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#51 Posted: 14:31:39 30/04/2009
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Cynder_543
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#52 Posted: 07:51:18 01/05/2009
Yeah! Wright more!
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#53 Posted: 04:15:45 03/05/2009 | Topic Creator
![]() _________________________________________________________ Kallik flew in front, while Darkfang right behind her. Blaze flapped his wings harder, and soon caught up with Darkfang. Darkfang avoided Blaze's gaze, and turned away. Blaze sighed. Why is he like this to me? What have I ever done to him? Blaze thought. Well, at least Kallik is nice. Darkfang is nothing like his mother, As soon as the dragons were far away from the Torax as possible, they landed by a small stream. Kallik plucked some fruit from a tree, while Darkfang lapped up some water. "Do you like apples, Blaze?" Kallik asked. Blaze nodded. Kallik gave Blaze three apples. Blaze started to chomp down on the apples. "Thanks, Kallik." Blaze mumbled through mouthfulls. Kallik smiled. "You are welcome, dear." Kallik purred as she had some for herself. Darkfang snorted with disgust, and had some insects to eat. Kallik stalked over to the stream to have a drink after she had eaten, Blaze did the same. "So, Blaze dear, you don't come from any Clan at all?" Kallik asked. Blaze shook his head. "Nope. Well, my mother came from SliverClan, while my father came from ShadowClan." Blaze explained. A low growl rumbled in Darkfang's throat. "That is aganist the Dragon Code by far!" Darkfang roared. Kallik glared at her son. "We have broken the Dragon Code!" Kallik snapped at her son. "By traveling with Blaze. But does that matter? No!" Kallik growled. Darkfang hissed at his mother. "Yes it does!" Darkfang hissed through gritted teeth. Kallik sighed. "Just stay out of this. Look, Blaze is lost, without any parents or a home. Or even a Clan!" Kallik cried. "Thats excatly the point! No Clan will want him! Espically not SunClan!" Darkfang snarled. "But I do," Kallik whispered. Darkfang's eyes grew wide. Blaze was even shocked. "Y-you want m-me?" Blaze spluttered. Kallik's warm eyes lifted down to Blaze's. "Yes, I do. I've already lost a cub. And she was just like you," Kallik said, as tears came down her face. Darkfang arched his back into a denfense crouch, and hissed. "You promised you wouldn't mention Sandstorm!" Darkfang growled. Kallik whipped her head round to her son, and growled. "We might as well tell him!" Kallik snarled. Blaze was terrified. He was glad that Kallik cared about him, but he was scared of Darkfang. What if Kallik and Darkfang start to fight? Blaze thought as a shiver went up his spine. Then Blaze shook his head. No! They wouldn't fight! But Blaze was wrong, as Kallik arched her back into a fighting crouch, and hissed. "Then your not my son anymore!"
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#54 Posted: 04:56:34 03/05/2009
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#55 Posted: 05:27:26 03/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks
![]() ___________________________________________________________ Blaze gasped in horror, and crawled away under some ferns. What are they doing? They can't fight! Their mother and son! Blaze thought with a gasp. Darkfang snarled, and flexed his claws. "Then you are no longer my mother, Kallik!" Darkfang growled. Kallik growled, and lunged towards her son. Darkfang easily doged, and sank his fangs into Kallik's shoulder. Kallik yowled in pain, then raked her claws across Darkfang's side. Darkfang yowled, then leapt off his mother. Kallik hissed, the spat fireballs towards Darkfang. Darkfang gasped, then doged the hissing fireballs, the spat fireballs at Kallik. Kallik yowled, then doged the fireballs as well. Blaze couldn't stand it no longer. They can't fight! It's just not right! Blaze jumped in front of Kallik and Darkfang. "Blaze, dear! Please, get out of the way!" Kallik cried. "Get out of the way, whelp! Before I really hurt you!" Darkfang hissed. Blaze hesitated. "NO MORE!" Blaze yowled over the roaring flames. "It's just not right! You can't fight, either of you. Mother and cub aren't ment to fight like this! It's all wrong! And look up, our ansetors aren't happy with us either." Blaze yelled. Kallik and Darkfang looked up. Dark, stormy clouds covered up the sun, and imiendtly the fire died out. "You are right," Kallik croaked. "No dragon should fight their own kin." Darkfang sighed, then finally nodded. "I guess you are right," Darkfang coughed through the smoke and ashes. Suddenly, the dark stormy clouds disapeered, and the sun shone brightly over the earth once again. Blaze smiled, Kallik smiled, but Darkfang just frowned. Kallik padded over to her son, blood dripped from her wound in her shoulder. "You will always be my son, and I will always love you," Kallik purred. "I am sorry." Darkfang's eyes brightened up. "I'm sorry, too, mother. I will always be your son," Darkfang said, as he nuzzled his mother. Kallik did the same. Blaze smiled. I did it! Maybe Darkfang might be a bit more nicer, Blaze thought. Darkfang stopped nuzzling his mother, then turned towards Blaze. "I'm sorry I was all snappy at you, Blaze. It's just that losing my sister, father, and the rest of my Clan means a lot to me. Espially since your part ShadowClan as well," Darkfang explained. Blaze gulped down a pang of gulit. Why did ShadowClan do that anyway? I'm sure SunClan haven't done anything to them, But Blaze smiled up at Darkfang. "I accept your apolige," Blaze smiled. For once, Darkfang smiled back at Blaze. Kallik smiled as well. "It's good to see that you two are finally getting along," Kallik purred. Blaze gasped at the sight of Kallik's and Darkfang's wounds. "Here, I'll help," Blaze said as he raced off to collect some herbs before they could reply.
