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awsomenes.

Chapter 1 (still still still continued)

Before Shadow could answer, a yellow dragon walked in. "Oh, hi Icera. I'm Jazz."
"Awkward name."
"I know. So, is Shadow telling you about your destiny?"
"No, what is my destiny?"
"You are the legendary dragon. The legend says that you were meant to rebuild the world after its destruction. You were meant to kill the Destroyer Dragon. The dragon goddess of death, Dawn."

anyone?
okay

Chapter 1(still still still still continued)

"Dawn?"
"Yes, and her assistant, the god of fire. You are the last white dragon in existence. What is your specialty?"
"Flyin', you?"
"Electrical engineering."
"Cool. Could you make me something that amplifies sound?"
"Of course, why?"
"If i ever leave and need Seerie and Zaveera."
"Oh. I'll start workin' on it."
Jazz left. "Icera, before you defeat Dawn, you need t defeat Blaze, he is a threat also." said Shadow.
"Who will train me?"
"Seerie, Zaveera, and Volt."
"When shall i start?"
"Right now."

COOOOOL!!!!!

Keep it goin'.

ill try.

READ
ME NEED MORE READERS

nice story reed mine pls.

Cynders ledgned

really good story.

more readers
YAYZ
MORE
NEED MORE
MWAHAHAHAHA

Icera, created by ashleigh(spellin?)

Cool art! And ashleigh made it?

yes
got the eyes a bit wrong
but thats ok

ashleigh is so nice. Anyway, continue!

yes
she is
cant

What do you mean you need more readers? You have a lot already.

im obssesed with reeaders
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Icera went outside. Zaveera greeted her. "Where is Seerie?"asked Icera.
"Reading. I shall start your training,"said Zaveera. "Now, lets start with the basics. First--"
She was cut off by a thunderstorm. "First we find shelter."
They ran into a large stone building."Hi guys."
"Seerie?"
"Yes, I'm reading about the different types of dragons, and your ancsesters,Icera."
"My ansestors?"
"Yes, your great grandmother was the one who killed a top-ranked assistant of Solar, the dragon sun god."
"Cool, my father, or mother?"
"Your mother is Sapphire, she is pale blue, and she is known to be in the Western lands. Your father, he is the creator of the Ancient army. That is the army now cammanded by Dawn's right-hand dragon. Your father's name is Blaze."

DUN DUN DDUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNN
lolz

No one?
fine

"Where is my mother?"
"In the west. Not to far. About three hours with no stops."
"Shall we find her?"asked Zaveera.
"Yes. Lets go now. Maybe Jazz will come."

short

COOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!

again,AWSOME!

Epic WIN!

thanx!

They were flying towards the western lands when a huge bird ram Icera! Zaveera shocked the bird and it flew off. "What the h*** was that!?"
"A griffin, half bird, half lion. I don't know why it attacked, they're usually friendly and..."
Before she could finish the griffin ramed Icera, again. Jazz shot an electric ball at the griffin and it was covered in static. It flew off again. "Hurry, before that thing comes back." yelled Zaveera.

Awesome!!!!

Ok, I guess. Out of 5, I give it a 3.

thanx, i think

1 = Suckish
2 = Poor
3 = Okay
4 = Cool
5 = Awesome

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmm

thanx???

chapter 1 still

They landed near a small cave. They walked inside."This could be a nice place to rest."said Zaveera.
"RUN!"Icera screamed.
"Why?"asked Zaveera calmly.
"Bear!"yelled Seerie.
Jazz didn't run. The bear caught him in a corner. Jazz paralyzed it and stabbed it with his horns. The bear reared up and slashed Jazz's face. Jazz kept fighting. "Surrender!"yelled the bear.

Awesome! 5/5!!!

Is this a RP?Or a story?I can't tell because the beginning is like a RP.

Sucks...>_<

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Is this a RP?Or a story?I can't tell because the beginning is like a RP.

story

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Sucks...>_<

watever @$$

"So your one of the intelligent bears? Well, understand this, we are here to rest. May we?"asked Jazz.
"Yes, you may. Wait, are you with the ancient army?"
"No, we are of the rebel army."
"You may stay."
They woke up hte next morning with the bear watching them. "What are you searching for?" asked the bear.
"A dragon named Sapphire."
"I'm familiar with her, may i lead te way? And bye the way, my name is Eonie."
"Yes, you may lead Eonie." said Zaveera.
"Can we leave?"asked Icera.
"Yes, now follow me hatchling."
They flew close to the ground behind him. They reached a village after about an hour. There were dragons and bears, the bears told Eonie to stay out of the village. "Go on, come to me when you have found her."
They found her in a small hut, she was white, blue eyes, and large wings. Icera ran up to her. "Mother!" she yelled.
"Icera? Is that really you?"
"Yes, how do you know my name?"
"Volt sent me a message. I'm so glad to see you! Who are your friends?"
"Seerie, Zaveera, and Jazz. Seerie found my egg and Zaveera is Volts daughter. Will you come back to the village with us?"
"Of course! Lets leave now."
They walk to were Eonie was and he was fighting a larger bear. The other bear slashed his face and he fell. He was dead. "Why the h*** would you do that?!" yelled Jazz.
"I bannished him from the village before, so he attacked me!"
Jazz ran over to him and shocked him near the heart. Nothing.

Good job! It's sad that the bear died.

Sapphire ran over to the bear. "Eonie!"she cried. "Eonie was my best friend." She put her paw on Eonie. She breathed a blue stream of energy on the bear. Eonie's eyes opened slowly. Sapphire wrapped her wings around her friend.Eone got up and embraced her. "How did you do that?"asked Icera.

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Sucks...

Okay, no offense Icera, but it really does.

If you think it sucks, don't tell the person, just don't read it!

Why'd you change the title?

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Why'd you change the title?

Wow. He's going to CLOSE it.