Volt was about to fly of towards the forest. But Flare grabbed her back leg.
"Wait, we might need to bring the other guardiens with us! Ambertail is way stronger then us. If she couldn't defeat the wolf god, then we would be shredded!" Flare shivered at the thought off being shredded to pieces. Volt just nodded.
"You have a good point Flare" Volt admitted. "Lets ask the ice guardian if he would like to come with us"
"Okay!" Flare cheered. "lets go!"
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#51 Posted: 08:07:07 15/08/2009 | Topic Creator
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#52 Posted: 05:55:04 16/08/2009
Please continue!
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#53 Posted: 06:24:53 16/08/2009
WM!
LETTERS!
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#54 Posted: 01:35:15 20/08/2009 | Topic Creator
**** I forgot about my story! I will continue in a moment....
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#55 Posted: 09:55:38 21/08/2009 | Topic Creator
So much for continuing in a moment lol.
Before Flare and Volt got the chance to fly, a dragon called out to them from behind. "Hay! Flare! Volt! What are you doing here?" Flare and Volt turned around. In front off them was a large, ice dragon. He looked old and he has ice crystals all over his body. "Oh, hay ice guardian" Flare whispered. "We were about to fly off to the cave to get you" Volt just nodded her head slowly. "Oh. I see.... Were is Ambertail? Shouldn't she be with you?" The Ice guardian asked. He swayed tail from side to side. Volt backed away a little and Flare turned a pebble over with his front, right paw. "Well? Were is she?" The Ice guardian asked again. "Were is Ambertail!?" Flare still couldn't answer. He didn't want too brake the promise. Ambertail told him not to tell the Ice guardian what happened. He was only planning that the Ice guardian would come with them to see if Ambertail was alive or not. And they would come up with something on why he has to come with them. Flare wasn't expecting this. He turned his head to Volt. She was also keeping her promise to Ambertail. She had her head down as if it was dead. "Well.... If you don't want to tell me... Then I guess that is fine...." He sighed. Volt and Flare Smiled. Ambertail had been right, he didn't erg them to tell him. "Listen... Cyril... Can you come with us to.... This place?" Volt asked, her voice was shaking as she continued. "P-please? Y-you will see when we g-get there...." Cyril nodded. "I do have plenty off free time on my paws. Take me to were you want to go. But be quick" Flare's eyes lit up and so did Volt's. "Thanks! Come on, we don't have enough time! We were going to ask the other guardians, but I guess three dragons will have to do" Volt beamed. Yes, I decided that Cyril was named after this dragon. :P |
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#56 Posted: 07:45:46 24/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello!?
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#57 Posted: 03:25:07 25/08/2009
I thought it was Cyril. xD
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#58 Posted: 06:23:33 25/08/2009
Me too Continue!
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#59 Posted: 07:55:36 25/08/2009 | Topic Creator
Cyril wasn't even born. This is set a looooooong time ago. 17 years before Malefor was born. This are what the chapters are going to be.
First and second chapter: Flare 9 Volt: 11 Malefor: Not born 17 years has past Volt: 28 Malefor: Malefor is born <-- This bit is not in the chapters Flare: 26 Forth chapter 12 years has past Volt: 40 Flare: 38 Malefor: 12 |
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#60 Posted: 08:16:02 25/08/2009
I know. I just thought that it was Cyril at first then I relised it wasnt.On the other hand...I bet baby Malefor is cute.
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#61 Posted: 01:27:09 29/08/2009 | Topic Creator
I am really glad that dark52 sorted out the fandom section!
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#62 Posted: 04:53:01 30/08/2009
Baby Malefor! I bet he would look cute. Please continue!