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#56 Posted: 05:33:47 03/05/2009
Aww ... yay!
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Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282 |
#57 Posted: 05:33:21 04/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Hello? Anyone else besides Firestar?
__________________________________________________________ Blaze scampered back with a mouthfull of herbs. Kallik and Darkfang waited panticily while Blaze chewed up the herbs. Darkfang stared in amazement at Blaze. "How are you so good at medicence?" Darkfang blutered out. Blaze spat out the mushy herb sap, and started to rub it on Darkfang's wounds. "I dunno," Blaze shrugged. "My mother says it was a gifted talent." As soon as Blaze said the word 'mother', he suddenly remebered about his parents, and what they were thinking and doing right now. Only if I knew the way back! Oh well, I might as well stay with Kallik and Darkfang, I have no where else to go. And maybe on the way, I could see ShadowClan, and SunClan. Since I am part ShadowClan myself. But I should probaly just tell them that Shadowclaw is my father. Blaze thought. I really want to see my parents right now, and tell them that I'm okay, Blaze stopped rubbing Darkfang's wounds, and started to treat to Kallik's. "Um, thanks Blaze." Darkfang mumbled. Blaze smiled thankfully up at the young teenager dragon. "You are welcome," Blaze purred. Kallik smiled. "Blaze, you could stay with us if you like," Kallik said. Blaze felt a buzz of happiness and excitment swell up inside him. "Thankyou, Kallik, but I want to try and get into ShadowClan, were my father came from. Even though I was almost ripped to shreads in SliverClan. . . I'll just tell them that my father was Shadowclaw." Blaze replied. Darkfang's eyes widened. Kallik gasped. Blaze was taken aback. "W-w-what is it?" Blaze mumbled. "You mean, your father is Shadowclaw? The great dragon that traveled with Kai? The SunClan dragon?" Darkfang asked. Blaze slowly nodded. Shadowclaw had told Blaze a million times about his adeventure with Kai, a young SunClan dragon, to save their sisters, Harmony and Moika. And how his father and mother met, as well. "Is Kai still alive?" Blaze asked. "And Harmony?" Kallik nodded. "Alive and well, Kai and Harmony are Flamefang's cubs. But Goldenwing, their mother, sadly died in a battle with ShadowClan. Kai had a daughter called Sunshine, but we don't know the mother. And Harmony had a son called Fireclaw. . .But Blaze, if you do join ShadowClan, we will have to fight aganist each other." Kallik said. Blaze's eyes widened. I don't want to fight them! What am I to do? I can't join SunClan, or SliverClan. I have no idea where my parents are. . . but I do want to at least see ShadowClan, and maybe my Aunt Moika might be there, But one things for sure, Blaze wanted to see ShadowClan for himself, this could be his only chance.
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#58 Posted: 06:06:39 04/05/2009
Awesome story! Plz write more!
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#59 Posted: 14:31:09 04/05/2009
Yes! Write more!
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#60 Posted: 05:24:46 06/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Thanks! Blaze also has a terrifying power that is best hidden. . .
__________________________________________________________ Night sapped up the last rays of sunlight, and the three dragons soon found a nice cosy den to sleep in for the long night. Darkfang kept on glancing nervously back at Blaze, trying to avoide Blaze's stare. Kallik didn't say anything. Blaze was puzzled. What is wrong with them? It's not like I would hurt them, or something. . . Blaze didn't know what to think. Maybe their not used to be seeing a part ShadowClan and SliverClan dragon, But Blaze knew that this was not his answer. Blaze sighed, and curled up and went to sleep. Blaze was dreaming that he was calmly walking through the forest, enjoying the sunlight. Suddenly, a pure white she-dragon caught his eye. . . At first, Blaze thought that it was his mother, Crystal. But as he looked closer he found out it wasn't. "W-who are you?" Blaze asked, scared. The white she-dragon glowed, and her blue gaze burned his eyes. "My name is Dawncloud, and you must be Blaze. The dragon from the prophecy," The she-dragon said. Blaze's eyes widend. "What prophecy? There's no prophecy about me! I'm just a mixed up dragon, with no Clan. . ." Blaze's voice trailed off. Dawncloud smiled. "Blaze, you have a power that no other dragon had for a thousand years." Dawncloud smiled. For a thousand years! But that's impossible! The only power I have is my venmon, Blaze thought as he cleared his head. "You have a power of two Clans, the power of the Shadow Star, and the Sliver Star. . . " Dawncloud suddenly turned into a blue, foggy mist. "Wait! What do you mean? Dawncloud, wait!" Blaze yelled, racing after the blue mist. . .
