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Chapter 16,

50 demons were standing outside lucifer's lair, lucifer came out.

lucifer: "go and raid the Temple for holy relics, take some prisoners if you can!"

the demons all marched off toward Heaven, they went inside Heaven and went inside the Temple,

2 angels were guarding the relic room, one of them saw the demons coming toward them.

angel: "demons!"

the angels drew their swords and ran toward the demons, the demons killed them, they went into the relic room and started taking relics... suddenly Maria comes into the room and sees what's happening.

Maria: "hey! get your claws off the Master's relics!" she shoots an ice spike at one of them and kills it.

some demons ran at her, they pinned her to the ground and chained her up, all the demons left with the relics they had stolen and their prisoner.
they went back to hell.

Jesus comes over and sees the 2 dead angels, he walks over to them and they are brought back to life, they wake up and get up,

angel: "Master we were ambushed by many demons, we tried to fight them off but there were too many... we're sorry we failed you."

Jesus: "you have no reason to apologize, i'm just glad you two are safe. now go back to guarding the relics that are still there."

angel: "yes Master." they go back to guarding the remaining relics.


In hell,

Draco was still asleep in the cell, lucifer walks over to the cell,

lucifer: "wake up!"

Draco wakes up "yes?"

lucifer opened the cell "come out, i have something to show you!"

Draco come out, lucifer leads him to the torture chamber.

Draco: "you're not going to torture me again, are you?"

lucifer: "no, this time you'll be the one doing the torturing!"

Draco: "what do you mean?"

lucifer: "look over there." he points toward a table.

Draco looks at it and sees Maria chained up on it.

Draco: "Maria?"

lucifer: "yes, she tried to protect the holy relics but sadly failed now she's our prisoner! torture her!"

Draco: "why?"

lucifer: "because i said so! and make it painful!"

Draco slowly walks over to the table,

Maria looks at him "Draco don't listen to him... don't do this... you're going to destroy your soul even more... it's not to late for you to repent and come back to the Master..."

Draco: "i'm sorry... i have no choice..."

Maria looked at him with tears in her eyes "may Jesus forgive you Draco..."

lucifer: "get it over with already!"

Draco get behind Maria and breathed fire on her back, she screamed and cried in pain, he stopped. he raised his paw and began to claw at her back creating wounds in her burnt back. she cried in pain. he stopped.

Maria looked at him "may... Christ... forgive... you..." she then looked over to lucifer

Maria: "and may Christ rebuke you..."

lucifer came over to her "you'll regret saying that!"

he clawed at her back, acid came out of his claws and went into Maria's back wounds. she screamed and cried in pain. he stopped and took her off the table, he took her over to a cell and threw her in, he closed the cell door and walked away.

Draco looked toward the cell she was thrown into. he felt sorry for her. lucifer looked at him.

lucifer: "you don't actually feel sorry for her do you!?"

Draco: "no..."

lucifer: "good... she's just a slave to Jesus... a pathetic slave!" he walked out of the chamber.

Draco looked into Maria's cell, he saw her laying in the back of the cell crying... he walked away...

Maria: "... Jesus, have mercy on him... he didn't know what he was doing..."


next chapter coming today

Poor Maria
Good chapter

and the plot thickens.

yes it dose.

Chapter 17,

afew minutes later Maria saw lucifer and Draco standing in front of the cell.

lucifer: "join me Maria and stop being a slave to that tyrant!"

Maria: "never! i'll never betray my true Master!"

lucifer opened the cell "Draco you know what to do!"

Draco walked over to Maria,

Maria: "is this really what you want Draco? to hurt your own sister?"

Draco hit her with his tail. she covered herself with her wings. Draco continued to hit her but her wings absorbed the blows.

lucifer: "hit her harder!"

Draco hits her with his paw tearing her wing a little. she didn't move or make a sound,

Maria: "oh Jesus please forgive Draco..."

lucifer walks in the cell "i'll show you how to hurt someone!" he walked behind Maria. a whip appears in his hand, he raises it and is about to strike when he feels someone grip his wrist stopping him, he looks over and sees Jesus.

Jesus: "satan stay away from my children!"

lucifer shakes in fear, Jesus releases his grip and lucifer runs away.

Jesus picks Maria up and cradles her in his arms, Maria is healed.

Draco is standing still he doesn't know what to do.

Maria: "Master please forgive Draco..."

Jesus: "i will forgive him... Draco come over here."


Draco walks over to him slowly... they are all transported back to Heaven...


next chapter coming tomorrow

Outcast beack in heaven!

Very good. Thank u. A wise man once said, 'Why does it take some1 else to see the good thru our bad & the light shining thru our darkness?'


I am the wise man, thu 'I don't clam to be wise!'~Confisius

sorry it's been so long since i posted. my computer is screwed up...

Chapter 18,

Draco found himself in the Temple, he was in front of Jesus' throne, Jesus looked at him,Dragsooth, Marissa and Maria were standing beside the throne, they looked at Draco, Draco felt regret for what happen he burst into tears and prostrated before Jesus.

Draco: "i'm so sorry for what i did... forgive me... forgive me... and may my family forgive me..." he sodded heavily.

Jesus: "of course i forgive you Draco. i've always loved you even when you were so rebellious. i knew you'd ask for forgiveness..."

Draco: "thank you Master... i promise i'll never do anything like that again..." he looked toward his family "do you forgive me?"

Dragsooth: "yes son we forgive you..."

Marissa: "we always hoped you'd come back to us..."

Maria: "i always forgave you..."

Draco: "thank you..."

Jesus: "Draco come here."

Draco slowly walked over to him, Jesus picks him up and cradles him in his arms.