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#63 Posted: 11:51:25 31/08/2009 | Topic Creator
YUSH! BABY MALFOR! 8D
Volt, Flare and Cyril flapped there wings as hard as they could towards the forest. Cyril had a questioning look on his face, as if he deeply wanted to know what was going on. Volt and Flare tried to ignore him, but they couldn't stop themselves from giving him swift glances every now and then. Suddenly, Cyril halted. Flare and Volt didn't realized he stopped until he called out to them. "Flare! Volt! Come back now!" He rasped. Flare and Volt flapped slowly towards him. "Whats the matter?" Volt asked. Cyril's eyes widened with horror. "Whats the matter?! Don't you realize that the wolf god has been here?! You can smell his stench from a mile away! And it looks like he has eaten something because off the foal stench off blood mixed with it!" Flare suddenly realized what that blood was. He turned to look at Volt. He could tell she was thinking the same thing. Without a word, they both flew down towards the smell. Cyril yelped with shock and flew after them. But his old age made him slower then the younger ones. |
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#64 Posted: 09:45:28 01/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Oh, and Cynder1996, what needs improving? If you don't like it, then there must be something I'm doing wrong. So.... What is it? =\
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#65 Posted: 05:30:28 07/09/2009
Please continue!
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#66 Posted: 09:27:26 09/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Cyril flew after Volt and Flare as fast as he can.
"Wait! What are you two doing?! The wolf god has been here!" Cyril yelled, flying faster. "That pray that he killed could be Ambertail!" Flare blurted out suddenly. Volt gave him a hard stare. Flare realized what he had done and twitched his tail in embarrassment. "What do you mean?" Cyril asked. The two young dragons new that the secret can no longer be hidden. As they explained what happened, Cyril's eyes widened in shock and fear. "No...." Was all he said. |
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#67 Posted: 05:43:20 10/09/2009
Please continue!
IT'S MY BIRTHDAY TODAY!!!
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#68 Posted: 05:46:39 10/09/2009
Wow great story!!!
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#69 Posted: 09:02:34 11/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Happy birthday Skyqueen! And happy birthday Spyro! Sorry I was a day late...
BTW, it is not supposed to be from anyone's perspective. But it is a tiny more on Flare's perspective as most off you have notice. Cyril flew blindly towards the wolf god's stench. Volt continued to give Flare a cold stare as they both flew behind Cyril. Volt was keeping up just fine, but Flare was straggling. His wings were not made for flying fast like Volt and Cyril's. His was made to protect him from large, powerful paws, and they were also made for flying for a long time in the air. Thats why his wings were more wide and big while Volt's were average size and narrow. When they finery landed, they were surprised on what they found. Volt's eyes were filled with Sorrow. While Flare stared at what they found blankly, like a shadow. |
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#70 Posted: 04:52:09 14/09/2009
Please continue!
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#71 Posted: 08:03:32 15/09/2009 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 3: The Rise off Malefor.
Rain drummed onto some fallen leaves. A purple dragon stalked silently through the bushes, his wings flat onto his back. His name is Malefor, the first purple dragon that ever lived. In-front off him, was an over fed bird. It was pecking on the ground, trying to pull out a worm. Malefor stalked quietly up to the bird, keeping as low as possible and keeping his tail still as a rock. Because he was concentration on the bird too much, he stepped onto some brambles underneath his feet. Crack! The bird lifted it's head up in shock. Malefor froze, gritting his teeth together. He let out a silent sigh as the bird didn't fly away. Malefor stalked a little bit closer to the bird, this time, keeping a look out on were he is placing his paws. Alright! Malefor thought all I need to do now is pounce and that bird will be mine... Malefor licked his mouth slowly, imagining himself tearing down into the bird's flesh. He was about to spring, but something else caught his eye. Out off the corner off his eye, he could make out a hint off red in the bushes. Malefor felt frustration bubbling up inside him. Go and catch your own pray! He would not let that dragon get the bird before him. He pushes himself up and leaped, his wings stretched out into the wind. The bird turned around in alarm and fluttered up into the air. Malefor flapped his wings and flew after the bird. He lifted up a paw, ready to swipe it at the little creature. But before he could do so, a flash off red shot past him. After the red was gone, the bird wasn't there. No! Malefor chased after the red dragon that stole his pray. |
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#72 Posted: 08:55:42 16/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Malefor lunged himself into the bushes, all senses alert in case the red dragon decides to attack. He heard something rattled in the bushes behind him and flinched. It took him a a couple off heart beats to realize that it was just the wind ratting amongst the undergrowth. Malefor let out a sigh and continued on searching.