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#61 Posted: 05:51:04 06/05/2009
Awesome...write more....
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#63 Posted: 20:33:08 08/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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When Blaze awoke, he found himself completly alone. Kallik and Darkfang were gone. Their scent was there, but it was stale. Where are they? Blaze thought as a shiver went up his spine. They wouldn't just leave me! Espically not Kallik. . .what if they know about the prophecy? No! They can't! I just found out in my dream. . . Blaze wasn't so sure. "Kallik! Darkfang! Where are you?" Blaze yelled as he scampered outside. No reply. What is going on? Blaze scanned every patch of forest he could see. Still no sign. Maybe they were just playing a game on me, yeah! That must be it, But Blaze knew this wasn't the answer, either. "Come on, guys! Stop fooling around!" Blaze cried. Blaze's cry echoed through the empty forest. Blaze gulped. Blaze sighed. They did just leave me, Blaze thought, sadly. Blaze padded out into the empty, quiet forest. "Blaze!" Hissed a familar voice. Blaze's face brightened up. "Darkfang!" Blaze yelped, and started to run towards where he had heard the voice. Suddenly, Blaze bumped into a dark, red dragon. "Darkfang! Where were you? Why did you leave? Where's Kallik?" Blaze asked, determed to know why they had left. Darkfang sighed. "Just one question at a time, okay?" Darkfang growled. Blaze sighed. "Sorry, but why did you leave?" Blaze asked. Darkfang sighed. "We found me sister," Darkfang hissed. Darkfang's sister? He must mean Sandstorm! Blaze thought happily. But his face turned into a frown. "Why didn't you wake me up? I would of loved to met you sister!" Blaze spat. Darkfang snarled. "You were muttering in your sleep, so we thought best not to wake you up. Kallik could smell Sandstorm's scent not far off, and we would only be gone a second." Darkfang explained. Well, at least they were going to come back! Blaze thought with a growl. "Anyway, where's Kallik and Sandstorm?" Blaze asked. "Over there," Darkfang said, pointing a claw towards Kallik, and a beautiful sand coloured she-dragon. Blaze padded towards Kallik. "Kallik!" Blaze beamed. Kallik turned her great head towards Blaze. "Blaze! Oh, I'm so sorry we left! It's just that. . ." "You don't need to explain, Darkfang's told me everything." Blaze couldn't help but glance back at the beautiful SunClan she-dragon. "Oh, Blaze, this is my daughter, Sandstorm. Sandstorm, this is Blaze. The dragon from the prophecy!" Kallik beamed. Blaze's stomach lurched. They know about the prophecy? But how can that be! Sandstorm smiled up at Blaze. Her orange eyes shining. Blaze blushed. "H-hi," Blaze mumbled. Sandstorm smiled. "Nice to met you, Blaze." Sandstorm purred. Darkfang stalked towards Blaze. "If you touch just one scale on my sister, your Torax food," Darkfang hissed to Blaze. Blaze gulped. But she's so. . .so. . .beautiful! Blaze thought.
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#64 Posted: 21:12:42 08/05/2009
Blaze is in love!!
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Cynder_543
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#65 Posted: 01:00:35 09/05/2009
Please continue!
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#66 Posted: 17:19:51 09/05/2009
WM!!!
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#67 Posted: 19:43:45 09/05/2009
WM!!!
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#68 Posted: 20:05:53 09/05/2009
copycat!
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#69 Posted: 00:34:35 10/05/2009 | Topic Creator
![]() _________________________________________________________ Blaze couldn't help but look at Sandstorm as they walked through the forest. Darkfang was eyeing Blaze wairly. It looks like he doesn't want me near her, Blaze growled. "Blaze, we need to go back to our Clan." Kallik said. Blaze nodded slowly. "But what happens to me when we get there?" Blaze asked, as a shiver zipped up his spine. Kallik sighed. "You will have to try and let ShadowClan take you in. Since your father is from ShadowClan," Kallik explained. But what happens if they try to rip me to shreads like SliverClan! Blaze gulped. Sandstorm smiled down at Blaze. "It's alright, I'm sure they'll let you in." Sandstorm said. Blaze prayed that she was right. Darkfang snorted. "You're a mixture of two Clans. No-one will want you," Darkfang snarled. But Blaze could see the fear burn in Darkfang's eyes. What is he afraid of? Does he know something I don't? Blaze wondered. Sandstorm nuzzled her brother. "It's so good to see you again," Sandstorm purred. Darkfang smiled, and nuzzled his sister. Kallik smiled at her two cubs. Blaze couldn't help but to feel jealous. Blaze didn't have any brothers or sisters. So, he was quiet lonely up in the Moon Mountains with Shadowclaw and Crystal. Darkfang doesn't know how lucky he is too have such a beautiful, kind sister like Sandstorm, Blaze sighed. Kallik nuzzled Blaze. "Don't worry, if I were a ShadowClan dragon, I would welcome you with open paws." Kallik whispered into Blaze's ear. Blaze smiled, and nuzzled Kallik back.
