darkSpyro

LOL!!! Good job!

thanks!

No problem.

Dawn:*is thinking of getting a lair*

Me:

Me: Oh gosh. She got that from my story didn't she?

Me:Yep!And now she's gonna be bragging about having one!

Dawn:*thinking*I could have a huge arena!

Wanderist: Dawn, that's for giant dragons!

Dawn: So?! I can turn Light or Corrupted! Besides, send in hundreds of enemies and I'LL KICK THERE BUTT!!!!!

Me:

Wanderist: That sounds.....crazy.

Dawn: No, it sounds awesome!!

Freezer: Who cares!?

Wanderist: Aw! It looks like someone is upset that their girlfriend got grounded!

Dawn: Sucka!

Wanderist: Yeah!

Freezer: *sees me* YOU!!!!! *freezes me*

Dawn:*unfreezes you*

Me: Thanks!

Freezer: *freezes me and Dawn*

Chapter 3: "Back To Adventure Mode"

Dawn had then landing to her home, and found Pablo laying down, watching the waterfall. "You okay?" she asked, sitting by him. "Maybe, I don't know. All was fine until Rookie told us that the world is at its end," he replied. "And that an evil creature is going to grab our kids?" she asked. "You're worried,too, huh?" he said, looking at her. "Yeah, I am. I never knew that all the dragon race was going to disappear," she said, looking back at him. "I guess we are off to adventure mode," Pablo said, getting up. "Yeah," she responded. They heard a faint yelling from the group, and took off quickly.
As they landed, they saw there "family" laying on the ground. "Cynder! Dude! Get up!" said Dawn. As she did, tears came rolling down her cheeks. "Where are Malak and Syrah?!" said Dawn, as tears started to fill up in her eyes. "They took them away!" she replied. "Who?!" she continued. "The creature unknown!" said Rookie. "Why didn't you stop them!" said Dawn, getting angry. "We couldn't! They drained our powers away!" said Cynder, crying. "How?!" said Pablo. "When they grabbed hold of us, they drained our powers away!" said Spyro. "I have to stop them!" cried Dawn. "I'll go get Hunter and the others," said Spyro, flying off. "We have to find out more about them!" said Cynder. "How? There's no time to study the Pool of Vision! We have until the end of the month before the world collapse!" said Rookie. "Four weeks?! And NOW you're telling us?!" screamed out Dawn. "Dawn calm down! You know what will happen if you get more angry," said Pablo. "*sighs* You're right," she replied.
Hunter and everybody else finally came, and was ready with weapons and armor. "Listen up everyone! What I'm about to tell you, may astonish
you with horror; but it has left me no choice to tell you that the world is
at its end!" shouted out Ignitus. Everybody was then chatting with
disbelief. "Everyone! Please be quiet!" yelled Dawn. "I'm in no mode of
being patient, but I have to locate a creature unknown and bring back our
childern!" she continued. "If anyone knows or seen this creature, please step forward!" said Pablo. Just then a group from the cheetahs walked
into the front, and shocked most of them group.....

Ello?It's anyone thar?!

OMG!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!

I have to get off,though Tomorrow I won't be here(for a while) because Imma going to a baseball game!WOO HOO!!!!!!!

Dawn:It's gonna be awesome!

Pablo: And Rookie is gonna eat a lot!

Rookie:Am not!

Me: Okay. I'll have to wait.

Wanderist: NO!!!!

Dawn:YES!!!!!!But NOOO!!!!!!!!!

Me: Yeah...well I have 2 go(sadly)Bye!

Me: Okay! Bye!!

Me: I'LL BE BACK!!!!!!!!!!i hope

Me: I hope so too!

Me: But I'm still here! I don't wanna leave!

And I don't want you to leave!

But I have to go!!!

Rookie: This is so touching!