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#73 Posted: 06:14:47 17/09/2009
Cool! Please continue!
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#74 Posted: 06:57:59 17/09/2009 | Topic Creator
It wasn't long until he heard some grunting near by. He turned too were the grunting was coming from and sprang into the bushes. He felt himself hit fur and began to tug at it, tearing out huge clumps off fur and dust. Malefor then realized something.
Fur? Dragons don't have fur! And why has everything gone so.... hot...? Malefor jumped off the enormous clump off fur and spun around to see what he was facing. His eyes grew wide with fear. Standing right before him, was a huge, ten tailed, black and white beast with fire on it's legs. He flinched, not knowing what to do if the beast turned around and faced him. But it didn't even make a move to tear at his flesh. Malefor felt admiration bubbling inside his body. "It didn't even know that I was on him! He didn't feel anything! Without another word, Malefor padded silently back into the bushes. But before he could turn around and flee, something grabbed his tail and flunged him up high into the air. Malefor looked down. All he could see was huge jaws, reading to swallow him whole. Shivering with shock, Malefor flapped his wings as hard as he could and glided down to safety. He heard a huge snap from behind him. "What do you want with me!?" Malefor cried. |
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#75 Posted: 12:22:48 18/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Malefor lifted up his head and saw a huge paw coming down towards him. He dodged it in time, hearing a massive slam on the ground. He shot up the nearest tree, praying to the dragon spirits that the wolf god will spare his life. He began to think he got his wish, but he was wrong when the huge firebeast grabbed him by the tail blade and bashed him into the ground. Malefor stood up again, this time more slowly. It's no use running away now. He is going to turn into pray and get eaten. He faced the firebeast hoping that the defeat was shinning in his eyes like a roaring fire.
"If you want to eat me, then just eat me now!" Malefor forced himself to spit out the words, "there is no need to slam me to the ground multiple times" he was surprised when he heard a small laughter from the beast that was standing right in front off him. "I like causing pain to my pray before I eat them. That way, I know they didn't die peacefully" The beast's reply stung Malefor like a bee sting. Now he knew that if he let himself get eating by this great ball off fluff and fire, he would die off a very painful death. Now he doesn't know if he should take the risk and run underneath the firebeast's body or give in and let himself die with excruciating pain. BTW, only Malefor thinks the wolf god is a 'firebeast'. This is the last chapter that doesn't have Fireforst in it. The next chapter that has Firefrost in it will also tell how the wolf god got defeated. |
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#76 Posted: 09:53:37 19/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I know that the story is very boring at the moment, but I promise that the bit when Firefrost comes in will get more interesting!
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#77 Posted: 02:48:27 23/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Malefor decided he will take the risk and run. With a hesitating start, Malefor squeezed his eyes shut and ran underneath the firebeast's legs. He expected large teeth to clamp shut on his neck, but he didn't feel anything and he felt like he would be running forever. Malefor took a peak and realized he was nearly inside the bushes. Without looking behind him, Malefor sprang into the bushes. As soon as he landed, he heard a loud roar. It sounded like a dragon's roar. Malefor turned around to see the wind guardian in the air, trying to keep the firebeast's mouth clamped shut.
No wounder why that beast didn't bite my neck! Silver stopped him before he could reach me! Malefor raced out off the bushes, ready to help the young wind guardian. |
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#78 Posted: 05:11:24 24/09/2009
Wow! Please continue!
Malefor should just use his ice breath of the wolf god. . .