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#70 Posted: 01:32:29 10/05/2009
Awsome!
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#71 Posted: 21:08:44 10/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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The four dragons soon found some food to eat, and have a quick drink by a small stream. Blaze sighed as he watched Sandstorm lap up the turquiose water. Darkfang growled and Blaze. "Like I said, if you touch my sister, your Torax food." Blaze gulped and nodded at Darkfang. Darkfang stalked over to his sister, and lapped some of the water up. Kallik was happily munching on a apple. Blaze's stomach growled, and he started to climb up the apple tree. Ah! Here's a nice, juicy apple. Blaze thought as he plucked a apple from a low branch. Blaze happily started to chomp up the apple, and suck up it's juice. I don't see why Father wanted me to eat meat and suck blood so badly, this is just fine! Blaze sighed as he took another mouthfull. Suddenly, something caught Blaze's eye. . .a Twoleg nest! Blaze gulped down the last of his apple, and gazed at the enormus Twoleg nest. Suddenly, Blaze spotted another Twoleg nest! And another! And another! This must be a Twoleg camp! Blaze gasped. I have to tell the others! Blaze quickly glided down, and raced towards Kallik. "Kallik! Sandstorm! Darkfang! I saw thousands of Twoleg nests! Up in the tree!" Blaze panted. Darkfang snorted. "Twolegs? Nah! It was probaly your imagoination," Sandstorm gasped. "Twolegs? Are your sure Blaze?" Kallik asked. "I'm sure, here, I'll show you." Blaze said as he flew up. Kallik, Sandstorm and Darkfang flew after Blaze. "See!" Blaze cried as he pointed a claw at the Twoleg camp. "Oh my gosh!" Sandstorm gasped. Darkfang didn't know what to say. "We have to get out of here, fast! Follow me," Kallik cried, as she flew lower. Darkfang quickly flew after his mother, while Blaze and Sandstorm flew close behind.
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#73 Posted: 22:13:06 10/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze flew like he had never flown before. I don't even know where I'm going! Blaze thought, as he flapped his wings harder. Suddenly, there was a loud BANG. "Twolegs!" Sandstorm cried. Blaze gasped, and sure enough, four Twolegs with shining sticks stared up at the flying dragons. Blaze strained his ears to hear what they were saying, but the Twolegs made sounds that no other dragon could ever understand. "Quick! This way!" Kallik yelled, as she flew away from the glaring Twolegs. "Come on, whelp!" Darkfang grunted as he flew after his mother. "Blaze! Hurry up!" Sandstorm cried, as she flew after her brother. But Blaze couldn't take his eyes off the Twolegs. One Twoleg grunted to the Twoleg next to it. That Twoleg pointed it's shining sliver stick at Blaze. Blaze still didn't move. That stick is so...so...shiny... Blaze sighed. "Blaze! Move!!" Sandstorm and Kallik yowled. "Move whelp! Now!" Darkfang roared. Still, Blaze took no notice. The Twoleg shot a bright red dart at Blaze. "Wha..." Blaze muttered as he fell. . . "Nooo!" Kallik, Sandstorm and Darkfang yowled.
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#74 Posted: 22:36:59 10/05/2009
Blaze!!! Noooooooo!!!!!!! *saves Blaze*
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#75 Posted: 00:57:23 11/05/2009
PC!!! *Kills Blaze again*
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OblivionSkull21, up and coming indie developer |
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#76 Posted: 03:19:58 11/05/2009
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#77 Posted: 04:17:38 11/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Don't worry, Blaze isn't dead.