Dawn:*slaps him*

Chapter 4:"The Story"

"Hunter?" questioned Dawn. "You've seen one of these creatures?"
asked Pablo. "Indeed I have," he answered. "When?" asked Spyro.
"I've kept it a secret for over a year now; and I should have told you,"
he said, disappointed. "You are a disgrace!" said Chef Prowlus, disgusted.
"No need to be name calling!" responded Cynder. "Please, tell us what
happened," said Pablo. "Wait!" shouted out Rookie. "What?!" said Dawn.
"Where's Sparx?" he asked. "That doesn't matter right now!" she replied,
slapping him. "He's asleep!" said Cynder, rolling her eyes. "Would you
get on with the story?!" yelled out a cheetah.
"It was dusk as I traveled to a dark and hollowed place call The Plates
of the Underworld. As I journeyed further down into the darkness, I
came upon one of these creatures you are speaking about," he said.
"What these creatures?" asked Dawn and Pablo. "They are known as
Vhalzars(Val-zar) and others named Lhorak(Lor-ak)," he responded.
"They drain your powers when you get touched by them," Hunter
continued. "What happens when they drain it?" asked Pablo. "Your powers return after a few days, and as for them--they grow stronger."
"You mean to tell us that our powers are going to be gone for a few
days?!" exclaimed Cynder. "Indeed," he replied.
"But we have to help Dawn and Pablo!" said Rookie. "Young dragons!Even
if you are powerless, you still have enough strength to fight!" said Ignitus.
"He's right! With or without powers, we are still strong!" exclaimed Spyro.
"Who's up for a battle?!" roared Pablo. Suddenly the crowd roared and
yelled with confidence and ready to fight. "There shall be two groups! One
that will travel underground, and one on land!" said Hunter. "And why's that?" asked Dawn. "Only the strongest will travel underground because
that is where the creatures are at," he answered. "Good enough with me! I'm traveling on land!" said Rookie. "You're not coming with us?" asked Cynder. "I'm not strong, I don't even know my powers!" he replied.
"Okay, see you guys--Wait? No maps?!" questioned Dawn. "Oh! I almost
forgot! I asked Rookie to make some!" said Hunter. "I'll get them!" he took off. "If we go underground, is it likely to have the Vhalzars and the
Lhoraks there?" questioned Pablo. "A fifty fifty chance of it," he answered.
"Oh great!" said Dawn, sarcastically.

Continued...

Sf: where am i? why arn't i in it?
C: Star, calm down. its ok if we're not in it.
Sf: thats easy for you to say, your not as popular as i am.
C: but, Star, we're already in a story, we don't need to be in every fanfic.
Sf: why not? they would be alot better with us in them.
me: and my life would be alot more relaxing if i didn't have dragons around all the time! by the way, great story!
C: yeah, great story!
Sf: ......
C: Starfire.
Sf: oh, alright, fine. nice story. *mumbles* but it would be alot better with me in it...

Awesome story!

Thanks! I just noticed I didn't put the title for chapter 4!!

LOL!!

Just a small quiz to that about Dawn's Story! Enjoy!

I got 90! I got 10 wrong.

Wanderist: *smacks me*

D: You suck!

Me:*smacks Dawn*

Wanderist: No, she meant that she got question 10 wrong!

Sally: I'm ungrounded!!!!!!

Dawn: I know!

Rookie: *is sad and angry*

Me:

Wanderist: Why is he sad?

Me&Dawn: IceWind is back!

FireStar: I'm back too!

Rookie:*grunts and head desks*

Wanderist: *walks away*

Sally:

FireStar: *looks at Wanderist sadly*

Dawn: Cheer up, Rook!

Rookie:*facepalm*

Sally: What's up with you, FireStar?

FireStar: I dunno. Wanderist seems upset....

Dawn: Wonder why?

IceWind: *lands* What I missed?

Rookie*head desks*

Sally: Well....Wanderist just walked off. *looks at Rookie, then Icewind* Rookie, why don't you go see what's up with Wanderist!

Rookie: Alright *backs away from IceWind and follows Wanderist*

IceWind: *has a sad face*

FireStar: *looks away*

Sally: *whispers to Icewind* Come on! Cheer up!

IceWind:*growls softly*

Dawn: Uh...something wrong?

Sally: *steps back*

_______

Wanderist: *walking*

IceWind: Nothing....

Dawn: Okay...So, what were you up to, FireStar?

FireStar: Just practicing on how to fight!
_________

Rookie:*finds Wanderist* Wanderist? What's wrong?

Sally: Neat. *looks in the direction that Wanderist and Rookie went*

Freezer: Sally? You okay?

Sally: Yeah.
_________

Wanderist: Nothing.