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#79 Posted: 08:06:31 24/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I was going to make him do that. ..... |
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#80 Posted: 16:56:38 24/09/2009
Babe its reall good, love the whole concept of the story.
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#81 Posted: 05:12:48 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Babe?
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#82 Posted: 07:51:25 25/09/2009
wow I like your store it was so good cynder 543
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#83 Posted: 12:02:12 25/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys! I needed some more readers! ^.^
Malefor bared his teeth, showing his fangs as much as he can. "Go away!" Malefor screeched as he sprang onto the firebeast's head. "What are you doing Malefor!?" Silver roared, biting the wolf god's tail "Get out off here! Before it's too late" "Not without you!" Malefor roared back "I heard a dragon called Ambertail got killed by this load off fox dropping, I'm not going to let that happen to you!" "Your crazy" Silver let go off the firebeast's tail and flew up to were Malefor was, but before she could get there, the beast's tail hit her on the back. "Silver!" Malefor cried while holding onto a huge horn. "Let go off his horn and run! NOW!" Malefor had no other choice but to obey. He let go off the horn and flew back down to the ground. "She is going to get killed... I just know it..." Malefor muttered under his breath. Tail low, he padded into the bushes. But as soon his nose touched a twig, he imagined Silver getting her neck sliced open and blood pouring out off it like a river. He didn't want that to happen to her! No matter what she says! He is going to go back there and help her escape! I can't leave her there to die Malefor turned around and padded back through the bushes. He ignored the sharp thorns scratching across his purple scales. He didn't want to waist time licking his scratches. He had to help Silver before it's too late. Malefor shot out off the bushes and then hulted. Silver had her jaws clamped on one off the beast's hind legs. He was hitting her with his tail very hard, making her head bleed. Malefor couldn't watch it no more. Closing his eyes and taking a deep breath, Malefor breathed ice onto the wolf god. |
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#84 Posted: 03:20:26 29/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello?
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#85 Posted: 04:16:30 01/10/2009
Hi! Please continue!
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#86 Posted: 08:30:36 01/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Hi Skyqueen!
At first, it seemed to be working, but he felt a enmouses blow hit his body. Malefor fell to the ground, nearly uncontest. Malefor got up, his head spinning. He heard a yelp from Silver. "Get out off here Malefor!" Malefor shock his head, not wanting to leave her side. He dodge the firebeast as his claws struck down. "I'm not leaving without you! You can't die!" "It's the only way for you to get out off here! Your the purple dragon! You can master all the elements! When you grow up, you can use them to save this world from this monster!" "Not without you" Malefor whispered. "I don't want the wind guardian to die. Your also special, even if you don't realize it..." |
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#87 Posted: 03:43:30 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm sorry guys. I don't want to continue doing this story. And it's not because no one is posting in it. I don't like it myself. And from the looks off it, it's boring. I might as well not continue it. Sorry guys. I will close the topic in 5 minuets. I don't know why, but I just can't seem to continue it... Not if I hate the story myself....
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#88 Posted: 05:13:51 02/10/2009
Nooooooo!! DON'T STOP! PLEASE!. . .This is an awesome story!
But I guess it is your choice, Cynder_543. . .and it is your story. . .to be honest, I like your Ruuko story better than this one. But this story is still cool!
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#89 Posted: 05:30:20 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
I don't know... I don't like the story myself, that's the reason why I want to stop it. But the readers will be really sad and I can't just stop it because I don't like it....
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#90 Posted: 05:38:14 02/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Wait! I got an idea.
I will type up my story on Microsoft Word. Then, I will edit it and change some off the sentience to more powerful words. I will make it as good as I can and try to make the battles interesting. But that will mean the story will have to get delayed for a while. But it's better too wait and have a better story right? |
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#91 Posted: 23:10:59 02/10/2009
Yes! That's an excellent idea!
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#92 Posted: 00:39:09 03/10/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I will make the delay as short as I can.
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