___________________________________________________________ Blaze slowly opened his eyes. "Kallik. . .? Darkfang. . .Sandstorm?" Blaze mumbled. Six dragons looked over Blaze, muttering things to one another. Two older females, two young cubs, and one young male. "Is he dead?" Squeaked one of the cubs. "Hush, little one." It's mother cooed. Blaze stumbled to his paws. "H-how did I get here?" Blaze gasped. Blaze, and the other dragons were in a very small forest, with three unnatural suns. The oldest female smiled. "You, young cub, are in Dragon Heaven." Dragon Heaven? I can't be dead! Blaze gasped. "B-but I can't be dead!" Blaze cried. A young male laughed. "You're not dead, whelp! This, is what the Twolegs made for us," Twolegs? Made this. . .? Blaze shook his head. "He smells of a wild dragon!" Squealed one of the cubs. "Hush, Riko," Cooed his mother. "Come with me," Grunted the oldest female. Blaze slowly followed behind. What type of dragons are they? Blaze wondered. The female dragon sat down, and tucked her paws under her long tail. "My name, is Jiang, and that is my daughter, my son, and my grandchildren." The old female said, pointed a claw at the rest of the dragons. "Where am I? Why am I here?" Blaze demanded. Jiang looked Blaze right into his eye, her red, firey gaze burning his eyes. "Like my son said, this is Dragon Heaven," Jiang relpied. "The Twolegs must of taken pity on you, and took you to this wonderful place. . .tell me, young one, where did you come from?" Jiang croaked. Blaze shifted his paws uncomfortably. Why does she want to know? Blaze hissed. "I-I-I. . .I came from the Moon Mountains. Far away from here," Blaze said. Jiang's eyes widened. "I see. . .what is your name?" "Blaze," "Ah, named after the first dragon to live, I see." Jiang said. First dragon to live? That's what Blackstorm said! I wonder if they know about the prophecy? Blaze thought. Jiang's gaze burned back at Blaze. "The Twolegs built this Heaven so that dragons would be safe, and no one could harm us. They never run out of food or water, the suns are always shining, even though it is cold, and wet outside. And, best of all, once you come in, there's no going out." Jiang said. Blaze's tail twitched. "What? Never go out again? But I have to get out!" Blaze cried. Jiang laughed. "If you want to get out, you must speak to the Great Ogozok," Jiang said. Ogozok? What sort of name is that! But Blaze deicied to see him anyway. "He is the only wild one, besides you. His daughter, Poisonheart, mangaed to escape, but he and his mate, Yellowfang, never did." Jiang whispered. Blaze gulped. "Wh-where is he?" Blaze asked. Jiang turned her great head to a cave. "In there," She growled.
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#78 Posted: 04:56:34 11/05/2009
Cool!
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#79 Posted: 21:28:39 11/05/2009
Yellowfang's hu-hu-husband???!!!!!!!!!! - 0 -
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#80 Posted: 04:14:31 12/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I know. Ogozok is Poisonheart's father. But, Blaze doesn't know this.
___________________________________________________________ Blaze took a deep breath as he padded slowly into Ogozok's cave. I can do this, all I have to do is just ask him how to get out of this place, Blaze gulped. Blaze stopped, his blood turned to ice. A pair of amber eyes flashed angrliy at Blaze. "What brings you here, cub?" Rasped the old dragon. "You smell of the wild, two Clans, to be exsact. One of them is my own Clan. . ." Ogozok growled. Blaze could tell that the old creature was blind. "I-I. . .I want to know how to get out of this place, I heard that your daughter manged to escape. So, maybe if she knew, you must too. Could you please, please tell me?" Blaze gulped. Ogozok raked a claw on the rock that he was lying on. "What is your name?" Ogozok hissed. "Blaze," Ogozok's blind gaze glared at him. "The dragon from the prophecy, I see." Ogozok croaked. Suddenly, Ogozok's eyes widened. "Wait, was your grandmother, Poisonheart?" Ogozok asked. Blaze gulped. I don't know who my grandmother is! "I-I-I don't k-know," Blaze mumbled. "Your father was Shadowclaw, wasn't he?" How does he know this? Blaze started to tremble. "Yes," Blaze squeaked. Ogozok grinned. "You, are my great, grandson." Ogozok growled. Blaze almost fainted. This old dragon? My great grandfather? No! But Blaze could see that Ogozok did actually look a bit like his father, and him himself. "So, you want to get out?" Ogozok growled. "Well, I'm not letting my great, grandson out. Not like I lost my daughter."
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#81 Posted: 04:18:38 12/05/2009
WRITE MORE!!
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#82 Posted: 04:46:22 12/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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Blaze couldn't beleive what he was hearing. "But I have to get out! I don't want to be stuck in this. . .this small, crowed forest! What if the Twolegs do something to us? I have to get out! I want to see my parents again. . ." A tear trickled down Blaze's red and white face. Ogozok sighed. "I'm sorry, but I'm not losing you. Not after how my mate died, and how the Twolegs took my only daughter away. . .And anyway, I don't know how to get out! Poisonheart didn't want to get out, she was happy here, with me, Yellowfang, and the rest of us." Ogozok hissed. Blaze started to sob quietly. "Fine, if nobody will help me, I'll just have to get out of here myself," Blaze growled, and raced out of Ogozok's cave. Ogozok laughed. "You foolish cub! You will never get out!" But Blaze ignored his grandfather, and pelted out of the cave. Blaze stared up at the shining glass, where five Twolegs were staring out of it. There has to be a way out, there has to be. . . Blaze sighed, and padded towards the other dragons. Jiang was snoozing in the sun, while the two cubs play-fighted with each other. "I'm a angry Torax! Raa!" One of the cubs cried, as he tackled his sister. "No, I'm the Torax!" Yelped his sister, as she tackled her brother back. Blaze sighed, and coiled up. Jiang's daughter, padded towards Blaze, and sat down beside him. "Don't worry, you'll get used to it," The she-dragon purred. Blaze sighed. I don't think I'll ever get used to this, "My name is Asmia," The she-dragon said. "That's my brother, Kotshoto," Asmia said, pointing a claw at the young male dragon having a drink at stream. "And those are my cubs, Riko and Talik." Blaze sighed. "I'm Blaze," Blaze grunted. Asmia smiled. "Don't worry, the Twolegs feed us every day, and there are no Torax's," Asmia smiled, as she stalked away, too her scabbling cubs. Will I ever find a way out? Blaze sighed.
