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Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045	#51 Posted: 14:03:24 31/08/2009 -waits for more- I like it a lot :3
	Edited 1 time - Last edited at 14:05:40 31/08/2009 by Wild

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#52 Posted: 14:09:34 31/08/2009 \| Topic Creator thanx. nearly finished my 8th chapter.

Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076	#53 Posted: 14:21:44 01/09/2009 Please! I read the first few chapters and couldn't go on because of the REALLY bad grammer, no text speak, capitals. Is it really that hard?

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087

#54 Posted: 18:29:04 01/09/2009 | Topic Creator

Quote: Tango

Please! I read the first few chapters and couldn't go on because of the REALLY bad grammer, no text speak, capitals. Is it really that hard?

WHAT! how is it bad grammar!? the stories just fine to me and others.
oh well everyone has their own opinions. mabye its not your type of story? i think i just did fine, although i know i need to improve a little which i'l fix up later.

Edited 3 times - Last edited at 19:04:20 01/09/2009 by xx chloebabez

Tango Gold Sparx Gems: 2076	#55 Posted: 20:07:04 02/09/2009 I'm not saying the STORY itself was bad I'm saying you should use capitals, don't use numers or any other type of text speak.

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#56 Posted: 22:54:10 02/09/2009 \| Topic Creator Quote: Tango I'm not saying the STORY itself was bad I'm saying you should use capitals, don't use numers or any other type of text speak. o.k thanx

Robo-Spyro Platinum Sparx Gems: 5918	#57 Posted: 11:23:55 03/09/2009 Very well done! --- no i will not write a signature for you

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#58 Posted: 11:24:22 03/09/2009 \| Topic Creator Quote: Robo-Spyro Very well done! thanx

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087

#59 Posted: 19:33:13 07/09/2009 | Topic Creator

8th chapter! enjoy!
chapter 8

Comet caught up with the 2 dragons and dragonfly, along with cyril. He was so relieved! But right now he had to get prepared.
''What do we do just now cyril?'' Spyro asked.
''Well....i dont know. make sure you are ready, if you are injured a little by any chance, which i highly doubt. go down to the crystal chamber and get some red gems. wait! cynder? go down to the crystal chambers and collect some of the light gems'' Cyril asked and replied.
''Light gems?'' Cynder asked confused. ''i've never heard of those, and anyway if i knew what they were theres none in the crystal chamber.'' Cyril handed cynder a key.
''When you walk in there should be a brown chest with a gold lock.'' cyril explained. ''open it with this key and then bring a light gem for each of us up here, o.k? Sparx you go with her, for some light''
''WHAT!'' Sparx interfered. ''She'l try to eat me!'' They all stared at him. ''o.k,o.k i'l go'' He finally agreed. Cynder and sparx ran out of the room, down the stairs and into the crystal chamber. ''Wheres the chest were exactly looking for?'' asked sparx.
''Its over here'' shouted cynder laying her hand on the lid. ''get over here so i could find the lock!'' sparx sighed and he flew over towards cynder. She grabbed the key and placed it into the lock. While opening the lid sparx was thrown back because of the light slowly emerging, while cynder stayed put. She reached in and grabbed four multicolour light gems, and a little chunk for sparx.They ran back up the stairs carrying the gems, but trying not to drop them as their quite fragile.
''got them!'' shouted cynder. Cyril peered over and saw the dragon and dragonfly coming through the door with the gems.
''Good job cynder'' he said.''I see you found them easily?''
Cynder gave sparx an evil look. ''well it would have been easier if he hadnt kept flying away!'' she shouted
''well i couldnt give up my chances of life'' he shouted back.
''thats enough, both of you!'' shouted cyril. They both stayed quite. ''now we are due to leave in an hour'' shouted cyril. ''so go get ready'' and they ran off.

sorry for shortness had to go. but hope you enjoyed it!

Solister Gold Sparx Gems: 2478	#60 Posted: 15:21:28 08/09/2009 Nice chapter --- Heavy: MEDIC! Medic: NO!
	Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:21:45 08/09/2009 by Solister

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#61 Posted: 17:24:52 08/09/2009 \| Topic Creator thanx

gary Prismatic Sparx Gems: 11426	#62 Posted: 08:58:53 09/09/2009 good story --- "let go inside"Gary Sparkle said. ( are my collecting skylander)

spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205	#63 Posted: 00:24:24 13/09/2009 this is an awesome story cant wait 4 the next chapter --- "Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#64 Posted: 13:57:49 18/09/2009 \| Topic Creator hey guys if you want, i made a new story about comet. have a read of it if you want its call ~The Life Story of Comet~

Ice Dragoness Diamond Sparx Gems: 7896	#65 Posted: 14:16:45 20/09/2009 Cool story!

Cynderfyre Emerald Sparx Gems: 3813	#66 Posted: 19:20:40 26/09/2009 Abnd thsi stories so good too! Keep it coming! Excellent job! Brilliant imagination! --- Sitan ali dinamitan

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#67 Posted: 19:37:50 26/09/2009 \| Topic Creator thanx

toadodile5 Green Sparx Gems: 287	#68 Posted: 14:07:47 08/10/2009 nice story will hunter be in it --- Toad's da name, MAGE IS MAH GAME!

azaria Gold Sparx Gems: 2259	#69 Posted: 22:55:08 11/10/2009 the story is awsome

xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087	#70 Posted: 23:42:05 11/10/2009 \| Topic Creator why thanx i have another story if you wanna read it? but its more based on Comet

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