Draco: "Master i am not worthy to even be in your presence. i don't deserve your love. i was a rebellious sinner throughout most of my life..."

Jesus: "no, you do deserve my love... yes you are a sinner but i love you anyway." he pets him gently,

Draco looks up at him "you have always been so good to me even though i've been so cold to you, why are you so good to me Master?"

Jesus: "because i love you. stop questioning everything now..." he continues to pet him,

Draco closes his eyes and relaxes "i love you too Master..."


next chapter coming tomorrow night...

good chapter.

thank you, another chapter will come tomorrow night.

W00T! Draco's back
Good 2 chapters

This "I'm a pathetic wretch unworthy of any love, respect, compassion." thing is getting kinda old.

well that was all i had to post.

Chapter 19,

In hell,

there was a large demon army in front of lucifer's lair, lucifer appears in front of them.

lucifer: "today we will take Heaven! we will destroy our enemies and take what is ours! we shall have no mercy on them! there will be no retreat! we will have revenge!"

all the demons cheered.

lucifer: "FORWARD!!"

they all marched toward Heaven.


In Heaven,

Michael and the angels were standing in front of the Temple, ready to defend it...

suddenly the demons burst through the gates of Heaven.

lucifer: "ATTACK!"

the demons charged toward the angels,

Michael draws his sword "if we die we die for the Master!"

the rest of the angels drew their swords and flew toward the demons, the armies collided, there was instant death happening on both sides, the demons were outnumbered but still fought strong.

Dragsooth, Marissa, Maria and Draco came flying over the battlefield, they shot fireballs on the battlefield, only the demons were effected and they were instantly killed by the fire,

Draco saw lucifer flying toward the Temple, Draco chased after him, he shot a fireball at him, lucifer dodged it and he turned around and saw Draco.

lucifer: "you miserable little traitor!" he hit Draco with his claws and Draco plummeted to the ground,

lucifer continued to fly toward the Temple. he came through the doors of the Temple and saw Jesus, lucifer tried to lunge at him but he fell to the floor in front of Jesus, lucifer was paralyzed...

a bright light came above the battlefield, all the demons were magically chained up, the angels were brought back to life, everyone was healed,

lucifer and the demons found themselves in the Temple chained up in front of Jesus... the humans and angels were standing in the Temple watching.


next chapter coming today

I used to hate u, Torok, 'cause were a better writer! But, now I just have good wishes for u. U have inspired me to never stop writing & imagining! Keep up the stories.


"May Christ bless u!"

thank you, and may Christ bless you too.

thank you.

Good chapter

Chapter 20,

lucifer and all the demons were chained up in front of Jesus, the angels and humans were cursing the demons and lucifer.

Jesus: "everyone quiet down."

everyone continued to shout curses at lucifer.

Dragsooth: "QUIET!!"

everyone became silent.

Jesus: "thank you Dragsooth."

Dragsooth: "you're welcome Master."

Jesus looks at lucifer.

lucifer: "please don't send me to hell... it was so horrible down there..."

Jesus: "you should have thought of that before you tried to seek revenge on me."

lucifer: "i couldn't control myself... please have mercy..." he began to cry "i'm sorry... please forgive me..."

Dragsooth: "THROW HIM IN THE LAKE OF FIRE MASTER!!"

Jesus looks at Dragsooth scornfully.

Dragsooth: "i am so sorry... please continue..."

Jesus looks at lucifer,

Jesus: "you have done the worst sins imaginable, why should i forgive you?"

lucifer: "because you still love me...?"

Jesus: "why would i love a being who caused sin and caused trillions of humans to fall away from God?"

lucifer: "i'm sorry about that..."

Jesus: "it's too late for an apology. you made your choice to lead a life of sin and evil. now you must suffer the consequences."

the floor in front of lucifer opened up, he felt great heat come out of the pit, he slowly looked inside and saw lava. all the demons were thrown in there one by one, lucifer watched as each one of them landed in the lava, they were screaming and begging for mercy,

lucifer prostrated in front of Jesus.

lucifer: "PLEASE HAVE MERCY!!... I'LL NEVER SIN AGAIN!!"

the humans and angels started chanting "throw him in.... throw him in... throw him in..."

Jesus: "farewell lucy..."

two angels came and dragged lucifer up to the pit.

the chanting became louder "throw him in!... throw him in!... throw him in!"

the angels threw lucifer in the pit, he fell for some time and landed in the lava, every part of his body was in pain, the lava was burning him.

lucifer: "PLEASE... HAVE... MERCY...ON... ME!!!

no one answered. the hole closed up... lucifer was in darkness...


In Heaven,

everyone cheered...

Draco: "Maria could we pray to the Master?"

Maria: "i never thought you'd ask..."

Draco and Maria bowed before Jesus and began to pray silently.

Dragsooth and Marissa watched them.

Dragsooth: "i never thought i'd see the day when Draco actually wants to pray..."

Marissa: "let's go join them..."

Dragsooth and Marissa came in front of Jesus, they bowed down to him and started to pray silently...


epilogue...
Heaven was now finally at peace, Draco now enjoyed praying, he now felt happy when he prayed, he loved Jesus, and Draco never rebelled against him. Draco was the happiest he had ever been...

THE END...

R u going to write more stories?! It can't be over!

yes i'm going to write more stories...

Hmm, pretty short but good aswell.

Poor Lucy...

Quote: Bolt

AWESOME STORY!!!

Is the next one about Draco or Maria's kids?

no... it's going to be about Dragsooth's egg being stolen from the Temple and being brought into hell right before it hatched.

Are you gonna close this thing are what?

no i never close my fanfics.

u can change this topic name to my stroys and make more storys on this topic like i did to my stroy on fandom

yeah that's a good idea, but i want my fanfics to be on separate topics.