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#84 Posted: 11:30:09 12/05/2009
PC!!!
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#85 Posted: 14:28:12 12/05/2009
More!
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#86 Posted: 05:53:52 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Blaze is in the same zoo that Poisonheart was born in, and grew up in.
___________________________________________________________ Blaze had been in the dragon exsibit for three days now. He couldn't even remeber why, or how he had even gotten in the zoo. Blaze had also forgotten about Kallik, Darkfang and Sandstorm. Blaze padded around the forest, waiting for food to come. Usually, the Twolegs would feed them around about this time. Blaze had also discovered that Jiang, Kotshoto, Asmia, Riko, and Talik were all SunClan dragons. But they didn't seem to know this. He found out this by watching them flame their food, and they all had firey colours. Exspect for Ogozok, who never came out of his den. Jiang would bring food to him, or Asmia. All the other dragons were fansinated by Blaze's amazing power to spit out venom, as no other dragon in the zoo could. "Mother! I'm hungry!" Riko walied, stamping his paws on the earth. Asmia coiled her tail around her son. "Hush, my little one, you will have to wait a bit more longer." Asmia cooed. Talik gazed up at the Twolegs window, hoping that food would come soon. Jiang was waiting patincally, while Kotshoto was watching Blaze wairly. I guess he or the others haven't seen another dragon like me in their life, Suddenly, Blaze's stomach twisted. I am the only dragon of my kind!
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#87 Posted: 14:26:32 13/05/2009
WM!!!!
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#88 Posted: 02:38:05 15/05/2009 | Topic Creator
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After the dragons had been feed, the Twolegs turned out the three suns, and the dragons could finally rest. Kotshoto was sleeping on the far end of the forest, while Jiang slept alone on the other side of the stream. Asmia slept with her cubs. "Mother! I don't want to go to sleep!" Riko wailed. "Yeah! I want to stay up and play!" Talik wailed along with her brother. Asmia sighed. "No, my little ones. You need you rest," Asmia cooed, wrapping her tail around her wailing cubs. Finally, Riko and Talik settled down. Blaze sighed, and tucked his tail under his paws and fell asleep. ******************************************************* "Blaze. . ." "Who's there?" Blaze called through the empty forest. "Blaze. . .why have you done this? Why didn't you listen to your friends?" The voice said. Blaze reconized that voice. It was Dawncloud. "I'm sorry! But the Twolegs stick. . .it was just so. . ." Blaze didn't know how to descride it. Dawncloud suddenly appeared, she stared at him, not even blinking. Blaze looked down at his paws and clawed the earth. "And what to you want me to do? I'm stuck here! My great grandfather will make sure I'm never going to see the light of day again," Blaze hissed. Dawncloud sighed, and wrapped her blue, white and sliver tail around Blaze's tense body. "It's alright, you'll find a way out. The Twolegs can't keep you in there forever. Just listen to your heart, you'll find a way. . ." Dawncloud's tail slowly slipped away from Blaze, then she started to race away from him. ". . .follow your heart, it will never fail you!. . ." Dawncloud called, then she was gone. "Wait! Tell me more! I have to know!" Blaze yelled, as he started to race after her. But it was no use, Dawncloud had already disapeered.
