i have a block now

a block for what story?

vine and storm

what block r u talking about?whats a block meen?

a writer's block is when they run out of ideas for their story. it may take some time for them to get an idea for the next part of their story

ADD ON DAMNIIIITTT NOOO ITS NOT COMING IS IT?!
WAHHHHHH HAAA WAAHHHHHHH

lol..

cool story, whats your pic of? the 1 you DIDNT post?

It's story time kids!
kids: yay! *clap hands
lol. i got that from my class. we were all acting like little babys. it was fun.

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chapter 14: electric training
"Hey Bolt" I say as I walk into the training room.
"Hey Star" Bolt replies. "Wanna start your training now?"
"Sure. What do I do first?"
"Remember what you did yesterday?"
"yea"
"Try to do that again."
"Ok, i'll try." I say. I take a deep breath, open my mouth, and hope that electricity comes out. It does. "What now?" I ask.
"Well, that was the normal electricity breath, but you should learn some of the other things you can do with electricity. Let's try to make an electric cage."
"What's that?" I ask.
"You make a little ball of electricity. The ball tracks down an ape and when it gets to the ape, it turns into a cage and trapps it. That way you can safely attack an enemy."
"Oh, ok. Just a ball of electricity. Got it. Can you get an ape dummy out here?" I ask.
"Sure," Bolt says. He walks out and comes back with a dummy. "Try it now"
he says to me.
A little ball of electricity forms in my mouth, then i open it and let the ball go. The dummy is trying to run away, but it can't escape the electricity. The ball catches up to the dummy and traps him. I run over and hit the ape until he breaks.
"Good job Star!" Bolt says to me. "You got it on your first try."
"Thanks. Your a good teacher." I say back. I can see Bolt blush a little.
"You have two more things to leatn. The next thing is electric sphere."
"Wait, i just made a ball of electricity."
"This is different. Now the ball is bigger and you'll be in it. Try to make electricity around you. Once you do that, try using your normal breath to hit the wall. It's fot making the sphere bigger, so you'll hit more apes."
"Ok..." I say, a little nervous.
"It's ok. You'll do fine. You're really good at learning electric breaths." Bolt reasures me.
I concentrate verry hard. I can do this!When I open my eyes, I'm surrounded by yellow. It feels a little strange. I can hear Bolt's voice a little from the outside. I think he's saying to try the normal breath now. I take a breath, and zap the sphere. I'm getting tired. I need to get a few crystals. I stop the sphere and walk up to Bolt.
"I'm out of energy." I tell him.
"You better go outside and gather some crystals. I'll go with you." Bolt says.
We both walk outside to get some crystals. Bolt lets me take most of them.
"You're going to need a lot for what you're going to do next." he tells me.
When we get back, I see lots of ape dummies in the training room.
"Have you ever done a fury before?" Bolt asks.
"Yes"
"Try to make an electric fury."
I take a deep breath. Everything is going in slow motion. Electricity surrounds me. After a few seconds, the electricity gets thrown away from me. I just did my first electric fury.
"That was... intresting." I say.
"The first time I ever did an electric fury I felt strange too. Come on, lets go eat with the others. The're waiting for us."
"Ok!" I say happily. This is the most fun I've had in years! Too bad there's a little thought in my head reminding me I'm practicing to prepare to fight against someone. I just hope I don't have to see him anytime soon.
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did u ppl like this chapter? i might not be able to come on tommarow. AND I'm going to camp this weekend, so i'm not going to be able to go on then either. i'll ask Karen F. to add onto my story. I'll just e-mail it to her.
CHECK UR E-MAIL KAREN!

i liked it! :3

also i dont know how to send an email and like i said my mum is paranoid so sadly she wouldnt let me.

aww. u don't have an e-mail. that's sad.

yeah.

u should get one. tell her
"ME WANT EMAIL!!!!" *cry*

it wont work. and i want an email on my own computer anyways

try this:

LOL! but i tried on her for

Good chapter
Have a good camping weekend

the spoiler i read cuz i couldnt help itt sorry
applesause?
buddy?
the other one? wtf?