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#89 Posted: 03:34:10 15/05/2009
WRITE MORE!!!!!!! *munchs crazily on some popcorn*
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#90 Posted: 05:03:18 15/05/2009 | Topic Creator
![]() ___________________________________________________________ When Blaze awoke, Asmia, Kotshoto, Riko, Talik and Jiang were already eating. Blaze padded over to a carrot, and started to crunch on it. Suddenly, there was a loud yowl. Blaze nearly choaked. It was a dragon's yowl. Someone's in trouble! Blaze gasped. Blaze swallowed the last of his carrot, and flew up to the Twoleg window. Four Twoleg's were taking a wailing dragon into a special den. What are they doing? Blaze wondered. The dragon yowled even louder when the Twolegs bought him into the room. Suddenly, there was even more yowling. What's going on? What are the Twolegs doing? Blaze thought as a shiver zapped up his spine. He had to tell the others. Blaze quickly flew down to the others. "The Twolegs are taking dragons away!" Blaze cried. "Their doing something to them, I don't know what, but I know it's something bad!" Kotshoto snorted. "I've lived here all my life, and the Twolegs haven't done anything to me or my family," Kotshoto snarled. "Why should we believe you?" "Because I saw them!" Blaze snapped. Kotshoto frowned at Blaze. "Mummy, the Twolegs aren't goanna hurt us, are they?" Talik squeaked. Asmia licked her daughter. "Of course not, darling!" Asmia cooed. "I think your lying," Riko hissed. Blaze clawed the earth. Why don't they believe me? Jiang lifted her great head. "I have lived in the Dragon Heaven for all my life, the Twolegs have been loyal too us, they have made this beautiful Heaven for us. Why would the suddenly turn their backs on us? I think not! The Twolegs are one of the most trusting things on the planet." Jiang said. Blaze snorted. You can never trust a Twoleg, my father almost got killed by one! "Fine, do what you want. I'm going to find a way out of here before the do hurt me," Blaze growled. "Blaze is right," Rasped an old, rusty voice. Blaze whipped his head around, so did the others. Talik screamed. Riko covered his eyes. Blaze couldn't believe his eyes. It was Ogozok. Now that Blaze and the others could see him in full daylight, he was the most uglyiest dragon Blaze had ever set his eyes on. And I'm realated to this beast! Blaze thought with disgust. Ogozok was gray, with black stripes. His bulging, blind eyes are amber. His wings have many holes in them, and one part of his horns is missing. And his has long, hooked black claws. "Blaze is right. The Twolegs are doing something to the other dragons. And they will likely do it to us as well, whatever they are doing." Ogozok croaked. Jiang frowned, but obeyed to Ogozok. Asmia, Kotshoto, Riko and Talik did the same. Suddenly, there was a loud, long wailing sound, then there was the sound of death. "The Twolegs will kill us," Ogozok finished.
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#91 Posted: 09:39:37 15/05/2009
![]() ![]() ![]() Please wright more! *Does the same as P-K and eats popcorn crazily* |
Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#92 Posted: 14:26:10 15/05/2009
WM!!!
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Skyqueen Emerald Sparx Gems: 3282 |
#93 Posted: 20:59:41 15/05/2009 | Topic Creator
![]() ___________________________________________________________ Blaze was terrified. "K-kill us?" Talik squeaked. "Yes, I'm sure of it. The ansetors came to me, they told me the Twolegs are doing something horribly wrong. And now I know what it is," Ogozok rasped. I have to get out of here! But how? Blaze had no idea. Ogozok looked at Blaze, right in the eye. "And you, grandson, will stay here and die with us." Ogozok growled. Stay with them? To die? No! I can't! "No! I'm going to find a way out, weather you like it or not!" Blaze snarled. A growl rumbled in Ogozok's throat. "You will do as The Great Ogozok says!" Jiang snarled. Ogozok lunged towards Blaze, and pinned him down. How can Ogozok do this? He's blind! "No, Blaze. You are going to stay here with us for the rest of your miserable life!" Ogozok hissed. He can't do this! Blaze tried his best to heave Ogozok off, but the old dragon had Blaze firmly pinned down. Asmia gasped. Kotshoto laughed. Jiang watched without a word. Talik was whimpering. Riko laughed with his uncle. Suddenly, Blaze could feel the fire burning through his veins, his anger felt impossible to control, and the only way was to let it out. "I said, NO!!! " Blaze roared, and flung Ogozok off him. Ogozok went flying, and landed to the ground with a loud, thud. Jiang rushed over to help Ogozok. Kotshoto stopped laughing. So did Riko. Asmia and Talik gasped. Blaze was fully red, his eyes where pitch black, and he had the dark, black glow all around him. "I said, NO!!! I will get out of this place if it's the last thing I will do!!" Blaze yelled. "Please Blaze, just calm down." Asmia said, proteching her cubs. Blaze growled, then flew towards a wall. Ogozok stumbled to his paws, and charged towards Blaze. "No you don't!" Ogozok yowled. Blaze whipped his head around, and punched Ogozok. Purple blood splattered over the forest floor. Once again, Ogozok tumbled to the ground. Jiang rushed over to help him. "Don't just stand there, Asmia! Kotshoto! Help him!" Jiang hissed. Blaze smiled. "Good-bye!" Blaze growled, and as he said that, Blaze smashed down the wall, and flew out into the open.
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#94 Posted: 22:55:32 15/05/2009
Please wright more!
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Firestar Yellow Sparx Gems: 1897 |
#95 Posted: 23:14:25 15/05/2009
Write more! Blaze flipped like Tovias!
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Fireball
Emerald Sparx
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#96 Posted: 01:37:12 16/05/2009
PC!!!
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#97 Posted: 21:57:21 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
I know. Now Blaze will go power crazy!
![]() ___________________________________________________________ "The power of the stars is mine!" Blaze roared as he spat ice over the forest. Blaze flew even faster, spitting more ice. Blaze's ice grew even bigger, destroying everything in it's path. Blaze laughed. An evil laugh. Blaze shook his head. Wait, this isn't me! What am I doing? Blaze thought. "No! I have the power of the Silver Star and the Shadow Star, I can do whatever I want!" Blaze growled. Blaze flew as fast as his wings would flap. Blaze started to slow down, his darkness fading. . ."No...no...." Blaze muttered as he fell. When Blaze awoke, a group of SunClan dragons surrounded him. Wait! I must be in SunClan! Did I really fly that far. . .? Blaze couldn't remeber. A young female SunClan dragon was looking over him. "Wha. . ." Blaze mumbled. "He's going to live," The young female dragon sighed. Blaze sat up. "Where am I? What am I doing here?" Blaze said. "You're in SunClan, we found you at the edge of our terriorty. The question is, what are you doing here?" The female dragon spat. "I. . .wait, are you Kai's sister, Harmony?" Blaze asked. The female SunClan dragon couldn't believe what she was hearing. "H-how do you know my name and my brother's?" Harmony snarled. "Because he is Shadowclaw's son," Said a young male SunClan dragon. This must be Kai! Blaze thought with excitment. Harmony couldn't believe what she was hearing. "How are you so sure Kai?" Harmony asked. Kai smiled. "Because he looks just like his dad, and I know Shadowclaw when I see him." Kai chuckled. Harmony looked at Blaze. "What's your name?" "Blaze," "Hold on, your part SilverClan!" Harmony gasped. "You broke the Dragon Code!" Kai rushed over to his sister and whispered something into her ear. "Oh, alright. You can stay," Harmony sighed. Blaze smiled. "Thank-you, Harmony." Blaze smiled. "But we have to tell our father, he won't be very pleased." Kai said. Blaze's smile vanished. Kai and Harmony padded out of the medicence den. I guess Harmony is the medicence dragon. . .I hope their father will let me stay. . . Blaze soon dirfted off into sleep.
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#98 Posted: 22:33:10 16/05/2009
WM!!!!!!
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Emerald Sparx
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#99 Posted: 22:38:26 16/05/2009
PC!!!
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#100 Posted: 23:10:54 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
SunClan dragons also eat insects, and Kai is the SunClan deputy.
_______________________________________________________ "Wake up, cub!" Bellowed Flamefang. Blaze jolted up. "Y-y-yes?" Blaze mumbled. Kai, Harmony and Flamefang were standing at the entrace of the medicence den. "Follow us," Flamefang grunted, as he padded out of the den. Harmony padded after her father. "Come Blaze," Kai said, as he padded out. Blaze gulped and followed the SunClan dragons. Flamefang leapt onto the Fire Rock, while Kai sat beside Flamefang on the left, while Harmony was on the right. "Let all dragons old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a Clan meeting!" Flamefang yowled. I wonder if Kallik, Darkfang and Sandstorm are here. Blaze gulped. I hope they are, SunClan warriors padded out of their dens, along with queens and elders. Some SunClan dragons gasped at the sight of Blaze. "What is that hybrid doing here?" Rasped an elder called Dustfire. "He's a mixture of two Clans!" "SilverClan and ShadowClan!" "What is he doing in our Clan?" "His parents must of broken the Dragon Code!" "SILENCE!" Flamefang roared. Emenditly, the dragons stopped talking. "I know that this cub is not welcomed here, and he is a mixture of two Clans, neither of our own, but this cubs father traveled with me son, to resue my daughter. He saved my sons life, countless times, and, my son saved his too." Flamefang said. "But he is a hybrid!" Yowled Dustfire. "ShadowClan is our enemy!" snarled Sandpelt. "Along with SilverClan!" Yowls of agreement filled the Clan. "This cubs father saved my life!" Kai roared. "And if he didn't, I would be dead along with Harmony!" Harmony nodded. "My brother speaks the turth!" Harmony cried. Blaze gulped. "I, as Clan leader, will let Blaze stay as long as he likes. Untill then, no dragon will harm a singel scale on this cub. Am I clear?" Flamefang yowled. There was a long slienece. Please let me stay! Finally, the Clan agreed to let Blaze stay. "But what if ShadowClan sees us like this?" Growled a young male. "Then we will keep him hidden from view! This meeting is dismissed," Flamefang snarled as he stalked into his den. Growls of disagreement rose from the Clan, but they didn't speak a word too Flamefang. Harmony padded back into her medicence den, while the rest of the Clan returned to their duties. "Come with me, I'll show you where you can sleep for the night," Kai said as he lead Blaze to a small den. "Thank-you so much, I really apricate this." Blaze said as he dipped his head. Kai smiled. "You should really thank my father, but they'll be time for that." Kai grinned. "Umm, is Kallik, Darkfang or Sandstorm here?" Blaze asked. Kai's smile faded. "How do you know about them?" Kai hissed. Blaze took a step back. I guess I should tell him, Blaze thought. Blaze soon told Kai quickly about how he had traveled with them. "They did go missing when ShadowClan attaked. . .but we stayed together, only they went missing." Kai said. "But their not here now," Blaze's heart sank. Where are they? All Blaze could do was hope for the best.
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