i got an idea today. i will put more than one chapters on today (i'll put some as spoilers) so it will last the whole week. sort of. if u have self control. i'll put one chapter for each day i'm gone. (i'll put one for today)
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Friday!
wow. i'm already to chapter 15? i guess i've been writing more chapters than i thought.
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Chapter 15: dinner and a meeting
"How did Star do with the electricity training?" Spyro asked Bolt, while munching on a fish. I'm really glad that these dragons eat the same food Night and I are used to.
"Star did really good. She's already done with her training." Bolt answers.
"That's good. Who do you want to train with tommarow?" Spyro asks me.
"I want to train with Ice Shard." I answer.
Ice Shard looks a little hesitant at first, but then she says "I'll train with you tommarow."
"Guess what happened today," Rock says. "Night learned earth breath. We started earth training today."
"You two are starting to learn a lot of new breaths." Spyro says, looking at Night and I. "Once all your training is finished, you two will be able to defeat giant ape armies."
"Umm... already done that" I say.
"Bigger ape armies."
"After tomarrow's training, we should have a day off." Cynder suggests. "Training every day for a long time is boring. And, I think a day off might do us some good."
"It's getting dark out." Flame says, looking outside. "We should go to sleep soon."
"I agree with Flame," Ember says. "I'm really tired."
We all finish our food, and fall to sleep.
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like that chapter? I sort of immagined the room they were eating in as the room next to the dojo. exept instead of water, there's a table instead.
Hey spyro! mabey if u hadn't removed that pool of water, you might have been able to tell WHO IS CAUSING THE APE ATTACKS!!! oh well, his loss.
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Saterday!
Time for another chapter! yay! oh, and also, the random word yesterday was... PARACHUTING!!! (i probebly spelled it wrong. )
now it's REALLY time for the next chapter.
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umm.... srry ppl. my plan isn't going to work due to extreme boredom. i guess you'll have to wait till tuesday. i'm sorry! bordom is trying to attack me! i can't take it!
i'll add another chapter tuesday. i promice.
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plz stand by for a few days.
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COOL STORY!

i'm back!!!
oh, and, thx madison-dwrd
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chapter 16: Ice training
"Star" I hear Ice Shard say. "Do you want to start your training now?"
"Sure!" I answer. I get up and we both walk into the ice dojo.
"You already know the normal ice breath, so i'll just teach you the other attacks you can do with ice. I'll teach u how to make ice shards first. Try to make little diomonds of ice and let them out of your mouth." Ice Shard says.
"Ok." I say. I do everything she says, and make ice shards.
"Good job. Now i'll teach you snowstorm. Gather ice around you then fly into the air a little and spin. I'll show you." Ice Shard flys up and makes a snowstorm for a few seconds. When she stops, I get a look at her front foot for the first time. It has a familiar mark on it.
"Ice Shard, can I see your front foot for a second?" I ask.
"ok..." Ice shard shows me her fromt foot. I see a mark on it that Night, Cynder, and I have on our front feet.
"Ice Shard!" I start to say.
"I know, we're sisters." I don't know why I never told you two before. Cynder probebly wanted me to tell you two, so she kept quiet."
"Oh. Should we tell Night?" I ask.
"After we finish training."
We finish the ice training and look around for our sister. We find her training with Rock in another room. No surprize there. Night and Rock are with eachother most of the time.
"Hey Night!" I say. She looks over at us. "Can you come here for a second?" Night walks up to us and we go into the sleeping room.
"What is it?" Night asks us.
I look over at Ice Shard. She shows Night her front foot.
"Ice Shard, your our sister?" Night gasps.
"Yes" She answers. "Star found out while we were training"
"I knew about you two" Ice Shard says. "Cynder told me about you two. We didn't know that you were alive though"
"We didn't know Cynder was alive either." I tell Ice Shard.
"Hey you two," Night says. "I'm getting tired. Can we go to bed now?"
"It's strange, your name is Night, but your always tired." I point out while we ger into our beds.
"I didn't choose my name." Night says, but then we all go quiet. Night realizes what she said. "oh..."
"It's ok," Ice Shard says. "he's dead now, mabey."
It takes a while but eventully, we all fall to sleep.
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like that chapter? u need to read karen f's story to get why i put that mark on their paw thing.
oh, and...
RANDOM WORD: insplode (i think that's what it's called... i might have forgoten)
RANDOM PHRASE: albert einstein was smart
RANDOM: fjdikejakrfvgtrehjgioerjhiobgr

plz comment ppl!

i have a question.
how do i just post a picture right onto here? not like a link.

p.s. srry for the double post

[img]paste link here[/img]

cool. thx!
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edit: i think i'll add another chapter now. oh and, to the ppl that won my contest, i think ur charictors some in soon. i just needed to get to the part after the contest that i wrote.
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Chapter 17: a day off?
"Bet you can't catch me!" Night yells and flies away from me and Ember. We are taking a day off from training and we've been having a lot of fun.
Ember and I look at eachother. I smile forms on both our faces and we jump into the air in pursuit of Night.
Every time we seem to get close to Night, she speeds ahead. I get an idea. I whisper it into Ember. She nods. I slow down a bit, and then use my wind breath to push Ember up to Night.
Out of nowhere, Ice Shard drops down onto Night. They both fall down to the ground laughing.
"How did I not see you?" Night asks.
"I don't know," Ice Shard answers. "I guess you wern't looking."
Ember and I fly over to Ice Shard and Night and help them up.
I see someone flying towards us. It's a light blue dragon, like me.
"Who's that?" I ask.
"Chill!" Ice Shard answers, then flies up to him. I follow her.
"Hi Chill! Is everything altight?" She asks when she sees that he looks worried.
"Dragon City is being attacked!" Chill tells her. "I came to tell you all." He flies dowm to me and Night. "Who are you?" He asks.
"I'm Star and she's Night." I tell Chill, pointing with my wing to Night. "We're Cynder's sisters."
"Oh," He says, then looks over at Ice Shard.
"They know i'm their sister." She tells Chill. "Umm... shouldn't we tell the others about Dragon City now?"
"Good idea." he says. We fly down and tell the others, then we quickly fly to Dragon City.
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did u like this chapter? oh, and, i remembered, THE CONTEST WINNERS' DRAGONS WILL BE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! YAY!!!

no problem!

WARNING: OFF-TOPICNESS!

Quote: I don't know who said this!

Error: You did not include a message.

A HA HA HA AN ERROR RANDOM COMMENT NEVER SEEN THAT BE FOR AND YAY CHILL'S IN THE STORY

no, 'twas a joke, my friend.

twas is a word. you dont need ' in front of it

Good chapters

thx! i guess u'll want to read another one then!!!
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one second, need to find my jernal.
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chapter 18: new armor
"Down here!" Chill says and flys down to a cave. We are going to put on armor befor we go into dragon city.
We all follow Chill down to the cave. There are four dragons in the cave already. They are probebly waiting for us.
"Hello," One of the dragons say. "I've never met you before. Who are you?" I can tell that she's talking to me and Night.
"I'm Star." I tell her.
"And I'm Night." My sister says.
"I'm Samantha, but everyone calls me Sam. This is Sharon, Metech, and Moon." She says, looking at the other dragons next to her.
"Lets go get our armor now." Spyro says. "You two can pick the armor you want."
I walk around, then find a silver helmet. There is also a pair of bracers that is silver and pink. I put them on and walk out to where the others are.
"Cool armor" Bolt says to me.
"Thanks" I say back. I look to see what Night chose. A gold helmet and a gold and green pair of bracers.
"Let's go" Sam says.
We fly up to the city's wall, then look down. Dragons and moles are fighting against apes and bees. It's verry confusing. I hope none of my friends get hurt. That's one giant army.
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That's my newest chapter! hope u all liked it!
oh, and, i noticed that in my last chapter, i forgot to put the number, but by the time ur reading this i've probebly already added it.
random word: LLAMAS!!!

plz comment!

AWESOME!

did you see my new chapter?

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thx. i'll try to do that art thing too! (it's going to look horrible)

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you need to make sure you dont have more than 1 space between each

i couldn't do it, so i gave up.
THIS IS THE 100th comment!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the present: i'll make a prologe of this story if u want. tell me if u would or wouldn't.